(K)NoW_NAME - Freesia

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JJburstOwO wrote:

[Expert]
00:31:332 (8) - 叠在00:30:832 (7) - 尾 为啥
00:46:832 (9,10) - 减速 可以
00:57:832 (4) - 往右点不用叠 往右就和后面的叠了,我把前面滑条加个减速,恩
01:04:165 (4,5) - Ctrl+G 为啥
01:05:498 (1) - 太长了,搞个Z型小折吧类似01:11:498 (1) -
01:08:165 (1) - 同上不要叠 同搞了个减速

学妹无敌
大哥无敌,谢谢大哥
Kashima

Speechless wrote:

[Kashima's Insane]

00:14:748 - 漏音了fixed

00:16:498 (4) - 这地方间距突然变小,不太清楚会不会有人当成1/8处理,建议找几个2000pp的打打看有找过2600pp的试图 都没问题

00:29:499 (3,4,5,6) - 个人不是很喜欢这种flow感觉有点乱感觉还好哇

00:30:748 (7) - 间距太大,感觉是1/8的话就不太必要用1/4的间距fixed

JJburstOwO wrote:

[Insane]
00:35:832 (6) - 折返折返改成5连了
01:03:498 (1) - 这种滑条弯折点往后挪一点
osu file format v14

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Artist:(K)NoW_NAME
ArtistUnicode:(K)NoW_NAME
Creator:Vert
Version:Kashima's Insane
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Tags:Sakura Quest P.A.WORKS Kashima Zweib
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Zero__wind
不好意思来晚了

General
sliderslide消音吧 太吵了尤其是开头结尾的段落
鼓音效的用法我就不予置评了感觉也没怎么跟着曲子走基本上即兴发挥了 soft whistle用得太少了感觉比较残念啊 特别是开头部分一直到00:36:832 (1) - 感觉多加一些soft whistle跟吉他会很好听的

Normal
00:20:165 (5,1) - 最低难度 Normal 还放跳的吗 不要吧 保持1x
00:23:165 (4,1) - 啊后面还有好多啊……这个diff不要跳啊 有点简单了就把ds涨到1.1x
这diff真的飞不动……最好在kiai再加一些简单的1/4节奏类似01:19:165 (5,6) - 这种的 但是不要跳 不要跳 不要跳……

Zweib's Hard
OD6不然spread爆炸
00:05:832 (2,2) - 为什么这两个滑条尾巴搞成这样……? 正常画吧
00:44:832 (11) - 加NC保持规律
00:50:165 (1) - 去掉NC然后在00:52:165 (5) - 这里加NC
00:56:164 (2,3,4) - 这里节奏不太对劲吧 00:56:998 (4) - 这个滑条不管是人声还是鼓都没压到 建议节奏改成这样,如果你一定要在00:56:665 (3) - 这里起滑条跟那个鼓的话那就把00:56:998 (4) - 换成在红线00:57:165 - 的一个circle或者1/4吧
00:57:498 (1) - 这个没什么必要NC 最好去掉
00:58:998 (4) - 这个滑条我也不太明白是跟的什么 我觉得应该和00:58:832 (3) - 换个顺序 滑条从白线上起然后circle补在00:59:332 - 跟vocal吧
01:01:165 (2) - 这个往右边挪一些吧 感觉01:00:665 (1,2,3) - 这里跳有点大而且主要是01:01:165 (2) - 这个地方并不适合跳啊
01:02:498 (6,7) - 感觉7这个跳又大又不自然,能不能改到上面去或者是怎么样
01:06:165 (8) - 加NC保持规律
01:10:832 (6,7) - 这里音效有点问题吧 应该没有这么多个normal sample

