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Hey there dude 
Here for my part of the m4m. (OH MY GOD IT'S BEEN 10MONTHS SINCE I LAST MODDED!)
General
Some tags conflict if you check AImod
Also object end in platter not snapped in Aimod also (Ctrl + Shift + A to bring it up)
Small breaks are in salad and platter yet not one in cup (differently sized breaks too). I find it's best to remove these breaks entirely since they're so short.
Well hope this helps out
Nice mapset in general
Good luck
Here for my part of the m4m. (OH MY GOD IT'S BEEN 10MONTHS SINCE I LAST MODDED!)
General
Some tags conflict if you check AImod
Also object end in platter not snapped in Aimod also (Ctrl + Shift + A to bring it up)
Small breaks are in salad and platter yet not one in cup (differently sized breaks too). I find it's best to remove these breaks entirely since they're so short.
Cup
00:04:046 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - If you were to Ctrl + H all these notes you would have much more variation in direction for the stacked circles at places such as 00:04:046 (1,2) - and 00:07:550 (1,2) -. This also flows better for places such as 00:03:170 (3,1) - where it's a nice straight one directional catch (Although might need a few spacing tweaks).
00:11:929 (3,1) - There is not really any sound on (1) which could infact be removed. To make this work out you can have this part looking like this since at the minute (3)'s slider end on the timeline is a more prompt sound.
00:24:849 (1) - I would find this slider could be easier to catch for beginners if it was slightly curved. Either like 00:23:973 (3) - to match or something like I have done to make it a bit more unique. I also find this fits nice with the vocal too.
00:28:572 (4) - Shouldn't this note be the NC ? Also the reverse end of the slider (middle part of the slider on timeline) has it's sound main on 00:29:229 - so perhaps it's best to use one long slider and a circle note here ? It's different to 00:32:075 (1,2,3) - also.
00:42:586 - I know you're following vocals mainly but having no note here just sounds empty when you have also started the kiai here too. You have one at 00:56:601 (1) -
00:48:061 (3) - NC ?
00:54:630 (4) - NC and turn off NC on 00:55:944 (1) - ? it's not common to have 1 note as a NC on it's own.
00:56:601 (1) - after this section it sort of goes off from the vocals a bit. Maybe try something like this ?
00:58:353 (1) - maybe fit more for the vocals too? I don't know what it follows here because after this part it follows vocals again :thinking:.
00:11:929 (3,1) - There is not really any sound on (1) which could infact be removed. To make this work out you can have this part looking like this since at the minute (3)'s slider end on the timeline is a more prompt sound.
00:24:849 (1) - I would find this slider could be easier to catch for beginners if it was slightly curved. Either like 00:23:973 (3) - to match or something like I have done to make it a bit more unique. I also find this fits nice with the vocal too.
00:28:572 (4) - Shouldn't this note be the NC ? Also the reverse end of the slider (middle part of the slider on timeline) has it's sound main on 00:29:229 - so perhaps it's best to use one long slider and a circle note here ? It's different to 00:32:075 (1,2,3) - also.
00:42:586 - I know you're following vocals mainly but having no note here just sounds empty when you have also started the kiai here too. You have one at 00:56:601 (1) -
00:48:061 (3) - NC ?
00:54:630 (4) - NC and turn off NC on 00:55:944 (1) - ? it's not common to have 1 note as a NC on it's own.
00:56:601 (1) - after this section it sort of goes off from the vocals a bit. Maybe try something like this ?
00:58:353 (1) - maybe fit more for the vocals too? I don't know what it follows here because after this part it follows vocals again :thinking:.
Salad
Are hitsounds still WIP on this diff ?
00:19:594 (4) - NC?
00:20:688 (1,2) - Spacing here just felt a little different from the rest of the mapset. Although catch-able it's still noticeable difference. Maybe move 00:21:126 (2,3) - 1 or 2 grid snaps left ?
00:45:652 (5,1) - Maybe a dash here to be consistent ?
00:54:192 (2,3) - I find a dash here would be nice with the vocal here. Also maybe NC (3)?
00:55:944 (1) - Shouldn't the NC be on where the kiai starts here ? 00:56:601 (2) -
00:59:667 (3,1) - Dash here too (that's if fixed from the first kiai when I mentioned).
I feel towards the end it needed one more dash in the kiai as they stopped being so frequent here. perhaps either in one of these places or both if you want 01:04:922 (3,4) - 01:08:645 (4,1) -
00:19:594 (4) - NC?
00:20:688 (1,2) - Spacing here just felt a little different from the rest of the mapset. Although catch-able it's still noticeable difference. Maybe move 00:21:126 (2,3) - 1 or 2 grid snaps left ?
00:45:652 (5,1) - Maybe a dash here to be consistent ?
00:54:192 (2,3) - I find a dash here would be nice with the vocal here. Also maybe NC (3)?
