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M4M from ur modding queue
d - don
k - kat
D - big don
K - big kat

[General]
first of all, plz delete all the tags
cuz "yandere" is irrelevant to the song and "cirno","math","class","perfect","iosys" are covered in the title or in the artist
the source is "東方Project"
it is better to change the title to "チルノのパーフェクトさんすう教室"
then the romanised title will be "Cirno's Perfect Math Class"
also plz add "touhou" to the tags as it refers to 東方
add "chiruno no paafekuto sansuu kyoushitsu" as it is the romaji of the title
and add "zun" since he is the creator of touhou
the offset is not set well indeed
after testing, it is better for u to change the offset to 42
(note that the timing of notes shown below is based on this offset (42))
i found that u haven't set the preview point and it is improper
u can set 01:16:327 as the preview point

[Kantan]
00:00:042 - 00:10:156 & 00:21:984 - 00:32:784 these empty spaces are actually weird and meaningless
although u want to lower the diff. of it or it may be ur style, it is not a good way
plz place some notes by yourself
00:11:013 (1) - change to D to make the period 00:11:013 - 00:15:127 seem symmetric and sound better
00:51:470 (16) - change to d to fit the pitch
00:58:327 (28) - change to k to avoid repeating
00:59:013 (29) - change to K to fit the pitch
01:10:927 (6) - move the note to 01:11:013 as if u listen carefully, there is not worth placing note
01:18:213 (4) - change to d to fit the pitch
01:28:499 (18,19,20) - change to kdd as the rhythm there is similar to 01:17:527 (2,3,4)
01:31:242 (22,23,24) - change to ddk with the same reason above
02:00:384 - place D cuz the drum sound there is so strong
02:00:727 (1) - it is recommended to delete it but maybe it is ur style, i leave it to u
u may find that there are some notes not fitting the pitch but i haven't pointed them out
it is because they actually fit the feeling
so deciding placing d or k, pitch and feeling are the factors that we have to consider

[Futsuu]
empty space, u know what to do
00:51:470 (21) - change to d to fit the pitch
01:10:498 (12) - change to k to avoid repeating and make the period 01:05:870 - 01:10:499 seem symmetric
01:47:013 (106) - change to k to fit the rhythm
02:00:384 (1) - place D here and recommend u to delete the spinner

[Muzukashii]
also empty space
00:42:442 (162) - move it to 00:42:384
01:22:670 - place d to fit the rhythm. it is weird if there is no d
01:28:070 (95) - it is recommended to delete it as according to the song, there is not strong enough to place a note
01:59:242 (251) - move it to 01:59:184
02:00:384 (1) - place D here and recommend u to delete the spinner

[Oni]
i don't know why so many notes are not snapped onto the timeline
plz solve this serious problem
btw the pattern in this diff. is not bad

those are my advice
hope that they are helpful to u
enjoy mapping~

FastBoy wrote:

M4M from ur modding queue
d - don
k - kat
D - big don
K - big kat

[General]
first of all, plz delete all the tags
cuz "yandere" is irrelevant to the song and "cirno","math","class","perfect","iosys" are covered in the title or in the artist
the source is "東方Project"
it is better to change the title to "チルノのパーフェクトさんすう教室"
then the romanised title will be "Cirno's Perfect Math Class"
also plz add "touhou" to the tags as it refers to 東方
add "chiruno no paafekuto sansuu kyoushitsu" as it is the romaji of the title
and add "zun" since he is the creator of touhou
the offset is not set well indeed
after testing, it is better for u to change the offset to 42
(note that the timing of notes shown below is based on this offset (42))
i found that u haven't set the preview point and it is improper
u can set 01:16:327 as the preview point

