Mage wrote:

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

Where is kiai?

BASIC

00:03:900 (3900|2) - why did you start LN here? 00:03:600 - i think there is better to emphasize the lower pitch sounds of the piano and this way works out much better for me
00:04:800 - 00:06:000 - 00:08:400 - 00:09:600 - ^
00:49:800 - add note to 7 it was my intention to leave it blank
Looks weird that 00:51:300 - here you emphasize this sound, but 00:55:800 - here another. Shouldn't you then 01:00:150 - add here note?i changed the focus to bass sounds

NOVICE

00:41:100 - double? No cymbal sound there
01:00:600 - 01:01:800 - 01:03:000 - 01:04:200 - why not doubles? Because it's a Normal difficulty and it's not really necessary to put 2 notes
01:33:005 - 01:33:230 - 01:33:455 - ok here 100% doubles There isn't enough impact on the sound to put 2 notes for this diff.

ADVANCED

00:03:600 - 00:04:800 - 00:06:000 - 00:08:400 - i see no reason why you don't start 1/4 stream for piano hah. there's no reason to put notes in all sounds. This section is basically to emphasize on the difficulty spread and i'm certain the current pattern works out fine
00:09:600 - but here you make 1/4 for some reason This is another section, not every section has to be mapped with the same intention.
00:19:500 - add note to 5 What for?
00:21:600 - better to make trills I'll consider it but currently i can't agree with this
01:32:855 (92855|4,92855|6,93005|4,93005|6) - i don't think they are should be on same columns, sounds are different Moved the ones above to columns 1 and 3!
01:33:230 - double It doesn't have the other sound that 01:33:005 - this has

Good luck!

7Hira wrote:

M4M :v

[Lulu's EXHAUST]

00:13:050 (13050|4) - 이것처럼 00:12:900 - 여기에도 롱놋 하나 배치하면 좋을거같네요 v: Oki :V

00:21:525 (21525|2,21525|4) - 헤븐리 난이도와 동일 Oki :V

00:23:700 (23700|4,23700|6) - 이거랑 마찬가지로 00:24:300 - 여기도 롱놋 2개로 표현하면 좋을거같네요 v: Oki :V

00:26:850 (26850|4,26925|2) - 드럼소리에 맞춰서 각각 2놋 Oki :V

00:32:100 - 여기와 마찬가지로 00:32:700 (32700|0) - 노트 하나 추가 Oki :V

00:52:500 - ,00:52:875 - 여기는 00:57:300 - ,00:57:675 - 여기랑 각각 동일하므로 노트 갯수를 통일해주세요 v: Oki :V

00:55:875 (55875|4) - 고스트 노트? 만약 삭제하신다면 00:51:075 (51075|4) - 이것도 같이 삭제하는 게 좋을 거라고 생각합니다 v: No. It has sound :3

01:16:900 (76900|1) - 고스트 노트 Oki :V

7Hira wrote:

M4M :v :v

[HEAVENLY]

00:08:100 - 이건 00:03:300 - ,00:04:500 - 이런 부분들과 마찬가지로 4놋 심벌이 있는곳을 강조하기 위해서 임시로 3놋으로 해놨어용 밑에도
3놋으로 되어있음

00:11:250 - ,00:11:325 - 드럼소리 맞춰서 노트 하나씩 추가해도 될거같네요 :v 적용하였습니다 :v

00:13:050 - 이건 00:08:250 - ,00:09:450 - 이런 부분들과 마찬가지로 2놋 이거는 피아노 소리의 임팩트가 적고 00:13:125 (13125|3) - 여기도
피아노 소리가 나기 때문에 적용한다면 여기도 2놋이여야해서 무리데스

00:21:450 (21450|0,21450|1,21450|3) - 스냅 00:21:487 - 여기라고 생각합니다 :v 딜레이 사운드라 그래서 그렇게 들리긴하지만 제가 스냅한곳에서 시작하는것 맞습니다. 그리고 스냅을 거기다 하면 판정 200 나옴 분명

