DJ Okawari - Flower Dance · forum

JauiPlaY

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

JauiPlaY 2011-07-22T10:15:23+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年12月14日 at 22:53:06

Artist: DJ Okawari
Title: Flower Dance
Source: Kaleidoscope
Tags: shinki samuel326 a cup of coffee
BPM: 100
Filesize: 5832kb
Play Time: 03:58
Difficulties Available:

Blossom (4.02 stars, 304 notes)
Flower (5 stars, 636 notes)
Shinki's Inflorescence (1.7 stars, 185 notes)

Download: DJ Okawari - Flower Dance
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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8th beatmap.

Shinki's Easy by Shinki.
Special thanks to: spboxer3, yangzd88, _Kiva, sherrie__fay, Weiren, EvianBubble, _llkey_18 and VanMoNky!!
Mp3 file obtained from s/23207.

There are lots of flowers in the Flower diff. Hope you'll enjoy!

這是一張送給那個人的圖
And this is a present for that guy

Last edited by JauiPlaY 2011-12-14T14:53:41+00:00, edited 15 times in total.

Yumeko Yuki

135 posts

Joined December 2010

Yumeko Yuki 2011-07-24T10:13:12+00:00

加油~沙发一个先

Curisu

2,241 posts

Joined January 2010

Curisu 2011-07-26T01:41:54+00:00

I like cats.

Last edited by Curisu 2011-11-07T15:21:11+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

LKs

3,119 posts

Joined August 2009

LKs 2011-08-03T23:12:30+00:00

啦啦啦啦
呀呀呀呀
呖呖呖呖
咯咯咯咯

我擦

wmfchris

osu! Alumni

5,072 posts

Joined March 2008

wmfchris 2011-08-05T11:10:37+00:00

Good luck >< if you need taiko diff just tell me

(D: not long enough ._________________________________.)

-Mantis-

95 posts

Joined March 2011

-Mantis- 2011-08-05T11:21:41+00:00

Well, it's already mapped: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/23207
Good luck though!

sell an apple

19 posts

Joined April 2011

sell an apple 2011-08-09T21:17:18+00:00

Good map~I love it.

Well,here is your star~
lol

star star star star star star

Megurine Luka

2,579 posts

Joined November 2010

Megurine Luka 2011-09-10T18:48:01+00:00

这歌各种耐听._.

字数补丁

字数补

字数

字

字数

字数补

字数补丁

_Kiva

981 posts

Joined January 2010

_Kiva 2011-10-21T15:30:16+00:00

oh yeah i love this song although JauiPlaY is a un-self heavy mapper.

Curisu

2,241 posts

Joined January 2010

Curisu 2011-10-21T16:01:44+00:00

~~oh yeah i love this song although JauiPlaY is a un-self heavy mapper.~~

我错了

Last edited by Curisu 2011-10-22T14:49:09+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

JauiPlaY

1,287 posts

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Topic Starter

JauiPlaY 2011-10-22T05:28:07+00:00

Both of you are correct, damn.

LKs

3,119 posts

Joined August 2009

LKs 2011-11-11T15:08:32+00:00

其实我一直想完整听出开头那段听力但总是差一两个听不出

source可以写Kaleidoscope 这个专辑
offest-6?

Shinki's Easy

不太理解这whistle加的思路比如[00;59:882] 这两个whistle连起来显得不够平和
建议去掉sliderslide音
[00:40:257] 为什么把kiaiend放在这了

Normal

建议去掉sliderslide音
[00:45;782] 这finish如果尾音再长一点~~

Flower

依然建议去掉sliderslide音
[00:56:582] 这不如reverse一下加大点间距
下同

这歌就靠你rank了
star

Curisu

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Joined January 2010

Curisu 2011-11-12T12:57:37+00:00

[扶老二]
00:32:882 (4,5,6) - 这里应该是1/6吧..(后面部分一样不再吐槽
00:39:182 (3,4,1,2) - 这间距略坑爹
00:44:582 (1) - ...其实我很想说把这个slider分拆成两个的(突出鼓点)
00:54:182 (1) - +whistle ; 00:54:482 (2) - clap
00:55:382 (1) - spacing稍微近了些
01:06:632 - vol略减抹杀存在感
01:11:282 (3) - 1/6..
01:16:232 - 同上上
01:42:182 (1) - 减少个reverse
01:45:632 - +whistle?
01:51:632 (4) - ^
01:55:382 (3) - ^
01:57:632 (2) - ^
~~02:59:432 (1) - 1/12 plz~~
03:35:882 (1) - remove whistle ; 03:36:032 (2) - +whistle?
03:48:482 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - so beautiful,so wtf.敢2个note一combo吗..
03:59:582 (1) - 1/6

....其实我不喜欢最后kiai前那一段拼45°旋转有点overuse.

nice map

spboxer3

Global Moderator

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Joined November 2009

spboxer3 2011-11-13T13:17:57+00:00

怒mod
[genenal]
kaleidoscope放入Source
skin跑起來很奇怪...是不是有問題我記得是要10個圖片的?

