LMFAO so sorry i forgot to mod this till like midnight my time when i said i was gonna mod this today
[general]
add ユーリ!!! on ICE to the source and just add yuri to the tags
add op and opening to the tags also
and add full version also
also should probably stylize it like DEAN FUJIOKA like the ranked map
also add a preview point to every difficulty
remove screenshot_27.png since its unused
you should also properly convert your normal-hitfinish.wav to an actual wav instead of renaming it (assuming thats what you did)
you should also probably reduce your combo colors to maybe around 4 (i dunno 6 seems a bit excessive not really a problem just a suggestion i just never really see maps with more than 4)
[easy]
in general i would fix every single random slider velocity change here since in easys you typically dont change slider velocitys at all (hell it was unrankable till recently) try to make it 1 or 2 numbers at the most instead of all these really random 0.85 1.1 and crap like that
any reason for cs 2.6 instead of like 3 or 2.5 or 2 or something more standard
00:29:060 (1,2) - i know you probably wernt going for a blanket here but it looks like a poor mans blanket tbh i would just make it like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/788053200:37:120 (1) - why is this not a 2 beat slider like the rest of the sliders in this section i would extend it
00:43:389 (2) - i would make this slider a curve instead of being a sharp turn since these blanket sliders dont look too good with it although this one doesnt look too bad i still don't like it
00:54:135 (1) - straighten this curve up it looks really bad and also curve it
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/788054400:55:926 (1) - you can polish this slider up
01:13:836 (2,1) - i dont like how close these 2 sliders are i suggest reworking your slider pattern to try to make them not as close to each other maybe rotate them a bit like so
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/788058101:15:627 (1) - is offscreen
01:37:120 (1) - once again this red anchor slider is a bit too much of a sharp angle make it less sharp
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/788059301:57:717 (2,1) - same as one of my earlier points i hate how deathly close it is to the slider maybe something like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/788060102:14:732 (1) - same as earlier i feel you can polish it better for instance, i feel the kink at the end is kinda too sharp
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7880625 would be a good way to polish it IMO
02:20:105 (1) - this looks really bad why not something like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/788063902:27:269 (1) - covering a new slider point under a slider is almost certainly a bad idea in an easy i would definitely move that somewhere visible
02:27:269 (1) - this slider just looks bad once again you go too hard on the edge
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/788064702:36:224 (2) - i'm pretty sure you could polish these 2 curves a bit better
02:50:553 (1) - same as above
02:53:239 (2) - this random angle rotate looks fairly bad IMO
02:55:030 (3) - same with this slider it just doesnt look good with how the last slider transitions into it
02:59:508 (1) - could polish this a bit more (make the side curves even)
03:05:105 (1) - half a beat gap in an easy is really hard to spin effectively so i would start the spinner 03:04:881 - and the slider end 03:04:433 - instead
[normal]
as i said with the easy, in general i would try to change all the random ass .85 and 1.1 and all those random numbers into like 1-2 standard numbers since its just so random to have all these really minor slider velocity changes for no real reason aha
any reason for the random cs 3.4 od 3.4 and hp 3.6 instead of more standard like cs 3.5 od 4 and hp 4
00:12:045 (2) - i would avoid any direct overlaps like this in a normal consider making it not overlapping the slider
00:18:314 (1,2) - this doesnt look too good to me personally but it isnt bad i would probably see if you can find a better way of doing this direction change
00:50:553 (1) - you could probably slightly polish the curves on this
00:59:508 (2) - this slider doesnt look good why not this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/788078701:00:851 (3) - this notes too close to 2 i would just delete it so it matches the gap before
01:02:493 (1) - same as the above point this note is too close to 4
01:05:777 (2) - same as above too close to 1
01:07:568 (2) - why not make this a mini blanket like so
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/788080201:12:941 (2) - same as earlier points too close to 1
01:16:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i would just remap this second tbh it just doesnt look good
01:16:821 (2,4) - these sliders also look slightly too close also
01:35:627 (3) - same as earlier points move it slightly away from 4
01:44:284 (1,2,4) - same as earlier i just dont like these really close sliders at all make them slightly further appart
01:50:553 (2) - same as above make 2 further apart from 1
02:06:672 (2) - blanket this with 3 better
02:12:941 (1) - this slider doesnt look good at all i would try to make it look nicer
02:18:314 (2) - same as earlier this slider doesnt look good at all
02:21:896 (3) - overlapping with a slider again i would redo this note so it isnt overlapping
02:23:687 (1) - same as before i just dont think this slider look all too well
02:30:851 (1) - same as before overlapping with 1 and also slightly too close to 2
02:31:747 (2) - same as above just a bit too close to 1
02:37:120 (4) - same here also slightly too close i feel
02:38:911 (2) - same as before i just dont like super close sliders lol
02:40:702 (2) - same here god i really shouldnt nitpick this but i need filler to make the normal seem problematic
03:04:881 (3) - i would also start the spinner here
03:05:105 (1) - ending time not consistant on this spinner make it 03:06:896 - like every other difficulty
[hard]
any reason why cs 3.8 and od 5.6 instead of 4 and 6?
