DavidEd wrote:

From queue (M4M)

Salad
00:15:588 (2) - Add repeat since you are following the accordian
00:29:988 (2) - ^
00:20:788 - Add note?
00:35:188 - ^ for consistency

Diff is fine actually

Platter
00:01:788 (1,2) - Inconsistent ds with 00:00:988 (3,4) - . Goes for the entire intro. I'd focus on one fixated ds instead of mixing it up as this part doesnt have many important beats. thanks for pointing this out
00:11:788 (2) - x292 for consistent ds? Or space it out more as it is a strong beat? made it hdash
00:12:788 (2) - x276 and 00:12:988 (3) - to x382 for same reason as above.
00:37:588 (1,2,3) - Ranking criteria states that Basic hyperdashes (1/1, 1/2) may begin to appear, but must not be used in conjunction with each other. fixed

Rain
00:20:888 - Missing beat

Diff is fine. But I feel like it's lacking hyperdashes on strong beats.
00:11:788 (2) -
00:12:988 (5) -
00:19:388 (4) -
00:20:988 (1) -
00:22:588 (1) -
00:27:388 (3) -
00:29:388 (1) -
00:33:788 (4) -
00:35:388 (1) -

Playback
Nice diff! Couldn't find anything.

---

Decent set overall.

brb gonna watch this movie again now.

LiousPL wrote:

Hi! Mod from chat lel!

• 
  General
  
  All it's good OwO
  
  
  Playback

1. 00:10:588 (4,5) - Hard jump, reduce ds here~
2. 00:12:988 (1,2) - Move these closer a little
3. 00:26:188 (1,2) - ^
   
   Rain
   
   
4. 00:21:388 (3,4) - Take it to x:240 for make a harder dashes i dont think its a good idea. it will destroy the pattern
5. 00:27:488 - Missing note here
   
   Platter
   
   
6. 00:11:388 (1,2) - This jump is hard OwO sorry, lols
   
   Add a more Hdashes to this diff, and reduce a ds sometimes! if only i can. its hard to put hdashes because if i do, the diff will be as hard as rain. But i'll try my best.
   
   Salad
   
   
   Don't see anything wrong, nice patterns, nice flow~
   
   GL~

Paranoid Grapes wrote:

req in que



The hitsounding in the first 10 seconds before shouldnt be 60% like the rest of the song because of how soft the beginning is.

salad

00:20:788 (6,1) - increase the distance between these two because of how the song gets louder/different at 00:20:988 (1) - .

00:35:388 (1) - ^

platter

00:37:788 (2,3) - this should be a hyper to match 00:36:988 (1,2) -.

playback

00:03:388 (1,2) - increase the distance between these two as because theyre not slanted. it throws off the balance of the previous patterns so a player might over jump it.

00:03:788 (2,3) - same for here, these notes should not be walkable unless they are slanted to match flow.

00:19:388 (1) - hyper to this slider?

00:25:988 (8,1) - put a dash here.

murutattack wrote:

#modreqs Halo~

Salad

Disable Widescreen Support

00:20:788 (6) - Move this one to x:256, looks smooth.
00:16:188 (3) - I don`t recommend using Slider Tick as a Hitsounding Clap as no one ever did this.
00:22:588 (3) - ^ . And since this slider 00:22:588 (3), you can even make like this timeline.
00:35:188 (6) - Same as 00:20:788 (6). Move this one to x:256.

Overall, nothing much to say, its ok

Platter

Disable Widescreen Support

00:03:388 (1,2,3,4) - I really wish if dash was added after previous slider, but up to you. It's hard to adjust the notes. and I think it's already okay.
00:24:988 (3,4,5,6) - Sounds lot better like this timeline. Maybe (6) can be moved to x:464 to add jump here.
00:38:388 (1,2) - Better H-Dash it, like slope the (1) slider. Move the end slider to x:496 y:64.

