idk, i haven't played mania in quite a while so I'm really bad at it now so i'm not going to give too much mods
HEAVENLY
00:31:350 (31350|0,31500|0,31650|0,31725|1,31800|0,31950|0,32100|0,32250|0) - I quite dislike this anchor, i miss everytime here so you might want to shift 00:31:950 (31950|0) - to 2 or something
00:51:000 (51000|3) - Personally don't think you should be solely mapping to the breakcore instrumentals because:
1) It is quite soft itself
2) There are other instrumentals louder than it at points
3) Feels quite weird to have no notes on louder instrumentals and more notes on softer ones
01:00:600 (60600|5) - You could incorporate slowjams here
01:06:900 (66900|0,67050|0,67200|0,67350|0,67500|0,67575|2,67650|1,67725|0,67725|2,67800|1,67875|0) - Really don't like anchors everywhere lol
01:22:650 (82650|4,82650|6,82950|3,82950|5,83250|4,83250|2) - I feel like these aren't emphasized enough, they feel like they just "blend" into the surroundings instead of standing out
01:30:630 (90630|4) - Would be cool if you could've added in the 1/3 piano jacks here, I feel that it's the main instrument in the whole song anyways
01:37:065 (97065|1,97065|0,97140|2,97215|0,97215|1,97290|2,97365|1,97365|0,97440|2,97515|1,97515|0,97590|2,97665|1,97665|0,97740|2,97815|0,97815|1) - I don't get what is the whole trill here for
01:39:035 (99035|3) - Would be cool if the map didn't just end here
Didn't really enjoy the map as much because of how quite a lot of patterns just "blend" into everything else. I didn't feel like the map was bringing out the emotions of the song:
HEAVENLY
00:31:350 (31350|0,31500|0,31650|0,31725|1,31800|0,31950|0,32100|0,32250|0) - I quite dislike this anchor, i miss everytime here so you might want to shift 00:31:950 (31950|0) - to 2 or something
00:51:000 (51000|3) - Personally don't think you should be solely mapping to the breakcore instrumentals because:
1) It is quite soft itself
2) There are other instrumentals louder than it at points
3) Feels quite weird to have no notes on louder instrumentals and more notes on softer ones
01:00:600 (60600|5) - You could incorporate slowjams here
01:06:900 (66900|0,67050|0,67200|0,67350|0,67500|0,67575|2,67650|1,67725|0,67725|2,67800|1,67875|0) - Really don't like anchors everywhere lol
01:22:650 (82650|4,82650|6,82950|3,82950|5,83250|4,83250|2) - I feel like these aren't emphasized enough, they feel like they just "blend" into the surroundings instead of standing out
01:30:630 (90630|4) - Would be cool if you could've added in the 1/3 piano jacks here, I feel that it's the main instrument in the whole song anyways
01:37:065 (97065|1,97065|0,97140|2,97215|0,97215|1,97290|2,97365|1,97365|0,97440|2,97515|1,97515|0,97590|2,97665|1,97665|0,97740|2,97815|0,97815|1) - I don't get what is the whole trill here for
01:39:035 (99035|3) - Would be cool if the map didn't just end here
Didn't really enjoy the map as much because of how quite a lot of patterns just "blend" into everything else. I didn't feel like the map was bringing out the emotions of the song:
Eg.
00:16:200 (16200|2,17400|2) - The whole chunk here could've illustrated the pitch of the piano here but instead opted for the background instrumental which was kind of dissapointing
00:19:200 (19200|4,19200|5,19200|6,19200|3) - Could've used a grace here for the piano
00:19:500 (19500|6,19800|6) - Could've used SV here for speed up
00:20:400 (20400|3) - Felt that this note could be way more to the right due to pitch relevancy, the rest of the notes should follow suit on the pitch relevancy
00:25:800 (25800|3,25800|5,25800|0,25800|6,25950|2,25950|1,25950|0,26025|6,26025|5,26100|0,26100|3,26100|1,26250|2,26250|6,26250|0,26250|4,26400|1,26400|0,26400|6) - I don't feel like this pattern emphasizes on anything at all, the LN felt like it was mapped to the cymbal but there is no LNs on the other cymbals
00:27:075 (27075|3,27150|4,27225|5) - Felt that you could omit this to emphasize on the piano like what you did on 01:31:830 (91830|3,92130|2) -
and so on...
00:16:200 (16200|2,17400|2) - The whole chunk here could've illustrated the pitch of the piano here but instead opted for the background instrumental which was kind of dissapointing
00:19:200 (19200|4,19200|5,19200|6,19200|3) - Could've used a grace here for the piano
00:19:500 (19500|6,19800|6) - Could've used SV here for speed up
00:20:400 (20400|3) - Felt that this note could be way more to the right due to pitch relevancy, the rest of the notes should follow suit on the pitch relevancy
00:25:800 (25800|3,25800|5,25800|0,25800|6,25950|2,25950|1,25950|0,26025|6,26025|5,26100|0,26100|3,26100|1,26250|2,26250|6,26250|0,26250|4,26400|1,26400|0,26400|6) - I don't feel like this pattern emphasizes on anything at all, the LN felt like it was mapped to the cymbal but there is no LNs on the other cymbals
00:27:075 (27075|3,27150|4,27225|5) - Felt that you could omit this to emphasize on the piano like what you did on 01:31:830 (91830|3,92130|2) -
and so on...