Equivalent's mod via #modreqs:
General:->Your custom hitclap is quite low in sound, thus making it blend with the music drum. I see you using 100% here as well just to make loud enough, but for me it still blend with the drum of the song.
->Maybe remove countdown? I see it quite annoying
->Your kiai time is like 1/2 of the map, maybe remove the middle kiai time?
->Move your preview time to 00:59:622. Right now the preview sound like "Aight.... I like to..." which is not sound very nice to hear as a preview.
->There is a trace offset changes xD, where the break line "the shading line of break" clearly show it and there are several green line that are not snap to the actual time:
--->00:59:204
--->01:25:695
--->01:53:833
--->02:20:315
I suggest you fix this as those line were related to the volume of your hitsound.
Kiai time and hitsound volume suggestion:normal-hitclap that I've been amplify for a clearer hitsound
By using above hitsound I give you:
Highlighted in this matter:
03:13:277 (T) Kiai time shoud end here. I dont think kiai end time is appropriate drop on blue tick, it doesn't suit well
03:26:518 (T) I think kiai time end here sound better.
Quiet:01:45:139 (2) Too near to the HP bar
01:51:760 (2) Might consider lift this up a little bit, where when you play hardrock mod, this note will touch the hp bar
02:37:070 (1) I don't really agree with double spinner for the easiest diff, it quite annoying to spin for a beginner
02:53:415 (1) ^
Murmur:02:04:174 (X) add note here. Where it feel empty without note here
02:17:415 (X) ^
It quite good for this diff, accept Im not a fans of double spinner especially in normal/easy diff
Barely audible:(Hp drain +1, OD-1 please) Where I see it not relevant to make OD 7 just to make it hard and HP 4 so player didn't die fast. In the end player end up having a bad score (C rank for example) with high OD but low HP.
01:54:243 (1,2,3) Im not the fans of this pattern, for me it quite confusing, but it nothing wrong though. Just voicing out
02:00:863 (1,2) I don't really like the note placement here, where the hitburst from end of (1) cover the reverse arrow on (2)partially, thus making me confuse as a slider with no reverse arrow.
02:03:760 (1) Start the spinner here
02:14:105 (1,2) same comment as 2:00:863
02:17:001 (1) start spinner here
02:40:174 (1,1) This can be polished more in shape. Nothing is wrong, but it will be look nicer if you willing to go extra mile to polish it
Silent:01:22:174 (8) Suggesting end of slider (8) to be moved toward center of spinner instead going outside
01:44:932 (3) this note drop on 1/6, Is it on purpose? Im thinking it more to error after the offset changes rather than on purpose because the song is using 4 beat for the whole time.
01:51:656 (1) ^
02:53:415 (1) <3 A nice replacement for a spinner. Why dont you put it on easy diff?
That all from me <3
Have a star and goodluck in ranking this. I love this song
On the sidenotes: Your map is the first that I modded pattern so far <3, before this I just mod technically. How to say, my first mod on pattern. Sorry if it doesn't help much
Edit: Added modding on Silent, I totally forgot about that diff >.<