00:36:750 - 좀 허전하네요 :v 하이햇이 있군요, 노트 하나 추가했습니다

00:42:600 - ,00:42:675 - 너무 허전하므로 각각 노트 추가 00:42:675 - 소리가 나느건 여기뿐이라 여기만 추가했소

01:30:330 - 여기랑 마찬가지로 01:30:555 - 숏롱. 다음 패턴으로 이어지는데 문제없다고 생각합니다 :v Fixed

01:33:605 - 특별히 3놋으로 강조할 필요는 없어보입니다 :v 심벌을 강조하고싶었습니다 :v

Worms wrote:

hi sorry for late mod
1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7

Lulu's EXHAUST

01:37:290 (97290|5,97440|5,97590|5,97740|5) - fix rearranged that part

pretty solid spread, hope my mod helped
gl with ranking!

Worms wrote:

hi sorry for late mod
1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7

jachnokads' MAXIMUM

00:15:000 - same thing here as heavenly diff ehh yeah i guess
01:01:800 (61800|2,62025|2,62250|2,62475|2,62700|2) - these can be just normal notes as these are percussion sounds and i dont really hear a definite end of the sound for there to be LNs 01:00:600 (60600|0,60900|6,61200|0,61500|6) - I emphasized all the percussion sounds in this part specifically with short LNs boi
01:05:400 - thnkg was intentional, added note every 2/1
01:18:525 - add note here looks ugly lol

http://puu.sh/wmpo0/f510c92c15.png you might want to move more notes to the middle column ehh idc that much tbh

pretty solid spread, hope my mod helped
gl with ranking!

Kim_GodSSI wrote:

Modding From:

Kim_GodSSI's Mania Modding Queue

오랜만에 모딩 이랑 하도 리겜 안해서 감 다 잃음 ..

Modding

[잨초코]

1. 00:51:675 (51675|4,51675|6) - 이거 거의 안들리는데 없에는게 좋을것 같은데 그리고 00:51:675 (51675|6,51675|4) - 여기는 확실히 들림 고로 여기 추가 하고 윗부분 삭제
   아 저기 드럼 사운드 였구나 근데 너무 작은것 같은데 그냥 피아노 사운드로 가는게 좋을것 같기는 함.
   복붙 잘못 했나보다 두개가 똑같은걸로 되어있네
   그리고 그 부분은 다 드럼으로 한거라 그냥 keep
   
2. 01:04:500 (64500|6) - 이거 끝나는 타이밍 01:05:325 - 여기로 해도 괜찮을듯. 그럼 뭔가 패턴이 더러워질거같기도 하고
   거기서 끝낸 이유가 쉬잉 소리가 거기까지만 나고 그 뒤는 메아리?걸랑
3. 01:09:000 - 여기
   
   요것도 괜찮을듯. 비스무리하게 바꿈, 괜찮네

지금 감 다 잃어서 하나도 안보임 ㅜㅠ 나중에 다시 불러주면 그때 제대로 해줄께 ㅜㅜ

Worms wrote:

hi sorry for late mod
1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7

general

01:36:615 - this bit seems a bit out of time The separate sounds make it seem like it but i think it ain't

HEAVENLY (nice diff name)

00:12:000 - remove one (look at 00:12:075 (12075|0,12075|1,12150|6,12150|4,12225|2,12225|0,12300|6,12300|4) - )
Fixed
00:15:000 - im not hearing anything here that indicates 1/8 snaps, especially from here 00:15:750 - Maybe the song itself doesn't show it clearly but it can be assured that the sound is different from 00:16:275 (16275|4,16350|6,16425|5,16500|4,16575|5,16650|3,16725|4,16800|5,16875|2,16950|3,17025|4) - and when i compared it i was certain it was 1/8
00:32:250 (32250|4,32325|3,32400|2,32475|4,32550|3,32625|2,32700|4,32775|3,32850|2,32925|4,33000|3,33075|2) - i dont really like this, i think you can rearrange it slightly while keeping it linear Agreed, re-arranged that part a little bit
00:46:200 - i think you can continue the LN stream as it is the same sound I think it makes a better pattern establishing them as short notes being aside of 2 LNs
00:51:000 - 01:00:600 - you're not really using the 2nd, 4th, and 6th column a lot compared to 1st, 3rd, 5th, and 7th column, i'd rather you change this I don't really think that suggestion is very noticeable while playing the map, so i'll keep
01:10:200 - 01:12:600 - im only hearing 1 piano note being played, also 01:11:025 (71025|5,71175|5,71325|5,71475|5,71625|5) - pls fix : ( It's not a problem if i decide to represent them as 2 notes, Fixed the 6th column repeat by rearranging that part

