This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, August 29, 2011 at 1:16:00 PM

Artist: Arash ft Helena
Title: Broken Angel
BPM: 128.57
Filesize: 7949kb
Play Time: 02:53
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.91 stars, 134 notes)
2. Hard (4.76 stars, 322 notes)
3. Insane (4.95 stars, 461 notes)
4. Normal (2.44 stars, 158 notes)

Download: Arash ft Helena - Broken Angel
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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REDOWNLOAD again, new sb and new spaceing

haha

Just another Graveyarded Beatmaps , this will be the 7, whyyyyyy?

ar fi a 6-a defapt )
hai ca iti dau stea ca te-am ajutat )

lasa ca oricum renunt ...............................................................................sau poate nu

Easy
00:50:381 (1) - spacing
01:26:781 (3) - dont make too short repeat slider like this ,it will make beginners awkward
01:34:248 (4) - Delayed by 1/4 beat
02:10:648 (1) - remove new combo
02:18:115 (1) - ^
02:42:382 (7) - new combo
01:42:648 (7) - ^

Normal
00:04:647 (2) - Increase 1/4 beat? I feel very strange here
00:08:847 (4) - ^
00:18:180 (1) - remove new combo
00:54:114 (1,2) - make them like this?
01:02:514 (3) - spacing
01:03:914 (6) - ^
01:29:114 (3) - ^
01:38:915 (1) - ^
01:42:648 (1) - not overlap completely
01:42:648 (1,2) - same as earlier
01:47:315 (3,5) - spacing
01:51:048 (3,6) - ^
02:12:515 (1,1) - I can't understand what does it means,you shoud improve your rhythm a lot here
02:19:982 (1,1) - ^
02:20:915 (1) - remove new combo
02:13:448 (1) - add a break if you dont map this part
02:20:915 (1) - ^
02:23:715 (2) - new combo
02:42:382 (1) - not overlap completely
02:42:382 (1,2) - same as earlier
02:47:049 (3,5) - spacing
02:50:782 (3,6) - ^

Hard
00:10:014 (10,11) - make them like this

Daigurenhyourinmaru wrote:

Easy
00:50:381 (1) - spacing
01:26:781 (3) - dont make too short repeat slider like this ,it will make beginners awkward
01:34:248 (4) - Delayed by 1/4 beat
02:10:648 (1) - remove new combo
02:18:115 (1) - ^
02:42:382 (7) - new combo
01:42:648 (7) - ^

Normal
00:04:647 (2) - Increase 1/4 beat? I feel very strange here
00:08:847 (4) - ^
00:18:180 (1) - remove new combo
00:54:114 (1,2) - make them like this?
01:02:514 (3) - spacing
01:03:914 (6) - ^
01:29:114 (3) - ^
01:38:915 (1) - ^
01:42:648 (1) - not overlap completely
01:42:648 (1,2) - same as earlier
01:47:315 (3,5) - spacing
01:51:048 (3,6) - ^
02:12:515 (1,1) - I can't understand what does it means,you shoud improve your rhythm a lot here
02:19:982 (1,1) - ^
02:20:915 (1) - remove new combo
02:13:448 (1) - add a break if you dont map this part
02:20:915 (1) - ^
02:23:715 (2) - new combo
02:42:382 (1) - not overlap completely
02:42:382 (1,2) - same as earlier
02:47:049 (3,5) - spacing
02:50:782 (3,6) - ^

Hard
00:10:014 (10,11) - make them like this

all fixed. thanks

hihi~
some suggestions:

[General]
if you thought your map is complete, move it to pending please. few modders are willing to mod WIP maps.
why only the hard diff have kiai time? make sure all your diffs have same kiai part please.
maybe you should add more hitsounds. few hitsounds may be unrnkable.
i guess 224kbps mp3 is unavailable...
and you need to add an approachcircle.png file to the folder.

[Easy]
00:11:180 (1) - remove new combo.
00:14:914 (5) - new combo.
00:45:714 (1,1) - remove new combo.
00:54:114 (7) - new combo.
00:59:247 (1) - remove new combo.
01:01:581 (5) - new combo.
01:26:781 (3) - a note here and a slider starts at 01:27:014, ends on 01:27:714.
01:35:648 (1) - i guess some notes here, the slider is kinda boring imo...
01:47:781 (1) - remove new combo.
01:50:115 (5) - new combo.
02:47:515 (1) - remove new combo.
02:49:849 (5) - new combo.

