O-Moei wrote:

I'm so sleepy =w=

✨ = Suggestion (Common opinion. No change, no problem)
💧 = Uuhhh? (Something feels wrong around here...)
💥 = Warning !!! (Yu know wat tu du xD )

• General :
  ✨Try these colours, suitable judged from the theme by me hehe xd
  
  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 64,128,128
  Combo2 : 0,128,128
  Combo3 : 64,0,64
  Combo4 : 128,0,0 Ill add them when i figure out how
  
  Insane :
  ✨ 00:43:845 (1,2) - I suggest keep follow with the instrument on this one, which is mean 00:43:845 (1) - is not primary (delete). Then NC the 00:44:188 (2) - Well i like it, may change after more claims
  
  ✨01:31:503 (1) - No need to NC, me guess True
  
  ✨I think the ending worth to be mapped You are right, ill map the end on higher difficulties tho.

It's awesome, I'll look forward for this. Good luck !

FiddleBlue wrote:

Hi! From my queue.
Nice song you got here.

General

Nothing I find looks out of place.

Insane

01:12:474 - There's a vocal here that's kind of stand out as well. It feels inappropriate to be diminished by the slider end. How about reversing 01:12:303 (5,6) - instead, so that the vocal and the music are emphasized?
01:13:331 (3,4) - ^
02:01:674 (5,6) - ^
02:02:703 (3,4) - ^ Hmm you have a point, ill work on it ^ ^ ^
01:16:931 (5) - Maybe underlap this with 01:15:388 (4) - ? overlap is not visible during play and there is blanket with slider
01:50:874 (1) - What about replacing the NC here to 01:51:217 (2) - since it's another section/sound. Ok
00:26:360 (4) - Proper symmetry, please lol.Ok
01:54:817 (1,2) - Why don't you make these streams instead? I see that you're making it similar to the previous 1/6 sliders, but I think it's better to make it only for the 1/6 because it's a different sound and beat snap divider. This is dificult moment for players (~100k) so i wanted to make it easier to click, because its kinda hard to land on stream properly after 1/6 sliders

Sorry if I can't find more. Hope this helps!
Good luck with your mapset!

Pennek wrote:

hi from modqueue o/

This will be a general mod as there is a issue that is seen throughout all of the map.

[Insane]
There is a lot of oneway flow, and even when you change flow 00:14:874 (6) - it's on sounds that shouldn't be emphasised. Changing rotation is vital to having a map that plays well, but changing rotation at the right moment I'd say is even more important. Generally you want to switch rotation on strong beats. Those are usually every fourth white tick, followin the 1-3-2-4 rhythm theory. You can read up more on this from Pishifat's videos. Down below I've listed some examples to help you modify the map, learn to identify these issues yourself and apply the fixes.

TLDR; Oneway flow --> A good rule of thumb is to switch atleast every 8 white ticks.

00:15:011 - Here is an example where the wrong note is used to switch rotation. Normally you'd expect to see something like this https://puu.sh/vRUTc/d04c8a5abc.jpg where the 7th note, which is the strong beat, is used to switch rotation, and the other note is following the rotation.
edit: this is actually a bad example as it should be done in big white ticks - the NC after

01:16:931 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Here you have a total of 27 notes following the same flow-direction. A good rule of thumb for having manageable oneway flow is to switch atleast every 8 white ticks.

01:33:560 (1,2) - Here is an example where you did it correctly. You changed the rotation of the map on the strong sound of 01:33:903 (2) -

Hope this helps, and that you can apply it to your map. Good luck with your map!

UnLock- wrote:

灰色になっちゃう

1. 00:14:617 (4) - Overmapping. here is no sound to put circle
2. 00:15:988 (4) - ^
3. 00:17:360 (4) - ^
4. 00:18:731 (4) - ^
5. 00:20:103 (4) - ^ Remapped whole
6. 00:23:617 (2) - NC? you can realize that the tension of song decreases in 00:22:245 - here.
7. 00:43:845 (1,2) - Swap NC. because the tension change at 2 ill think about that
8. 00:47:274 (2,3) - Change it to 1/2 slider? you can know that 00:46:931 (1,2,3,4,5) - these and 00:49:674 (1,2,3,4) - these and 00:52:417 (1,2,3,1) - these 3 combos has same sound. ^
9. 00:53:617 (1,2) - Swap NC? you already put NC in downbeat and also that gabber(or drum?) sound is start at 00:53:788 (2) - here. vocal start on (1) so it will remain
10. 00:54:645 (5,6) - for beat, how about Ctrl G? if you accept that, it can make funny consistent beats by 00:53:788 (2,3) - one 00:54:303 (4,5) - two 00:54:816 (6,1) - three. I like it how it is now
11. 01:14:188 (1) - why you skip 01:14:360 - this vocal sound? there is only vocal and 1/2 sound from 01:06:131 - here to 01:17:103 - here. so it's good choice to follow vocal but i think this slider didn't follow this. how about fix this beat like This??
12. 02:03:560 (1) - ^ Yeah i get it. ill change
13. 01:51:388 (4) - IDK why but I think This beat is better
    Its easier for players to click that way so ill let it how it is.