Kashima's Insane
00:25:498 (7) - 怎么说呢 你要顺时针转圈转多久啊……一直到00:32:165 (3) - 转了两个小节都不止 虽然不能说是问题但是感觉很无语 在比如00:28:832 (1) - 这种重音的地方稍微转换一下也好吧 仅供参考
00:37:998 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这我觉得有点overmap了 00:38:248 (7) - 这里没有音吧 建议00:38:164 (6,7,8) - 换成一个1/4滑条
00:45:499 (3) - 这里又开始了 连着转了快三个小节的逆时针一直到00:54:165 (5) - 考虑在00:50:165 (1) - 这种地方转换一下flow好吗
01:04:165 (3,7) - 叠好?01:04:832 (5,8) - 那里叠了这里又不叠就怪怪的

Expert

00:19:498 (3,4,5) - 不是很懂这是什么白线三连 并没有什么音可以跟的感觉 建议把00:19:582 (4) - 去掉
00:33:165 (6) - 这里倒是可以用1/8如果你想的话
00:41:498 (11,12) - 这blanket感觉好歪
00:59:498 (6,7,8) - 这又是什么白线三连 把00:59:582 (7) - 去掉然后跳一跳多好
01:04:165 (4,5,6,7) - 感觉音乐这地方不是特别适合做这么跳 建议把01:04:165 (4,5) - 换成一个滑条和前面00:58:832 (3) - 节奏保持一致
其他都还好吧

这个低难度我感觉有点保不动;w; 怎么办
Topic Starter
Vert

Zero__wind wrote:

不好意思来晚了

General
sliderslide消音吧 太吵了尤其是开头结尾的段落 这个加了
鼓音效的用法我就不予置评了感觉也没怎么跟着曲子走基本上即兴发挥了 soft whistle用得太少了感觉比较残念啊 特别是开头部分一直到00:36:832 (1) - 感觉多加一些soft whistle跟吉他会很好听的 其实音效这种东西我也不是很懂,瞎鸡巴弄吧233

Normal
00:20:165 (5,1) - 最低难度 Normal 还放跳的吗 不要吧 保持1x
00:23:165 (4,1) - 啊后面还有好多啊……这个diff不要跳啊 有点简单了就把ds涨到1.1x
这diff真的飞不动……最好在kiai再加一些简单的1/4节奏类似01:19:165 (5,6) - 这种的 但是不要跳 不要跳 不要跳……可,全都改了,改成1x了


Expert

00:19:498 (3,4,5) - 不是很懂这是什么白线三连 并没有什么音可以跟的感觉 建议把00:19:582 (4) - 去掉
00:33:165 (6) - 这里倒是可以用1/8如果你想的话 还是算了,如果是kiai可能会改
00:41:498 (11,12) - 这blanket感觉好歪 啊右偏了一格
00:59:498 (6,7,8) - 这又是什么白线三连 把00:59:582 (7) - 去掉然后跳一跳多好 ok,这块整体改了一下
01:04:165 (4,5,6,7) - 感觉音乐这地方不是特别适合做这么跳 建议把01:04:165 (4,5) - 换成一个滑条和前面00:58:832 (3) - 节奏保持一致
其他都还好吧 好改了

这个低难度我感觉有点保不动;w; 怎么办 没关系,我已经把间距统一回去了233
感谢01大师
Kashima

Zero__wind wrote:

Kashima's Insane
00:25:498 (7) - 怎么说呢 你要顺时针转圈转多久啊……一直到00:32:165 (3) - 转了两个小节都不止 虽然不能说是问题但是感觉很无语 在比如00:28:832 (1) - 这种重音的地方稍微转换一下也好吧 仅供参考对flow的转换并不是很熟悉 虽然知道要改flow但是不知道怎么改的时候就只会塞转圈圈了T T不过姑且试着改了改..
00:37:998 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这我觉得有点overmap了 00:38:248 (7) - 这里没有音吧 建议00:38:164 (6,7,8) - 换成一个1/4滑条好的
00:45:499 (3) - 这里又开始了 连着转了快三个小节的逆时针一直到00:54:165 (5) - 考虑在00:50:165 (1) - 这种地方转换一下flow好吗
01:04:165 (3,7) - 叠好?01:04:832 (5,8) - 那里叠了这里又不叠就怪怪的ok

