00:04:606 (4606|2,4914|1) - Two suggestions here:
00:04:914 (4914|1) - Erase this one, so the impact of the snare on 00:04:606 will be more noticeable.
i add this note to follow the guitar, you want me to ignore the guitar after i map in the early second?, guess notOr exactly the same but using a chord for that snare:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/996498600:05:222 (5222|3) - Like before you could ignore the kick here and start the Longnote on 00:05:376 - where the snares appear.
like i say, this is for guitar LN00:14:914 (14914|2,15068|2) - I think you can move 00:15:068 (15068|2) - to |1| instead, to be more easier.
for a start, its better that way00:25:222 (25222|1,25222|2,25683|0) - I prefer some arrange like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9965012 to be more repetitive in this part. I think that fits better.
00:32:760 (32760|0,32914|0,33222|1,33376|1,33683|2,33837|2,34145|3,34299|3) - I will more clear here, i think this pattern could be perfect for a Normal, but for an Easy i think is too much. Remember that this is 195BPM, so this is fast in my opinion.
Suggestion:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9965030 its not really hard if it just 2 jack 00:35:837 (35837|2) - Move this note to |3|, is empty there.
00:37:683 (37683|3,38299|3) - I rather move 00:38:299 (38299|3) - to |0| instead to be less empty.
00:44:453 (44453|0,44606|3,45068|0,45068|1) - I think this could look better in this way:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9965045 or zoom in:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9965049 <- In that way you follow the direction to the right that you was doing before.
01:04:760 (64760|2,64914|2,65068|1,65222|1) - Like i said before, is too much. Suggestion:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9965075 just i say above not reall that much since just 2 jack note not three01:15:222 (75222|1) - I rather move this note to |2| for less strain.
01:55:991 (115991|3,116453|1,116453|2) - I prefer to move the chord to the left:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9965114 is more easier than the current arrange that use that Longnote in the same right hand.
02:05:991 (125991|2) - What sound is represented here?
02:16:145 (136145|0,136299|0,136453|3,136606|3) - Again, too hard. In this case like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9965129 no change02:18:453 (138453|2,138453|1,138760|0,138914|1) - I think that the chord on |0||3| reflect more the cymbal sound rather than |1||2| positions. Maybe like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9965144 nah it would become the same as at first kiai, and i prefer dont want be same02:47:068 (167068|3,167530|0,167683|2) - I think this could be more easier like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9965167 <- Since the vocal should end on 02:47:837 , i prefer to cut it before when the first snare appear and also the cymbal sound is reflected better on |0||3|.
03:10:299 to 03:20:145 - I don't know what sound exactly are you following here. Is like you follow some vocals and some parts of the violin. I think you could follow the vocals, since they are more loud than the violin, so:
03:10:299 - "Kiri" vocals:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9965242 03:12:760 - "dakedone":
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9965249 <- The last Longnote is a bit more longer: the vocal ends before, but i think that is better since there are some breathing that fits with the length in my opinion.
03:15:222 - "ha shiro mina":
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/996528503:17:683 - "i..."
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9965300 <- The second Longnote can be cut for another one for the guitar riff that appears on 03:19:376 -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9965308 Up to you here.
^
what i followed, i think a choir i guess, this point i used as a break point after a long duration of song, so not gonna changes here03:30:760 (210760|1,211068|3,211376|2,211530|0) - These could look better like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/996532003:53:530 (233530|1,233683|1) - Hard, you can move 03:53:683 (233683|1) - to |3| instead.
04:07:683 (247683|0,247837|1,248299|0,248453|1) - Is similar, i prefer to do this instead:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/996534204:18:606 (258606|3,258914|0) - I think that 1/2 LNs at 195BPM can be for a Normal as well, not for Easy. I rather do this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9965355 or
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9965351 04:21:683 (261683|0,261991|1,262145|2,262299|3,262453|2,262606|1,262760|0,262760|3) - To fit better with the vocals i rather do:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9965368--------------------
Hitsounds:
W = Kick ; Drum->C = Tom. Just saying so it will be more clear.