Overall, kinda repetitive. For example : 00:26:188 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - is look way similar as 00:11:388 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - even though its similar beats, but its best if you can make something a bit different movements. For example, if too lazy enough, you can just Flip Horizontally, but that just idea. Or adding more distance. Adjusted some patterns

But If the current now is ok, then its ok

Rain

00:08:088 (5) - Maybe a bit left looks a bit better, move to x:432.

Unfortunately, this map is cool enough
Maybe CS i guess. Kinda a bit small but neh.Too easy if I make this CS<4.5 -- just to give the players challenge. But I will change it soon if someone notices it, again.

Playback

00:07:388 (3) - Move a bit left to x:208, seems ok if adding distance here.
00:28:588 (1) - New combo here
00:28:588 (1) - You can make H-dash for this one, like move the slider to x:187, then move the end slider to x:227 y:177.

Good Light Overdose Thanks!

I think thats it, good luck for ranking
(Btw overdose is really funny btw lol) Thank you!

AsrielDr33murr wrote:

Salad:

Nothing much

Platter:

00:01:188 (4) - I feel like the slider should be two ticks shorter and there should be a hit circle where the slider starts (sorry for poor wording) i'll not change it. but if someone notices it again i'll change
00:08:188 (1,2,3,4) - Uneven spacing what do you mean? its DS is fine
00:31:988 (4,5,6) - Uneven spacing fixed

Rain:

00:35:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern should be slowly going to the left, rather than a stair pattern (again, sorry for poor wording) idk. but the stair pattern is fine. the jumps seems to have a good flow, so keeping it for now

Playback:

00:36:088 (4) - NC i changed 5 instead

Ponchiwi wrote:

Salad

1. 00:11:788 (1) - Sound obviously strong, so why not put a dash? move to x160 maybe?
2. 00:18:188 (1) - same here
3. 00:29:388 (1) - same / x432
4. 00:32:588 (1) - same / x320
5. 00:36:988 (1,2) - I can reach them without dash, add dash away more
6. 00:37:788 (2,3) - move these notes 4 grid to the right
7. 00:38:588 (2) - move to x448 for can add feeling necessary for dash in the last note 00:38:988 (3) - rearranged this part but i did it differently

Platter

1. 00:00:188 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I would recommend you remapping this start, it's kind of boring cruz your notes going from right to left over and over again i'm going to keep this pattern
2. I can see that this diff need any hdashes and strong sounds maybe here you can put one
3. 00:22:588 (1) - Why add a hdash if in this part you don't have any strong sound? I suggest removing it
4. 00:25:388 (5) - slider x2 and add a note here 00:25:988 (6) - and finally 00:26:188 (1) - ctrl +G and move to x320 for make a soft hdash i'm keeping this pattern for now.

Rain

1. you have active the option "Widescreen supp" desactivala(?
2. Same for in rain for the begining, remapping keeping it for now
3. 00:25:788 (7) - umm , you should delete slider x2 and add a new slider like here okay. but i fixed it with my own design

Playback

1. 00:38:388 (6) - Very far, try in x312

-Nicotine wrote:

I finally have time for this!
Mod soon

Hareimu wrote:

[General]

1. Combocolour 2 is unrankable, since pure white/pure black break various skins and cause excessive strobing when kiai time is triggered (even if this map doesn't have a kiai to begin with). You can easily fix this by making it a bit greyish so that it's not 255,255,255.

[Salad]