i think there are a few bits that's more dense than it should be, for example here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8364717 the song doesnt really sound as dense as the map makes it out to be, but it's alright i guess considering it is supposed to be hard

pretty solid spread, hope my mod helped All suggestions were worthy and made me consider a lot, thanks a bunch!
gl with ranking!

Sr_Korah wrote:

jachnokads's MAXIMUM

1) 00:14:025 (14025|6) - add this note here and erase this one 00:14:100 (14100|6) //// add these notes 00:14:175 (14175|6,14250|5) 00:14:475 (14475|6,14550|5) - all of that to make the stairs funnier.
I know why you're pointing it, but i'll just follow the piano since it looks nice and stuff

2) 00:21:675 (21675|6,21675|3,21750|2,21750|5,21825|1,21825|4,21900|3,21900|0,21900|6,21975|5,21975|2,22050|1,22050|4,22125|0,22125|3) - You used that pattern previously for "piano stairs" sounds, try to use other for those sounds you heard there (you can still use them though, is just a suggestion), try this: 00:21:675 (21675|6,21675|2,21675|3,21675|5,21750|1,21750|4,21750|0,21825|5,21825|6,21825|3,21900|0,21900|4,21975|5,21975|2,21975|3,22050|4,22050|1)I guess you're not that experienced with modding stuff right
The blue thing there is purely for selecting, so it doesn't show what you placed
Try capturing it next time since your hyperlink shows like this



3) The sound start at here 00:42:450 (42450|5) what sound? and do what with that?

4) Little detail: add this note 01:23:550 (83550|1) - feels better. sure

5) This is more lively 01:29:805 (89805|5,89880|4,89955|3,90030|2,90105|1) - you can try this: 01:29:880 (89880|4,89880|1,89955|2,89955|5,90030|1,90030|6,90030|3,90105|2) - or something else.
Again, please capture that.


A comment: this part here 01:30:705 (90705|1,90730|5,90730|4,90780|2,90830|5,90830|4,90855|3,90930|0,90930|6,91005|5,91030|2,91030|1,91080|4,91130|1,91130|2,91155|3,91230|4,91230|0,91305|1,91330|6,91330|5,91380|2,91430|5,91430|6,91455|3,91530|2,91530|4,91605|5,91630|0,91630|1,91680|6,91730|1,91730|0,91755|5) -
took me by surprise while playing it because I was having so much fun, good one haha.polyrhythm hell yea

Sr_Korah wrote:

