1. Space Velocity (7.72 stars, 2134 notes)

For Approval
Ye XD

JarHed wrote:

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Here for your M4M Request!

So Lets Start Here!

- This map is well mapped with all patterns however i believe there can be a lot more variety in this map so let me suggest a few things !

1.) I think the 1/6 is a bit abused for SR purposes and maybe you can change up the 1/6 usage. What i mean by this is try incorporating different 1/6 patterns because it seems you are using all of the same ones. (I may be wrong but its what I'm seeing.)

2.) It feels over mapped in some places try removing some notes here and there and the result may surprise you. Once again what i mean by this is add notes delete notes change notes even differentiate the patterns! Trust me it comes in some unique mapping styles such as mine (personal Opinion).
ㄴI like to keep consistency in repeating parts. but as you say, it looks very monotonous. i'll try to change some patterns.

3.) These tips are good to use, But i must say its very well mapped good on you!

Here is some note changes I would change -

* Cursor is at 03:42:253 (1) - I beleive this portion of the map sounds better with this pattern,

Shown Here:

Cursor is at 03:43:665 (1) - Same Case as above ^

Looking through this map I am struggling to find specific things wrong!

This may not be too much of a Mod however i hope the tips and the little things i gave helps. I think this can get approved!

Good Luck with Ranking!

Voyage wrote:

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NM Request | ♦ | Taiko

Metadata Check

• Tags

1. Add かめるかめりあ in tags, This is the name of the label/circle the album was produced from in Japanese.
2. Add CTCD-011 in tags, this is the catalog number for this album. no
3. Add C88 in tags, this is the event the album was released for.
4. Add Comiket or Comic Market in tags, as another way to indicate C88. (Optional)
5. Add Masaya Oya in tags, as this is the artist's real name. (Optional)
6. Remove Dubstep in tags, Drumstep is a combination of Dubstep and Drum & Bass with a half-time beat structure so having Dubstep would be redundant.no
7. Remove Atmosphere in tags, while this is the correct spelling of the song's title; this has no bearing or any use as a relevant tag for the song. no
8. Remove Electronic in tags, this genre is a bit too broad and Electronic is covered by the Beatmap Listing tags themselves when they specify the map's broad music genre. i know, but its unspecified now. yep.
9. Fix the tags 'and Bass' by adding Drum to the front of the tag so it's seen as 'Drum and Bass' for the music genre. 'drum' is included in 'drumstep'

Sources used: PLANET//SHAPER, SoundCloud, Masaya Oya, Cametek.

General Suggestions

• Difficulty Settings

1. You could increase the OD to 7.4 to make the patterns more challenging and decreasing the HP to 4.6 to compensate for the increased OD, unless you plan on sticking with the same Difficulty Settings that Raiden used for his marathon. keep

[Space Velocity]

1. 00:02:017 (1) - Change to D finisher, the bass here is really noticeable as it starts off the first beat and fades out to the background so a Don finisher would represent this well as a first note.
2. 00:23:194 (9) - Change to D finisher, bass once again here is pretty noticeable and having a finisher would signal the end of the section before it and the start of the new section of the song after it and plus, the Don finisher complements the start of the synthetic sounds. imo not pretty noticeable
3. 00:36:253 (5) - Change to k, there's a snare drum here that you can represent with a Kat and a cymbal crash as well and plus, the Kat note would build on the to the existing Kat rhythm as it makes a triple and alternates between the 1/4 (k,d,k) for 00:36:253 (5,6,7) and that creates an interesting rhythm as well. keep. this part follows the melody
4. 00:45:076 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - For these 1/6ths patterns, while it's true it's mapped to higher pitched winding up sound, it's better to stay consistent as the previous 1/6th patterns at 00:44:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10), so it's easier to play and read since the 1/6th patterns overpower the rhythm unless there's a noticeable change in sounds like later on like at 00:45:782 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30).
5. 00:45:782 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - These 1/6th patterns should be the same as these 1/6th patterns later on at 00:46:488 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40) to keep consistency since the beat is mostly the same and the change in pitch is too faint to map to and it would also make it more intuitive to play and read the pattern. changed this part's patterns
6. 01:20:370 (13) - Change to D finisher, the bassline here is really noticeable as well as the key being played in the background is a bit different from the earlier 1/2 chords being played, so the Don finisher would complement this well. keep. K is in the back
7. 02:31:665 (1) - Change to D finisher, the synthetic growl is really raw and a Don finisher would represent that well and plus, you did a similar thing later on at 02:34:488 (1) to emphasize the loud melody here. oh its my mistake xd
8. 03:24:606 (13) - Change to D finisher, the bassline here can be emphasized with a Don finisher and it would signal the end of the 1/2 chord section ending and a new section in the song beginning. same reason, K is in the back
9. 04:42:253 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36) - I think it would make more sense if these 1/6th patterns were to switch with the 1/6th patterns later on at 04:42:959 (37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46), since the Kat progression in the 1/6th would be clearly seen and it would better represent the speed up at 04:42:959 as well. I was pointed out that the pattern looks monotonous, because i use all the same. I have to think about this part a bit more
10. 05:06:959 (1) - Change to D finisher, bass here could be better emphasized with a Don finisher and also would signal the end of the 1/4 section as the song progresses into mostly 1/2. unnatural
11. 05:28:223 (1) - I think the spinner end would be better snapped at 05:29:547, since the song cuts off at that timestamp. keep

