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Kaifin wrote:
moddoko demo ikuyo
STORYBOARD wow WAOWNormal
- there isn't really anything objectively wrong with this difficulty, there are a lot of circles in a row for a relatively high BPM but it is technically a Normal diff and there's literally nothing confusing about it so i don't think there's too much of an issue here Alright, I'll fix this later if needed
- one thing i will say is that a lot of your patterns aren't really patterns as much as just notes in a line, while this is objectively rankable and okay, try to make more varied and interesting rhythms/patterns the next time you make a lower diff Noted!
Advanced
- 00:12:150 (1) - avoid using sliders with multiple repeats in diffs like this, it kind of melts the new player mind Alright, extended to a 1/1 repeat
- 00:28:739 (2,3,1,2,3) - so, you use a lot of circles in a row in this difficulty too, which is where it becomes an issue. These kinds of strings of 1/2 notes are too difficult for this diff level at 170 bpm, using 1/2 sliders in the place of these is generally the way to go in advanced difficulties, i'm not about to point out every string of 1/2 notes in the map but generally using more than 2 to 3 in a row is a nogo, even in incredibly intense sections Reduced, should be better now
- this diff also suffers from the same "notes in a row" issue as the normal, but to a lesser extent, i appreciate patterns like 00:37:562 (1,2,1) - and 00:43:209 (1,2,1) - which add some variety but its not enough as of right now Tried to vary it a bit in places
- please note that (not in an insulting way but just in a truthful one) while there is nothing objectively wrong with your difficulty in the terms of the ranking criteria, it is incredibly bland which is no fun for the lower player to play. taking note from patterns in other easy diffs, and the extremes of making easy diff's fun like the lower diffs in Hollow Wing's sets i think for the future of your lower diff mapping would be very helpful Yeah, I get this feeling too, will do!
you need a Hard here for the diff spread as the jump between advanced and Insane is too high Waiting on Easy + Hard GDs, so not an issueInsane
- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3BC_I2ufqC8 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=87CX7bxov7o these videos will help you 10000x more then anything i can say
- as for some specifics to look out for
- 00:37:032 (5,1) - make sure when you do stuff like this you stack Done!
- 00:38:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - i can't really tell what streams like this one in the slow section are mapped to, but sometimes it is less fitting to make something clickable depending on the intensity of the song There's sounds in the background... isn't there?
- 00:40:563 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is an example of a WELL chosen rhythm in your song, this fits the sounds perfectly Thanks!
- 00:06:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is an example of a poorly chosen rhythm, it doesn't fit the sounds in any sort of fitting way that i can discern Fixed
- to use an example, here's the main chorus:
the most important sounds in the main chorus right off the bat is clearly the CU TIE PANTHER WA TA SHI, which lands on 01:07:209 - 01:07:562 - 01:07:915 - 01:08:268 - 01:08:444 - 01:08:797 - 01:09:150 - respectively: all of these should be clickable or emphasized in some special way, the way you do it is up to you and the other instruments you use as filler rhythm to supplement are also up to you Alright, fixed this and the repeat of it.- another point is consistency: in higher difficulties like this one don't just ignore sounds to make up your own rhythms if you start following something. as an example here is this triple 01:09:680 (4,5,6) - that has a 4th note 01:09:944 - that is just flat out ignored when it is just as loud as the others Didn't even notice that ngl, fixed as well
- 01:12:856 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - another example of GOOD rhythm choices, this is good it follows the song, your main goal is to follow the song I can sorta do this properly then haha
as for everything else, after you get the rhythm down you can worry about your patterning and aesthetics but this should give you plenty to work on and go through in this map and all of your maps for the future Thanks!
good luck hopefully my mini rhythm lesson was helpful irc me if you want more help
your storyboard is nice thanks, it took a lot of time xd
I see no fav :thinking:JeirYagtama wrote:
You get a fav xd
00:03:680 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1) - what the fuck, remap
u should check out pishifat's videos for more information on how to map
good luck!
u should check out pishifat's videos for more information on how to map
good luck!
Topic Starter
it's my style.Firetruck wrote:
00:03:680 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1) - what the fuck, remap
u should check out pishifat's videos for more information on how to map
good luck!
hey hey nm from my mod
Like the others suggested, I recommend watching pishifat's videos again just to get a better grasp on flow and emphasis.
Good luck! osu needs more Love Live
Insane
00:06:855 (3,4,5) - everything seems to be distance snapped until this. I also don't particularly hear any emphasis in the music to justify higher spacing, so consider keeping it consistent
00:08:268 (3,4,5) - ^
00:11:268 (1) - Why NC?
00:12:856 (4,5) - The different shapes but different pointing directions seems pretty unaesthetic. Maybe try having them be the same shape
00:15:857 (6) - Here, both the head and tails are emphasized but its a slider. 00:17:269 (6,7) - here, its the same emphasis, but its two clickable objects. In my opinion the second one fits much more than the first, so consider modifying it
00:20:622 (1,2,3) - Why is this a triple? I don't really hear anything in the music that would warrant this. Maybe you are mapping to held vocal? but even then, I think a single circle works and plays much better than this
00:22:739 (4,5,6) - Same here. Consider getting rid of the triple
00:27:680 (1) - Vocals start on slider end? Maybe make that clickable instead. 00:28:033 (2) - Same here. I would just do a rhythm like this
00:33:327 (1,2,3) - Spacing here is so small compared to 00:34:210 (3,4) - , where there is no sound worth mentioning on 4. Consider spacing emphasis on insanes
00:38:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Not sure why theres a stream here. Nothing in the music, and frankly, having a drumroll or something here would sound really bad
01:00:151 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I get what you're trying to do here, but it seems like your copy pasta needs to be shifted some. The first syllable of the first sequence starts 01:00:151 (1) - here and the 3 note sequence is made up of 01:00:151 (1,2,3) - these three. However, the first syllable of the second sequence is 01:00:857 (5) - here, and the second sequence is made up of 01:00:857 (5,6,7) - , when according to your pattern, it should be 01:00:680 (4,5,6) - to be the same notes.
01:09:680 (4,5,6,7,1) - Fix stream shape
00:08:268 (3,4,5) - ^
00:11:268 (1) - Why NC?
00:12:856 (4,5) - The different shapes but different pointing directions seems pretty unaesthetic. Maybe try having them be the same shape
00:15:857 (6) - Here, both the head and tails are emphasized but its a slider. 00:17:269 (6,7) - here, its the same emphasis, but its two clickable objects. In my opinion the second one fits much more than the first, so consider modifying it
00:20:622 (1,2,3) - Why is this a triple? I don't really hear anything in the music that would warrant this. Maybe you are mapping to held vocal? but even then, I think a single circle works and plays much better than this
00:22:739 (4,5,6) - Same here. Consider getting rid of the triple
00:27:680 (1) - Vocals start on slider end? Maybe make that clickable instead. 00:28:033 (2) - Same here. I would just do a rhythm like this
00:33:327 (1,2,3) - Spacing here is so small compared to 00:34:210 (3,4) - , where there is no sound worth mentioning on 4. Consider spacing emphasis on insanes
00:38:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Not sure why theres a stream here. Nothing in the music, and frankly, having a drumroll or something here would sound really bad
01:00:151 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I get what you're trying to do here, but it seems like your copy pasta needs to be shifted some. The first syllable of the first sequence starts 01:00:151 (1) - here and the 3 note sequence is made up of 01:00:151 (1,2,3) - these three. However, the first syllable of the second sequence is 01:00:857 (5) - here, and the second sequence is made up of 01:00:857 (5,6,7) - , when according to your pattern, it should be 01:00:680 (4,5,6) - to be the same notes.
01:09:680 (4,5,6,7,1) - Fix stream shape
Like the others suggested, I recommend watching pishifat's videos again just to get a better grasp on flow and emphasis.
Good luck! osu needs more Love Live
Topic Starter
All fixed, picked up on a bunch of things I didn't notice/completely overlooked, so thanks for helping!Kami-senpai wrote:
hey hey nm from my modInsane00:06:855 (3,4,5) - everything seems to be distance snapped until this. I also don't particularly hear any emphasis in the music to justify higher spacing, so consider keeping it consistent
00:08:268 (3,4,5) - ^
00:11:268 (1) - Why NC?