1. Overall, most (if not all) of the distances are completely walkable for a salad and I had to press the dash button just a couple times in the whole map, which is a pretty clear sign of the walk/dash distances not being distinguished enough in between them. Consider reviewing/testing the whole diff (it's 38 secs long, shouldn't take that long) and making clear which movements are walks and which are outright dashes.
2. 00:10:988 (3,4) - Stacking these two is weird considering that (4) has a cymbal sound and should have at least normal distancing between it and (3), along with some extra emphasis. tl;dr: ctrl+h (4) and the rest of the diff as well and this should be fixed, pretty much. okay
3. 00:16:188 (3) - 2x distancing from the previous repeat slider works wonders here since the instrument played at the background (is it an accordion or something?) has a relatively higher pitch than the rest of the sounds it produced so far. okay
4. So far, most of the curved sliders almost feel like they're completely vertical rather than curved like they should suggest because of their shape on the editor. tl;dr: Curve them a bit more? (00:09:788 (2) - , 00:13:588 (5) - , 00:19:988 (5) - , 00:27:988 (5) - , etc). it's better now
5. 00:28:988 (7) - 1,5x distancing from the previous note? Doing this makes the movement to 00:29:388 (1) - be more clear, since I'm not completely sure it's a walkable distance (edge-walkable at most) or a really short dash distance. fixed
6. 00:30:588 (3) - You could edit the shape of this slider so that it's more tricky to catch and the catcher is not downright standing still to catch it whole. fixed
7. 00:35:188 (6) - Make the distance between this one and the previous slider 1x instead? So that the distance between this note and the next is 2x and it's an actual dash movement and yeah, you know the drill.
8. 00:35:388 (1) - Tilt this slider outwards instead of inwards? It makes the distance between the next one increase a bit and makes the dash to it clearer this way. Like this
9. 00:36:988 (1,2) - This is a clear example of what I mean when I say that distances aren't clear enough. Increase the distance between these to 2x instead, the dash is way clearer this way. okay
10. 00:37:588 (1,2) - You could also make distances between these be 1,5x and 00:37:788 (2,3) - 2x between these. okay
11. 00:38:388 (1,2) - 2x between these if you apply the previous.
12. 00:38:588 (2,3) - 1,25x between these?

[Platter]

1. Note: Issues with distancing between walks and dashes may apply to this diff as well, so please check that out too. added some dashes on some parts
2. 00:38:388 (1,2) - The distance between these is way too much, even for a 1/1 dash. Reduce it to 2x at least, please. followed DS 2x

[Rain]

1. 00:19:388 (4,5) - I think this was supposed to be a hyperdash but didn't get triggered properly because of the border of the playfield, but even so, having it as an edgedash (2,2x distancing) isn't really good either. Consider reducing the distance between these two. fixed
2. 00:22:388 - Why do you have this slidertick muted when it has a sound on the later diff (Playback Time)? Please give it a hitsound, since to add up to this, there's an audible instrument sound being played at the background. 00:22:488 - Muting this sliderend is enough, I think. fixed this issue. added a note on 00:22:488

[Playback Time]

1. 00:06:588 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - The movement between these becomes really repetitive, since the slidershape you decided to use for all these is the same. Try and vary the shapes of them a bit more just like you did at the beginning with 00:01:788 (1,2,3) - these, for example. It's better now!

Done! Best of lucks with this mapset <3

I laughed the shit out of myself when modding throughout the diffs with mr. bean looking at me with those faces at the bg

-Nicotine wrote:

Boi Im not yet finish modding so have a Salad.

Salad:
00:07:988 (1,2) - Tilt more a bit since the lit part of the song is about to start. good idea
00:11:988 (2) - This feels unwelcoming for the players in the start because of the gap between 00:11:788 (1) - . I'd move 00:11:988 (2,3,4) - 3 grids (level 2 grid), then curve the slider to be more smooth. okay
00:16:788 (4) - This slider is confusing because of the anti-flow. There is no strong sound supporting it (Well even if there is, it is still confusing for new players). A straight tilted slider facing to the right should fix it. okay then
00:17:588 (6) - The only 1/2 slider that is different from the rest. I'd just make it a diagonal. adjusted
00:24:188 (2,3) - Yes this walkable, but this is too far. New players have the tendency to dash even tho there is no sound supporting it. I'd reduce the ds. okay
00:28:988 (7) - The sharp anti-flow followed by a large ds is really hard for new players. okay
00:30:588 (3) - What. I know you are emphazing the sound but I also find this sudden. I'd just make this a diagonal slider if you want this to stand out than the rest. true, i therefore realized that my slider is heavy for a salad -- still I want to keep it. I'll try to fix this if someone poke me again.