HEAVENLY

1) 00:04:500 (4500|1,4500|0,4500|6,4500|2) - If you wanted to emphasize the "piano chord" it is one 1/4 snap above, there are more "mistakes" like that in the beginning, that's why I don't know if it was make on purpose. I emphasized all kick sounds with 4 notes in that section
2) 00:05:925 (5925|5) - I just want that note there; very little detail but I think it feels better. It's a good suggestion, but i'll keep it because i want this part to run smoothly
3) 00:22:275 (22275|1,22350|2,22425|3,22500|1,22575|2,22650|3,22725|4) - boring staris D: what about this? 00:22:275 (22275|1,22350|2,22350|4,22425|3,22425|0,22500|2,22500|5,22575|0,22575|4,22650|1,22650|3) | boring stairs D: 00:23:475 (23475|5,23550|4,23625|3,23700|2,23775|4,23850|6,23925|5,24000|4,24075|3) - what about this? 00:23:475 (23475|5,23550|4,23625|3,23625|6,23700|1,23700|4,23775|2,23775|6,23850|3,23850|5,23925|2,23925|4,24000|6,24075|4) It's hard for me to know what you suggested because clicking those won't show me what you're trying to show me. If you could edit the post with links so that i can see them on a screenshot i'd appreciate it. You can take a screenshot and upload at the same time by pressing Shift + F12
4) 00:24:375 (24375|3,24450|2) - Add these two here, it feels better in my opinion. I'd put them if the kick sound were clear enough, but no.
It's almost unhearable
5) 00:24:675 (24675|4,24750|3,24825|2,24900|4,24900|0,24900|1,24975|3,25050|5,25125|4,25200|3,25275|2,25350|0,25350|4,25350|1,25425|3,25500|0,25500|5,25500|2,25575|3,25650|4) - This has to be more "lively", you can do it with your own patterns, but this is my suggestion: 00:24:675 (24675|4,24750|3,24750|1,24825|5,24825|2,24900|4,24900|0,24900|1,24975|3,25050|4,25050|1,25050|5,25125|0,25125|3,25200|2,25200|1,25200|4,25275|3,25275|5,25350|0,25350|4,25350|1,25425|3,25500|0,25500|5,25500|2,25575|1,25575|3,25650|0,25650|4) I think the current pattern works out nice considering the piano pitch. Once again i'm gonna need a screenshot to know what you're trying to show me
6) 00:27:075 (27075|3,27150|4,27225|5,27300|3,27300|1,27300|6,27375|4,27450|5,27525|3,27600|1,27675|4,27750|2,27750|6,27750|5,27825|3,27900|4,27900|1,27900|6) - This also has to be more lively. 00:28:275 (28275|4,28350|3,28425|2,28500|5,28500|0,28500|1,28575|3,28650|1,28725|2,28800|3,28875|4,28950|0,28950|5,28950|2,29025|5,29025|2,29025|0,29100|3,29175|4,29250|5,29325|3) - this one too, I won't suggest patterns for those two because I don't want to impose that much my style over your map,
do it lively with your style or you can also leave it like that, it's your decision, but I feel it has to be more lively :B ////// 00:37:875 (37875|3,37950|4,38025|5,38100|1,38100|3,38100|6,38175|4,38250|5,38325|3,38400|1,38475|2,38550|6,38550|5,38550|3,38625|2,38700|5,38700|4,38700|1,38775|3,38850|2,38925|4) - same here haha, if you want me to suggest I'll do it though. Hmm yes please, I am going to need examples because it seems fine for me in its current state. Only hearing that you feel it has to be more lively doesn't give me a clear explanation on how to improve those patterns
7) Little detail, but you can add this note 01:31:830 (91830|5) - to emphasize the end of that part in conjunction with the "tiny bells" you can hear. I personally wouldn't add a jack there

Sr_Korah wrote:

The same mod but now fixed (with images)!Erased the points that i could explain myself in the previous post

[box=HEAVENLY]
2) 00:05:925 (5925|5) - I just want that note there; very little detail but I think it feels better.
I put 2 notes only where the piano sound is

3) 00:22:275 (22275|1,22350|2,22425|3,22500|1,22575|2,22650|3,22725|4) - boring staris D: what about this? 00:22:275 (22275|1,22350|2,22350|4,22425|3,22425|0,22500|2,22500|5,22575|0,22575|4,22650|1,22650|3) | Can't really put those notes for no reason since i decided to put 2 notes where the bass sound is added to the piano sound

boring stairs D: 00:23:475 (23475|5,23550|4,23625|3,23700|2,23775|4,23850|6,23925|5,24000|4,24075|3) - what about this? 00:23:475 (23475|5,23550|4,23625|3,23625|6,23700|1,23700|4,23775|2,23775|6,23850|3,23850|5,23925|2,23925|4,24000|6,24075|4) Same



5) 00:24:675 (24675|4,24750|3,24825|2,24900|4,24900|0,24900|1,24975|3,25050|5,25125|4,25200|3,25275|2,25350|0,25350|4,25350|1,25425|3,25500|0,25500|5,25500|2,25575|3,25650|4) - This has to be more "lively", you can do it with your own patterns, but this is my suggestion: 00:24:675 (24675|4,24750|3,24750|1,24825|5,24825|2,24900|4,24900|0,24900|1,24975|3,25050|4,25050|1,25050|5,25125|0,25125|3,25200|2,25200|1,25200|4,25275|3,25275|5,25350|0,25350|4,25350|1,25425|3,25500|0,25500|5,25500|2,25575|1,25575|3,25650|0,25650|4)
Same reason as above

How to make the images tinier?
Don't give me Kudosu again, you already gave me one, but please answer the fixed mod though.

