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BloowXv2
Hi janko! :)

In fact, your map feels very well done, but here leave a tiny mod.


columns: |1|2|3|4|


This section is not bad, but it is a bit uncomfortable 00:57:881 (57881|3,57924|2,57967|1,58011|0,58011|3,58011|2) -
If you think you could try this, 00:57:795 (57795|1,57838|0,57967|1,58011|0) - Ctrl+G and delete this 00:58:011 (58011|2) - and move 00:58:183 (58183|1,58355|2) - one column to the right
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01:16:976 (76976|2) - try move this to col 1
01:17:321 (77321|2) - same ^
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00:07:666 (7666|3,7752|2,7838|1) - you can use Ctrl+G here, feel more like
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try whit Ctrl+G here 00:08:786 (8786|2,8830|3) -
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check the sound on this parts 00:09:735 (9735|3,9735|2,9821|1,9821|0) -
feel more like of this form 00:09:821 (9821|0,9821|1,9907|3,9907|2,9993|0,9993|1,10080|0,10080|3,10080|2,10209|1,10252|2) - Ctrl+H and test
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I think it's missing notes here 00:11:157 -
for example, down one line this note 00:11:200 (11200|1) - and add other note here 00:11:200 - col 1
and move this 00:11:286 (11286|0) - to col 2 or delete note
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you can add note here 01:07:493 - col 4
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you can transform this notes 01:17:666 (77666|0,77838|3) - to LNs in 1/4
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01:19:045 (79045|2) - move to col 1
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you can move this 01:19:907 (79907|3) - to col 2 and this 01:20:252 (80252|1) - to col 2 same
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01:30:338 - you can add another note here in column 2
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try move this 01:39:390 (99390|0) - to this point 01:39:476 -
after press Ctrl+G on this notes 01:39:562 (99562|2,99605|3,99735|2,99778|3) -
01:39:993 (99993|1,100036|0) - same here
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Seeing this 02:29:045 - then why not put triples here? 02:29:217 - 02:29:390 -

03:01:286 (181286|2,181286|3,181459|3,181459|2,181631|2,181631|3,181804|2,181804|3,181976|2,181976|3) - the same ^
you can convert this doubles on triples due the sound.

pd: i liked the mapping.

Good luck! :D
Topic Starter
Janko

BloowXv2 wrote:

Hi janko! :)

In fact, your map feels very well done, but here leave a tiny mod.


columns: |1|2|3|4|


This section is not bad, but it is a bit uncomfortable 00:57:881 (57881|3,57924|2,57967|1,58011|0,58011|3,58011|2) -
If you think you could try this, 00:57:795 (57795|1,57838|0,57967|1,58011|0) - Ctrl+G and delete this 00:58:011 (58011|2) - and move 00:58:183 (58183|1,58355|2) - one column to the right Hmm... Nice idea.
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01:16:976 (76976|2) - try move this to col 1 I could but this note looks better in column 3
01:17:321 (77321|2) - same ^ And samee
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00:07:666 (7666|3,7752|2,7838|1) - you can use Ctrl+G here, feel more like I changed triple before this part specially for this xD Ofc accepted.
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try whit Ctrl+G here 00:08:786 (8786|2,8830|3) - Nope. He wants to keep here continuity
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check the sound on this parts 00:09:735 (9735|3,9735|2,9821|1,9821|0) -
feel more like of this form 00:09:821 (9821|0,9821|1,9907|3,9907|2,9993|0,9993|1,10080|0,10080|3,10080|2,10209|1,10252|2) - Ctrl+H and test Something doesn't fit here. Leave it as it is
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I think it's missing notes here 00:11:157 -
for example, down one line this note 00:11:200 (11200|1) - and add other note here 00:11:200 - col 1
and move this 00:11:286 (11286|0) - to col 2 or delete note I'm not sure. I'll think about that
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you can add note here 01:07:493 - col 4 I can
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you can transform this notes 01:17:666 (77666|0,77838|3) - to LNs in 1/4 I'll leve it
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01:19:045 (79045|2) - move to col 1 For balance I'd rather not
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you can move this 01:19:907 (79907|3) - to col 2 and this 01:20:252 (80252|1) - to col 2 same I modified your idea
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01:30:338 - you can add another note here in column 2 Theoretically fits because you hear sound but... for flow(?) I prefer leave it
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try move this 01:39:390 (99390|0) - to this point 01:39:476 - Nope
after press Ctrl+G on this notes 01:39:562 (99562|2,99605|3,99735|2,99778|3) - Ok but only last two notes
01:39:993 (99993|1,100036|0) - same here Nope
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Seeing this 02:29:045 - then why not put triples here? 02:29:217 - 02:29:390 - Ok added

03:01:286 (181286|2,181286|3,181459|3,181459|2,181631|2,181631|3,181804|2,181804|3,181976|2,181976|3) - the same ^
you can convert this doubles on triples due the sound.Nope because this part will be too hard and because here 03:01:114 - is additional sound in the song

pd: i liked the mapping.