Shanofanboy wrote:

m4m req
I'm sorry that so few
I apologize in advance for my poor english ;cc


I'm not really into modding platter diffs, too Kappa, but i will try

• Platter

1. 00:23:788 (4,1) - maybe 1 move close to 4. I think inexperienced players may miss at this moment okay
2. 00:35:188 (9,1) - to emphasize main beat need move 1 from 9 i don't know what you mean, but i assume i need to move 1 away from 9. okay then.
   
   Rain
3. 00:22:588 (1,2,3,4) - this moment looks boring. if you like it, try this: okay
   
   ~

   
4. 00:25:788 (7,1,2) - 1 move from 7 to have make 7 dash it's hard to adjust. so i tried to ctrl+g 1 and move it away from 7.
5. 00:27:588 (5) - maybe make 1/4 slider with reverse? i'll change this soon.
6. 00:33:988 (5) - ^ same with this one
   
   Playback Time
7. 00:11:788 (2,3,4) - maybe 3,4 move from 2 to have make 2 hdash its better this way now.
8. 00:25:688 - add note maybe? okay
9. 00:18:188 (1,2,3) - i think need move 2 from 1 to 3 will not change for now.
10. 00:26:188 (1,2) - 2 move close to 1 maybe? okay
11. 00:28:988 (3,4) - ^ And the same can be done with 00:36:988 (1,2) - okay
12. 00:24:988 (4,5,6) - I think it is quite difficult. Try this if you are like it i like my pattern here. it gives more stress to the players.
    
    ~

    
13. 00:31:988 (5,6) - 6 move close to 5 maybe??? but i don't know what to do with 00:32:588 (1,2) - not going to change for now

Enchant wrote:

• 
  Playback Time
  
  General

1. Maybe AR 9.3 for the extreme hyper dashes. okay
2. No kiai? It's not the time for kiai to enable. It's rankable even without kiai
   
   Gameplay
3. 00:01:688 (5) - Move to the right to create a nicer flow. (x=324 y=177?) okay
4. 00:04:488 (4) - ^ only this time to the left okay
5. 00:10:788 (5) - Move a little to the right, feel like this movement is kinda drastic for the sound okay
6. 00:11:788 (2) - Song picks up on this note, maybe enable kiai time here until the end? look up
7. 00:14:188 (4) - Move this way more to the right, the flow here is kinda weird for a diff like this well the pattern is okay for this diff especially its CS is 5; even though, I followed your suggestion
8. 00:15:788 (4) - Move this above 00:15:588 (2) - for a perfect triangle. i don't want it to be a perfect triangle. this pattern makes the diff harder and better flow. so keeping it for now
9. 00:18:988 (5) - Move this above 00:18:788 (4) - for a perfect triangle. same with this one
10. 00:21:288 (2,4,2) - This flows really strange, make a better flow by doing this instead going to keep this pattern for now. i will change it if someone sees it again.
    
    Suggestion

    

Will check your mod later.

1. Why 01.jpg, 02.jpg and 03.jpg is not HD, please change into a HD one.
2. I think rain is okay to me and sorry, I don't want to mod playback time.

1. This is good, keep up the good work.

• New combo:

1. 00:01:588 (3,1) - 00:03:188 (3,1) - 00:04:788 (3,1) - 00:06:388 (3,1) - why you NC like this? I don't get it. Why not NC every 2 reverse slider example like 00:07:988 (1,2) - this?
2. 00:16:788 (4) - NC here? it is getting full if you play it and also beginning of the new sound.
3. 00:20:788 (6) - NC here for obvious reason.
4. 00:22:588 (3) - start NC here? make same combo with 00:23:188 (4,1) - this.
5. 00:35:188 (6) - NC here?
6. 00:38:988 (3) - NC here for aesthetic?

• Timeline:

1. 00:24:188 (2) - I barely hear a sound here.
2. 00:30:588 (3) - this is not consistent with 00:16:188 (3,4) - despite it have the sound same.

