Allie Crystal - Burning Bright · forum

July - San

Joined July 2016

Topic Starter

July - San 2017-10-28T23:17:28+00:00

EggsGone wrote:
[General]
Hitsound inconsistencies all over difficulties.

[Easy]
00:17:921 (1) - You can make this sliderwave neater. ok
00:21:038 (3,5) - Overlap.
00:24:934 (1,2) - For more comfortable flow you can align sliderhead and slidertail https://i.imgur.com/cJcHPS5.png fix
00:27:272 (3) - You just can make neat sliderwave using less sliderpoints. https://i.imgur.com/DYcQ6sz.png fix
00:32:726 (5) - You can map some more stuff instead this long period slider. ?
00:35:843 (2,4) - To be more organised you can avoid this overlap. ok
00:42:077 (2,1) - Sliderbody is pretty close, try some blanketing. ok
00:44:415 (2) - Overlap. okey
00:50:648 - You can fill this empty gap.
01:07:791 - I would make this sound clickable. ?
01:08:181 (2,4) - Overlap. ok
01:21:817 (3,4) - Make sliders more similar.
01:23:376 - 01:26:492 - 01:29:609 - Add NC fix!
01:28:830 - Remove NC fix!
01:25:324 (6,8) - Avoid overlap. ok
Ok, this difficulty should have a bit more rhythm in my opinion.

[Cloud : o]
00:17:921 (1,2) - Make sliders similar for more aesthetical looking.
00:19:479 (5) - Make sliderwave more symmetrical.
00:26:882 (3) - This curve looks a bit eh. How about to make something like this? https://i.imgur.com/pSNbVPh.png
00:27:661 (2,4) - Blanket? https://i.imgur.com/rsfZP97.png
00:31:947 (6) - Just make simple curve and blanket with 00:31:557 (4) -
00:47:531 - How about to make this sound clickable?
00:48:116 (8,9) - Blanket maybe?
00:49:479 (2) - Make sliderwave symmetrical.
00:50:648 (5) - NC here cause current combo is a bit too long. And there's a more parts like this, I think you'll find them.
01:08:960 (4,7) - Stack?
01:25:908 (10,11,12) - Fix distances.

Thanks For your mod Dude!

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

6th 2017-11-04T12:08:26+00:00

Hi !

[Cloud]
00:22:402 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern could look neater if spacing was visually the same. Also I suggest reversing 00:21:428 (5) - so clicking the red tick after is easier.
00:28:830 (2,3,4,1) - Spacing is too consistent which may trick player because (3) is 1/2 while (1) is 1/1. Please fix that.
00:39:155 (9,10,11) - Use a jump for consistency with 00:36:428 (9,10,1) -
00:41:298 (5,6) - This overlap doesn't look right. You could maybe increase spacing so it would make the flow more smooth.
00:44:609 (6,7,8) - Too clustered again.
01:08:960 (4,1,2,3) - Same issue here.
01:10:324 (5) - Remove clap on head.

[Normal]
Why is the intro mapped in Normal but not in Cloud ? doesn't make much sense.
00:26:882 (4,5) - This doesn't play well because it leads player to hold (4) which is really tricky for beginners.
01:29:220 (1,2) - Those claps don't seem to make much sense and don't follow the song.

[Easy]
Same. Having the intro mapped in Easy but not in higher diffs feels weird lol.
00:41:687 (1,2) - Blanket could be better.
00:44:804 - Why are you ignoring that clap while you give priority to others before ?
00:53:765 (1) - This spinner may be too short for beginners. I would replace it by a slider.
01:25:324 (3) - This slider hides next's slider arrow a bit which can be unpredictable for beginners, you may want to fix that.

Good luck.

July - San

137 posts

Joined July 2016

Topic Starter

July - San 2017-11-04T14:24:48+00:00

6th wrote:
Hi !

[Cloud] Wait for Cloud, she will come tomorrow to solve your mods
00:22:402 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern could look neater if spacing was visually the same. Also I suggest reversing 00:21:428 (5) - so clicking the red tick after is easier.
00:28:830 (2,3,4,1) - Spacing is too consistent which may trick player because (3) is 1/2 while (1) is 1/1. Please fix that.
00:39:155 (9,10,11) - Use a jump for consistency with 00:36:428 (9,10,1) -
00:41:298 (5,6) - This overlap doesn't look right. You could maybe increase spacing so it would make the flow more smooth.
00:44:609 (6,7,8) - Too clustered again.
01:08:960 (4,1,2,3) - Same issue here.
01:10:324 (5) - Remove clap on head.

[Normal]
Why is the intro mapped in Normal but not in Cloud ? doesn't make much sense.
00:26:882 (4,5) - This doesn't play well because it leads player to hold (4) which is really tricky for beginners. Fix
01:29:220 (1,2) - Those claps don't seem to make much sense and don't follow the song. fix, i guess

[Easy]
Same. Having the intro mapped in Easy but not in higher diffs feels weird lol.
00:41:687 (1,2) - Blanket could be better.
00:44:804 - Why are you ignoring that clap while you give priority to others before ? fix
00:53:765 (1) - This spinner may be too short for beginners. I would replace it by a slider. fix
01:25:324 (3) - This slider hides next's slider arrow a bit which can be unpredictable for beginners, you may want to fix that. fix

Good luck.

THANKS!

