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IOSYS - Cirno no Perfect Sansuu Kyoushitsu [Taiko]

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Topic Starter
davidminh0111
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
FastBoy
M4M from ur modding queue
d - don
k - kat
D - big don
K - big kat

[General]
first of all, plz delete all the tags
cuz "yandere" is irrelevant to the song and "cirno","math","class","perfect","iosys" are covered in the title or in the artist
the source is "東方Project"
it is better to change the title to "チルノのパーフェクトさんすう教室"
then the romanised title will be "Cirno's Perfect Math Class"
also plz add "touhou" to the tags as it refers to 東方
add "chiruno no paafekuto sansuu kyoushitsu" as it is the romaji of the title
and add "zun" since he is the creator of touhou
the offset is not set well indeed
after testing, it is better for u to change the offset to 42
(note that the timing of notes shown below is based on this offset (42))
i found that u haven't set the preview point and it is improper
u can set 01:16:327 as the preview point

[Kantan]
00:00:042 - 00:10:156 & 00:21:984 - 00:32:784 these empty spaces are actually weird and meaningless
although u want to lower the diff. of it or it may be ur style, it is not a good way
plz place some notes by yourself
00:11:013 (1) - change to D to make the period 00:11:013 - 00:15:127 seem symmetric and sound better
00:51:470 (16) - change to d to fit the pitch
00:58:327 (28) - change to k to avoid repeating
00:59:013 (29) - change to K to fit the pitch
01:10:927 (6) - move the note to 01:11:013 as if u listen carefully, there is not worth placing note
01:18:213 (4) - change to d to fit the pitch
01:28:499 (18,19,20) - change to kdd as the rhythm there is similar to 01:17:527 (2,3,4)
01:31:242 (22,23,24) - change to ddk with the same reason above
02:00:384 - place D cuz the drum sound there is so strong
02:00:727 (1) - it is recommended to delete it but maybe it is ur style, i leave it to u
u may find that there are some notes not fitting the pitch but i haven't pointed them out
it is because they actually fit the feeling
so deciding placing d or k, pitch and feeling are the factors that we have to consider

[Futsuu]
empty space, u know what to do
00:51:470 (21) - change to d to fit the pitch
01:10:498 (12) - change to k to avoid repeating and make the period 01:05:870 - 01:10:499 seem symmetric
01:47:013 (106) - change to k to fit the rhythm
02:00:384 (1) - place D here and recommend u to delete the spinner

[Muzukashii]
also empty space
00:42:442 (162) - move it to 00:42:384
01:22:670 - place d to fit the rhythm. it is weird if there is no d
01:28:070 (95) - it is recommended to delete it as according to the song, there is not strong enough to place a note
01:59:242 (251) - move it to 01:59:184
02:00:384 (1) - place D here and recommend u to delete the spinner

[Oni]
i don't know why so many notes are not snapped onto the timeline
plz solve this serious problem
btw the pattern in this diff. is not bad

those are my advice
hope that they are helpful to u
enjoy mapping~
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

FastBoy wrote:

M4M from ur modding queue
d - don
k - kat
D - big don
K - big kat

[General]
first of all, plz delete all the tags
cuz "yandere" is irrelevant to the song and "cirno","math","class","perfect","iosys" are covered in the title or in the artist
the source is "東方Project"
it is better to change the title to "チルノのパーフェクトさんすう教室"
then the romanised title will be "Cirno's Perfect Math Class"
also plz add "touhou" to the tags as it refers to 東方
add "chiruno no paafekuto sansuu kyoushitsu" as it is the romaji of the title
and add "zun" since he is the creator of touhou
the offset is not set well indeed
after testing, it is better for u to change the offset to 42
(note that the timing of notes shown below is based on this offset (42))
i found that u haven't set the preview point and it is improper
u can set 01:16:327 as the preview point

[Kantan]
00:00:042 - 00:10:156 & 00:21:984 - 00:32:784 these empty spaces are actually weird and meaningless Fixed
although u want to lower the diff. of it or it may be ur style, it is not a good way
plz place some notes by yourself
00:11:013 (1) - change to D to make the period 00:11:013 - 00:15:127 seem symmetric and sound betterFixed
00:51:470 (16) - change to d to fit the pitch Nah, it's okay
00:58:327 (28) - change to k to avoid repeating I'd prefer change k to 00:59:013.
00:59:013 (29) - change to K to fit the pitch Just told ya
01:10:927 (6) - move the note to 01:11:013 as if u listen carefully, there is not worth placing note Fixed
01:18:213 (4) - change to d to fit the pitch I'd prefer change to d here 01:17:527
01:28:499 (18,19,20) - change to kdd as the rhythm there is similar to 01:17:527 (2,3,4) Nope
01:31:242 (22,23,24) - change to ddk with the same reason above Still not
02:00:384 - place D cuz the drum sound there is so strong Ok
02:00:727 (1) - it is recommended to delete it but maybe it is ur style, i leave it to uI removed it!
u may find that there are some notes not fitting the pitch but i haven't pointed them out
it is because they actually fit the feeling
so deciding placing d or k, pitch and feeling are the factors that we have to consider

[Futsuu]
empty space, u know what to do
00:51:470 (21) - change to d to fit the pitch
01:10:498 (12) - change to k to avoid repeating and make the period 01:05:870 - 01:10:499 seem symmetric
01:47:013 (106) - change to k to fit the rhythm
02:00:384 (1) - place D here and recommend u to delete the spinner

[Muzukashii]
also empty space
00:42:442 (162) - move it to 00:42:384
01:22:670 - place d to fit the rhythm. it is weird if there is no d
01:28:070 (95) - it is recommended to delete it as according to the song, there is not strong enough to place a note
01:59:242 (251) - move it to 01:59:184
02:00:384 (1) - place D here and recommend u to delete the spinner

[Oni]
i don't know why so many notes are not snapped onto the timeline
plz solve this serious problem
btw the pattern in this diff. is not bad

those are my advice
hope that they are helpful to u
enjoy mapping~
Fixed most of them
Btw, thanks for the mod, i will fix your map
sakebi
from queue

d = small red
k = small blue
D = big red
K = big blue

[general]
set a preview point for the map

[kantan]
slider velocity should be 1.40

00:32:955 (37,1) - two notes on same tick
01:05:870 (1) - green timing point isn't snapped
01:16:842 (1) - green timing point isn't snapped
01:38:784 (1) - green timing point isn't snapped

[futsuu]
00:21:984 (52) - green timing point isn't snapped
01:05:870 (1) - green timing point isn't snapped
01:14:442 (22,25) - change from ddd ddd to ddk ddk
01:38:784 (76) - green timing point isn't snapped

[muzukashii]
00:01:413 (6) - should be d instead of D
00:04:156 (15) - change from d to k
00:04:499 (16) - add d 00:04:670
00:19:242 (48,49,50,51) - instead of k d k d, should be d k d k or k D k D
00:20:784 (53,54) - add k between these at 00:20:870
00:21:984 (59) - green timing point isn't snapped
01:05:870 (1) - green timing point isn't snapped
01:37:842 (145) - remove note
01:38:784 (149) - green timing point isn't snapped
01:39:984 (155) - change from k to d
01:41:356 (162,163) - switch from k d to d k
01:42:042 (166,167) - switch d to k
01:42:899 (170) - switch d to k

[oni]
make sure notes and timing points are properly snapped
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

lilligantEX wrote:

from queue

d = small red
k = small blue
D = big red
K = big blue

[general]
set a preview point for the map

[kantan]
slider velocity should be 1.40Fixed

00:32:955 (37,1) - two notes on same tick LOL, I didn't pay attention to this, Fixed
01:05:870 (1) - green timing point isn't snappedFixed
01:16:842 (1) - green timing point isn't snappedFixed
01:38:784 (1) - green timing point isn't snappedFixed

[futsuu]
00:21:984 (52) - green timing point isn't snappedFixed
01:05:870 (1) - green timing point isn't snapped
01:14:442 (22,25) - change from ddd ddd to ddk ddkFixed
01:38:784 (76) - green timing point isn't snappedFixed

[muzukashii]
00:01:413 (6) - should be d instead of D] It doesn't change
00:04:156 (15) - change from d to kFixed
00:04:499 (16) - add d 00:04:670
00:19:242 (48,49,50,51) - instead of k d k d, should be d k d k or k D k DNah, I think it's suitable
00:20:784 (53,54) - add k between these at 00:20:870Nope
00:21:984 (59) - green timing point isn't snappedAlready
01:05:870 (1) - green timing point isn't snappedSame
01:37:842 (145) - remove note [color=#BFFF00For singing[/color]
01:38:784 (149) - green timing point isn't snappedAlready
01:39:984 (155) - change from k to dWould prefer change to k at 01:40:670
01:41:356 (162,163) - switch from k d to d kFixed
01:42:042 (166,167) - switch d to kFixed
01:42:899 (170) - switch d to kFixed

[oni]
make sure notes and timing points are properly snapped
Thanks
JarHed
:lol: Hi, JarHed's Here my Queue

Muzukashii :

00:00:384 (2) - Change to a Kat Same sounds going on with the 3rd note in the song.

00:00:899 (4,5) - Change (4) to a Don and (5) to a Kat Followup to the previous ^ and it sounds a whole lot better in the song.

00:01:755 (7,8,9,10) - Repeat all of this at these notes as well it s the same thing ^^^

00:41:184 (157,158,159,160,161,162,163) - Snapping points are not correct with the song here, Change it to the picture below (Notes not changed just where they are placed)

Cursor at 00:41:870 --->

01:57:984 (246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253) - Snapping points also incorrect here change to this. (Notes not changed just where they are placed)

Cursor at 01:58:670 --->

Delete 01:59:870 (253) - Change to this pattern here sounds way better and is a better finish up for the map.

Cursor at: 02:00:42
Pattern Here:

Good Muzu just things here and there need to be fixed :)

Oni:

- Its well mapped however add new patterns everywhere where there is 1/4, To be more specific its all DDD or KKK or DDDDK Try to add some patterns in that contribute more technical patterns such as DKD KDDKD\

Im not gonna change much with the Oni simply because the only issue is lack of patterns its well mapped i like it a lot i just think it seems bland ADD MORE PATTERNS
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

JarHed wrote:

:lol: Hi, JarHed's Here my Queue

Muzukashii :

00:00:384 (2) - Change to a Kat Same sounds going on with the 3rd note in the song.

00:00:899 (4,5) - Change (4) to a Don and (5) to a Kat Followup to the previous ^ and it sounds a whole lot better in the song.

00:01:755 (7,8,9,10) - Repeat all of this at these notes as well it s the same thing ^^^

00:41:184 (157,158,159,160,161,162,163) - Snapping points are not correct with the song here, Change it to the picture below (Notes not changed just where they are placed)

Cursor at 00:41:870 --->

01:57:984 (246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253) - Snapping points also incorrect here change to this. (Notes not changed just where they are placed)

Cursor at 01:58:670 --->

Delete 01:59:870 (253) - Change to this pattern here sounds way better and is a better finish up for the map.