大师摸图辛苦啦
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Zweib

Zero__wind wrote:

不好意思来晚了

Zweib's Hard
OD6不然spread爆炸
00:05:832 (2,2) - 为什么这两个滑条尾巴搞成这样……? 正常画吧
00:44:832 (11) - 加NC保持规律
00:50:165 (1) - 去掉NC然后在00:52:165 (5) - 这里加NC
00:56:164 (2,3,4) - 这里节奏不太对劲吧 00:56:998 (4) - 这个滑条不管是人声还是鼓都没压到 建议节奏改成这样,如果你一定要在00:56:665 (3) - 这里起滑条跟那个鼓的话那就把00:56:998 (4) - 换成在红线00:57:165 - 的一个circle或者1/4吧
00:57:498 (1) - 这个没什么必要NC 最好去掉
00:58:998 (4) - 这个滑条我也不太明白是跟的什么 我觉得应该和00:58:832 (3) - 换个顺序 滑条从白线上起然后circle补在00:59:332 - 跟vocal吧 这边vocal比较糊,跟后面consist的话这样下节奏觉得表现的也可以
01:01:165 (2) - 这个往右边挪一些吧 感觉01:00:665 (1,2,3) - 这里跳有点大而且主要是01:01:165 (2) - 这个地方并不适合跳啊
01:02:498 (6,7) - 感觉7这个跳又大又不自然,能不能改到上面去或者是怎么样
01:06:165 (8) - 加NC保持规律
01:10:832 (6,7) - 这里音效有点问题吧 应该没有这么多个normal sample 直接copy学妹的音效
其他都fix