[Normal]
00:05:580 (1) - remove new combo.
00:12:580 (1) - ^
01:04:848 (7) - new combo.
01:41:248 (6,1) - bad overlapping.
02:19:982 (1,2) - make (1) more repeats for twice, and a note on 02:21:382.
02:40:982 (6,1) - bad overlapping.
02:53:582 (1) - the map should ends on 02:53:115 like the easy diff, so this spinner is absolutely unnecessary imo.

[Hard]
00:10:714 (x) - i expect a note here.
00:14:914 (8) - new combo.
00:38:714 (8) - ^
00:43:381 (10) - ^
00:56:447 (10) - ^
00:57:847 (1) - remove new combo.
01:01:581 (10) - new combo.
01:28:180 (8) - ^
01:35:647 (8) - ^
01:50:114 (12) - ^
02:13:448 (1) - remove new combo.
02:20:914 (10) - new combo.
02:47:981 (7) - ^
02:52:649(x) - do not put a note and a beginning of a spinner at a same timing point, it is unrankable.
and the map should ends on 02:53:115 like the easy diff imo.

[Insane]
02:20:448 (9) - new combo.
02:42:382 (1) - remove new combo.
and the map should ends on 02:53:115 like the easy diff imo.

that's all.
so
star~

JauiPlaY wrote:

hihi~
some suggestions:

[General]
if you thought your map is complete, move it to pending please. few modders are willing to mod WIP maps.
why only the hard diff have kiai time? make sure all your diffs have same kiai part please.
maybe you should add more hitsounds. few hitsounds may be unrnkable.
i guess 224kbps mp3 is unavailable...
and you need to add an approachcircle.png file to the folder.

Thanks a lot, i will fix it soon

Yo!

[easy]
easy...

[normal]
123,562 dont need new combo
125,429 move to 125,196 adjust spacing
127,296 similar
145,963 ^
245,697^


[insane]
214,196 - 215,596 change to: 214,196 214,546 214,896 215,246 215,596 ( note )
245,230 exchange the sliders length
251,297 grid 1 up
i think this diff is too easy to call an insane.
add more sliders and move the notes further away? or call a mapper to make it more difficult

thats all! these are quite nice, no big problem so far
star you~

L_P wrote:

Yo!

i think this diff is too easy to call an insane.
add more sliders and move the notes further away? or call a mapper to make it more difficult

thats all! these are quite nice, no big problem so far
star you~

tks but i don't have any insane diff just easy mediu and hard, insane is WIP

nice map, clean enough sb, looking forward to an insane
here's a star in the meanwhile

Hi. Mod as requested

[General]
add the "Display epilesey warning" in song setup
I don't really like the approaching circle
Also I think there're too much break time. Map more

[Easy]
Circle Size-1
00:08:428 (2,3) - 1 grid up&1 grid right
00:17:762 (4) - del the first fin
00:33:629 (1) - fin?
00:36:895 (x) - add circle
00:41:562 (x) - add circle with fin
00:56:495 (4,5) - 1 grid up
01:04:429 (1) - del the first fin
01:27:062 (4) - better to change it. Not suitable in an easy diff
01:48:763 (4) - del the first fin.
01:52:963 (1) - ^
02:16:296 (1) ~02:20:030 (3) - change into a different map with last part
02:23:296 (x) - add circle
02:38:697 (1)~02:52:697 - Cut and paste is not suitable. Remap it.

[Normal]
00:03:762 (1) - del NC
00:05:162 (3) - 1 grid left
00:11:228 (1) - too far. move closer to last slider
00:42:495 (1) - fin
00:45:295 (3) - spacing
00:57:429 (6) - add fin
01:02:562 (3) - spacing
01:23:562 (1) - del NC
01:29:162 (3) - spacing
01:31:029 (3) - fin
01:38:963 (1)~01:53:429 (1) - cut and paste problem
02:10:696 (1) - 2 grids up
02:20:030 (1) - start from 02:19:563, use 50% playback rate to check where to end
02:38:697 (1)~02:53:163 (8) - - Cut and paste problem

[Hard]
Circle Size-1
00:05:628 (7,8) - 1 grid up
00:45:762 (9) - move right
00:54:629 (3,4) - change into a reversible slider
01:24:495 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - looks weird.
01:35:813 (1) - move to 01:35:696
01:41:295 (9) - move right
02:14:196 (1) - spacing
02:16:296 (2) - ^
02:41:029 (9) - ...move right
02:51:763 (5,6,7,8,9) - looks weird.