Cursor at: 02:00:42
Pattern Here:

Good Muzu just things here and there need to be fixed :)

Oni:

- Its well mapped however add new patterns everywhere where there is 1/4, To be more specific its all DDD or KKK or DDDDK Try to add some patterns in that contribute more technical patterns such as DKD KDDKD\

Im not gonna change much with the Oni simply because the only issue is lack of patterns its well mapped i like it a lot i just think it seems bland ADD MORE PATTERNS
Fixed all, thank you.
Will mod your map later
_yu68
Hello. mod via PM :3

mod
[General]
  1. Please add tag '東方Project'.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:02:784 (3,4) - change to k? I think that be able to represent differences of pitch.
  2. 00:08:270 (7,8) - ^
  3. 00:26:613 (30) - move to 00:26:784 - ? I suggest reduce complex rhythm for beginner.
  4. 00:37:584 (41) - move to 00:37:756 - ? ^
  5. 00:34:842 - add k? This is same as 00:23:870 -
  6. 00:48:384 (10,11) - delete? I think it need to make 4/1 break for beginner.
  7. 00:54:213 (20) - ^
[Futsuu]
  1. Please fix SV to 1.40.
  2. 00:20:956 (35) - move to 00:20:613 - ? I think that flow becomes natural by fiting to vocal.
  3. 00:22:327 (38) - move to 00:22:499 - ? I suggest fit to vocals just like Kantan.
  4. 00:23:699 (41) - move to 00:23:870 - ? ^
  5. 00:25:070 (44) - move to 00:25:242 - ? ^
  6. 00:27:813 (50) - move to 00:27:984 - ? ^
  7. 00:29:184 (53) - move to 00:29:356 - ? ^
  8. 00:30:556 (56) - move to 00:30:727 - ? ^
  9. 00:34:670 (65) - move to 00:34:842 - ? ^
  10. 00:38:784 (74) - move to 00:38:956 - ? ^
  11. 00:40:156 (77) - move to 00:40:327 - ? ^
  12. 01:39:127 (59) - move to 01:39:299 - ? ^
  13. 01:40:499 (62) - move to 01:40:670 - ? ^
  14. 01:47:356 (78) - move to 01:47:527 - ? ^
  15. 01:50:099 (82) - move to 01:50:270 - ? ^
  16. 01:51:470 (85) - move to 01:51:642 - ? ^
  17. 01:55:584 (94) - move to 01:55:756 - ? ^
  18. 01:56:956 (97) - move to 01:57:127 - ? ^
  19. 01:15:470 (20) - Slider is unsnapped. Please fix.
  20. 01:37:413 (56) - remove finisher? Because sound is weak.
[Muzukashii]
  1. change SV to 1.40? 1.40 is used in many ranked maps so it is better.
  2. 00:12:213 (10) - delete? I think that pattern is too long for Muzukashii.
  3. 00:14:956 (25) - ^
  4. 00:17:699 (38) - ^
  5. 00:27:299 (88) - ^
  6. 00:32:784 (116) - ^
  7. 01:34:499 (124) - ^
  8. 01:35:870 (132) - ^
  9. 01:37:242 (140) - ^
  10. 01:49:584 (205) - ^
  11. 00:28:499 - 00:28:670 - add notes? It is same as 00:23:013 - 00:23:184 -
  12. 00:33:984 - 00:34:156 - ^
  13. 01:45:299 - 01:45:470 - ^
  14. 01:50:784 - 01:50:956 - ^
  15. 01:22:756 (68) - delete? I feel this will make complex for Muzukashii players.
  16. 01:28:070 (95) - ^
  17. 01:37:842 (145) - delete? I think that be able to emphasize rhythm of vocal.
[Oni]
  1. change SV to 1.40? Same reason as Muzukashii.
  2. 00:03:813 (21,22) - change to dd? I think that be able to represent difference of pitch between 00:03:984 - and 00:04:156 -
  3. 00:55:927 - add k? There is same sound as 00:57:299 -
  4. 01:14:099 - ~ 01:16:156 - I think the overall balance is bad because this part is too hard. I suggest to change to 1/4s.

I think that this mapset needs more advice from skilled mappers.
Good luck!
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

_yu68 wrote:

Hello. mod via PM :3

mod
[General]
  1. Please add tag '東方Project'.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:02:784 (3,4) - change to k? I think that be able to represent differences of pitch.
  2. 00:08:270 (7,8) - ^
  3. 00:26:613 (30) - move to 00:26:784 - ? I suggest reduce complex rhythm for beginner.
  4. 00:37:584 (41) - move to 00:37:756 - ? ^
  5. 00:34:842 - add k? This is same as 00:23:870 -
  6. 00:48:384 (10,11) - delete? I think it need to make 4/1 break for beginner.
  7. 00:54:213 (20) - ^
[Futsuu]
  1. Please fix SV to 1.40.
  2. 00:20:956 (35) - move to 00:20:613 - ? I think that flow becomes natural by fiting to vocal.
  3. 00:22:327 (38) - move to 00:22:499 - ? I suggest fit to vocals just like Kantan.
  4. 00:23:699 (41) - move to 00:23:870 - ? ^
  5. 00:25:070 (44) - move to 00:25:242 - ? ^
  6. 00:27:813 (50) - move to 00:27:984 - ? ^
  7. 00:29:184 (53) - move to 00:29:356 - ? ^
  8. 00:30:556 (56) - move to 00:30:727 - ? ^
  9. 00:34:670 (65) - move to 00:34:842 - ? ^
  10. 00:38:784 (74) - move to 00:38:956 - ? ^
  11. 00:40:156 (77) - move to 00:40:327 - ? ^
  12. 01:39:127 (59) - move to 01:39:299 - ? ^
  13. 01:40:499 (62) - move to 01:40:670 - ? ^
  14. 01:47:356 (78) - move to 01:47:527 - ? ^
  15. 01:50:099 (82) - move to 01:50:270 - ? ^
  16. 01:51:470 (85) - move to 01:51:642 - ? ^
  17. 01:55:584 (94) - move to 01:55:756 - ? ^
  18. 01:56:956 (97) - move to 01:57:127 - ? ^
  19. 01:15:470 (20) - Slider is unsnapped. Please fix.
  20. 01:37:413 (56) - remove finisher? Because sound is weak.
[Muzukashii]
  1. change SV to 1.40? 1.40 is used in many ranked maps so it is better.
  2. 00:12:213 (10) - delete? I think that pattern is too long for Muzukashii.
  3. 00:14:956 (25) - ^
  4. 00:17:699 (38) - ^
  5. 00:27:299 (88) - ^
  6. 00:32:784 (116) - ^
  7. 01:34:499 (124) - ^
  8. 01:35:870 (132) - ^
  9. 01:37:242 (140) - ^
  10. 01:49:584 (205) - ^
  11. 00:28:499 - 00:28:670 - add notes? It is same as 00:23:013 - 00:23:184 -
  12. 00:33:984 - 00:34:156 - ^
  13. 01:45:299 - 01:45:470 - ^
  14. 01:50:784 - 01:50:956 - ^
  15. 01:22:756 (68) - delete? I feel this will make complex for Muzukashii players.
  16. 01:28:070 (95) - ^
  17. 01:37:842 (145) - delete? I think that be able to emphasize rhythm of vocal.
[Oni]
  1. change SV to 1.40? Same reason as Muzukashii.
  2. 00:03:813 (21,22) - change to dd? I think that be able to represent difference of pitch between 00:03:984 - and 00:04:156 -
  3. 00:55:927 - add k? There is same sound as 00:57:299 -
  4. 01:14:099 - ~ 01:16:156 - I think the overall balance is bad because this part is too hard. I suggest to change to 1/4s.

I think that this mapset needs more advice from skilled mappers.
Good luck!
I will try my best. You are one of the skilled taiko mapper
Thank you very much
toara_fict
M4M

FastBoy wrote:

[Oni]
i don't know why so many notes are not snapped onto the timeline
plz solve this serious problem
btw the pattern in this diff. is not bad

those are my advice
hope that they are helpful to u
enjoy mapping~

lilligantEX wrote:

[oni]
make sure notes and timing points are properly snapped

JarHed wrote:

Oni:

- Its well mapped however add new patterns everywhere where there is 1/4, To be more specific its all DDD or KKK or DDDDK Try to add some patterns in that contribute more technical patterns such as DKD KDDKD\

Im not gonna change much with the Oni simply because the only issue is lack of patterns its well mapped i like it a lot i just think it seems bland ADD MORE PATTERNS

_yu68 wrote:

I think that this mapset needs more advice from skilled mappers.
Good luck!
ok. i check Oni


[ General]
  1. tag : Project' ...delete ' ?
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

[ Oni]
  1. 00:06:899 (37) - change k ( high pitch sound. )
  2. 00:20:442 (120) - delete Finish

  3. 00:17:699 (103,104) - swap. ( follow bass drum sound 00:17:184 (100) - 00:18:556 (110) - )
    or
    00:17:013 (99,100,101,102) - swap ( if you want follow Vocal pitch. )

  4. 00:23:870 (144) - delete Finish or 00:24:727 (150) - delete finish and 00:25:242 (153) - add finish. ( Unity is lacking )

  5. 00:32:099 (199,200) - or 00:31:927 (197,198,199,200) - change d. ( Emphasis 00:32:270 (201) - note. & 00:32:184 (200) - 00:32:270 (201) - is different sound. )

  6. 00:27:984 (172) - 00:28:842 (177) - 00:29:355 (180) - 00:30:213 (185) - 00:30:727 (188) - 00:33:470 (209) - 00:34:327 (214) - 00:34:842 (217) - 00:35:699 (222) - 00:36:213 (225) -00:38:956 (244) - ( some 00:23:870 (144) -)

  7. 00:45:299 (280) - 00:46:671 (287) - 00:48:041 (294) - 00:51:470 (313) - 00:55:584 (334) - 00:56:956 (341) - 00:57:299 (342) - 00:58:327 (348) - 00:59:013 (350) - 01:07:413 (416) - 01:09:984 (426) - delete finish. ( noizy )

  8. 01:16:842 (471) - ADD FINISH

  9. 01:24:384 (519) - delete finish & 01:25:070 - add Finish.

  10. 01:29:870 (553) - 01:34:499 (577) - delete finish.
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

I think unity of placement is very lacking.
It seems that Finish is also arranged at random.
Oni remapped you to recreate it once or ask GD. recommend it.

Good Luck
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

toara_fict wrote:

M4M

FastBoy wrote:

[Oni]
i don't know why so many notes are not snapped onto the timeline
plz solve this serious problem
btw the pattern in this diff. is not bad

those are my advice
hope that they are helpful to u
enjoy mapping~

lilligantEX wrote:

[oni]
make sure notes and timing points are properly snapped

JarHed wrote:

Oni:

- Its well mapped however add new patterns everywhere where there is 1/4, To be more specific its all DDD or KKK or DDDDK Try to add some patterns in that contribute more technical patterns such as DKD KDDKD\

Im not gonna change much with the Oni simply because the only issue is lack of patterns its well mapped i like it a lot i just think it seems bland ADD MORE PATTERNS

_yu68 wrote:

I think that this mapset needs more advice from skilled mappers.
Good luck!
ok. i check Oni


[ General]
  1. tag : Project' ...delete ' ?


- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

[ Oni]
  1. 00:06:899 (37) - change k ( high pitch sound. )Fixed
  2. 00:20:442 (120) - delete FinishFixed

  3. 00:17:699 (103,104) - swap. ( follow bass drum sound 00:17:184 (100) - 00:18:556 (110) - )Fixed
    or
    00:17:013 (99,100,101,102) - swap ( if you want follow Vocal pitch. )No, it doesn't fit the vocal either the pitch (slow down the song and you will get it

  4. 00:23:870 (144) - delete Finish or 00:24:727 (150) - delete finish and 00:25:242 (153) - add finish. ( Unity is lacking ) Yeah, I should fix all the Drum sound

  5. 00:32:099 (199,200) - or 00:31:927 (197,198,199,200) - change d. ( Emphasis 00:32:270 (201) - note. & 00:32:184 (200) - 00:32:270 (201) - is different sound. ) Fixed

  6. 00:27:984 (172) - 00:28:842 (177) - 00:29:355 (180) - 00:30:213 (185) - 00:30:727 (188) - 00:33:470 (209) - 00:34:327 (214) - 00:34:842 (217) - 00:35:699 (222) - 00:36:213 (225) -00:38:956 (244) - ( some 00:23:870 (144) -)You mean emphasis

  7. 00:45:299 (280) - 00:46:671 (287) - 00:48:041 (294) - 00:51:470 (313) - 00:55:584 (334) - 00:56:956 (341) - 00:57:299 (342) - 00:58:327 (348) - 00:59:013 (350) - 01:07:413 (416) - 01:09:984 (426) - delete finish. ( noizy )Fixed

  8. 01:16:842 (471) - ADD FINISHFixed

  9. 01:24:384 (519) - delete finish & 01:25:070 - add Finish.Fixed

  10. 01:29:870 (553) - 01:34:499 (577) - delete finish.
Fixed
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

I think unity of placement is very lacking.
It seems that Finish is also arranged at random.
Oni remapped you to recreate it once or ask GD. recommend it.

