Absolute Zero wrote:
Thanks for the help!
Please remove the kiai sections--I really don't see how they fit on a music box song like this. I thought they were kind of a nice touch for the finishes T_T, if you really think so though, I have no problem with removing them.
00:19:599 - Inconsistency with 00:00:958. Add both whistle AND finish. Yup
00:28:919 - Inconsistency, add a whistle as well. Yeah
00:37:075 (3,4) - You haven't hit all the notes for the other sections of the songs with whistles but here you do? I'd just remove the whistles that don't have to do with the downbeat note if you want consistency. In this case, I wanna keep the red tick whistles because of how unique these sounds are and the fact that it's the end of the map.
00:38:531 - This whistle doesn't hit anything significant. Remove it. Yeah whoops
00:26:008 (2,3) - I was expecting this to be a repeat slider, like 00:24:259 (1). I mostly just wanna have some variety here, but I have no problem changing it if you'd prefer structure consistency here.
00:35:037 (3) - It feels weird that the start of this slidertick hits one thing but the ending hits something different. I would make this two hitcircles instead. I made it a 1/2 repeat slider instead here, feels nice to me tbh
Salad needs some polishing still. kill me haha
00:04:745 (3,4) - Increase distancing slightly--might be misinterpreted as a walk. Yep, I increased it.
00:08:822 (2) - Why not make this a hitcircle instead? The end of this slider feels like an overmap because it suddenly doesn't follow a white tick or the main melody. Yeah, agreed.
00:14:648 (4) - What exactly is this hitcircle following? I would remove this hitcircle. Okay!
00:17:851 (2,3) - Ehhh... the verticality here kind of breaks the flow to 00:18:725 (5), since it forces the player to go back left. If anything, at least move the notes to the opposite side of 00:18:433 (4). I changed a bit of the angling of the curve, but I'd really like to keep this. I love the way this plays as the direction change to 00:18:725 (5) - is really nice to me imo!
00:28:046 (1,2) - I don't think this warrants a dash. The pitch doesn't exactly shifting up or down. In fact, it's the same pitch. I would just have a regular movement I disagree. Even though it's the same pitch, the lyrics in the actual song have the downbeat of IMAGINATION here, and I wanted to reflect that even though the lyrics don't exist here. Even without the lyrics, the map compliments the song here pretty well with a technical "downbeat".
00:32:415 (4) - The standstill here feels strange--I would curve this slider instead. Agreed!
00:35:618 (6) - Make this a hitcircle instead--the sliderend is kind of extra right now. It's just confusing because you follow both melody notes with 00:36:201 (1), which would imply the slider end has a note, which it does not. Yeah I get what you're saying here, but I'm gonna leave this as it is. If this was a difficulty that wasn't EN or H, I'd probably make this 3/4 for the extended note, but since it's not, simplifying it to 1/2 is fine to me.
00:05:618 (1,2) - The lack of movement here is unnatural for the player compared to the context. Perhaps you want to move (2) to the left of (1) instead. Took the alternative route and added a circle at 00:06:492 - for that noise instead.
00:06:492 - Inconsistency here--add a hitcircle here or remove the sliderhead on 00:08:822 (2). ^^^
00:17:269 (3,4) - Make this a 1/1 slider and a hitcircle on 00:18:143 instead, perhaps. Nice idea, fixed!