Good luck! :D
Thanks for mod! It was helpful
Hydria


1/2/3/4


General:
03:51:804 - time the ending part correctly, there's BPM changes there, currently unrankable (have fun timing that though because it fluctuates xd)

00:10:338 (10338|0) - note but no sound
if that's addressed move 00:10:424 (10424|2) - to 1 so then it matches the above 3 note chord since they're the same sounds

00:10:855 (10855|3) - I can hear this sound slightly clearer but again it's still very quiet, debatable if you wanna remove that one

00:12:321 (12321|2,12321|0,12407|3,12407|1,12493|0,12493|2,12493|3) - why not have this as a one handed jack into a hand like this:


00:13:614 (13614|2) - 00:14:131 (14131|0) - note but no sound

00:14:045 (14045|3,14217|3,14390|3,14562|3,14735|3,14907|3,15080|3,15252|3,15424|3,15597|3,15769|3) - tfw anchor

00:28:873 (28873|2) - not even a 1/6 vocal roll here smh (don't actually do this tho)

00:44:735 (44735|2,44907|2,45080|2,45252|2,45424|2) - more anchors

00:48:614 (48614|0,48700|0) - unnecessary minijack?

00:48:873 (48873|2,48873|0,48959|1,49045|0,49045|2,49131|1,49217|2,49217|0,49304|1,49390|0,49390|2,49476|1,49562|0,49562|2,49648|1,49735|2,49735|0) - go with [12]3 instead, that looks amazingly uncomfortable to hit atm with the LN

01:13:528 (73528|3,73614|3,74476|3,74562|3) - wow two minijacks on the same column ouch

01:17:666 (77666|3,77838|3,78011|3,78183|3,78355|3,78528|3,78700|3) - more anchors

01:37:148 (97148|2,97192|1,97235|0,97278|3,97321|1,97321|2,97407|3,97407|0,97493|2,97493|1,97580|3,97580|0,97666|1,97752|3,97752|2,97838|1,97838|0,97924|3,97924|2,98011|3,98011|1,98011|0,98097|1,98097|2,98183|3,98183|0,98269|2,98269|1,98355|2,98355|3,98355|0,98442|0,98442|1,98528|3,98528|2,98614|1,98614|0,98700|1,98700|3,98700|2,98786|2,98786|0,98873|3,98873|1,98959|2,98959|0,99045|3,99045|2,99045|1,99131|0,99131|1,99217|3,99217|2,99304|0,99304|1,99390|2,99390|0,99390|3) - oh god all the jacks in this section wew

01:41:717 (101717|2) - is that note necessary

01:43:011 (103011|0,103011|3,103097|1) - isn't that a 1/8 sound?

01:53:269 (113269|2) - note but no sound

01:54:562 (114562|2,114562|0,114648|0,114648|3,114648|1,114735|2,114735|3,114735|1,114821|2,114821|0,114907|3,114907|1,114907|0) - think that might be overdoing it with density there, same 02:11:459 (131459|0,131459|2,131459|1,131545|2,131545|3,131545|0,131631|1,131631|2,131631|3,131717|1,131717|3,131717|0) - it's just a lot of notes to hit in such a small amount of time compared to the density around these notes

02:34:476 (154476|2) - note but no sound

02:45:855 (165855|0,166028|0,166157|0,166330|0,166502|0,166631|0,166804|0,166976|0,167148|0,167321|0,167493|0) - anchor city

03:19:735 - why no LNs here for vocals?

03:35:597 (215597|3,215597|0,215597|2,215654|1,215712|2,215769|3,215769|0) - 1/6 here but no 1/6 at 03:36:286 (216286|0,216286|1,216286|3,216459|2) - or here 03:36:804 (216804|2,216804|3,216976|1,216976|0) - etc???

03:43:700 - 1/8 sounds start here
00:10:252 (10252|1,10769|3,11114|2) - would recommend having these as 1/4 LNs to suit the sound they represent

00:11:459 (11459|3) - move to 3 to avoid 00:11:459 (11459|3,11545|3) -

00:12:580 (12580|1,12666|3) - because of how insignificant the sound is here, I'd recommend making it 4|1 or 4|3 as to relive pressure off the second column

00:24:217 (24217|1,24390|1,24519|1,24648|1) - that's nasty

00:44:821 - 00:45:080 - 00:45:338 - could afford to add an extra note here

00:47:666 (47666|3,47666|2,47838|1,47838|0,48011|2,48011|3,48183|1,48183|0,48355|3,48355|2) - maybe spice up this patterning a bit?

00:52:666 (52666|2) - shouldn't this be a double?

01:00:252 (60252|0) - in fact this entire section feels like it's missing a load of doubles, you might want to go through it again

01:07:235 (67235|2,67278|3,67321|2,67407|3,67493|2,67580|3) - that's nasty part 2

01:08:700 (68700|2,68743|0,68786|2,68830|0) - gl getting that past bns/qats

01:55:769 (115769|2) - fancy but I can't see the reason for this LN

02:11:229 (131229|3) - I'd place that on 2 because rip right hand

02:16:028 - sound but no note?

02:17:493 (137493|0,137666|0,137838|0) - mini-anchor xd (not actually an issue)

02:47:321 (167321|3,167407|1,167493|3,167580|1) - the sounds here aren't trill worthy, same 02:55:597 (175597|0,175683|2,175769|0,175855|2) -

02:57:493 (177493|0,177580|3) - sure about 2 notes here?

