1. Cry For Freedom (4,93 stars, 455 notes)
2. NyarkoO's Put Your Hands Up! (4,76 stars, 323 notes)

• 00:04:235 (5) - this slider isn't spaced evenly with the stream it follows, just needs a slight adjustment
  00:07:058 (8) - same ^
  00:09:882 (5) - ^
  00:21:882 (1) - this spinner is a bit too short
  00:48:000 (1) - move this up a bit so it doesn't overlap with the previous slider
  01:01:058 (6) - rotate this slider so that it flows better with the previous circles
  01:03:353 (2,3,4,5) - doesn't follow the vocals very well
  01:08:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the spacing here is kind of odd, making it hard to read. Also, I would move 7 and 8 up bc they break the pattern
  01:16:058 (5,6) - same as ^, but to the right
  01:19:235 (7) - this circle doesn't match up with a sound, delete it
  01:31:058 (1) - move this up so it doesn't overlap with the last slider
  01:36:176 (7) - you could blanket this with 9 a little better
  I'm not sure that the OD should be that high

Zacdos wrote:

My very first mod ever
Sorry in advance No need to worry about that, everyone needs to learn when they begin^^

Cry for Freedom

[list]00:04:235 (5) - this slider isn't spaced evenly with the stream it follows, just needs a slight adjustment
00:07:058 (8) - same ^ ^
00:09:882 (5) - ^ ^
00:21:882 (1) - this spinner is a bit too short made it 1/2 longer
00:48:000 (1) - move this up a bit so it doesn't overlap with the previous slider It is intended to be like that to fulfill the blanket
01:01:058 (6) - rotate this slider so that it flows better with the previous circles feels kinda consistent as there are other ones with curves like it before
01:03:353 (2,3,4,5) - doesn't follow the vocals very well True, new pattern
01:08:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the spacing here is kind of odd, making it hard to read. Also, I would move 7 and 8 up bc they break the pattern The song uses similar sounds with a different intensity, so I think it kinda asks for something like what I did, To avoid confussion I have added NCs with the update
01:16:058 (5,6) - same as ^, but to the righ
01:19:235 (7) - this circle doesn't match up with a sound, delete it it is much lower than the rest, but there is a sound there
01:31:058 (1) - move this up so it doesn't overlap with the last slider
01:36:176 (7) - you could blanket this with 9 a little better
I'm not sure that the OD should be that high Ignored there two since I'm gonna remap kiai

Overall, a pretty solid map. I especially like the slider shapes