Kansou - Nyanpasu Bang Bang

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Mazziv
ayyy from the m4m deal we had!

[Easy]
00:11:127 (1,2,3,4) - try to do a square with the slider where each slider blankets each other? as it is rn does feel a bit ''off'' besides that 00:11:127 (1,2,3) - 3 is not even spaced equally between 1 and 2
00:27:743 (3) - move 3 a bit up so it makes a perfect triangle
00:29:589 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - why do they have a different hitsound than 00:44:358 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ?
uhh aimod is complaining bout some stuff with the set being to big of a file aaa just some minor stuff to fix i guess

[Normal]
besides the big spacing please copy 00:11:127 (1,2) - this and mirror it here 00:12:974 (1,2) -
00:14:820 (1,2,3) - i recommend you to change this so the slider is centred in the middle again so it looks nice
00:30:974 (1,2,3) - why have those a barrely audible hitsound?
00:33:743 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe try to use some symmetry and copy paste the first pattern to the other side
idk this diff lacks in structure imo it has no noticeable pattern,circles/sliders doesnt compliment each other it looks not well thoughtthrough
like you try to do alot of symmetry and dont then when you should use it,you dont. i dont know if i want to complain bout hitsounds but i think those are chosen differently on purpose


[Gero's Advanced]
00:41:358 (2,4,5,6) - 00:43:204 (2,4,5,6) - this triggers me with no end
i know its for the sake of symmerty but i hate you for this xD

rest looks totally fine well done :)

[Insane]
this diff looks fine to me i really like the use of symmetry :D

good luck with the set !
Topic Starter
Kotori-Chan

Mazziv wrote:

ayyy from the m4m deal we had!


[Normal]
besides the big spacing please copy 00:11:127 (1,2) - this and mirror it here 00:12:974 (1,2) -
00:14:820 (1,2,3) - i recommend you to change this so the slider is centred in the middle again so it looks nice after fixing the first thingy, did something else here~
00:30:974 (1,2,3) - why have those a barrely audible hitsound? barely audible ? sry but i dont think so
00:33:743 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe try to use some symmetry and copy paste the first pattern to the other side
idk this diff lacks in structure imo it has no noticeable pattern,circles/sliders doesnt compliment each other it looks not well thoughtthrough
like you try to do alot of symmetry and dont then when you should use it,you dont. i dont know if i want to complain bout hitsounds but i think those are chosen differently on purpose Sry but this doesnt help me at all, instead of just saying "hey dude this map lacks structure and your patterns suck" you could give me examples where, why and how so i can understand where something seems to be wrong. Just saying it like that doesnt really help me understand anything

[Insane]
this diff looks fine to me i really like the use of symmetry :D

good luck with the set !
thx for mod~
nyu -
ich kann nicht modden
00:18:512 (5) - NC this please, "new section starts" and newbies need many nc to be introduced into that nc thing bla u get it
00:34:666 (2) - a circle here would fit muuuuuuuuuuuch better since 00:35:128 - is a very strong beat
00:35:128 - as i meantioned this is a very strong beat so.. a pattern like https://puu.sh/vIzoq.png would fit muuuuuuuuuuuuch better
00:27:743 (3) - 00:33:281 (1) - 00:42:512 (3) - 00:48:051 (1) - also you should do something about those sliders.. maybe add a hitsound for the sliderticks so they dont turn out so.. silent.

its an easy so nothing more to say here uwu
00:13:897 (3) - same shape as 00:12:051 (3) - ? you did the same with 00:15:743 (3,3) -
00:26:820 (3,6) - ik what youre trying to do but.. it looks soooo boring ; w; make the sliders at least a bit different plis
00:33:051 - das fühlt sich ohne nen circle hier total weird an imo - da fehlt einfach was uwu
00:33:743 (2,3,4) - https://puu.sh/vIzJ2.png something like this?.. maybe..? owo
00:49:897 (5) - ncnccnnccnnc
00:54:512 (3) - same shape as 00:53:128 (1) - ? fits and looks better imo
00:14:820 (1,2,1,2) - even for an advanced.. this is too advanced for this kind of diff imo
meehhhh cant find anything
00:14:128 - Without a triple here or.. something that cover those sounds this slider feels very weird imo and if you would do same 00:17:589 (3) - too it would stay like you planned owo
00:42:512 (7) - nc should be here imo, also another sliderart to empathize new section?
00:51:281 (6) - missing whistle on end
00:52:666 (3) - maybe same shape as 00:51:743 (1) - ? would look better, not necessary~
00:27:743 (7) - nc here? owo
00:30:974 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 1 nc is enough <:

those hitsounds <333333 how about u hitsound tragedyeternity for me

nice map gl! :3
Topic Starter
Kotori-Chan

nyu - wrote:

ich kann nicht modden alles lügen~


00:13:897 (3) - same shape as 00:12:051 (3) - ? you did the same with 00:15:743 (3,3) -
00:26:820 (3,6) - ik what youre trying to do but.. it looks soooo boring ; w; make the sliders at least a bit different plis i will try to think of something, not easy to make them something different because they are so short >< !
00:33:051 - das fühlt sich ohne nen circle hier total weird an imo - da fehlt einfach was uwu random german~ findest du o: ? finde ich irgendwie gar nicht ;w;
00:33:743 (2,3,4) - https://puu.sh/vIzJ2.png something like this?.. maybe..? owo i love you. i couldnt think of something else >.<
00:49:897 (5) - ncnccnnccnnc but that would destroy the nc patterns i used earlier ;w;
00:54:512 (3) - same shape as 00:53:128 (1) - ? fits and looks better imo
00:14:128 - Without a triple here or.. something that cover those sounds this slider feels very weird imo and if you would do same hmmmmm good idea actually, gunna keep this in my head =w=00:17:589 (3) - too it would stay like you planned owo
00:42:512 (7) - nc should be here imo, also another sliderart to empathize new section? it looks kinda weird if i make that slider different ;w; and disagree with NC i really think new section starts here >< 00:42:974 -
00:51:281 (6) - missing whistle on end i am a big baka~
00:52:666 (3) - maybe same shape as 00:51:743 (1) - ? would look better, not necessary~ i really like this 00:52:204 (2,3) - tho ;w;
00:27:743 (7) - nc here? owo new section starts here tho ;w; 00:28:204 (1) - i think
00:30:974 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 1 nc is enough <: i actually thought its easier to read with making them 1-2 but now that i think about it and this is the highest diff, yush~

those hitsounds <333333 how about u hitsound tragedyeternity for me |||| PM ingame and maybe i can~

nice map gl! :3
thank you for mod nyu chan =w= <3
!summon gero and pachiru~
Mazziv

Kotori-Chan wrote:

Mazziv wrote:

ayyy from the m4m deal we had!


idk this diff lacks in structure imo it has no noticeable pattern,circles/sliders doesnt compliment each other it looks not well thoughtthrough
like you try to do alot of symmetry and dont then when you should use it,you dont. i dont know if i want to complain bout hitsounds but i think those are chosen differently on purpose Sry but this doesnt help me at all, instead of just saying "hey dude this map lacks structure and your patterns suck" you could give me examples where, why and how so i can understand where something seems to be wrong. Just saying it like that doesnt really help me understand anything
sure it does.basically its a nice way of saying remap
It should make you go into your diff and go through everything and see what i mean with ''no structure/noticeable pattern'' try to look at other easy diffs oor if you want an example press ctrl+a
Topic Starter
Kotori-Chan

Mazziv wrote:

sure it does.basically its a nice way of saying remap
It should make you go into your diff and go through everything and see what i mean with ''no structure/noticeable pattern'' try to look at other easy diffs oor if you want an example press ctrl+a
Sry but i REALLY dont get what you see as unstructured and stuff....
Send pm ingame if you wanna discuss or whatever. No need to spam thread~
Luvdic
[Easy]

00:18:512 (5) - NC?

[Normal]

No comments!

[Gero]

00:39:166 (5) - You have either two options here, either follow the vocals properly and delete 00:39:166 (5) -, or follow the music and add a note here 00:39:512 - (youll have to shorten slider, etc, whatever is needed <3)

[Nyaannnnanananana?????]

00:32:358 (1) - Not necessary, but for sake of keeping all parts of this diff harder than Gero's, end the slider at 00:32:589 - and then add notes at 00:32:704 - and 00:32:820 - . If youre doing this then youll definitely have to add a note at 00:33:051 - as well
00:47:128 (1) - Same as above

Good luck with your map!
Topic Starter
Kotori-Chan

Xanandra wrote:

[Easy]

00:18:512 (5) - NC?