03:10:424 - how to destroy a player's dreams of FCing 101

03:51:804 - hopefully janko fixes the bpm timing for the ending here, you just might want to make sure all your notes are in the right place after he's done that
Alsty-
supp , as requested...
i bring some hitsounds sample , that i think will fit with the song
https://puu.sh/vvSye/cb6717115c.rar
you can choose it , because im lazy to do it...
if you need specific hitsounds, poke me again in-game , i will give confirmation am i be able to find specific hitsounds that you want to..

good luck
Wonki
hello
Double breakcore in tag
00:01:631 - add 1 more note. as you did 00:03:700 (3700|0,3700|3) -

00:08:442 (8442|1) - Ghost note. pls delete

00:48:873 (48873|2,48873|0,48959|1,49045|0,49045|2,49131|1,49217|2,49217|0,49304|1,49390|0,49390|2,49476|1,49562|0,49562|2,49648|1,49735|2,49735|0) - recommend to change [12] [3]

00:58:011 - make 3notes because of symbol sound.

01:06:373 (66373|0,66416|1) - Ghost notes. delete

01:38:011 (98011|3,98355|0,98700|1) - I don't recommend these notes

01:39:045 (99045|2) - same

01:54:648 (114648|0,114648|3,114648|1) - what for 3notes? 2notes pls

02:11:459 (131459|1,131459|2,131459|0,131545|2,131545|0,131545|3,131631|3,131631|1,131631|2,131717|0,131717|1,131717|3) - I don't recommned this p pattern. change 3notes - 2notes - 3notes -2note

03:10:467 (190467|2,190511|3,190554|0) - Ghost too I guess

03:51:804 - add col 3 for drum sound
Topic Starter
Janko

Hydria wrote:



1/2/3/4


General:
03:51:804 - time the ending part correctly, there's BPM changes there, currently unrankable (have fun timing that though because it fluctuates xd) Wooot Holy shit ;-; I'll see what I can do. I'll fix it somehow... WAAAAIT What? Why? After all, the sounds are well matched... irregularly but still good. I will ask a few more people about it

00:10:338 (10338|0) - note but no sound
if that's addressed move 00:10:424 (10424|2) - to 1 so then it matches the above 3 note chord since they're the same sounds I hear sound but... you have good idea so I remove this note and I'll do what you have advised

00:10:855 (10855|3) - I can hear this sound slightly clearer but again it's still very quiet, debatable if you wanna remove that one Ok

00:12:321 (12321|2,12321|0,12407|3,12407|1,12493|0,12493|2,12493|3) - why not have this as a one handed jack into a hand like this: Hmm... I'm not sure this pattern but ok. Changed


00:13:614 (13614|2) - 00:14:131 (14131|0) - note but no sound I hear sound and I think that this notes are fit

00:14:045 (14045|3,14217|3,14390|3,14562|3,14735|3,14907|3,15080|3,15252|3,15424|3,15597|3,15769|3) - tfw anchor fuck xd I didn't notice it. I will try to reduce this anchor

00:28:873 (28873|2) - not even a 1/6 vocal roll here smh (don't actually do this tho)

00:44:735 (44735|2,44907|2,45080|2,45252|2,45424|2) - more anchors I didn't remove the anchor but now it's hmm ... more justified

00:48:614 (48614|0,48700|0) - unnecessary minijack? ok fixed

00:48:873 (48873|2,48873|0,48959|1,49045|0,49045|2,49131|1,49217|2,49217|0,49304|1,49390|0,49390|2,49476|1,49562|0,49562|2,49648|1,49735|2,49735|0) - go with [12]3 instead, that looks amazingly uncomfortable to hit atm with the LN Changed

01:13:528 (73528|3,73614|3,74476|3,74562|3) - wow two minijacks on the same column ouch Yep I know. I think on this scale it does not make a big problem (although at first it hurt me xd)

01:17:666 (77666|3,77838|3,78011|3,78183|3,78355|3,78528|3,78700|3) - more anchors I reduced it

01:37:148 (97148|2,97192|1,97235|0,97278|3,97321|1,97321|2,97407|3,97407|0,97493|2,97493|1,97580|3,97580|0,97666|1,97752|3,97752|2,97838|1,97838|0,97924|3,97924|2,98011|3,98011|1,98011|0,98097|1,98097|2,98183|3,98183|0,98269|2,98269|1,98355|2,98355|3,98355|0,98442|0,98442|1,98528|3,98528|2,98614|1,98614|0,98700|1,98700|3,98700|2,98786|2,98786|0,98873|3,98873|1,98959|2,98959|0,99045|3,99045|2,99045|1,99131|0,99131|1,99217|3,99217|2,99304|0,99304|1,99390|2,99390|0,99390|3) - oh god all the jacks in this section wew I simplified it. Rip 5* :/

01:41:717 (101717|2) - is that note necessary Probably you're right


01:43:011 (103011|0,103011|3,103097|1) - isn't that a 1/8 sound? I don't think so :thinking:

01:53:269 (113269|2) - note but no sound I hear sound

01:54:562 (114562|2,114562|0,114648|0,114648|3,114648|1,114735|2,114735|3,114735|1,114821|2,114821|0,114907|3,114907|1,114907|0) - think that might be overdoing it with density there, same 02:11:459 (131459|0,131459|2,131459|1,131545|2,131545|3,131545|0,131631|1,131631|2,131631|3,131717|1,131717|3,131717|0) - it's just a lot of notes to hit in such a small amount of time compared to the density around these notes I changed a little but not necessarily simplifying

02:34:476 (154476|2) - note but no sound Yep

02:45:855 (165855|0,166028|0,166157|0,166330|0,166502|0,166631|0,166804|0,166976|0,167148|0,167321|0,167493|0) - anchor city Anchor city omg xddd I reduced a little

03:19:735 - why no LNs here for vocals? I did LNs for sing... In this part is scream mainly

03:35:597 (215597|3,215597|0,215597|2,215654|1,215712|2,215769|3,215769|0) - 1/6 here but no 1/6 at 03:36:286 (216286|0,216286|1,216286|3,216459|2) - or here 03:36:804 (216804|2,216804|3,216976|1,216976|0) - etc??? but... in your examples isn't additional sounds under which could put a notes

03:43:700 - 1/8 sounds start here hmm but in 1/4 sounds are stronger and I think that this is a good transition from 1/4 to 1/8
Thanks!
Topic Starter
Janko

Wonki wrote:

hello
Double breakcore in tag o.O Fixed!
00:01:631 - add 1 more note. as you did 00:03:700 (3700|0,3700|3) - OK

00:08:442 (8442|1) - Ghost note. pls delete OK

00:48:873 (48873|2,48873|0,48959|1,49045|0,49045|2,49131|1,49217|2,49217|0,49304|1,49390|0,49390|2,49476|1,49562|0,49562|2,49648|1,49735|2,49735|0) - recommend to change [12] [3] changed (Hydria was first ;p)

00:58:011 - make 3notes because of symbol sound. You're right but It would be uncomfortable

01:06:373 (66373|0,66416|1) - Ghost notes. delete Nope. In this moment starts 1/8

01:38:011 (98011|3,98355|0,98700|1) - I don't recommend these notes Changed in earlier mod

01:39:045 (99045|2) - same Changed in earlier mod

01:54:648 (114648|0,114648|3,114648|1) - what for 3notes? 2notes pls Oki

02:11:459 (131459|1,131459|2,131459|0,131545|2,131545|0,131545|3,131631|3,131631|1,131631|2,131717|0,131717|1,131717|3) - I don't recommned this p pattern. change 3notes - 2notes - 3notes -2note I modified this a little

03:10:467 (190467|2,190511|3,190554|0) - Ghost too I guess Fixed

03:51:804 - add col 3 for drum sound
Thanks!
Topic Starter
Janko

Alsty- wrote:

supp , as requested...
i bring some hitsounds sample , that i think will fit with the song
https://puu.sh/vvSye/cb6717115c.rar
you can choose it , because im lazy to do it...
if you need specific hitsounds, poke me again in-game , i will give confirmation am i be able to find specific hitsounds that you want to..

good luck
I will definitely use it. Thanks
Another Lie

Hydria wrote:



1/2/3/4


General:
03:51:804 - time the ending part correctly, there's BPM changes there, currently unrankable (have fun timing that though because it fluctuates xd)
I let janko handle the timing on my diff later :D

00:10:252 (10252|1,10769|3,11114|2) - would recommend having these as 1/4 LNs to suit the sound they represent Re-arranged

00:11:459 (11459|3) - move to 3 to avoid 00:11:459 (11459|3,11545|3) - Ok

00:12:580 (12580|1,12666|3) - because of how insignificant the sound is here, I'd recommend making it 4|1 or 4|3 as to relive pressure off the second column Nah, re-arranged with better notes

00:24:217 (24217|1,24390|1,24519|1,24648|1) - that's nasty Moved some

00:44:821 - 00:45:080 - 00:45:338 - could afford to add an extra note here Done

00:47:666 (47666|3,47666|2,47838|1,47838|0,48011|2,48011|3,48183|1,48183|0,48355|3,48355|2) - maybe spice up this patterning a bit? Moved 2 notes as jack

00:52:666 (52666|2) - shouldn't this be a double? Done

01:00:252 (60252|0) - in fact this entire section feels like it's missing a load of doubles, you might want to go through it again I already re-check, and lack of doubles :D sorry for that :D [tbh i was in hurry]

01:07:235 (67235|2,67278|3,67321|2,67407|3,67493|2,67580|3) - that's nasty part 2 Moved some

01:08:700 (68700|2,68743|0,68786|2,68830|0) - gl getting that past bns/qats Sorry, how clumsy i am :D

01:55:769 (115769|2) - fancy but I can't see the reason for this LN i don't remember putting LN on that place -_- but fixed

02:11:229 (131229|3) - I'd place that on 2 because rip right hand Aye aye captain

02:16:028 - sound but no note? :/ i missed so many notes

02:17:493 (137493|0,137666|0,137838|0) - mini-anchor xd (not actually an issue) i actually used 02:16:976 (136976|3,137148|1,137321|3,137493|1) - for basic pattern, then reversed to 1 3 1 3 for 02:17:838 (137838|0,138011|2,138183|0,138355|2) -