And Thanks for your mod dude!

fffffffffffffxD

113 posts

Joined September 2017

fffffffffffffxD 2017-11-05T02:51:04+00:00

Hello there.. from that m4m, so I'll mod your map now but, keep in mind that I'm not too experienced with modding/mapping as you may have noticed hehe, I'll do my best to be at least a bit helpful in my mod, though.. so let's see what we got here

Easy

I think you can increase the cs a tiny bit if you want to, it's not a big deal, but I'd rather have a smaller one like 2,5 or 3.
00:05:454 (1) - Okay so, even though this is an large slider which can give the player time to think and act, but I think you shouldn't use multiple reverse arrows, mainly because new players might not even know what they mean, they might not know what they're supposed to do after that and this can mislead them somehow.. so why don't you use a larger slider without multiple reverse arrows or add some hit circles there? you can try placing 1 or 2 hit circles inbetween them
00:11:687 (1) - ^
00:21:038 (3) - You can make this a more comfortable hand/mouse movement by placing this object at x:324 y:92 and don't forget about 4 which you can place at x:128 y:128 just an exemple that you can follow, just make the ''path'' clear for a CCW movement.
00:27:272 (3) - This might be considered a weird slider shape for an easy, mainly for new peeps hehe.. keep all your slider shapes as simple as possible, using 1 curve at max, having such ''weird'' slider shapes can cause them to panic xD just like I do when I see high bpm streams

Also at some 1 beat gaps like for example 00:37:012 (3,4) you could add NC and add a NC each 3 or 4 objects, for me it works best than having 6 or 7.. I consider a bit too much, you can split those.
01:32:726 (1) - This spinner is starting too early.. place it at 01:33:116
Also you can map 01:36:622 until 01:42:077 at least.

Normal

00:05:454 (1) - The same thing that I said earlier on the easy map applies here too.. maybe too complex
00:11:687 (1) - ^
In normal diff though, you don't need to completely remove the sliders, but make them a bit simpler and you'll be good.
You could follow the same concept of easy for this diff too regarding NC, I'm not gonna be so specific about that but, maybe:
00:45:583 (1) - Remove NC here
00:45:194 (6) - Add here instead
01:32:921 (1) - Spinner.. should be on the white tick, it'll give more time to think

Also you can map 01:36:622 until 01:42:077 at least² woah nice copypasta

There's not much to mod here, nothing that a new modder could find, I tend to look into things that are mostly out of place or can make your map unrankable.. but this is good for me, so next one..

Cloud

Maybe naming it to Cloud's Hard/Insane? I dunno.
00:03:116 could use a Spinner, it can last until 00:05:454
00:50:648 (5) - If you wanna make things a bit more insteresting and challenging just hit ctrl + g here
01:11:103 and the other red ticks after that you should make them clickable
Also you can map 01:36:622 until 01:42:077 at least³ and put some high spacing notes heree, would be interesting!

Nothing much to say here too and that's mainly because I'm bad at mapping Hard/Insane diffs..

Okay sorry if there's not much content in my mod ;-; but I hope I was somewhat helpful, good luck with your map!

k_hand:

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2017-11-05T21:09:00+00:00

@everyone: I've fixed a lot of stuff in this map since it's old, and july changed bpm recently, my sliders "went crazy" and had to fix it before reading your mods. Don't surprise if I only point what I didn't fixed.

---> NC fixed
---> Weird Distance and sliders fixed (idk how they became so clumsy)

@Nekoraw @Rus_Brony_osu : NC stuff was fixed time ago, I just sent to July old stuff that I forgot completly...

@Rus_Brony_osu: 01:29:609 (1,2,3) - This triple isn't random, it's following vocals.

00:36:428 (9,10,1) - why did you changed the spacing?
00:51:817 (10,11) - ^ Downbeats!

@[ESKA]: Fixed before applying mods.
@Yusomi: ^ (except: 01:28:051 (4,5,6) - make these similar to 01:28:830 (8,9,10) - for consistency idk what consistency are you talking about tho)

@XFroceS: fixed before applying mods
@un-plugged: Gracias por el feedback. Agregué particularmente el segundo punto que concuerdo que ese slider estaba fuera de tiempo. Por otro lado, considero que al ser la dificultad más difícil se puede tener una mayor libertad al mapear, obvio sin olvidar que es una hard. Encuentro que está bien si hablamos de ritmo, aunque no es nada que tampoco se pudiese pulir con mods.

@Maxylan

[General]

I'm pretty disappointed in the movements, because it's a "Hard" difficulty, which doesn't have a lot of speed or spacing, this could be forgiven, however I would love to see this mapped in a more fluent way, for example, skipping 00:22:986 (6,7) - 00:24:544 (2,3) - the cursor walking in favor of something that flows better. You could also work a lot more on your aesthetics, for instance, using more consistent slider shapes and stacking objects instead of overlapping, as well as exploring different distances to emphasize sounds in the song.
Also, helpful advice, try and keep new combos under 9-8