00:12:856 (4,5) - The different shapes but different pointing directions seems pretty unaesthetic. Maybe try having them be the same shape
00:15:857 (6) - Here, both the head and tails are emphasized but its a slider. 00:17:269 (6,7) - here, its the same emphasis, but its two clickable objects. In my opinion the second one fits much more than the first, so consider modifying it
00:20:622 (1,2,3) - Why is this a triple? I don't really hear anything in the music that would warrant this. Maybe you are mapping to held vocal? but even then, I think a single circle works and plays much better than this
00:22:739 (4,5,6) - Same here. Consider getting rid of the triple
00:27:680 (1) - Vocals start on slider end? Maybe make that clickable instead. 00:28:033 (2) - Same here. I would just do a rhythm like this
00:33:327 (1,2,3) - Spacing here is so small compared to 00:34:210 (3,4) - , where there is no sound worth mentioning on 4. Consider spacing emphasis on insanes
00:38:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Not sure why theres a stream here. Nothing in the music, and frankly, having a drumroll or something here would sound really bad
01:00:151 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I get what you're trying to do here, but it seems like your copy pasta needs to be shifted some. The first syllable of the first sequence starts 01:00:151 (1) - here and the 3 note sequence is made up of 01:00:151 (1,2,3) - these three. However, the first syllable of the second sequence is 01:00:857 (5) - here, and the second sequence is made up of 01:00:857 (5,6,7) - , when according to your pattern, it should be 01:00:680 (4,5,6) - to be the same notes.
01:09:680 (4,5,6,7,1) - Fix stream shape
Like the others suggested, I recommend watching pishifat's videos again just to get a better grasp on flow and emphasis.
Good luck! osu needs more Love Live
Hey NM from my queue
most of this mod is being a blanket nazi xd
Good luck hope this helps
Insane
Overall the gameplay was really smooth and nice Short mod because I couldn't find much >.<
00:31:915 (1,2) - I don't see the reasoning behind such a small spacing here. If you're trying to create emphasis, maybe stack 1 and 2 instead to make it slightly harder to read? Just my opinion
00:33:327 (1,2) - This could look a little better
00:34:562 (1,2,3,4) - I think the whistle might be a little overpowering perhaps whistle only on the slider head and maybe a finish on the slider end? (Something along those lines)
00:37:562 (1) - Fix blanket <3
00:40:209 (3,1) - ^
00:43:915 (3,4) - ^
00:57:503 (2,3) - I don't think this spacing change is justified by the music
00:59:621 (3,4,5) - I'd curve this triplet, this is completely subjective tho
01:00:327 (2,3) - think larger spacing works better, especially with the intense part of the music coming up
01:00:679 (4,5,6) - ^ If you decide not to change the spacing, perhaps fix triangle?
01:01:915 (3,4) - larger spacing works better imo
01:02:268 (5,6) - ^
01:03:503 (4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7865790 This fits the rhythm better imo
01:15:503 (1) - There's more emphasis on the white tick rather than the red tick. I'd change 6 into a slider and 1 into a circle and try to emphasize 1 with larger spacing
01:17:797 (3,4,5) - This could look a little better imo
01:19:915 (1,2) - Blanket is a little off
01:20:974 (4,5,6,7) - This could look a little better i think
01:22:562 (1,2,3) - I'd change this to a triplet and start the sliders on 01:22:915 and 01:23:268 to match the vocals
01:32:444 (1,2,3) - This could blanket the slider I think
01:34:738 (5) - I think a reverse slider works better here
01:37:209 (3) - Blanket's slightly off
01:38:621 (1,2,3) - This could look a bit better
00:31:915 (1,2) - I don't see the reasoning behind such a small spacing here. If you're trying to create emphasis, maybe stack 1 and 2 instead to make it slightly harder to read? Just my opinion
00:33:327 (1,2) - This could look a little better
00:34:562 (1,2,3,4) - I think the whistle might be a little overpowering perhaps whistle only on the slider head and maybe a finish on the slider end? (Something along those lines)
00:37:562 (1) - Fix blanket <3
00:40:209 (3,1) - ^
00:43:915 (3,4) - ^
00:57:503 (2,3) - I don't think this spacing change is justified by the music
00:59:621 (3,4,5) - I'd curve this triplet, this is completely subjective tho
01:00:327 (2,3) - think larger spacing works better, especially with the intense part of the music coming up
01:00:679 (4,5,6) - ^ If you decide not to change the spacing, perhaps fix triangle?
01:01:915 (3,4) - larger spacing works better imo
01:02:268 (5,6) - ^
01:03:503 (4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7865790 This fits the rhythm better imo
01:15:503 (1) - There's more emphasis on the white tick rather than the red tick. I'd change 6 into a slider and 1 into a circle and try to emphasize 1 with larger spacing
01:17:797 (3,4,5) - This could look a little better imo
01:19:915 (1,2) - Blanket is a little off
01:20:974 (4,5,6,7) - This could look a little better i think
01:22:562 (1,2,3) - I'd change this to a triplet and start the sliders on 01:22:915 and 01:23:268 to match the vocals
01:32:444 (1,2,3) - This could blanket the slider I think
01:34:738 (5) - I think a reverse slider works better here
01:37:209 (3) - Blanket's slightly off
01:38:621 (1,2,3) - This could look a bit better
most of this mod is being a blanket nazi xd
Good luck hope this helps
Happy birthday Maki !
Mod based on testplay , fell free to deny anything
Insane :
In some parts the distance spacing is too small , for example 00:20:622 (1) - . Same here 00:31:563 (4,5) - 00:31:915 (1,2) - , between those pairs , distance is not equal
00:33:327 (1,2,3) - Imo looks boring , mb try something else . https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7866250
00:34:562 (1,2,3,4) - same as here , you can try this if you want https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7866263
00:37:210 (6) - blanket with 00:37:562 (1) -
00:39:856 (2) - i would put in blanket with 00:38:974 (1) -
00:41:092 (2) - same distance with 00:41:269 (3,4) - , to form a nice triangle
00:41:621 (1) - same slider as 00:40:563 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7866301 . Pattern looks better now imo
00:57:680 (3) - check distances , 00:57:680 (3) - this one is too small , looks random
01:01:562 (1) - from this point music intensifies rise , so you can add more distance snap between notes to express that
Advanced:
00:05:797 (2) - a minor fix to looks better? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7866327
01:03:680 (2,3,4,5) - position is strange. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7866338
That's all ii can find , gl !
Mod based on testplay , fell free to deny anything
Insane :
In some parts the distance spacing is too small , for example 00:20:622 (1) - . Same here 00:31:563 (4,5) - 00:31:915 (1,2) - , between those pairs , distance is not equal
00:33:327 (1,2,3) - Imo looks boring , mb try something else . https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7866250
00:34:562 (1,2,3,4) - same as here , you can try this if you want https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7866263
00:37:210 (6) - blanket with 00:37:562 (1) -
00:39:856 (2) - i would put in blanket with 00:38:974 (1) -
00:41:092 (2) - same distance with 00:41:269 (3,4) - , to form a nice triangle
00:41:621 (1) - same slider as 00:40:563 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7866301 . Pattern looks better now imo
00:57:680 (3) - check distances , 00:57:680 (3) - this one is too small , looks random
01:01:562 (1) - from this point music intensifies rise , so you can add more distance snap between notes to express that
Advanced:
00:05:797 (2) - a minor fix to looks better? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7866327
01:03:680 (2,3,4,5) - position is strange. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7866338
That's all ii can find , gl !
Topic Starter
Fixed all apart from that one triplet, and a few of the jumps, thanks!Nihs_Nooj wrote:
Hey NM from my queueInsaneOverall the gameplay was really smooth and niceShort mod because I couldn't find much >.<
00:31:915 (1,2) - I don't see the reasoning behind such a small spacing here. If you're trying to create emphasis, maybe stack 1 and 2 instead to make it slightly harder to read? Just my opinion
00:33:327 (1,2) - This could look a little better
00:34:562 (1,2,3,4) - I think the whistle might be a little overpowering perhaps whistle only on the slider head and maybe a finish on the slider end? (Something along those lines)
00:37:562 (1) - Fix blanket <3
00:40:209 (3,1) - ^
00:43:915 (3,4) - ^
00:57:503 (2,3) - I don't think this spacing change is justified by the music
00:59:621 (3,4,5) - I'd curve this triplet, this is completely subjective tho
01:00:327 (2,3) - think larger spacing works better, especially with the intense part of the music coming up
01:00:679 (4,5,6) - ^ If you decide not to change the spacing, perhaps fix triangle?
01:01:915 (3,4) - larger spacing works better imo
01:02:268 (5,6) - ^
01:03:503 (4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7865790 This fits the rhythm better imo
01:15:503 (1) - There's more emphasis on the white tick rather than the red tick. I'd change 6 into a slider and 1 into a circle and try to emphasize 1 with larger spacing
01:17:797 (3,4,5) - This could look a little better imo
01:19:915 (1,2) - Blanket is a little off
01:20:974 (4,5,6,7) - This could look a little better i think
01:22:562 (1,2,3) - I'd change this to a triplet and start the sliders on 01:22:915 and 01:23:268 to match the vocals
01:32:444 (1,2,3) - This could blanket the slider I think
01:34:738 (5) - I think a reverse slider works better here
01:37:209 (3) - Blanket's slightly off
01:38:621 (1,2,3) - This could look a bit better
most of this mod is being a blanket nazi xd
Good luck hope this helps
Fixed all but 00:34:562 (1,2,3,4) - , as I felt that pattern was slightly awkward.Alex3i2 wrote:
Happy birthday Maki !