Good Luck
Thanks
I don't need GD btw. OwO
Namki
Actually, source must be "東方Project".
Also, it's better to use actual game name as "東方紅魔郷 〜 the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil.", but Cirno appears in a half of Touhou games so idk.
Shortthu
metadata can take from here
put metadata taken from that mapset on the map desc or just ask alacat idk lul
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

Namki wrote:

Actually, source must be "東方Project".
Also, it's better to use actual game name as "東方紅魔郷 〜 the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil.", but Cirno appears in a half of Touhou games so idk.
Yeah Im not sure about that.

I cant take that metadata because i love this metadata more, Shortthu.
Shortthu

davidminh0111 wrote:

I cant take that metadata because i love this metadata more, Shortthu.
so, you can't rank this mapset
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

Shortthu wrote:

davidminh0111 wrote:

I cant take that metadata because i love this metadata more, Shortthu.
so, you can't rank this mapset
!!!!
kvgyubh
hi,let's mod
☆general
 ・from 01:57:984 (819) - --->sv up is too fast.make it more smooth and slower sv up
☆Inner Oni
 ・00:00:042 (1,2,3,4) - --->dddk change to ddkk(?)
 ・00:01:242 (7) - --->change to k(?)
 ・00:01:756 (10) - --->change to k(?)
 ・00:03:127 (17,18,19,20) - --->change to kkdd(?)
 ・00:04:156 (23,24,25,26) - --->change to kkdk(?)
 ・00:05:013 (27,28,29) - --->change to kkk(?)
 ・00:07:242 (39) - --->change to d(?)
 ・00:07:927 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - --->change to ddkkkdkkk(?)
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

kvgyubh wrote:

hi,let's mod
☆general
 ・from 01:57:984 (819) - --->sv up is too fast.make it more smooth and slower sv up It should be in Inner Oni
☆Inner Oni
 ・00:00:042 (1,2,3,4) - --->dddk change to ddkk(?) No, because there is a high pitch at that point
 ・00:01:242 (7) - --->change to k(?)Ok
 ・00:01:756 (10) - --->change to k(?)Same as 1st one
 ・00:03:127 (17,18,19,20) - --->change to kkdd(?) ^
 ・00:04:156 (23,24,25,26) - --->change to kkdk(?)^
 ・00:05:013 (27,28,29) - --->change to kkk(?)Yeah, there's a high pitch there
 ・00:07:242 (39) - --->change to d(?) Still not,high pitch
 ・00:07:927 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - --->change to ddkkkdkkk(?)No, the pitch.
I would recommend you to slow down the song and you will get it.
Thanks for your mod :)
[R]
yo


[General]
- for better appearance BG, open file in notepad and find :
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"moe 942041 cirno.jpg",0,00
Change to :
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"moe 942041 cirno.jpg",0,80

- consider to remove some finisher while the part is calm

[Kantan]

00:31:584 - change kat for variety with 00:34:327 - since pitch in here high
00:37:070 - same ^
00:43:584 - delete
01:03:470 - delete ?? it feels no break while there has 2 spinere
01:11:013 - guess finishere more work in 01:11:356 - to give emphasize
01:35:013 (1) - spinner should start in 01:35:013 (1) - and the rest 01:35:527 - can add note
01:54:384 - delete ??

[Futsuu]
00:17:870 - change kat ti give an emphasize
00:26:442 - delete ?? density in here high
00:31:070 - move 00:31:242 - and delete 00:31:413 -
00:31:584 - instead slider, maybe just put note like kantan thing
00:36:042 - add note ??
00:36:213 - remove finishere, no reasonable to put in here
00:48:042 (12,13,14) - no need finisher, still calm here, put note in 00:48:213 - instead
00:58:842 - add note ??

[Muzukashii]
00:08:099 - delete
00:09:470 - delete
00:11:356 - | 00:11:870 - delete for better flow
00:14:613 - delete ^
00:47:184 - change kat ?? for variety
00:48:213 - change don ^
01:12:042 - delete, it's to long for muzukashi

[Oni]
00:13:156 - | 00:13:327 - delete, guess stream stop here
00:21:042 - delete to match with vocal
00:26:870 - delete??
00:32:784 - change kat to emphasize 00:32:956 -

[Inner]
00:19:584 - an average for increasing SV is around 1-5 | 10 is to far so maybe you can reduce it

that's all from me
good luck
Topic Starter
davidminh0111
:P

[R] wrote:

yo


[General]
- for better appearance BG, open file in notepad and find :
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"moe 942041 cirno.jpg",0,00
Change to :
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"moe 942041 cirno.jpg",0,80

- consider to remove some finisher while the part is calm I don't know how to do the BG help O_o (now I know)

[Kantan]

00:31:584 - change kat for variety with 00:34:327 - since pitch in here high Ok
00:37:070 - same ^Fixed
00:43:584 - delete No, because there's a vocal here. Not really hard for beginners
01:03:470 - delete ?? it feels no break while there has 2 spinere Yeah, I would agree with that
01:11:013 - guess finishere more work in 01:11:356 - to give emphasize Ok
01:35:013 (1) - spinner should start in 01:35:013 (1) - and the rest 01:35:527 - can add note At 01:36:042 , spinner here
01:54:384 - delete ??Wait, why?? O_o

[Futsuu]
00:17:870 - change kat ti give an emphasize Fixed
00:26:442 - delete ?? density in here high Fixed
00:31:070 - move 00:31:242 - and delete 00:31:413 - No, because there's a vocal there. No change
00:31:584 - instead slider, maybe just put note like kantan thing Still not, because there's a long vocal of the music here.
00:36:042 - add note ?? Ok
00:36:213 - remove finishere, no reasonable to put in hereYeah
00:48:042 (12,13,14) - no need finisher, still calm here, put note in 00:48:213 - instead Only remove finish at 12. add note
00:58:842 - add note ??

[Muzukashii]
00:08:099 - delete Why???? OwO???
00:09:470 - delete ^
00:11:356 - | 00:11:870 - delete for better flow Not better flow
00:14:613 - delete ^ ^
00:47:184 - change kat ?? for variety Sure
00:48:213 - change don ^ Fixed
01:12:042 - delete, it's to long for muzukashi Deleted a note at 01:12:042

[Oni]
00:13:156 - | 00:13:327 - delete, guess stream stop here No, vocal of music... O_o
00:21:042 - delete to match with vocal Fixed
00:26:870 - delete?? Same reason as 1st one
00:32:784 - change kat to emphasize 00:32:956 - Fixed

[Inner]
00:19:584 - an average for increasing SV is around 1-5 | 10 is to far so maybe you can reduce it Fixed

that's all from me
good luck
Thanks for your mod. I appreciate it
Ladies Night

SΞCTOR #712

NM Request | ✶ | Taiko

Metadata Check

  • Song Title
  1. Change the current Song Title to "Cirno no Perfect Sansuu Kyoushitsu", this is the modified Romanisation with correct English for it.
    Source
  2. Add "東方紅魔郷 ~ the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil." to Source, since this is how the official game title is shown. (The weird hypen spacing is intentional.)
    Tags
  3. Change 東方 Project' to 東方Project in tags, there should be no spacing since that's how the official name is shown and also there's no apostrophe after Project.
  4. Change Touhou to Touhou Koumakyou in tags, this is the romanised translation of 東方紅魔郷.
  5. Add 東方氷雪歌集 in tags, this is the name of the album in Japanese, the song starred in.
  6. Add Cirno's Math Class in tags, this would be the song title in full English.
  7. Add ARM in tags, he arranged the song.
  8. Add 夕野ヨシミ in tags, lyrics were written by them.
  9. Add Yuuno Yoshimi in tags, this is the romanised name of 夕野ヨシミ in English.
  10. Add miko in tags, since she sang as the vocalist.
  11. Add Alternative ending in tags, part of the alias of miko.
  12. Add quim in tags, since he was part of the vocals as the chorus.
  13. Add Team Shanghai Alice in tags, this is the circle that ZUN releases Doujin games/music under.
  14. Add 上海アリス幻樂団 or 上海アリス幻楽団 in tags, Japanese name of Team Shanghai Alice.
  15. Add Otenba Koimusume in tags, romanised translation of the original theme this song was rearranged for.
  16. Add おてんば恋娘 in tags, Japanese name of Otenba Koimusume.
  17. Add Stage 2 Boss Theme in tags, the arrangement of this song was based on this original boss theme for Cirno created by ZUN.
  18. Add IO-0147 in tags, this is the catalog number of the album. (Optional)
  19. Add IO-0191 in tags, catalog number of the album "Grimoire of IOSYS – Touhou BEST ALBUM vol.1", which the song also starred in. (Optional)
Sources used: 東方Project第6弾, 東方氷雪歌集, Touhou Anthology of Ice and Snow, Grimoire of IOSYS – 東方BEST ALBUM vol.1, IOSYS's Discography, the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil, Team Shanghai Alice, Lyrics: チルノのパーフェクトさんすう教室, VGMdb, SoundCloud.

General Suggestions

  • Audio
  1. I'd suggest you get a 192kbps MP3 version of this song since the MP3 you use currently in the Song Folder is 160kbps and the higher bitrate would make the audio experience better.
    Unused Hitsounds
  2. You have unused custom Hitsounds in your Song Folder, delete the following: taiko-normal-hitclap.wav, taiko-normal-hitfinish.wav, taiko-normal-hitnormal.wav, taiko-normal-hitwhistle.wav. These custom Hitsounds aren't used since you only used the soft sampleset of the custom Hitsounds you applied for the Inherited Timing Points.
    Inconsistent Values
  3. All of your tags from other difficulties conflict with Muzukashii's tags, make sure to have the same tags for all of the difficulties to keep consistency.
  4. Your Muzukashii difficulty has a different Source compared to the rest of the mapset, make sure the source is "東方紅魔郷 ~ the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil." for all of the difficulties.
  5. Make sure to turn off Widescreen support for all difficulties except Oni, since that difficulty has it unchecked already. Your map doesn't have a storyboard currently so you don't need this option on. You can find it by going to Song Setup > Design > Misc. Toggles > Widescreen Support and toggling that option off for all difficulties except Oni since Oni has it unchecked already.
  6. All difficulties except Kantan and Muzukashii don't actually have the correct 1.40x base SV. You can fix this by going into File > Open osu. in Notepad > Difficulty > Slider Multiplier and changing that decimal number to 1.40x for the base SV. Do this for all difficulties except Kantan and Muzukashii since both of them are correct already.
    Difficulty Settings
  7. Not sure why you have the same difficulty settings for all of the mapset so here's some suggestions: Kantan - OD3 and HP7, Futsuu - OD4 and HP6, Muzukashii - OD5 and HP5, Oni - OD5.5 and HP5, Inner Oni - OD6 and HP6. You can adjust these settings under Song Setup > Difficulty, hold shift for the decimal settings.
    Hitsound Volume
  8. While 100% is applicable as the Hitsound volume for all of your Inherited/Timing Points, I still feel that you can tone it down 95% or 90% even and it still have the same effect since 100% is a bit loud considering it's used throughout the entire song; especially with the custom Hitsounds. Make sure to apply these changes for all of the mapset if you choose to change this.

[Kantan]

  1. 00:19:927 (22) - Change to D finisher, you used a Don finisher for the same sound earlier at 00:19:242 (20), would keep consistency.
  2. 00:45:984 (6) - Change to k, The vocalist sounds different here and you can emphasize that since these two notes earlier at 00:45:299 (4,5) are similar.
  3. 00:51:470 (14) - ^, same reasoning as above.
  4. 00:55:585 (19) - ^, same as the reason stated above.
  5. 00:56:956 (22) - ^, same like the reasons shown above.
  6. 00:57:984 (24) - Change to k, it would contrast the two notes at 00:57:642 (23,25) and emphasize the vocals a bit better than regular 1/2 (d,d,d).
  7. 01:05:989 - Inherited Timing Point here is unsnapped, make sure to snap this to 01:05:956, if you're using the 1/4 Beat Snap.
  8. Change to d finisher, the vocalist is loud here and so is the bass here as well.
  9. 01:13:413 (10) - Change to k, it would represent the louder vocals here and the snare drums here as well.
  10. 01:16:842 (1) - Change to K finisher, not sure why you missed this but, you can emphasize the start of the Kiai section and the loud crash sound here.
  11. 01:23:527 (11) - Move this note back to 01:23:356, sound much better here since we're going off of the vocals here and the rhythm kinda abruptly stops here.