osu file format v14

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Version:Zweib's Hard
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Tags:Sakura Quest P.A.WORKS Kashima Zweib
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304,160,42165,6,0,P|246:170|156:176,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,200,42665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
4,88,42832,2,0,P|76:88|144:96,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,72,43332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
185,175,43498,2,0,L|174:252,1,59.9999981689454,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,288,43832,2,0,P|68:292|16:300,1,59.9999981689454,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,332,44165,2,0,P|280:336|376:344,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,276,44665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,236,44832,6,0,P|280:184|284:124,1,100,8|0,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
328,56,45332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,139,45498,2,0,P|112:139|64:139,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,67,45998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,220,46165,2,0,P|208:248|192:280,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,152,46498,2,0,P|356:156|404:192,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,324,46832,2,0,P|284:266|328:260,1,150,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,264,47498,6,0,L|504:381,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,168,47998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,280,48165,2,0,L|304:288,1,59.9999981689454,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,124,48498,2,0,P|412:152|408:192,1,59.9999981689454,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,232,48831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,232,49164,1,8,0:1:0:0:
60,116,49498,2,0,P|46:84|40:52,1,59.9999981689454,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,216,49831,2,0,P|16:240|0:284,1,59.9999981689454,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,140,50165,6,0,P|192:88|196:16,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,240,50665,2,0,P|144:296|200:292,1,119.999996337891,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,320,51165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,160,51498,2,0,L|524:132,1,119.999996337891,0|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
464,304,52165,2,0,L|476:372,1,59.9999981689454,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,272,52498,2,0,L|364:336,1,59.9999981689454
252,356,52831,6,0,P|192:332|104:332,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,348,53331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,240,53498,2,0,P|71:251|132:204,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,104,53998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,196,54165,2,0,L|208:276,1,59.9999981689454
376,216,54498,2,0,L|296:228,1,59.9999981689454,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,54831,2,0,P|412:120|488:128,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,32,55331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,96,55498,6,0,P|144:64|132:16,1,100,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
249,211,55998,5,0,0:0:0:0:
156,276,56164,2,0,L|129:179,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,335,56665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
347,253,56832,2,0,L|471:235,1,100
160,320,57498,6,0,L|-4:308,1,150,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,184,58165,5,4,1:0:0:0:
124,184,58498,2,0,L|116:112,1,59.9999981689454,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,247,58832,1,0,1:0:0:0:
275,143,58998,2,0,L|287:3,1,119.999996337891
370,179,59498,2,0,P|382:235|398:307,1,119.999996337891,2|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
333,384,59998,1,0,1:0:0:0:
497,277,60165,2,0,P|515:221|505:137,1,119.999996337891,8|2,1:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
387,67,60665,6,0,P|383:43|387:3,2,59.9999981689454,0|2|0,0:0|1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,140,61165,2,0,L|152:144,1,59.9999981689454,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,168,61498,2,0,P|412:184|376:232,1,119.999996337891,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,228,61998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,284,62165,2,0,L|184:348,1,59.9999981689454,2|8,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
340,366,62498,2,0,P|304:342|280:334,1,59.9999981689454,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,384,62832,2,0,P|60:332|80:277,2,119.999996337891,8|0|2,1:0|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
155,115,63832,6,0,L|96:110,1,59.9999981689454,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,76,64165,2,0,P|260:168|240:196,1,119.999996337891,8|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,226,64665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,288,64832,1,2,1:2:0:0:
109,325,64998,2,0,P|45:301|29:225,1,119.999996337891,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,288,65498,2,0,P|284:300|308:364,1,119.999996337891,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,316,65998,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,212,66165,6,0,L|392:128,1,59.9999981689454,2|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
512,120,66498,2,0,L|496:180,1,59.9999981689454,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,112,66832,2,0,P|232:64|172:52,1,119.999996337891,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,40,67332,1,0,1:0:0:0:
192,144,67498,2,0,L|188:212,1,59.9999981689454,0|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
88,144,67832,2,0,P|65:108|64:60,1,59.9999981689454,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,255,68165,2,0,L|69:315,1,59.9999981689454,8|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
230,270,68498,1,8,0:3:0:0:
169,370,68665,1,8,0:3:0:0:
327,342,68832,6,0,L|347:214,1,119.999996337891,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,100,69332,1,2,0:0:0:0:
259,37,69498,2,0,L|279:157,1,119.999996337891,8|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,276,69998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,212,70165,2,0,P|198:191|217:223,1,119.999996337891,2|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
416,120,70832,2,0,P|432:88|432:48,1,59.9999981689454,8|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
336,196,71165,2,0,P|340:224|344:268,1,59.9999981689454,0|8,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
257,102,71498,6,0,P|201:110|165:50,1,119.999996337891,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,75,71998,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,208,72164,2,0,P|232:272|236:340,1,119.999996337891,8|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,184,72664,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,220,72831,2,0,P|384:184|432:220,1,119.999996337891,2|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
512,214,73331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,304,73498,2,0,P|400:332|394:362,1,59.9999981689454,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,312,73831,2,0,P|228:288|216:252,1,59.9999981689454
303,103,74165,5,2,1:2:0:0:
44,167,74498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,30,74832,2,0,L|218:89,1,59.9999981689454,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,230,75165,2,0,L|135:170,1,59.9999981689454,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,174,75498,2,0,P|295:202|243:178,1,119.999996337891,2|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
194,108,75998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,272,76165,2,0,P|216:304|200:340,1,59.9999981689454,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,196,76498,2,0,P|76:224|92:252,1,59.9999981689454,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,105,76832,5,2,1:2:0:0:
64,331,77165,1,2,1:2:0:0:
275,240,77498,2,0,P|241:229|201:229,1,59.9999981689454,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,296,77832,2,0,P|452:296|492:288,1,59.9999981689454,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,352,78165,2,0,P|220:356|156:364,1,119.999996337891,0|2,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
51,261,78665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
63,124,78832,2,0,P|154:92|123:183,1,239.999992675781,8|4,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
124,128,82165,6,0,B|52:140|52:140|76:168,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,216,82665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,140,83165,6,0,B|472:128|472:128|448:100,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,52,83665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,72,83832,2,0,P|152:60|188:168,1,250,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,232,84832,6,0,P|272:264|264:288,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,168,85165,2,0,P|372:196|376:220,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,152,85832,6,0,P|104:120|112:96,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,216,86165,2,0,P|4:188|0:164,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,52,86498,2,0,B|164:96|165:-2|299:51,1,250,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,104,87498,6,0,P|356:128|360:152,3,37.5000014305115,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,180,88498,2,0,P|267:203|268:232,3,37.5000014305115,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Zero__wind
recheck, no kd

