Sr_Korah wrote:

HEAVENLY

1) 00:04:500 (4500|1,4500|0,4500|6,4500|2) - If you wanted to emphasize the "piano chord" it is one 1/4 snap above, there are more "mistakes" like that in the beginning, that's why I don't know if it was make on purpose. I emphasized all kick sounds with 4 notes in that section
2) 00:05:925 (5925|5) - I just want that note there; very little detail but I think it feels better. It's a good suggestion, but i'll keep it because i want this part to run smoothly
3) 00:22:275 (22275|1,22350|2,22425|3,22500|1,22575|2,22650|3,22725|4) - boring staris D: what about this? 00:22:275 (22275|1,22350|2,22350|4,22425|3,22425|0,22500|2,22500|5,22575|0,22575|4,22650|1,22650|3) | boring stairs D: 00:23:475 (23475|5,23550|4,23625|3,23700|2,23775|4,23850|6,23925|5,24000|4,24075|3) - what about this? 00:23:475 (23475|5,23550|4,23625|3,23625|6,23700|1,23700|4,23775|2,23775|6,23850|3,23850|5,23925|2,23925|4,24000|6,24075|4) It's hard for me to know what you suggested because clicking those won't show me what you're trying to show me. If you could edit the post with links so that i can see them on a screenshot i'd appreciate it. You can take a screenshot and upload at the same time by pressing Shift + F12
4) 00:24:375 (24375|3,24450|2) - Add these two here, it feels better in my opinion. I'd put them if the kick sound were clear enough, but no.
It's almost unhearable
5) 00:24:675 (24675|4,24750|3,24825|2,24900|4,24900|0,24900|1,24975|3,25050|5,25125|4,25200|3,25275|2,25350|0,25350|4,25350|1,25425|3,25500|0,25500|5,25500|2,25575|3,25650|4) - This has to be more "lively", you can do it with your own patterns, but this is my suggestion: 00:24:675 (24675|4,24750|3,24750|1,24825|5,24825|2,24900|4,24900|0,24900|1,24975|3,25050|4,25050|1,25050|5,25125|0,25125|3,25200|2,25200|1,25200|4,25275|3,25275|5,25350|0,25350|4,25350|1,25425|3,25500|0,25500|5,25500|2,25575|1,25575|3,25650|0,25650|4) I think the current pattern works out nice considering the piano pitch. Once again i'm gonna need a screenshot to know what you're trying to show me
6) 00:27:075 (27075|3,27150|4,27225|5,27300|3,27300|1,27300|6,27375|4,27450|5,27525|3,27600|1,27675|4,27750|2,27750|6,27750|5,27825|3,27900|4,27900|1,27900|6) - This also has to be more lively. 00:28:275 (28275|4,28350|3,28425|2,28500|5,28500|0,28500|1,28575|3,28650|1,28725|2,28800|3,28875|4,28950|0,28950|5,28950|2,29025|5,29025|2,29025|0,29100|3,29175|4,29250|5,29325|3) - this one too, I won't suggest patterns for those two because I don't want to impose that much my style over your map,
do it lively with your style or you can also leave it like that, it's your decision, but I feel it has to be more lively :B ////// 00:37:875 (37875|3,37950|4,38025|5,38100|1,38100|3,38100|6,38175|4,38250|5,38325|3,38400|1,38475|2,38550|6,38550|5,38550|3,38625|2,38700|5,38700|4,38700|1,38775|3,38850|2,38925|4) - same here haha, if you want me to suggest I'll do it though. Hmm yes please, I am going to need examples because it seems fine for me in its current state. Only hearing that you feel it has to be more lively doesn't give me a clear explanation on how to improve those patterns
7) Little detail, but you can add this note 01:31:830 (91830|5) - to emphasize the end of that part in conjunction with the "tiny bells" you can hear. I personally wouldn't add a jack there

Sr_Korah wrote:

The same mod but now fixed (with images)!Erased the points that i could explain myself in the previous post

[box=HEAVENLY]
2) 00:05:925 (5925|5) - I just want that note there; very little detail but I think it feels better.
I put 2 notes only where the piano sound is

3) 00:22:275 (22275|1,22350|2,22425|3,22500|1,22575|2,22650|3,22725|4) - boring staris D: what about this? 00:22:275 (22275|1,22350|2,22350|4,22425|3,22425|0,22500|2,22500|5,22575|0,22575|4,22650|1,22650|3) | Can't really put those notes for no reason since i decided to put 2 notes where the bass sound is added to the piano sound

boring stairs D: 00:23:475 (23475|5,23550|4,23625|3,23700|2,23775|4,23850|6,23925|5,24000|4,24075|3) - what about this? 00:23:475 (23475|5,23550|4,23625|3,23625|6,23700|1,23700|4,23775|2,23775|6,23850|3,23850|5,23925|2,23925|4,24000|6,24075|4) Same



5) 00:24:675 (24675|4,24750|3,24825|2,24900|4,24900|0,24900|1,24975|3,25050|5,25125|4,25200|3,25275|2,25350|0,25350|4,25350|1,25425|3,25500|0,25500|5,25500|2,25575|3,25650|4) - This has to be more "lively", you can do it with your own patterns, but this is my suggestion: 00:24:675 (24675|4,24750|3,24750|1,24825|5,24825|2,24900|4,24900|0,24900|1,24975|3,25050|4,25050|1,25050|5,25125|0,25125|3,25200|2,25200|1,25200|4,25275|3,25275|5,25350|0,25350|4,25350|1,25425|3,25500|0,25500|5,25500|2,25575|1,25575|3,25650|0,25650|4)
Same reason as above

How to make the images tinier?
Don't give me Kudosu again, you already gave me one, but please answer the fixed mod though.

Evening wrote:

idk, i haven't played mania in quite a while so I'm really bad at it now so i'm not going to give too much mods

HEAVENLY

00:31:350 (31350|0,31500|0,31650|0,31725|1,31800|0,31950|0,32100|0,32250|0) - I quite dislike this anchor, i miss everytime here so you might want to shift 00:31:950 (31950|0) - to 2 or something Applied

00:51:000 (51000|3) - Personally don't think you should be solely mapping to the breakcore instrumentals because:
1) It is quite soft itself
2) There are other instrumentals louder than it at points
3) Feels quite weird to have no notes on louder instrumentals and more notes on softer ones
I disagree, the only sounds that i didn't include are the 1/4 melodies and the long sounds that i could map just by adding a long LN, and i think they're not that remarkable enough to be confusing the instruments i used to map that part while playing the chart. Moreover, i think the density of the song is what makes it fair to have that part mapped like that, i did add the 1/4 melody starting from 00:59:400 (59400|1) - because the intensity suddenly increases and deserves to have it

01:00:600 (60600|5) - You could incorporate slowjams here Agreed and applied

01:06:900 (66900|0,67050|0,67200|0,67350|0,67500|0,67575|2,67650|1,67725|0,67725|2,67800|1,67875|0) - Really don't like anchors everywhere lol
I tried to make a better pattern but ended up making another anchor in the 4th lane so failed by now, will try again later

01:22:650 (82650|4,82650|6,82950|3,82950|5,83250|4,83250|2) - I feel like these aren't emphasized enough, they feel like they just "blend" into the surroundings instead of standing out I get what you mean, but i couldn't really ignore the other sounds because i didn't want the part to be simple, decided to keep it complex

01:30:630 (90630|4) - Would be cool if you could've added in the 1/3 piano jacks here, I feel that it's the main instrument in the whole song anyways I thought they were 1/3 sounds at the beginning too, but after hearing 100 times i'm certain that they sound at 01:30:705 (90705|6,90855|6,91005|2,91155|2,91305|1,91455|1,91605|5,91755|5) - and those parts have 3 notes except 01:31:230 (91230|3) - because this one has an impacting bass sound

