HEAVENLY1) 00:04:500 (4500|1,4500|0,4500|6,4500|2) - If you wanted to emphasize the "piano chord" it is one 1/4 snap above, there are more "mistakes" like that in the beginning, that's why I don't know if it was make on purpose.
2) 00:05:925 (5925|5) - I just want that note there; very little detail but I think it feels better.
3) 00:22:275 (22275|1,22350|2,22425|3,22500|1,22575|2,22650|3,22725|4) - boring staris D: what about this? 00:22:275 (22275|1,22350|2,22350|4,22425|3,22425|0,22500|2,22500|5,22575|0,22575|4,22650|1,22650|3) | boring stairs D: 00:23:475 (23475|5,23550|4,23625|3,23700|2,23775|4,23850|6,23925|5,24000|4,24075|3) - what about this? 00:23:475 (23475|5,23550|4,23625|3,23625|6,23700|1,23700|4,23775|2,23775|6,23850|3,23850|5,23925|2,23925|4,24000|6,24075|4)
4) 00:24:375 (24375|3,24450|2) - Add these two here, it feels better in my opinion.
5) 00:24:675 (24675|4,24750|3,24825|2,24900|4,24900|0,24900|1,24975|3,25050|5,25125|4,25200|3,25275|2,25350|0,25350|4,25350|1,25425|3,25500|0,25500|5,25500|2,25575|3,25650|4) - This has to be more "lively", you can do it with your own patterns, but this is my suggestion: 00:24:675 (24675|4,24750|3,24750|1,24825|5,24825|2,24900|4,24900|0,24900|1,24975|3,25050|4,25050|1,25050|5,25125|0,25125|3,25200|2,25200|1,25200|4,25275|3,25275|5,25350|0,25350|4,25350|1,25425|3,25500|0,25500|5,25500|2,25575|1,25575|3,25650|0,25650|4)
6) 00:27:075 (27075|3,27150|4,27225|5,27300|3,27300|1,27300|6,27375|4,27450|5,27525|3,27600|1,27675|4,27750|2,27750|6,27750|5,27825|3,27900|4,27900|1,27900|6) - This also has to be more lively. 00:28:275 (28275|4,28350|3,28425|2,28500|5,28500|0,28500|1,28575|3,28650|1,28725|2,28800|3,28875|4,28950|0,28950|5,28950|2,29025|5,29025|2,29025|0,29100|3,29175|4,29250|5,29325|3) - this one too, I won't suggest patterns for those two because I don't want to impose that much my style over your map,
do it lively with your style or you can also leave it like that, it's your decision, but I feel it has to be more lively :B ////// 00:37:875 (37875|3,37950|4,38025|5,38100|1,38100|3,38100|6,38175|4,38250|5,38325|3,38400|1,38475|2,38550|6,38550|5,38550|3,38625|2,38700|5,38700|4,38700|1,38775|3,38850|2,38925|4) - same here haha, if you want me to suggest I'll do it though.
7) Little detail, but you can add this note 01:31:830 (91830|5) - to emphasize the end of that part in conjunction with the "tiny bells" you can hear.
jachnokads's MAXIMUM1) 00:14:025 (14025|6) - add this note here and erase this one 00:14:100 (14100|6) //// add these notes 00:14:175 (14175|6,14250|5) 00:14:475 (14475|6,14550|5) - all of that to make the stairs funnier.
2) 00:21:675 (21675|6,21675|3,21750|2,21750|5,21825|1,21825|4,21900|3,21900|0,21900|6,21975|5,21975|2,22050|1,22050|4,22125|0,22125|3) - You used that pattern previously for "piano stairs" sounds, try to use other for those sounds you heard there (you can still use them though, is just a suggestion), try this: 00:21:675 (21675|6,21675|2,21675|3,21675|5,21750|1,21750|4,21750|0,21825|5,21825|6,21825|3,21900|0,21900|4,21975|5,21975|2,21975|3,22050|4,22050|1)
3) The sound start at here 00:42:450 (42450|5)
4) Little detail: add this note 01:23:550 (83550|1) - feels better.
5) This is more lively 01:29:805 (89805|5,89880|4,89955|3,90030|2,90105|1) - you can try this: 01:29:880 (89880|4,89880|1,89955|2,89955|5,90030|1,90030|6,90030|3,90105|2) - or something else.
A comment: this part here 01:30:705 (90705|1,90730|5,90730|4,90780|2,90830|5,90830|4,90855|3,90930|0,90930|6,91005|5,91030|2,91030|1,91080|4,91130|1,91130|2,91155|3,91230|4,91230|0,91305|1,91330|6,91330|5,91380|2,91430|5,91430|6,91455|3,91530|2,91530|4,91605|5,91630|0,91630|1,91680|6,91730|1,91730|0,91755|5) -
took me by surprise while playing it because I was having so much fun, good one haha.