00:09:657 (1) - this overlap once again doesnt look too good
00:19:209 (2) - i dont like the inconsistant spacing of this between 00:18:314 (1,3) - i would try to fix it
00:50:553 (1) - probably could slightly polish the curve on this a bit
00:54:135 (1) - this slider looks kinda weird and random i would try to make it look a bit nicer
00:55:926 (3,1) - these 2 long sliders dont look good at all try to give them a small wiggle or something
01:01:299 (1) - this slider doesnt look too good maybe make the angle a bit more sharp
01:12:045 (1) - move this up so it blankets between 2 and 4 nicer
01:13:538 (3) - move this down a bit so the spacings a bit larger
01:28:463 (1) - once again these overlaps dont look good
01:40:702 (1) - could probably blankey this with 4 a bit better
02:09:359 (1) - you could probably polish the curve on this a bit
02:12:941 (1) - this slider doesnt look good at all
02:14:732 (3) - this slider doesnt look nice
02:21:896 (3) - once again overlapping doesnt look nice
02:22:792 (4,1) - why not blanket these 2
02:39:806 (3) - could blanket this with 2 a bit better
02:42:493 (1,2) - increase the spacing of these 2 notes a bit looks odd to have small spacing here on such a loud sound
[victory]
any reason why od 7.2 instead of like 7.5
00:28:314 - you can probably add some repeat slider or something here instead of ignoring all these sounds
00:50:553 (1) - could probably polish up these 2 curves
00:53:986 - any reason why you ignored the 1/3rd note here i would add a circle to emphasize it
01:02:941 - same as above
01:04:433 - same here missed a note
01:04:732 - and here
01:04:135 - and here
01:08:314 - missed a note
01:11:598 - another missed note
01:17:269 - and here
01:17:866 - and here
01:18:165 - and here
01:18:463 - and here
01:18:762 - and here
01:19:060 - and here
01:53:239 (1,2,3,4,5) - these jumps are definitely too big nerf pls
02:06:971 (3) - overlap this with 4
02:07:568 (6) - this note feels random just extend the repeat slider one more tick
02:12:792 - once again missed a note
02:14:732 (3) - you ignored alot of sounds here
02:18:314 (2) - this slider doesnt look good try to polish it a bit
02:20:105 (1) - this slider doesnt look too good either
02:21:747 - missed a sound here
02:22:941 - same as earlier very small sound here
02:23:239 - and here
02:23:538 - and here
02:24:583 (2) - why not blanket this with 1
02:27:120 - missed a note here
02:27:269 (1) - this slider doesnt look good at all
02:30:851 (1) - same here too this slider looks bad
02:30:329 - theres a 1/6th note here if you want to map it to a slider or something but entirely up to you
02:36:150 - same as above very subtle 1/6 sound if you wanna try to map it
02:37:269 - same as earlier subtle notes
02:37:568 - and here
02:37:866 - and here
02:41:448 - same here missed a note
02:41:598 (1) - this slider doesnt look too good to me also
02:43:389 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - jump is too large
02:45:180 (1) - same here i just feel this slider points off in a random direction like its a cool design but i just feel it doesnt fit try to make it look better also
02:46:672 (4) - inconsistant spacing
02:50:404 - missed a note here
02:51:598 - once again small note here
02:51:896 - and here
02:58:762 - missing note here
02:58:911 - and here
02:59:060 - and here
02:59:209 - and here
02:59:359 - and here
02:59:508 (1,2,3,4) - this doesnt look good try to make it look nicer
03:03:090 (1) - try to overlap this slider with 7
03:03:090 (1) - spinner should start here tbh
goodluck on ranking sorry for being so nitpicky in the victory difficulty there just wasnt alot besides aesthetics i could say about it