• Pattern & spacing:

1. 00:13:588 (5) - move this slightly to the right give a smooth jump, consider moving it to x:336.
2. 00:15:588 (2) - this is confusing, whether to walk or dash, consider moving it to x:240.
3. 00:13:588 (5) - I can catch this without a dash, consider make a dash at x:336 consistently like the previous one, 00:13:588 (5) - this.
4. 00:21:788 (2) - ctrl + g?
5. 00:24:988 (1) - I'm not sure if you want to make a walk or dash because I can catch without a dash. If you want to make a walk, consider moving one grid to the right to make a smooth catch.
6. 00:25:388 (2,1,2) - I can catch this without a dash, please make it same with previous distance.
7. 00:27:388 (4,5) - same as above, consider move 00:27:988 (5,6,7) - this to x:144.
8. 00:31:988 (5,1,2) - too close? I can't understand.
9. 00:33:788 (4,5) - same as above.
10. 00:36:188 (2) - slightly move this to the left at x:144.
11. 00:36:988 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - make this pattern balance rather than on the right side by ctrl + h 00:37:788 (2) - this.

• New combo:

1. 00:19:988 (1) - make this one group combo with 00:18:188 (1,2,3,4) - this, 00:20:788 (2) - make new combo and one group combo with 00:20:988 (1,2,3,4) - this.
2. 00:27:988 (1,2,3,4) - make this one group combo with 00:26:188 (1,2,3,4) - this, like you did at 00:12:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this.
3. 00:35:188 (9) - start NC here for the new sound.
4. 00:38:988 (2) - NC here for aesthetic?

• Timeline:

1. 00:34:888 (7) - I can't hear a sound here, I only hear echo of previous 00:34:788 (6) - sound.

• Pattern & spacing:

1. 00:01:188 (4) - give the tail of this slider slightly to the left to create a must dash to catch next note.
2. 00:05:988 (4) - give the head of this slider slightly to the left to make a smooth dash, I can catch without a dash.
3. 00:11:388 (1,2) - please make the distance more larger, consider at x:240.
4. 00:12:788 (2) - move this to x:224 for a must dash if you want to make a dash.
5. 00:14:988 (1) - move to x:464, reason same as above.
6. 00:19:188 (3) - move to x:336, ^.
7. 00:20:788 (2,1) - move one grid to the left?
8. 00:23:788 (4) - dash or not? if not make the distance closer to previous note.
9. 00:27:188 (3) - move to x:352, for a must dash.
10. 00:38:388 (1,2) - maybe too far, please reduce the distance a little bit.

SYAHME wrote:

Subject: SYAHME's CtB Modding & GD Queue[CLOSED] You have requested a mod from my modding queue but I will mod this maps instead of maps that your request, sorry. If you have time I hope you can mod my maps: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/607985, I really appreciate it.
[General]

1. Why 01.jpg, 02.jpg and 03.jpg is not HD, please change into a HD one.
2. I think rain is okay to me and sorry, I don't want to mod playback time.

[Cup]

1. This is good, keep up the good work.

[Salad]

• New combo:

1. 00:01:588 (3,1) - 00:03:188 (3,1) - 00:04:788 (3,1) - 00:06:388 (3,1) - why you NC like this? I don't get it. Why not NC every 2 reverse slider example like 00:07:988 (1,2) - this?
2. 00:16:788 (4) - NC here? it is getting full if you play it and also beginning of the new sound.
3. 00:20:788 (6) - NC here for obvious reason.
4. 00:22:588 (3) - start NC here? make same combo with 00:23:188 (4,1) - this.
5. 00:35:188 (6) - NC here?
6. 00:38:988 (3) - NC here for aesthetic?

• Timeline:

1. 00:24:188 (2) - I barely hear a sound here.
2. 00:30:588 (3) - this is not consistent with 00:16:188 (3,4) - despite it have the sound same.