[Futsuu]

  1. 01:07:584 (5) - Change to k, sounds better than a regular Don and plus, plays well as it's the opposite of this pattern earlier at 01:05:870 (1,2,3).
  2. 01:16:842 (21) - Change to K finisher, start of the Kiai section and you can show that with a finisher and there's also a loud crash sound here that can be represented.

[Muzukashii]

  1. 00:07:756 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - This little section right here uses Kats way too much and it's a bit boring to play, just adding Dons into this section would make it more fun in variation and as well as sound rhythmically better.
  2. 00:37:584 (138) - Change to d, this would contrast and emphasize the Kats at 00:37:756 (139,140,141) much more and also prevent the overusage of Kats here.
  3. 00:40:670 (154) - ^, same as the reasoning above, just in a different place for the pattern but it still offers variation and sounds better as well.
  4. 01:00:384 (229,230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252) - This section here is just constant 1/2 notes, why not break them up in smaller parts since it's a bit hard to play these patterns at Muzukashii level?
  5. 01:15:470 (41) - This slider end here is unsnapped, make sure to snap the slider end to 01:16:242 if you're using 1/4 Beat Snap.
  6. 01:16:842 (42) - Change to K finisher, emphasizes the start of Kiai section and the synthetic sounds here.
  7. 01:46:499 (182,183,184,185,186,187,188) - Any justification for using all Kats here? I feel like you could of change some of these into Dons and it would sound better and be more fun to play.
  8. 01:54:213 (222) - Change to d, would emphasize the bass here a lot better and add variation into this pattern here.

[Oni]

  1. 01:00:384 (359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383) - Stream is a bit too long for an Oni difficulty, breaking the stream into smaller parts would suffice.
  2. 01:04:499 (394,395,396,397,398,399,400,401,402,403,404,405,406,407,408,409,410) - ^, same as the reason shown above.
  3. 01:05:989 - Inherited Timing Point here is unsnapped, make sure to snap this to 01:05:956, if you're using the 1/4 Beat Snap.

Overall Summary

  1. Quite a lot of inconsistencies and simple mistakes that make executing the mapset's concept a bit hard to show, but with some more mods; this mapset can be better.
Best of endeavors with this mapset.
Thanks for requesting from SΞCTOR #712.
Ellyu
From my q.
Mainly focus on Oni since there are lots of things need to be done.

[Oni]
00:13:156 (75) - delete this since the downbeat is at 00:13:070 (74) - so if you delete it it can emphaszie it better.
00:15:813 (95) - should be k cuz the pitch enhanced on the last note.
00:16:156 (97,98) - add finish to emphasize it better.
00:21:299 (126) - change it to d. a switch of d/k can emphsize the special sounds on 00:21:470 (127,128) -
00:22:756 (133,134,135,136) - 4 circle stream should be used very carefully cuz it is always hard. at here i think dd d or a triplet here better. and you better keep consistence at this portion. most of the time u use triplet so why don't you keep it here.
00:24:128 (143,144,145,146) - same as^
00:23:184 (137,138,139) - dkk is kinda uncommon cuz it always emphasize the first k at it. so ddk better.
00:29:699 (179,180,181) - same as^
00:32:184 (198) - delete this to break the long combo. this stream is almost a inner oni pattern.
00:37:757 (233,234,235,236,237) - kkkkd to emphasize 00:38:099 - better,
00:53:870 - add a circle here. 3/2 gap is to large here.
01:00:384 (358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382) - break it. too long for a oni. and they are extremely hard for a kddk player. it require good balance to hit them.
01:04:499 (393,394,395,396,397,398,399,400,401,402,403,404,405,406,407,408,409) - this one too.
01:18:213 (478,479,480,481,482) - kdd d to emphasize 01:18:556 - better
01:38:099 (599) - this slider too short. and that is very uncommon to see in taiko


_yu68 wrote:

I think that this mapset needs more advice from skilled mappers.
I am sorry to say: yes I totally agree on this. though I am not a very good taiko modder or mapper. the general quality can be polished a lot. especially on higher diffs.
GL
Topic Starter
davidminh0111
Leave blank: Fixed
Red: Not change
Blue: Considering

Voyage wrote:

SΞCTOR #712

NM Request | ✶ | Taiko

Metadata Check

  • Song Title
  1. Change the current Song Title to "Cirno no Perfect Sansuu Kyoushitsu", this is the modified Romanisation with correct English for it.
    Source
  2. Add "東方紅魔郷 ~ the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil." to Source, since this is how the official game title is shown. (The weird hypen spacing is intentional.) I think is Okay to do 東方Project as source
    Tags
  3. Change 東方 Project' to 東方Project in tags, there should be no spacing since that's how the official name is shown and also there's no apostrophe after Project.
  4. Change Touhou to Touhou Koumakyou in tags, this is the romanised translation of 東方紅魔郷.
  5. Add 東方氷雪歌集 in tags, this is the name of the album in Japanese, the song starred in.
  6. Add Cirno's Math Class in tags, this would be the song title in full English.
  7. Add ARM in tags, he arranged the song.
  8. Add 夕野ヨシミ in tags, lyrics were written by them.
  9. Add Yuuno Yoshimi in tags, this is the romanised name of 夕野ヨシミ in English.
  10. Add miko in tags, since she sang as the vocalist.
  11. Add Alternative ending in tags, part of the alias of miko.
  12. Add quim in tags, since he was part of the vocals as the chorus.
  13. Add Team Shanghai Alice in tags, this is the circle that ZUN releases Doujin games/music under.
  14. Add 上海アリス幻樂団 or 上海アリス幻楽団 in tags, Japanese name of Team Shanghai Alice.
  15. Add Otenba Koimusume in tags, romanised translation of the original theme this song was rearranged for.
  16. Add おてんば恋娘 in tags, Japanese name of Otenba Koimusume.
  17. Add Stage 2 Boss Theme in tags, the arrangement of this song was based on this original boss theme for Cirno created by ZUN.
  18. Add IO-0147 in tags, this is the catalog number of the album. (Optional)
  19. Add IO-0191 in tags, catalog number of the album "Grimoire of IOSYS – Touhou BEST ALBUM vol.1", which the song also starred in. (Optional)
Sources used: 東方Project第6弾, 東方氷雪歌集, Touhou Anthology of Ice and Snow, Grimoire of IOSYS – 東方BEST ALBUM vol.1, IOSYS's Discography, the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil, Team Shanghai Alice, Lyrics: チルノのパーフェクトさんすう教室, VGMdb, SoundCloud.

General Suggestions

  • Audio
  1. I'd suggest you get a 192kbps MP3 version of this song since the MP3 you use currently in the Song Folder is 160kbps and the higher bitrate would make the audio experience better. changed
    Unused Hitsounds
  2. You have unused custom Hitsounds in your Song Folder, delete the following: taiko-normal-hitclap.wav, taiko-normal-hitfinish.wav, taiko-normal-hitnormal.wav, taiko-normal-hitwhistle.wav. These custom Hitsounds aren't used since you only used the soft sampleset of the custom Hitsounds you applied for the Inherited Timing Points.
    Inconsistent Values
  3. All of your tags from other difficulties conflict with Muzukashii's tags, make sure to have the same tags for all of the difficulties to keep consistency.
  4. Your Muzukashii difficulty has a different Source compared to the rest of the mapset, make sure the source is "東方紅魔郷 ~ the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil." for all of the difficulties.
  5. Make sure to turn off Widescreen support for all difficulties except Oni, since that difficulty has it unchecked already. Your map doesn't have a storyboard currently so you don't need this option on. You can find it by going to Song Setup > Design > Misc. Toggles > Widescreen Support and toggling that option off for all difficulties except Oni since Oni has it unchecked already.
  6. All difficulties except Kantan and Muzukashii don't actually have the correct 1.40x base SV. You can fix this by going into File > Open osu. in Notepad > Difficulty > Slider Multiplier and changing that decimal number to 1.40x for the base SV. Do this for all difficulties except Kantan and Muzukashii since both of them are correct already.
    Difficulty Settings
  7. Not sure why you have the same difficulty settings for all of the mapset so here's some suggestions: Kantan - OD3 and HP7, Futsuu - OD4 and HP6, Muzukashii - OD5 and HP5, Oni - OD5.5 and HP5, Inner Oni - OD6 and HP6. You can adjust these settings under Song Setup > Difficulty, hold shift for the decimal settings.
    Hitsound Volume
  8. While 100% is applicable as the Hitsound volume for all of your Inherited/Timing Points, I still feel that you can tone it down 95% or 90% even and it still have the same effect since 100% is a bit loud considering it's used throughout the entire song; especially with the custom Hitsounds. Make sure to apply these changes for all of the mapset if you choose to change this.

It's good for 100% custom hitsounds because this sounds are too small [Kantan]

  1. 00:19:927 (22) - Change to D finisher, you used a Don finisher for the same sound earlier at 00:19:242 (20), would keep consistency.
  2. 00:45:984 (6) - Change to k, The vocalist sounds different here and you can emphasize that since these two notes earlier at 00:45:299 (4,5) are similar.
  3. 00:51:470 (14) - ^, same reasoning as above.
  4. 00:55:585 (19) - ^, same as the reason stated above.
  5. 00:56:956 (22) - ^, same like the reasons shown above.
  6. 00:57:984 (24) - Change to k, it would contrast the two notes at 00:57:642 (23,25) and emphasize the vocals a bit better than regular 1/2 (d,d,d).
  7. 01:05:989 - Inherited Timing Point here is unsnapped, make sure to snap this to 01:05:956, if you're using the 1/4 Beat Snap.
  8. Change to d finisher, the vocalist is loud here and so is the bass here as well.
  9. 01:13:413 (10) - Change to k, it would represent the louder vocals here and the snare drums here as well.
  10. 01:16:842 (1) - Change to K finisher, not sure why you missed this but, you can emphasize the start of the Kiai section and the loud crash sound here.
  11. 01:23:527 (11) - Move this note back to 01:23:356, sound much better here since we're going off of the vocals here and the rhythm kinda abruptly stops here. Nah, it sounds much better in red tick

[Futsuu]

  1. 01:07:584 (5) - Change to k, sounds better than a regular Don and plus, plays well as it's the opposite of this pattern earlier at 01:05:870 (1,2,3).
  2. 01:16:842 (21) - Change to K finisher, start of the Kiai section and you can show that with a finisher and there's also a loud crash sound here that can be represented.

[Muzukashii]

  1. 00:07:756 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - This little section right here uses Kats way too much and it's a bit boring to play, just adding Dons into this section would make it more fun in variation and as well as sound rhythmically better.
  2. 00:37:584 (138) - Change to d, this would contrast and emphasize the Kats at 00:37:756 (139,140,141) much more and also prevent the overusage of Kats here.
  3. 00:40:670 (154) - ^, same as the reasoning above, just in a different place for the pattern but it still offers variation and sounds better as well.
  4. 01:00:384 (229,230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252) - This section here is just constant 1/2 notes, why not break them up in smaller parts since it's a bit hard to play these patterns at Muzukashii level?
  5. 01:15:470 (41) - This slider end here is unsnapped, make sure to snap the slider end to 01:16:242 if you're using 1/4 Beat Snap.
  6. 01:16:842 (42) - Change to K finisher, emphasizes the start of Kiai section and the synthetic sounds here.
  7. 01:46:499 (182,183,184,185,186,187,188) - Any justification for using all Kats here? I feel like you could of change some of these into Dons and it would sound better and be more fun to play.
  8. 01:54:213 (222) - Change to d, would emphasize the bass here a lot better and add variation into this pattern here.