Be care of your composition._.
Good luck.

thanks a lot for your help, i try to fix it now ....................................................

I don't know why my sb is blocking for a while a the end, somebody have any idea to fix this thing? (sb load is good)

Ok, first I need to say that I love you for mapping this song.
Second, modding you map as your request Hope it helps!



[Easy]
00:11:228 (6) - New combo.
00:12:628 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:37:362 - Add a beat here?
00:37:829 (4) - New combo.
00:39:695 (7) - New combo.
00:41:562 (9) - New combo.
00:45:295 (3) - ^
00:45:762 (4) - Move this slider a bit up, so won't overlap (3)
00:47:162 (1) - Careful with the spacing.
00:55:562 (3) - Move it a little so won't overlap (1)?
00:57:895 (1) - Change this spacing, looks kinda hidden.
01:03:962 - Add a beat here ?
01:04:429 (1) - Don't need new combo.
01:26:362 (2) - New combo.
01:26:362 (2,3,4) - This spacing looks kinda odd. ><
01:28:229 (5) - New combo.
01:34:296 (4) - New combo.
01:37:096 (4,5,6,7) - This (4) and (5) reverse is almost unrankable, change the spacing. Looks extremely odd.
01:40:363 (4,5,6) - Same here, this reverse on (4) and (5). ^
01:42:696 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - One totally copy-paste sequence, right? So apply the same fixes as I told you in the other part. (Btw, try to change the spacing and the patterns, otherwise the copy-paste will just make the map boring.)
02:12:563 (3) - Repeater sliders on easy difficulty are not 100% 'awesome'. They look odd. And sometimes, unrankable. Try improving this.
02:20:030 (1) - ^
02:23:296 (1,1) - Jumps.. on easy, really? (NEED to change this.) [I would advice you to remove this beat: 02:23:296 (1) - ]
02:49:897 (1,2,3) - This reverse is almost unrankable. Change it.
02:50:830 (3,4) - Jumps.. on easy? Oh my. Change it.

[Normal]
00:16:828 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:45:295 (3) - New combo.
00:48:095 (3) - 1/4 repeater slider .. Might improve it with a better pattern.. ?
01:32:896 (3) - Change the position of the slider.
01:38:963 (1,2,3) - They are totally invisible behind the slider. Change the spacing.
01:41:296 (6,7) - .. Jump on (6), really?
01:44:096 (3) - Wrong spacing.
01:45:729 (6) - Change this spacing, looks odd and blind.
02:19:563 (1,2,3) - This sounds extremely weird. The repeater slider and the weird spacing. You must fix it.
02:42:430 (1) - Fix the spacing and follow with the rest of the combo.
02:45:463 (6) - Same about the previous combo like this one. (Stop doing copy-paste ò-ó!)


Ok, I'm not going to mod Hard. You have spacing issues. You need to follow the distance-snap. DON'T overlap beats, it looks odd and blind, what makes the map 'weird'. Stop doing copy-paste in your patterns, it is making your map boring!
After checking your map, and in WHAT you can improve, ask me for a recheck.

I give up for a moment but tks to my friend i am back and ready to improve this map. Tks to poisonchan for moding

SB
[*] 02:18:163- I think this part (la la png) does not appear cuz it above u.u

Hard
[*] Recheck your combos, sometimes they are 6-7, sometimes 12.
[*] 02:41:497- 1 grid down? Don't forget to move previous note too
[*] 02:48:963- 1 grid up ? Don't forget to move previous note too

It's ok but maybe you should work on slider shapes
Good luck <3

Tks a lot HellDawn.Maybe the insane is too insane so if somebody want to do a guest diff at insane i accept

REDOWNLOAD
I made a lot of changes now:
sb new image at the end
spinner-circle changed
clouds fixed
note song changed
And a new song, the old was to bad so i take one with a good quality and i change the offset again

I do not give up so easily, the forum continue here viewtopic.php?t=62063

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