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HoneyWorks meets TrySail - Senpai.

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miradzin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年9月5日 at 10:44:44

Artist: HoneyWorks meets TrySail
Title: Senpai.
Source: 何度だって、好き。~告白実行委員会~
Tags: 麻倉もも Asakura Momo 雨宮天 Amamiya Sora chan 夏川椎菜 Natsukawa Shiina meh
BPM: 162
Filesize: 8576kb
Play Time: 05:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. Suki (5.15 stars, 1174 notes)
Download: HoneyWorks meets TrySail - Senpai.
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mods plz xd
Fixed timing, redownload if downloaded before April 25, 2017.
Plaudible
irc, cute song and good map :D
18:06 miradzin: hi there!
18:06 Plaudible: hi! :) what's up?
18:09 miradzin: yo just finished a map and I'd like to know if you can mod it :)
18:09 Plaudible: sure ^_^
18:09 Plaudible: irc?
18:10 miradzin: it can be ^^ if you prefer this way
18:10 *miradzin is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1270875 HoneyWorks meets TrySail - Senpai.]
18:10 miradzin: if you're busy now it's ok
18:10 Plaudible: just modding a tomppabeats map real quick
18:10 Plaudible: aka it'll take 5 mins LOL
18:11 miradzin: oooh lol xd
18:15 miradzin: I like your dreamxscramble map xd, but bpm is too high for me to play lol
18:18 Plaudible: aww thanks <3
18:22 Plaudible: done
18:23 miradzin: okay
18:23 Plaudible: kk, ready? :>
18:24 miradzin: i'm ready xd
18:25 Plaudible: OoOoO
18:25 Plaudible: its those anime peoples i always see in honeyworks stuff
18:25 Plaudible: rhythm in intro feels a bit dense
18:25 Plaudible: i feel if you follow vocals mostly it'd add some much needed breaks
18:25 miradzin: ooo ye
18:26 Plaudible: like removing 00:03:639 (2) -
18:26 Plaudible: 00:06:417 (6) - same
18:26 Plaudible: 00:09:750 (2) - from here spacing should start growing more imo, it's a bit dull in comparison to what the song is presenting
18:26 Plaudible: 00:11:324 - silence sliderend pls
18:27 Plaudible: 00:10:491 (4) - this'd be better as 2 circles imo
18:27 miradzin: ooh true
18:29 Plaudible: the first note in every measure starting at 00:14:935 (1) - gets a little more emphasis in the song
18:29 Plaudible: i feel you could present that better in the map
18:29 Plaudible: maybe through flow changes
18:29 Plaudible: for example maybe ctrl+h 00:14:935 (1) -
18:30 miradzin: aah you're right
18:31 Plaudible: could apply for some of the other ones, up to you :o
18:31 Plaudible: 00:11:046 (1,2) - vs 00:21:972 (6,1) -
18:31 Plaudible: try to overlap things consistently in one way or another :)
18:33 Plaudible: 00:22:343 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
18:33 Plaudible: i love the way this plays but
18:33 Plaudible: you could present this in a more organized way maybe
18:34 Plaudible: with less overlaps perhaps
18:34 miradzin: uuh got it, yeah
18:35 Plaudible: 00:24:380 (3,4) - slightly staggering this could look nicer http://puu.sh/vwhoU/1a88b7da86.jpg
18:35 Plaudible: 00:35:491 (1,1) - try to avoid overlap here, move it left a bit and ds all of 00:36:417 (1,2,3) - together by 0.5x
18:36 Plaudible: 00:46:417 (3,4) - you're following vocals in this section, do this rhythm instead:
18:36 Plaudible: https://puu.sh/vwhvA/2e0fe170f5.jpg
18:38 miradzin: okay
18:38 Plaudible: 00:49:009 (1,2,3,4) - 00:51:972 (1,2,3,4) - these are cute but the spacing gets a bit big i think :<
18:39 Plaudible: also compare rhythm even though vocals are same: 00:50:120 (4,1) - vs 00:52:713 (3,4,1) -
18:39 Plaudible: i like your second rhythm choice, i'd do a similar one to emphasize vocals here
18:40 Plaudible: 01:03:917 (1) - snap this 1/4 after 01:03:824 (4) -
18:40 miradzin: right o/
18:40 Plaudible: 01:05:120 (1,2,3) - there isn't much 1/2 rhythm here, i think a 1/1 slider would be awesome instead :D
18:41 Plaudible: it'd make the impact at (1) a lot stronger and more dramatic ^-^
18:42 miradzin: true :< I'll do that
18:43 Plaudible: following vocals, 01:08:824 (3,4) - should be 1/1 slider
18:43 Plaudible: 01:11:787 (4,5) - ^
18:43 Plaudible: 01:15:676 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the buildup here is super strong in the song though the spacing drops a lot, i think you could buff this significantly
18:43 Plaudible: almost similar in spacing to 01:06:232 (7,8,9,1) -
18:49 Plaudible: srry had to get somethin