[Oni]

  1. 01:00:384 (359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383) - Stream is a bit too long for an Oni difficulty, breaking the stream into smaller parts would suffice.
  2. 01:04:499 (394,395,396,397,398,399,400,401,402,403,404,405,406,407,408,409,410) - ^, same as the reason shown above.
  3. 01:05:989 - Inherited Timing Point here is unsnapped, make sure to snap this to 01:05:956, if you're using the 1/4 Beat Snap.

Overall Summary

  1. Quite a lot of inconsistencies and simple mistakes that make executing the mapset's concept a bit hard to show, but with some more mods; this mapset can be better.
Best of endeavors with this mapset.
Thanks for requesting from SΞCTOR #712.
Thank you so much for this mod, I think I should learn mapping from you OwO

Ellyu wrote:

From my q.
Mainly focus on Oni since there are lots of things need to be done.

[Oni]
00:13:156 (75) - delete this since the downbeat is at 00:13:070 (74) - so if you delete it it can emphaszie it better.
00:15:813 (95) - should be k cuz the pitch enhanced on the last note.
00:16:156 (97,98) - add finish to emphasize it better.
00:21:299 (126) - change it to d. a switch of d/k can emphsize the special sounds on 00:21:470 (127,128) -
00:22:756 (133,134,135,136) - 4 circle stream should be used very carefully cuz it is always hard. at here i think dd d or a triplet here better. and you better keep consistence at this portion. most of the time u use triplet so why don't you keep it here.
00:24:128 (143,144,145,146) - same as^
00:23:184 (137,138,139) - dkk is kinda uncommon cuz it always emphasize the first k at it. so ddk better. It's not about uncommon, it's about how the notes fit the pitch. Btw, fixed that
00:29:699 (179,180,181) - same as^
00:32:184 (198) - delete this to break the long combo. this stream is almost a inner oni pattern.
00:37:757 (233,234,235,236,237) - kkkkd to emphasize 00:38:099 - better,
00:53:870 - add a circle here. 3/2 gap is to large here. No, it's okay :)
01:00:384 (358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382) - break it. too long for a oni. and they are extremely hard for a kddk player. it require good balance to hit them.
01:04:499 (393,394,395,396,397,398,399,400,401,402,403,404,405,406,407,408,409) - this one too.
01:18:213 (478,479,480,481,482) - kdd d to emphasize 01:18:556 - better
01:38:099 (599) - this slider too short. and that is very uncommon to see in taikoStill not uncommon, not about it but have a long vocal here.


_yu68 wrote:

I think that this mapset needs more advice from skilled mappers.
I am sorry to say: yes I totally agree on this. though I am not a very good taiko modder or mapper. the general quality can be polished a lot. especially on higher diffs.
GL
Thank you, thank you so much for modding :) :):):):):)
strickluke
From my queue t/594747

Kantan
  1. 00:03:470 (4) - You could get away with adding a k here to make this part less boring
  2. 00:08:956 (9) - ^
  3. 00:11:699 (10,11,12,13,14,15) - Get rid of all finish hitsounds on these notes, as there is not a sound to make it a big D or K
  4. 00:19:927 (22) - Get rid of the finish hitsound here
  5. 00:21:642 (24,25) - Make this pattern into k D
  6. 00:35:013 (39) - Move this note to here for consistency in patterns 00:34:842 (39) -
  7. 00:43:927 (2) - Make this a D
  8. 00:52:156 (15) - Make this a k for some varation
  9. 00:54:899 (18) - You could get away with making this a D if you want
  10. 00:57:984 (24) - Move this note to 00:59:356 (27) -
  11. If you accepted the previous suggestion, get rid of this finish hitsound 00:59:013 (26) -
  12. 01:00:384 (1) - Have this spinner end here so that there is a 2/1 space between spinner end and a note 01:02:442 (1) -
  13. 01:03:127 (1,2) - I would personally make this pattern like this http://puu.sh/vWIKT/68fe9390e7.jpg
  14. 01:08:099 (3) - Move this note to 01:07:756 (3) - , as it is a rhythm that the player is used to from earlier patterns
  15. 01:11:013 (6) - Move this note to 01:10:499 (6) - for the reasons above, and change this note to k
  16. 01:13:756 (11) - Delete this note
  17. 01:11:356 (7,8,9,10) - Have all of these notes be on the white ticks and are evenly spaced (ex: http://puu.sh/vWIUn/a51ed9137f.jpg)
  18. 01:22:327 (9,10,11,12) - Weird rhythms like these are not good in Kantan diffs. I would recommend changing this to use more white ticks in the pattern
  19. 01:29:184 (20,21) - Get rid of these finish hitsounds, as you just did a bunch before this part of the song
  20. 01:34:670 (27) - The music does not really call for a finish hitsound right here
  21. 01:36:042 (1) - Have this spinner end on the white tick before where it currently ends so that there is a 2/1 space
  22. 01:42:898 (4) - Make this k for some variation
  23. 01:48:384 (8) - ^
  24. 01:53:870 (15) - ^

I am looking at the rest of the difficulties and I have noticed that, unfortunately, a lot of the diffs have very similar problems to the Kantan difficulty. I would suggest applying a lot of the same mistakes to your other difficulties.

One of the main problems that I see a problem in is a bunch of D's and K's in weird spots.

Another main problem is general inconsistency in patterns.

Good luck on this mapset! :D
Topic Starter
davidminh0111
Leave blank: Fixed
Red: not change

strickluke wrote:

From my queue t/594747

Kantan
  1. 00:03:470 (4) - You could get away with adding a k here to make this part less boring
  2. 00:08:956 (9) - ^
  3. 00:11:699 (10,11,12,13,14,15) - Get rid of all finish hitsounds on these notes, as there is not a sound to make it a big D or K
  4. 00:19:927 (22) - Get rid of the finish hitsound here
  5. 00:21:642 (24,25) - Make this pattern into k D since there is a strong emphasis at
    and calm part at d so I'm not gonna change it
  6. 00:35:013 (39) - Move this note to here for consistency in patterns 00:34:842 (39) - I know is consistency but like _yu68 said is don't put like that, too complex for beginners
  7. 00:43:927 (2) - Make this a D Not a strong emphasis so no.
  8. 00:52:156 (15) - Make this a k for some varation
  9. 00:54:899 (18) - You could get away with making this a D if you want -_.- no thanks
  10. 00:57:984 (24) - Move this note to 00:59:356 (27) -
  11. If you accepted the previous suggestion, get rid of this finish hitsound 00:59:013 (26) -
  12. 01:00:384 (1) - Have this spinner end here so that there is a 2/1 space between spinner end and a note 01:02:442 (1) -
  13. 01:03:127 (1,2) - I would personally make this pattern like this http://puu.sh/vWIKT/68fe9390e7.jpg
  14. 01:08:099 (3) - Move this note to 01:07:756 (3) - , as it is a rhythm that the player is used to from earlier patterns
  15. 01:11:013 (6) - Move this note to 01:10:499 (6) - for the reasons above, and change this note to k
  16. 01:13:756 (11) - Delete this note No because there's a vocal there
  17. 01:11:356 (7,8,9,10) - Have all of these notes be on the white ticks and are evenly spaced (ex: http://puu.sh/vWIUn/a51ed9137f.jpg)) Hmm.. I should ignore this because there's something that should be follow the vocal/color]
  18. 01:22:327 (9,10,11,12) - Weird rhythms like these are not good in Kantan diffs. I would recommend changing this to use more white ticks in the pattern
  19. 01:29:184 (20,21) - Get rid of these finish hitsounds, as you just did a bunch before this part of the song
  20. 01:34:670 (27) - The music does not really call for a finish hitsound right here
  21. 01:36:042 (1) - Have this spinner end on the white tick before where it currently ends so that there is a 2/1 space
  22. 01:42:898 (4) - Make this for some variation
  23. 01:48:384 (8) - ^
  24. 01:53:870 (15) - ^

I am looking at the rest of the difficulties and I have noticed that, unfortunately, a lot of the diffs have very similar problems to the Kantan difficulty. I would suggest applying a lot of the same mistakes to your other difficulties.

One of the main problems that I see a problem in is a bunch of D's and K's in weird spots.

Another main problem is general inconsistency in patterns.

Good luck on this mapset! :D
Thank for your mod very much
HomieLove
Eh, if you want to use 東方Project as a source instead of the actual game then at least remove the spacing between "東方" and "Project" to match with the ranked maps. As it is now, the source is wrong.

Edit: 東方Project is still perfectly rankable as source afaik. Since you added special BG's for each diff, put a warning like "Redownload if you downloaded before 04.06.2017", and make sure to change coordinates for all of them to look better when playing.

No kds of course.
Diva Days


[ Futsuu]

00:12:384 (19) - don't understand why u add finish here.
00:15:127 (23) - ^
00:17:870 (29) - u added finish on (25), so why not here?
00:20:270 (34) - ^ as (32)
00:20:613 (35) - better change to k
00:21:642 (36) - (37) have finish sound but why add finish here?
00:24:727 -
00:28:842 (51) - this ain't jumpscare game.
00:30:213 (54) - ^
00:54:042 (27) - want to keep finish on (28), change it to d
01:14:099 (18),(19) - no finish? what's that you want to add finish lol
01:16:842 - kiai time is easier than 00:21:984 this part.. and next part
01:18:213 - 01:29:184 (44) isn't K but why here is K?
01:31:927 (48) - :/
01:57:984 (98) - huge break, so why not slider or spin here?

[ Muzukashii]

i just opened, there's not much 1/2 breaks... what?

https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Muzukashii

no kds to me, i just skipped mod to Muzu.
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

Diva Days wrote:



[ Futsuu]

00:12:384 (19) - don't understand why u add finish here. Fixed
00:15:127 (23) - ^ Fixed
00:17:870 (29) - u added finish on (25), so why not here? Ok
00:20:270 (34) - ^ as (32) Calm part here, no change
00:20:613 (35) - better change to k Slow down the song and you will get why did i choose d not k. No change
00:21:642 (36) - (37) have finish sound but why add finish here? This part is quite calm here so... No change
00:24:727 - Fixed lul
00:28:842 (51) - this ain't jumpscare game. .....
00:30:213 (54) - ^ ^ I get it, the Finish here is too close to the normal note. But I think these parts have a high pitch I think. I will think about that later. :)
00:54:042 (27) - want to keep finish on (28), change it to d High pitch and easier for Futsuu players
01:14:099 (18),(19) - no finish? what's that you want to add finish lol I don't want to add finish all the places. At first I wasn't a skilled mapper here so I add Drum randomly. But this is a calm part so no change, Diva
01:16:842 - kiai time is easier than 00:21:984 this part.. and next part Ughhh... what do you mean ?
01:18:213 - 01:29:184 (44) isn't K but why here is K? I will remove the K here since there isn't a very high pitch. : )
01:31:927 (48) - :/ :/
01:57:984 (98) - huge break, so why not slider or spin here? Added

[Muzukashii]

i just opened, there's not much 1/2 breaks... what? At first, this is a high BPM music so there isn't much 1/2 breaks you know. I will think about it later Why is osu! so complicated lul

https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Muzukashii

no kds to me, i just skipped mod to Muzu.I don't care. You deserve it.Don't tell the BN to deny it jk lul
Thanks for your mod, Diva.
And thanks for the meta. fix. Greenshell.
Kith190
Hi NM as asked here
General
In taiko mapping you have to deselect "Enable countdown" and "Widescreen support" in Song Setup > Design
Kantan
why don't you put a k here 00:22:499 - and here 00:25:242 - as you have done here 00:23:870 - ?
same thing in those places :
00:27:984 -
00:27:984 -
00:33:470 -
00:36:213 -
00:38:956 -
than moving this one 00:35:013 - to here 00:34:842 -
this one 01:00:727 - starts here 01:00:384 -
to be coherent you should put a d here 01:09:127 - OR remove this one 01:11:870 -
Futsuu
what about putting a k here 00:10:156 - ?
from here 00:21:642 - to here 00:25:584 - i don't get the melody... I think you should do sometehing like:
from this

to this

or something similar
same thing here 00:27:470 - and here 00:32:956 - cause those parts have the same melody but are mapped in different way.. It could be me but I think this part needs a little rework; a newbie blayer wouldn't be able to get the rythm in this way I suppose
01:11:699 - change to k (?)
Muzukashii
this diff is already ok ;D, maybe some more pauses
Oni
00:11:870 - change to k
00:12:214 (66,67) - control + g
00:27:470 - change to k
00:32:784 - change to d
00:39:642 - change to d
why this note 00:40:413 - is not here 00:40:327 - ?
01:08:613 - control + g
01:25:413 - change to k (not sure)
01:34:670 (564,565,566,567,568,569,570) - from kkkkkkk to kkddkkd
01:43:670 - change to k (?)
Inner Oni
00:03:127 - change to k
00:38:099 - change to d (?) the sound is right with k but I think that d would be cooler to play, so you chose
for the rest I think it's quite ok
SUMMIT

- Futsuu needs to be fixed a lot
- Muzu and Inner are ok
- For a better star gap you should make kantan a little easier
- "Widescreen support" has to be deselected in all diffs
- I suggest you not to waste kudosu, you can get a map ranked even with few kudosu, you need mods.

