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Kadowaki Mai & Nakai Erika - Sweet Duet

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, October 09, 2011 at 4:06:00 PM

Artist: Kadowaki Mai & Nakai Erika
Title: Sweet Duet
Source: Strike Witches
Tags: Hime Uta Collection 2 Oohashi Ayuru Sanya V Litvyak Eila Ilmatar Juutilainen
BPM: 155
Filesize: 13399kb
Play Time: 03:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.11 stars, 201 notes)
  2. Hard (4.86 stars, 418 notes)
  3. Insane (4.93 stars, 535 notes)
  4. Insane-2 (4.95 stars, 476 notes)
  5. Kiddo's Normal (2.99 stars, 217 notes)
  6. Ozzy's Taiko (4.72 stars, 1178 notes)
Download: Kadowaki Mai & Nakai Erika - Sweet Duet
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Sweet duet.

I got the mp3, hitsounds, and go count, from: latiaslove

AYR, 3, 2, 1, Go! and HitSkin (300,100,50,X) from sherrie_fay

Please mod my map!~
Waryas
nope.nope
Fumi-chan
Tested, gave bg, star.
Nymph
nice song 8-)
Dr Loliberg
sanya
plot
star
AnFace
Rocket legs slapping in your tender mouth
Cyril Scarlet
Suimya
Gcode <333
Dr Loliberg
I tried making the taiko diff. :3

Download: Kadowaki Mai & Nakai Erika - Sweet Duet (Gcode) [Taiko].osu
Squidifications
Kola
Star :3 <3
Goisuke_old
Star :)
Kiddo-Kun
All these are suggestions~

[General]

- I think you should make a Normal diff to fill the gap between Easy and Hard. I'll be glad to make one. (Maybe I'll finish a diff for you at long last >.<)

[Easy]
-I'd like you to look over where you placed the new combos in this diff, a good amount of them seem out of place. Make sure they are all consistent and not all over the place, and they follow the music.( For Example" 00:23:433 (1) - Remove this new combo)

01:16:465 (3) - Remove whistle and add a finish hitsound.
01:38:240 - Remove this inheriting section and do the same for the next 7.
01:45:885 (1,2) - I think it would sound better if you changed the sound for these ones also. Like you did to those previous notes.
02:08:723 (2) - Add a finish to the end of this slider.
03:38:515 (1) - Pull the tail of this slider down one grid (Lvl4)

[Insane]
Don't you go changing this too much! O-...Or...Or I'll kill you!
(In other words I can't find anything wrong with this map and I like how it plays out. Don't let too much changes get to it.)

Overall: Easy is really the only one that needs improvement. The rest of the Diffs are fine. Solid map.


I STAR U
HAHAHA Get it!? Because It's a STARYU, and I Star U! HAHAHAHA...HAHA..Ha..Heh. ;~; Kill me now.
nOtashy
nicejob~
OzzyOzrock
CMP
wow~


rhythm pattern is intereest



---my pending map---


http://osu.ppy.sh/s/31388
sherrie__fay
http://puu.sh/3OTJ

the "321GO" part skin is here
includes are you ready? 3,2,1 and go lol
it really take me time to pick a "clean" image lol ahahaha~
so are you ready? ;)
se-sukeEila
I like Eila & Sanya!!

応援してます! :)
star~☆
Lance
I-it's not like I want to star you or anything... b-baka...
(insert constructive stuff)
Clashway
Gcooooode!

Very fun map, and it looks nice to boot. All my feedback was given in game. Have yourself a star. Looking forward to playing this when it gets ranked.
iCrondy
I love the map really good timing ^^

you have my star <3
val0108
ya!! Random mod.

[Hard]
00:45:498 (1,2) - slider sounds noisy >_>
00:24:207 (1,2) - spacing weird.
00:50:917 (2,3) - how about this? http://puu.sh/3U43 Sound of the violin.
00:53:046 (1) - really fast spin lol Do you add anything circle?it's better.
01:01:369 (1) - I thought slider to be 01:01:175 -
01:07:756 (1,2) - overlap.i want to not overlap :x
01:28:272 - delete timing line,
02:09:498 (3) - remove hitfinish
03:28:257 - break time here
03:47:418 (1) - spin end here 03:48:773 -? and,remove 03:48:773 (1) -
03:52:256 (1) - it's better http://puu.sh/3U5b