Mod based on testplay , fell free to deny anythingInsaneIn some parts the distance spacing is too small , for example 00:20:622 (1) - . Same here 00:31:563 (4,5) - 00:31:915 (1,2) - , between those pairs , distance is not equal
00:33:327 (1,2,3) - Imo looks boring , mb try something else . https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7866250
00:34:562 (1,2,3,4) - same as here , you can try this if you want https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7866263
00:37:210 (6) - blanket with 00:37:562 (1) -
00:39:856 (2) - i would put in blanket with 00:38:974 (1) -
00:41:092 (2) - same distance with 00:41:269 (3,4) - , to form a nice triangle
00:41:621 (1) - same slider as 00:40:563 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7866301 . Pattern looks better now imo
00:57:680 (3) - check distances , 00:57:680 (3) - this one is too small , looks random
01:01:562 (1) - from this point music intensifies rise , so you can add more distance snap between notes to express thatAdvancedThat's all ii can find , gl !00:05:797 (2) - a minor fix to looks better? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7866327
01:03:680 (2,3,4,5) - position is strange. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7866338
Both of your suggestions were very helpful, thank you!
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc wrote:
Hi :3 Hey!NormalDidn't apply these, as breaking the consistency of the NCs seems a little odd to do00:29:091 delete NC and 00:29:444 add NC?
00:41:797 and 00:42:150 ^ ?AdvancedAlright, added these. Thanks!00:20:444 put circle?
00:28:562 ^
00:31:738 ^
01:03:503 ^
01:08:444 ^
01:19:738 ^
01:22:562 ^
I mostly just noticed that you could put a couple of rounds, so it was a little more in the rhythm of their voices
from my modding queue! ^^
Generally everything is ok
Normal
- the best normal in the world! but
- that this map have any hitsounds?
Advanced
- 00:17:797 (1) - remove, there is no clear sound. when you remove this get new combo color on 00:17:974 (6)
- that this map have any hitsounds?
Kato's Hard
- 00:37:209 (1) - WHAT? to make slider like this you need 1/8, but this is 1/4.
- 01:30:503 (1) - ^
- 01:36:150 (1) - ^ the samee
- that this map have any hitsounds?
Insane
- that this map have any hitsounds?
- 01:13:916 (6) - get this circle a little bit on the right side
Generally everything is ok
Topic Starter
Note: Kato has asked me to apply fixes to their GD because they'll be busy for the time being.Wikozo wrote:
from my modding queue! ^^Normal
Advanced
Kato's Hard
Insane
Generally everything is ok
Hi Guy that spams the Off-Topic Forum
Advanced has similar Problems
Hard is okay
and I can't Mod Insane
GL
Normal weeeee
- General Problem:
- your using to much Circles in row which can be hard for Noobs :V
- Your Rhythm is a bit "messy" Hear some Sections with 25% Playback Rate
- It's not a easy Diffs but the Overall Settings are like when you play a Easy lmao Make it like this AR4 OD3 same with HP
- Put the Beat snap Divisor to 1/2 because why not lo
Now real Mod: - 00:03:680 (1,2,3,4) - Make 00:04:032 (2,3) - to a Slider so than it's easier to play
- 00:06:856 (2,3) - ^
- 00:08:974 (3,2) - Overlap
- 00:15:680 (2,3) - For example like this You are skipping a Big White Tick these are like the importenst Sound in the whole Song/Map so just switch them
- 00:17:092 (2,3) - ^
- 00:26:974 (2,3) - ^
- 00:44:621 (1,2) - Compare this one 00:38:974 (1) - with the other one they are completly the same but you map different
These were just some examplesabout Rhythm
Advanced has similar Problems
Hard is okay
and I can't Mod Insane
GL
Topic Starter
nextplay wrote:
Hi Guy that spams the Off-Topic Forum i-it's not spamNormal weeeeefixed all of these
- General Problem:
- your using to much Circles in row which can be hard for Noobs :V Alright, have toned it down in some areas
- Your Rhythm is a bit "messy" Hear some Sections with 25% Playback Rate Yeah... people have picked up on that but it sounds fine to me xd
- It's not a easy Diffs but the Overall Settings are like when you play a Easy lmao Make it like this AR4 OD3 same with HP I think I changed it already around the time you posted this lmao
- Put the Beat snap Divisor to 1/2 because why not lo sure fam
Now real Mod:- 00:03:680 (1,2,3,4) - Make 00:04:032 (2,3) - to a Slider so than it's easier to play
- 00:06:856 (2,3) - ^
- 00:08:974 (3,2) - Overlap
- 00:15:680 (2,3) - For example like this You are skipping a Big White Tick these are like the importenst Sound in the whole Song/Map so just switch them
- 00:17:092 (2,3) - ^
- 00:26:974 (2,3) - ^
- 00:44:621 (1,2) - Compare this one 00:38:974 (1) - with the other one they are completly the same but you map different
These were just some examplesabout Rhythm
Advanced has similar Problems will check
Hard is okay aight
and I can't Mod Insane rip
GL tyty
Did stuff irc and I am kudos greedy
2017-04-23 21:28 Yukiyo: owo
2017-04-23 21:30 Yukiyo: hello?
2017-04-23 21:30 Tae: henlo
2017-04-23 21:30 Yukiyo: ohh please
2017-04-23 21:31 Yukiyo: I wanted to address some issues in your map irc if you'd like xd
2017-04-23 21:31 Tae: ye sure
2017-04-23 21:32 Yukiyo: First thing is the placement of some sliders rhythmic wise
2017-04-23 21:32 Yukiyo: insane that is
2017-04-23 21:33 Tae: mhm?
2017-04-23 21:33 Yukiyo: 00:11:092 (2,3,4) - like this
2017-04-23 21:33 Yukiyo: there isn't really anything on those red ticks is there?
2017-04-23 21:33 Tae: sorta is
2017-04-23 21:33 Tae: for the first, anyway
2017-04-23 21:34 Tae: the second is kinda off
2017-04-23 21:34 Yukiyo: 00:11:268 (3) - there are two sounds here
2017-04-23 21:34 Yukiyo: effectivly you only mapped one
2017-04-23 21:34 Yukiyo: which is also an issue if you want to look at is that way
2017-04-23 21:34 Yukiyo: if there isn't anything big to emphasis sticking to the basics sound (bass/snare) might be the best idea
2017-04-23 21:35 Tae: alright
2017-04-23 21:35 Yukiyo: 00:19:209 (1,2,3,4,5) - also stuff like this? you can't really hear anything in the song
2017-04-23 21:35 Yukiyo: I know sometimes there is room for song interpretation
2017-04-23 21:35 Yukiyo: but I personally thing this isn't ok
2017-04-23 21:36 Yukiyo: 00:16:563 (2,3,4) - stuff like this is acceptable for emphasis reasons on the vocals
2017-04-23 21:36 Yukiyo: but going to lengths as 5-streams doesn't seem appropriate
2017-04-23 21:37 Yukiyo: 00:21:857 (1) - again sliders, you are obstructing the most important beat, the big white tick, to play
2017-04-23 21:38 Yukiyo: 00:25:474 - you are missing a note here
2017-04-23 21:38 Yukiyo: else the stream doesn't really fit
2017-04-23 21:39 Yukiyo: 00:26:092 (1,2,3) - here you again find the same problem of having sliders cover important sounds like that white tick
2017-04-23 21:39 Yukiyo: http://puu.sh/vtQUg/76f35a8eef.jpg
2017-04-23 21:39 Yukiyo: this should also sound way better, or feel at least
2017-04-23 21:40 Yukiyo: 00:34:562 (1,2,3,4) - this on the other hand is fine as there are actually prominent sounds
2017-04-23 21:40 Tae: 00:25:474 - with this, I don't hear a note on this point, and feel that placing it actually makes it rather awkward
2017-04-23 21:41 Yukiyo: 00:36:591 - there is actually no sound here
2017-04-23 21:41 Yukiyo: 00:25:474 - for me there is definetly a snare here
2017-04-23 21:41 Yukiyo: but might want to get other ppl's ears
2017-04-23 21:42 Yukiyo: http://puu.sh/vtR64/4b8ab66ca2.jpg 00:34:562 (1,2,3,4) -
2017-04-23 21:42 Yukiyo: as 00:34:915 - this is where the sounds actually kick in
2017-04-23 21:42 Tae: i hear a note on the red tick before but that's all
2017-04-23 21:43 Yukiyo: 00:34:562 (1) - and this is not needed / obstructing the important sound
2017-04-23 21:43 Yukiyo: you get the idea of what I am pointing out? because I am too lazy to point of everything
2017-04-23 21:44 Tae: Yeah
2017-04-23 21:44 Yukiyo: as a rule of thumb (or however that saying goes) sliders starting on white ticks are mostly better off than the ones on red tick UNLESS you have important sounds on them
2017-04-23 21:44 Tae: yeah
2017-04-23 21:45 Yukiyo: http://puu.sh/vtRiD/fc786e508c.png
2017-04-23 21:45 Yukiyo: xd
2017-04-23 21:47 Yukiyo: hope I was helping xd
2017-04-23 21:48 Tae: yeah, you were
2017-04-23 21:48 Yukiyo: if you need anything, help, mod, hs anything you can probably ask me if you want
2017-04-23 21:48 Tae: Alright
2017-04-23 21:48 Tae: 00:36:591 - I kind of hear a sound here, but admittedly it is rather faint
2017-04-23 21:49 Tae: it'd probably still be best to map this though, in order to maintain the flow, right?