00:55:944 (1) - Shouldn't the NC be on where the kiai starts here ? 00:56:601 (2) -
00:59:667 (3,1) - Dash here too (that's if fixed from the first kiai when I mentioned).
I feel towards the end it needed one more dash in the kiai as they stopped being so frequent here. perhaps either in one of these places or both if you want 01:04:922 (3,4) - 01:08:645 (4,1) -
Platter
00:03:608 (7,8) - Perhaps a little too close to eachother for the hyper that comes ? Could move 00:03:170 (3,4,5,6,7) - left just a tiny bit more make a bit more space to prepare for this hyper. Like maybe at x:80.
00:07:112 (5,6) - if you move (5) to x:392 and (6) to x:376 it would be a much nicer stream at least in my opinion.
00:21:126 (4) - Maybe slant a little more left ? Just due to how I think it would flow better this way instead of coming to an almost big stop and waiting for the hyper.
00:23:316 (5,1) - Only a little suggestion but this might not be needed but maybe dash here ? Or are you using this to emphasis next dash more ?
00:31:637 (4,1) - Maybe hyper here ? quite nice and powerful with vocals. Like at 00:35:141 (5,1) - which you did
00:58:791 (2,3) - Didn't you hyper here in the first kiai ?
01:13:243 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as 00:03:608 (7,8) - (Infact this might be better than the first one)
01:16:747 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is much nicer than first one :O! But don't forget you NC'ed the first one in the intro but not this one.
Nice Platter
00:07:112 (5,6) - if you move (5) to x:392 and (6) to x:376 it would be a much nicer stream at least in my opinion.
00:21:126 (4) - Maybe slant a little more left ? Just due to how I think it would flow better this way instead of coming to an almost big stop and waiting for the hyper.
00:23:316 (5,1) - Only a little suggestion but this might not be needed but maybe dash here ? Or are you using this to emphasis next dash more ?
00:31:637 (4,1) - Maybe hyper here ? quite nice and powerful with vocals. Like at 00:35:141 (5,1) - which you did
00:58:791 (2,3) - Didn't you hyper here in the first kiai ?
01:13:243 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as 00:03:608 (7,8) - (Infact this might be better than the first one)
01:16:747 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is much nicer than first one :O! But don't forget you NC'ed the first one in the intro but not this one.
Nice Platter
Well hope this helps out
Nice mapset in general
Good luck
Hello~ M4M
Sorry for delaying :c
[Cup]
This is my first time to mod a map created by an experienced mapper, hope this will help.
Good luck! c:
Sorry for delaying :c
[Cup]
- 00:40:834 (1) - I suggest that this silder be removed to distinguish the previous from the chorus part, and still maintain the rhythm.
- 00:41:929 (5) - I find it more appropriate to add NC here instead of at 00:42:805 (1)
- 00:54:630 (4) - To emphasize the beat, maybe shorten this silder and end it at 00:55:068 then put a note at 00:55:287 ?
- 00:58:353 (1,2) - I find this part a little strange. Maybe change the patterns like this?
- 01:03:389 (4) - I think exchanging the note (4) and silder (1) to suit the sound is good. Like this.
- 00:04:922 (3) - Maybe reverse this slider? To make the flow better.
- 00:23:535 (2) - Also this. I pass one slider like this at 00:08:426 (3) because I think it could be more interesting, but too many is not good, just in my opinion.
- 00:34:265 (2) - Why do not also make this note vertical? The sound here has the same scale with the previous one, also it looks better while playing.
- 00:51:783 (2) - Same as 00:04:922 (3) -. Also move note at 00:52:878 (3) closer to this slider to make them easier since it's Salad. aaaand 00:53:097 (1) more left if this is walkable after the changes.
- 01:12:367 (1,2) - Make (1) more veritcal, or make (2) more horizontal, I suggest for the same reason at 00:34:265 (2)
- 00:02:294 (1) - Maybe let this slider more horizontal to the left and adjust the distance appropriately? To make the pattern more symmetrical.
- 00:05:798 (1,2) - Same as above. Or make (2) more vertical?
- 00:29:229 (2) - Since the song is into the weak part, I think it's inappropriate to put a note here that needs two dashes in a row. Maybe move it closer, like x:240?
- 00:41:929 (4,5,6) - If you make these three notes to a '>' shape I think it flows better.
- 00:57:258 (3) - I don't think antiflow here is good because the part 00:57:696 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - flows very good just like a S shape while playing. It will ruin the nice flow if you put anitflow here, I think.
- 01:05:141 (1,2,3) - I think too many antiflows in Platter is not good? Maybe draw (1) to a C shape and move to x:72, then Ctrl+g the slider (2) and move it closer to (1) just like the original patterns. aaand also note (3).
- 01:07:112 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - If you take my suggestion above, then move this part to little left to make a proper distance between 01:06:893 (3) and 01:07:112 (1) - . I suggest that you move them to x:80. Meanwhile, this helps fix the 1/4 dash problem at 01:09:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) because I think 1/4 dash is too hard for Platter players.