lmao, to be honest, this is one of my worst map ever xD I mapped really quick and I didn't feel anything while mapping this song, sadly. Well, talking about structure: This song was touched by July without my permission and we talked about it by imbox. I've fixed a LOT of things since now (Nov 5th ) and I think it's much beeeeeeetter than months ago... Imagine that bpm was changed (before 77, now 154) and changed a lot of DS and stuff... Fixed blankets (prob gonna ignore most of your blankets one cuz I polished a lot) and NCs (repeating the same as I pointed at the beginning)
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I would love to see all your diffs start at this point 00:05:454 - with spinners, the sound on that point and the simular sounds that follows are perfect for spinners. The intro is so boring to actually map it...
00:24:934 (4) - Try and avoid hitsounding when there's no sound in the song to emphasise, same goes if the sound in the song doesn't even exist/match the hitsound.
00:27:272 (1,2) - This is, bad, for aesthetics, to say the least. Try and think of overlaps like this:
Overlaps does not mean bad.
Alot of overlaps or severe overlaps does mean bad.
Overlaps can always be avoided and should always be avoided if possible.
Same goes for most other overlaps I see in this diff.
00:29:025 - You missed a pretty important sound in favor of emphasizing the vocals, which is something that should be avoided whenever possible as well. You could, for example, make 00:28:830 (4) - into a 1/2 slider and putting a repeat arrow on it, that way it covers the drums as well as emphasize the vocals.
00:30:778 (2,3) - Here you focus on vocals yet here 00:32:337 (7) - You skip them entirely (notice the red tick on 00:32:531 - )
Also, 00:31:947 (6,7) - since you have never used 1/4 timegaps up to that point, you should make it more obvious to the player that there will be a 1/4 timegap (i.e make for example 00:32:337 (7) - stand out more, or have it stacked under 00:31:947 (6) - , or do the same thing you did on 00:38:181 (6,7) - )
00:33:311 (10,11,1) - This could be emphasized by moving it further away, making the sound stand out more, however since it has the tripple stacked on it this is fine.
HOWEVER! These two 00:34:869 (3,4) - are on top of pretty important stand-out drum sounds, and because they don't have a tripple on them I suggest moving them further away to give a much clearer emphasis to the drum sound.
Same goes for 00:37:791 (5) - and many more instances
00:38:960 (8,9,10,11,12) - This takes me back to what I wrote in "General", try and think of things that actually flow, because cursor walking is not flow.
If I'm going to use more simple terminology, use sharper angles between objects, 00:38:960 (8) - currently has a very VERY wide angle, around 130 degrees if I should estimate. Keeping angles between objects under 90 degrees not only looks pleasing but also plays more fluently.
Because I wrote it in General it means I see this problem alot, this was just one example, and this is just my opinion. Keep in mind the rules I stated above are not as important for "Hards, normals and easy" because of these low SR's very limited speed and movement. pls
00:52:012 (11,12,1) - This tripple/double whatever you want to call it, is unwarranted, it feels like it's mapped on top of nothing. there's a tripled with drums+vocals. Hear it with 25%
00:53:765 (1,2) - Bodies imply counter intuative movement. I don't understand your "intuative movement" anymore
00:54:934 (3) - 01:19:674 (9) - Why not use a stream here, or a tripple, or anyhing like you did previously? they are not the same pattern, in fact, one is triplet and the other is a drum roll or at least what I heard.
01:07:402 (4,5,6,1) - The tripple on 4,5,6 leads very poorly into the slider 1.
01:08:960 (4,7) - 01:21:817 (5,8) - reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee stack plz I'VE FIXED IT I KNOW WHAT YOU FELT I SAID THE SAME WHEN I CHECKED THIS MAP TODAY
01:10:518 - Once again an important sound missed, already explained earlier in the mod so wont go into detail again vocal was more important anyway
01:32:337 (3,4,5,6,1) - ReeeeeeeeeeeEEEEE Now you use stacks and you didn't earlier? pls mercy it's not my fault at all

@Ikira: fixed before applying mods

Not adding more mods from now because my difficult was changed a lot and most of your mods are obsolete by now. NC, stacking, spacing were cleared out above. In other hands, thanks you for taking your time and sorry for HUGE delay. This shouldn't happen again.

my diff:

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 42856
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Burning Bright
TitleUnicode:Burning Bright
Artist:Allie Crystal
ArtistUnicode:Allie Crystal
Creator:July - San
Version:Cloudchaser's Hard
Source:League of Legends
Tags:league of legends lol poppy jinx lulu lux janna star guardian guardianas estelares song Cloudchaser
BeatmapID:1441508
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG Star Guardian.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Star Guardian.mp4"
//Break Periods
2,55524,62366
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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17921,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
30389,-100,4,2,1,42,0,0
42856,-100,4,2,1,42,0,1
55324,-100,4,2,1,42,0,0
80259,-100,4,2,1,65,0,1
92726,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
94285,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
95843,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,128,255
Combo2 : 245,21,10
Combo3 : 255,72,164
Combo4 : 131,255,6
Combo5 : 169,83,255

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July - San

137 posts

Joined July 2016

Topic Starter

July - San 2017-11-05T21:42:49+00:00

Cloudchaser wrote:
@everyone: I've fixed a lot of stuff in this map since it's old, and july changed bpm recently, my sliders "went crazy" and had to fix it before reading your mods. Don't surprise if I only point what I didn't fixed.

---> NC fixed
---> Weird Distance and sliders fixed (idk how they became so clumsy)

@Nekoraw @Rus_Brony_osu : NC stuff was fixed time ago, I just sent to July old stuff that I forgot completly...

@Rus_Brony_osu: 01:29:609 (1,2,3) - This triple isn't random, it's following vocals.

00:36:428 (9,10,1) - why did you changed the spacing?
00:51:817 (10,11) - ^ Downbeats!
@[ESKA]: Fixed before applying mods.
@Yusomi: ^ (except: 01:28:051 (4,5,6) - make these similar to 01:28:830 (8,9,10) - for consistency idk what consistency are you talking about tho)

@XFroceS: fixed before applying mods
@un-plugged: Gracias por el feedback. Agregué particularmente el segundo punto que concuerdo que ese slider estaba fuera de tiempo. Por otro lado, considero que al ser la dificultad más difícil se puede tener una mayor libertad al mapear, obvio sin olvidar que es una hard. Encuentro que está bien si hablamos de ritmo, aunque no es nada que tampoco se pudiese pulir con mods.