18:50 Plaudible: 01:20:491 (3,4,5) - change this if applicable if you did to the one before
18:50 Plaudible: oh nvm you do this a bunch
18:50 Plaudible: kk, scratch the last time i said to stack and ds those then xD
18:50 Plaudible: 01:35:491 (1) - to 01:38:824 (1) - is absolutely great, love it
18:50 miradzin: xd
18:51 Plaudible: 01:38:824 (1,1) - could you pull the second (1) up a bit so it's more in line with the loop slider
18:52 Plaudible: 01:41:602 (1) - i'd make this circles slider and circle or something, kinda kills guitar
18:52 Plaudible: 01:47:158 (3,4,5,6,1) - could you bring the triple in a bit closer to 1,3? bit large jump here, but besides that this jump section was absolutely nicely done
18:54 miradzin: okaay, and thanks ^^
18:54 Plaudible: 02:32:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - just my opinion, this is a lot of movement though, https://puu.sh/vwind/3c7d6ea730.jpg might be nicer
18:55 Plaudible: 02:32:713 (1) - rhythm here vs 01:06:787 (1) - , they should be the almost the same
18:55 Plaudible: 02:34:750 (4,5) - same thing here, this'd be a nice 1/1 slider :O
18:55 Plaudible: 02:37:713 (4,5) -
18:56 miradzin: eeh
18:56 Plaudible: 02:41:787 (1) - this part was great, gj
18:56 miradzin: I was told by kagetsu to add more 1/2 rhythms cause I had too many 1/1 :c
18:58 Plaudible: mm
18:58 Plaudible: personally dont agree, but
18:58 Plaudible: in that case
18:58 Plaudible: at least switch the rhythm at places like 01:08:824 (3,4) -
18:58 Plaudible: so the vocals get the long emphasis with a slider :)
18:59 miradzin: yeeah, okay
18:59 miradzin: :)
19:00 Plaudible: 03:04:009 (1,2,3,4,5) -
19:00 Plaudible: i'd suggest a rhythm change in this section
19:00 Plaudible: try this:
19:00 Plaudible: https://puu.sh/vwiEk/2e6731f481.jpg
19:00 Plaudible: it jumps where the vocals get strong
19:01 Plaudible: basically the rhythm at 03:04:565 (6,1,2) - is ctrl+g'd
19:01 Plaudible: 03:04:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - curve could be a little nicer
19:02 miradzin: ooh, okay right
19:03 Plaudible: 03:27:018 (6,7) - ctrl + g maybe, dont like the back and forth direction change personally ;o
19:06 miradzin: ooh :< I liked, but this way is good too xd
19:07 Plaudible: 03:29:055 (1,2,3) - this rhythm is good for this section to emphasize guitar i think
19:07 Plaudible: do it at 03:29:703 -
19:07 Plaudible: WAIT
19:07 Plaudible: ahh hold on
19:07 Plaudible: super weird rhythm here
19:08 miradzin: uuuh
19:08 miradzin: yeah
19:08 Plaudible: you really should emphasize the guitar more especially in the solo par
19:09 Plaudible: t03:29:055 (1) - starting here, this could be a rhythm perhaps https://puu.sh/vwj6A/80f3ba4964.jpg
19:10 miradzin: ooh okay, that sounds better
19:10 Plaudible: but if you do this you might need to adjust your later section to focus on guitar a bit more
19:10 Plaudible: cause that rhythm focuses on it entirely >_<
19:10 Plaudible: 03:32:666 - note here, etc. i'd rework rhythm in this section overall a bit
19:11 Plaudible: 03:35:537 (4,5) - make this slider, 03:35:907 (6,7) - slider, etc, do more for the guitar
19:12 Plaudible: 03:52:759 (7) - nc this, maybe make the stream shape abit more round
19:12 miradzin: yes, okay
19:12 Plaudible: 04:01:555 - silence sliderend
19:14 Plaudible: think that's all i got, ending looks fine for the most part :v
19:14 Plaudible: just fix guitar part and intro a bit and this'll be great
19:14 miradzin: alright
19:16 miradzin: if that's it, thank you really much, helped a lot xd
19:16 Plaudible: <#
19:16 Plaudible: <3*
19:16 miradzin: u can post in thread for kds ^^
19:17 Plaudible: woot, kk

gl!
_sponez
Hello!

  1. 00:16:417 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8036657.
  2. 00:19:935 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8036669.
  3. 00:36:417 (1,2,3) - Something is wrong :) (Looks weird).
  4. 00:45:120 - Here the singer pronounces a syllable and this does not stand out.
  5. 00:50:120 (4,1) - I don't quite understand why this is so. 00:50:306 - Here they begin to draw a syllable, but slider starts later. And here 00:53:269 (1) it is correct.
  6. 03:15:722 (4) - You could think of something instead of repeats.
  7. 04:06:833 - may be break?
  8. 04:36:463 (4,5) - Here the slider will fit better.
Good luck!
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