02:47:321 (167321|3,167407|1,167493|3,167580|1) - the sounds here aren't trill worthy, Deleted 2 notes same 02:55:597 (175597|0,175683|2,175769|0,175855|2) - same

02:57:493 (177493|0,177580|3) - sure about 2 notes here? Moved some

03:10:424 - how to destroy a player's dreams of FCing 101 Deleted some, but i'll make Monosugoi dump pattern for it :D

03:51:804 - hopefully janko fixes the bpm timing for the ending here, you just might want to make sure all your notes are in the right place after he's done that hahahaha :lol:
Pretty cool mods Hydria. Love you <3
Topic Starter
Janko
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OWJI"S Normal

00:24:045 - maybe 1 more notes here since its snare sound
00:27:148 - 1 more note to here since 00:22:838 - you make it 2
00:28:528 - 1 more note too here for snare sound
00:34:735 - ^
00:45:080 - ^
00:45:424 (45424|1) - delete
01:05:424 - til 01:06:114 - can be 2 notes since snare sound way too dominant
01:11:976 - 1 more notes here
01:44:045 (104045|3) - move it to 1 better i think
01:56:804 - 1 note here
01:57:493 - ^
01:59:390 (119390|2) - delete 1
01:59:562 - make it 2 here instead


Hard

00:16:631 - i think better the 3 button note here instead of 00:16:459 -
00:51:459 - i think this part onward can be a bit jacky if you follow the gitar sound like move 00:51:631 (51631|2) - to 2 and so on til 01:05:252 - since next part is stairy parts
01:39:390 (99390|2) - maybe delete it since i dunno what it represent even if it represent vocal voice its still need to be longer
01:48:011 (108011|3) - change the ln to normal or make it into 3 notes instead
02:54:045 - this part it think you change become stairy like part 02:50:080 - or chang that part insted with ln to represent that spammy sound
03:09:390 (189390|2,189390|3,189476|0,189562|3,189648|1,189735|3,189821|0,189907|3,189993|1,190080|3,190166|0) - way to hard on right side, balance it a bit might be good
03:50:942 (230942|3,231114|3,231286|3,231459|3,231631|3,231804|3) - way too heavy in the right again
and for the last part using ln probably better from 03:51:804 (231804|3) -

Good luck :D
Jesuren
Janko is too satanic ;w; (janko, if you catch me online and give me a kiss 7u7, i'll mod your satanic creation, See you~)


Jesus and his lolis Destroying the faking 3D world


2D is love 2D is life xdddddddddddd
AnatOWJIya

L A U R A wrote:

hey hey~~

OWJI"S Normal

00:24:045 - maybe 1 more notes here since its snare sound Accepted
00:27:148 - 1 more note to here since 00:22:838 - you make it 2 Accepted
00:28:528 - 1 more note too here for snare sound Accepted
00:34:735 - ^ Accepted
00:45:080 - ^ Accepted
00:45:424 (45424|1) - delete v
01:05:424 - til 01:06:114 - can be 2 notes since snare sound way too dominant Accepted
01:11:976 - 1 more notes here Accepted
01:44:045 (104045|3) - move it to 1 better i think Accepted
01:56:804 - 1 note here Accepted
01:57:493 - ^ Accepted
01:59:390 (119390|2) - delete 1 Accepted
01:59:562 - make it 2 here instead Accepted


Good luck :D
Thanks for mod ;3
@Janko Diff
Litharrale
NM from my queue
1|2|3|4
audio and bg look good
toggle off widescreen support

What's the point of custom hitsounds in the file if you're not gonna use them?
00:00:080 (80|1,1114|3,2148|2,3183|2,4217|2,5252|2,6286|2) - The starts of each measure at the start are a lot stronger than the other doubles, maybe turn them into triples to emphasise this a bit more?
Why are 00:14:562 (14562|1,14562|3,14562|0,14735|3,14735|2,14735|0) - these two a triple but this 00:15:597 (15597|3,15597|2,15597|1,15769|0,15769|3) - is a triple then a double
00:43:183 (43183|0,43183|2,43528|2,43700|0) - I get why you've done it in this whole section but it feels really off to have some bass notes be doubles and others be singles. If you trust the player to be able to do LN+stream, then surely they can also do LN+double
00:45:597 (45597|3) - end this LN at 00:49:735 - it's the start of kiai and it chokes up the section. Either start a new LN in a different column for the same "ohhhhhhhhh" or stop it there altogether.
01:09:993 - This is the strongest sound out of the whole stream and you didnt map it?

The magic of this song is that it's a 58bpm song clashed with a 178bpm song and I really feel you've failed to take advantage of that which is a shame. Focus on the downbeats more

I took a glance at your top diff and it's the same. It seems like you've mapped this song for this quick bursts and ignored the other part of it. It's not as bad as I'm making it seem though, still a really solid chart. Good luck!
DustMoon
hi~
1|2|3|4|
00:06:286 (6286|0) - soft sound ,i think 1 note maybe enough
00:24:907 (24907|3) - move to 3,and 00:33:183 (33183|2) - move to 4
00:45:252 (45252|2) - change to single note
00:49:735 (49735|0,50080|2,50424|0,50769|1,51114|0,51459|1,51804|0) - plz not use like runningman mapping,its too hard
01:59:735 (119735|0) - move to 3
02:03:873 (123873|3) - should end this time piont02:04:045 -
02:11:804 (131804|3,132148|1,132493|0) - delete
03:41:114 (221114|2,221459|1,221631|0,221804|2,221976|3,222148|1,222321|0,222493|3,222493|2) - change
03:59:347 (239347|0,239519|1) - WTF?changehttps://puu.sh/vFk8J/470e71df47.jpg
03:59:821 (239821|3) - checkhttps://puu.sh/vFkd8/54c5067c16.jpgnot alignment
03:51:804 - 04:16:631 - BPM was changed
Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Janko