Evening wrote:

idk, i haven't played mania in quite a while so I'm really bad at it now so i'm not going to give too much mods

HEAVENLY

00:31:350 (31350|0,31500|0,31650|0,31725|1,31800|0,31950|0,32100|0,32250|0) - I quite dislike this anchor, i miss everytime here so you might want to shift 00:31:950 (31950|0) - to 2 or something Applied

00:51:000 (51000|3) - Personally don't think you should be solely mapping to the breakcore instrumentals because:
1) It is quite soft itself
2) There are other instrumentals louder than it at points
3) Feels quite weird to have no notes on louder instrumentals and more notes on softer ones
I disagree, the only sounds that i didn't include are the 1/4 melodies and the long sounds that i could map just by adding a long LN, and i think they're not that remarkable enough to be confusing the instruments i used to map that part while playing the chart. Moreover, i think the density of the song is what makes it fair to have that part mapped like that, i did add the 1/4 melody starting from 00:59:400 (59400|1) - because the intensity suddenly increases and deserves to have it

01:00:600 (60600|5) - You could incorporate slowjams here Agreed and applied

01:06:900 (66900|0,67050|0,67200|0,67350|0,67500|0,67575|2,67650|1,67725|0,67725|2,67800|1,67875|0) - Really don't like anchors everywhere lol
I tried to make a better pattern but ended up making another anchor in the 4th lane so failed by now, will try again later

01:22:650 (82650|4,82650|6,82950|3,82950|5,83250|4,83250|2) - I feel like these aren't emphasized enough, they feel like they just "blend" into the surroundings instead of standing out I get what you mean, but i couldn't really ignore the other sounds because i didn't want the part to be simple, decided to keep it complex

01:30:630 (90630|4) - Would be cool if you could've added in the 1/3 piano jacks here, I feel that it's the main instrument in the whole song anyways I thought they were 1/3 sounds at the beginning too, but after hearing 100 times i'm certain that they sound at 01:30:705 (90705|6,90855|6,91005|2,91155|2,91305|1,91455|1,91605|5,91755|5) - and those parts have 3 notes except 01:31:230 (91230|3) - because this one has an impacting bass sound

01:37:065 (97065|1,97065|0,97140|2,97215|0,97215|1,97290|2,97365|1,97365|0,97440|2,97515|1,97515|0,97590|2,97665|1,97665|0,97740|2,97815|0,97815|1) - I don't get what is the whole trill here for I mapped it being only piano = 2 notes, only drum = 2 notes, piano + drum = 3 notes. If i decrease each by 1,
then it doesn't fulfill the note density as the last difficulty, meaning that i took the risk of making trills in that part because of the note density that this part deserves.

01:39:035 (99035|3) - Would be cool if the map didn't just end here Mapped until the end of the song


Didn't really enjoy the map as much because of how quite a lot of patterns just "blend" into everything else. I didn't feel like the map was bringing out the emotions of the song: I see, but i don't think i can really take that suggestion because i like how the HEAVENLY diff is made out by blending many instruments; i personally think it's better like this for this song in particular. I appreciate that you say this though, everyone was telling me that they liked it and didn't receive criticism about this while testplaying a lot of highrankers.

Eg.
00:16:200 (16200|2,17400|2) - The whole chunk here could've illustrated the pitch of the piano here but instead opted for the background instrumental which was kind of dissapointing

00:19:200 (19200|4,19200|5,19200|6,19200|3) - Could've used a grace here for the piano

00:19:500 (19500|6,19800|6) - Could've used SV here for speed up There used to be a SV originally but i deleted it because i was missing or getting bad acc everytime, but you're right. I'll go for a second try.