Best of endeavors with this marathon.
Thanks for requesting from SΞCTOR #712 !

Ellyu wrote:

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Hi from my q. hi handsome muscle
Shit there is another 7.5* exit atmosphere. why u guys so love to leave our earth. xd
Fuck OD10 in hr and thank u for destroy my keyboard(yes snake kill me plz): https://puu.sh/vzVvX/585524ed03.jpg

[General]
03:02:723 hitsound too loud.50% better for me. and same with 03:02:723 (1) - okk

00:34:929 (6) - d cuz the pitch enhance at 00:35:017 (7) - no
00:35:106 (8) - feel better to remove this 1/4 drums here
00:37:047 (13) - k cuz the synth beat here
00:39:870 (13) - same as ^
00:45:959 (24) - better change to d cuz the pattern now is super hard to hit r u crazy
00:46:312 (29) - same as^ ^
01:35:194 (11) - remove this bass here
01:38:106 (2) - k to emphasize the heavy beat here. hmmm its ambiguous. keep now
01:39:517 (2) - 01:40:929 (2) - same as.and the second parts the same I guess. ^
01:42:341 add k here.
01:53:812 (4) - add d here to fit the drum
01:54:517 (11) - add d or k
02:03:959 (9) - 03:56:900 (9) - k to make the pattern easier to hit. no
02:33:606 (20) - d to emphasize 02:33:517 (19) - better. did something else
02:51:370 add note here.the map is already very hard now. so a big K after a 1/6 stream not that hard compare to other super hard stream. idk whether that is allowed
03:52:841 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this pattern uhh is hard. kdddkdk follows voice
03:59:106 add a d heyyy K is in the back

Surono wrote:

holy... another pp one

good emphasis overall of pattern but too repetitive, even didnt follow the drums to have contrast it. hope ranked soon in that year lol.

04:44:370 - but last part... :khantong:, 04:53:635 - 04:55:047 - 05:04:929 - 05:06:341 - you can kat these to emphasize the different flow at there. *the current emphasized with kats just reminds me with the previous ranked map lul jk*

gl

strickluke wrote:

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From my queue t/594747

Oh my, this will be difficult to mod, as I am not very good at playing taiko

Space Velocity

1. 00:04:488 (8) - Imo make this note k and other patterns like this as well
2. 00:10:135 (8) - ^
3. 00:25:135 (7) - d plays better here imo (and in all other patterns like this, since this part is mostly copy+paste) k is better here imo
4. 00:44:370 (1) - Oh god You might want to nerf this to avoid future problems I think it's okay because it expresses the synth sounds well.
5. 01:18:253 (1) - You could make this a k swap these - 01:17:900 (15,16)
6. 01:43:135 (8) - Make this a k It's closer to this sound - 01:43:047 (7)
7. 02:30:782 (20) - Make the ends of all of these patterns a k
8. 02:46:841 (11) - k I don't know what you're trying to emphasize.
9. 02:48:606 (1) - through 02:51:429 (29) - I think that you should only be using 1/6 in a few parts here... this is how I would suggest changing it http://puu.sh/vWFkJ/d8d3a94dbd.jpg Too much 1/6 seems like overmapping here... deleted few
10. 03:02:723 (1) - You don't have to change this, but you could delete a few notes here and there to make this part less repetitive and more interesting to play Can't found sound to express this part differently.
11. 03:59:194 (1) - It is probably best to put the preview point here, but do whatever you want ok
12. 04:41:547 (17) - This part is very hard Same reason at this - 00:44:370 (1)
13. 04:44:282 (56) - Delete this note, as it in unrankable before a D or a K It's not unrankable xd

Good luck on this mapset! Thanks \( ᐕ )/
No matter what the quality of this mod was, I got you a mod from Surono as well :p

1. 00:23:194 - what about using volume increase on this spinner?
2. 04:17:194 - and 04:38:723 - . I really got what you want to do (and it's fine) but it looks awful from AiMod, I mean using SV changes on kiai are a little strange. Also I feel like the first one isn't that important and second is unnecesary cuz it has the same volume/speed. Try deleting'em
3. 02:03:429 - you should change volumes here. I mean you should be increasing by each 1/1 cuz it's totally ascendant sound
4. 03:56:370 - same applies here ^^
5. 04:41:547 - ^
6. About diffname it's great, but I think you can find for something more creative/interesting it's totally up to you
7. 01:16:841 - this volume increase isn't neccesary imo, it's like the same as 01:15:429 -
8. 03:58:135 - what about using here Preview timing point? I think there's only a silence before it ^^

• 
  just commenting first secion is perfect imo ^^

1. 00:25:047 (6) - why not making this don to emphatise a little high pitch of 00:25:135 (7) - ?
2. 00:26:459 (6) - could apply the same, but if you don't want to get it repetitive then it's fine to leave it
3. 00:27:076 - there's a sound that deserves to be mapped since you're following the hard drum by using dons
4. 00:28:135 - same as above, I got you want something different but it's neccesary imo
5. 00:29:547 - ^
   well to not be repetitive I'll skip these same comments through this section, but I think isn't the best part to make the break , patterns are good imo, but the breaks are not that exact
6. 00:42:959 (1) - if you're using kat here you should make this kat 00:43:665 (9) - aswell, so to avoid quadra-kat I suggest you making this 00:43:576 (8) - don
   also I think it's so similar to Raiden's version of this, try making it a little different :c (just a personal pov)
7. 00:48:606 - since there aren't notes on this section you could delete these SV changes, they're unneccesary I think
8. 00:58:488 (1) - you could do this big note because the background sound is kinda strong o:
9. 01:00:429 (12) - make this don instead, kat is so high
   00:58:488 - also this section is a little dense and... bored imo, you could give some breaks :3 and make it a little more dynamic
10. 01:21:076 - what about making slider here? it's more interesting
11. 01:38:017 (1,2) - 01:39:429 (1,2) - 01:40:841 (1,2) - I think they should be kk instead dd cuz there's higher pitch than note that is right after'em
12. 01:41:547 (6) - you should delete this that quarter makes it look strange D:
13. 01:41:723 (8) - don!
14. 01:54:517 (12) - I'm not a fan of this... but I think this should be don because pitches :c
15. 02:03:606 (4) - try kat here, that pattern is a little weird
16. 02:06:253 - this section is fine, but I think it's a little repetitive, try changing somenotes somewhere :d
17. 02:29:194 (2,3,4,5) - try a kddk pattern, kkkk is overmapped imo
    not like patterns after this :p
18. 02:44:900 (7,8,9,10) - kdkk fills better imo
19. 02:51:429 (18) - yeah i know it's allowed and it's fine by talking about following drums... but probably make this little or let a break before this
20. 02:51:429 - same comment about volumes xD

xfraczynho wrote:

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hi! my mod as requested on mi queue https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/579972 hello!
tbh I haven't mod so much camellia cuz it's almost the only artist that I don't like but let's give a try xD (sry if it's bad ;;)