2017-04-23 21:49 Yukiyo: it personally bugs me that you mapped it
2017-04-23 21:49 Yukiyo: but that may be me
2017-04-23 21:49 Yukiyo: there is no problem with flow when not mapping it
2017-04-23 21:49 Yukiyo: you'd just have to rearagne it a bit like
2017-04-23 21:50 Tae: I guess
2017-04-23 21:50 Yukiyo: http://puu.sh/vtRBi/796495f7a9.jpg
2017-04-23 21:50 Yukiyo: so the gap would be clear
2017-04-23 21:50 Tae: hm
2017-04-23 21:50 Yukiyo: stream are kinda like a flow pause
2017-04-23 21:50 Tae: I'll keep it as is for now but will keep that in mind
2017-04-23 21:51 Yukiyo: the sb is great btw xd
2017-04-23 21:52 Tae: thanks friend
2017-04-23 21:53 Yukiyo: that "friend" sounds so sarcastic ;-;
2017-04-23 21:53 Tae: it isn't meant to be haha
2017-04-23 21:30 Yukiyo: hello?
2017-04-23 21:30 Tae: henlo
2017-04-23 21:30 Yukiyo: ohh please
2017-04-23 21:31 Yukiyo: I wanted to address some issues in your map irc if you'd like xd
2017-04-23 21:31 Tae: ye sure
2017-04-23 21:32 Yukiyo: First thing is the placement of some sliders rhythmic wise
2017-04-23 21:32 Yukiyo: insane that is
2017-04-23 21:33 Tae: mhm?
2017-04-23 21:33 Yukiyo: 00:11:092 (2,3,4) - like this
2017-04-23 21:33 Yukiyo: there isn't really anything on those red ticks is there?
2017-04-23 21:33 Tae: sorta is
2017-04-23 21:33 Tae: for the first, anyway
2017-04-23 21:34 Tae: the second is kinda off
2017-04-23 21:34 Yukiyo: 00:11:268 (3) - there are two sounds here
2017-04-23 21:34 Yukiyo: effectivly you only mapped one
2017-04-23 21:34 Yukiyo: which is also an issue if you want to look at is that way
2017-04-23 21:34 Yukiyo: if there isn't anything big to emphasis sticking to the basics sound (bass/snare) might be the best idea
2017-04-23 21:35 Tae: alright
2017-04-23 21:35 Yukiyo: 00:19:209 (1,2,3,4,5) - also stuff like this? you can't really hear anything in the song
2017-04-23 21:35 Yukiyo: I know sometimes there is room for song interpretation
2017-04-23 21:35 Yukiyo: but I personally thing this isn't ok
2017-04-23 21:36 Yukiyo: 00:16:563 (2,3,4) - stuff like this is acceptable for emphasis reasons on the vocals
2017-04-23 21:36 Yukiyo: but going to lengths as 5-streams doesn't seem appropriate
2017-04-23 21:37 Yukiyo: 00:21:857 (1) - again sliders, you are obstructing the most important beat, the big white tick, to play
2017-04-23 21:38 Yukiyo: 00:25:474 - you are missing a note here
2017-04-23 21:38 Yukiyo: else the stream doesn't really fit
2017-04-23 21:39 Yukiyo: 00:26:092 (1,2,3) - here you again find the same problem of having sliders cover important sounds like that white tick
2017-04-23 21:39 Yukiyo: http://puu.sh/vtQUg/76f35a8eef.jpg
2017-04-23 21:39 Yukiyo: this should also sound way better, or feel at least
2017-04-23 21:40 Yukiyo: 00:34:562 (1,2,3,4) - this on the other hand is fine as there are actually prominent sounds
2017-04-23 21:40 Tae: 00:25:474 - with this, I don't hear a note on this point, and feel that placing it actually makes it rather awkward
2017-04-23 21:41 Yukiyo: 00:36:591 - there is actually no sound here
2017-04-23 21:41 Yukiyo: 00:25:474 - for me there is definetly a snare here
2017-04-23 21:41 Yukiyo: but might want to get other ppl's ears
2017-04-23 21:42 Yukiyo: http://puu.sh/vtR64/4b8ab66ca2.jpg 00:34:562 (1,2,3,4) -
2017-04-23 21:42 Yukiyo: as 00:34:915 - this is where the sounds actually kick in
2017-04-23 21:42 Tae: i hear a note on the red tick before but that's all
2017-04-23 21:43 Yukiyo: 00:34:562 (1) - and this is not needed / obstructing the important sound
2017-04-23 21:43 Yukiyo: you get the idea of what I am pointing out? because I am too lazy to point of everything
2017-04-23 21:44 Tae: Yeah
2017-04-23 21:44 Yukiyo: as a rule of thumb (or however that saying goes) sliders starting on white ticks are mostly better off than the ones on red tick UNLESS you have important sounds on them
2017-04-23 21:44 Tae: yeah
2017-04-23 21:45 Yukiyo: http://puu.sh/vtRiD/fc786e508c.png
2017-04-23 21:45 Yukiyo: xd
2017-04-23 21:47 Yukiyo: hope I was helping xd
2017-04-23 21:48 Tae: yeah, you were
2017-04-23 21:48 Yukiyo: if you need anything, help, mod, hs anything you can probably ask me if you want
2017-04-23 21:48 Tae: Alright
2017-04-23 21:48 Tae: 00:36:591 - I kind of hear a sound here, but admittedly it is rather faint
2017-04-23 21:49 Tae: it'd probably still be best to map this though, in order to maintain the flow, right?
2017-04-23 21:49 Yukiyo: it personally bugs me that you mapped it
2017-04-23 21:49 Yukiyo: but that may be me
2017-04-23 21:49 Yukiyo: there is no problem with flow when not mapping it
2017-04-23 21:49 Yukiyo: you'd just have to rearagne it a bit like
2017-04-23 21:50 Tae: I guess
2017-04-23 21:50 Yukiyo: http://puu.sh/vtRBi/796495f7a9.jpg
2017-04-23 21:50 Yukiyo: so the gap would be clear
2017-04-23 21:50 Tae: hm
2017-04-23 21:50 Yukiyo: stream are kinda like a flow pause
2017-04-23 21:50 Tae: I'll keep it as is for now but will keep that in mind
2017-04-23 21:51 Yukiyo: the sb is great btw xd
2017-04-23 21:52 Tae: thanks friend
2017-04-23 21:53 Yukiyo: that "friend" sounds so sarcastic ;-;
2017-04-23 21:53 Tae: it isn't meant to be haha
Topic Starter
applied as mentionedYukiyo wrote:
Did stuff irc and I am kudos greedy2017-04-23 21:28 Yukiyo: owo
2017-04-23 21:30 Yukiyo: hello?
2017-04-23 21:30 Tae: henlo
2017-04-23 21:30 Yukiyo: ohh please
2017-04-23 21:31 Yukiyo: I wanted to address some issues in your map irc if you'd like xd
2017-04-23 21:31 Tae: ye sure
2017-04-23 21:32 Yukiyo: First thing is the placement of some sliders rhythmic wise
2017-04-23 21:32 Yukiyo: insane that is
2017-04-23 21:33 Tae: mhm?
2017-04-23 21:33 Yukiyo: 00:11:092 (2,3,4) - like this
2017-04-23 21:33 Yukiyo: there isn't really anything on those red ticks is there?