[Kantan]
00:00:042 - 00:10:156 & 00:21:984 - 00:32:784 these empty spaces are actually weird and meaningless Fixed
although u want to lower the diff. of it or it may be ur style, it is not a good way
plz place some notes by yourself
00:11:013 (1) - change to D to make the period 00:11:013 - 00:15:127 seem symmetric and sound betterFixed
00:51:470 (16) - change to d to fit the pitch Nah, it's okay
00:58:327 (28) - change to k to avoid repeating I'd prefer change k to 00:59:013.
00:59:013 (29) - change to K to fit the pitch Just told ya
01:10:927 (6) - move the note to 01:11:013 as if u listen carefully, there is not worth placing note Fixed
01:18:213 (4) - change to d to fit the pitch I'd prefer change to d here 01:17:527
01:28:499 (18,19,20) - change to kdd as the rhythm there is similar to 01:17:527 (2,3,4) Nope
01:31:242 (22,23,24) - change to ddk with the same reason above Still not
02:00:384 - place D cuz the drum sound there is so strong Ok
02:00:727 (1) - it is recommended to delete it but maybe it is ur style, i leave it to uI removed it!
u may find that there are some notes not fitting the pitch but i haven't pointed them out
it is because they actually fit the feeling
so deciding placing d or k, pitch and feeling are the factors that we have to consider

[Futsuu]
empty space, u know what to do
00:51:470 (21) - change to d to fit the pitch
01:10:498 (12) - change to k to avoid repeating and make the period 01:05:870 - 01:10:499 seem symmetric
01:47:013 (106) - change to k to fit the rhythm
02:00:384 (1) - place D here and recommend u to delete the spinner

[Muzukashii]
also empty space
00:42:442 (162) - move it to 00:42:384
01:22:670 - place d to fit the rhythm. it is weird if there is no d
01:28:070 (95) - it is recommended to delete it as according to the song, there is not strong enough to place a note
01:59:242 (251) - move it to 01:59:184
02:00:384 (1) - place D here and recommend u to delete the spinner

[Oni]
i don't know why so many notes are not snapped onto the timeline
plz solve this serious problem
btw the pattern in this diff. is not bad

those are my advice
hope that they are helpful to u
enjoy mapping~

Fixed most of them
Btw, thanks for the mod, i will fix your map

from queue

d = small red
k = small blue
D = big red
K = big blue

[general]
set a preview point for the map

[kantan]
slider velocity should be 1.40

00:32:955 (37,1) - two notes on same tick
01:05:870 (1) - green timing point isn't snapped
01:16:842 (1) - green timing point isn't snapped
01:38:784 (1) - green timing point isn't snapped

[futsuu]
00:21:984 (52) - green timing point isn't snapped
01:05:870 (1) - green timing point isn't snapped
01:14:442 (22,25) - change from ddd ddd to ddk ddk
01:38:784 (76) - green timing point isn't snapped

[muzukashii]
00:01:413 (6) - should be d instead of D
00:04:156 (15) - change from d to k
00:04:499 (16) - add d 00:04:670
00:19:242 (48,49,50,51) - instead of k d k d, should be d k d k or k D k D
00:20:784 (53,54) - add k between these at 00:20:870
00:21:984 (59) - green timing point isn't snapped
01:05:870 (1) - green timing point isn't snapped
01:37:842 (145) - remove note
01:38:784 (149) - green timing point isn't snapped
01:39:984 (155) - change from k to d
01:41:356 (162,163) - switch from k d to d k
01:42:042 (166,167) - switch d to k
01:42:899 (170) - switch d to k

[oni]
make sure notes and timing points are properly snapped

lilligantEX wrote:

from queue

d = small red
k = small blue
D = big red
K = big blue

[general]
set a preview point for the map

[kantan]
slider velocity should be 1.40Fixed

00:32:955 (37,1) - two notes on same tick LOL, I didn't pay attention to this, Fixed
01:05:870 (1) - green timing point isn't snappedFixed
01:16:842 (1) - green timing point isn't snappedFixed
01:38:784 (1) - green timing point isn't snappedFixed

[futsuu]
00:21:984 (52) - green timing point isn't snappedFixed
01:05:870 (1) - green timing point isn't snapped
01:14:442 (22,25) - change from ddd ddd to ddk ddkFixed
01:38:784 (76) - green timing point isn't snappedFixed