GL Thanks and sorry for this delayed reply!!

wow you got my 800th post LOL

Kocari wrote:

Hello from modding queue

[Insane]

Try moving your offset +2 to 305 more it'll really be perfect then. changed Really does feel like a Monstrata map to some aspects
00:46:933 (1,4) - I think these needs to be reversed. I would prefer having the strong piano key have a longer slider since it fits more with what you did previously Yeah i get it. some of the 1/1 sliders do not follow song that good so ill do changes
00:49:676 (1,3) - Same can be said here. Notice how both of them are almost identical in sounds but the sliders are completely different. It makes 00:46:247 (3,4) - not have any difference in between them
00:54:990 (6) - NC this or move it further. It will confuse players because of 00:54:305 (4,5) - but really NC would be more effective Imo its okay, i ve never been confused so my friends
Not much to really say

[centre]Call me back when the rest of the diffs are done

Always be positive, and stay humble. Keep the driving force of osu! this way
Sometimes motivational words no matter how small can push a person's spirit to new heights

yShadowXOP_ wrote:

M4M

INSANE



01:20:017 (1,3) - blanket bad done its minor thing
01:55:503 (1) - this kiai in my opinion can be more spaced out I like how its spaced, incrased sv from 1 to 1.2 tho
01:56:703 (1) - bad blanketits minor thing
02:03:560 (1,3) - ^^
02:03:560 (1,6) - arrange the stack of 6 fixed

look at my view on the map is perfect I have not seen many mistakes in it

i hope it's ranked for me to farmed HEHE

bob80905 wrote:

M4M request.

Here's your mod.

1. 00:05:790 (1) - Up to this point you've had a consistent clockwise circular flow. Why not reverse it here to anti-clockwise? Keeping the same direction-circular flow can get boring pretty quick.Imo its okay and not boring. Ill pay attetnion to it when more people point it out
2. 01:16:933 (5) - I think that this note should be further away x=300 y=256? here it blankets with the other slider, and it puts more emphasis on the following slider with distance. I just feel like this note should be further away... just consider it. Thats a good idea
3. 01:19:676 (5) - For this instead of three circles I think it'd be more rhytmically accurate to make this one circle and one slider. Like this I get your point but, making sliderend on upbeat is bad idea.
4. 01:17:105 (1) - Here is where you begin your anti-clockwise circular flow, and 01:24:990 (4) - here is where you reverse it. You keep anticlockwise for 3 downbeats and make it clockwise for 1 downbeat. Shouldn't it be equal? anti-clockwise for 2 down beats and then reverse to clockwise for 2? So what I'm saying is you should reverse circular flow at this point 01:22:590 (1) - I tried switching around the position a bit in case you want to do this, so here are some screenshots of what I'm talking about. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8500319 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8500329 (and then obviously keep that up until 01:26:705 (1) - , that's my suggestion). I got some complains about this part so ill do changes
5. 01:29:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think you can get away with adding more distance between these circles. The sound of each of them is the same intensity, so I recommend making them larger trapezoids that move down. For now it will remain as it is. Need more opinions
6. 01:39:047 (1,2) - Rotate these 30 degrees? less chance of break and a smoother transition from the last circle to this slider head. I get it, ill chage it to something diferent
7. 02:13:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again, I think you can get away with adding just a bit more distance on these, especially the first 3. For now it will remain as it is. Need more opinions
8. 02:16:419 (1) - This is too close to the previous circle imo. move it further away?I get it, ill do changes

Reynolduh wrote:

Insane

00:44:190 (2) - touching healthbar Neiter aimod nor people say so, ill change if there are more complains
00:11:962 (3) - slider tail end on important sound. replace with circle instead boi i get your point but this sound isnt that important. at least compared to 00:12:305 - ones. It will remain as it is
00:48:819 (3) - ^^
00:51:562 (3) - ^^
00:53:790 (2,3,4,5,6) - i don't feel like the way you map this is the best. don't make one short repeating slider, one 1/4 slider than another 2 short repeating slider etc. It does not (flow?) well in a way and may confuse players while playing. This is the best way to map it because every single slider you mentioned starts on vocal + follow background 1/4 sounds
00:56:533 (1,2,3,4) - all slider tail ends on important sounds. I recommend you to shorten slider 1 to 1/2, move 1-4 baack by 1/2 beat and replace circle 4 with a 1/2 slider Its to support vocals here that overhelm music (in my opinion)
00:57:905 (1) - there is no sound on the arrow. Replace with 1/2 slider instead A-A-A vocal sound here
00:59:276 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:56:533 (1,2,3,4) - Well it match vocal too but ill change it as 01:00:476 (4) - isnt really good as its followed by jumps
01:25:847 (2,3,4) - delete 2 and 4. move 3 back by 1/2 beat and put 1/2 sllider at 01:26:190 - changed to something diferent
01:35:790 (4) - NC maybe? the instrument did change fixed
01:36:990 - u missed an important sound here m8. add a c ircle on zis white tic fixed
01:50:362 (2) - move this slightly closer to the slider maybe??? it looks like the same distance between next circle and previous slider when it's not. might confuse players while playing, especially during hd.ill consider that, for now ill remain
01:56:190 (3) - slider tail end on important sound. replace with circlessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss Its hearable enough to map but not as important as following sound so it will remain
02:00:733 - u missed a sound here. starting to realise u prioritise vocals. so decided to point this out There is no sound. Singer just inhale there, not worth mapping this
02:07:505 (5) - NC maybe??? vocals start here so why not Why not? because the highest pitch is on 02:07:676 (1) -
02:11:790 (5,1) - delete circle 5 and move slider 1 back by 1/2 beat than on 02:12:133 - add a circle. should make this part sync better with the vocals
I get your point but i switched from vocal to music sounds here

Thank you for modding
I guess that's about it

Kurogami wrote:

Insane

02:33:905 (1) - delete this

Revialink wrote:

cute tbh like it

Blan_C wrote:

Revialink wrote:

cute tbh like it

Thanks ^^

bite you death wrote:

02:10:076 - 00:18:819 (3) - 00:56:876 - 00:56:876 - missing hs in my diff, i told you to check it D:

1. 00:00:305 (1) - 00:03:047 (1) - Co sądzisz o zamianie obydwu z tych sliderów na dwa kółka, będzie lepiej rytmicznie i unikniesz spamu 1/2 sliderami.
2. 00:40:076 (1,1,1) - Powinieneś te kółka jakoś równo ustawić, tak jak we wcześniejszych, podobnych kompozycjach.
3. 00:49:676 (1) - 00:50:876 (4) - Jako, że cała mapa jest zestackowana, proponuję zrobić tak samo tutaj.
4. 01:54:819 (1,2) - Co sądzisz o daniu tutaj streama tak dla urozmaicenia?
5. 01:59:790 (3,4,5,6,7) - Naprawdę, nie potrafię zrozumieć do końca co tu się stało;
   
   1. 01:59:790 (3,4) - Tutaj spacing jest zdecydowanie za duży, szczególnie, gdy porównasz go do reszty mapy.
   2. 01:59:962 (4) - Ten slider jest ewidentnie źle zhitsoundowany, proponuję dopasować tak, jak masz na reszcie mapy do podobnych dźwięków
   3. 01:59:962 (4,5,6) - Bardzo randomowo to wygląda i w kwestii spacingu, tak samo jak i w kwestii estetyki, polecam dopasować do reszty mapy.

Venix wrote:

Dobra prąd już wrócił to zrobie random moda

1. 00:00:305 (1) - 00:03:047 (1) - Co sądzisz o zamianie obydwu z tych sliderów na dwa kółka, będzie lepiej rytmicznie i unikniesz spamu 1/2 sliderami.
   Spam sliderów jest i będzie bo intensity jest niskie i ogólnie pasuje to do tych dźwięków co 1/2. Pierwsze kóło masz 00:05:790 (1) - gdzie piosenka zaczyna przyspieszać.
2. 00:40:076 (1,1,1) - Powinieneś te kółka jakoś równo ustawić, tak jak we wcześniejszych, podobnych kompozycjach. Nie widać tego i nie boli w oczy więc... Zmienie bo jesteś farmerem kudosu brudasie xd
3. 00:49:676 (1) - 00:50:876 (4) - Jako, że cała mapa jest zestackowana, proponuję zrobić tak samo tutaj. Nie. Gdy zestackuje to ze slider-endem, będzie za blisko 00:51:390 (2) - czyli 2/10. Poza tym nie widać overlapa więc...
4. 01:54:819 (1,2) - Co sądzisz o daniu tutaj streama tak dla urozmaicenia? Dla czytelności/łatwości przejścia z 1/6 na 1/4
5. 01:59:790 (3,4,5,6,7) - Naprawdę, nie potrafię zrozumieć do końca co tu się stało; A tu się odjebał remap którego nie dokończyłem, bo modujesz niedokończoną mapę - Jeśli myślisz ze to celowo to 'XD'
   
   
   1. 01:59:790 (3,4) - Tutaj spacing jest zdecydowanie za duży, szczególnie, gdy porównasz go do reszty mapy.
   2. 01:59:962 (4) - Ten slider jest ewidentnie źle zhitsoundowany, proponuję dopasować tak, jak masz na reszcie mapy do podobnych dźwięków
   3. 01:59:962 (4,5,6) - Bardzo randomowo to wygląda i w kwestii spacingu, tak samo jak i w kwestii estetyki, polecam dopasować do reszty mapy.

Ogólnie mapa potrzebuje więcej podszlifowania w zakresie rytmu, ale narazie nie chce mi się rozpisywać.To po co to wgl napisałeś, jak nie chce ci się rozpisywać i mi pomóc?

Venix wrote:

ok postanowiłem zabawić się w nazistę


00:00:305 (1) - 00:03:047 (1) - Na tych sliderach masz znacznie mocniejsze dźwięki niż na reszcie na początku (nawet to podkreśliłeś hitsoundami), więc dlatego powinieneś umieścić zamiast nich kółka. Obecnie wygląda to strasznie undermapped. ... Zdaje sobię sprawę, że dźwięki na 00:00:305 (1) - 00:03:047 (1) - są mocniejsze niż reszta, ale poza tym intensity nie nie zmienia. To że masz jebnięcie dzwona zaznaczyłem hitsoundem i tym że da się to kliknąć, a poza tym nie widze powodu by dawać kółko na czerwonych tickach nastepujących po nich, bo po prostu imo gorzej pasują. Jest większa przerwa na każdym dzwonie (poza 00:08:533 (1) - bo niższy dźwięk). I ostatnia rzecz - chciałem mieć kliknięcie tylko co 1/1 gdzie zmienia się wysokość takich jakby organów, nie wiem jak to nazwać. Wystarczy?

00:49:676 (1) - 00:50:876 (4) - Napisałeś, że nie, a naprawiłeś XD Bo zremapiłem cały part - nie zauważyłeś? To co wcześniej napisałeś było słabym pomysłem bo by to wyglądało w ten sposób, czyli nie pasowało do standardowej odległości jaką dałem wszędzie. Wysil się.

01:54:819 (1,2) - To przejście naprawdę nie jest takie trudne, szczególnie, gdy te 1/6 slidery są tak długie. Przejście na stream z przerwy 1/6 jest trudne, co innego na slider, więc nie. Poza tym długość slidera nie ma z tym nic wspólnego - gap jest ten sam.

bite you death wrote:

00:43:847 - fix kurwa

no kds

-Sylvari wrote:

[Venix's Extra]

00:11:105 (8,2) - B Ł A G A M to było zamierzone XD
00:13:333 (3,4,1) - Z tego mozna trójkąt zajebać mhm
00:19:505 (1,2) - Fajny Overlap mi też się podoba
00:19:505 (1,3) - To samo To samo
00:51:390 (2) - Ej jakby z tego zrobić kółka? :thinking: W sensie nie ze trojka tylko kolka na poczatku i koncu slidera followuje wokal
01:35:362 - Mocny dzwiek. 2x 1/8 by tu pasowało albo 2 kółka jak tu 1/8 nie ma XDD
01:37:847 (2,8) - Fajny Overlap jak tego nawet w grze nie widać XD
01:56:533 (5,1) - ????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????
02:03:562 (6,1) - ?????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????
02:10:247 (5,2) - Stack japierdole Stacking się baguje w edytorze na sliderendach więc to jest stack XD