Maybe this mapset will need some more mods. Anyway Good Luck for ranking!!!
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

Kith190 wrote:

Hi NM as asked here
General
In taiko mapping you have to deselect "Enable countdown" and "Widescreen support" in Song Setup > Design
Kantan
why don't you put a k here 00:22:499 - and here 00:25:242 - as you have done here 00:23:870 - ? Added
same thing in those places :
00:27:984 - Added
00:27:984 - Added
00:33:470 - Added
00:36:213 - Added
00:38:956 - Added
than moving this one 00:35:013 - to here 00:34:842 - Fixed
this one 01:00:727 - starts here 01:00:384 - Fixed
to be coherent you should put a d here 01:09:127 - OR remove this one 01:11:870 -Removed the second one

Futsuu
what about putting a k here 00:10:156 - ? Added
from here 00:21:642 - to here 00:25:584 - i don't get the melody... I think you should do sometehing like:
from this

to this

or something similar Fixed
same thing here 00:27:470 - and here 00:32:956 - cause those parts have the same melody but are mapped in different way.. It could be me but I think this part needs a little rework; a newbie blayer wouldn't be able to get the rythm in this way I suppose Fixed
01:11:699 - change to k (?) Added
Muzukashii
this diff is already ok ;D, maybe some more pauses
Oni
00:11:870 - change to k Fixed
00:12:214 (66,67) - control + g It seems there is a high pitch in 00:12:384 and calm part at 00:12:213 . So I'm not gonna change them
00:27:470 - change to k Fixed
00:32:784 - change to d Fixed
00:39:642 - change to d Fixed
why this note 00:40:413 - is not here 00:40:327 - ? Oops, made a mistake when mapping. Fixed (SORRY!)/color]
01:08:613 - control + g
01:25:413 - change to k (not sure) Ok not sure no change lul (because low pitch here)
01:34:670 (564,565,566,567,568,569,570) - from kkkkkkk to kkddkkd Ok
01:43:670 - change to k (?)Fixed
Inner Oni
00:03:127 - change to k Calm part here so no change
00:38:099 - change to d (?) the sound is right with k but I think that d would be cooler to play, so you chose
for the rest I think it's quite ok k will be better
SUMMIT

- Futsuu needs to be fixed a lot
- Muzu and Inner are ok
- For a better star gap you should make kantan a little easier
- "Widescreen support" has to be deselected in all diffs
- I suggest you not to waste kudosu, you can get a map ranked even with few kudosu, you need mods. Okey

Maybe this mapset will need some more mods. Anyway Good Luck for ranking!!!
Thank you for the mod
Ak1o
Hi! Here from mod queue!
Going to mod Muzukashii and Inner Oni as requested.

[Muzukashii]

I found this diff mostly inconsistent with many misplaced finishers that doesn't seem to fit the song. I haven't looked in the other diffs yet, but I guess you need still quite a bit of mods if you want to get this mapset ranked.

  1. 00:01:413 (6) - This finisher seems very misplaced, so please remove it.
  2. 00:05:870 (18,19,20,21) - Why is this different from the doubles before (00:00:384 (2,3,4,5) - 00:01:755 (7,8,9,10) -)? There is no need to change them since the song is the same here.
  3. 00:09:471 (33) - Change to d so it can follow the pitch of the melody better.
  4. 00:11:356 (5,6,7,8,9) - Since you are mapping mostly to voice and melody, this pattern doesn't fit very well in here imo. Either ctrl+g 00:11:356 (5,6) - or move 00:11:356 (5) - to 00:11:527 - and delete 00:11:527 (6) - , but there may still be better options than that I'd say.
  5. 00:13:756 (19) - Again, no reason yet to put a finisher here already.
  6. 00:15:127 (24) - Same as before.
  7. 00:16:499 (31) - Now it's even indicated in the song. so why doesn't this note have a finish hitsound?
  8. 00:19:070 (44) - Change to d so the next note has more impact.
  9. 00:21:642 (55) - I wouldn't put a finisher here yet, although maybe I get why you did it. Either switch it with 00:21:984 (56) - or remove the finish sound completly (better), so the voice is not overaccentuated.
  10. Green line at 00:22:005 - needs to be changed to 00:21:984 - so this note 00:21:984 (56) - is snapped to the barline.
  11. 00:27:470 (85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95) - I don't get why this is different from 00:21:984 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66) -, please unify them.
  12. 00:31:413 (105) - d because melody with high notes only starts at the next note.
  13. 00:33:813 (118,119,120,121,122,123,124) - Again, unify this as before please.
  14. 00:39:642 (148) - Change to k so it matches previous patterns.
  15. 00:40:670 (153,154) - Ctrl+g, the pitch of the melody is going the other way.
  16. 00:47:184 (180,181) - Ctrl+g so you mirror 00:45:299 (172,173,174,175,176) - and follow the pitch of the voice again.
  17. 00:47:699 (182) - d bc of voice pitch.
  18. 00:49:584 - You could put a d here, since you used triplets before. It would help with the flow of the voice again.
  19. 00:50:784 (192,193,194,195,196) - Change this so it matches with previous patterns. I suggest a k here 00:51:042 -, change 00:51:127 (194) - to k and ctrl+g 00:51:299 (195,196) -.
  20. 01:09:984 (16) - This is a very calm part so no finisher here please, even if the song indicates it.
  21. Green line at 01:16:842 - needs to be changed to 01:16:841 - so the note is snapped onto the barline again.
  22. 01:17:184 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49) - Change that section to be exactly as 01:28:327 (93,94,95,96,97,98) -, there is no difference between them.
  23. 01:18:213 (49) - No finisher needed here.
  24. 01:30:042 (101) - Move to 01:29:699 - and change to k so it matches the pattern of the first half in the Kiai.
  25. 01:31:413 (107,108) - Ctrl+g to match voice pitch and patterning as before.
  26. Unify 01:21:299 (62,63,64) - and 01:32:270 (111,112,113,114) - because there is no difference again.
  27. Unify 01:21:984 (65,66) - and 01:32:956 (115,116) - for the same reason.
  28. 01:34:242 (120) - This triplet makes no sense, remove it or change 01:33:813 (117,118,119,120,121) - to this.
  29. 01:38:784 (143) - Recolor to match 00:21:984 (56,57,58,59) - and so on.
  30. 01:44:099 (171,172) - Ctrl+g and 01:44:613 (174) - to d so the pattern fits again (like in 00:21:984 (56,57,58,59) - )
  31. 01:45:127 (176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189) - Change both to match 00:22:842 (60,61,62,63,64,65,66) - OR only change 01:45:127 (176,177,178,179,180,181,182) - to match 01:46:499 (183,184,185,186,187,188,189) - for consistency.
  32. 01:49:756 (201,202,203) - Change to match 00:21:984 (56,57,58,59) - again.
  33. 01:59:184 (246) - and 00:42:384 (160) - need to be same color, what you choose is up to you.
If this seems too destructive to you I am very sorry, but I wanted to change your diff to be more intuitive for most players that aren't that good yet.


[Inner Oni]

Most speedups seem inconsistent and sloppy, many issues I found were also in the previous diff I modded.

  1. 00:01:242 (7,14) - Melody is the same here, so I'd suggest you unify these notes.
  2. 00:13:756 (79) - No finisher needed here yet.
  3. Place green line at 00:17:013 - to 00:16:499 - since that is the point where your next bar begins; mid-bar SV changes are very inconvenient.
  4. 00:19:070 (114) - Change to d again so the note after it gets more impact.
  5. 00:19:242 - 00:21:984 - This speedup section needs a complete rework, you have to make it smoother and more consistent overall. Also make sure it doesn't change too abruptly from 2.0x to 1.1x, try 1.5x to 1.1x instead.
  6. 00:21:299 (127) - Change to d to match voice pitch.
  7. 00:21:642 (129) - Same reason I gave you in Muzukashii.
    1. 00:21:984 - 00:26:099 - I recommend to rework this part to make it consistent in itself, there are three quarters that sound exactly the same where it seems you put notes almost indiscriminately.
    2. 00:27:470 - 00:31:584 - If compared to the last section you can see more clearly what was mapped to. I would still remove the 1/6 since they don't fit in the song at all and adjust the previous section to this one.
    3. 00:32:956 - 00:37:070 - Again, please unify this section with the previous ones so it is more intuitive to play.
  8. 00:59:870 (395,396,397,398,399) - Instead of having a 1/4 stream here I would accentuate this part with finishers as you did in 00:55:927 (366) - and 00:57:127 (375,376) - .
  9. 01:02:699 - Add k and change 01:02:784 (427) - to d to make the stream flow better.
  10. 01:04:499 - 01:05:870 - Add some more SV changes to make the slowdown more smooth, so the note at 01:05:870 (455) - doesn't seem invisible until the last moment.
  11. 01:12:384 - Really unnecessary speedup, remove it please.
  12. 01:14:099 - 01:16:327 - Those 1/6ths are not fun to play as they don't fit in the song at all. Smooth them out to be 1/4ths please.
  13. 01:18:213 (544) - No finisher hitsound needed here.
  14. 01:19:584 (557) - Same here...
  15. 01:23:356 (580) - here...
  16. 01:27:127 (601) - and here.
  17. 01:35:184 (659,661) - Ctrl+g to smooth out the stream, since the current pattern doesn't fit the song.
  18. 01:36:042 - 01:37:413 - If you want a speedup at this part just put a green line a the beginning of it. No need for multiple changes here.
  19. I also recommend to check out the next parts and compare them to 00:21:984 - 00:37:070 - since most of it is identical.
    1. 01:38:784 - 01:42:899 -
    2. 01:44:270 - 01:48:384 -
    3. 01:49:756 - 01:53:870 -
I really hope you don't start hating me for this, since this is just an opinion of how I see how to make your maps better. I say so because I addressed many points here, some of which you maybe chose for a good reason, yet I found it difficult to follow some of your patterns throughout their (in)consistency. Be sure to find more people looking at this mapset, since this would improve it overall and make it better.

I still hope I could help you with this mod, and wish you good luck with ranking it!
Topic Starter
davidminh0111
No comment = Fixed (I'm too lazy to write fix)
Red = No change

Ak1o wrote:

Hi! Here from mod queue!
Going to mod Muzukashii and Inner Oni as requested.

[Muzukashii]

I found this diff mostly inconsistent with many misplaced finishers that doesn't seem to fit the song. I haven't looked in the other diffs yet, but I guess you need still quite a bit of mods if you want to get this mapset ranked.

