Here comes a long looking simple mod (i've changed the AR coz it's way easier for me to analize)
00:30:943 - Insert break time
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/830333500:35:751 (1,2) - Slider
00:38:385 (2) - Replace with a long slider from there to 00:40:654
00:41:898 (3) - One shorter and add a hit with Finish
00:45:117 (1,2,1,2) - Separated
00:52:873 (2,3,4,5,6) - this looks way better
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/830339800:55:215 (2) - Distance snapping at 1.9x and put it between 1-3
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/830342100:55:361 (3,4) - Just me or it looks weird?
00:55:654 (4,1,2,3,1) - it's easy to miss 1-2, something like this would be better
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/830343500:58:288 (1) - ctrl+h and torn it back where it was
01:04:581 (1) - Make it look more direct to 2
01:05:166 (3) - Between 2-4 with distance snapping of 1.4x
01:05:459 (5) - Too far, put it on top of 4
01:15:995 (2) - Put in on top of 1 and change the shape
01:19:215 (3) - ctrl+h and put it closer to 2
01:19:654 - Hitcircle here
01:19:800 (4) - Looks better with a spike to the left
01:22:288 (5) - Non reverse, and add a long slider on the previous slider end, adn end it 01:22:873
01:24:044 (1) - shorter and add a hit on 01:24:922
01:25:507 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - Make a perfect triange with this
01:25:946 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - "" ↑↑↑ ""
01:27:995 (2) - Litle off distance,
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8303563 this is better
01:30:776 (8) - Make it have the same curve as 7 and ctr+j back in to place
01:32:678 - Hit here
01:37:507 - ↑""
01:41:166 (6) - Reverse
01:41:605 (1) - Closer to the new slider end
01:47:166 (4) - Make the end fit the 2
01:49:507 (5) - Start new combo here and put it on top of the "2"
01:50:385 (1,2,3,4) - Make them follow better the 5 curve
01:53:312 (1) - it's one beat longer than what it should
02:02:678 (5) - Make it more like and S form
02:05:459 (2) - Add a hit circle on top of 3
02:11:312 - Hit
02:13:654 - Hit
02:19:068 (1) - Make it longer and non reverse
02:21:117 (1) - add a Hit and start spinn on the blue line
02:23:751 (1) - Not "on beat"
02:27:117 - Hit
02:45:995 (4,5,6) - Don't make it a stack
02:50:678 (7) - one beat longer and put 1 on top of it
02:58:288 (4) - Closer to 3 and add a note on 02:58:142 on top of it
03:00:044 (3) - put 4 Kick sliders from 044 to 922
03:04:142 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - This looks super weird
03:29:898 (3) - 1 reverse less and add a hit at the end
03:36:190 - Hit
04:13:654 - Hit
04:41:898 - Hit
04:45:410 (3,4) - Slider
04:48:922 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Really weird shapes and overlap with low AR (for EZ mod)
05:13:068 - Hit
05:28:727 (1) - Split it in half
05:30:776 (5) - 1 kick less and add a Hit with Finish
05:59:166 (3) - and it at 898 and add a Hit at 044
06:05:312 (2,3,4) - Perfect triangle
06:49:873 - Breake time
06:53:312 (1) - Put it on top of 3
07:46:190 (2,3,4) - Not snaped and add a Hit on 727
08:06:483 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ALL of this looks way too simple for what you are capeable of
08:22:873 (1) - Slpit in 2
08:44:824 (1,2,3) - I think they are starting on teh wrong beat and split 1
08:46:873 (1) - Too slow? or just me?
08:53:605 - End with a spinn taht ends here
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