[Shinki's Easy]
01:06:182 (1) - 跳太遠所以不適合在easy裡面出現
01:55:382 (3) - 音效試著對調看看我認為這樣蠻適合的看你的感覺!
02:40:982 (1) - 節奏太近了在easy裡面不是很好~
[Normal]
這麼慢的歌Normal你居然排到4顆星該Ban了!! \:D/
kiai time居然沒在timing上這太該死了!
01:13:982 (3,1) - 不管!這不夠直!
02:46:982 (3,4,1) - (1)的位置沒排好
03:48:182 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 臥槽這你...

[Flower]
kiai time又沒在timing上這該Ban了! \:D/
00:27:782 (5,6,1,2) - 這蛋疼的間距是怎麼回是阿?
00:38:582 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 這什麼鬼觸該Ban了 \:D/
02:52:982 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ...無言了
03:02:582 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 瞎了
03:07:382 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 我的臉僵住了
03:59:582 (1) - 可以在04:00:032 - 結束然後在04:00:182 - 加一個note嗎你那給我overmap的感覺
可惡做這樣我的Flower Dance還怎麼混阿你說阿!!!

哼~不給你看♪~

該Ban了啦!!

Twice_old

Twice_old 2011-11-13T13:54:21+00:00

怒围观JPY的图w

Curisu

2,241 posts

Joined January 2010

Curisu 2011-11-13T14:24:49+00:00

^^怒围观傲娇spboxer3

mochi

779 posts

Joined June 2010

mochi 2011-11-15T07:32:16+00:00

[Flower]
fine

Is Flower insane difficulty? Feels like you need a hard difficulty :l

-Baby Strawberry-

387 posts

Joined September 2011

-Baby Strawberry- 2011-11-15T22:04:42+00:00

❤Hihi~! 《Flower Dance》, 好听又耐听的钢琴曲。
❤开始mod~！

❤总的来说。。。

SPOILER

❤我真的非常❤这个作图的风格，不光是拉条好看，而且谱面铺的满满的。皮肤也很不错。
❤难度名称。既然最高叫flower，别的难度是普通名称会不会有点。。。（不会形容，抱歉）？或者把各个难度改成各种花的名字？
❤作图摆放节奏都没问题，我认为唯一不足在于音效方面，虽然我不专业，但是有些地方的音效的确不是很合适，我会在各难度里面指明。
❤我觉得可以rank。

❤【Flower】 diff

SPOILER

00:24:182 如果可以的话，能不能按完skip以后在这个时间点开始游戏呢？
00:39:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这几个note的速度比之前的快一倍，要不要提示一下？
00:45:782 (1,2,3,4) - 像这种拉条的尾端声音要不要弄成无声的？有声音总感觉有点乱。。
00:48:182 (1,2,3,4) - 同上
01:01:382 (1) - 这个的折返处弄成无声？
01:43:382 (1,2,3,4) - 尾部无声？
01:45:782 (1,2,3,4) - 同上
01:58:982 (1) - 折返处无声？
02:23:882&02:24:032 加note？
02:28:682&02:28:832，如果上一个做了的话，这里也加两个note
02:31:082 (2) - 尾巴的finish去掉？
02:40:382 转圈在这里结束吧，否则后面转完马上拉条会不会不太好啊？
02:49:982 感觉应该加note，
03:21:782 (1,2,3,4) - 尾部无声？
03:24:182 (1,2,3,4) - 同上
03:48:482 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 很漂亮，但是会不会微难啊？
03:50:582 (1,2,3,4) - 尾部无声？
03:52:982 (1,2,3,4) - 同上