01:37:065 (97065|1,97065|0,97140|2,97215|0,97215|1,97290|2,97365|1,97365|0,97440|2,97515|1,97515|0,97590|2,97665|1,97665|0,97740|2,97815|0,97815|1) - I don't get what is the whole trill here for I mapped it being only piano = 2 notes, only drum = 2 notes, piano + drum = 3 notes. If i decrease each by 1,
then it doesn't fulfill the note density as the last difficulty, meaning that i took the risk of making trills in that part because of the note density that this part deserves.

01:39:035 (99035|3) - Would be cool if the map didn't just end here Mapped until the end of the song


Didn't really enjoy the map as much because of how quite a lot of patterns just "blend" into everything else. I didn't feel like the map was bringing out the emotions of the song: I see, but i don't think i can really take that suggestion because i like how the HEAVENLY diff is made out by blending many instruments; i personally think it's better like this for this song in particular. I appreciate that you say this though, everyone was telling me that they liked it and didn't receive criticism about this while testplaying a lot of highrankers.

Eg.
00:16:200 (16200|2,17400|2) - The whole chunk here could've illustrated the pitch of the piano here but instead opted for the background instrumental which was kind of dissapointing

00:19:200 (19200|4,19200|5,19200|6,19200|3) - Could've used a grace here for the piano

00:19:500 (19500|6,19800|6) - Could've used SV here for speed up There used to be a SV originally but i deleted it because i was missing or getting bad acc everytime, but you're right. I'll go for a second try.

00:20:400 (20400|3) - Felt that this note could be way more to the right due to pitch relevancy, the rest of the notes should follow suit on the pitch relevancy Tried to do that but failed :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8480291

00:25:800 (25800|3,25800|5,25800|0,25800|6,25950|2,25950|1,25950|0,26025|6,26025|5,26100|0,26100|3,26100|1,26250|2,26250|6,26250|0,26250|4,26400|1,26400|0,26400|6) - I don't feel like this pattern emphasizes on anything at all, the LN felt like it was mapped to the cymbal but there is no LNs on the other cymbals In 00:25:800 (25800|0,26250|0) - these two you can easily notice that it's a finish sound because it has 4 notes on it. I had to put 2 notes on 00:26:025 (26025|5,26025|6) - because it has no bass and only cymbal. Furthermore, establishing them as normal notes seemed pretty weird to me so i made them as LNs, but making the other cymbal timings as LNs aswell didn't suit me. I do not have a logical explanation so this might make me look pretty asinine but i just like it this way lol

00:27:075 (27075|3,27150|4,27225|5) - Felt that you could omit this to emphasize on the piano like what you did on 01:31:830 (91830|3,92130|2) - I think it's a different case since the one in 1:31 have no piano sound in the gap, I don't really want to ignore the piano sounds in any part of the map

and so on...

Best mod so far, I appreciate your time used to check this. I quite agree with the map lacking to bring out the emotions of the song, but I'm a mapper that seeks more for neat structures than following the song. I'm sorry to disappoint you cuz i respect you as a mapper and i love your maps. Thank you for modding!

Sandalphon wrote:

Long time no mod

[BASIC]
00:07:500 (7500|4) - Suggest move this to 00:07:350 - , i know you are adding that note for 1/4 piano, but i realize this drum 00:07:350 - is much more noticeable plus is quite similar with 00:07:050 - this one I agree with what you said, but i originally put it there since the kick sound is more remarkable than the drum at 00:07:350


01:07:800 - why not start adding some normal note here to make a bit different with the previous LNs img
your suggestion is reasonable but as this difficulty is Easy i'd like to keep it as simple as possible, if this diff were Normal i would have done it

