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Please remove the kiai sections--I really don't see how they fit on a music box song like this.
General HS:
00:19:599 - Inconsistency with 00:00:958. Add both whistle AND finish.
00:28:919 - Inconsistency, add a whistle as well.
00:37:075 (3,4) - You haven't hit all the notes for the other sections of the songs with whistles but here you do? I'd just remove the whistles that don't have to do with the downbeat note if you want consistency.
00:38:531 - This whistle doesn't hit anything significant. Remove it.

[Cup]
00:26:008 (2,3) - I was expecting this to be a repeat slider, like 00:24:259 (1).
00:35:037 (3) - It feels weird that the start of this slidertick hits one thing but the ending hits something different. I would make this two hitcircles instead.

[Salad]
Salad needs some polishing still.
00:04:745 (3,4) - Increase distancing slightly--might be misinterpreted as a walk.
00:08:822 (2) - Why not make this a hitcircle instead? The end of this slider feels like an overmap because it suddenly doesn't follow a white tick or the main melody.
00:14:648 (4) - What exactly is this hitcircle following? I would remove this hitcircle.
00:17:851 (2,3) - Ehhh... the verticality here kind of breaks the flow to 00:18:725 (5), since it forces the player to go back left. If anything, at least move the notes to the opposite side of 00:18:433 (4).
00:28:046 (1,2) - I don't think this warrants a dash. The pitch doesn't exactly shifting up or down. In fact, it's the same pitch. I would just have a regular movement
00:32:415 (4) - The standstill here feels strange--I would curve this slider instead.
00:35:618 (6) - Make this a hitcircle instead--the sliderend is kind of extra right now. It's just confusing because you follow both melody notes with 00:36:201 (1), which would imply the slider end has a note, which it does not.

[Imagination]
00:05:618 (1,2) - The lack of movement here is unnatural for the player compared to the context. Perhaps you want to move (2) to the left of (1) instead.
00:06:492 - Inconsistency here--add a hitcircle here or remove the sliderhead on 00:08:822 (2).
00:17:269 (3,4) - Make this a 1/1 slider and a hitcircle on 00:18:143 instead, perhaps.
posted

Absolute Zero wrote:


Please remove the kiai sections--I really don't see how they fit on a music box song like this. I thought they were kind of a nice touch for the finishes T_T, if you really think so though, I have no problem with removing them.

General HS:
00:19:599 - Inconsistency with 00:00:958. Add both whistle AND finish. Yup
00:28:919 - Inconsistency, add a whistle as well. Yeah
00:37:075 (3,4) - You haven't hit all the notes for the other sections of the songs with whistles but here you do? I'd just remove the whistles that don't have to do with the downbeat note if you want consistency. In this case, I wanna keep the red tick whistles because of how unique these sounds are and the fact that it's the end of the map.
00:38:531 - This whistle doesn't hit anything significant. Remove it. Yeah whoops

[Cup]
00:26:008 (2,3) - I was expecting this to be a repeat slider, like 00:24:259 (1). I mostly just wanna have some variety here, but I have no problem changing it if you'd prefer structure consistency here.
00:35:037 (3) - It feels weird that the start of this slidertick hits one thing but the ending hits something different. I would make this two hitcircles instead. I made it a 1/2 repeat slider instead here, feels nice to me tbh