2017-04-23 21:33 Tae: sorta is
2017-04-23 21:33 Tae: for the first, anyway
2017-04-23 21:34 Tae: the second is kinda off
2017-04-23 21:34 Yukiyo: 00:11:268 (3) - there are two sounds here
2017-04-23 21:34 Yukiyo: effectivly you only mapped one
2017-04-23 21:34 Yukiyo: which is also an issue if you want to look at is that way
2017-04-23 21:34 Yukiyo: if there isn't anything big to emphasis sticking to the basics sound (bass/snare) might be the best idea
2017-04-23 21:35 Tae: alright
2017-04-23 21:35 Yukiyo: 00:19:209 (1,2,3,4,5) - also stuff like this? you can't really hear anything in the song
2017-04-23 21:35 Yukiyo: I know sometimes there is room for song interpretation
2017-04-23 21:35 Yukiyo: but I personally thing this isn't ok
2017-04-23 21:36 Yukiyo: 00:16:563 (2,3,4) - stuff like this is acceptable for emphasis reasons on the vocals
2017-04-23 21:36 Yukiyo: but going to lengths as 5-streams doesn't seem appropriate
2017-04-23 21:37 Yukiyo: 00:21:857 (1) - again sliders, you are obstructing the most important beat, the big white tick, to play
2017-04-23 21:38 Yukiyo: 00:25:474 - you are missing a note here
2017-04-23 21:38 Yukiyo: else the stream doesn't really fit
2017-04-23 21:39 Yukiyo: 00:26:092 (1,2,3) - here you again find the same problem of having sliders cover important sounds like that white tick
2017-04-23 21:39 Yukiyo: http://puu.sh/vtQUg/76f35a8eef.jpg
2017-04-23 21:39 Yukiyo: this should also sound way better, or feel at least
2017-04-23 21:40 Yukiyo: 00:34:562 (1,2,3,4) - this on the other hand is fine as there are actually prominent sounds
2017-04-23 21:40 Tae: 00:25:474 - with this, I don't hear a note on this point, and feel that placing it actually makes it rather awkward
2017-04-23 21:41 Yukiyo: 00:36:591 - there is actually no sound here
2017-04-23 21:41 Yukiyo: 00:25:474 - for me there is definetly a snare here
2017-04-23 21:41 Yukiyo: but might want to get other ppl's ears
2017-04-23 21:42 Yukiyo: http://puu.sh/vtR64/4b8ab66ca2.jpg 00:34:562 (1,2,3,4) -
2017-04-23 21:42 Yukiyo: as 00:34:915 - this is where the sounds actually kick in
2017-04-23 21:42 Tae: i hear a note on the red tick before but that's all
2017-04-23 21:43 Yukiyo: 00:34:562 (1) - and this is not needed / obstructing the important sound
2017-04-23 21:43 Yukiyo: you get the idea of what I am pointing out? because I am too lazy to point of everything
2017-04-23 21:44 Tae: Yeah
2017-04-23 21:44 Yukiyo: as a rule of thumb (or however that saying goes) sliders starting on white ticks are mostly better off than the ones on red tick UNLESS you have important sounds on them
2017-04-23 21:44 Tae: yeah
2017-04-23 21:45 Yukiyo: http://puu.sh/vtRiD/fc786e508c.png
2017-04-23 21:45 Yukiyo: xd
2017-04-23 21:47 Yukiyo: hope I was helping xd
2017-04-23 21:48 Tae: yeah, you were
2017-04-23 21:48 Yukiyo: if you need anything, help, mod, hs anything you can probably ask me if you want
2017-04-23 21:48 Tae: Alright
2017-04-23 21:48 Tae: 00:36:591 - I kind of hear a sound here, but admittedly it is rather faint
2017-04-23 21:49 Tae: it'd probably still be best to map this though, in order to maintain the flow, right?
2017-04-23 21:49 Yukiyo: it personally bugs me that you mapped it
2017-04-23 21:49 Yukiyo: but that may be me
2017-04-23 21:49 Yukiyo: there is no problem with flow when not mapping it
2017-04-23 21:49 Yukiyo: you'd just have to rearagne it a bit like
2017-04-23 21:50 Tae: I guess
2017-04-23 21:50 Yukiyo: http://puu.sh/vtRBi/796495f7a9.jpg
2017-04-23 21:50 Yukiyo: so the gap would be clear
2017-04-23 21:50 Tae: hm
2017-04-23 21:50 Yukiyo: stream are kinda like a flow pause
2017-04-23 21:50 Tae: I'll keep it as is for now but will keep that in mind
2017-04-23 21:51 Yukiyo: the sb is great btw xd
2017-04-23 21:52 Tae: thanks friend
2017-04-23 21:53 Yukiyo: that "friend" sounds so sarcastic ;-;
2017-04-23 21:53 Tae: it isn't meant to be haha
thanks friend in a completely non-sarcastic way
Since when were you a fan of love live OwO Also I need to do this if I want to reapply for the next cycle of the mentorship program :^)
I will focus on your Normal diff for now ~
General points
Normal []I know it can be a bit boring when someone only mods your lowest diff so I will try and mod your Insane later, alrite GL!
I will focus on your Normal diff for now ~
- Combo Lengths: I definitely think combo lengths could do with increasing. A lot of sections have combo lengths of 2 which is very low, even for the lowest diff. Try 1 NC every 2 measures
- Rhythm: With almost every white tick mapped and somewhat monotonous it comes off as somewhat stale. Also because this is a normal don't be afraid to include some 1/2 beats where they fit, for example some places such as 01:11:444 (1) can be made into http://puu.sh/vu1rq/6b0f1960d4.jpg It follows the vocals and adds an extra something that keeps the players engaged; of course if you choose to do this you will have to incorperate it in the other similar and more appropiate places in your map as well. I'll give you some more examples so you're left too much in the dark 00:48:150 (3) can be turned into http://puu.sh/vu2OE/886c4b903b.jpg and 00:41:444 (2) can be made into http://puu.sh/vu39e/2532deb3eb.jpg and finally 00:31:209 (2) can be made into http://puu.sh/vu3gs/3ddbbf2bf5.jpg
What I said earlier about the rhythm and it being monotonous I feel like you could incorporate long 2/1 sliders to follow long held vocals, again this follow the song as well as break up the monotony. For example 01:18:503 (1) and 01:07:209 (1) (these ones are 50/50) & the ones at 01:14:268 (1) . But yh, I think this diff could benefit a lot with mapping to the vocals (as a means to emphasize) in places where appropriate. - Hitsounding: I was supposed to do this on your other map but I guess I'll do it here :V. So the whole purpose of hitsounding is to give feedback, but not just any feedback, feedback fitting to your rhythm, so that players aren't thrown off. With that said I think I can then move on to say placing hitsounds on the entire slider body is a bad way to go in 99% of the time. I'm talking about places such as 00:36:150 (1) where you've put the whistle on slider body, it's very jarring, and tbh can be quite annoying for some players. It's better to put the hitsound on the slider head itself http://puu.sh/vu2F7/51adf7d7f7.png as you only need to give feedback to the player on the slider head as that's what their clicking to, everything else is almost irrelevant.
- I really do think 1.1 DS would be better for the map for reasons I cba writing, you can just decide if you want to whether or not
- 00:13:209 (1) - The sounds at 00:13:562 and 00:13:209 aren't really connected to each other so mapping the 2 with one slider doesn't feel right imo
- 00:37:562 (1,2) - Because these sliders are mapping very similar vocals having these sliders as pairs feels very fitting. Something such as https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7907452 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7907467
- 00:43:209 (1,2) - ^
- 00:48:856 (1,2,3,4) - This is similar to what I said above. Because these are all part of the same melody having these objects in a definig structure would be cool and structure/visual can actually act as a good emphasis. These are just a couple of examples, there are actually a plethora of ways you could go about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7907811 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7907793
- 00:53:091 (1) - The whistle seems very out of place as you didn't use it on similar sounds such as 00:50:268 (1) and it just springs up at you out of nowhere
- 01:02:974 (1) - how about making this a 3/2 reverse slider? http://puu.sh/vu76H/f4e0a4e744.jpg
- 01:07:209 - personally I don't really like the cheer hitsound ( though some do for reasons) because it forces a sound that isn't present in the actual song itself
- 01:15:679 - if you choose to keep the cheer hitsound in the map then I do think it should be placed 01:18:503 instead of 01:15:679
Cannot find anything wrong, ask an experienced modder. JK, I will mod later, sorry for huge delay.