00:20:400 (20400|3) - Felt that this note could be way more to the right due to pitch relevancy, the rest of the notes should follow suit on the pitch relevancy Tried to do that but failed :: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8480291

00:25:800 (25800|3,25800|5,25800|0,25800|6,25950|2,25950|1,25950|0,26025|6,26025|5,26100|0,26100|3,26100|1,26250|2,26250|6,26250|0,26250|4,26400|1,26400|0,26400|6) - I don't feel like this pattern emphasizes on anything at all, the LN felt like it was mapped to the cymbal but there is no LNs on the other cymbals In 00:25:800 (25800|0,26250|0) - these two you can easily notice that it's a finish sound because it has 4 notes on it. I had to put 2 notes on 00:26:025 (26025|5,26025|6) - because it has no bass and only cymbal. Furthermore, establishing them as normal notes seemed pretty weird to me so i made them as LNs, but making the other cymbal timings as LNs aswell didn't suit me. I do not have a logical explanation so this might make me look pretty asinine but i just like it this way lol

00:27:075 (27075|3,27150|4,27225|5) - Felt that you could omit this to emphasize on the piano like what you did on 01:31:830 (91830|3,92130|2) - I think it's a different case since the one in 1:31 have no piano sound in the gap, I don't really want to ignore the piano sounds in any part of the map

and so on...

Best mod so far, I appreciate your time used to check this. I quite agree with the map lacking to bring out the emotions of the song, but I'm a mapper that seeks more for neat structures than following the song. I'm sorry to disappoint you cuz i respect you as a mapper and i love your maps. Thank you for modding!

Sandalphon wrote:

Long time no mod

[BASIC]
00:07:500 (7500|4) - Suggest move this to 00:07:350 - , i know you are adding that note for 1/4 piano, but i realize this drum 00:07:350 - is much more noticeable plus is quite similar with 00:07:050 - this one I agree with what you said, but i originally put it there since the kick sound is more remarkable than the drum at 00:07:350


01:07:800 - why not start adding some normal note here to make a bit different with the previous LNs img
your suggestion is reasonable but as this difficulty is Easy i'd like to keep it as simple as possible, if this diff were Normal i would have done it

[NOVICE]
01:26:250 - Feel here should be double instead of 01:26:100 - i'll actually think about this since i intended to put 2 notes in only kick sounds but the bass in this timing is more remarkable than the kick

/me run

Sandalphon wrote:

[jakads' MAXIMUM]

00:13:500 (13500|3,13650|2) - swap lane for these two and you can intend something like this osu.ppy.sh/ss/10785639 ooh that's nice

01:27:000 (87000|5) - this pattern is too uncomfortable, something like this could make it better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10785663 changed differently

Sandalphon wrote:

[HEAVENLY]
01:30:630 (90630|1) - From here there's definitely 1/3 snap piano sounds i'm certain you've mapped this part wrong oh no why am i so dumb. remapped that part

Call me when you finished

Sandalphon wrote:

[Lulu's EXHAUST]

00:31:300 (31300|4,31350|5) - doesn't really seem to connect with previous one, moving both one column to the left seems better moved them except 00:31:350 (31350|6) -

00:32:700 (32700|6,32700|4,32850|6,32850|4,33000|4,33000|6) - it seems to focused on the right side for me, spread it out like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10785621 rearranged

01:07:350 (67350|5,67350|2) - move both one column to the left to make that pattern more flowing wanna make them same col for drum like 01:06:150 (66150|4,66150|1,66300|4,66300|1) -

01:30:105 (90105|4) - i dont see the reason why you ignored this sound? added one

00:42:525 (42525|0,42600|5) - for consistency with other difficulties, delete these and make the 7th column note below a LN deleted both but don't wanna make LN thing for this part

