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Chaoslitz
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Chaoslitz
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2021年3月9日 at 21:59:43

Artist: Kugimiya Rie & Shiraishi Ryoko
Title: Karakoi ~Dakara Shoujo wa Koi o Suru~ (TV Size)
Source: ハヤテのごとく！！
Tags: Hayate no Gotoku the combat Butler 2nd second season ending ed ed2 Jpop pop J-pop anime japanese wkyik Kawaiwkyik Rizia DreaM117er 三千院ナギ 綾崎ハヤテ Sanzenin Nagi Ayasaki Hayate くまのきよみ 山田智和 Kumanokiyomi Tomokazu Yamada
BPM: 178
Filesize: 15542kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. 117's Insane (4.22 stars, 322 notes)
  2. Combat Butler (4.7 stars, 437 notes)
  3. Easy (1.92 stars, 128 notes)
  4. Hard (3.18 stars, 254 notes)
  5. Normal (2.23 stars, 193 notes)
  6. wkyik's Insane (4.69 stars, 334 notes)
Download: Kugimiya Rie & Shiraishi Ryoko - Karakoi ~Dakara Shoujo wa Koi o Suru~ (TV Size)
Download: Kugimiya Rie & Shiraishi Ryoko - Karakoi ~Dakara Shoujo wa Koi o Suru~ (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy by me
Normal by me
Hard by me
117's Insane by DreaM117er
wkyik's Insane by Rizia
Combat Butler by me

Last edited by Chaoslitz , edited 31 times in total.
Gaia
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Gaia

Chaoslitz wrote:

MAKE OLD ANIME SONGS GREAT AGAIN
DreaM117er
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Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
畢竟超市
Evil_Twilight
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Joined July 2010
Evil_Twilight
Last edited by Chaoslitz on 47 years ago, edited 1 time in total.
DreaM117er
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DreaM117er

Evil_Twilight wrote:

Last edited by Chaoslitz on 47 years ago, edited 1 time in total.
moph
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moph
o/
[Easy]
  1. 00:06:422 (1,2) - not a huge fan of these rhythmically in this section, I find skipping beats like 00:06:759 - to map 00:06:927 - really sounds a bit off as they're the only parts of the map that kinda go off the main beat if that makes sense. Maybe try this? https://puu.sh/w7Sr7.png
  2. 00:20:579 (2) - spacing
  3. 00:40:130 (3) - maybe a 1/1 slider instead? It would match 00:40:804 (4) - nicely due to the vocals

[Normal]
  1. 00:10:130 (4) - for this I do prefer what you did here 00:15:691 (4) - instead. Having 00:10:298 (5) - be clickable would be nice. Same here 01:18:894 (4) -

[Hard]
  1. 00:23:950 (1,2) - try doing slider -> circle?
  2. 00:27:658 (5) - not sure if the 3/4 is necessary since you don't use it anywhere else in the section
  3. 00:42:152 (3) - spacing
  4. 00:58:669 (3) - don't like how this skips over 00:58:837 - completely as it's quite a strong beat

[wkyik's Insane]
  1. 00:06:253 (1,2) - don't think the 1/4s here are necessary, nothing in the music
  2. 00:09:455 (2,3,4,5,6) - to match earlier shouldn't this be 1/2 later?
  3. 00:10:972 (3,4) - could use a lot more spacing imo, 00:11:141 (4) - is the same as 00:11:310 (5,6) - so it could use a lot more emphasis
  4. tbh I'm a bit confused with the rhythm choices in this section. You map some very minor 1/4s but choose to skip pretty prominent ones here 00:12:489 (6,1,2) - and 00:09:793 (6,7) -. You however do here 00:15:017 (3,4,5,6) - which seems a little too inconsistent.
  5. 00:15:691 (1) - more spacing here again?
  6. 00:21:253 (2) - this note really isn't necessary imo, having it here takes away from the rest of the pattern as it pretty much has the same emphasis as 00:21:422 (3,4,5) - but its musically significant weaker
  7. 00:22:349 (2) - pretty sure there's not 1/4 here
  8. 00:30:017 (5) - maybe do something more here for emphasis considering what you did here 00:29:343 (1,2) - as the music is similar here
  9. 00:49:399 (6) - maybe do a circle then 1/2 slider instead? Feel like 00:49:568 - should be mapped as there are pretty big musical and vocal changes there
  10. 00:50:411 (1) - same here tbh although not as necessary
  11. 01:20:411 - note here? pretty strong beat
  12. 01:27:152 (6,7) - try slider then circle?