[Normal]

No comments!

[Gero]

00:39:166 (5) - You have either two options here, either follow the vocals properly and delete 00:39:166 (5) -, or follow the music and add a note here 00:39:512 - (youll have to shorten slider, etc, whatever is needed <3)

[Nyaannnnanananana?????]

00:32:358 (1) - Not necessary, but for sake of keeping all parts of this diff harder than Gero's, end the slider at 00:32:589 - and then add notes at 00:32:704 - and 00:32:820 - . If youre doing this then youll definitely have to add a note at 00:33:051 - as well
00:47:128 (1) - Same as above i dont really know placing circles instead of this 00:32:358 (1) - doesnt really represent that ruuuu~
i think slider is better for that


Good luck with your map!
no changes >< but still thank you for your time and checking this map <3
worst fl player

Kotori-Chan wrote:

Mini Gaunt
Hello, I decided to look at your map. (Informal M4M)

Clearly a good quality mapset!
The hitsounding is well done too!
If you think you are ready, go ask a BN to look at this map!
Fun map!
First, from the Hard difficulty rules:
If stacks are used, Stack Leniency must be set high enough for 1/2 hitobjects to stack. Directly overlapping hitobjects cause reading problems for players of this level.
Changing the stack leniency to 3 or changing the placements of these notes will fix this rule violation.
Here is where 1/2 objects overlap and do not stack (a rule violation):
00:12:743 (5,1) - Overlap
00:14:598 (5,1) - Overlap
00:18:974 (2,3) - Overlap
00:42:281 (7,1) - Overlap
00:44:128 (7,1) - Overlap

That's all really
Very minor things
By the way, this is considered a hard because of the star rating, but the slider velocity changes are something not seen a lot in hard difficulties.
I recommend raising the OD a little and increase the spacing of certain sections to make this like an insane but with a little lower than normal star rating.

I like the different types of sliders you used!

You also don't have to use distance snap in Hard but it is whatever you want to do. :D

00:31:204 (2,1,2) - This is a spot where you can still represent the music but have these 3 have larger than normal spacing between them. The changes in pitch are the loudest sound here anyway.

Good luck with the map!
Lazer
Very nice set, proper for ranking

as always great hitsounding, take my stars~
Topic Starter
Kotori-Chan

Mini Gaunt wrote:

Hello, I decided to look at your map. (Informal M4M)

Clearly a good quality mapset!
The hitsounding is well done too! thank you <3
If you think you are ready, go ask a BN to look at this map! If i would ever get an answer to my pm's ;;

Very minor things
By the way, this is considered a hard because of the star rating, but the slider velocity changes are something not seen a lot in hard difficulties.
I recommend raising the OD a little and increase the spacing of certain sections to make this like an insane but with a little lower than normal star rating. I never really intended to make this an insane or something. Wont increase OD, spacing or something because i just dont want it to be unnecesserily spaced or something. I just want it to be a nice little "hard" to play to enjoy :3

I like the different types of sliders you used! thank you again~

You also don't have to use distance snap in Hard but it is whatever you want to do. :D

00:31:204 (2,1,2) - This is a spot where you can still represent the music but have these 3 have larger than normal spacing between them. The changes in pitch are the loudest sound here anyway. Already explained above, dont want it to be really hard ;w;

Good luck with the map!
No changes ~ but still thx for checking ofc ! Fixed 2-3 other very little things tho~

Lazer wrote:

Very nice set, proper for ranking

as always great hitsounding, take my stars~
AAAAAA THANK CHU SU MUCH FOR STARS LAZER CHAN ;w; <3

Pachiru
that would be awesome if lady kotorino could do changes for me ~ ♥
Topic Starter
Kotori-Chan

Pachiru wrote:

that would be awesome if lady kotorino could do changes for me ~ ♥
All done~ pls re-dl !!!!!!
I tried my best ;w;
lucciachan
damn, this map will be ranked :x XD
riffy
#modreqs

[General]
  1. soft-hitfinish10 feels somehwat out of the song's mood/concept. It feels like some scream of horror, to be honest.