Normal
00:20:832 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这个对称绝对是摆歪了不然不可能上面00:20:832 (1,2,3) - 这里是1.0x下面00:22:165 (3,4,1) - 这有一半就变成1.08x了 重新摆一下
00:25:498 (5,1) - 这个1.1x的也调一下
00:32:832 (3,1) - 这有点难看 试试把00:34:165 (1) - 像这样绕00:33:832 (4) - 逆时针20° 然后后面2就可以叠在00:32:832 (3) - 尾巴上了 后面的00:36:165 (3) - 要相应调一点间距不过并不麻烦
00:41:832 (4,1) - 这个1.1x也调一下
00:42:165 (1,2,3,4) - 这里也是
好现在进入kiai了我们来说一下哪里可以加1/4
00:57:498 (3) - 首先是这个地方好吧虽然这里还没进kiai不过这个地方绝对是整张图里最值得强调的一个点 换成两个1/4滑条不管跟人声还是跟鼓都是非常合适的
00:59:498 (3) - 这里可以换成一个1/4的折返 同样后面01:04:832 (3) - 一起
01:10:832 (3) - 这个地方强烈建议换成两个1/4滑条 人声和鼓都是有的而且也可以算是歌曲最高潮的部分了
01:15:498 (3) - 这里其实也比较适合换成1/4折返不过可能有点难改了
稍微能加这么一些东西的话 怎么说呢 心里会踏实很多

还有其他可以托管一下的东西
Zweib's Hard
00:57:498 (1) - 这个NC没去掉

Kashima's Insane
00:36:832 (1) - 头上丢了一个normal clap这个很重要必须加

美丽
改好了起飞
Topic Starter
Vert

Zero__wind wrote:

recheck, no kd

Normal
00:20:832 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这个对称绝对是摆歪了不然不可能上面00:20:832 (1,2,3) - 这里是1.0x下面00:22:165 (3,4,1) - 这有一半就变成1.08x了 重新摆一下
00:25:498 (5,1) - 这个1.1x的也调一下
00:32:832 (3,1) - 这有点难看 试试把00:34:165 (1) - 像这样绕00:33:832 (4) - 逆时针20° 然后后面2就可以叠在00:32:832 (3) - 尾巴上了 后面的00:36:165 (3) - 要相应调一点间距不过并不麻烦
00:41:832 (4,1) - 这个1.1x也调一下
00:42:165 (1,2,3,4) - 这里也是
好现在进入kiai了我们来说一下哪里可以加1/4
00:57:498 (3) - 首先是这个地方好吧虽然这里还没进kiai不过这个地方绝对是整张图里最值得强调的一个点 换成两个1/4滑条不管跟人声还是跟鼓都是非常合适的
00:59:498 (3) - 这里可以换成一个1/4的折返 同样后面01:04:832 (3) - 一起
01:10:832 (3) - 这个地方强烈建议换成两个1/4滑条 人声和鼓都是有的而且也可以算是歌曲最高潮的部分了
01:15:498 (3) - 这里其实也比较适合换成1/4折返不过可能有点难改了
稍微能加这么一些东西的话 怎么说呢 心里会踏实很多