[NOVICE]
01:26:250 - Feel here should be double instead of 01:26:100 - i'll actually think about this since i intended to put 2 notes in only kick sounds but the bass in this timing is more remarkable than the kick

/me run

Sandalphon wrote:

[jakads' MAXIMUM]

00:13:500 (13500|3,13650|2) - swap lane for these two and you can intend something like this osu.ppy.sh/ss/10785639 ooh that's nice

01:27:000 (87000|5) - this pattern is too uncomfortable, something like this could make it better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10785663 changed differently

Sandalphon wrote:

[HEAVENLY]
01:30:630 (90630|1) - From here there's definitely 1/3 snap piano sounds i'm certain you've mapped this part wrong oh no why am i so dumb. remapped that part

Call me when you finished

Sandalphon wrote:

[Lulu's EXHAUST]

00:31:300 (31300|4,31350|5) - doesn't really seem to connect with previous one, moving both one column to the left seems better moved them except 00:31:350 (31350|6) -

00:32:700 (32700|6,32700|4,32850|6,32850|4,33000|4,33000|6) - it seems to focused on the right side for me, spread it out like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10785621 rearranged

01:07:350 (67350|5,67350|2) - move both one column to the left to make that pattern more flowing wanna make them same col for drum like 01:06:150 (66150|4,66150|1,66300|4,66300|1) -

01:30:105 (90105|4) - i dont see the reason why you ignored this sound? added one

00:42:525 (42525|0,42600|5) - for consistency with other difficulties, delete these and make the 7th column note below a LN deleted both but don't wanna make LN thing for this part

Fresh Chicken wrote:

jakads'MAXIMUM
00:05:550 (5550|1) - 이거 00:04:200 (4200|5,4350|5) - 여기처럼 의도를 동일하게 하는게 나을듯 3칼럼으로 옮겨 아주 좋은 지적, 나머지를 3 3 2 2 연타가 만들어지게 다 바꿈
00:11:100 (11100|4) - 여기 손이 너무 꼬이는데? 가운데로 옮기는건 어떰? 훨씬 나아보이는데 ok
00:48:600 (48600|1,48900|1,49200|1,49500|1) - 이렇게 2레인만 하는것보단 7레인에 두번 5레인에 두번이 나아보이는데 어때, 13 누르고있으면서 가운데 손가락 치는게 좀 불편 이건 뒤에 나오는 멜로디랑은 전혀 다른 드럼이다라는걸 강조하기 위해서 롱놋 사이에 넣은거라 의도
00:53:250 (53250|3) - 이 타이밍에 왜 00:52:050 (52050|2,52050|1) - 여기처럼 왜 안넣음 거긴 드럼이 있고 여긴 없어서
01:04:800 (64800|0) - 의도한 소리가 이노트에는 잘 안들리는데? 피아노인데? 만약 옆에 롱놋 말하는거면 처음 01:04:500 (64500|6,64500|5) - 나올 때 크래쉬 소리가 줄어들었다가 01:04:800 (64800|0) - 여기에서 역재생되어 다시 커지는걸 표현
01:09:975 (69975|1,70125|5) - 보면 여기는 막난보다 밀도가 높은데 막난보다 더 어렵게 1/8 스냅과 같이 이걸 넣었어야했는건가 생각이듬. 다시 한번 생각해보셈 넣을꼬얌
01:37:290 (97290|2) - 여긴 드럼이 없는데 2놋인 이유? 플로어탐 비스무리한 소리 나는디?
01:37:515 (97515|3) - 여기도 3놋일 큰 이유는 없다고 보는데 앞에 패턴들도 보면 1/1마다 3놋씩으로 강조했어, 왜냐하면 1/1마다 드럼 종류가 바뀌니깐 그거 표현하려구

Fresh Chicken wrote:

General
00:35:625 (35625|2,35850|2) - 힛사 Drum ㅇㅋ
00:36:075 (36075|2,36150|1) - 힛사 안들어감 Drum 그다음에 Bass 바꿈
01:00:600 (60600|2) - 루루난이도 Bass 힛사 메아리 넣을지 안넣을지 고민해봐 넣음

HEAVENLY
00:50:400 - 여기 2놋이 될만한 이유거리가 없어 ㅇㅋ 수정함
00:50:625 - 여기 분명 노트가 들어갈 소리가 안들려, 이거 고스트 노트임 지움
00:54:750 (54750|4,54975|3,55200|3,55425|4) - 여기에 실제로 의도한 소리가 들리지 않음, 이건 지워야할듯 젠장

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Lulu's EXHAUST
00:19:275 (19275|1) - 이거 실수로 노트 하나 빼먹은듯 1레인에 하나 추가 00:19:200 - 서는 멜로디에 2놋, 작은 드럼에 1놋 넣음. 00:19:350 - 서 나오는 드럼과는 약간 다른 모양
00:19:500 (19500|3) - 이거 4놋일정도는 아닌거같은데, 막난하고 막전난에도 롱놋 2개씩만 썼음 단놋 하나 지웠다. 나는 이런 파트에서 롱놋 3개씩 썼어
00:19:950 (19950|2) - 이거 3놋으로 해야하고 00:20:100 (20100|3) - 이것도 3놋이여야하는거 아닌가 00:19:950 - 노트 하나 지우고 00:20:100 - 에 하나 넣었다. 4놋은 멜로디가 있고 새로운 구조의 시작이라 두고 싶어
00:57:675 (57675|1) - 3라인으로 옮기는게 패턴상 훨신 나아보임 oki
00:59:700 (59700|5) - 여기 노트가 비어있는 이유가? 그리고 가운데 롱놋옆에 놓은 노트들에서 2놋 위치가 설명이 잘 안되는듯, 무슨 의도였음? 실수인듯, 패턴 다시 만듬

Maxus wrote:

ngghh, sorry, seems like there's wrong snapped note in lulu's EXHAUST. God damn it lulu

[Lulu's EXHAUST]
01:29:200 - This chord is wrongly snapped, this should be snapped at 01:29:230 - for the screenshot of comparison between EXHAUST diff and Jachnokads' MAXIMUM : http://puu.sh/Agu19/d4e8f0d035.jpg Fixed!

Why can't I give you kudosu?


This is an amazing mapset you have here.
Good luck. Thank you

Feerum wrote:

Hello! Hi!

Maxus' is correct. The chord is wrong snapped.
Additionally:

[NOVICE]
01:29:200 - The same wrong snap as mentioned above by Maxus' Why am i so asinine, fixed

Screen

01:38:715 (98715|1) - Wrongly Snapped. Please snap it to the new Timing Point. Fixed

[BASIC]
01:35:105 (95105|0) - This is wrong snapped. Please snap it to the new Timing Point. Oh my god, fixed
It's also wrong snapped in the ADVANCED difficulty. Please fix it there aswell! Done!

01:38:715 (98715|5) - This Note is also wrong snapped. Please snap it to the new Timing Point. Done

Maxus wrote:

So, If you plan to requalify again, i will give you small mod first here.

at 01:47:398 - , you need additional red line to sync with the last piano notes, try this: http://puu.sh/AkS3k/f3ff8686da.png (don't forget to resnap the notes, and normalize each red line.)

For the timing code (can just copy paste):

timing

107398,317.460317460317,4,2,1,50,1,0
108191,294.117647058824,4,2,1,50,1,0
108779,279.06976744186,4,2,1,50,1,0
109337,298.507462686567,4,2,1,50,1,0
109635,262.008733624454,4,2,1,50,1,0
109897,236.220472440945,4,2,1,50,1,0
110133,250,4,2,1,50,1,0
110633,441.176470588235,4,2,1,50,1,0
111074,419.58041958042,4,2,1,50,1,0

Good luck