❤【Normal】 diff

SPOILER

00:27:782 (3) - 去掉开头的whistler，结尾加whistler
00:30:182 (4) - 同上
00:28:982 (1) - 去掉whistler
00:29:432 (2) - 开头whistler
00:31:382 (1) - 去掉开头whistler，改为结尾whistler
00:37:382 (2) - 同上
01:04:382 (4) - 加finish
01:04:982 (1) - 去掉finish
01:09:782 (1) - 去掉开头whistler，改为结尾whistler
01:15:782 (3) - 同上
03:44:882 (4) - 去掉whistler

❤ 【Shinki's Easy】 diff

SPOILER

00:40:382 (3) - 加whistler？
01:01:382 (3) - 去掉whistler？
01:42:182 (3) - 去掉whistler？
01:42:782 (4) - 加whistler？
01:51:782 (2) - 最后一拍去掉whistler？
02:00:182 (1) - spinner尾部加finish？
02:21:782 (1,1) - 这两个的音效我也找不出什么好点的来，不过听着不太好
02:25:982 (2) - 尾部whistler
02:26:582 (1) - 去掉whistler
02:27:182 (2) - 加上whistler
02:27:782 (3) - 去掉whistler
02:28:382 (4) - 加上whistler
02:31:382 (1,1,1) - 这3个跟之前的一样，听着不舒服但是没有好办法
02:45:782 (3) - 去掉头部whistler，在尾部加上whistler
02:48:182 (1) - 去掉最后一拍whistler
02:52:382 (2) - 加whistler
03:04:382 (3) - 加whistler
03:07:382 (1,1,2,3) - 音效微别扭
03:28:382 (2) - 加whistler
03:36:182 (1) - 去掉whistler
03:36:782 (2) - 加上whistler
03:37:382 (3) - 去掉whistler
03:37:982 (4) - 加上whistler
03:49:382 (2) - 去掉最后一拍whistler
03:52:982 (3) - 去掉开头whistler

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note摆放毫无问题，但是在hitsound上多下下功夫。
因为hitsound是个比较主观的东西，所以我的音效mod只是建议。
继续加油

新人modder，以上modding仅个人建议。

S h i o n

1,053 posts

Joined July 2010

S h i o n 2011-11-17T08:46:26+00:00

你好~ （from queue )

好文艺的图根本找不到什么不合适的...

Flower的
02:59:282 (3,1) 这里和后面的03:18:632 (4,1) 相比少了一个note .. 在02:59:432 (x)

no kd please

/me 推倒 326 and runs

bossandy

osu! Alumni

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Joined May 2010

bossandy 2011-11-17T12:23:48+00:00

Hi hi~ 因為我說過所以我來mod瞜!!~

mod 2 diff 抱歉...

Normal:

SPOILER

00:47:882 (5) - 刪除?
00:50:282 (5) - ^
00:54:182 (5) - 中間刪除whistle
00:57:482 (4) - 刪除?
00:59:882 (5) - ^
01:51:782 (5) - 中間刪除whistle
02:02:582 (1) - 聲音降到65%
02:49:982 (3) - 加個note並加clap
03:30:182 (5) - 中間刪除whistle
03:58:982 (3) - 用成這樣我覺得比較好>_<

Flower:

SPOILER

00:40:082 (3,5,7) - NC?
01:11:282 (3) - 來回加一次

能找到的就這些了
做得太好了
Skin也不錯!
這音效你可以試試感覺更好 ( 個人認為>_<
Star!!!~~

Download: soft-hitwhistle.7z

vivicat

618 posts

Joined February 2010

vivicat 2011-11-19T05:10:20+00:00

All suggestion >A</

SPOILER

- 整体音效音量偏大了
- 皮肤很好看 ~~不过approachcircle.png连打的时候稍微有点看不清是几个这个不重要你可以无视~~
- ~~感觉音效如果再搭配上normal-hitnormal打鼓点会更好不过这个工作量貌似大了你可以无视~~

[Flower]
00:38:582(1,2,3,4) - 间距稍微加大，不然和后面看上去一样实际不一样略坑爹
00:45:782(1,2,3,4) - 4个一组多好看。。。为什么把4给扭过来啊没地方了的话把前面2和3往下移一点也可以吧=A=
00:47:882(4) - ctrl+r因为感觉这个是和前面一组不是后面
00:56:582(1,2,3,4,5) - 这一组放远些？试试264,152
00:58:082(1,2,3,4,5) - =~=这里开始的这一段说着太麻烦我排好了你看下osu文件吧(还有后面的02:21:782这里开始的部分)
01:09:632(6) - nc,后面的nc去掉
01:11:582(5) - 开头whistle
01:12:782(3,1,5) - whistle
01:17:582 - ^
01:18:182(1,3) - 开头whistle
01:33:632(6) - nc,后面的nc去掉
01:36:782(3) - whistle
01:55:382(3) - ^
01:57:782(3) - ^