Fresh Chicken wrote:

jakads'MAXIMUM
00:05:550 (5550|1) - 이거 00:04:200 (4200|5,4350|5) - 여기처럼 의도를 동일하게 하는게 나을듯 3칼럼으로 옮겨 아주 좋은 지적, 나머지를 3 3 2 2 연타가 만들어지게 다 바꿈
00:11:100 (11100|4) - 여기 손이 너무 꼬이는데? 가운데로 옮기는건 어떰? 훨씬 나아보이는데 ok
00:48:600 (48600|1,48900|1,49200|1,49500|1) - 이렇게 2레인만 하는것보단 7레인에 두번 5레인에 두번이 나아보이는데 어때, 13 누르고있으면서 가운데 손가락 치는게 좀 불편 이건 뒤에 나오는 멜로디랑은 전혀 다른 드럼이다라는걸 강조하기 위해서 롱놋 사이에 넣은거라 의도
00:53:250 (53250|3) - 이 타이밍에 왜 00:52:050 (52050|2,52050|1) - 여기처럼 왜 안넣음 거긴 드럼이 있고 여긴 없어서
01:04:800 (64800|0) - 의도한 소리가 이노트에는 잘 안들리는데? 피아노인데? 만약 옆에 롱놋 말하는거면 처음 01:04:500 (64500|6,64500|5) - 나올 때 크래쉬 소리가 줄어들었다가 01:04:800 (64800|0) - 여기에서 역재생되어 다시 커지는걸 표현
01:09:975 (69975|1,70125|5) - 보면 여기는 막난보다 밀도가 높은데 막난보다 더 어렵게 1/8 스냅과 같이 이걸 넣었어야했는건가 생각이듬. 다시 한번 생각해보셈 넣을꼬얌
01:37:290 (97290|2) - 여긴 드럼이 없는데 2놋인 이유? 플로어탐 비스무리한 소리 나는디?
01:37:515 (97515|3) - 여기도 3놋일 큰 이유는 없다고 보는데 앞에 패턴들도 보면 1/1마다 3놋씩으로 강조했어, 왜냐하면 1/1마다 드럼 종류가 바뀌니깐 그거 표현하려구

Fresh Chicken wrote:

General
00:35:625 (35625|2,35850|2) - 힛사 Drum ㅇㅋ
00:36:075 (36075|2,36150|1) - 힛사 안들어감 Drum 그다음에 Bass 바꿈
01:00:600 (60600|2) - 루루난이도 Bass 힛사 메아리 넣을지 안넣을지 고민해봐 넣음

HEAVENLY
00:50:400 - 여기 2놋이 될만한 이유거리가 없어 ㅇㅋ 수정함
00:50:625 - 여기 분명 노트가 들어갈 소리가 안들려, 이거 고스트 노트임 지움
00:54:750 (54750|4,54975|3,55200|3,55425|4) - 여기에 실제로 의도한 소리가 들리지 않음, 이건 지워야할듯 젠장

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Lulu's EXHAUST
00:19:275 (19275|1) - 이거 실수로 노트 하나 빼먹은듯 1레인에 하나 추가 00:19:200 - 서는 멜로디에 2놋, 작은 드럼에 1놋 넣음. 00:19:350 - 서 나오는 드럼과는 약간 다른 모양
00:19:500 (19500|3) - 이거 4놋일정도는 아닌거같은데, 막난하고 막전난에도 롱놋 2개씩만 썼음 단놋 하나 지웠다. 나는 이런 파트에서 롱놋 3개씩 썼어
00:19:950 (19950|2) - 이거 3놋으로 해야하고 00:20:100 (20100|3) - 이것도 3놋이여야하는거 아닌가 00:19:950 - 노트 하나 지우고 00:20:100 - 에 하나 넣었다. 4놋은 멜로디가 있고 새로운 구조의 시작이라 두고 싶어
00:57:675 (57675|1) - 3라인으로 옮기는게 패턴상 훨신 나아보임 oki
00:59:700 (59700|5) - 여기 노트가 비어있는 이유가? 그리고 가운데 롱놋옆에 놓은 노트들에서 2놋 위치가 설명이 잘 안되는듯, 무슨 의도였음? 실수인듯, 패턴 다시 만듬