[Combat Butler]
  1. 00:21:759 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - stacks kinda ruined spacing here
  2. 00:33:051 (6) - maybe even the spacing a bit
  3. 00:59:343 (4) - slider is a bit overextended imo, I think a note 00:59:596 - here would be better
  4. 01:04:736 (3) - instead of a repeat maybe a single instead? Would match nicely with 01:05:242 (4,5) -
  5. 01:12:489 (1) - again instead of a repeat maybe add a single on the tail of 01:12:995 (2) - to kinda mirror 01:13:500 (3,1) -?
cool set, gl! :)
Froskya
1,231 posts
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Froskya

Hi! M4M~ My map!


Easy


  1. 00:01:029 - delete inherited timing point 'cause you have same
  2. 00:06:085 - ^
  3. 00:11:141 - 00:11:815 - ^
  4. 00:38:781 - 00:46:366 - ^
  5. 01:12:489 - ^
  6. 01:19:905 - 01:20:242 - ^
  7. 00:04:231 - 00:04:315 - unused TP
  8. 00:46:703 - ^
  9. 01:27:995 (4) - maybe x:312 y:308?


Normal


  1. 00:57:826 (5) - off-screen object
  2. 00:44:849 (3,4,5) - not sure about this pattern. May it be hard?
  3. 00:01:029 - delete inherited timing point 'cause you have same
  4. 00:06:085 - ^
  5. 00:11:141 - 00:11:815 - ^
  6. 00:38:781 - 00:46:366 - ^
  7. 01:12:489 - ^
  8. 01:19:905 - 01:20:242 - ^


Hard


  1. 00:50:748 (5) - NC
  2. 01:20:242 (5) - x:136 y:79
  3. 00:38:781 - delete inherited timing point 'cause you have same
  4. 00:43:500 - 00:45:523 - ^
  5. 01:12:489 - ^
  6. 00:04:315 - unused TP
  7. 00:04:484 - ^
  8. 00:04:652 - ^
  9. 00:04:821 - ^
  10. 00:05:832 - ^
  11. 00:06:000 - ^
  12. 00:11:225 - ^
  13. 00:11:394 - ^
  14. 01:15:102 - ^
  15. 01:19:989 - ^
  16. 01:20:158 - ^
  17. 01:20:326 - ^
  18. 01:20:495 - ^


117's Insane


  1. 01:12:826 (2,3) - fix overlap
  2. 01:26:984 (3,1) - ^

wkyik's Insane


  1. 00:10:635 (1,2,3,4,5) - improve it, please ; Д;
  2. 00:49:399 (6,7,8,9) - ^
  3. 00:24:455 (1) - NC
  4. 01:15:354 (4) - ^
  5. 00:28:837 (6,4) - stack it

Combat Butler


  1. 01:21:085 (2,3,4) - stack them

Good luck!

DreaM117er
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Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
超市幫我疊好 :) :) :)
Vert
424 posts
Joined October 2013
Vert
[general]
BG尺寸过大
关掉widescreen support 和countdown?

[CB]
00:10:129 (3,4) - 这个建议换个1/4滑条，来强调一下3和5的重音？连打下来有点感觉被忽略了
01:18:893 (8,9) - ^
00:12:658 (9) - 换成2个1/4?
01:16:028 (9) - ^
00:49:736 (1,2,3) - 感觉很容易误读，不需要加个nc吗
00:51:590 (4) - nc?

[wkyik]
00:02:040 (5,1) - 包的有问题啊，滑条弧度再大点？
00:03:388 (5,1) - ^
00:38:107 (3,1) - 这个贴上一点就感觉很难受
00:49:399 (6,8) - ^
感觉没认真做(?)像是三年前的图

[117]
00:27:321 (3) - 换3个圈？
好像没啥问题了

[hard]
感觉总体sv相对物件间距有点太快了（可能是错觉
星数和最低的insane差距有点大啊，可以适当把一些折返改成3连？

[Normal]
01:21:927 (4) - NC?
01:24:624 (4) - ^
等等几个类似的地方，别的没啥问题，easy也没问题吧

大概就是这样，gl
Last edited by Vert , edited 1 time in total.
Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
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Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Vert wrote:

m4m from Q
這queue不是這樣運作啊.... 是我們選圖... 看清楚rules :<
Vert
424 posts
Joined October 2013
Vert

Chaoslitz wrote:

Vert wrote:

m4m from Q
這queue不是這樣運作啊.... 是我們選圖... 看清楚rules :<

不好意思，好不容易有时间上一次osu没注意细节，我自己傻逼了，要是选我了就当M4M吧，没选就当我送个摸，或者不喜欢的话我Edit掉也行，抱歉
Chaoslitz
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Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

