Chata - Microcosmos

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Colin Hou
还得重下 Orz
Snowy Dream
;)
bakabaka⑨~
so nice map!
Star~☆
loveFantasy
00:15 <bakabaka> : :O
00:15 <loveFantasy> : :O
00:15 <bakabaka> : 改好了:O
00:15 <bakabaka> : 可以幫我看一下嗎:D
00:16 <loveFantasy> : k
00:20 <bakabaka> : :<
00:21 <loveFantasy> : tick 1?
00:21 <loveFantasy> : tick用soft whistle
00:21 <loveFantasy> : 1:49:020加
00:21 <loveFantasy> : 1:50:686加
00:22 <loveFantasy> : 另外的不加
00:22 <bakabaka> : 甚麼甚麼 0.0
00:22 <bakabaka> : 我看看
00:22 <loveFantasy> : 另外其實背景的clap不是2/4白線
00:22 <bakabaka> : tick是要額外放音效嗎 0.0
00:22 <loveFantasy> : 不過下2/4聽起來也沒什麼奇怪的
00:22 <loveFantasy> : 我是覺得能tick 1
00:23 <bakabaka> : 我是下白紅:D
00:23 <loveFantasy> : 只會影響最後那兩條slider而已
00:23 <bakabaka> : 的確
00:23 <loveFantasy> : 我看很多2/4 clap說XD
00:23 <bakabaka> : 其實我不知道24真正的定義:O
00:24 <bakabaka> : 阿
00:24 <loveFantasy> : KIAI內吧
00:24 <bakabaka> : 恩:3
00:24 <bakabaka> : 想錯了:O
00:24 <bakabaka> : 麻~有問題到時候在改OTZ
00:24 <bakabaka> : tick好小聲:<
00:25 <loveFantasy> : 啊 我是想說你把 soft whistle copy起來當tick
00:25 <loveFantasy> : 不要用內建的tick
00:25 <bakabaka> : 內鍵音效不知道在哪摳呢:O
00:25 <loveFantasy> : http://puu.sh/3LET
00:26 <loveFantasy> : 這樣能做n_wn__w的pattern :D
00:26 <bakabaka> : 那是甚麼lol
00:26 <loveFantasy> : n=N normal w=S whistle
00:27 <bakabaka> : :O
00:28 <bakabaka> : 喔喔~剛剛沒注意到你上面說的那個時間:3
00:29 <loveFantasy> : 另外看看0:00~0:29要不要降個10%~20%音
00:29 <bakabaka> : 好
00:29 <bakabaka> : 我先找個音效:<
00:30 <loveFantasy> : 瞎了現在還不能貼文只給star
00:30 <loveFantasy> : 貼savelog混過去好了

哭了给個star都這麼辛苦
Patchouli
Chata~ :)                                              
Saya-Honmei
茶太~~~yoooo baka大大的圖當然給星www 什麼時候rank XDD?
Komeiji Yuki
spboxer3
[General]
tag要加上Yuki的名子阿
letterbox during breaks 要拿掉 ((F4 → storybroad標籤裡

[Yuki's Normal]
AR用5會比較好讀一些
01:38:603 (2) - 這地方就該放slider了 不然節奏會變的有些奇怪呢 ((放到01:38:915 -
01:39:228 - 在這放1個note
01:39:436 - 這邊放個slider 折返點在01:39:749 - 結尾01:40:061 -
01:41:728 - 這邊用note吧
01:41:936 - 這邊放slider用1/3拍~
結束~這樣節奏就對上了>w<~

[Insane]
00:01:415 (2,2) - 重疊吧:3
00:22:552 (1,2,3,4) - 這4個的間距都不同呢~我認為你可以(1,2)相同 (3,4)相同 這樣~
00:42:978 (7) - 這裡開始NC吧 00:43:603 (1) - 這就拿掉了吧
00:54:749 (3,4) - 靠 這超瞎眼的阿XDD 你看背景和 灰色的note在一起 絕配阿 保證2的人滿臉都是XDDDD
01:09:020 (3,1) - 故意的?? 我覺得重疊比較好呢=w=
Colin Hou
letterbox during break 还有count down别忘了

然后还有tags, source都没有填啊 QAQ

花了好久才搞完真是抱歉

hitsounds基本都是抄过来的

wocaozuodeyoudiannanle

gujinideizijizaizuogehard

Download: Chata - Micro cosmos (bakabaka) [Colin's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
bakabaka

spboxer3 wrote:

[General]
tag要加上Yuki的名子阿
letterbox during breaks 要拿掉 ((F4 → storybroad標籤裡

[Yuki's Normal]
AR用5會比較好讀一些
01:38:603 (2) - 這地方就該放slider了 不然節奏會變的有些奇怪呢 ((放到01:38:915 -
01:39:228 - 在這放1個note
01:39:436 - 這邊放個slider 折返點在01:39:749 - 結尾01:40:061 -
01:41:728 - 這邊用note吧
01:41:936 - 這邊放slider用1/3拍~
結束~這樣節奏就對上了>w<~

[Insane]
00:01:415 (2,2) - 重疊吧:3
00:22:552 (1,2,3,4) - 這4個的間距都不同呢~我認為你可以(1,2)相同 (3,4)相同 這樣~
00:42:978 (7) - 這裡開始NC吧 00:43:603 (1) - 這就拿掉了吧
00:54:749 (3,4) - 靠 這超瞎眼的阿XDD 你看背景和 灰色的note在一起 絕配阿 保證2的人滿臉都是XDDDD
01:09:020 (3,1) - 故意的?? 我覺得重疊比較好呢=w=
謝謝MOD :D
Kotone
來了 :D
General
- 靜音的sliderslide貌似是不可以為0 bytes的,請用這個44 bytes的
- 茶太<3

Yuki's Normal
00:30:052 - 唔這個break不需要,刪
00:33:234 - 減音量到5%吧
01:41:728 (8) - 這加點whistle吧orz

Colin's Hard
01:53:186 (8) - 頭whistle?
喜歡這diff

Insane沒問題,不過感覺SV略快 還有有些JUMP好像不太合適這曲呢orz
Sallad4ever
Hi bakabaka, Colin ask me to mod this so here I am

[General]
  1. Hmm I want confirmation on the second offset, I think it should be 35280
  2. Wait a minute, shouldn't the title be Microcosmos without spacing? holysoup already post it before but it seems that you haven't change it yet. Read this thread to do a title change. Consult with Colin if you have difficulty on it
  3. Use 2 second audio lead in for all diff (Colin's Hard already use it)


[Yuki's Normal]
  1. 00:08:006 (1) - not perfectly symmetry, could you by chance make it more symmetry?
    96,304,8006,6,0,B|152:304|152:304|176:356|256:384|336:356|360:304|360:304|416:304,1,360,6|0
  2. 00:11:643 (1) - ^
  3. 00:56:728 (2) - this is just me being very picky, but this linear slider are not very good looking. Maybe use a curve or wavy slider instead
  4. 00:58:603 (5) - I suggest to move this somewhere else, even if it just a little, this slider still overlapped by 00:56:728 (2) and this ruin all your neat patterns
  5. 01:18:395 (1,2,3) - I really think this should have the same rhythm as 01:21:311 (1,2,3) if you're following the background music
    1. 01:18:395 (1) - move to 01:18:186
    2. 01:18:603 (2) - move to 01:19:020 then add circles at 01:18:603 & 01:18:811
    3. 01:19:645 (3) - move to 01:20:061 and remove 01:20:270 (4)
      This will make the whole pattern have the same rhythm with the previous & the next combo
  6. 01:41:103 (7) - NC (new combo) this

[Colin's Hard]
  1. 00:18:347 (2,3) - I honestly think this 1/4 beat are to pushing and unexpected (because it's a single circle at 1/4 beat) for this low pace of the song. A simple slider instead of 2 beats like this are good enough, or just use a 1/2 beat like the majority of rhythm you used on this part. The same case for 00:18:916 (4,5) & 00:26:188 (2,3)