[General]

1. 00:23:194 - what about using volume increase on this spinner? synth's volume does not change (a descending sound)
2. 04:17:194 - and 04:38:723 - . I really got what you want to do (and it's fine) but it looks awful from AiMod, I mean using SV changes on kiai are a little strange. Also I feel like the first one isn't that important and second is unnecesary cuz it has the same volume/speed. Try deleting'em deleted
3. 02:03:429 - you should change volumes here. I mean you should be increasing by each 1/1 cuz it's totally ascendant sound ok
4. 03:56:370 - same applies here ^^ ok
5. 04:41:547 - ^ ok
6. About diffname it's great, but I think you can find for something more creative/interesting it's totally up to you i have no idea xdd
7. 01:16:841 - this volume increase isn't neccesary imo, it's like the same as 01:15:429 - synth sound start at 01:16:841 (9) - here, so deleted first one
8. 03:58:135 - what about using here Preview timing point? I think there's only a silence before it ^^ oh its cool

[Space Velocity]

• 
  just commenting first secion is perfect imo ^^

1. 00:25:047 (6) - why not making this don to emphatise a little high pitch of 00:25:135 (7) - ? ddkkddk is soooo boring
2. 00:26:459 (6) - could apply the same, but if you don't want to get it repetitive then it's fine to leave it ^
3. 00:27:076 - there's a sound that deserves to be mapped since you're following the hard drum by using dons mapped
4. 00:28:135 - same as above, I got you want something different but it's neccesary imo already d here?
5. 00:29:547 - ^
   well to not be repetitive I'll skip these same comments through this section, but I think isn't the best part to make the break , patterns are good imo, but the breaks are not that exact I like this because they express long synth sounds well.
6. 00:42:959 (1) - if you're using kat here you should make this kat 00:43:665 (9) - aswell, so to avoid quadra-kat I suggest you making this 00:43:576 (8) - don did something else
   also I think it's so similar to Raiden's version of this, try making it a little different :c (just a personal pov)
7. 00:48:606 - since there aren't notes on this section you could delete these SV changes, they're unneccesary I think
   slowdown this line
8. 00:58:488 (1) - you could do this big note because the background sound is kinda strong o:
9. 01:00:429 (12) - make this don instead, kat is so high keep
   00:58:488 - also this section is a little dense and... bored imo, you could give some breaks :3 and make it a little more dynamic hmm
10. 01:21:076 - what about making slider here? it's more interesting no?
11. 01:38:017 (1,2) - 01:39:429 (1,2) - 01:40:841 (1,2) - I think they should be kk instead dd cuz there's higher pitch than note that is right after'em dd is better imo
12. 01:41:547 (6) - you should delete this that quarter makes it look strange D: not even strange
13. 01:41:723 (8) - don! what, same pitch with 01:41:635 (7) - this
14. 01:54:517 (12) - I'm not a fan of this... but I think this should be don because pitches :c
15. 02:03:606 (4) - try kat here, that pattern is a little weird consider it
16. 02:06:253 - this section is fine, but I think it's a little repetitive, try changing somenotes somewhere :d
17. 02:29:194 (2,3,4,5) - try a kddk pattern, kkkk is overmapped imo all the same pitches
    not like patterns after this :p
18. 02:44:900 (7,8,9,10) - kdkk fills better imo keep
19. 02:51:429 (18) - yeah i know it's allowed and it's fine by talking about following drums... but probably make this little or let a break before this consider it
20. 02:51:429 - same comment about volumes xD
    same reason, slowdown this line but volume is fixed now

Well I think that's all from me, the song repeats a little after this so comments applies through the song. I just hope this can help you and good luck with this!

