Please remove the kiai sections--I really don't see how they fit on a music box song like this.
00:19:599 - Inconsistency with 00:00:958. Add both whistle AND finish.
00:28:919 - Inconsistency, add a whistle as well.
00:37:075 (3,4) - You haven't hit all the notes for the other sections of the songs with whistles but here you do? I'd just remove the whistles that don't have to do with the downbeat note if you want consistency.
00:38:531 - This whistle doesn't hit anything significant. Remove it.
00:26:008 (2,3) - I was expecting this to be a repeat slider, like 00:24:259 (1).
00:35:037 (3) - It feels weird that the start of this slidertick hits one thing but the ending hits something different. I would make this two hitcircles instead.
Salad needs some polishing still.
00:04:745 (3,4) - Increase distancing slightly--might be misinterpreted as a walk.
00:08:822 (2) - Why not make this a hitcircle instead? The end of this slider feels like an overmap because it suddenly doesn't follow a white tick or the main melody.
00:14:648 (4) - What exactly is this hitcircle following? I would remove this hitcircle.
00:17:851 (2,3) - Ehhh... the verticality here kind of breaks the flow to 00:18:725 (5), since it forces the player to go back left. If anything, at least move the notes to the opposite side of 00:18:433 (4).
00:28:046 (1,2) - I don't think this warrants a dash. The pitch doesn't exactly shifting up or down. In fact, it's the same pitch. I would just have a regular movement
00:32:415 (4) - The standstill here feels strange--I would curve this slider instead.
00:35:618 (6) - Make this a hitcircle instead--the sliderend is kind of extra right now. It's just confusing because you follow both melody notes with 00:36:201 (1), which would imply the slider end has a note, which it does not.
00:05:618 (1,2) - The lack of movement here is unnatural for the player compared to the context. Perhaps you want to move (2) to the left of (1) instead.
00:06:492 - Inconsistency here--add a hitcircle here or remove the sliderhead on 00:08:822 (2).
00:17:269 (3,4) - Make this a 1/1 slider and a hitcircle on 00:18:143 instead, perhaps.