[Insane]
  1. 00:29:938 (1) - you don't need the timing section to increase volume here because spinner are already have increasing volume so adding another timing section to do it are redundant
  2. 00:36:311 (2,3) - this small jump between 2 big jumps, doesn't play very nice. You should give these the same spacing as the previous jump
  3. 00:40:686 (1) - I suggest you to use normal spacing for this one, it almost looks like 1/2 beat apart when it's actually a 1/4
  4. 00:55:686 (1) - this looks like a spacing infringement no matter how many time I see it, you should use spacing 1x here
  5. 01:01:311 (6,7) - this jump are too much. I suggest to use the same jump spacing as on 01:00:894 (4,5)
  6. 01:05:894 (6,7) - ^ use the same spacing as the previous jump
  7. 01:10:478 - maybe add a circle with soft-whistle here
  8. 01:29:020 (1) - same as 00:55:686 (1), it's better to use normal spacing here
  9. 01:29:436 - I suggest to add a circle here, there's a beat here if you listen closely to the music
  10. 01:45:895 (2) - hmm following your hitsound pattern, shouldn't this be a normal-hit?
  11. 01:51:936 (1) - remove the timing section on this spinner, it's redundant. Only use 1 timing section on the end of the spinner just like on Colin's Hard


Nice map. The jump on insane are a bit inconsistent but not all of them.
Good Luck
Komeiji Yuki
>_____<

Baka sen tsu mapper

EDIT:⑨⑨⑨th post on baka's map XD

Download: Chata - Micro cosmos (bakabaka) [Yuki's Normal].osu
Colin Hou
Topic Starter
bakabaka

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi bakabaka, Colin ask me to mod this so here I am

[General]
  1. Hmm I want confirmation on the second offset, I think it should be 35280
  2. Wait a minute, shouldn't the title be Microcosmos without spacing? holysoup already post it before but it seems that you haven't change it yet. Read this thread to do a title change. Consult with Colin if you have difficulty on it
  3. Use 2 second audio lead in for all diff (Colin's Hard already use it)


[Yuki's Normal]
  1. 00:08:006 (1) - not perfectly symmetry, could you by chance make it more symmetry?
    96,304,8006,6,0,B|152:304|152:304|176:356|256:384|336:356|360:304|360:304|416:304,1,360,6|0
  2. 00:11:643 (1) - ^
  3. 00:56:728 (2) - this is just me being very picky, but this linear slider are not very good looking. Maybe use a curve or wavy slider instead
  4. 00:58:603 (5) - I suggest to move this somewhere else, even if it just a little, this slider still overlapped by 00:56:728 (2) and this ruin all your neat patterns
  5. 01:18:395 (1,2,3) - I really think this should have the same rhythm as 01:21:311 (1,2,3) if you're following the background music
    1. 01:18:395 (1) - move to 01:18:186
    2. 01:18:603 (2) - move to 01:19:020 then add circles at 01:18:603 & 01:18:811
    3. 01:19:645 (3) - move to 01:20:061 and remove 01:20:270 (4)
      This will make the whole pattern have the same rhythm with the previous & the next combo
  6. 01:41:103 (7) - NC (new combo) this

[Colin's Hard]
  1. 00:18:347 (2,3) - I honestly think this 1/4 beat are to pushing and unexpected (because it's a single circle at 1/4 beat) for this low pace of the song. A simple slider instead of 2 beats like this are good enough, or just use a 1/2 beat like the majority of rhythm you used on this part. The same case for 00:18:916 (4,5) & 00:26:188 (2,3)


[Insane]
  1. 00:29:938 (1) - you don't need the timing section to increase volume here because spinner are already have increasing volume so adding another timing section to do it are redundant
  2. 00:36:311 (2,3) - this small jump between 2 big jumps, doesn't play very nice. You should give these the same spacing as the previous jump
  3. 00:40:686 (1) - I suggest you to use normal spacing for this one, it almost looks like 1/2 beat apart when it's actually a 1/4
  4. 00:55:686 (1) - this looks like a spacing infringement no matter how many time I see it, you should use spacing 1x here
  5. 01:01:311 (6,7) - this jump are too much. I suggest to use the same jump spacing as on 01:00:894 (4,5)
  6. 01:05:894 (6,7) - ^ use the same spacing as the previous jump
  7. 01:10:478 - maybe add a circle with soft-whistle here
  8. 01:29:020 (1) - same as 00:55:686 (1), it's better to use normal spacing here
  9. 01:29:436 - I suggest to add a circle here, there's a beat here if you listen closely to the music
  10. 01:45:895 (2) - hmm following your hitsound pattern, shouldn't this be a normal-hit?
  11. 01:51:936 (1) - remove the timing section on this spinner, it's redundant. Only use 1 timing section on the end of the spinner just like on Colin's Hard


Nice map. The jump on insane are a bit inconsistent but not all of them.
Good Luck
thx~all fixed :)
Kotone
Title是Microcosmos呢=A=你沒改哦?
Topic Starter
bakabaka
哈哈~沒注意到 ;)
kanpakyin
...下載不能,下載下來的file只有12.9kb 重新submit一下? 不然沒法mod
Topic Starter
bakabaka
:( 抱歉...又沒注意到
Nymph
茶太~ hoshi :>
kanpakyin
As requested:

Please move to pending if you have already finished the set.