Topic Starter
Kisses wrote:
Since when were you a fan of love live OwO Also I need to do this if I want to reapply for the next cycle of the mentorship program :^)
I will focus on your Normal diff for now ~General points
- Combo Lengths: I definitely think combo lengths could do with increasing. A lot of sections have combo lengths of 2 which is very low, even for the lowest diff. Try 1 NC every 2 measures ok
- Rhythm: With almost every white tick mapped and somewhat monotonous it comes off as somewhat stale. Also because this is a normal don't be afraid to include some 1/2 beats where they fit, for example some places such as 01:11:444 (1) can be made into http://puu.sh/vu1rq/6b0f1960d4.jpg It follows the vocals and adds an extra something that keeps the players engaged; of course if you choose to do this you will have to incorperate it in the other similar and more appropiate places in your map as well. I'll give you some more examples so you're left too much in the dark ok
00:48:150 (3) can be turned into http://puu.sh/vu2OE/886c4b903b.jpg and 00:41:444 (2) can be made into http://puu.sh/vu39e/2532deb3eb.jpg and finally 00:31:209 (2) can be made into http://puu.sh/vu3gs/3ddbbf2bf5.jpg
What I said earlier about the rhythm and it being monotonous I feel like you could incorporate long 2/1 sliders to follow long held vocals, again this follow the song as well as break up the monotony. For example 01:18:503 (1) and 01:07:209 (1) (these ones are 50/50) & the ones at 01:14:268 (1) . But yh, I think this diff could benefit a lot with mapping to the vocals (as a means to emphasize) in places where appropriate.- Hitsounding: I was supposed to do this on your other map but I guess I'll do it here :V. So the whole purpose of hitsounding is to give feedback, but not just any feedback, feedback fitting to your rhythm, so that players aren't thrown off. With that said I think I can then move on to say placing hitsounds on the entire slider body is a bad way to go in 99% of the time. I'm talking about places such as 00:36:150 (1) where you've put the whistle on slider body, it's very jarring, and tbh can be quite annoying for some players. It's better to put the hitsound on the slider head itself http://puu.sh/vu2F7/51adf7d7f7.png as you only need to give feedback to the player on the slider head as that's what their clicking to, everything else is almost irrelevant. i didnt hitsound it but ok
[]I know it can be a bit boring when someone only mods your lowest diff so I will try and mod your Insane later, alrite GL!Normal
- I really do think 1.1 DS would be better for the map for reasons I cba writing, you can just decide if you want to whether or not not gonna personally
- 00:13:209 (1) - The sounds at 00:13:562 and 00:13:209 aren't really connected to each other so mapping the 2 with one slider doesn't feel right imo ok, fixed
- 00:37:562 (1,2) - Because these sliders are mapping very similar vocals having these sliders as pairs feels very fitting. Something such as https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7907452 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7907467 ok
- 00:43:209 (1,2) - ^ ok
- 00:48:856 (1,2,3,4) - This is similar to what I said above. Because these are all part of the same melody having these objects in a definig structure would be cool and structure/visual can actually act as a good emphasis. These are just a couple of examples, there are actually a plethora of ways you could go about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7907811 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7907793 ok.
- 00:53:091 (1) - The whistle seems very out of place as you didn't use it on similar sounds such as 00:50:268 (1) and it just springs up at you out of nowhere ok
- 01:02:974 (1) - how about making this a 3/2 reverse slider? http://puu.sh/vu76H/f4e0a4e744.jpg ...that doesn't fit the vocals at all though?
- 01:07:209 - personally I don't really like the cheer hitsound ( though some do for reasons) because it forces a sound that isn't present in the actual song itself I'll keep it for now
- 01:15:679 - if you choose to keep the cheer hitsound in the map then I do think it should be placed 01:18:503 instead of 01:15:679 that's not actually where the cheer is in the song but ok sure it fits better there
AlrightDragontail wrote:
Cannot find anything wrong, ask an experienced modder.
Sorry I got lazy so I will mod now.
Normal
At 00:31:032 (5) overlapping is not good
01:25:562 nc?
Advanced
Take away circle at 00:35:974 and replace with slider in front . Then extend the slider to the next white tick
01:27:679 spacing consistency?
Kato's Hard
Why is there so many unstacked notes in the beginning?
Insane
Jumps random?
Normal
At 00:31:032 (5) overlapping is not good
01:25:562 nc?
Advanced
Take away circle at 00:35:974 and replace with slider in front . Then extend the slider to the next white tick
01:27:679 spacing consistency?
Kato's Hard
Why is there so many unstacked notes in the beginning?
Insane
Jumps random?
Topic Starter
Dragontail wrote:
Sorry I got lazy so I will mod now.
Normal
At 00:31:032 (5) overlapping is not good fixed
01:25:562 nc? the entirety of the map has NCs every two downbeats so idk why you'd want me to break that now
Advanced
Take away circle at 00:35:974 and replace with slider in front . Then extend the slider to the next white tick ok
01:27:679 spacing consistency? they're all consistent?
Kato's Hard
Why is there so many unstacked notes in the beginning? I guess it'd be to create some variety... I've made them all consistently distanced though
Insane
Jumps random? not really?
Sup o/
General:
Some unused files atm from the storyboard but might still be wip so:
Normal
General:
Some unused files atm from the storyboard but might still be wip so:
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Normal
- Hitsounding kinda off atm seems a bit randomly placed, you got a single clap here 00:05:091 (4) - for the intro that seems to be the only one of its kinda though theres nothing in particular going on with the song there, check the heads of these for an instand 00:06:503 (1,4,1) - you got some soft snares joining in the music so why not put claps on those instead for feedback. Bit same for regular finishes like at 00:14:974 (1) - and 00:31:915 (1) - finish should be on head since thats where the cymbals are
- 00:09:327 (1,2) - breaking the every 2 downbeats NC thingy here
- 00:13:210 (1) - wouldn't make the downbeat unclickable here, new segment in the music starts + start of tha drumroll something like circle + slider would be good
- 00:40:385 (1,2,3,4,5) - bit weird rythm here, mapping all the the vocals in 5 suddenly when skipping alot in the rest even though the intensity of the vocals is the same same for these 2 stanzas[
- 00:50:268 (5,6) - would work better as 2 sliders to not have too many circles after eachother for the non kiai part and you emphasize the next vocals a lot better with starting circles on 00:51:679 (1) - not before
- 01:08:268 (3,4,5,6) - and 01:19:562 (3,4,5,6) - since you got a pretty vocal based diff, I'm kinda suprised you didnt follow the vocals on the red ticks here since these are arguably the strongest vocals in the entire song
- 01:22:032 (3,4,5,6) - bit same like ^ did it for 01:11:091 (4,5,6) - tho so could make consistent
- 01:29:797 (1) - why not end kiai and the end of the spinner here since theres this small break in the kiai atm
- 00:14:974 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I kinda feel like your trying to follow too much here wich makes for unintuitive rythm thats plays a bit too 'random' I'd focus more on a main thing you want to follow and stick to it for a while like here for example 00:15:150 - only skipped vocal for these connected parts 00:14:974 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - in the song and 00:16:385 (1) - vs 00:17:797 - one prioritizes the vocal more one tho the music is similar and you have this weird switch here for following the non vocals instruments at 00:17:974 (1,2) - If you gonna make a switch like that I'd start it on the downbeat since thats where the instrument starts to change
- 00:26:268 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - kinda similar as above ^ music repeats its stanza tho when you decide to follow which vocals seems a bit random to me 00:27:503 - and 00:27:856 - are pretty strong vocals here that are skipped for instance with ending and starting of new sentences, something like this rythm wise would fit the music a lot better imo
- 00:48:856 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - yeah definitly change this in normal diff if you haven't, normal having a denser rythm than advanced is really bad
- 01:02:974 (1,2) - why not change this into 2 1/2 sliders after eachother so you don't skip any vocals here, return + circle fits aswell if you want to emphasize the 'WA' vocal thingy
- 01:08:621 (1) - seems like your trying to follow too much again at a time, why not try to prioritze the vocals here by changing 01:08:444 (4,1,2) - into 2 1/2 sliders for instance similarish for 01:11:091 (3,1,2) -
Topic Starter
Alright, I believe I've fixed the issues in Advanced (along with remapping it using some guidance from Endaris), so that should be good now.
For Normal, Kisses is going to be replacing my diff, so I'll ignore the points raised for that for this diff, but thank you for your help, I'll bear them in mind in the future.
The storyboard I will fix when I have time to do so beside exams, so probably sometime at the end of this month. unused files should be removed now
For Normal, Kisses is going to be replacing my diff, so I'll ignore the points raised for that for this diff, but thank you for your help, I'll bear them in mind in the future.