@Maxylan
[General]

I'm pretty disappointed in the movements, because it's a "Hard" difficulty, which doesn't have a lot of speed or spacing, this could be forgiven, however I would love to see this mapped in a more fluent way, for example, skipping 00:22:986 (6,7) - 00:24:544 (2,3) - the cursor walking in favor of something that flows better. You could also work a lot more on your aesthetics, for instance, using more consistent slider shapes and stacking objects instead of overlapping, as well as exploring different distances to emphasize sounds in the song.
Also, helpful advice, try and keep new combos under 9-8 lmao, to be honest, this is one of my worst map ever xD I mapped really quick and I didn't feel anything while mapping this song, sadly. Well, talking about structure: This song was touched by July without my permission and we talked about it by imbox. I've fixed a LOT of things since now (Nov 5th ) and I think it's much beeeeeeetter than months ago... Imagine that bpm was changed (before 77, now 154) and changed a lot of DS and stuff... Fixed blankets (prob gonna ignore most of your blankets one cuz I polished a lot) and NCs (repeating the same as I pointed at the beginning)
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I would love to see all your diffs start at this point 00:05:454 - with spinners, the sound on that point and the simular sounds that follows are perfect for spinners. The intro is so boring to actually map it...
00:24:934 (4) - Try and avoid hitsounding when there's no sound in the song to emphasise, same goes if the sound in the song doesn't even exist/match the hitsound.
00:27:272 (1,2) - This is, bad, for aesthetics, to say the least. Try and think of overlaps like this:
Overlaps does not mean bad.
Alot of overlaps or severe overlaps does mean bad.
Overlaps can always be avoided and should always be avoided if possible.
Same goes for most other overlaps I see in this diff.
00:29:025 - You missed a pretty important sound in favor of emphasizing the vocals, which is something that should be avoided whenever possible as well. You could, for example, make 00:28:830 (4) - into a 1/2 slider and putting a repeat arrow on it, that way it covers the drums as well as emphasize the vocals.
00:30:778 (2,3) - Here you focus on vocals yet here 00:32:337 (7) - You skip them entirely (notice the red tick on 00:32:531 - )
Also, 00:31:947 (6,7) - since you have never used 1/4 timegaps up to that point, you should make it more obvious to the player that there will be a 1/4 timegap (i.e make for example 00:32:337 (7) - stand out more, or have it stacked under 00:31:947 (6) - , or do the same thing you did on 00:38:181 (6,7) - )
00:33:311 (10,11,1) - This could be emphasized by moving it further away, making the sound stand out more, however since it has the tripple stacked on it this is fine.
HOWEVER! These two 00:34:869 (3,4) - are on top of pretty important stand-out drum sounds, and because they don't have a tripple on them I suggest moving them further away to give a much clearer emphasis to the drum sound.
Same goes for 00:37:791 (5) - and many more instances
00:38:960 (8,9,10,11,12) - This takes me back to what I wrote in "General", try and think of things that actually flow, because cursor walking is not flow.
If I'm going to use more simple terminology, use sharper angles between objects, 00:38:960 (8) - currently has a very VERY wide angle, around 130 degrees if I should estimate. Keeping angles between objects under 90 degrees not only looks pleasing but also plays more fluently.
Because I wrote it in General it means I see this problem alot, this was just one example, and this is just my opinion. Keep in mind the rules I stated above are not as important for "Hards, normals and easy" because of these low SR's very limited speed and movement. pls
00:52:012 (11,12,1) - This tripple/double whatever you want to call it, is unwarranted, it feels like it's mapped on top of nothing. there's a tripled with drums+vocals. Hear it with 25%
00:53:765 (1,2) - Bodies imply counter intuative movement. I don't understand your "intuative movement" anymore
00:54:934 (3) - 01:19:674 (9) - Why not use a stream here, or a tripple, or anyhing like you did previously? they are not the same pattern, in fact, one is triplet and the other is a drum roll or at least what I heard.
01:07:402 (4,5,6,1) - The tripple on 4,5,6 leads very poorly into the slider 1.
01:08:960 (4,7) - 01:21:817 (5,8) - reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee stack plz I'VE FIXED IT I KNOW WHAT YOU FELT I SAID THE SAME WHEN I CHECKED THIS MAP TODAY
01:10:518 - Once again an important sound missed, already explained earlier in the mod so wont go into detail again vocal was more important anyway
01:32:337 (3,4,5,6,1) - ReeeeeeeeeeeEEEEE Now you use stacks and you didn't earlier? pls mercy it's not my fault at all

@Ikira: fixed before applying mods

Not adding more mods from now because my difficult was changed a lot and most of your mods are obsolete by now. NC, stacking, spacing were cleared out above. In other hands, thanks you for taking your time and sorry for HUGE delay. This shouldn't happen again.

my diff:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 42856
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Burning Bright
TitleUnicode:Burning Bright
Artist:Allie Crystal
ArtistUnicode:Allie Crystal
Creator:July - San
Version:Cloudchaser's Hard
Source:League of Legends
Tags:league of legends lol poppy jinx lulu lux janna star guardian guardianas estelares song Cloudchaser
BeatmapID:1441508
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG Star Guardian.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Star Guardian.mp4"
//Break Periods
2,55524,62366
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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July - San

137 posts

Joined July 2016

Topic Starter

July - San 2017-11-05T22:01:44+00:00

fffffffffffffxD wrote:
Hello there.. from that m4m, so I'll mod your map now but, keep in mind that I'm not too experienced with modding/mapping as you may have noticed hehe, I'll do my best to be at least a bit helpful in my mod, though.. so let's see what we got here