- 01:12:367 (1) - Same as 00:02:294 (1) -, it shows a little strange.
This is my first time to mod a map created by an experienced mapper, hope this will help.
Good luck! c:
Sorry for late mod,I had been busy in school so now it is my time to mod. Hope you appreciated it 
Cup
00:49:813 (1) - I think this rhythm look odd for me and seems not okey being NC for me. 00:48:937 (1) - (The vocalist still repeating that part tho)
Optional : but I guess you had that explaination if you don't want it tho
00:58:134 (4) - This part you make a circle and reduced slider-kick and set to normal 1/4 slider
00:59:229 (2) - You may make 1/2 slider here tho until 00:59:448 - here. I also had try to give point if you may trying this pattern? Down below
= http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9411321 Optional : Since it is depend on what flow you emphasized on but I think my pattern just to suggestions to keep the 1/4 slider consistencies on this one 00:59:667 (2) - For this one.
Anyway,I think your Cup diff was good just takes time fr me to understand the rhythm. Well,hitsounds are decent yet need some buffs tho so it going with the rhythm..
Salad
I find this one seems worrying me little bit but I guess rhythm are fixable yet.
00:17:623 (4) - This part,you may try to make it like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9411444 for better flow? Optional tho
00:18:061 (1) - remove this and you can changed with slider kick from this part
00:18:499 (5) - NC this tho for consistencies with the rhythm after it
00:22:440 (2) - You can used this slider on this one 00:23:535 (3) - After you used this slider and then you extend at 00:24:411
00:30:980 (2) - Why not remove this fr emphasis the vocal. Seems good for me doing so.
00:33:827 (1,2) -This part maybe you can try extend the slider to 00:34:156 .
Followed by 00:34:484 - into slider-kick at this part like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9411472
00:34:703 (2) - Ctrl+G this and place it at x:144 y:122
Platter
I will just focus with the HS for this diff,the pattern aren't worried things for me(I am not good judge on Platter sorry T.T)
00:30:324 (1) - The head of the slider supposed to be HS not the tail tho
00:59:448 (4) - Would be better with clap instead of whistle anyway if you follow the rhythm of the song
01:04:265 (2) - This one removed the whistle,seems overused
01:22:659 (1) - The end should be good with whistle,the clap sounds odd. But,if you want to keep this you may but if you changed it you may need to do on other diffs.
Well,this all I can do for now,sorry if I might late but hoping to mod something not mod by others.
Good song,with adequate power Good Luck
Can't make it to do 3 diffs sorry if I might disappointed you on that diff. IF you still want me to mod tho,I would say until December I will be back tho... 
I mod back,sorry fr delay since I having exam but I will do the Platter this time
Cup
00:49:813 (1) - I think this rhythm look odd for me and seems not okey being NC for me. 00:48:937 (1) - (The vocalist still repeating that part tho)
Optional : but I guess you had that explaination if you don't want it tho
00:58:134 (4) - This part you make a circle and reduced slider-kick and set to normal 1/4 slider
00:59:229 (2) - You may make 1/2 slider here tho until 00:59:448 - here. I also had try to give point if you may trying this pattern? Down below
= http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9411321 Optional : Since it is depend on what flow you emphasized on but I think my pattern just to suggestions to keep the 1/4 slider consistencies on this one 00:59:667 (2) - For this one.
Anyway,I think your Cup diff was good just takes time fr me to understand the rhythm. Well,hitsounds are decent yet need some buffs tho so it going with the rhythm..
Salad
I find this one seems worrying me little bit but I guess rhythm are fixable yet.
00:17:623 (4) - This part,you may try to make it like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9411444 for better flow? Optional tho
00:18:061 (1) - remove this and you can changed with slider kick from this part
00:18:499 (5) - NC this tho for consistencies with the rhythm after it
00:22:440 (2) - You can used this slider on this one 00:23:535 (3) - After you used this slider and then you extend at 00:24:411
00:30:980 (2) - Why not remove this fr emphasis the vocal. Seems good for me doing so.
00:33:827 (1,2) -This part maybe you can try extend the slider to 00:34:156 .
Followed by 00:34:484 - into slider-kick at this part like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9411472
00:34:703 (2) - Ctrl+G this and place it at x:144 y:122
Platter
I will just focus with the HS for this diff,the pattern aren't worried things for me(I am not good judge on Platter sorry T.T)
00:30:324 (1) - The head of the slider supposed to be HS not the tail tho
00:59:448 (4) - Would be better with clap instead of whistle anyway if you follow the rhythm of the song
01:04:265 (2) - This one removed the whistle,seems overused
01:22:659 (1) - The end should be good with whistle,the clap sounds odd. But,if you want to keep this you may but if you changed it you may need to do on other diffs.
Well,this all I can do for now,sorry if I might late but hoping to mod something not mod by others.
Good song,with adequate power
Good LuckI mod back,sorry fr delay since I having exam but I will do the Platter this time
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