L A U R A wrote:

hey hey~~

Hard

00:16:631 - i think better the 3 button note here instead of 00:16:459 -
00:51:459 - i think this part onward can be a bit jacky if you follow the gitar sound like move 00:51:631 (51631|2) - to 2 and so on til 01:05:252 - since next part is stairy parts
01:39:390 (99390|2) - maybe delete it since i dunno what it represent even if it represent vocal voice its still need to be longer
01:48:011 (108011|3) - change the ln to normal or make it into 3 notes instead
02:54:045 - this part it think you change become stairy like part 02:50:080 - or chang that part insted with ln to represent that spammy sound
03:09:390 (189390|2,189390|3,189476|0,189562|3,189648|1,189735|3,189821|0,189907|3,189993|1,190080|3,190166|0) - way to hard on right side, balance it a bit might be good OK
03:50:942 (230942|3,231114|3,231286|3,231459|3,231631|3,231804|3) - way too heavy in the right again OK
and for the last part using ln probably better from 03:51:804 (231804|3) -

Good luck :D
Thanks ^^ btw I didn't forget about your map


Litharrale wrote:

NM from my queue
1|2|3|4
audio and bg look good
toggle off widescreen support Whoops fixed

What's the point of custom hitsounds in the file if you're not gonna use them? you can see in description that status hitsounds are work in progress
00:00:080 (80|1,1114|3,2148|2,3183|2,4217|2,5252|2,6286|2) - The starts of each measure at the start are a lot stronger than the other doubles, maybe turn them into triples to emphasise this a bit more? I don't want to do harder map
Why are 00:14:562 (14562|1,14562|3,14562|0,14735|3,14735|2,14735|0) - these two a triple but this 00:15:597 (15597|3,15597|2,15597|1,15769|0,15769|3) - is a triple then a double I modified it a bit
00:43:183 (43183|0,43183|2,43528|2,43700|0) - I get why you've done it in this whole section but it feels really off to have some bass notes be doubles and others be singles. If you trust the player to be able to do LN+stream, then surely they can also do LN+double Hmm I added one additional note
00:45:597 (45597|3) - end this LN at 00:49:735 - it's the start of kiai and it chokes up the section. Either start a new LN in a different column for the same "ohhhhhhhhh" or stop it there altogether. I'm not sure. This LN fit me. I'll think it over yet
01:09:993 - This is the strongest sound out of the whole stream and you didnt map it? I modified this part

The magic of this song is that it's a 58bpm song clashed with a 178bpm song and I really feel you've failed to take advantage of that which is a shame. Focus on the downbeats more

I took a glance at your top diff and it's the same. It seems like you've mapped this song for this quick bursts and ignored the other part of it. It's not as bad as I'm making it seem though, still a really solid chart. Good luck!
Thanks

DustMoon wrote:

hi~
1|2|3|4|
00:06:286 (6286|0) - soft sound ,i think 1 note maybe enough ok
00:24:907 (24907|3) - move to 3,and 00:33:183 (33183|2) - move to 4 ok
00:45:252 (45252|2) - change to single note ok
00:49:735 (49735|0,50080|2,50424|0,50769|1,51114|0,51459|1,51804|0) - plz not use like runningman mapping,its too hard I don't think so
01:59:735 (119735|0) - move to 3 ok
02:03:873 (123873|3) - should end this time piont02:04:045 -
02:11:804 (131804|3,132148|1,132493|0) - delete lol why
03:41:114 (221114|2,221459|1,221631|0,221804|2,221976|3,222148|1,222321|0,222493|3,222493|2) - change Too hard? I have no idea how to change this
03:59:347 (239347|0,239519|1) - WTF?changehttps://puu.sh/vFk8J/470e71df47.jpg I modified this pattern
03:59:821 (239821|3) - checkhttps://puu.sh/vFkd8/54c5067c16.jpgnot alignment
03:51:804 - 04:16:631 - BPM was changed

Thanks
Good luck! :)
Curiossity
Igorrr - Pavor Nocturnus MOD

From Curiossity's Mania Marathon M4M Modding Queue

Columns: 1|2|3|4

Sorry it's late ;w;

00:08:528 (8528|1,8614|2) - Should this be 1/8th notes as well?

00:34:735 (34735|2) - Should be 3 notes

00:38:873 (38873|3) - ^ or at least 2

00:47:148 (47148|0,47148|2) - Yeah, make the notes above 2 like this one

01:01:804 (61804|2) - Why is this two notes? The only extra sound i hear is a squeak thing but that's 1/4th later imo

01:06:373 (66373|0,66416|1) - Might be ghost notes, i think the snares start on the 1/2 beat

01:09:476 (69476|2) - ghost?