Still not sure why are some that are W for Toms (when Drum->C will fit better... like you did on 00:29:068 (29068|3,29530|2) ).
I think you could priotize the kicks for now. Adding Toms just complicates the use of hitsounds. Is better know beforehand which one is the correct.
this is just for certain part that i used toms00:13:068 (13068|0) - W left.
00:17:683 (17683|3) - This is a snare, C.
00:19:530 (19530|3) - Also, snare. C.
00:20:145 (20145|1) - Drumrolls, i think is C as well.
00:56:606 (56606|3) - W left.
00:58:299 (58299|3) - C left.
01:01:991 (61991|0) - I think is W or Drum->C for tom.
01:04:299 (64299|1) - C left.
01:13:222 (73222|3) - I think is W left, because 01:11:991 (71991|3) - have both (and many like this have).
01:14:453 (74453|2) - ^Same case here.
01:21:837 (81837|1) - Drum->C for toms.
01:22:299 (82299|2,82914|0,83068|3) - I think these are tom drums as well. So Drum->C.
its clearly kick01:23:991 (83991|1,84299|2) - ^Same case here.
^01:29:068 (89068|2) - Is snare, C.
01:31:222 (91222|1) - ^C.
01:31:530 (91530|2) - ^Again.
01:35:376 (95376|0) - I'm not hearing any cymbal. Is snare only in my opinion, erase W.
01:41:991 (101991|1,102299|2,102606|3,102914|1,103222|0,103530|2,103837|3) - All are snares, just a bit distorted at the start. So C.
really? i think you too focus on snare but beside that there is a kick01:44:145 (104145|0,104606|3,105068|1,105530|2) - F left, for cymbal.
01:46:606 (106606|2,106606|1) - Any of these, F and C (cymbal and snare).
01:51:530 (111530|3) - W left.
01:55:837 (115837|0) - C left.
01:59:376 (119376|1) - W left? or Drum->C.
01:59:530 (119530|3) - C left.
01:59:837 (119837|2) - W left? or Drum->C.
02:00:760 (120760|2) - C left.
02:01:222 (121222|3) - C left.
02:03:376 (123376|1) - W left? or Drum-C.
02:03:683 (123683|0) - Is a snare, C.
02:04:299 (124299|3,124760|0,124914|1) - W left? Still thinking that these are Toms, so Drum->C will be more appropiate.
02:05:068 (125068|2,125068|3) - Any of these, F and C.
02:06:299 (126299|1) - Drum->C.
02:07:991 (127991|1) - W.
02:09:683 (129683|0) - Snare, C.
02:10:299 (130299|0) - W.
02:10:760 (130760|1,130914|2,131068|1) - Drum->C.
02:11:222 (131222|0,131376|3,132453|3,132606|0) - Add W as well.
02:13:222 (133222|2) - Drum->C.
02:15:530 (135530|0,135683|2) - C left.
02:24:606 (144606|0) - W left.
02:25:837 (145837|1) - W left.
02:27:376 (147376|1,147837|2) - Drum->C.
02:32:606 (152606|1,152914|0,153068|1,153222|2) - ^.
02:35:376 (155376|2) - Drum->C in my opinion...
02:36:145 (156145|3) - Snare, C.
02:36:299 (156299|1,156606|2) - Erase C, Add F and W.
02:39:683 (159683|0) - Snare, C.
02:42:145 (162145|3) - ^.
02:47:068 (167068|3) - Add W.
02:57:068 (177068|2,177376|0) - Add C.
03:00:453 (180453|1) - Add W.
03:05:376 (185376|2) - Add F.
03:27:530 (207530|0,207991|2,208453|1,208914|3) - Cymbals and Snare, add F and C.
03:42:606 (222606|2) - Add F.
03:52:606 (232606|0,232914|1) - I think there is some cymbals here, add F.
03:54:914 to 03:58:914 - All are snares as well, just distorted at the start. Replace W for C.
03:59:530 (239530|1,239530|3) - Any, add W and F.