[Normal]
01:15:182(x) - add a note here
03:26:582(1,2,3) - 结尾whistle

[Easy]
fine

非常有特色的图诶很赞加油=w=/

Download: v.rar

JauiPlaY

1,287 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

JauiPlaY 2011-11-19T15:07:25+00:00

Hello guys~
Thanks for your modding! And updated for now~

Kotone

2,402 posts

Joined August 2008

Kotone 2011-11-19T16:07:39+00:00

JauiPlaY wrote:
And this is a present for that guy

guy.so gay

tutuhaha

3,000 posts

Joined October 2010

tutuhaha 2011-11-23T07:38:25+00:00

IRC↓

IRC之苦逼的45分钟

01:01 *tutuhaha is editing (DJ Okawari - Flower Dance)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/33688]
01:02 <JauiPlaY> : 為什麼你們回覆了以后我沒有郵件通知????
01:02 <tutuhaha> : easy
01:02 <JauiPlaY> : =A=好奇怪啊
01:02 <tutuhaha> : 00:40:382 (3) - 还是加whistle
01:02 <JauiPlaY> : = =你post上去嘛姐姐我也好給kudo
01:02 <tutuhaha> : 00:45:182 (4) - 加个铃声会比较好听
01:03 <tutuhaha> : 闭嘴T_,T我懒先IRC，心脏不好现在
01:03 <JauiPlaY> : = =
01:03 <JauiPlaY> : 好吧回頭記得savelog
01:04 <tutuhaha> : 01:13:982 (3) - 还是加个circle比较好然后加clap，不然好像缺了什么T_,T
01:05 <tutuhaha> : 01:51:782 (2) - 这个后面的铃声稍许刺耳T_,T
01:06 <tutuhaha> : 02:21:782 (1,1) - 这两个的铃声加在结尾感觉会比较好T_,T
01:07 <tutuhaha> : 02:31:382 (1,1,1) - 同上T_,T
01:07 <tutuhaha> : 02:38:582 (1) - 对easy来说好像太短了T_,T
01:07 <JauiPlaY> : T_,T
01:08 <tutuhaha> : 03:07:382 (1,1) - 这种节奏总觉得新手貌似反应不过来T_,T
01:09 <tutuhaha> : 03:30:182 (4) - 尾部加whistleT_,T
01:09 <tutuhaha> : 03:34:982 (2,1) - 和刚才那个一样T_,T
01:10 <tutuhaha> : 03:44:582 (1) - 铃声的放置地点好像有点怪T_,T
01:10 <tutuhaha> : 03:54:182 (1) - 同上T_,T
01:10 <JauiPlaY> : T_,T
01:10 <tutuhaha> : easy最后的哪根绿线不需要T_,T
01:12 <tutuhaha> : Normal/Blossom
01:12 <tutuhaha> : 00:55:382 (1) - 刺耳的要死把finish去掉吧T_,T
01:13 <tutuhaha> : 01:04:982 (1) - 这个用SC2的finish较好T_,T
01:13 <JauiPlaY> : hello,其實那個綠線是需要的
01:13 <tutuhaha> : 那就不删T_,T
01:14 <JauiPlaY> : = =
01:14 <tutuhaha> : 01:37:682 (4,6) - 这俩铃声去掉后听着比较好一点T_,T
01:15 <tutuhaha> : 01:52:982 (1) - 太刺耳了假如真想加finish的话就降音T_,T
01:16 <tutuhaha> : 02:21:782 (1,2,3,4) - 这里不变个色么T_,T
01:16 <tutuhaha> : 02:26:582 (1,2,3,4) - 同上T_,T
01:16 <tutuhaha> : 后面还有俩也同上T_,T
01:17 <tutuhaha> : 02:38:582 (1) - +FINISH T_,T
01:17 <tutuhaha> : 02:58:982 (3) - 尾部的那个clap换成whistle会比较好T_,T
01:18 <JauiPlaY> : T_,T
01:18 <tutuhaha> : 03:02:582 (1) - +whistleT_,T
01:18 <tutuhaha> : 03:09:782 (1,2,3,4) - 变色T_,T?
01:19 <tutuhaha> : 03:27:782 (2) - +whistle
01:19 <tutuhaha> : T_,T
01:19 <JauiPlaY> : T_,T神modder
01:20 <tutuhaha> : 03:37:382 (2) - 就算你夸我我心脏还是有问题的,+whistleT_,T
01:20 <tutuhaha> : 03:40:982 (1) - 去掉finish,太重T_,T
01:21 <tutuhaha> : Flower
01:22 <tutuhaha> : 00:33:082 (6) - 尾部加whistle会比较好T_,T
01:22 <tutuhaha> : 00:39:782 (1) - 加whistle会比较好T_,T
01:22 <JauiPlaY> : T_,T神心臟
01:23 <tutuhaha> : 00:54:182 (1) - 夸心脏也没用，加whistle会比较好T_,T
01:23 <tutuhaha> : 00:55:382 (1) - 刺耳不说了T_,T
01:25 <tutuhaha> : 01:36:782 (3) - 加个whistle会比较好T_,T
01:27 <tutuhaha> : 01:43:982 (3) - 同上T_,T
01:28 <tutuhaha> : 02:38:582 (1) - 听了半天我还是觉得红鞋结尾比较好T_,T
01:28 <tutuhaha> : *线T_,T
01:29 <JauiPlaY> : T_,T神腐妹子
01:30 <tutuhaha> : 03:22:382 (3) - +whistleT_,T
01:31 <tutuhaha> : 03:58:082 (2) - 这边还是加个circle比较好T_,T
01:31 <tutuhaha> : 最后T_,T
01:32 <tutuhaha> : easy的设定比normal还低这是不好的T_,T
01:32 <tutuhaha> : 斟酌着加加减减就好T_,T
01:32 <JauiPlaY> : .
01:32 <tutuhaha> : 最后的最后T_,T
01:32 <JauiPlaY> : easy不是本來設定就比nm低么...
01:33 <tutuhaha> : JPY下次没2KD我坚决不接modT_,T..........脖子疼死了
01:33 <tutuhaha> : 口误不给啊T_,T！
01:33 <JauiPlaY> : = =那你本來想說什么
01:33 <JauiPlaY> : 趕快去post就有2kd了
01:33 <tutuhaha> : 【改】normal设定比easy的设定低T_,T
01:33 <JauiPlaY> : 那個設定
01:34 <JauiPlaY> : 哪個
01:34 <tutuhaha> : Shinki的HP和OD都比BLOSSOM高T_,T
01:34 <tutuhaha> : 苦逼脸mod结束