Vert wrote:

不好意思，好不容易有时间上一次osu没注意细节，我自己傻逼了，要是选我了就当M4M吧，没选就当我送个摸，或者不喜欢的话我Edit掉也行，抱歉
摸了就不要edit啦._.
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
M4M from your q

[Easy]
  1. 00:07:264 (2) - 漏whistle了？00:09:961 (2) - 这种都有的．话说这几个红线上的note感觉音效还可以再大点，最好能比原曲里的鼓要明显会更舒服．结尾那段同
  2. 00:39:793 - 这里跟了的话00:40:467 - 这里最好也用滑条尾带一下吧，同样都是有vocal没鼓．如果不想跟的话就都不跟会比较好，直接把00:38:781 (1) - 加一次折返也不错
  3. 01:16:028 (2) - 漏whistle
[Normal]
  1. 00:01:366 (2) - 00:02:714 (5,6) - 听着一样的，节奏统一下比较好？
  2. 00:51:590 (5,1) - 包一下？
  3. 00:07:602 - 01:16:366 - 漏whistle
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:602 - 00:12:995 - 加个更明显的音效会更舒服？
  2. 00:27:911 - 好像是高难度复制下来的音效，删了比较好
  3. 00:59:343 (2) - 这里ds最好还是再大点吧
  4. 01:16:366 - 同第一条
[117]
  1. 00:04:062 (2,4) - 00:47:208 (2,4) - 给nc会比较人性化
[柚子]
  1. 00:01:534 (4,1) - 强迫症
  2. 00:15:691 (1,2,3,4) - 这种完全没提示的不同节奏感觉不太舒服
  3. 00:21:085 (1,2) - 感觉不太适合连续单点啊，用下滑条会比较配vocal
  4. 00:22:349 (2,4) - 一定要overmap的话加点音效感觉会更舒服
  5. 00:27:826 - 整段塞爆这里空着有点违和，毕竟有明显音乐
  6. 00:49:399 (6,8) - 强迫症
  7. 00:50:411 (1,2) - 节奏有点奇怪，感觉ctrl+G更好
  8. 01:13:837 (7) - 不太适合用circle，把6换成滑条看看
  9. 01:15:186 - clickable？
  10. 01:20:411 - 这个音应该跟01:19:905 (3,4,5) - 是一样的（除了音调），感觉应该都跟
[主]
  1. 00:04:905 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 去掉现在的nc，然后下在00:05:242 (2,3) - 两处，感觉读起来会更舒服，虽然现在这样逻辑上也没问题
GL
Kyuukai
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Kyuukai
m4m
Easy
00:18:220 (2,4) - Might be too hard to read for a Easy diff since 4 appears while 2 is still showing up
00:51:253 (3,1) - ^
01:04:399 (1) - Maybe you should make the same rhythm as 01:04:399 (1) - since the rhythm is the same ?
01:27:995 (4) - Two notes would fit better imo for the vocals 01:28:332 - here

Normal
00:10:298 - This should be clickable because you made it clickable here 00:04:905 - and the sound is quite strong
00:10:635 (5) - I think making it a simple 1/2 slider and adding a note here 00:10:972 - fits better to make it clickable
01:18:894 (4,5,6,7) - This should have the same rhythm as 00:10:130 (4,5,6) -
01:28:332 - A note would fit better here for the vocals

Hard
00:16:197 (2,3) - Maybe you should make the same rhythm as 00:10:635 (2,3,4,5) - it would be more consistant
00:38:781 (1,3) - 1 slider's reverse is hiding the 3's sliderdebut

117's Insane
00:04:736 (5,1) - They should have a greater spacing than 00:04:568 (4,5) - since the sound on the 1 is really stronger than the others before, moreover it indicated that a new rhythm will establish after
00:22:939 (2,3) - a slider would follow the vocals better
00:27:321 (3) - reverse slider to follow the vocals ?
00:53:613 (1) - I don't know if it is intentionnal, but the sampleset additions are set in drums

wkyik's Insane
00:10:298 - Should be clickable because of the sound's intensity
00:11:478 (6,1,2,3) - Maybe you should increase the distance to emphasize the NC ?
00:38:107 (3,1) - that overlap can be avoided
00:49:399 (6,8) - ^
01:15:186 - Clickable ? New rhythm is established here
01:15:523 (6,8) - overlap xdddd
01:27:152 (6,7) - 7 should be 01:27:152 - here and you should extend it by one 1/2 tick since u're following the main sound (u've done it here 01:26:478 (4) - )