[Salad]
Salad needs some polishing still. kill me haha
00:04:745 (3,4) - Increase distancing slightly--might be misinterpreted as a walk. Yep, I increased it.
00:08:822 (2) - Why not make this a hitcircle instead? The end of this slider feels like an overmap because it suddenly doesn't follow a white tick or the main melody. Yeah, agreed.
00:14:648 (4) - What exactly is this hitcircle following? I would remove this hitcircle. Okay!
00:17:851 (2,3) - Ehhh... the verticality here kind of breaks the flow to 00:18:725 (5), since it forces the player to go back left. If anything, at least move the notes to the opposite side of 00:18:433 (4). I changed a bit of the angling of the curve, but I'd really like to keep this. I love the way this plays as the direction change to 00:18:725 (5) - is really nice to me imo!
00:28:046 (1,2) - I don't think this warrants a dash. The pitch doesn't exactly shifting up or down. In fact, it's the same pitch. I would just have a regular movement I disagree. Even though it's the same pitch, the lyrics in the actual song have the downbeat of IMAGINATION here, and I wanted to reflect that even though the lyrics don't exist here. Even without the lyrics, the map compliments the song here pretty well with a technical "downbeat".
00:32:415 (4) - The standstill here feels strange--I would curve this slider instead. Agreed!
00:35:618 (6) - Make this a hitcircle instead--the sliderend is kind of extra right now. It's just confusing because you follow both melody notes with 00:36:201 (1), which would imply the slider end has a note, which it does not. Yeah I get what you're saying here, but I'm gonna leave this as it is. If this was a difficulty that wasn't EN or H, I'd probably make this 3/4 for the extended note, but since it's not, simplifying it to 1/2 is fine to me.

[Imagination]
00:05:618 (1,2) - The lack of movement here is unnatural for the player compared to the context. Perhaps you want to move (2) to the left of (1) instead. Took the alternative route and added a circle at 00:06:492 - for that noise instead.
00:06:492 - Inconsistency here--add a hitcircle here or remove the sliderhead on 00:08:822 (2). ^^^
00:17:269 (3,4) - Make this a 1/1 slider and a hitcircle on 00:18:143 instead, perhaps. Nice idea, fixed!
Thanks for the help!
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2017-05-11 17:16 celerih: I guess you want to go over the salad
2017-05-11 17:16 Ascendance: ya
2017-05-11 17:17 Ascendance: speedmod free kd
2017-05-11 17:17 celerih: alright
2017-05-11 17:17 celerih: ACTION is editing SPYAIR - I'M A BELIEVER [celerih's Salad]
2017-05-11 17:17 celerih: I'm ready
2017-05-11 17:18 Ascendance: NO
2017-05-11 17:18 Ascendance: WRONG SALAD.
2017-05-11 17:18 celerih: wut
2017-05-11 17:18 celerih: ooooh
2017-05-11 17:18 Ascendance: LOL
2017-05-11 17:18 Ascendance: FUCK
2017-05-11 17:18 celerih: I thought you wanted to mod my salad on believer
2017-05-11 17:18 celerih: before uypload
2017-05-11 17:18 Ascendance: no
2017-05-11 17:18 Ascendance: its probably fine
2017-05-11 17:18 celerih: I don't want to mod Harumacho
2017-05-11 17:18 celerih: harumachi lmao
2017-05-11 17:18 celerih: I genuinely hate the song
2017-05-11 17:18 Ascendance: no
2017-05-11 17:18 Ascendance: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1288131 R3 Music Box - Imagination [Salad]]
2017-05-11 17:18 celerih: GOD DAMNIT
2017-05-11 17:19 Ascendance: u dont have 2 tho
2017-05-11 17:19 Ascendance: i got som1 else to
2017-05-11 17:19 Ascendance: but if u want kd then yea
2017-05-11 17:19 Ascendance: if u want tio be useful you can find me combo colors
2017-05-11 17:19 Ascendance: desu
2017-05-11 17:19 celerih: I can od imagination
2017-05-11 17:19 celerih: mod
2017-05-11 17:20 celerih: 00:08:822 (2) - why did you map this, it's so faint and you follow the main sounds only usually
2017-05-11 17:20 celerih: it just feels out of place here
2017-05-11 17:21 Ascendance: consistency purposes
2017-05-11 17:21 Ascendance: i actually just added it cuz AZ told me it was inconsistent
2017-05-11 17:21 Ascendance: lol
2017-05-11 17:21 celerih: wait really
2017-05-11 17:21 celerih: consistency with what?
2017-05-11 17:22 Ascendance: idk
2017-05-11 17:22 Ascendance: OH WAIT
2017-05-11 17:22 celerih: I mean yea later on you follow the more fain sounds
2017-05-11 17:22 Ascendance: nah it used to be a 1/2 slider
2017-05-11 17:22 Ascendance: and he said that 00:09:114 - was overmap
2017-05-11 17:22 Ascendance: so i reduced it to a single circle
2017-05-11 17:22 celerih: but for the intro you only followed the main sounds
2017-05-11 17:23 celerih: 00:32:415 (4) - Works better as a straight sliders
2017-05-11 17:23 Ascendance: i reduced the curve but i think the curve is k
2017-05-11 17:24 Ascendance: considering it used to be fully vertical before they told me to change
2017-05-11 17:24 celerih: that's pretty much it for the salad
2017-05-11 17:24 Ascendance: naisu.
2017-05-11 17:25 celerih: do you want me to check the other diffs?
2017-05-11 17:25 Ascendance: if u want
2017-05-11 17:25 celerih: nah, I need to go eat food before I leave for my class
2017-05-11 17:25 celerih: btw get a less lazy diff name
2017-05-11 17:25 celerih: for top diff
2017-05-11 17:25 Ascendance: lol
2017-05-11 17:26 celerih: alright then
2017-05-11 17:26 celerih: bye
2017-05-11 17:26 celerih: I was glad to be sp booster
2017-05-11 17:26 Ascendance: thanks desu
2017-05-11 17:26 Ascendance: cya
2017-05-11 17:26 celerih: now just upload my diff
2017-05-11 17:26 Ascendance: ya
2017-05-11 17:26 Ascendance: soon
posted
Salad needs some polishing still.
so here I am