[muzukashii]
00:01:413 (6) - should be d instead of D] It doesn't change
00:04:156 (15) - change from d to kFixed
00:04:499 (16) - add d 00:04:670
00:19:242 (48,49,50,51) - instead of k d k d, should be d k d k or k D k DNah, I think it's suitable
00:20:784 (53,54) - add k between these at 00:20:870Nope
00:21:984 (59) - green timing point isn't snappedAlready
01:05:870 (1) - green timing point isn't snappedSame
01:37:842 (145) - remove note [color=#BFFF00For singing[/color]
01:38:784 (149) - green timing point isn't snappedAlready
01:39:984 (155) - change from k to dWould prefer change to k at 01:40:670
01:41:356 (162,163) - switch from k d to d kFixed
01:42:042 (166,167) - switch d to kFixed
01:42:899 (170) - switch d to kFixed

[oni]
make sure notes and timing points are properly snapped

Thanks

Hi, JarHed's Here my Queue

Muzukashii :

00:00:384 (2) - Change to a Kat Same sounds going on with the 3rd note in the song.

00:00:899 (4,5) - Change (4) to a Don and (5) to a Kat Followup to the previous ^ and it sounds a whole lot better in the song.

00:01:755 (7,8,9,10) - Repeat all of this at these notes as well it s the same thing ^^^

00:41:184 (157,158,159,160,161,162,163) - Snapping points are not correct with the song here, Change it to the picture below (Notes not changed just where they are placed)

Cursor at 00:41:870 --->

01:57:984 (246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253) - Snapping points also incorrect here change to this. (Notes not changed just where they are placed)

Cursor at 01:58:670 --->

Delete 01:59:870 (253) - Change to this pattern here sounds way better and is a better finish up for the map.

Cursor at: 02:00:42
Pattern Here:

Good Muzu just things here and there need to be fixed

Oni:

- Its well mapped however add new patterns everywhere where there is 1/4, To be more specific its all DDD or KKK or DDDDK Try to add some patterns in that contribute more technical patterns such as DKD KDDKD\

Im not gonna change much with the Oni simply because the only issue is lack of patterns its well mapped i like it a lot i just think it seems bland ADD MORE PATTERNS

JarHed wrote:

:lol: Hi, JarHed's Here my Queue

Muzukashii :

00:00:384 (2) - Change to a Kat Same sounds going on with the 3rd note in the song.

00:00:899 (4,5) - Change (4) to a Don and (5) to a Kat Followup to the previous ^ and it sounds a whole lot better in the song.

00:01:755 (7,8,9,10) - Repeat all of this at these notes as well it s the same thing ^^^

00:41:184 (157,158,159,160,161,162,163) - Snapping points are not correct with the song here, Change it to the picture below (Notes not changed just where they are placed)

Cursor at 00:41:870 --->

01:57:984 (246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253) - Snapping points also incorrect here change to this. (Notes not changed just where they are placed)

Cursor at 01:58:670 --->

Delete 01:59:870 (253) - Change to this pattern here sounds way better and is a better finish up for the map.

Cursor at: 02:00:42
Pattern Here:

Good Muzu just things here and there need to be fixed

Oni:

- Its well mapped however add new patterns everywhere where there is 1/4, To be more specific its all DDD or KKK or DDDDK Try to add some patterns in that contribute more technical patterns such as DKD KDDKD\

Im not gonna change much with the Oni simply because the only issue is lack of patterns its well mapped i like it a lot i just think it seems bland ADD MORE PATTERNS

Fixed all, thank you.
Will mod your map later

Hello. mod via PM :3


I think that this mapset needs more advice from skilled mappers.
Good luck!