[General]
  1. All look fine~


[Yuki's Normal]
Difficulty setting
(I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
  1. 我覺得AR-1會比較好?


Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
  1. 00:48:613 (1) - 這個slider有點詭異,建議換一個style.
  2. 00:51:946 (1) - ^.
  3. 01:02:154 (x) - 這個slider略長,auto都能轉出21000了,主要是因為有一些新手不太會轉圈,然後就在這裏轉的手抽了.而且太長他們也會覺得悶.
  4. 01:16:321 (3) - (design)試試stack住?然後打橫和(4.5)-成水平,在調解後面的間距,感覺排版會比較整潔
  5. 01:24:446 (x) - 為甚麼不對上音樂呢?把轉盤停在01:27:571 - 然後後面01:28:196 - 加個note.注意要提升音量喔.
  6. 01:28:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這堆的節奏我要一些想法,其實都是根據音樂拉,01:29:238 - 加note,01:29:446 (4) - 01:30:071 (5) - 01:30:696 (6) - 全部移後1/2 然後從這裏01:31:321 (1) - 就要調整間距.
  7. 01:43:613 (x) - 這裏感覺不應該是spinner的阿,spinner可能不太適合,因為這裏音樂的clap和normal sound沒有停下來..spinner也太長了.


Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
  1. 00:08:006 (1) - 感覺finish不太適合這裏,主要原因是太強了,有個鈴聲音聽不錯的,你可以去看看,或者可以只去掉finish.
  2. 00:11:643 (1) - ^同
  3. 00:22:552 (1) - ^
  4. 00:33:234 (x) - 綠線調到5%? 像其他diff一樣
  5. 01:51:946 (1) - hitsound 5%.


[Colin's Hard]
哇!
Difficulty setting
(I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
  1. AR-1?Hard用AR8真的大丈夫?而且真的有必要用AR8嗎?


Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
  1. 00:26:188 (2) - 我不知道你是不是故意的,但是我還是寫出來把,(2)- 的開頭沒和(1)- 的開頭疊好.
  2. 00:42:779 (8,9) - 這裡用2連不太適合把.因為我感覺在00:42:988 - 感覺在這裏加一個note會比較好00:42:988 -
  3. 00:44:655 (x) - ^同
  4. 01:11:529 (1-14) - 這個combo比起其他都略長了,我建議在01:13:404 (9) - 重新new combo.
  5. 01:28:509 (x) - 其他diff都沒有rekiai耶,要考慮刪掉嗎?
  6. 01:35:905 (4) - nazi一下,個人認為slider略醜


[Insane]
Issue/unrankable stuff
(Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
  1. 01:06:321 (1) - 這個難有一點難度(開video的時候)Note的色和video一樣,而且也被之前的comboburst蓋住了,強烈建議修改.


Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
  1. 00:02:552 (3) - (design)這個slider的折點拉到中間?因為2邊平衡會比較好看,現在看上去像是歪了
  2. 00:04:597 (2,3,4) - 3連意義不明,這裡用3連沒達到很好的效果,反而是製造了一層噪音出來了 :(
  3. 00:15:279 (1,2) - 這2個slider 2邊歪了,我幫你修了一修,大約就是下面這樣
    240,276,15279,6,0,B|247:224|336:203|384:260,1,149.999995529652,4|0
    471,176,15961,2,0,B|436:215|336:176|344:107,1,149.999995529652,2|0
  4. 00:25:734 (1) - 哭了,這裡應該用正常間距的.因為vocal在這裏開始了.
  5. 00:47:988 (x) - 加note?我聽到音樂這裏家音會比較好


Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
  1. Finish問題同Normal.
  2. 00:55:279 (6) - 在slider的尾巴加上whistle?這樣會比較好聽
  3. 00:59:238 (x) - 這裡用Normal hitsound?聽起來比較有感覺
  4. 01:00:071 (3) - 根據音樂,這裏其實要加上clap?


That's it!Good luck.
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