Easy
I think you can increase the cs a tiny bit if you want to, it's not a big deal, but I'd rather have a smaller one like 2,5 or 3.
00:05:454 (1) - Okay so, even though this is an large slider which can give the player time to think and act, but I think you shouldn't use multiple reverse arrows, mainly because new players might not even know what they mean, they might not know what they're supposed to do after that and this can mislead them somehow.. so why don't you use a larger slider without multiple reverse arrows or add some hit circles there? you can try placing 1 or 2 hit circles inbetween them
00:11:687 (1) - ^ fix
00:21:038 (3) - You can make this a more comfortable hand/mouse movement by placing this object at x:324 y:92 and don't forget about 4 which you can place at x:128 y:128 just an exemple that you can follow, just make the ''path'' clear for a CCW movement.
00:27:272 (3) - This might be considered a weird slider shape for an easy, mainly for new peeps hehe.. keep all your slider shapes as simple as possible, using 1 curve at max, having such ''weird'' slider shapes can cause them to panic xD just like I do when I see high bpm streams fix
Also at some 1 beat gaps like for example 00:37:012 (3,4) you could add NC and add a NC each 3 or 4 objects, for me it works best than having 6 or 7.. I consider a bit too much, you can split those. fix
01:32:726 (1) - This spinner is starting too early.. place it at 01:33:116 fix
Also you can map 01:36:622 until 01:42:077 at least. I'm sorry, but I think it would be better to leave that as it is, to my liking

Normal
00:05:454 (1) - The same thing that I said earlier on the easy map applies here too.. maybe too complex
00:11:687 (1) - ^ fix
In normal diff though, you don't need to completely remove the sliders, but make them a bit simpler and you'll be good.
You could follow the same concept of easy for this diff too regarding NC, I'm not gonna be so specific about that but, maybe:
00:45:583 (1) - Remove NC here fix
00:45:194 (6) - Add here instead fix
01:32:921 (1) - Spinner.. should be on the white tick, it'll give more time to think fix
Also you can map 01:36:622 until 01:42:077 at least² woah nice copypasta I'm sorry, but I think it would be better to leave that as it is, to my liking

There's not much to mod here, nothing that a new modder could find, I tend to look into things that are mostly out of place or can make your map unrankable.. but this is good for me, so next one..

Cloud
Maybe naming it to Cloud's Hard/Insane? I dunno.
00:03:116 could use a Spinner, it can last until 00:05:454
00:50:648 (5) - If you wanna make things a bit more insteresting and challenging just hit ctrl + g here
01:11:103 and the other red ticks after that you should make them clickable
Also you can map 01:36:622 until 01:42:077 at least³ and put some high spacing notes heree, would be interesting!

Nothing much to say here too and that's mainly because I'm bad at mapping Hard/Insane diffs..

Okay sorry if there's not much content in my mod ;-; but I hope I was somewhat helpful, good luck with your map! k_hand:

Thanks dude!

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

6th 2017-11-06T18:53:19+00:00

Hard diff looks much better indeed.

I think that some of my points are still valid tho.

00:26:103 (1,2,3,4,1) - The rhythm is not okay here. You give priority to vocals with 1/1 sliders but these 1/2 sliders 00:26:882 (3,4) - aren't following them.
00:29:609 (3,1) - This uses 1/1 but has the spacing as 00:28:830 (1,2) - which uses 1/2. It can look confusing for low level players.
00:31:947 (6) - This deserves a jump to be consistent with 00:35:064 (4) - 00:38:181 (6) - etc
00:52:109 (12) - Sounds overmapped.
01:13:928 - Skipping that blue tick feels weird considering how dense this section is.
01:23:960 (4) - The spacing is a bit annoying here actually because it is probably the highest in the whole kiai. Moreover, there is no momentum or smooth angle that could help it flow good. Does this slider need that much emphasis ? I don't think so.

Good luck.

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2017-11-07T03:41:56+00:00

I am going to consider your mod this time and sorry for inconvenience! applying tomorrow

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2017-11-10T23:35:45+00:00

6th wrote:
Hard diff looks much better indeed.

I think that some of my points are still valid tho.

00:26:103 (1,2,3,4,1) - The rhythm is not okay here. You give priority to vocals with 1/1 sliders but these 1/2 sliders 00:26:882 (3,4) - aren't following them.
00:29:609 (3,1) - This uses 1/1 but has the spacing as 00:28:830 (1,2) - which uses 1/2. It can look confusing for low level players.
00:31:947 (6) - This deserves a jump to be consistent with 00:35:064 (4) - 00:38:181 (6) - etc
00:52:109 (12) - Sounds overmapped. it's not! Actually I'm following the lyrics pretty much "running out the time" is 3/4 but if someone point this in future mods I will change
01:13:928 - Skipping that blue tick feels weird considering how dense this section is. that pattern is 1/2. There's no sound in that blue tick
01:23:960 (4) - The spacing is a bit annoying here actually because it is probably the highest in the whole kiai. Moreover, there is no momentum or smooth angle that could help it flow good. Does this slider need that much emphasis ? I don't think so. Hmmmm you're right! but I have no idea what to do there for now

Good luck.

Thanks you ^^ very appreciated!

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aramaking

210 posts

Joined August 2014

aramaking 2017-11-12T02:16:25+00:00

hi ~

but my english is tooo bad

thanks google translation

Genelal
i think you might as well use symmetry arrangement

is not Insane?

00:42:856 - hitsound vol. i think that it may be 52% 01:07:791 - from 42% here

[Easy]

00:10:129 (3) - i think you should stack to 00:11:687 (1) -

01:24:934 (2) - x405:y324

[Normal]

00:33:116 (2) - x216:y340

00:45:973 (3) - NC
00:46:363 (1) - NC

00:45:973 (3,4,5,6) - you can put notes

[Cloudchaser's Hard]
00:27:272 (3) - NC

00:33:116 (10,2) - over lap?

00:36:428 (9,10,1) - x147:y104

00:30:389 (1) - ~01:32:726 (1) - you should put NC every four measures

00:52:012 (11,12,1,2) - x319:y223 i think it is too far away x2.51

00:53:570 (7) - x60:y225

thanks for m4m!!!

July - San

137 posts

Joined July 2016

Topic Starter

July - San 2017-11-12T13:03:33+00:00

Scaltinof wrote:
hi ~

but my english is tooo bad
thanks google translation xD

Genelal
i think you might as well use symmetry arrangement

is not Insane?