Best way to solve this problem is remap entire map. kds pls

1. Ustaw kolory combo.
2. Wyłącz Widescreen support bo nie używasz storyboarda
3. Powinieneś dodać normal diff
4. Pomiędzy diffami występuje konflikt punktów podglądu. Ustaw na wszystkich te same.
5. Custom name jest zarezerwowany dla diffa o największym star ratingu w mapsecie, czyli to diff Venixa powinien go mieć

ChuuritsuTv wrote:

[General]

1. Ustaw kolory combo. Ustawiałem ze 100 ale sie non stop usuwały więc póki co mam na nie wyjebane
2. Wyłącz Widescreen support bo nie używasz storyboarda
3. Powinieneś dodać normal diff No dodam tylko jak mi Revialink skończy i chyba mu zaraz jaja urwę
4. Pomiędzy diffami występuje konflikt punktów podglądu. Ustaw na wszystkich te same.
5. Custom name jest zarezerwowany dla diffa o największym star ratingu w mapsecie, czyli to diff Venixa powinien go mieć

[Venix's Extra]
00:05:838 (1,6) - Zakładam, że te dwa circle miały na siebie idealnie nakładać, jednak tego nie robią.
W ogóle bardzo często na tej mapie obiekty się idealnie nie nakładają, przy czym wyglądają jakby miały to robić, np. 00:05:838 (1,6) - 00:08:581 (5) - 00:14:067 (1,1) - itd.

A tak offtop skoro widzę, że polacy to pragnę zaprosić was na moją grupę dla polskich mapperów -> https://www.facebook.com/groups/polishbeatmappers/

_niz wrote:

cx

01:46:638 - Weird ass pattern, keep it in but it just feels weird Yeah, i was stuck on this for a long time and i dont have any idea how to make it better/different. My idea was to space these 01:46:638 (1,1) - close like that because these are two different sounds - it would be bad to space it like 01:46:810 (1,2,3,1) - if you know what i mean
02:13:295 -
It goes
When it should go
Fit's the "insane" diff more. ;-) I am sorry if i misunderstood something, but to me is completly fine - my idea was to make player acustomed to up and down jumps 02:13:381 (1,2) - 02:13:724 (3,4) - to make this more easier to click 02:14:067 (1,2) - this jump (sry for english xd)
02:21:247 - Is this incomplete? You should put something here. I kinda want at least 1 spinner on my map, but i get your point. Maybe ill change
00:58:295 -
quick move.
I will remap a bit here because i dont like it either

gj

Milar001 wrote:

Wjeżdża modzik

[Insane]
00:52:454 (1,2) - Ze względu na wokal bardziej pasowałby slider Chodzi ci o slider 1/1? Jeśli tak to się nie zgadzam. Dając 1/1 w te miejsce pomijam dźwięk na 00:52:638 - na którym się skupiam w tym parcie
01:37:210 (1,2,3) - te dźwięki różnią się od 01:37:724 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - więc mógłbyś użyć innych typów sliderów Jestem tego świadom - niestety na tym SR nie mogę zbytnio tego zmienić bez niszczenia konstrukcji patternu skupiającego sie na blanketach. Co więcej, staram się unikać sliderów innych niż zakrzywionych (pod blanket) które za bardzo są przekrzywione względem pionowej/poziomej osi symetrii, bo wg mnie wyglądają słabo. Wydaje mi się, że NC na 01:37:724 (1) - i inny rodzaj movementu w 01:37:724 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - wystarczy zeby gracz odebrał to za 'coś innego'
01:39:096 (1,1) - Podobnie tutaj, dźwięki kompletnie inne a kształty sliderów bardzo podobne Jak wyżej
02:11:153 (3,4) - ze względu na wokal i ten kick na końcu myślę że bardziej by pasował taki rytm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10526240 Po częsci się zgadzam, że warto tego kicka (raczej snare) kliknąć, ale zauważ że cały kiai robiony jest pod vocal. Wcześniej mamy podobnie: 02:04:981 (1,2,3,4) - to znaczy położenie slidera 1/2 na początku vocalu. Zrobienie po twojemu sprawiłoby ze rytm stałby się nieregularny poprzez dziwne przejście na instrumenty

[Venix's Extra]
00:08:581 (5) - NC
00:49:381 - Mocny wokal, better clickable
00:52:124 - ^
01:23:667 (5) - uważam że lepiej by było gdybyś obrócił to o 45 stopni https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10526270
01:51:095 (6) - Tu zdecydowanie powinien być slider
01:51:439 (1) - Rozważ rozdzielenie tego na dwa slidery, jeden tu i drugi na 01:51:610 -

Mam nadzieję że w czymś pomogłem

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