_yu68 wrote:

Hello. mod via PM :3

mod

[General]

1. Please add tag '東方Project'.

[Kantan]

1. 00:02:784 (3,4) - change to k? I think that be able to represent differences of pitch.
2. 00:08:270 (7,8) - ^
3. 00:26:613 (30) - move to 00:26:784 - ? I suggest reduce complex rhythm for beginner.
4. 00:37:584 (41) - move to 00:37:756 - ? ^
5. 00:34:842 - add k? This is same as 00:23:870 -
6. 00:48:384 (10,11) - delete? I think it need to make 4/1 break for beginner.
7. 00:54:213 (20) - ^

[Futsuu]

1. Please fix SV to 1.40.
2. 00:20:956 (35) - move to 00:20:613 - ? I think that flow becomes natural by fiting to vocal.
3. 00:22:327 (38) - move to 00:22:499 - ? I suggest fit to vocals just like Kantan.
4. 00:23:699 (41) - move to 00:23:870 - ? ^
5. 00:25:070 (44) - move to 00:25:242 - ? ^
6. 00:27:813 (50) - move to 00:27:984 - ? ^
7. 00:29:184 (53) - move to 00:29:356 - ? ^
8. 00:30:556 (56) - move to 00:30:727 - ? ^
9. 00:34:670 (65) - move to 00:34:842 - ? ^
10. 00:38:784 (74) - move to 00:38:956 - ? ^
11. 00:40:156 (77) - move to 00:40:327 - ? ^
12. 01:39:127 (59) - move to 01:39:299 - ? ^
13. 01:40:499 (62) - move to 01:40:670 - ? ^
14. 01:47:356 (78) - move to 01:47:527 - ? ^
15. 01:50:099 (82) - move to 01:50:270 - ? ^
16. 01:51:470 (85) - move to 01:51:642 - ? ^
17. 01:55:584 (94) - move to 01:55:756 - ? ^
18. 01:56:956 (97) - move to 01:57:127 - ? ^
19. 01:15:470 (20) - Slider is unsnapped. Please fix.
20. 01:37:413 (56) - remove finisher? Because sound is weak.

[Muzukashii]

1. change SV to 1.40? 1.40 is used in many ranked maps so it is better.
2. 00:12:213 (10) - delete? I think that pattern is too long for Muzukashii.
3. 00:14:956 (25) - ^
4. 00:17:699 (38) - ^
5. 00:27:299 (88) - ^
6. 00:32:784 (116) - ^
7. 01:34:499 (124) - ^
8. 01:35:870 (132) - ^
9. 01:37:242 (140) - ^
10. 01:49:584 (205) - ^
11. 00:28:499 - 00:28:670 - add notes? It is same as 00:23:013 - 00:23:184 -
12. 00:33:984 - 00:34:156 - ^
13. 01:45:299 - 01:45:470 - ^
14. 01:50:784 - 01:50:956 - ^
15. 01:22:756 (68) - delete? I feel this will make complex for Muzukashii players.
16. 01:28:070 (95) - ^
17. 01:37:842 (145) - delete? I think that be able to emphasize rhythm of vocal.

[Oni]

1. change SV to 1.40? Same reason as Muzukashii.
2. 00:03:813 (21,22) - change to dd? I think that be able to represent difference of pitch between 00:03:984 - and 00:04:156 -
3. 00:55:927 - add k? There is same sound as 00:57:299 -
4. 01:14:099 - ~ 01:16:156 - I think the overall balance is bad because this part is too hard. I suggest to change to 1/4s.

I think that this mapset needs more advice from skilled mappers.
Good luck!

I will try my best. You are one of the skilled taiko mapper
Thank you very much

M4M

FastBoy wrote:

[Oni]
i don't know why so many notes are not snapped onto the timeline
plz solve this serious problem
btw the pattern in this diff. is not bad

those are my advice
hope that they are helpful to u
enjoy mapping~

lilligantEX wrote:

[oni]
make sure notes and timing points are properly snapped

JarHed wrote:

Oni:

- Its well mapped however add new patterns everywhere where there is 1/4, To be more specific its all DDD or KKK or DDDDK Try to add some patterns in that contribute more technical patterns such as DKD KDDKD\

Im not gonna change much with the Oni simply because the only issue is lack of patterns its well mapped i like it a lot i just think it seems bland ADD MORE PATTERNS

_yu68 wrote:

I think that this mapset needs more advice from skilled mappers.
Good luck!

ok. i check Oni


[ General]

1. tag : Project' ...delete ' ?