00:42:856 - hitsound vol. i think that it may be 52% 01:07:791 - from 42% here i apply that in the normal and easy diff

[Easy]

00:10:129 (3) - i think you should stack to 00:11:687 (1) - ?

01:24:934 (2) - x405:y324 ?

[Normal]

00:33:116 (2) - x216:y340

00:45:973 (3) - NC fix
00:46:363 (1) - NC fix

00:45:973 (3,4,5,6) - you can put notes next time, explain better please D:

[Cloudchaser's Hard]
00:27:272 (3) - NC

00:33:116 (10,2) - over lap?

00:36:428 (9,10,1) - x147:y104

00:30:389 (1) - ~01:32:726 (1) - you should put NC every four measures

00:52:012 (11,12,1,2) - x319:y223 i think it is too far away x2.51

00:53:570 (7) - x60:y225

thanks for m4m!!!

thanks you too for the mod

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2017-11-12T14:13:37+00:00

Scaltinof wrote:
[Cloudchaser's Hard]
00:27:272 (3) - NC

00:33:116 (10,2) - over lap? Any idea where to overlap?

00:36:428 (9,10,1) - x147:y104 I prefer the small jump

00:30:389 (1) - ~01:32:726 (1) - you should put NC every four measures I prefer higher NCs in hard or above. It's more readable than short patterns at all

00:52:012 (11,12,1,2) - x319:y223 i think it is too far away x2.51 I don't get this point ;c

00:53:570 (7) - x60:y225

thanks for m4m!!!

Not answered = applied

Next time try to explain a bit more, no matter if you're using translator, I will understand the idea! thanks

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Eir_DELETED

Eir_DELETED 2017-11-13T01:15:05+00:00

m4m

General

remove "league of legends" from tags since the words are duplicated with Source

Easy

in general, i seem NC pattern is really messy since it doesn't consist at the whole. you should add NC each 2 measures in lower diffs at least.
00:50:648 - why did you ignore the major sound? it should be beat by smh

Normal

CS is too low atm. should be fine to change cs4 for the spread.
same mention as Easy about NC stuffs
the diff spread has an issue that this normal is pretty easy for Hard in terms of density. you can add some notes somewhere for solving big gap with hard

Cloudchaser's Hard

00:25:324 (5) - you would try to replace a 1/2 slider + circle since it would make more sense to be clickable cymbal sound imo 00:47:142 (5) - same things
01:08:570 (3,4,5,6,7) - im kinda not fun the same spaces on here cuz you can make more space on 01:09:350 (5) - for emphasis the cymbal in your pattern.

that's all
gl

July - San

137 posts

Joined July 2016

Topic Starter

July - San 2017-11-13T03:00:14+00:00

joker- wrote:
m4m

General
remove "league of legends" from tags since the words are duplicated with Source
that's right, fix
Easy
in general, i seem NC pattern is really messy since it doesn't consist at the whole. you should add NC each 2 measures in lower diffs at least. Fix several NC, I hope it looks better now
00:50:648 - why did you ignore the major sound? it should be beat by smh fix

Normal
CS is too low atm. should be fine to change cs4 for the spread.
same mention as Easy about NC stuffs Fix several NC, I hope it looks better now
the diff spread has an issue that this normal is pretty easy for Hard in terms of density. you can add some notes somewhere for solving big gap with hard
Cloudchaser's Hard
00:25:324 (5) - you would try to replace a 1/2 slider + circle since it would make more sense to be clickable cymbal sound imo 00:47:142 (5) - same things
01:08:570 (3,4,5,6,7) - im kinda not fun the same spaces on here cuz you can make more space on 01:09:350 (5) - for emphasis the cymbal in your pattern.
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that's all
gl

Thanks for the mod!

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2017-11-13T22:32:40+00:00

Burning bright has its price!

all applied.

diff 13/11/2017

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Osuology

528 posts

Joined February 2014

Osuology 2017-11-15T03:06:52+00:00

Sorry it took longer! At least I'm here.

Cloudchaser's Hard

To be fully honest, I found nothing at all aside from a question that you probably have a good answer to. I am wondering how the NC's work in this map, they seem to sometimes be every measure, and other times every two measures.

Normal

I would recommend you to make NC's every two measures, it seems to fit the music really well for the most part (and if you end a slider on the start of a measure, NC the hitobject after that slider, not the slider itself. 00:17:921 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - this section would change to something like this: 00:17:921 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ). This makes sense logically, muscially. If you don't know what a measure is, the timeline in the top section shows some white ticks, and every four of those white ticks, one of them is taller than the others, this is the start of a new measure. I'm not gonna go through the whole map and list you what you need to change, whatever you feel like needs changing, you should change.

00:41:298 (1,1) - The concept of overlapping is a fairly complex one to newer players, so I would recommend against doing this, even though they are far apart. (Once again, I won't be listing every case of this happening, you should go through and make sure everything is right according to anything new you find out.)

01:12:077 (3) - Why does this slider's tick sound like a snare? (drum-hitclap) it should be more like a kick drum or something, it doesn't fit in.

Otherwise, you did good for a new mapper! I will warn you that a lot of good mappers will probably tell you this map sucks and to remap (they will be right in some regards). When you remap, I would highly recommend you backup these old versions so you can compare and see how good you get!

Easy

00:21:038 (1,3) - As I said in the normal difficulty, you should definitely change it for the Easy; it is usually easier than normal so it should be very very easy to read.

00:37:012 (1,2,1) - As well, the NC'ing issue from the Normal carries over to this diff too. This should be all in one combo, since they all start in 2 measures.

00:41:687 (1,2) - For easier blanketing, you can use the approach circle of the hitcircle you wish to blanket, and make sure it lines up with the slider nicely.

These will apply multiple times as well! Good luck.