Kisses
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Tags:ayase eli 絢瀬絵里 nanjo yoshino 南條愛乃 nishikino maki 西木野真姫 Pile hori eriko 堀絵梨子 yazawa nico 矢澤にこ tokui sora 徳井青空 μ's u's Summer Do Not End Natsu owaranai de lovelive! muse cut version -kazuto kato
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155,272,83268,2,0,P|230:259|316:251,1,135,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
357,310,84150,6,0,P|409:258|385:151,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,79,85209,1,0,1:0:0:0:
368,18,85562,2,0,P|279:31|189:39,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,106,86621,1,0,1:0:0:0:
170,185,86974,6,0,P|216:190|264:199,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,106,88032,1,0,1:0:0:0:
191,40,88385,2,0,P|235:32|280:27,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
230,121,89444,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,89797,12,2,92621,3:0:0:0:
411,240,95444,6,0,P|328:329|195:274,1,270,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
157,206,96856,2,0,L|146:353,2,135,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
108,129,98268,6,0,B|177:50|288:85|288:85|306:126|349:155,1,270,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
260,197,99679,2,0,P|352:185|458:176,1,180,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
484,99,100738,2,0,P|463:96|437:93,1,45,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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Kisses's NormAJ
Welp its clean as it is nothing to see over here
Advanced
00:05:092 (1,2) - welp fix blanket thx
00:08:621 (2,1) - ^
welp just uhh. fix the other blankets since I dont want to nazi mod to much xd
00:20:621 (1) - why a normal whistle hitsound here? hmm changing it to soft whistle would do I guess
00:32:797 - yea this needs to mapped since you're following the vocals
01:11:974 (3) - hmm what is this slider following exactly? like from what Im seeing in the kiai you're following the vocals but this though Oh wait just extending the slider to the next tick will do xd
I could point out the other blanket problems but I can leave it up to you to find it xd also my concern of this diff is that the aesthetics needs a little bit more work also sorry for the short mod on this diff wew im bad at modding lower diffs soo yea.
00:08:621 (2,1) - ^
welp just uhh. fix the other blankets since I dont want to nazi mod to much xd
00:20:621 (1) - why a normal whistle hitsound here? hmm changing it to soft whistle would do I guess
00:32:797 - yea this needs to mapped since you're following the vocals
01:11:974 (3) - hmm what is this slider following exactly? like from what Im seeing in the kiai you're following the vocals but this though Oh wait just extending the slider to the next tick will do xd
I could point out the other blanket problems but I can leave it up to you to find it xd also my concern of this diff is that the aesthetics needs a little bit more work also sorry for the short mod on this diff wew im bad at modding lower diffs soo yea.
Kato Matigas
00:19:562 (2) - sliderend has a clickable note imo
00:30:150 (4) - hmmm ctrl g for better flow
00:35:974 (1,2) - wat.
00:50:268 (1) - i suggest making this into circles instead since this is what you mostly see in 2009 maps .__.
00:52:385 (4,1) - fix distance its pretty clear this should be spaced out cos timeline and comparison of sounds
00:53:091 (1) - ^ and also the exceeding parts that repeats this
00:54:415 (3) - sounds overmapped I think you intended to follow the drums with the triple but after that the slider follows the vocals which results that it kinda sounds overmapped because of that
01:09:679 (5) - remove the clap hitsounds doesnt fit well for me
01:37:562 (3) - ctrl g for better flow and consistency with 01:38:268 (1) -
01:10:738 (3,1) - sorry for ocd mod but slightly move 3 to the right
My concern on this diff is that the hitsounds are kinda bad imo like the clap hitsounds for me sounds completely randomly placed but that can be improved.
00:30:150 (4) - hmmm ctrl g for better flow
00:35:974 (1,2) - wat.
00:50:268 (1) - i suggest making this into circles instead since this is what you mostly see in 2009 maps .__.
00:52:385 (4,1) - fix distance its pretty clear this should be spaced out cos timeline and comparison of sounds
00:53:091 (1) - ^ and also the exceeding parts that repeats this
00:54:415 (3) - sounds overmapped I think you intended to follow the drums with the triple but after that the slider follows the vocals which results that it kinda sounds overmapped because of that
01:09:679 (5) - remove the clap hitsounds doesnt fit well for me
01:37:562 (3) - ctrl g for better flow and consistency with 01:38:268 (1) -
01:10:738 (3,1) - sorry for ocd mod but slightly move 3 to the right
My concern on this diff is that the hitsounds are kinda bad imo like the clap hitsounds for me sounds completely randomly placed but that can be improved.
Insane
The storyboard is pretty nice xd00:13:210 (5) - ctrlg for better flow
00:22:210 (2,5) - nazi mod coming through (fix stack thx)
00:26:798 (3) - also ctrl g for better flow
00:30:150 (6) - ^
00:44:621 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I dont get what this stream is empasizing
00:48:150 (5) - gonna post a ctrl g mod for the last time
00:55:209 (4,1) - fix the spacing between these two looks ugly to see them overlapped
01:11:445 (1) - this slider is leaving out important clickable sounds shortening the slider then move it to the next tick and a circle on the tick you left behind maybe like this
[img]http://puu.sh/w1wD0.jpg[/img
01:14:091 (7,1) - sometimes blankets will not fit well since 1 is a very strong vocal sound and it has little spacing with 7
01:25:033 (5,6,7) - this spacing makes no sense since those 3 are kinda weak sounds
01:40:562 (4,1) - fix spacing cos the reason is. Spacing Emphasis
The biggest problem I have with this diff is that the spacing is. Inconsistent since I see you putting loud sounds with little spacing example is the blanket that I mentioned in the mod and that needs improvement.
00:22:210 (2,5) - nazi mod coming through (fix stack thx)
00:26:798 (3) - also ctrl g for better flow
00:30:150 (6) - ^
00:44:621 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I dont get what this stream is empasizing
00:48:150 (5) - gonna post a ctrl g mod for the last time
00:55:209 (4,1) - fix the spacing between these two looks ugly to see them overlapped
01:11:445 (1) - this slider is leaving out important clickable sounds shortening the slider then move it to the next tick and a circle on the tick you left behind maybe like this
[img]http://puu.sh/w1wD0.jpg[/img
01:14:091 (7,1) - sometimes blankets will not fit well since 1 is a very strong vocal sound and it has little spacing with 7
01:25:033 (5,6,7) - this spacing makes no sense since those 3 are kinda weak sounds
01:40:562 (4,1) - fix spacing cos the reason is. Spacing Emphasis
The biggest problem I have with this diff is that the spacing is. Inconsistent since I see you putting loud sounds with little spacing example is the blanket that I mentioned in the mod and that needs improvement.
Gudluk
Topic Starter
JeirYagtama wrote:
Kisses's NormAJWelp its clean as it is nothing to see over hereAdvanced00:05:092 (1,2) - welp fix blanket thx ye
00:08:621 (2,1) - ^ ye
welp just uhh. fix the other blankets since I dont want to nazi mod to much xd ok
00:20:621 (1) - why a normal whistle hitsound here? hmm changing it to soft whistle would do I guess ye
00:32:797 - yea this needs to mapped since you're following the vocals ye
01:11:974 (3) - hmm what is this slider following exactly? like from what Im seeing in the kiai you're following the vocals but this though Oh wait just extending the slider to the next tick will do xd ye
I could point out the other blanket problems but I can leave it up to you to find it xd also my concern of this diff is that the aesthetics needs a little bit more work also sorry for the short mod on this diff wew im bad at modding lower diffs soo yea.Kato Matigas00:19:562 (2) - sliderend has a clickable note imo should be fine as is i think
00:30:150 (4) - hmmm ctrl g for better flow ye
00:35:974 (1,2) - wat. the hitsounds? lemme fix that
00:50:268 (1) - i suggest making this into circles instead since this is what you mostly see in 2009 maps .__. but it flows better imo
00:52:385 (4,1) - fix distance its pretty clear this should be spaced out cos timeline and comparison of sounds it's still less intense idk
00:53:091 (1) - ^ and also the exceeding parts that repeats this ^
00:54:415 (3) - sounds overmapped I think you intended to follow the drums with the triple but after that the slider follows the vocals which results that it kinda sounds overmapped because of that should be fine as is
01:09:679 (5) - remove the clap hitsounds doesnt fit well for me ye
01:37:562 (3) - ctrl g for better flow and consistency with 01:38:268 (1) - ye
01:10:738 (3,1) - sorry for ocd mod but slightly move 3 to the right fixed
My concern on this diff is that the hitsounds are kinda bad imo like the clap hitsounds for me sounds completely randomly placed but that can be improved. yeah lemme fix thatInsaneThe storyboard is pretty nice xd00:13:210 (5) - ctrlg for better flow ye
00:22:210 (2,5) - nazi mod coming through (fix stack thx) ye
00:26:798 (3) - also ctrl g for better flow ye
00:30:150 (6) - ^ ye
00:44:621 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I dont get what this stream is empasizing i hear sounds i swear
00:48:150 (5) - gonna post a ctrl g mod for the last time ye
00:55:209 (4,1) - fix the spacing between these two looks ugly to see them overlapped ye
01:11:445 (1) - this slider is leaving out important clickable sounds shortening the slider then move it to the next tick and a circle on the tick you left behind maybe like this ye
01:14:091 (7,1) - sometimes blankets will not fit well since 1 is a very strong vocal sound and it has little spacing with 7 aight
01:25:033 (5,6,7) - this spacing makes no sense since those 3 are kinda weak sounds it's a snappy vocal though...