• Pattern & spacing:

1. 00:13:588 (5) - move this slightly to the right give a smooth jump, consider moving it to x:336.
2. 00:15:588 (2) - this is confusing, whether to walk or dash, consider moving it to x:240.
3. 00:13:588 (5) - I can catch this without a dash, consider make a dash at x:336 consistently like the previous one, 00:13:588 (5) - this.
4. 00:21:788 (2) - ctrl + g?
5. 00:24:988 (1) - I'm not sure if you want to make a walk or dash because I can catch without a dash. If you want to make a walk, consider moving one grid to the right to make a smooth catch.
6. 00:25:388 (2,1,2) - I can catch this without a dash, please make it same with previous distance.
7. 00:27:388 (4,5) - same as above, consider move 00:27:988 (5,6,7) - this to x:144.
8. 00:31:988 (5,1,2) - too close? I can't understand.
9. 00:33:788 (4,5) - same as above.
10. 00:36:188 (2) - slightly move this to the left at x:144.
11. 00:36:988 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - make this pattern balance rather than on the right side by ctrl + h 00:37:788 (2) - this.

[Platter]

• New combo:

1. 00:19:988 (1) - make this one group combo with 00:18:188 (1,2,3,4) - this, 00:20:788 (2) - make new combo and one group combo with 00:20:988 (1,2,3,4) - this.
2. 00:27:988 (1,2,3,4) - make this one group combo with 00:26:188 (1,2,3,4) - this, like you did at 00:12:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this.
3. 00:35:188 (9) - start NC here for the new sound.
4. 00:38:988 (2) - NC here for aesthetic?

• Timeline:

1. 00:34:888 (7) - I can't hear a sound here, I only hear echo of previous 00:34:788 (6) - sound.

• Pattern & spacing:

1. 00:01:188 (4) - give the tail of this slider slightly to the left to create a must dash to catch next note.
2. 00:05:988 (4) - give the head of this slider slightly to the left to make a smooth dash, I can catch without a dash.
3. 00:11:388 (1,2) - please make the distance more larger, consider at x:240.
4. 00:12:788 (2) - move this to x:224 for a must dash if you want to make a dash.
5. 00:14:988 (1) - move to x:464, reason same as above.
6. 00:19:188 (3) - move to x:336, ^.
7. 00:20:788 (2,1) - move one grid to the left?
8. 00:23:788 (4) - dash or not? if not make the distance closer to previous note.
9. 00:27:188 (3) - move to x:352, for a must dash.
10. 00:38:388 (1,2) - maybe too far, please reduce the distance a little bit.

Good luck on ranked this.

-Nicotine wrote:

Alirhgt let's get this done before getting a Mod from a BN.

Platter:
I almost missed on the first part, I can't tell at first if do you need dash.
Platter literally only has 5 hyperdashes. This is not appropriate for ranking. Here some notes that I found H-dash worthy
00:14:588 (7) -
00:17:788 (6) -
00:27:388 (4) -
00:19:988 (1) -
00:35:188 (9) -

Fixed everything



Rain:
00:38:588 (2) - curve this? fixed
Nothing much on rain. This diff feels pretty clean. thanks

Playback Time:
00:01:788 (1) - The Hyper doesn't emphasize anything. If it meant to emphasize 00:03:388 (1) -, then It wouldn't have much impact. I'd suggest reducing this into a dash. ! hyper alone is enough. theres no hdashes here. i don't know what you mean
00:05:788 (3,4) - Here aswell. not going to change it for now.
00:08:988 (3,4) - SUggestion: Feels non-repetitive if you just make (3) a reverse arrow. Then adjust the rest for flow. I based this on the first 4 previous patterns that's why its like that. no change for now
00:23:388 (3) - I'd Hyper this, Since there is a whistle hitsound on 00:23:988 (5) - fixed
00:27:988 (2) - Hyper? I assume you meant was I need to make 1's tail hdash. so i did. fixed

Nice. I'm sorry that my mod got delayed. It's okay, i thought you're not going to continue it. sorry for that. lol

Adiopulse wrote:

kds plz

Diffs need kiai time no need.