01:09:907 (69907|2,69993|3) - Add some 1/8th notes for the burst here?

01:13:528 (73528|0) - Starting here, maybe have a jack part like at 03:34:217 (maybe even switch the pattern here with the pattern there)

01:16:631 (76631|3) - Perfect place for 1/8th or 1/16th spam, as well as 1/2 beat later

01:16:976 (76976|3,76976|2,77148|0,77148|1) - How are these two sound the same? Make the kick 2, and the snare 1

01:17:752 (77752|1,77838|3,77924|0,77924|2) - 1/4 =/= 1/8, remap probably.

01:18:700 (78700|3) - Not sure this should be three, not heavy enough of a sound

01:22:752 (82752|1) - ghost

01:49:735 (109735|0) - spam more

01:54:648 (114648|1,114735|1,114821|1) - ow, maybe move 01:54:821 (114821|1) - to 3 and 01:54:907 (114907|2) - to 2

01:54:993 (114993|3) - This note is 1 while the rest are 2 in this part, maybe make it 2? esp. after last suggestion, now it only jacks once anyway

02:11:631 (131631|1,131631|3,131631|0,131717|0,131717|3,131717|2) - these should probably be 2, also this pattern @.@

02:34:476 (154476|2) - ghost

02:54:907 (174907|3,174907|2) - why 2, there's a cymbal thingy here so shouldn't it be 3?

02:55:683 (175683|2,175769|0) - Not the same sound at all

03:01:114 (181114|3,181114|2,181286|3,181286|2) - Maybe give all kicks in this row a 1/4 LN, for the sound?

03:05:252 (185252|0,185338|0,186200|0,186286|0) - You start and end with jacks on 1, maybe move one of them to 2 for a bit of balance.

03:17:580 (197580|3,197666|3,197666|0,197752|0,197752|3,197838|0) - tone it down a bit probably

03:34:217 (214217|0) - I understand the idea behind this jack part, but I feel it's a bit much esp. since the song has toned down since the kiai. Might just be me.

03:51:804 (231804|3) - Might want to re time this part? Some notes feel a bit off, maybe it's a different bpm or something.

Not bad, pretty well structured imo
00:13:355 (13355|1) - Should be 2

00:14:045 (14045|3) - ^

00:18:873 (18873|2) - ^

00:23:011 (23011|3) - ^ lots of these, not listing all of them since there's probably a reason behind it? idunno

00:39:735 (39735|2,39735|1,40080|1,40080|2) - Maybe should only be 1?

00:42:148 (42148|2) - ^

00:43:011 (43011|1) - 2

00:46:286 (46286|2) - 1

00:48:700 (48700|3) - Should be a note 1/4 after this

01:11:631 (71631|2,71804|2) - Some 1/4 notes in here too

01:13:054 (73054|2) - Should probably be on red line?

01:22:838 (82838|1) - Starting here, there's a lot of variability between what sounds are in the music and what you're mapping. Try to stay consistent unless there's no other feasible way to map something. i.e. 01:24:390 (84390|2,84476|1) - These two notes are not the same in the music, and there's plenty of space to make the second note a double. Just go through it again at like 50% or 75% speed and make sure that all sounds are accounted for.

01:49:735 (109735|2,109735|0,109907|0,109907|2) - Pretty sure these end on the 1/4 mark

01:55:942 (115942|3) - Starting here, you're missing a lot of notes. 02:05:597 (125597|1) - This is the same sound as many of the sounds you aren't mapping

02:11:229 (131229|1) - ?

02:27:838 (147838|1) - Move to 4

02:29:045 (149045|0) - More 1/2 and 1/4 sliders for the longer snare sounds

03:01:114 (181114|0) - Again more sliders here

03:38:011 (218011|1,218068|3,218125|1) - why 1/6ths here

03:44:476 (224476|2,224562|2) - jacks hurt but ok

Yeah mostly worried about how you layer things and how consistent the layering is, maybe take another look and make sure it all looks good

Igorrr's the best.
Hopefully this helps, and good luck getting this ranked! :)
Another Lie

Curiossity wrote:

Igorrr - Pavor Nocturnus MOD

From Curiossity's Mania Marathon M4M Modding Queue

Columns: 1|2|3|4

Sorry it's late ;w;

00:13:355 (13355|1) - Should be 2

00:14:045 (14045|3) - ^

00:18:873 (18873|2) - ^

00:23:011 (23011|3) - ^ lots of these, not listing all of them since there's probably a reason behind it? idunno There is

00:39:735 (39735|2,39735|1,40080|1,40080|2) - Maybe should only be 1? ok

00:42:148 (42148|2) - ^ ^

00:43:011 (43011|1) - 2 ^

00:46:286 (46286|2) - 1 ^

00:48:700 (48700|3) - Should be a note 1/4 after this added

01:11:631 (71631|2,71804|2) - Some 1/4 notes in here too no, that was in purpose

01:13:054 (73054|2) - Should probably be on red line? not that red line sound, but the other one

01:22:838 (82838|1) - Starting here, there's a lot of variability between what sounds are in the music and what you're mapping. Try to stay consistent unless there's no other feasible way to map something. i.e. 01:24:390 (84390|2,84476|1) - These two notes are not the same in the music, and there's plenty of space to make the second note a double. Just go through it again at like 50% or 75% speed and make sure that all sounds are accounted for. i know what you're intending at, but i'm doing that on purpose. Focus using single note to create pure mini trill or jack things.