还有其他可以托管一下的东西
Zweib's Hard
00:57:498 (1) - 这个NC没去掉

Kashima's Insane
00:36:832 (1) - 头上丢了一个normal clap这个很重要必须加

美丽
改好了起飞
十分感谢XD
all fixed and updated
Zero__wind
We added a bit more 1/4 stuff in Normal and polished the hitsounds for all diffs via irc
I'm fine with the mapset now
Bubbled.
Karen
Fixed
  1. polished patterns in Expert:00:09:165 (8,9) - 00:23:498 (1) - , and added some hitsounds for streams 00:56:665 -
  2. some spacing issues in Kashima's diff: 00:14:665 (6,7) - 00:36:665 (11,1) -
  3. a spacing error in Normal


log:
2017-09-14 00:09 Karen: 早上好
2017-09-14 00:10 Vert: rlc吗
2017-09-14 00:10 Karen: rlc
2017-09-14 00:10 Vert: 不对irc吗
2017-09-14 00:10 Vert: 怎么拼来着
2017-09-14 00:10 Vert: 忘了
2017-09-14 00:10 Karen: irc啊
2017-09-14 00:11 Karen: 00:06:832 - 这个音效在尾巴好别扭哦
2017-09-14 00:11 Vert: 哪个难度
2017-09-14 00:11 Karen: 当然主难度
2017-09-14 00:12 Vert: 音乐就是这样的啊
2017-09-14 00:12 Karen: 能用圈吗
2017-09-14 00:12 Karen: 00:09:498 (9) - 这个多好
2017-09-14 00:13 Vert: 节奏不一样啊
2017-09-14 00:13 Vert: 我后面一样的地方也是这么下的
2017-09-14 00:13 Vert: 感觉还行啊
2017-09-14 00:14 Vert: 这我放个二连感觉很僵硬
2017-09-14 00:15 Karen: 00:06:498 (8) - 我怎么觉得这个可以折返
2017-09-14 00:16 Karen: 00:09:165 (8) - 这个可以一个长滑条带过
2017-09-14 00:17 Vert: 00:09:165 (8) - 这个可以改
2017-09-14 00:17 Vert: 上面那个感觉现在挺好的啊
2017-09-14 00:17 Vert: 折返感觉中间没音
2017-09-14 00:18 Karen: http://puu.sh/xyOWA/be474bf722.jpg
2017-09-14 00:18 Karen: 这样也挺好呀
2017-09-14 00:19 Vert: 感觉有点僵硬
2017-09-14 00:19 Karen: 其实那种很轻的音 不跟就行了 不然00:19:998 - 这种地方 就也得跟
2017-09-14 00:19 Vert: 不是很喜欢这种前后就一个圈的
2017-09-14 00:20 Vert: 其实我是跟的人声
2017-09-14 00:20 Vert: 如果有的话233
2017-09-14 00:20 Karen: 00:23:498 (1) - 这个可以分开啊
2017-09-14 00:20 Vert: 然后补了一些重的音节让整体不那么空
2017-09-14 00:21 Vert: 恩
2017-09-14 00:21 Vert: 好像是可以
2017-09-14 00:22 Vert: 00:23:498 (1) - 这个我换个滑条吧
2017-09-14 00:22 Vert: 放远处
2017-09-14 00:22 Vert: 怎么样
2017-09-14 00:23 Karen: 可以啊
2017-09-14 00:23 Vert: 截图直接发群里好了
2017-09-14 00:23 Karen: 我觉得00:23:665 - 这里加单点好
2017-09-14 00:23 Karen: 不然跟后面00:23:832 (2,3) - 这两个人声
2017-09-14 00:23 Karen: 一起
2017-09-14 00:23 Karen: 就很僵硬
2017-09-14 00:24 Vert: 俩单点怎么放呢
2017-09-14 00:25 Karen: 00:24:498 (4,5) - 就这个距离呗
2017-09-14 00:26 Vert: 看一眼群
2017-09-14 00:26 Vert: 我这样摆平行了得了
2017-09-14 00:26 Vert: 00:24:498 (5,6) - 我觉得和这俩一样比较好
2017-09-14 00:27 Vert: 哦
2017-09-14 00:27 Vert: 一样的
2017-09-14 00:27 Karen: 猴啊猴啊
2017-09-14 00:27 Vert: 当我没说