Overall, nice map for beginner! Good luck with ranking!

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2017-11-15T10:51:17+00:00

Going to fix the Nc cuz you werent the only one Who pointed the same and well, it is correct what you said.
going to fix as soon as I arrive from schook

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2017-11-15T23:24:50+00:00

mi diff

osu file format v14

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Artist:Allie Crystal
ArtistUnicode:Allie Crystal
Creator:July - San
Version:Cloudchaser's Hard
Source:League of Legends
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July - San

137 posts

Joined July 2016

Topic Starter

July - San 2017-11-16T02:54:12+00:00

Osuology wrote:
Sorry it took longer! At least I'm here.

Cloudchaser's Hard
To be fully honest, I found nothing at all aside from a question that you probably have a good answer to. I am wondering how the NC's work in this map, they seem to sometimes be every measure, and other times every two measures.

Normal
I would recommend you to make NC's every two measures, it seems to fit the music really well for the most part (and if you end a slider on the start of a measure, NC the hitobject after that slider, not the slider itself. 00:17:921 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - this section would change to something like this: 00:17:921 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ). This makes sense logically, muscially. If you don't know what a measure is, the timeline in the top section shows some white ticks, and every four of those white ticks, one of them is taller than the others, this is the start of a new measure. I'm not gonna go through the whole map and list you what you need to change, whatever you feel like needs changing, you should change.

00:41:298 (1,1) - The concept of overlapping is a fairly complex one to newer players, so I would recommend against doing this, even though they are far apart. (Once again, I won't be listing every case of this happening, you should go through and make sure everything is right according to anything new you find out.)

01:12:077 (3) - Why does this slider's tick sound like a snare? (drum-hitclap) it should be more like a kick drum or something, it doesn't fit in.

Otherwise, you did good for a new mapper! I will warn you that a lot of good mappers will probably tell you this map sucks and to remap (they will be right in some regards). When you remap, I would highly recommend you backup these old versions so you can compare and see how good you get! Fix several combos, I hope it looks better now

Easy
00:21:038 (1,3) - As I said in the normal difficulty, you should definitely change it for the Easy; it is usually easier than normal so it should be very very easy to read. sorry, but I did not understand that

00:37:012 (1,2,1) - As well, the NC'ing issue from the Normal carries over to this diff too. This should be all in one combo, since they all start in 2 measures.
I've fixed all the combos I've seen

00:41:687 (1,2) - For easier blanketing, you can use the approach circle of the hitcircle you wish to blanket, and make sure it lines up with the slider nicely.
Fix, I guess

These will apply multiple times as well! Good luck.

Overall, nice map for beginner! Good luck with ranking!

Thanks dude! and thanks for your mod!,

Osuology

528 posts

Joined February 2014

Osuology 2017-11-18T06:22:22+00:00

July - San wrote:
Osuology wrote:
Easy
00:21:038 (1,3) - As I said in the normal difficulty, you should definitely change it for the Easy; it is usually easier than normal so it should be very very easy to read. sorry, but I did not understand that
Thanks dude! and thanks for your mod!,

The overlap was what I was talking about, making the overlaps not overlaps so it's more readable.

martyur

173 posts

Joined January 2017

martyur 2017-11-29T21:46:48+00:00

Easy Mod

General Tips

Change AR to 1-2
Most of the map has extreme curves, can you make that not be it. Don't make the map just curves, you need straight so it looks nice
don't make the longest NC only 2, that's really strange that every its a new NC every 1~2 hits

map mod oof

00:21:038 (1,2,1) - make the 1 and the other 1 match up, makes it look better
01:08:181 (2,1,2) - make the 2 and the other 2 match up, makes it look Better
00:05:454 (1,1,1,1) - is it really necessary to make them all new combo, no. make them into one then the next note a NC

picky map modding oof

I wasn't picky on this map your blessed

all I found bb, nice map overrall

July - San

137 posts

Joined July 2016

Topic Starter

July - San 2017-12-01T19:06:08+00:00

Dunced wrote:
Easy Mod
General Tips
Change AR to 1-2
Most of the map has extreme curves, can you make that not be it. Don't make the map just curves, you need straight so it looks nice
don't make the longest NC only 2, that's really strange that every its a new NC every 1~2 hits change some combos, I hope it looks better now
map mod oof
00:21:038 (1,2,1) - make the 1 and the other 1 match up, makes it look better fix
01:08:181 (2,1,2) - make the 2 and the other 2 match up, makes it look Better fix
00:05:454 (1,1,1,1) - is it really necessary to make them all new combo, no. make them into one then the next note a NC Eliminate the start in normal and easy diff, to make it look better
picky map modding oof
I wasn't picky on this map your blessed
all I found bb, nice map overrall Thank you very much bb!

Thanks for the mod

July - San

137 posts

Joined July 2016

Topic Starter

July - San 2017-12-11T02:03:30+00:00

HEY!!

I have added some changes..

Normal

00:45:973 (1) - I Add hitsound Whistle

00:54:155 (2) - I Add Hitsound Clap in the start, And lower the volume of the hitsounds a bit

01:31:557 (1) - I lower the volume a little

Easy

00:19:479 (2) - I add hitsound Whistle

00:21:038 (1) - here too

00:25:713 (2) - Here too

00:32:337 (2) - I Add a circle here with the hitsound Clap

00:49:090 (1,2,1) - I moved these three a bit

00:53:765 (2) - - Remove the hitsound whistle from this slider

01:26:492 (1,1) - I moved these two a bit

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2017-12-19T06:39:41+00:00

Actualicé cosas de mi diff por mi propia cuenta

osu file format v14

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Creator:July - San
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July - San

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July - San 2017-12-22T01:42:38+00:00

Cloudchaser wrote:

Actualicé cosas de mi diff por mi propia cuenta

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perdona la tardanza, no estuve entrando al osu! mucho estos días, bueno, ya lo actualice

iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

iYiyo 2017-12-26T02:55:38+00:00

[General]

I feel like the gap between normal and hard is way too big. consider adding a 2.5* diff or buff the normal diff to around 2.2~?