01:40:562 (4,1) - fix spacing cos the reason is. Spacing Emphasis ye
The biggest problem I have with this diff is that the spacing is. Inconsistent since I see you putting loud sounds with little spacing example is the blanket that I mentioned in the mod and that needs improvement. aight
Gudluk ty x
ye
dont fix others' diffs by yourself
let the gders do it
dont fix others' diffs by yourself
let the gders do it
He's fixing kazuto's because he's apparently busy irl and he gave permission for him to do so_Meep_ wrote:
ye
dont fix others' diffs by yourself
let the gders do it
fk im stupidKisses wrote:
He's fixing kazuto's because he's apparently busy irl and he gave permission for him to do so_Meep_ wrote:
ye
dont fix others' diffs by yourself
let the gders do it
Topic Starter
Tae wrote:
Note: Kato has asked me to apply fixes to their GD because they'll be busy for the time being.
yeah, sorry i didn't make this very clearKisses wrote:
He's fixing kazuto's because he's apparently busy irl and he gave permission for him to do so_Meep_ wrote:
ye
dont fix others' diffs by yourself
let the gders do it
I'm trying to keep it as close to the original diff as possible though and only fix what needs to be
ok updated kato's hitsounds, if they're not right like this i'll copy them directly from my own diffs
ee
o ya new mp3 for you (with vocals. If you want without vocals tell me so I'll cut them clean)
http://puu.sh/w6y4l/9b18638322.mp3
good luck
o ya new mp3 for you (with vocals. If you want without vocals tell me so I'll cut them clean)
http://puu.sh/w6y4l/9b18638322.mp3
Kisses Normal
- Looks pretty clean so I'll be suggesting things on a subjective side
- 00:10:738 (3) - Although I understand that you want this slider for the sake of consistency, I think this section deserve more rhythm choice since the sound is mainly about 1/1 rhythm. So tldr I suggest making this slider the same as 00:04:032 (2) - (also the red tick does not have any dominant sound so I think it's better to not map it)
- 00:32:974 (2,3) - Maybe it's just me or this overlap is kind of awkward because I know 00:30:503 (4,5,1) - is overlapped since they are following DS and is an offbeat on the red tick (vocal if you don't understand) , but 00:32:974 (2,3) - is rhymed and mapped in 1/1 rhythm, but is overlapped, which makes it awkward from other section
- 00:55:738 (4,5,6,1) - maybe zigzag?
- 01:02:621 (4) - Normal sampleset?
- 01:09:150 (5) - Maybe ctrl+j for easier flow
Advanced
- 00:05:092 (1,2) - These aren't parallel. Fix?
- 00:07:915 (1,2) - ^ (Since 00:09:327 (1) - is a different thing, I think it's better to copy paste 00:07:915 (1) - instead of 00:09:327 (1) - which is a different case
- 00:14:268 (2) - I think this note is a bit too low in terms of density. Maybe make a 1/2 slider with a reverse instead?
- 00:17:797 (1,2,3) - This is mapped rather differently from other section (this is solely subjective and picky so yea)
- 00:25:562 (2) - make 2 1/2 sliders?
- 00:29:445 (2) - make this 1/2 rhythm as well?
- 00:30:503 (1) - Straight slider please
- 00:31:386 (3) - curve?
- 00:36:150 (1) - Why do I hear long whistle?
- 00:40:385 (1) - Straight slider looks better
- legit tired repeating same thing so tldr ; get some polishing on the diff
Hard
- 00:12:150 (1) - ctrl+j
- 00:17:797 (1,2,3) - These looked so bad omg
- 00:33:856 (2,1) - blanket off, and bad overlap. No need to tell this is bad
- 00:36:327 (2,1) - These looks unreadable tbh. One length is too long and another is a bit too short. Surely it will be pointed out by a nominator or another person
- 00:37:915 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Vocal wise, I think it's better to increase DS input on 00:38:974 (1) - Because the vocal's transition can be clearly seen to be on the increase at 00:38:974 (1) - . Using the same DS won't help much to reflect the song which had higher pitching.
- 00:44:621 (1) - ^
- 00:49:032 (2,4) - As said before, it might cause confusion when one slider is two ticks longer than the other one.
- 01:01:562 (1,3) - What is this overlap REEEEE
- 01:03:327 (2,3) - This stop feels so sudden, and for what reason did you halt the DS here?
- 01:04:385 (1) - better make this a spinner.
- 01:14:091 - I think better add circle here
- 01:26:268 (3) - I'm not sure why sudden change of flow on a rather normal section
good luck
Topic Starter
Winter Story wrote:
ee
o ya new mp3 for you (with vocals. If you want without vocals tell me so I'll cut them clean) i did intend for it to end as it does orz
http://puu.sh/w6y4l/9b18638322.mp3Kisses Normal
- Looks pretty clean so I'll be suggesting things on a subjective side
- 00:10:738 (3) - Although I understand that you want this slider for the sake of consistency, I think this section deserve more rhythm choice since the sound is mainly about 1/1 rhythm. So tldr I suggest making this slider the same as 00:04:032 (2) - (also the red tick does not have any dominant sound so I think it's better to not map it)
- 00:32:974 (2,3) - Maybe it's just me or this overlap is kind of awkward because I know 00:30:503 (4,5,1) - is overlapped since they are following DS and is an offbeat on the red tick (vocal if you don't understand) , but 00:32:974 (2,3) - is rhymed and mapped in 1/1 rhythm, but is overlapped, which makes it awkward from other section
- 00:55:738 (4,5,6,1) - maybe zigzag?
- 01:02:621 (4) - Normal sampleset?
- 01:09:150 (5) - Maybe ctrl+j for easier flow
Advancedfixed most here
- 00:05:092 (1,2) - These aren't parallel. Fix? parallel?
- 00:07:915 (1,2) - ^ (Since 00:09:327 (1) - is a different thing, I think it's better to copy paste 00:07:915 (1) - instead of 00:09:327 (1) - which is a different case
- 00:14:268 (2) - I think this note is a bit too low in terms of density. Maybe make a 1/2 slider with a reverse instead?
- 00:17:797 (1,2,3) - This is mapped rather differently from other section (this is solely subjective and picky so yea) should be fine as is i think
- 00:25:562 (2) - make 2 1/2 sliders?
- 00:29:445 (2) - make this 1/2 rhythm as well?
- 00:30:503 (1) - Straight slider please
- 00:31:386 (3) - curve?
- 00:36:150 (1) - Why do I hear long whistle?
- 00:40:385 (1) - Straight slider looks better
- legit tired repeating same thing so tldr ; get some polishing on the diff will do
Hardfor the rest, im not entirely sure what to alter, but i'll keep them in mind
- 00:12:150 (1) - ctrl+j aight
- 00:17:797 (1,2,3) - These looked so bad omg fixed
- 00:33:856 (2,1) - blanket off, and bad overlap. No need to tell this is bad fixed
- 00:36:327 (2,1) - These looks unreadable tbh. One length is too long and another is a bit too short. Surely it will be pointed out by a nominator or another person
- 00:37:915 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Vocal wise, I think it's better to increase DS input on 00:38:974 (1) - Because the vocal's transition can be clearly seen to be on the increase at 00:38:974 (1) - . Using the same DS won't help much to reflect the song which had higher pitching. ok, i've spaced these out a little from the ones before
- 00:44:621 (1) - ^ (as above)
- 00:49:032 (2,4) - As said before, it might cause confusion when one slider is two ticks longer than the other one.
- 01:01:562 (1,3) - What is this overlap REEEEE fixed?
- 01:03:327 (2,3) - This stop feels so sudden, and for what reason did you halt the DS here? ok should be better now?
- 01:04:385 (1) - better make this a spinner. aight
- 01:14:091 - I think better add circle here adjusted
- 01:26:268 (3) - I'm not sure why sudden change of flow on a rather normal section
good luck Thanks!
the offset a bit late imo
try 3657 (-23) instead
try 3657 (-23) instead
Topic Starter
Yeah, that sounds better-NanoRIPE- wrote:
the offset a bit late imo
try 3657 (-23) instead
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