04:00:453 (240453|3) - Is a Snare, C.
04:05:991 - This is snare, but wasn't mapped. (i think that is because you follow the vocals here but still, is inconsistent with the rest in this section...)
04:10:914 - Same case here...
I will skip this on next diffs, because can be confusing in the current state. I think you should be more consistent.
00:04:914 (4914|1) - This is for whistles? Isn't better to do this instead:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9984953 For kick and following the vocal better.
this is for guitar00:09:991 (9991|2,10145|3,10299|0,10453|1) - For the drumroll here, i think this will fit better:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9984975 i followed guitar too not snare, just 00:15:376 (15376|1) - Move to |0| instead, it will reflect better that cymbal.
00:32:760 to 00:34:760 - Is too hard in my opinion, suggestion:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/998503100:44:453 (44453|1,44453|0,44606|1,44606|0) - Comparing with EZ on right seems hard:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9985043 I rather do this instead:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9985051 of course if you comparing to ez is rather hard lol, no change here00:46:145 (46145|3,46453|3,46760|3) - Why? I rather move 00:46:453 (46453|3) - to |0| for less strain.
why? because it has same sound01:02:145 - Why the Stairroll? It seems very repetitive. Suggestion:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/998509201:45:991 (105991|3,105991|0,106145|2,106145|1) - I rather change this to emphasize better the end of that repetitive pattern:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/998515702:05:991 - Remember EZ here? Why there is a Longnote on EZ when here not?
02:13:683 - I think this is better arranged:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/998519302:17:530 (137530|2,137530|1,137683|1,137683|2) - I prefer this instead:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/998520202:25:837 (145837|1) - This is different from the rest? I rather do this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/998521302:57:068 (177068|1) - To be different from EZ, try this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9985244 why adding another LN what is for?03:07:683 (187683|0) - Also, to be different from EZ:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/998526703:10:299 to 03:20:145 - You can check the EZ for correct vocals. This part here currently is almost the same as EZ just adding some LNs for violin sounds. Some suggestions:
03:10:299 -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/998530703:12:760 -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/998532503:15:222 -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9985343^ this part i used for a break point dont need a unnecesary note, just follow the violin and choir03:55:222 (235222|3,235530|3,235837|3,236145|3) - Can you spread more these notes? It seems repetitive.
it is note repetitive just a jacky style03:55:991 (235991|0,236299|0,236606|0,236914|0) - ^Here as well.
^03:58:606 (238606|0,238760|0,238914|1,239068|1,239222|2,239376|2) - I think this can be more easier if you alternate hands like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/998537104:03:530 (243530|2) - Is a cymbal. Why no chord? Rearrange better if you applied.
Spread Issues: There some parts that are more harder if you compare with NM: i rather use 1/2 patterns on NM so you can use 1/4 patterns here.
Even though those parts are short in some cases, still is a big increment on difficulty in my opinion. More explained just below.
00:04:914 - HD left, NM right:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9985390 There is a big difference here because there is 1/4 streams on HD but 1/1 or larger LNs on NM.
The short way will be to replace those LNs on NM for 1/2 patterns of notes instead.
Otherwise nerf the 1/4 stream on HD to 1/2 stream. Up to you.
just like i said in NM, those LN in NM is for guitar00:19:914 (19914|0,19991|1,20068|2,20145|3,20222|2,20299|1,20299|3,20299|0) - You can move this better, like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/998543600:32:760 - Why is easier than the current NM? Anyway, try this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/998546000:38:299 (38299|2,38376|3,38453|2) - I rather move 00:38:376 (38376|3) - to |0| instead.
01:34:453 - Ok, but i suggest that you change the NM diff. to 1/2 LNs to be less unexpected the spread between these two difficulties:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9985502 i dont really undestand why compare this to NM01:41:991 - ^Same case here:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9985538 You could add some chords on NM, maybe in: 01:42:914 - 01:43:222 - 01:43:530 - 01:43:837 .