Salad

00:00:958 - and 00:03:288 - both sticks to left side, you could try to make patterns a bit more various

00:23:385 (3,4,5) - inconsistent with other triplets, just put repetitive slider like on rest triplets for that sound

00:30:376 - note between would be nice (x:224)

00:39:405 - don't like this gap, also you might want try this pattering - http://puu.sh/vN4er/6749a6cf9e.jpg

Welp, the salad is fine :<
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BoberOfDarkness wrote:

Salad needs some polishing still.
so here I am

Salad

00:00:958 - and 00:03:288 - both sticks to left side, you could try to make patterns a bit more various Sure sure~

00:23:385 (3,4,5) - inconsistent with other triplets, just put repetitive slider like on rest triplets for that sound I think circles are fine here plus repeat sliders can't make the shape I wanted rip

00:30:376 - note between would be nice (x:224) Variance with top diff

00:39:405 - don't like this gap, also you might want try this pattering - http://puu.sh/vN4er/6749a6cf9e.jpg Kept the patterning but changed a little something so it's a bit neater.

Welp, the salad is fine :<
Thanks!
posted
recheck no kds

[Cup]
00:26:008 (2) - I think this vertical slider breaks flow--and plays kinda strangely in this case. Tilt it in one direction and move it somewhere around x=176 or so.

[Salad]
00:33:580 (5,1) - Lower distancing--because the next combo is a walk, this may be walked as well, leading to a miss.

[Imagination]
ok
posted

Absolute Zero wrote:

recheck no kds

[Cup]
00:26:008 (2) - I think this vertical slider breaks flow--and plays kinda strangely in this case. Tilt it in one direction and move it somewhere around x=176 or so. I made it horizontal and made it play like another repeat slider instead.

[Salad]
00:33:580 (5,1) - Lower distancing--because the next combo is a walk, this may be walked as well, leading to a miss. Yep, decreased slightly

[Imagination]
ok
Thanks!
posted
Had some troublesome mac issues there.

Bubbled!
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Thanks a lot!
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Removed the kiai flashes, looks good to me now

Qualified~
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icon virginity ooooooooooooooooo

Thanks so much!
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Time to snipe
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01:08:371 - In rain. Move this 15 grids to the right. It seems more proper
posted

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

01:08:371 - In rain. Move this 15 grids to the right. It seems more proper
Thank you. I'll contact a QAT to DQ this right away!
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grats
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only if there was an STD version
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