[Cloudchaser's Hard]
00:38:570 (2,3) - According to your mapping and the previous section, shouldn't this be ctrl+g'ed? Just like what you did 00:32:337 (2,3) - here, just for the sake of consistency~
01:09:350 (1,2,3) - you have this kind of stack which isn't used in all of your diff but here so it feels a bit out of place, i know you can do something else to rearrange this a bit better.
01:10:811 (6,1) - shouldn't this triplet have less ds? I mean, it has same intensity with 00:30:389 - and also because you map 01:14:317 (2,3) - like this here which doesn't really make sense. I think it'd be better to leave the spaced triplets for the final kiai instead of this section.
01:15:973 (4) - I feel like this slider isn't really supporting the music, I mean, it could be arranged better imo because right now it's skipping a very strong vocal 01:16:168 - here. What I suggest would be to make it a 1/2 slider and then do something. Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/yNTf8/b39a98d456.jpg

[Normal]
00:25:324 (2) - ending the downbeat (big white tick) with a slider here isn't the best option you have here imo. 00:25:713 - is a stronger beat in the music so it'd be better to emphasize it more than it currently is. For that you can make so that the slider starts from 00:25:713 - or adding a circle, but I feel like adding a slider would fit much better.
For a mapper who hasn't any ranked maps yet, it isn't a bad diff. However I feel like you can polish your pattern and rhythms just a bit more.

[Easy]
00:51:038 - shouldn't this have a clap instead of 00:51:428 - ?
01:15:194 (2) - Better not to skip the downbeat since it has stronger sound (as I told you on normal), better to map it with a circle or the start of a slider.
01:20:259 - it's weird how you map the kiai considering how you mapped the previous section which should be considered calmer. 01:14:804 - Here you map every white tick which means every leaving 1/1 time in the timeline, but 01:20:259 - on the kiai you map with less objects (so less density), and also you leave 2/1 time inbetween the majority of objects which is like, counterintuitive to the song imo.

I feel like you still have work to do on your easy and normal, but nothing extremely problematic. In major words I'd recommend you to map Normal with more objects (like mapping every 1/2 time to time), cause right now it feels like it's just an easy but with more CS and more spacing between objects. For the easy, I'd recommend you to be more consistent with the placement of your objects, and don't leave a lot of empty places, cause that would confuse players as they don't have a rhythm to follow in a consistent way, so they could easily missclick some notes. For more details I guess you can ask for cloudchaser or me

GL with the set!

July - San

137 posts

Joined July 2016

Topic Starter

July - San 2018-01-15T21:02:13+00:00

iYiyo wrote:

[General]
I feel like the gap between normal and hard is way too big. consider adding a 2.5* diff or buff the normal diff to around 2.2~?

[Cloudchaser's Hard]
00:38:570 (2,3) - According to your mapping and the previous section, shouldn't this be ctrl+g'ed? Just like what you did 00:32:337 (2,3) - here, just for the sake of consistency~
01:09:350 (1,2,3) - you have this kind of stack which isn't used in all of your diff but here so it feels a bit out of place, i know you can do something else to rearrange this a bit better.
01:10:811 (6,1) - shouldn't this triplet have less ds? I mean, it has same intensity with 00:30:389 - and also because you map 01:14:317 (2,3) - like this here which doesn't really make sense. I think it'd be better to leave the spaced triplets for the final kiai instead of this section.
01:15:973 (4) - I feel like this slider isn't really supporting the music, I mean, it could be arranged better imo because right now it's skipping a very strong vocal 01:16:168 - here. What I suggest would be to make it a 1/2 slider and then do something. Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/yNTf8/b39a98d456.jpg

[Normal]
00:25:324 (2) - ending the downbeat (big white tick) with a slider here isn't the best option you have here imo. 00:25:713 - is a stronger beat in the music so it'd be better to emphasize it more than it currently is. For that you can make so that the slider starts from 00:25:713 - or adding a circle, but I feel like adding a slider would fit much better.
For a mapper who hasn't any ranked maps yet, it isn't a bad diff. However I feel like you can polish your pattern and rhythms just a bit more.

[Easy]
00:51:038 - shouldn't this have a clap instead of 00:51:428 - ?
01:15:194 (2) - Better not to skip the downbeat since it has stronger sound (as I told you on normal), better to map it with a circle or the start of a slider.
01:20:259 - it's weird how you map the kiai considering how you mapped the previous section which should be considered calmer. 01:14:804 - Here you map every white tick which means every leaving 1/1 time in the timeline, but 01:20:259 - on the kiai you map with less objects (so less density), and also you leave 2/1 time inbetween the majority of objects which is like, counterintuitive to the song imo.

I feel like you still have work to do on your easy and normal, but nothing extremely problematic. In major words I'd recommend you to map Normal with more objects (like mapping every 1/2 time to time), cause right now it feels like it's just an easy but with more CS and more spacing between objects. For the easy, I'd recommend you to be more consistent with the placement of your objects, and don't leave a lot of empty places, cause that would confuse players as they don't have a rhythm to follow in a consistent way, so they could easily missclick some notes. For more details I guess you can ask for cloudchaser or me

GL with the set!

hey, I really appreciate the help, and forgive the delay, I still can not understand this 1/1 or 1/2, I made some changes in the diff's
When you have free time, I would like you to explain several things to me

(and in Spanish it would be fine too xd)

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2018-01-15T22:42:27+00:00

Everything added from yiyo's mod

Because I am an idiot sandwich

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