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

1. All seems okay

1. 00:25:312 - move this note to 00:25:223 - , as it's inconsistent following that beat in 00:26:635 - and other sections but not there.
2. 00:28:135 - same as ^, move this note to 00:28:047 - .
3. 00:30:959 - same as ^, move this note to 00:30:870 - .
4. 00:33:782 - same as ^, move this note to 00:33:694 - .
5. 00:47:106 - i suggest leaving a break at least there as it's a bit difficult to hit the big note after these 1/6.
6. 01:20:370 - add a note here, as you have one in 03:24:606 - and it's inconsistent.
7. 01:55:312 - how about add a finisher in these notes? 01:55:312 - 01:56:370 - 01:56:723 - 01:57:782 - 01:58:135 - 01:59:194 - and 01:59:547 - , it fits very good with vocals.
8. 02:15:429 - change to d? it fits better with the vocals and the beat.
9. 02:33:606 - if you really want a 1/6 it should start in 02:33:782 - and not 02:33:606 - .
10. 02:44:900 - same as ^, the 1/6 should start in 02:45:076 - and not 02:44:900 - .
11. 02:51:017 - i think it flows better if you delete this note as the "burst" starts at 02:51:076 - .
12. 03:48:253 - if you applied the suggestion of 01:55:312 - same here, big notes at 03:48:253 - 03:49:312 - 03:49:665 - 03:50:723 - 03:51:076 - 03:52:135 - 03:52:488 - .
13. 04:16:841 - i suggest deleting this note as it makes consistency with previous 4plets and the next one in 04:18:076 - .

Hanjamon wrote:

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Hello DDM, from my modding queue.

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

[General]

1. All seems okay

[Space Velocity]

1. 00:25:312 - move this note to 00:25:223 - , as it's inconsistent following that beat in 00:26:635 - and other sections but not there.
2. 00:28:135 - same as ^, move this note to 00:28:047 - .
3. 00:30:959 - same as ^, move this note to 00:30:870 - .
4. 00:33:782 - same as ^, move this note to 00:33:694 - .
5. 00:47:106 - i suggest leaving a break at least there as it's a bit difficult to hit the big note after these 1/6. keep, 00:47:017 (39,40,1) - its 1/4
6. 01:20:370 - add a note here, as you have one in 03:24:606 - and it's inconsistent. delete second one
7. 01:55:312 - how about add a finisher in these notes? 01:55:312 - 01:56:370 - 01:56:723 - 01:57:782 - 01:58:135 - 01:59:194 - and 01:59:547 - , it fits very good with vocals. hmm no, fits very good but cant add finisher at 02:00:606 (1) - this same sound.
8. 02:15:429 - change to d? it fits better with the vocals and the beat.
9. 02:33:606 - if you really want a 1/6 it should start in 02:33:782 - and not 02:33:606 - . why? it follows synth sounds at 02:33:606 (7,8,9,10) - here
10. 02:44:900 - same as ^, the 1/6 should start in 02:45:076 - and not 02:44:900 - . same^ 02:44:900 (7,8,9,10) -
11. 02:51:017 - i think it flows better if you delete this note as the "burst" starts at 02:51:076 - .
12. 03:48:253 - if you applied the suggestion of 01:55:312 - same here, big notes at 03:48:253 - 03:49:312 - 03:49:665 - 03:50:723 - 03:51:076 - 03:52:135 - 03:52:488 - .
13. 04:16:841 - i suggest deleting this note as it makes consistency with previous 4plets and the next one in 04:18:076 - .

tbh, some parts it feels the same as Raiden's version, but well, good luck~

Surono wrote:

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here comes a taiko mod

01:42:870 - change to kat then move 01:42:782 - here, 01:42:959 - kat and 01:43:312 - don here to follow burst drum. you cant just follow only backgrounds instru change to another pattern, ddk is not good imo

01:59:988 - 02:00:165 - swap, 02:00:253 - 02:00:429 - these vocal need contrast emphasize

02:17:900 - ~ 02:24:959 - can you a bit rearrange the emphasize of snare drum as kat? for variation in this part. avoid repetitive structure with previous part. ok

02:28:665 - just don it to keep consistent follow with kick drum as you did follow the snare drum 02:26:017 - from here

02:30:782 - 02:30:694 - swap, 02:30:694 - instru here and then 02:30:959 - emphasize this drum with kat these are emphasis of 02:30:782 (7) - high synth sound

02:36:341 - 02:36:429 - and 02:36:606 - same above

02:49:076 - 02:49:900 - 02:50:488 - these 1/6 3plet are too overmapped except 02:51:076 - this long kats stream. also 02:51:017 - delete this

wait 01:20:370 - this empty but 03:24:606 - add or delete them? stupid mistake xdd