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[ Oni]

1. 00:06:899 (37) - change k ( high pitch sound. )
   
2. 00:20:442 (120) - delete Finish
   
   
3. 00:17:699 (103,104) - swap. ( follow bass drum sound 00:17:184 (100) - 00:18:556 (110) - )
   or
   00:17:013 (99,100,101,102) - swap ( if you want follow Vocal pitch. )
   
   
4. 00:23:870 (144) - delete Finish or 00:24:727 (150) - delete finish and 00:25:242 (153) - add finish. ( Unity is lacking )
   
   
5. 00:32:099 (199,200) - or 00:31:927 (197,198,199,200) - change d. ( Emphasis 00:32:270 (201) - note. & 00:32:184 (200) - 00:32:270 (201) - is different sound. )
   
   
6. 00:27:984 (172) - 00:28:842 (177) - 00:29:355 (180) - 00:30:213 (185) - 00:30:727 (188) - 00:33:470 (209) - 00:34:327 (214) - 00:34:842 (217) - 00:35:699 (222) - 00:36:213 (225) -00:38:956 (244) - ( some 00:23:870 (144) -)
   
   
7. 00:45:299 (280) - 00:46:671 (287) - 00:48:041 (294) - 00:51:470 (313) - 00:55:584 (334) - 00:56:956 (341) - 00:57:299 (342) - 00:58:327 (348) - 00:59:013 (350) - 01:07:413 (416) - 01:09:984 (426) - delete finish. ( noizy )
   
   
8. 01:16:842 (471) - ADD FINISH
   
   
9. 01:24:384 (519) - delete finish & 01:25:070 - add Finish.
   
   
10. 01:29:870 (553) - 01:34:499 (577) - delete finish.

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I think unity of placement is very lacking.
It seems that Finish is also arranged at random.
Oni remapped you to recreate it once or ask GD. recommend it.

Good Luck

toara_fict wrote:

M4M

FastBoy wrote:

[Oni]
i don't know why so many notes are not snapped onto the timeline
plz solve this serious problem
btw the pattern in this diff. is not bad

those are my advice
hope that they are helpful to u
enjoy mapping~

lilligantEX wrote:

[oni]
make sure notes and timing points are properly snapped

JarHed wrote:

Oni:

- Its well mapped however add new patterns everywhere where there is 1/4, To be more specific its all DDD or KKK or DDDDK Try to add some patterns in that contribute more technical patterns such as DKD KDDKD\

Im not gonna change much with the Oni simply because the only issue is lack of patterns its well mapped i like it a lot i just think it seems bland ADD MORE PATTERNS

_yu68 wrote:

I think that this mapset needs more advice from skilled mappers.
Good luck!

ok. i check Oni


[ General]

1. tag : Project' ...delete ' ?

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[ Oni]

1. 00:06:899 (37) - change k ( high pitch sound. )Fixed
   
2. 00:20:442 (120) - delete FinishFixed
   
   
3. 00:17:699 (103,104) - swap. ( follow bass drum sound 00:17:184 (100) - 00:18:556 (110) - )Fixed
   or
   00:17:013 (99,100,101,102) - swap ( if you want follow Vocal pitch. )No, it doesn't fit the vocal either the pitch (slow down the song and you will get it
   
   
4. 00:23:870 (144) - delete Finish or 00:24:727 (150) - delete finish and 00:25:242 (153) - add finish. ( Unity is lacking ) Yeah, I should fix all the Drum sound
   