[Pachiru's Easy]
  1. 00:39:281 (3,1) - minor - the transition could be a bit more natural, unless you intended a flow break here. example. As linear flow seems to be the way you make things.
  2. 00:48:051 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - looks like the whole thing was meant to be symmetrical, yet something went off. Is there absolutely no way to move the whole thing to the right?

    It's good.


[Normal]
  1. I would rather use Overall Difficulty 3,5 and HP 3,5 as to balance the spread and make the difficulty somewhat easier as to match the spread better.
  2. 00:30:974 (1) - I'd rather use a 1/2 slider and a circle to stress the downbeat supported with the instruments and the vocals.
    Note: 00:53:128 (1) - same

    Good job!


[Gero's Advanced]
  1. 00:19:435 (4,5) - you'll probably have to unstack manually as the stack doesn't appear in-game and all the previous 1/4s had visible stacks. example
    Note: 00:21:281 (4,5) - same.
  2. 00:29:589 (1) - move tail/head further apart, so that players would actually have to move the cursor and not just hold it in the middle? This would make the slider give a better feel of the song. 00:51:743 (1) - this, for example, works really well.
    Note: 00:44:358 (1) - same?
  3. 00:41:358 (2,4) - these actually overlap in-game, a slight movement a bit further apart could help and improve the look of this pattern.
    Note: 00:43:204 (2,4) - same.

    If anything it feels like a solid hard difficuty rather than an Advanced.


[Nyanpasu~]
The BG sort of stands out (as in looks suggestive). Is there absolutely no other option left? Something that'd match better with the age/appearacne of characters on the other 3 BGs would work better, I think.
  1. 00:21:743 (5,1) - this jump stands out of the context as its spacing is way larger. How about reversing a few things to lower the DS? example

    That was cool!


So yeah, call me back
Pachiru
I fixed the first stuff, because it made sense, but I don't understand the second point. If you can make this more "clear" with a screenshot or something like that, that would be awesome!

Thanks for the mod Bakarin, always on the top~

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 24743
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22204,24051,25897,29589,33281,36974,40204,44358,47589,48051,51743,53128,55204
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 1
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Nyanpasu Bang Bang
TitleUnicode:にゃんぱすばんばん
Artist:Kansou
ArtistUnicode:感想
Creator:Kotori-Chan
Version:Pachiru's Easy
Source:
Tags:Pachiru Gero Nyanpassu Non Non Biyori kiriko takemura caroline charonplop full control tokyo renge hotaru natsumi komari nico nico douga
BeatmapID:1270577
BeatmapSetID:601442

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Video,0,"BANG BANG VIDEO.avi"
0,0,"ez.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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48051,-100,4,2,5,100,0,1
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Topic Starter
Kotori-Chan

Bakari wrote:

#modreqs Bakari my savior <3

[General]
  1. soft-hitfinish10 feels somehwat out of the song's mood/concept. It feels like some scream of horror, to be honest. Well i dont mind changing it, its just that this one is the closest one i could find :( and i really have no idea how else i could replace it. So if it really bothers you that much,
    sry for that ;w;


[Normal]
  1. I would rather use Overall Difficulty 3,5 and HP 3,5 as to balance the spread and make the difficulty somewhat easier as to match the spread better.
  2. 00:30:974 (1) - I'd rather use a 1/2 slider and a circle to stress the downbeat supported with the instruments and the vocals.
    Note: 00:53:128 (1) - same

    Good job!


[Nyanpasu~]
The BG sort of stands out (as in looks suggestive). Is there absolutely no other option left? Something that'd match better with the age/appearacne of characters on the other 3 BGs would work better, I think. Sure thing, i just kept this one as a joke anyway. Fixed !
  1. 00:21:743 (5,1) - this jump stands out of the context as its spacing is way larger. How about reversing a few things to lower the DS? example

    That was cool!


So yeah, call me back just gotta wait a bit for gero i think, since he's a bit busy with universtity rn
THANK YOU SO MUCH BAKARI
Applied everything
I btw totally forgot about the slidertick sounds on gero's diff but holy shit it actually sounds pretty nice !
Thank you again <3
riffy
@Pachiru what I meant was that it is not symmetrical towards the y axis. You culd center it, I guess.
@Kotori the hitsound does feel really weird to me, I guess you could get a few more opinions on that, becaus I don't think it should stay.
Gero
Gonna post my update later.
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