03:53:106 - 03:52:929 - same before

03:54:606 - 03:54:694 - high vocal flow, could be kat 03:54:694 -. but 02:01:753 - here is weak so keep it as don

04:03:782 - kat to emphasize drum and differ emphasize sounds with 03:59:547 - dddk

04:05:282 - kat to give rhytmic

04:15:076 - same before

04:18:782 - need contrast with sounds between 04:18:694 - 04:18:870 - . so don 04:18:694 - here, you cant kat them unless 04:17:194 - similar flow like this

wait, 04:05:194 - 04:06:606 - similar sounds from here but structure inconsistent.. orz but its ok as variation they have different synth sounds

04:21:782 - ~ 04:38:547 - you can follow that 2nd important sounds that just 03:27:429 - similar from here

but 03:59:194 - ~ 04:38:547 - try something with thats not repetitive, such as follow drum at first part then follow instru at second part.

04:55:665 - from here needs variation, example 04:57:076 - 04:57:782 - 04:58:488 - 04:59:900 - then 05:02:723 - repeat again from here 05:02:723 - 05:03:429 - 05:04:135 - 05:05:547 -

overall still repetitive, tho camellia songs are mostly have variation bg sound structure when entering the loop part so you need to vary the loop part that have variation bg sound.

Hanjamon wrote:

would like to know if the suggestions without answer means ignored or accepted :thinking:

DDM wrote:

Hanjamon wrote:

would like to know if the suggestions without answer means ignored or accepted :thinking:

accepted

Surono wrote:

when you mapped something that already ranked, people will say " nice remap duud " jk

03:46:223 - delete and 03:46:312 - change kat
04:28:665 - kat to follow mainsounds 04:28:488 -
04:39:959 - kkd 1/4, 04:39:782 - follow mainsounds and the flow

nice reconstruction at last part, but I still looking for consistency structure at there.

you can catch me in game to discus it.

Kith190 wrote:

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Hi NM as asked here
First of all, gg for the song choise!

Space Velocity

00:36:782 - change to k
00:39:606 - same thing ^ variation things, keep
00:59:370 (6,8) - control + g
01:01:135 - change to d
01:03:076 - change to d
01:05:017 (6,8) - control + g
01:06:959 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - change to d d d k d d d k d k k d
01:09:782 - same thing ^ Remap this part, Thanks!
01:31:488 - place d no sound here
02:29:370 - change to d big drum sound at next note 02:29:459 (6) - . so keep
02:32:194 - same thing ^
02:35:017 - same ^
02:39:076 (3,4) - change to k (?) keep, same drum sounds with previous one
02:40:665 - change to d same reason, big drum sound at next note 02:40:753 (6) -
02:43:488 - ^ ^
02:46:312 - ^ ^
03:02:723 - same as since here 00:58:488 - ^
03:27:606 - change to d d is too low
03:38:900 - same thing ^ ^
04:04:312 - change to d (?) same synth sound with previous note 04:04:223 (8) -
04:08:547 - same (?) ^
04:49:841 - change to d keep

I enjoyed it so much! Good luck for rank!! ;D

davidminh0111 wrote:

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Hello from my queue:
This beatmap is popped bubble so jus a few suggestion before rebub

[Space Velocity]
00:15:959: Change to d here since to make a unity in 00:14:194 and 00:14:194 . they are different sounds. keep

02:51:429: Remove D here. This note 02:51:370 is too close to do a big hit when playing. consider it because the synth sounds certain there.

03:24:606: Add d here since there is a small vocal. can't hear that vocal sound

04:10:488 (1, 2): Ctrl + G? really? first one has higher pitch

04:16:135: Remove D, calm part here same BIG BASS sounds 04:17:547 (1) - 04:18:959 (1) -

Not really much things to fix. This mapset is very good now.
I love this beatmap. Good luck on ranking aa thanks

Hope this help you. : (

Taikocracy wrote:

hey look it's another pp farm map that's more overmapped than the other one. nice!

don't hate me it's the truth