[Easy]
AR5!? change 3.
00:23:433 (1) - remove new combo
00:33:498 (1) - remobe new combo?
00:57:498 - addnote
00:57:885 (1,1) - A slider works after a spin immediately.I recommended this x)) http://puu.sh/3U5s
01:48:982 (1,1) - ^
02:24:594 (1,1) - ^
02:28:465 (1,1) - ^
01:12:014 (2) - this slider is hard about them.anything change,
01:28:272 - same as hard.
02:03:304 (1) - remove new combo
02:12:401 (1) - start here02:12:594 - and it's beter. http://puu.sh/3U69
02:38:143 (2) - only one repeat.and 02:38:917 - add note?
03:14:917 (1) - remove new combo
03:16:078 (1) - ^
03:19:175 (1) - ^
03:20:336 (4) - new combo
03:21:498 (1) - remove new combo
03:20:336 (4,5,1) - spacing.
03:28:257 - break again.
03:48:773 (1) - delete.then, add note 03:49:160 - and 03:49:547 -

[Insane]
IRC mod.

good luck!!
star for youuuuuuuuuu
hoLysoup
hihi~ suggestions

[General]

maybe add 'insert song' in tags?
for all diffs: 03:34:450 - make kiai over here? :O instead of here 03:20:336

[Hard]
00:36:982 (2,3) - spacing~
00:45:885 (2) - maybe change this into a beat instead of slider
02:03:111 (1,2,1) - quite confusing.. maybe space them out

[Insane]
mm, could prolly use OD7 and turn hp drain down to 7 as well, 8 is too high I think. Hence you need to keep placing new combos at random places.
01:05:433 (5,1) - spacing ~
01:12:788 (1,1) - remove new combo
01:15:111 (1,1) - you actually dont' need to set new combos so often.. I don't think players need all the hp gain
02:29:627 (1,1,1,1) - uhh.. I don't think you need this many new combos in 2 seconds.
03:46:450 (1) - ^
03:48:385 (1,1,1) - ^
03:59:224 (1) - ^

☆~
Sync
Cut your mp3

Insane-v2
00:28:853 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like how this pattern kills movement. I'd suggest moving further away from (4).
00:32:709 (x) - Unsnapped inherited timing section
00:32:805 (x) ^
00:33:111 (1) - Kind of misleading, I'd stack it with the note before it
00:34:272 (1) - Remove combo (some of your combos don't follow the music well)
00:35:046 (9) - New combo
00:36:207 (1) - Remove combo
00:36:788 (1) - New combo
00:40:853 (1) - Remove combo
00:41:433 (7) - New combo
00:44:530 (2) - this placement sux, do something like this http://puu.sh/bHzd and then do something with the jump after it
00:48:981 (1) - Remove combo
00:49:175 (4) - New combo
00:50:143 (1,2,3,1) - These don't really fit, I'd remove them and replace them with a spinner
00:54:014 (1) - Remove combo
01:06:207 (1) - Remove combo ffs
01:06:401 (1) - New combo
01:08:530 (1) - Remove combo
01:08:723 (1) - New combo
01:12:401 (5) - New combo
01:12:498 (2) - Add a hit circle
01:12:594 (1) - Remove combo
01:59:627 (6) - Make this into a slider that is one beat long and make (7) into a hit circle
02:00:207 (7) - New combo
02:00:401 (1) - Remove combo
02:00:788 (1) - Remove combo (silly combo spam)
02:01:369 (1) - ^
02:01:756 (1) - ^
02:15:111 (1) - Very difficult to read because there are hit circles and combo bursts covering most of the shape.
02:29:627 (1) - Remove combo
02:29:820 (5) - New combo
02:39:304 (6) - New combo
03:04:659 (2) - Bad placement, move (2) to where (1) kind of blankets it
03:14:917 (1) - New combo
03:15:304 (1) - Remove combo
03:15:691 (1) - Remove combo
03:16:078 (1) - Remove combo
03:19:562 (1) - I'm not a fan of un-intuitive sliders like these (aka you have to guess when they are going to end). Perhaps replace it with a long slider to follow the vocals. http://puu.sh/bHIp
03:43:740 (6) - New combo
03:46:063 (4) - New combo
03:49:160 (1) - New combo

ok I have to go now so I'm just going to leave this here and I'll get to the rest later. Also, I said a bunch of shit in PM and realized you weren't even here.
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