01:49:735 (109735|2,109735|0,109907|0,109907|2) - Pretty sure these end on the 1/4 mark hear it with 25% please, and look at 1/8 above

01:55:942 (115942|3) - Starting here, you're missing a lot of notes. 02:05:597 (125597|1) - This is the same sound as many of the sounds you aren't mapping Hahaha you're trapped. I did it intentionally on purpose. To variate from Parasomnia diff and then Parasomnia have more notes in that part :P:P

02:11:229 (131229|1) - ? ? sound there

02:27:838 (147838|1) - Move to 4 basically, that was 02:27:838 (147838|1,147924|3,148011|1) -

02:29:045 (149045|0) - More 1/2 and 1/4 sliders for the longer snare sounds more sliders = more harder

03:01:114 (181114|0) - Again more sliders here ^

03:38:011 (218011|1,218068|3,218125|1) - why 1/6ths here o_o i didn't remember putting that there. deleted

03:44:476 (224476|2,224562|2) - jacks hurt but ok ignore jacks there hahaha :D

Yeah mostly worried about how you layer things and how consistent the layering is, maybe take another look and make sure it all looks good

Igorrr's the best.
Hopefully this helps, and good luck getting this ranked! :)
Cool
Topic Starter
Janko

Curiossity wrote:

Igorrr - Pavor Nocturnus MOD

From Curiossity's Mania Marathon M4M Modding Queue

Columns: 1|2|3|4

Sorry it's late ;w;

00:08:528 (8528|1,8614|2) - Should this be 1/8th notes as well? Fixed

00:34:735 (34735|2) - Should be 3 notes I added one note

00:38:873 (38873|3) - ^ or at least 2 Ok

00:47:148 (47148|0,47148|2) - Yeah, make the notes above 2 like this one

01:01:804 (61804|2) - Why is this two notes? The only extra sound i hear is a squeak thing but that's 1/4th later imo Fixed

01:06:373 (66373|0,66416|1) - Might be ghost notes, i think the snares start on the 1/2 beat Nope 1/8 I think

01:09:476 (69476|2) - ghost? Hmm probably. Removed

01:09:907 (69907|2,69993|3) - Add some 1/8th notes for the burst here? Nope

01:13:528 (73528|0) - Starting here, maybe have a jack part like at 03:34:217 (maybe even switch the pattern here with the pattern there) Nope

01:16:631 (76631|3) - Perfect place for 1/8th or 1/16th spam, as well as 1/2 beat later Hmmm I changed something

01:16:976 (76976|3,76976|2,77148|0,77148|1) - How are these two sound the same? Make the kick 2, and the snare 1 Nope

01:17:752 (77752|1,77838|3,77924|0,77924|2) - 1/4 =/= 1/8, remap probably.I removed one note

01:18:700 (78700|3) - Not sure this should be three, not heavy enough of a sound I'm sure

01:22:752 (82752|1) - ghost Removed

01:49:735 (109735|0) - spam more Wut?

01:54:648 (114648|1,114735|1,114821|1) - ow, maybe move 01:54:821 (114821|1) - to 3 and 01:54:907 (114907|2) - to 2 Sure

01:54:993 (114993|3) - This note is 1 while the rest are 2 in this part, maybe make it 2? esp. after last suggestion, now it only jacks once anyway

02:11:631 (131631|1,131631|3,131631|0,131717|0,131717|3,131717|2) - these should probably be 2, also this pattern @.@ I moved this note to column 3

02:34:476 (154476|2) - ghost ok

02:54:907 (174907|3,174907|2) - why 2, there's a cymbal thingy here so shouldn't it be 3? Yep but for comfortable play I removed one

02:55:683 (175683|2,175769|0) - Not the same sound at all

03:01:114 (181114|3,181114|2,181286|3,181286|2) - Maybe give all kicks in this row a 1/4 LN, for the sound? Nope

03:05:252 (185252|0,185338|0,186200|0,186286|0) - You start and end with jacks on 1, maybe move one of them to 2 for a bit of balance. Left hand is left hand. It doesn't matter

03:17:580 (197580|3,197666|3,197666|0,197752|0,197752|3,197838|0) - tone it down a bit probably I leave it

03:34:217 (214217|0) - I understand the idea behind this jack part, but I feel it's a bit much esp. since the song has toned down since the kiai. Might just be me. Hmm... ^
03:51:804 (231804|3) - Might want to re time this part? Some notes feel a bit off, maybe it's a different bpm or something.

Not bad, pretty well structured imo

Igorrr's the best.
Hopefully this helps, and good luck getting this ranked! :)
Thanks!
PnX


[Parasomnia]
  1. 02:11:631 - It has different sound from 02:11:459 - but in the same way, it have sound like 02:11:976 - . So, change 02:11:631 (131631|0,131631|3,131631|1,131717|2,131717|3,131717|0) - into double note.

[Insane]
  1. 00:03:528 (3528|3) - I suggest to move it to the second column because of its balancing

Sorry for a late and short mod~ GL~! Overall is good!
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