Salad
00:21:588 - should be a note to accent that accordion pitch change okay, added
00:35:388 (3,4) - these should tilted more. okay

BoberOfDarkness wrote:

some few suggestions about timeline for top diff cuz' I couldn't find more issues

1. 00:02:888 (4) - note is inconsistent with rest of part and feels odd
2. 00:03:288 - place for note
3. 00:04:588 (4) - triplet would work here actually.
4. 00:06:488 (5) - overmapped note
5. 00:09:788 (1) - actually would be better as 1/4 stream
6. 00:10:488 - place for a note
7. 00:14:088 - ^
8. 00:17:488 - ^
9. 00:23:288 - ^
10. 00:24:688 - and 00:24:888 - those are another good spots for notes
11. 00:30:888 - ^
12. 00:37:388 - and 00:37:488 -
13. 00:37:988 - 00:38:288 - you could map something more here, slider/stream

gl

-Nicotine wrote:

Still open for cup gd?
I want to map it lolz

Minato Yukina wrote:

I'm late

[Rain]
00:12:388 (3,4) - Is this should be the straight flow? I think it shall be better with anti to emphasize drum sound on 00:12:588 , better consider it added distance to 4 to emphasize drum sound.
00:35:688 (2,3) - The distance is almost like edge dash, it's not recommended for Rain difficulty. Please reduce it more and same goes with 00:36:088 (4,5) - reduced

[Playback Time]
00:10:188 (5,6) - I hope this gets more distances for better flow okay
00:14:188 (4,5) - Distance for here is not enough, try to curve 00:13:588 (2) - more then you can get enough space okay
00:22:088 (2,3) - Similar reason as 00:35:688 (2,3) - for Rain difficulty mod, it can be considered as edge dash
00:27:188 (5,1) - Edge dash before the HDash is an unrankable thing!! edited

liuzicheng4732 wrote:

M4M~

Salad
This salad makes me very comfortable. It doesn't have any kind of anti-flows, which makes it easy to read. Although it might be a little too easy for a salad, but since your mapset doesn't have a cup, it is perfect to set the difficulty as this.
One possible mod is to replace 00:09:788 (2) by a spinner. This could varyfy the final scores. i'll keep the slider. spinner might be hard for the beginners. its pretty confusing. Thanks for the suggestion, anyway.

Platter
Several gaps might be too big for a platter-level player, from my perspective:
00:02:788 (4,1)
00:05:988 (4,1)
00:12:988 (3,4)
00:14:988 (1,2)
00:17:788 (6,1)
00:18:188 (1,2)
00:28:988 (8,1)
00:29:988 (2,3) fixed
I'd suggest you either enlarge them into hyperdashes or shorten their gaps. Besides, there are also other mods:
00:13:588 (4,5,6,7) - This is too hard for platter. Please move object 5 to object 7's position or reverse the position of 5 & 7 don't want to change it. it's already fine and will disrupt the pattern. i just reduced its distance
00:36:588 (5,1,2) - Never use consecutive hyperdashes in platter. You may reverse the position of 1 & 2 changed it in my own style. i realized its hard hahaha.
Besides, you may also consider turning 00:09:788 (1) into a spinner. However, since I also really appreciate the pattern before and behind it, I'm not going to strongly suggest you do this. its fine now.

Rain
I think there's nothing much left to mod after your update on Jul 15. However, As you set CS=4.5 and AR=9, though still within the allowed range for rain criteria, I think it might be a bit too hard for rain and you don't have to push everything to maximum. Please consider the possibility to set CS=4~4.2.
Alongside, Please also consider whether you can turn 00:09:788 (1,2) into a spinner. But same as in platter, you can also keep it because the pattern is great. sorry, but CS4.5 looks better, but i can consider CS4.2 only that, it makes the diff easier. and i unlikely consider having spinner for this mapset.

Playback Time
The map is perfect from my view, only it's far more difficult than the stars it shows. in a positive way. lol.
You can add whistles for the sliders' tails of 00:02:588 (3) and 00:08:588 (2) okay

Hope these suggestions could be helpful!