   
5. 00:32:099 (199,200) - or 00:31:927 (197,198,199,200) - change d. ( Emphasis 00:32:270 (201) - note. & 00:32:184 (200) - 00:32:270 (201) - is different sound. ) Fixed
   
   
6. 00:27:984 (172) - 00:28:842 (177) - 00:29:355 (180) - 00:30:213 (185) - 00:30:727 (188) - 00:33:470 (209) - 00:34:327 (214) - 00:34:842 (217) - 00:35:699 (222) - 00:36:213 (225) -00:38:956 (244) - ( some 00:23:870 (144) -)You mean emphasis
   
   
7. 00:45:299 (280) - 00:46:671 (287) - 00:48:041 (294) - 00:51:470 (313) - 00:55:584 (334) - 00:56:956 (341) - 00:57:299 (342) - 00:58:327 (348) - 00:59:013 (350) - 01:07:413 (416) - 01:09:984 (426) - delete finish. ( noizy )Fixed
   
   
8. 01:16:842 (471) - ADD FINISHFixed
   
   
9. 01:24:384 (519) - delete finish & 01:25:070 - add Finish.Fixed
   
   
10. 01:29:870 (553) - 01:34:499 (577) - delete finish.

Fixed
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I think unity of placement is very lacking.
It seems that Finish is also arranged at random.
Oni remapped you to recreate it once or ask GD. recommend it.

Good Luck

Thanks
I don't need GD btw. OwO

Actually, source must be "東方Project".
Also, it's better to use actual game name as "東方紅魔郷 〜 the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil.", but Cirno appears in a half of Touhou games so idk.

metadata can take from here
put metadata taken from that mapset on the map desc or just ask alacat idk lul

Namki wrote:

Actually, source must be "東方Project".
Also, it's better to use actual game name as "東方紅魔郷 〜 the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil.", but Cirno appears in a half of Touhou games so idk.

Yeah Im not sure about that.

I cant take that metadata because i love this metadata more, Shortthu.
☺

davidminh0111 wrote:

I cant take that metadata because i love this metadata more, Shortthu.
☺

so, you can't rank this mapset

Shortthu wrote:

davidminh0111 wrote:

I cant take that metadata because i love this metadata more, Shortthu.
☺

so, you can't rank this mapset

!!!!

hi,let's mod
☆general
　・from 01:57:984 (819) - --->sv up is too fast.make it more smooth and slower sv up
☆Inner Oni
　・00:00:042 (1,2,3,4) - --->dddk change to ddkk(?)
　・00:01:242 (7) - --->change to k(?)
　・00:01:756 (10) - --->change to k(?)
　・00:03:127 (17,18,19,20) - --->change to kkdd(?)
　・00:04:156 (23,24,25,26) - --->change to kkdk(?)
　・00:05:013 (27,28,29) - --->change to kkk(?)
　・00:07:242 (39) - --->change to d(?)
　・00:07:927 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - --->change to ddkkkdkkk(?)

kvgyubh wrote:

hi,let's mod
☆general
　・from 01:57:984 (819) - --->sv up is too fast.make it more smooth and slower sv up It should be in Inner Oni
☆Inner Oni
　・00:00:042 (1,2,3,4) - --->dddk change to ddkk(?) No, because there is a high pitch at that point
　・00:01:242 (7) - --->change to k(?)Ok
　・00:01:756 (10) - --->change to k(?)Same as 1st one
　・00:03:127 (17,18,19,20) - --->change to kkdd(?) ^
　・00:04:156 (23,24,25,26) - --->change to kkdk(?)^
　・00:05:013 (27,28,29) - --->change to kkk(?)Yeah, there's a high pitch there
　・00:07:242 (39) - --->change to d(?) Still not,high pitch
　・00:07:927 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - --->change to ddkkkdkkk(?)No, the pitch.

