Sandalphon wrote:

[jakads' MAXIMUM]

00:13:500 (13500|3,13650|2) - swap lane for these two and you can intend something like this osu.ppy.sh/ss/10785639 ooh that's nice

01:27:000 (87000|5) - this pattern is too uncomfortable, something like this could make it better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10785663 changed differently

Sandalphon wrote:

[HEAVENLY]
01:30:630 (90630|1) - From here there's definitely 1/3 snap piano sounds i'm certain you've mapped this part wrong oh no why am i so dumb. remapped that part

Call me when you finished

Sandalphon wrote:

[Lulu's EXHAUST]

00:31:300 (31300|4,31350|5) - doesn't really seem to connect with previous one, moving both one column to the left seems better moved them except 00:31:350 (31350|6) -

00:32:700 (32700|6,32700|4,32850|6,32850|4,33000|4,33000|6) - it seems to focused on the right side for me, spread it out like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10785621 rearranged

01:07:350 (67350|5,67350|2) - move both one column to the left to make that pattern more flowing wanna make them same col for drum like 01:06:150 (66150|4,66150|1,66300|4,66300|1) -

01:30:105 (90105|4) - i dont see the reason why you ignored this sound? added one

00:42:525 (42525|0,42600|5) - for consistency with other difficulties, delete these and make the 7th column note below a LN deleted both but don't wanna make LN thing for this part

Fresh Chicken wrote:

jakads'MAXIMUM
00:05:550 (5550|1) - 이거 00:04:200 (4200|5,4350|5) - 여기처럼 의도를 동일하게 하는게 나을듯 3칼럼으로 옮겨 아주 좋은 지적, 나머지를 3 3 2 2 연타가 만들어지게 다 바꿈
00:11:100 (11100|4) - 여기 손이 너무 꼬이는데? 가운데로 옮기는건 어떰? 훨씬 나아보이는데 ok
00:48:600 (48600|1,48900|1,49200|1,49500|1) - 이렇게 2레인만 하는것보단 7레인에 두번 5레인에 두번이 나아보이는데 어때, 13 누르고있으면서 가운데 손가락 치는게 좀 불편 이건 뒤에 나오는 멜로디랑은 전혀 다른 드럼이다라는걸 강조하기 위해서 롱놋 사이에 넣은거라 의도
00:53:250 (53250|3) - 이 타이밍에 왜 00:52:050 (52050|2,52050|1) - 여기처럼 왜 안넣음 거긴 드럼이 있고 여긴 없어서
01:04:800 (64800|0) - 의도한 소리가 이노트에는 잘 안들리는데? 피아노인데? 만약 옆에 롱놋 말하는거면 처음 01:04:500 (64500|6,64500|5) - 나올 때 크래쉬 소리가 줄어들었다가 01:04:800 (64800|0) - 여기에서 역재생되어 다시 커지는걸 표현
01:09:975 (69975|1,70125|5) - 보면 여기는 막난보다 밀도가 높은데 막난보다 더 어렵게 1/8 스냅과 같이 이걸 넣었어야했는건가 생각이듬. 다시 한번 생각해보셈 넣을꼬얌
01:37:290 (97290|2) - 여긴 드럼이 없는데 2놋인 이유? 플로어탐 비스무리한 소리 나는디?
01:37:515 (97515|3) - 여기도 3놋일 큰 이유는 없다고 보는데 앞에 패턴들도 보면 1/1마다 3놋씩으로 강조했어, 왜냐하면 1/1마다 드럼 종류가 바뀌니깐 그거 표현하려구

Fresh Chicken wrote:

General
00:35:625 (35625|2,35850|2) - 힛사 Drum ㅇㅋ
00:36:075 (36075|2,36150|1) - 힛사 안들어감 Drum 그다음에 Bass 바꿈
01:00:600 (60600|2) - 루루난이도 Bass 힛사 메아리 넣을지 안넣을지 고민해봐 넣음

HEAVENLY
00:50:400 - 여기 2놋이 될만한 이유거리가 없어 ㅇㅋ 수정함
00:50:625 - 여기 분명 노트가 들어갈 소리가 안들려, 이거 고스트 노트임 지움
00:54:750 (54750|4,54975|3,55200|3,55425|4) - 여기에 실제로 의도한 소리가 들리지 않음, 이건 지워야할듯 젠장

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Lulu's EXHAUST
00:19:275 (19275|1) - 이거 실수로 노트 하나 빼먹은듯 1레인에 하나 추가 00:19:200 - 서는 멜로디에 2놋, 작은 드럼에 1놋 넣음. 00:19:350 - 서 나오는 드럼과는 약간 다른 모양
00:19:500 (19500|3) - 이거 4놋일정도는 아닌거같은데, 막난하고 막전난에도 롱놋 2개씩만 썼음 단놋 하나 지웠다. 나는 이런 파트에서 롱놋 3개씩 썼어
00:19:950 (19950|2) - 이거 3놋으로 해야하고 00:20:100 (20100|3) - 이것도 3놋이여야하는거 아닌가 00:19:950 - 노트 하나 지우고 00:20:100 - 에 하나 넣었다. 4놋은 멜로디가 있고 새로운 구조의 시작이라 두고 싶어
00:57:675 (57675|1) - 3라인으로 옮기는게 패턴상 훨신 나아보임 oki
00:59:700 (59700|5) - 여기 노트가 비어있는 이유가? 그리고 가운데 롱놋옆에 놓은 노트들에서 2놋 위치가 설명이 잘 안되는듯, 무슨 의도였음? 실수인듯, 패턴 다시 만듬

Maxus wrote:

ngghh, sorry, seems like there's wrong snapped note in lulu's EXHAUST. God damn it lulu

[Lulu's EXHAUST]
01:29:200 - This chord is wrongly snapped, this should be snapped at 01:29:230 - for the screenshot of comparison between EXHAUST diff and Jachnokads' MAXIMUM : http://puu.sh/Agu19/d4e8f0d035.jpg Fixed!

Why can't I give you kudosu?


This is an amazing mapset you have here.
Good luck. Thank you

Feerum wrote:

Hello! Hi!

Maxus' is correct. The chord is wrong snapped.
Additionally:

[NOVICE]
01:29:200 - The same wrong snap as mentioned above by Maxus' Why am i so asinine, fixed

Screen

01:38:715 (98715|1) - Wrongly Snapped. Please snap it to the new Timing Point. Fixed

[BASIC]
01:35:105 (95105|0) - This is wrong snapped. Please snap it to the new Timing Point. Oh my god, fixed
It's also wrong snapped in the ADVANCED difficulty. Please fix it there aswell! Done!

01:38:715 (98715|5) - This Note is also wrong snapped. Please snap it to the new Timing Point. Done

Maxus wrote:

So, If you plan to requalify again, i will give you small mod first here.

at 01:47:398 - , you need additional red line to sync with the last piano notes, try this: http://puu.sh/AkS3k/f3ff8686da.png (don't forget to resnap the notes, and normalize each red line.)

For the timing code (can just copy paste):

timing

107398,317.460317460317,4,2,1,50,1,0
108191,294.117647058824,4,2,1,50,1,0
108779,279.06976744186,4,2,1,50,1,0
109337,298.507462686567,4,2,1,50,1,0
109635,262.008733624454,4,2,1,50,1,0
109897,236.220472440945,4,2,1,50,1,0
110133,250,4,2,1,50,1,0
110633,441.176470588235,4,2,1,50,1,0
111074,419.58041958042,4,2,1,50,1,0

Good luck