hi~ my mod (as request), hope it can help a little, remember they're suggestions so feel free to deny everything you want toThank you for modding!
00:00:790 (1,2) - I've listened like 10 times this part and I think you should ctrl+g them because first pitch is higher than second I feel that using K at the first will make a strange flow because the first sound is strong. -> 00:01:617 (2) - changed to D
00:02:858 (4) - what about don? makes a good emphasis on next note and new section changed
00:29:755 (15) - try a don here and 00:31:823 (17) - kat here, sounds great for section change I have applied former
and keep latter because sound is diffrent from 00:32:237 - .
00:57:065 (6) - maybe you could delete this and give a little break for that part. I think it's already good but I don't feel any hard sound for a kat here 00:55:410 - deleted
not any other comment, really good
same first two comments than Kantan. changed like same
00:02:858 (5) - this one sounds better at D because it makes a great 'low' sound through this part changed
00:07:824 (13) - try kat here, sounds similar as 00:08:238 (14) - changed
00:28:927 (27) - I think this deserves a D since it's almost the same pitch as 00:30:583 (31,32) - I think not necessary since sound is not strong.
01:21:064 - I think here using d d k d k sounds better than triple kat considering it's increasing changed
Really good too!
well the same comment; here is strange, you're using both dons... maybe use 00:00:790 (1) - K here? It's same reason as Kantan.
00:03:479 - why that break on the following vocal? It for difficulty spread.
not any other comment, flows really well for me
same xD same
00:30:583 (66,67) - on every diffs you're using K K here... why D D on this? I think K K sounds better Just before of this notes is k, so I think putting here D can emphasize sound.
01:13:513 (129,130) - try ctrl+g here, sounds better I think this note matched back sound.
It's really fine for me hope to see it ranked soon and star ~