^01:46:299 - No LN for this vocal? Seems very empty.
it is empty, just take it for a break here01:55:068 (115068|3,115145|2,115222|3) - I prefer to do this instead for less strain with that trill:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/998557902:06:299 - Again for spread, Replace the 1/1 LN on NM for 1/2 notes:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9985583 nope02:13:222 - ^Same case as before, use 1/2 notes on NM:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9985614 ^02:15:683 (135683|3) - This LN should end on 02:16:145 - for vocal.
02:27:376 - Again. Spread:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9985635 you want me to ignore the note just for spread, sry no lol02:56:606 - ^Same case:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10099066 ^03:06:606 - Note Left? Like you did on: 03:02:914 - 03:04:145 - 03:05:376 - .
03:10:299 to 03:20:145 - Currently, the spread difference here is: 4/1 patterns on NM against 1/2 patterns here:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10099139 You can use the same screenshots that i took on NM and change it here (as you like) so the spread difference will be less noticeable.
03:31:837 - Still thinking that is too much:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10099215 1/2 patterns for NM and will be good.
nope03:41:222 - ^Same case,
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10099232 ^03:51:530 - ^https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10099239 - In this case you could use two LNs on 03:51:530 and 03:51:837 - for NM difficulty:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10099257 ^03:55:837 - Chordstream here but NM is very lackluster:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10099273 - Suggestion: add more chords on NM maybe each 1/1 or 2/1 beat. Otherwise, you have to nerf this part on HD.
^04:18:606 - Spread,
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10099315 ^judging from your modding this diff, its seems you want me to nerf the diff for the spread, im sorry i cant do that, i map what i heard on this diff even if its stream note, but in easier pattern than hardest diff, if you complain about the spread, blame the song this that has much stream and high BPM lolFor Screenshots, Left = Maximum Live! ; Right = HD.
00:00:760 - Except for the repetitive arrange, is very similar to HD.
It will be better if you accentuate the guitar riffs different when they sound more louder, maybe like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10099369 Try it.
you know, it is similar but only amount of the note, the different is pattern, in this diff i follow the pitch sound where it comes, different doesnt need adding note but about flow and pattern come00:09:376 (9376|1,9530|1,9683|1,9837|1,9991|1) - I think you can add some notes (1/2) on HD so it will be less empty.
00:22:760 (22760|3,23068|3,23222|3,23376|3,23530|3,23683|3,23837|3,23991|3) - ^Same case as above, use a repetitive pattern on HD (or add some 1/4 LNs for guitar riffs). It will be better in my opinion.
00:28:914 - What is the correct snap?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10099427 I say 1/4.
01:16:837 -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10099459 - I prefer to erase the note on 01:16:837 (76837|3) In other words, no jacks at the end of the stream. For spread most than anything (1/4 doubletrill vs 1/4 stairs). I will skip the next ones (I think i already did, but this will be the only suggestion about this).
01:24:453 (84453|3,84453|1,84453|2) - I hear cymbal here but, I don't have very clear when you add a quad. This should be it or not?
for quad i added it last impact 01:25:530 (85530|1,85530|0,85530|3) - Same case as above.
^01:41:991 - I rather change the direction so it will be less hard:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10099571 and
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10099579 i dont know but for me it really easier to "Read" like this pattern, i mean all you have to do spam 2 finger on same hand, while the other hand do 0 1 0 1 0 1 literally02:56:914 (176914|3,177068|3,177222|3,177376|3,177530|3) - I think you can improve the arrange, maybe like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1009960703:10:299 to 03:20:145 - I will skip this part. Since i don't know what you applied before on easier diffs.
just combination of EZ NM HD, so : piano choir and violin03:41:376 (221376|0,221530|0,221683|0,221837|0,221991|0) - I think will be easier with only one column be repetitive instead of two, like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10099652 it has the same sound so it has to be same collumn, i mean since i follow the pitch for this diffI was thinking on doing 6K mod, but i think the 4K mod have enough work to do before doing something on 6K at the moment. [/color]
Also, i don't want to wait a month more... sure you think that as well about the time lol.