I would recommend you to slow down the song and you will get it.
Thanks for your mod

yo


[General]
- for better appearance BG, open file in notepad and find :

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"moe 942041 cirno.jpg",0,00

Change to :

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"moe 942041 cirno.jpg",0,80

- consider to remove some finisher while the part is calm

[Kantan]

00:31:584 - change kat for variety with 00:34:327 - since pitch in here high
00:37:070 - same ^
00:43:584 - delete
01:03:470 - delete ?? it feels no break while there has 2 spinere
01:11:013 - guess finishere more work in 01:11:356 - to give emphasize
01:35:013 (1) - spinner should start in 01:35:013 (1) - and the rest 01:35:527 - can add note
01:54:384 - delete ??

[Futsuu]
00:17:870 - change kat ti give an emphasize
00:26:442 - delete ?? density in here high
00:31:070 - move 00:31:242 - and delete 00:31:413 -
00:31:584 - instead slider, maybe just put note like kantan thing
00:36:042 - add note ??
00:36:213 - remove finishere, no reasonable to put in here
00:48:042 (12,13,14) - no need finisher, still calm here, put note in 00:48:213 - instead
00:58:842 - add note ??

[Muzukashii]
00:08:099 - delete
00:09:470 - delete
00:11:356 - | 00:11:870 - delete for better flow
00:14:613 - delete ^
00:47:184 - change kat ?? for variety
00:48:213 - change don ^
01:12:042 - delete, it's to long for muzukashi

[Oni]
00:13:156 - | 00:13:327 - delete, guess stream stop here
00:21:042 - delete to match with vocal
00:26:870 - delete??
00:32:784 - change kat to emphasize 00:32:956 -

[Inner]
00:19:584 - an average for increasing SV is around 1-5 | 10 is to far so maybe you can reduce it

that's all from me
good luck

[R] wrote:

yo


[General]
- for better appearance BG, open file in notepad and find :

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"moe 942041 cirno.jpg",0,00

Change to :

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"moe 942041 cirno.jpg",0,80

Preview aftrer change

- consider to remove some finisher while the part is calm I don't know how to do the BG help O_o (now I know)

[Kantan]

00:31:584 - change kat for variety with 00:34:327 - since pitch in here high Ok
00:37:070 - same ^Fixed
00:43:584 - delete No, because there's a vocal here. Not really hard for beginners
01:03:470 - delete ?? it feels no break while there has 2 spinere Yeah, I would agree with that
01:11:013 - guess finishere more work in 01:11:356 - to give emphasize Ok
01:35:013 (1) - spinner should start in 01:35:013 (1) - and the rest 01:35:527 - can add note At 01:36:042 , spinner here
01:54:384 - delete ??Wait, why?? O_o

[Futsuu]
00:17:870 - change kat ti give an emphasize Fixed
00:26:442 - delete ?? density in here high Fixed
00:31:070 - move 00:31:242 - and delete 00:31:413 - No, because there's a vocal there. No change
00:31:584 - instead slider, maybe just put note like kantan thing Still not, because there's a long vocal of the music here.
00:36:042 - add note ?? Ok
00:36:213 - remove finishere, no reasonable to put in hereYeah
00:48:042 (12,13,14) - no need finisher, still calm here, put note in 00:48:213 - instead Only remove finish at 12. add note
00:58:842 - add note ??

[Muzukashii]
00:08:099 - delete Why???? OwO???
00:09:470 - delete ^
00:11:356 - | 00:11:870 - delete for better flow Not better flow
00:14:613 - delete ^ ^
00:47:184 - change kat ?? for variety Sure
00:48:213 - change don ^ Fixed
01:12:042 - delete, it's to long for muzukashi Deleted a note at 01:12:042

[Oni]
00:13:156 - | 00:13:327 - delete, guess stream stop here No, vocal of music... O_o
00:21:042 - delete to match with vocal Fixed
00:26:870 - delete?? Same reason as 1st one
00:32:784 - change kat to emphasize 00:32:956 - Fixed

[Inner]
00:19:584 - an average for increasing SV is around 1-5 | 10 is to far so maybe you can reduce it Fixed

that's all from me
good luck

Thanks for your mod. I appreciate it