神mapper下次都别找我modT_,T
我是被害人→T_,T←

Kotone

2,402 posts

Joined August 2008

Kotone 2011-11-25T11:21:10+00:00

I remember

General
納尼莫奈

Baka326
注意一下._. 音效加的規律點
00:45:182 (4) - 強烈建議加sc2 clap
00:57:782 (1) - nazi 可以畫圓點
01:00:182 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡還是24whistle吧
01:06:182 (1) - whistle
01:12:182 (1) - 尾whistle
01:17:582 (2) - whistle
01:22:682 (2) - 尾去whistle
01:23:582 (3) - whistle._.
咦 whistle是故意的?不是的話後面的都改24whistle吧._.這些我不特别指出來了
01:28:982 (1) - whistle
01:38:582 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - 白線都whistle,(4)切sc2 clap
02:21:782 (1,1) - 紅線whistle去掉,白線whistle 後面的都是直到02:32:582 (1) -
02:33:782 (1) - 除sliderbody全加whistle
02:37:382 (2) - whistle

Blossom
02:58:982 (3) - 尾去clap加whistle
哇難得好整齊.-.

Flower
鋼琴solo的地方可以加多點whistle..
02:30:782 - 加音沒音略囧
02:49:982 - ^
03:09:482 (1) - ....尾去clap,noisy
03:50:432 (1) - ..........去clap
03:59:582 (1) - 這根本是嘈音
感覺whistle不夠然後我覺得只有5角形是花...

M a n a

171 posts

Joined July 2011

M a n a 2011-11-27T04:51:40+00:00

[Shinki's Infloresecen]

01:43:328 (1) - Add finish at the begining?
03:19:532 - Useless breaktime i guess?
03:21:782 (1) - Add finish at the begining?
03:30:782 (4) - Add whistle at the end?
03:40:982 (1) - Add finish?
Overall nice~

[Blossom]

Nice diff~

[Flower]

00:28:382 (6) - I don't like if (5) overlap the (6) sliderbody.
Overall nice~

Nice song and map!><
I want to give a star but my kudosu is 0 ;A;"
Good luck!

xierbaliti

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xierbaliti 2011-12-10T07:27:25+00:00

-General-
TAG不加samuel326?