  1. 00:01:413 (6) - This finisher seems very misplaced, so please remove it.
  2. 00:05:870 (18,19,20,21) - Why is this different from the doubles before (00:00:384 (2,3,4,5) - 00:01:755 (7,8,9,10) -)? There is no need to change them since the song is the same here.
  3. 00:09:471 (33) - Change to d so it can follow the pitch of the melody better.
  4. 00:11:356 (5,6,7,8,9) - Since you are mapping mostly to voice and melody, this pattern doesn't fit very well in here imo. Either ctrl+g 00:11:356 (5,6) - or move 00:11:356 (5) - to 00:11:527 - and delete 00:11:527 (6) - , but there may still be better options than that I'd say.I got your idea but this vocal an melody here is fit the pitch and flow better Imo. No change
  5. 00:13:756 (19) - Again, no reason yet to put a finisher here already.
  6. 00:15:127 (24) - Same as before.
  7. 00:16:499 (31) - Now it's even indicated in the song. so why doesn't this note have a finish hitsound?
  8. 00:19:070 (44) - Change to d so the next note has more impact.
  9. 00:21:642 (55) - I wouldn't put a finisher here yet, although maybe I get why you did it. Either switch it with 00:21:984 (56) - or remove the finish sound completly (better), so the voice is not overaccentuated.
  10. Green line at 00:22:005 - needs to be changed to 00:21:984 - so this note 00:21:984 (56) - is snapped to the barline.
  11. 00:27:470 (85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95) - I don't get why this is different from 00:21:984 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66) -, please unify them.
  12. 00:31:413 (105) - d because melody with high notes only starts at the next note.
  13. 00:33:813 (118,119,120,121,122,123,124) - Again, unify this as before please.
  14. 00:39:642 (148) - Change to k so it matches previous patterns.
  15. 00:40:670 (153,154) - Ctrl+g, the pitch of the melody is going the other way.
  16. 00:47:184 (180,181) - Ctrl+g so you mirror 00:45:299 (172,173,174,175,176) - and follow the pitch of the voice again.
  17. 00:47:699 (182) - d bc of voice pitch.
  18. 00:49:584 - You could put a d here, since you used triplets before. It would help with the flow of the voice again.
  19. 00:50:784 (192,193,194,195,196) - Change this so it matches with previous patterns. I suggest a k here 00:51:042 -, change 00:51:127 (194) - to k and ctrl+g 00:51:299 (195,196) -.
  20. 01:09:984 (16) - This is a very calm part so no finisher here please, even if the song indicates it.
  21. Green line at 01:16:842 - needs to be changed to 01:16:841 - so the note is snapped onto the barline again.
  22. 01:17:184 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49) - Change that section to be exactly as 01:28:327 (93,94,95,96,97,98) -, there is no difference between them.errr, The previous part of the music seems to be flow better. No change
  23. 01:18:213 (49) - No finisher needed here.
  24. 01:30:042 (101) - Move to 01:29:699 - and change to k so it matches the pattern of the first half in the Kiai.
  25. 01:31:413 (107,108) - Ctrl+g to match voice pitch and patterning as before.
  26. Unify 01:21:299 (62,63,64) - and 01:32:270 (111,112,113,114) - because there is no difference again.
  27. Unify 01:21:984 (65,66) - and 01:32:956 (115,116) - for the same reason.
  28. 01:34:242 (120) - This triplet makes no sense, remove it or change 01:33:813 (117,118,119,120,121) - to this.
  29. 01:38:784 (143) - Recolor to match 00:21:984 (56,57,58,59) - and so on.
  30. 01:44:099 (171,172) - Ctrl+g and 01:44:613 (174) - to d so the pattern fits again (like in 00:21:984 (56,57,58,59) - )
  31. 01:45:127 (176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189) - Change both to match 00:22:842 (60,61,62,63,64,65,66) - OR only change 01:45:127 (176,177,178,179,180,181,182) - to match 01:46:499 (183,184,185,186,187,188,189) - for consistency.
  32. 01:49:756 (201,202,203) - Change to match 00:21:984 (56,57,58,59) - again.
  33. 01:59:184 (246) - and 00:42:384 (160) - need to be same color, what you choose is up to you.
If this seems too destructive to you I am very sorry, but I wanted to change your diff to be more intuitive for most players that aren't that good yet.


[Inner Oni]

Most speedups seem inconsistent and sloppy, many issues I found were also in the previous diff I modded.

  1. 00:01:242 (7,14) - Melody is the same here, so I'd suggest you unify these notes.
  2. 00:13:756 (79) - No finisher needed here yet.
  3. Place green line at 00:17:013 - to 00:16:499 - since that is the point where your next bar begins; mid-bar SV changes are very inconvenient.
  4. 00:19:070 (114) - Change to d again so the note after it gets more impact.
  5. 00:19:242 - 00:21:984 - This speedup section needs a complete rework, you have to make it smoother and more consistent overall. Also make sure it doesn't change too abruptly from 2.0x to 1.1x, try 1.5x to 1.1x instead.
  6. 00:21:299 (127) - Change to d to match voice pitch.
  7. 00:21:642 (129) - Same reason I gave you in Muzukashii.
    1. 00:21:984 - 00:26:099 - I recommend to rework this part to make it consistent in itself, there are three quarters that sound exactly the same where it seems you put notes almost indiscriminately.
    2. 00:27:470 - 00:31:584 - If compared to the last section you can see more clearly what was mapped to. I would still remove the 1/6 since they don't fit in the song at all and adjust the previous section to this one.
    3. 00:32:956 - 00:37:070 - Again, please unify this section with the previous ones so it is more intuitive to play.
  8. 00:59:870 (395,396,397,398,399) - Instead of having a 1/4 stream here I would accentuate this part with finishers as you did in 00:55:927 (366) - and 00:57:127 (375,376) - . It'd be rough for the advanced Players. No change
  9. 01:02:699 - Add k and change 01:02:784 (427) - to d to make the stream flow better.
  10. 01:04:499 - 01:05:870 - Add some more SV changes to make the slowdown more smooth, so the note at 01:05:870 (455) - doesn't seem invisible until the last moment.
  11. 01:12:384 - Really unnecessary speedup, remove it please.
  12. 01:14:099 - 01:16:327 - Those 1/6ths are not fun to play as they don't fit in the song at all. Smooth them out to be 1/4ths please.
  13. 01:18:213 (544) - No finisher hitsound needed here.
  14. 01:19:584 (557) - Same here...
  15. 01:23:356 (580) - here...
  16. 01:27:127 (601) - and here.
  17. 01:35:184 (659,661) - Ctrl+g to smooth out the stream, since the current pattern doesn't fit the song.
  18. 01:36:042 - 01:37:413 - If you want a speedup at this part just put a green line a the beginning of it. No need for multiple changes here.
  19. I also recommend to check out the next parts and compare them to 00:21:984 - 00:37:070 - since most of it is identical.
    1. 01:38:784 - 01:42:899 -
    2. 01:44:270 - 01:48:384 -
    3. 01:49:756 - 01:53:870 -
I really hope you don't start hating me for this, since this is just an opinion of how I see how to make your maps better. I say so because I addressed many points here, some of which you maybe chose for a good reason, yet I found it difficult to follow some of your patterns throughout their (in)consistency. Be sure to find more people looking at this mapset, since this would improve it overall and make it better.

I still hope I could help you with this mod, and wish you good luck with ranking it!
Thanks for your mod
Nifty
Oh man here we go

- Oni -
00:02:784 (15) - I'm gonna fix up this beginning little area. Change this to k, and 00:03:642 (20) - this to d. Work better with what's you're mapping (I assume is the piano thing)

00:05:184 (29) - change to k to stay consistent with Inner and cause it makes sense.

00:10:156 (55) - remove finisher, this isn't an accented note.

00:11:356 (60) - remove, the only sound here is a tiny blip in my right ear.

00:14:099 (79) - remove again, no sound

00:15:213 (85) - I don't like this whole stream as I don't think it should be in an Oni, but if you're gonna do anything remove this note because there's no sound.

00:16:327 - add k because... there's a sound here, and you're mapping vocals kinda.

00:17:699 (100,101) - ctrl-g, pitch makes more sense that way.

00:19:756 (113) - change to d for pitch

00:24:299 (143) - delete this and make 00:24:214 (142) - a k so it actually fits the music

Ok so if I keep going this mod is going to be 3 forum pages long, so I'll just say this: Just listen closely. Your biggest mistakes so far are mapping things that aren't there and mapping pitches that conflict with what you put for the the same pitches later on. Be mindful of what notes you're putting down and remember that you map is played as an entire thing, not just small parts than can be maneuvered and conflict with each other however they would like.

Stay away from repeated notes like you have at the beginning, since usually the map doesn't demand those to be there and you can be flexible on what pitches are put. You want to create a rhythm in your map, so in everything you put down, there has to be a pattern of some sort. Preferably mimicking the pattern of the music, but sometimes you can get away with improvisation.

If you combine follow those rules - listening closer and creating a rhythm - you should be able to make a map that I can write less than what I just wrote here on. When you're putting these things into action, it's kinda like following a strict rhythm, but manipulating it to fit the music's attributes and such with filler notes, emphasis spaces, and other types of modifications that are used to make good maps.

- Kantan -
Apply the paragraphs above to this, but a lot simpler.

I would recommend the "baka baka" to be mapped alternating k_k and d_d, so that the first baka baka is k_k, the second is d_d and the third is k_k, and so on.

Make 00:41:184 (1) - this spinner into a slider that ends at 00:42:556 - because beginners get confused with spinners.

00:59:699 (27) - no finisher, not an accented note.

01:00:384 (1) - same as before, but end it at 01:02:442 - .

01:04:499 (1) - same, but end it at 01:05:184 - .

01:23:699 (12) - delet dis and make 01:23:699 (12) - a k so it fits.

Add d 01:24:042 - here and 01:24:642 - here and 01:25:756 - here

Fix the rest of the spinners, see what I'm getting at with my changes and listen to the music.

Hope I could help ^^
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

Nifty wrote:

Oh man here we go

- Oni -
00:02:784 (15) - I'm gonna fix up this beginning little area. Change this to k, and 00:03:642 (20) - this to d. Work better with what's you're mapping (I assume is the piano thing) I think it's flow better

00:05:184 (29) - change to k to stay consistent with Inner and cause it makes sense. Ok

00:10:156 (55) - remove finisher, this isn't an accented note. Removed

00:11:356 (60) - remove, the only sound here is a tiny blip in my right ear. It connects to the next vocal of the music so it's okay

00:14:099 (79) - remove again, no sound^

00:15:213 (85) - I don't like this whole stream as I don't think it should be in an Oni, but if you're gonna do anything remove this note because there's no sound. Removed a note at 00:15:384

00:16:327 - add k because... there's a sound here, and you're mapping vocals kinda. What? I don't hear anything (maybe I'm deaf)

00:17:699 (100,101) - ctrl-g, pitch makes more sense that way. Fixed

00:19:756 (113) - change to d for pitch. Fixed

00:24:299 (143) - delete this and make 00:24:214 (142) - a k so it actually fits the music Removed a note at 00:24:127 and changed to k

Ok so if I keep going this mod is going to be 3 forum pages long, so I'll just say this: Just listen closely. Your biggest mistakes so far are mapping things that aren't there and mapping pitches that conflict with what you put for the the same pitches later on. Be mindful of what notes you're putting down and remember that you map is played as an entire thing, not just small parts than can be maneuvered and conflict with each other however they would like.

Stay away from repeated notes like you have at the beginning, since usually the map doesn't demand those to be there and you can be flexible on what pitches are put. You want to create a rhythm in your map, so in everything you put down, there has to be a pattern of some sort. Preferably mimicking the pattern of the music, but sometimes you can get away with improvisation.

If you combine follow those rules - listening closer and creating a rhythm - you should be able to make a map that I can write less than what I just wrote here on. When you're putting these things into action, it's kinda like following a strict rhythm, but manipulating it to fit the music's attributes and such with filler notes, emphasis spaces, and other types of modifications that are used to make good maps. Ok

- Kantan -
Apply the paragraphs above to this, but a lot simpler.

I would recommend the "baka baka" to be mapped alternating k_k and d_d, so that the first baka baka is k_k, the second is d_d and the third is k_k, and so on. Well, maybe I'll follow my idea is better.