Combat Butler
I couldn't find smth D: sorry xddd

Good luck with ranking !
Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
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Topic Starter
Chaoslitz

moph wrote:

o/
[Easy]
  1. 00:06:422 (1,2) - not a huge fan of these rhythmically in this section, I find skipping beats like 00:06:759 - to map 00:06:927 - really sounds a bit off as they're the only parts of the map that kinda go off the main beat if that makes sense. Maybe try this?https://puu.sh/w7Sr7.png I prefer keeping 00:07:264 clickable so 00:06:927 - is mapped instead
  2. 00:20:579 (2) - spacing fixed
  3. 00:40:130 (3) - maybe a 1/1 slider instead? It would match 00:40:804 (4) - nicely due to the vocals ok

[Normal]
  1. 00:10:130 (4) - for this I do prefer what you did here 00:15:691 (4) - instead. Having 00:10:298 (5) - be clickable would be nice. Same here 01:18:894 (4) - music in 00:14:512 (1,2,3,4) is actually more intense so i used a denser rhythm

[Hard]
  1. 00:23:950 (1,2) - try doing slider -> circle? higher pitch -> clickable
  2. 00:27:658 (5) - not sure if the 3/4 is necessary since you don't use it anywhere else in the section ye
  3. 00:42:152 (3) - spacing fixed
  4. 00:58:669 (3) - don't like how this skips over 00:58:837 - completely as it's quite a strong beat sound on 00:58:669 doesnt stop instanly so yea

[Combat Butler]
  1. 00:21:759 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - stacks kinda ruined spacing here fixed
  2. 00:33:051 (6) - maybe even the spacing a bit ok
  3. 00:59:343 (4) - slider is a bit overextended imo, I think a note 00:59:596 - here would be better i think it is fine
  4. 01:04:736 (3) - instead of a repeat maybe a single instead? Would match nicely with 01:05:242 (4,5) - i think it represent the vocal well
  5. 01:12:489 (1) - again instead of a repeat maybe add a single on the tail of 01:12:995 (2) - to kinda mirror 01:13:500 (3,1) -? prefer current one
cool set, gl! :)

Revialink wrote:

Hi! M4M~ My map!


Easy


  1. 00:01:029 - delete inherited timing point 'cause you have same ok
  2. 00:06:085 - ^ k
  3. 00:11:141 - 00:11:815 - ^
  4. 00:38:781 - 00:46:366 - ^
  5. 01:12:489 - ^
  6. 01:19:905 - 01:20:242 - ^
  7. 00:04:231 - 00:04:315 - unused TP
  8. 00:46:703 - ^
  9. 01:27:995 (4) - maybe x:312 y:308? moved a bit


Normal


  1. 00:57:826 (5) - off-screen object ye
  2. 00:44:849 (3,4,5) - not sure about this pattern. May it be hard? should be fine
  3. 00:01:029 - delete inherited timing point 'cause you have same
  4. 00:06:085 - ^
  5. 00:11:141 - 00:11:815 - ^
  6. 00:38:781 - 00:46:366 - ^
  7. 01:12:489 - ^
  8. 01:19:905 - 01:20:242 - ^


Hard


  1. 00:50:748 (5) - NC ye
  2. 01:20:242 (5) - x:136 y:79 nah
  3. 00:38:781 - delete inherited timing point 'cause you have same
  4. 00:43:500 - 00:45:523 - ^
  5. 01:12:489 - ^
  6. 00:04:315 - unused TP
  7. 00:04:484 - ^
  8. 00:04:652 - ^
  9. 00:04:821 - ^
  10. 00:05:832 - ^
  11. 00:06:000 - ^
  12. 00:11:225 - ^
  13. 00:11:394 - ^
  14. 01:15:102 - ^
  15. 01:19:989 - ^
  16. 01:20:158 - ^
  17. 01:20:326 - ^
  18. 01:20:495 - ^


117's Insane


  1. 01:12:826 (2,3) - fix overlap
  2. 01:26:984 (3,1) - ^

wkyik's Insane


  1. 00:10:635 (1,2,3,4,5) - improve it, please ; Д;
  2. 00:49:399 (6,7,8,9) - ^
  3. 00:24:455 (1) - NC
  4. 01:15:354 (4) - ^
  5. 00:28:837 (6,4) - stack it

Combat Butler


  1. 01:21:085 (2,3,4) - stack them no

Good luck!

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