2017-09-14 00:27 Karen: 00:56:664 (6,7) - 这种可以加音效啊不然太空了
2017-09-14 00:28 Vert: 袈裟啊
2017-09-14 00:28 Vert: 加啥啊
2017-09-14 00:28 Vert: 我音效一窍不通
2017-09-14 00:28 Karen: normal-hitnormal
2017-09-14 00:29 Vert: sample和add都改成normal?
2017-09-14 00:29 Karen: sampleset改成normal就行了
2017-09-14 00:30 Karen: 仔细听了下音效是有点惨
2017-09-14 00:30 Vert: 吼
2017-09-14 00:30 Vert: 嘻嘻,是kashima下的
2017-09-14 00:30 Karen: 那我也没法跟你说改啥
2017-09-14 00:31 Karen: 就很难受
2017-09-14 00:31 Karen: 算了还是不管了
2017-09-14 00:31 Vert: 其实好像还凑合吧,我听起来没啥问题啊
2017-09-14 00:31 Karen: 太单调了
2017-09-14 00:31 Karen: 01:13:832 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - 这种地方漏了很多东西
2017-09-14 00:32 Karen: 刚刚那个音效给kashima的也加上
2017-09-14 00:32 Vert: 01:13:832 (5) - 01:14:498 (3) - 这俩改成noraml?
2017-09-14 00:33 Karen: 01:13:832 (5,3) - 最起码这两个红线上要有音效
2017-09-14 00:33 Karen: 我觉得还是别改了
2017-09-14 00:34 Vert: 那就不改了
2017-09-14 00:35 Karen: 你能改kashima的diff么
2017-09-14 00:36 Vert: 可以
2017-09-14 00:36 Vert: 说吧
2017-09-14 00:36 Vert: 我的完事了?
2017-09-14 00:36 Karen: 完了
2017-09-14 00:36 Karen: 00:14:665 (6,7) - 这个远得过头了
2017-09-14 00:36 Karen: kashima的
2017-09-14 00:37 Karen: 00:36:665 (11,1) - 这个也是
2017-09-14 00:37 Vert: ctrl+g?
2017-09-14 00:37 Vert: 11我放中间了
2017-09-14 00:38 Vert: 前面那个ctrl+g可行吗
2017-09-14 00:38 Karen: 可行
2017-09-14 00:38 Karen: 好美丽
2017-09-14 00:39 Vert: 等一下
2017-09-14 00:39 Vert: 00:57:331 (8,9) - 00:56:665 (4,5) -
2017-09-14 00:39 Vert: 这四个都要改normal吗
2017-09-14 00:39 Vert: 还是只改前面的(和我那个对应
2017-09-14 00:40 Karen: 只改前面就行
2017-09-14 00:40 Karen: 音乐里明显有鼓的
2017-09-14 00:40 Karen: 后面那个没有
2017-09-14 00:41 Vert: 恩。。
2017-09-14 00:42 Karen: 好猪师傅牛逼
2017-09-14 00:42 Karen: 不过这么像insane
2017-09-14 00:42 Vert: 1/8
2017-09-14 00:43 Karen: normal
2017-09-14 00:43 Karen: 00:40:832 (2,4) - 这个太近了
2017-09-14 00:44 Karen: 其他美丽 更新吧 我酝酿一下post
2017-09-14 00:45 Vert: 好
2017-09-14 00:45 Vert: 这个可能是改别的的时候碰了一下
2017-09-14 00:45 Vert: BG有什么好的嘛
2017-09-14 00:46 Karen: 我没看过啊 不懂
2017-09-14 00:46 Karen: 你要找bg吗
2017-09-14 00:46 Karen: 那快换个
2017-09-14 00:47 Vert: 给我五分钟,找不到就不换了
2017-09-14 00:48 Karen: ok
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this1neguy
really no idea how this got qualified with the shit at 00:05:332 (4) / 00:07:998 (4) / 00:10:665 (4) / 00:13:332 (4). these sliderends are all the beginning of new patterns and are emphasized sounds that 100% should be clickable.
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