Make 00:41:184 (1) - this spinner into a slider that ends at 00:42:556 - because beginners get confused with spinners. Ok

00:59:699 (27) - no finisher, not an accented note.Removed

01:00:384 (1) - same as before, but end it at 01:02:442 - . Fixed but end in 01:02:784

01:04:499 (1) - same, but end it at 01:05:184 - . ^ End at 01:05:527

01:23:699 (12) - delet dis and make 01:23:699 (12) - a k so it fits. Okey

Add d 01:24:042 - here and 01:24:642 - here and 01:25:756 - here Added

Fix the rest of the spinners, see what I'm getting at with my changes and listen to the music.

Hope I could help ^^ You helped meh.
Thanks for your mod
frukoyurdakul
Hello, M4M request throught your queue.

[Inner Oni]

There is some kind of bug occured on your diff. Please fix it as 1.40.



Before I say anything about this difficulty, I'd like to specify some general points. The SV changes are not smooth, sometimes it overlaps with measure bar etc... I'm gonna speak about SV changes on this diff now.

00:19:584 (116,117,118,119) - For these 4 notes, on first 2 the SV increase is 0.20x, and on the other 2 it's 0.10x, so I recommend moving the inherited points 1/4 snap further, for example 00:19:756 (117) - move this one to 00:19:927 - here, 00:20:099 (119) - this one to 00:20:270 - here, remove 00:21:127 - this one, 00:21:470 (128) - use 1.80x here and remove 00:21:642 (129) - this one. If you really need to use a SV change here, my way is better because it looks too weird right now, it's not smooth.

00:21:984 - I have no reason to use 1.10x here, the notes are coming too fast and on gameplay 00:21:642 (129,130) - these two are too hard to read. Please change it to 1.00x, it'll look better this way.

01:04:499 - Remove this SV change, it also overlaps too much with the previous note.

01:05:870 - Change the SV 01:06:042 - here instead. Changing SV on 1/4 snapping looks too weird if it's not smooth. In this case, it's not so I believe you should give a 1/2 break by moving the point to 01:06:042.

01:16:670 (521) - Again, this note overlaps with 01:16:842 (522) - this one and the bar line is not coming on the note, so add 01:16:756 - 1.00x inherited point here with no kiai, and delete 01:16:670 (521) - this note.

01:36:042 - Move this inherited point 1/4 snap back and 01:37:413 - change this one to 1.00x.

01:59:870 - These two are totally unexpected and coming too fast. Instead, move this point to 02:00:384 - here and change it's value to 1.60x.

Now, for the structure part.

There are no difference on your kat finisher special sounds and normal kat sounds. Remember fixing it.

I didn't understand your mapping style. 00:07:756 - For example, you've skipped all of the drum sounds on this pattern and yet 00:11:699 - overmapped this one. Don't know how to fix it, so figure something out about it.

00:13:156 (75) - Delete this note, the keyboard sounds end on 00:13:070 (74) - this.

00:15:213 (86) - Delete this one and 00:15:299 (87,90) - change these ones to kat. It will emphasize the keyboards better.

00:26:699 (164) - Change this one to kat and 00:26:784 (165) - move this one to 00:26:870 - here.

00:29:699 (183,184,185,186) - There are literally no reason to put 1/6 here.

00:30:470 (191,192) - Swap these two and 00:30:384 (190) - delete this one. Better emphasize on keyboard-ish sound.

00:32:956 - This part is mostly the same due to the sounds with 00:21:984 - this part and yet you mapped them completely different. Consider changing one to other, otherwise your diff will not be consistent.

00:45:299 (291,292,293,294,295,296,297) - 7-plet pattern for this calm part is way too long. Try using 1-3-1 by deleting 00:45:384 (292,296) - these two.

00:49:413 (321,322,323,324,325,326) - I recommend kdkkd k here. Fits vocal better.

00:50:956 (330,331,332) - kkk, 00:51:213 (333,335) - remove these two and 00:51:299 (334) - change to don. Same reason as above.

00:53:870 (347,348) - Make them dons, 00:54:213 (349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357) - kddkddkdk. Follows keyboard in best way.

00:58:156 (378,379) - No reason for keeping them 1/2, add a don 00:58:242 - here to fit the vocals since you are following them.

00:59:613 (390) - kat, 00:59:699 (391) - move 1/4 snap further ( 00:59:784 - ) to fit the drums.

01:04:927 (442,443) - Ctrl + g, 01:05:613 (450,452) - make them kats. The first one will support the keyboards and 2nd one follows drums better.

01:06:213 (455,456,457) - Too many for calm part. Don't use triplets here, 01:06:299 (456) - delete this one. This comment applies for others as well.

01:13:499 (495,497) - Delete, 01:13:584 (496,499) - make them kats. Your pattern does not following anything correctly, so if you apply it it'll follow the drums a bit.

01:15:470 (510,511,512,513,514,515,516,517,518) - kdkkkdkkk, better with keyboard sounds.

01:17:442 (527) - Pattern is too long, delete this one to create a better flow.

01:18:984 (542) - ^

01:21:127 (557,558,559,560,561,562,563) - kdkkddk, as mentioned earlier for the same sound.

01:22:670 - Snare sound, add a kat here.

01:25:327 - Add a kat here and make 01:25:584 (584) - this kat to fit the vocals better.

01:26:013 - Same applies for this spot and 588.

01:27:127 (591,592,593,594) - Instead of k d k d, I recommend kdd kdd. Fits drums better.

01:29:956 (615) - Same suggestion mentioned before, delete.

01:32:099 (629,630,631,632,633,634,635) - Mentioned before.

01:33:642 - Snare sound, add a kat.

01:37:413 - Don't know why you skipped this sound but it's very prominent. Add a don here.

01:46:499 (729,730,731,732) - No need for 1/6 here. Change it to 1/4 kkd.

Well, what I can say for this diff, I simply didn't understand what you've followed and did my suggestions based on the sounds of the music. Overmapping is maybe good, but not following sounds on any place is not. If your other difficulties are like this, you need to change the prominent ones as well to keep the difficulty spread better. I don't have any further suggestions for this map, and I'm guessing you have same issues on your other diffs so I'm gonna skip modding them. The SV changes maybe applies Oni and Muzukashii, i don't know but if it does, change them on these too. I will understand if you don't want to give me kudosu, because I modded only one diff. But, as I said, I think your other diffs have same issues so you can manage them by referencing Inner Oni after you fix it. Good luck on the ranking way, I hope my mod helped.
Topic Starter
davidminh0111
No comment: Fixed

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Hello, M4M request throught your queue.

[Inner Oni]

There is some kind of bug occured on your diff. Please fix it as 1.40.



Before I say anything about this difficulty, I'd like to specify some general points. The SV changes are not smooth, sometimes it overlaps with measure bar etc... I'm gonna speak about SV changes on this diff now.

00:19:584 (116,117,118,119) - For these 4 notes, on first 2 the SV increase is 0.20x, and on the other 2 it's 0.10x, so I recommend moving the inherited points 1/4 snap further, for example 00:19:756 (117) - move this one to 00:19:927 - here, 00:20:099 (119) - this one to 00:20:270 - here, remove 00:21:127 - this one, 00:21:470 (128) - use 1.80x here and remove 00:21:642 (129) - this one. If you really need to use a SV change here, my way is better because it looks too weird right now, it's not smooth.Ehh, I think it's smooth

00:21:984 - I have no reason to use 1.10x here, the notes are coming too fast and on gameplay 00:21:642 (129,130) - these two are too hard to read. Please change it to 1.00x, it'll look better this way. Strong vocal here.

01:04:499 - Remove this SV change, it also overlaps too much with the previous note.

01:05:870 - Change the SV 01:06:042 - here instead. Changing SV on 1/4 snapping looks too weird if it's not smooth. In this case, it's not so I believe you should give a 1/2 break by moving the point to 01:06:042.

01:16:670 (521) - Again, this note overlaps with 01:16:842 (522) - this one and the bar line is not coming on the note, so add 01:16:756 - 1.00x inherited point here with no kiai, and delete 01:16:670 (521) - this note.

01:36:042 - Move this inherited point 1/4 snap back and 01:37:413 - change this one to 1.00x.

01:59:870 - These two are totally unexpected and coming too fast. Instead, move this point to 02:00:384 - here and change it's value to 1.60x.

Now, for the structure part.

There are no difference on your kat finisher special sounds and normal kat sounds. Remember fixing it.

I didn't understand your mapping style. 00:07:756 - For example, you've skipped all of the drum sounds on this pattern and yet 00:11:699 - overmapped this one. Don't know how to fix it, so figure something out about it. Don't understand what you mean

00:13:156 (75) - Delete this note, the keyboard sounds end on 00:13:070 (74) - this.

00:15:213 (86) - Delete this one and 00:15:299 (87,90) - change these ones to kat. It will emphasize the keyboards better.I think it won't emphasize better.

00:26:699 (164) - Change this one to kat and 00:26:784 (165) - move this one to 00:26:870 - here.No, because there's no reason to put the double notes.

00:29:699 (183,184,185,186) - There are literally no reason to put 1/6 here.

00:30:470 (191,192) - Swap these two and 00:30:384 (190) - delete this one. Better emphasize on keyboard-ish sound.Considering because not about keyboard thingy

00:32:956 - This part is mostly the same due to the sounds with 00:21:984 - this part and yet you mapped them completely different. Consider changing one to other, otherwise your diff will not be consistent.

00:45:299 (291,292,293,294,295,296,297) - 7-plet pattern for this calm part is way too long. Try using 1-3-1 by deleting 00:45:384 (292,296) - these two. Why? It will be complicated for Inner players.

00:49:413 (321,322,323,324,325,326) - I recommend kdkkd k here. Fits vocal better.

00:50:956 (330,331,332) - kkk, 00:51:213 (333,335) - remove these two and 00:51:299 (334) - change to don. Same reason as above.

00:53:870 (347,348) - Make them dons, 00:54:213 (349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357) - kddkddkdk. Follows keyboard in best way.

00:58:156 (378,379) - No reason for keeping them 1/2, add a don 00:58:242 - here to fit the vocals since you are following them.

00:59:613 (390) - kat, 00:59:699 (391) - move 1/4 snap further ( 00:59:784 - ) to fit the drums.

01:04:927 (442,443) - Ctrl + g, 01:05:613 (450,452) - make them kats. The first one will support the keyboards and 2nd one follows drums better.

01:06:213 (455,456,457) - Too many for calm part. Don't use triplets here, 01:06:299 (456) - delete this one. This comment applies for others as well.

01:13:499 (495,497) - Delete, 01:13:584 (496,499) - make them kats. Your pattern does not following anything correctly, so if you apply it it'll follow the drums a bit.

01:15:470 (510,511,512,513,514,515,516,517,518) - kdkkkdkkk, better with keyboard sounds.

01:17:442 (527) - Pattern is too long, delete this one to create a better flow.

01:18:984 (542) - ^

01:21:127 (557,558,559,560,561,562,563) - kdkkddk, as mentioned earlier for the same sound.

01:22:670 - Snare sound, add a kat here.

01:25:327 - Add a kat here and make 01:25:584 (584) - this kat to fit the vocals better.

01:26:013 - Same applies for this spot and 588.

01:27:127 (591,592,593,594) - Instead of k d k d, I recommend kdd kdd. Fits drums better.

01:29:956 (615) - Same suggestion mentioned before, delete.

01:32:099 (629,630,631,632,633,634,635) - Mentioned before.

01:33:642 - Snare sound, add a kat.

01:37:413 - Don't know why you skipped this sound but it's very prominent. Add a don here.

01:46:499 (729,730,731,732) - No need for 1/6 here. Change it to 1/4 kkd.

Well, what I can say for this diff, I simply didn't understand what you've followed and did my suggestions based on the sounds of the music. Overmapping is maybe good, but not following sounds on any place is not. If your other difficulties are like this, you need to change the prominent ones as well to keep the difficulty spread better. I don't have any further suggestions for this map, and I'm guessing you have same issues on your other diffs so I'm gonna skip modding them. The SV changes maybe applies Oni and Muzukashii, i don't know but if it does, change them on these too. I will understand if you don't want to give me kudosu, because I modded only one diff. But, as I said, I think your other diffs have same issues so you can manage them by referencing Inner Oni after you fix it. Good luck on the ranking way, I hope my mod helped.
Thanks for your mod. I will mod your map tomorrow
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