-Flower-
00:32:882 (4,5,6) - 这换成4个circle打着似乎更有感觉 ._. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/196488
02:31:082 (2) - 结尾略吵把finish去了?
02:59:282 (3) - 这里换成一个往返4次的slider似乎会比较好而且我怎么感觉这种slider听着有些奇怪..
03:09:482 (1) - 结尾clap听上去没啥用
03:18:782 (1) - 也是听起来奇怪去掉折返似乎比较好
03:37:382 (1) - 开头+whistle?

EDIT: seems good now, bubbled!

JauiPlaY

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Topic Starter

JauiPlaY 2011-12-11T14:39:40+00:00

Thanks xier and so many modders!

Really, thank you very much~

spboxer3

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spboxer3 2011-12-12T02:34:33+00:00

哭了你也泡了!!!那我的flower dance怎麼辦Q_Q

narakucrimson

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narakucrimson 2011-12-13T16:11:22+00:00

Hi there!

You need to force a custom slider border colour since you are using a custom hitcircle. Some soft gray might work~
In [Shinki's Inclorecence], the third kiai ends at 03:40:907 - while it does end at 03:40:832 -. Of course this is not a big deal but perhaps you can fix it now that you have the chance to
Why so many combo colours? xD It's rather excesive imo but... It's ok if you like it, or if you had any purpose for doing it.
About the slider ball, 6 frames (images) might be too few. It doesn't create the impression of "spinning". Try to make the rotations smaller from one image to another and of course add some more.
Again, this is accesory, if you like it as it is it's ok.

Do that and call me back~

JauiPlaY

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Topic Starter

JauiPlaY 2011-12-14T06:13:31+00:00

narakucrimson wrote:
You need to force a custom slider border colour since you are using a custom hitcircle. Some soft gray might work~Awesome! To be honest, can't find a cooler idea.
In [Shinki's Inclorecence], the third kiai ends at 03:40:907 - while it does end at 03:40:832 -. Of course this is not a big deal but perhaps you can fix it now that you have the chance to Sure.
Why so many combo colours? xD It's rather excesive imo but... It's ok if you like it, or if you had any purpose for doing it.Well, I just wanna that be...more colorful XD
About the slider ball, 6 frames (images) might be too few. It doesn't create the impression of "spinning". Try to make the rotations smaller from one image to another and of course add some more.Okay, 10 images for now.

Thanks a lot and updated! Also did some tiny modification.

narakucrimson

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narakucrimson 2011-12-14T13:26:05+00:00

2nd check!

[Shinki's Inflorecence]

01:51:782 (2) - I found this rather difficult to read. There were sooo many sliders with just 1 repetition that I totally thought that this would have 1 too. Consider doing that? And since I mentioned that one...
00:58:982 (2,1) - Perhaps I should say something about this one too. Can be a little confusing imo, try some other pattern that doesn't involve 2 repetitions (1 would be ok).
03:07:382 (1,1) - As an example, it totally fits here! You have to be careful were you place things so that they work
(that means that you don't have to change anything here lol)
03:44:582 (1) - Again, here it looks rather confusing. Consider using just one repetition instead of 3.

[Flower]

01:01:382 (1) - This, being before the stream, somehow manages to make me combo break every time I test it. I'd say there is something wrong, and actually, there is no sound in the music at the 1/8. You should remove this and replace it with some circles maybe.
01:30:482 (4,5,6,7) - Imo, this spacing might be confusing since you used a similar one at 01:31:382 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) -, when they are not spaced equally in the timeline. Consider transforming this into a slider with repetitions.
01:58:982 (1) - Same as in 01:01:382 (1) -.
02:31:082 (2) - New combo please?
02:59:282 (3) - Again, same as in 01:01:382 (1) -. The 1/8s aren't needed.

All right, that's all! No kudosu please!
Call me back later

Edit:
All right everything looks good now I think. There are some flower patterns in [Flower] that touch the HP bar a little but I guess I can overlook that because you'd have to remap everything. Hope I don't get scolded for that

So then, this is now ranked!

tutuhaha

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tutuhaha 2011-12-14T23:23:31+00:00

恭喜恭喜恭喜恭喜！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！
XD cool-------------------------------------------------------------Flower！！！！！！！！！！！！

Megurine Luka

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Megurine Luka 2011-12-14T23:59:45+00:00

shen ma po

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