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Topic Starter
pieguyn
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, August 21, 2011 at 9:07:21 AM

Artist: IOSYS
Title: twilight*twinkle
Source: Touhou
Tags: aya shameimaru shihori the youkai mountain mysterious onosakihito
BPM: 175
Filesize: 7953kb
Play Time: 04:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.88 stars, 485 notes)
  2. Lunatic (5 stars, 714 notes)
  3. Normal (2.99 stars, 255 notes)
  4. Ono's Taiko Oni (4.89 stars, 1946 notes)
Download: IOSYS - twilight*twinkle
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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o.o

Normal, Hard, Lunatic done
Taiko by OnosakiHito

Hope everyone enjoys this :)

Please redownload if you downloaded before 8/21/2011 (new mp3+bg)
Coro
Star-ed~
Topic Starter
pieguyn
Thanks for the star :)

[Hard] added, now everything is done. :)
fanzhen0019
\:D/Nice song

I know nazi only ←ignore this x_x

Nice BG XD
-General-
Your mp3's bitrate is 320kbps, which is not really rankable :/

-Normal-
AR+1?
03:17:965 (1) - *nazi* up 1 grid?(grid4

-Hard-
01:02:537 (2) - move down 1grid and left 1grid? (grid3

-Lunatic-
<3 this diff :3
01:56:537 (4) - disabled grid snap then stack it

It's mapped really well
Can't find anyting else XD
STAR!
Kotone
:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
sorry again :(
Topic Starter
pieguyn

karenying wrote:

:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
sorry again :(
Thanks for the star~ It's perfectly fine by the way, don't worry about it :)

fanzhen0019 wrote:

\:D/Nice song

I know nazi only ←ignore this x_x

Nice BG XD
-General-
Your mp3's bitrate is 320kbps, which is not really rankable :/ Oops, I'll fix it later :?

-Normal-
AR+1? done~
03:17:965 (1) - *nazi* up 1 grid?(grid4 Done

-Hard-
01:02:537 (2) - move down 1grid and left 1grid? (grid3 I think this one is fine as is

-Lunatic-
<3 this diff :3 thanks~ :)
01:56:537 (4) - disabled grid snap then stack it O_O good eye, changed~

It's mapped really well
Can't find anyting else XD
STAR! Thanks for mod+star :)
Kotone
tag:Shihori The Youkai Mountain Mysterious

~
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MMzz
Can I make a taiko difficulty please? :3

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Topic Starter
pieguyn

karenying wrote:

tag:Shihori The Youkai Mountain Mysterious Updated

~ thanks~ :)
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MMzz wrote:

Can I make a taiko difficulty please? :3

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Sorry, OnosakiHito is already making a taiko :?

Thanks for the star though~ :)
OnosakiHito
Okay, finished the Taiko guest diff.~ Hope you like it.^^
Please add my name into the TAG's as always, so i can see you newest updates~




Download: IOSYS - twilighttwinkle (pieguy1372) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu
Topic Starter
pieguyn
Awesome, thanks OnosakiHito~ :)
Breeze
Hi There

[Hard]
  1. 00:23:022 (3), 00:24:394 (3), 00:25:765 (3), 00:27:137 (3), 00:28:508 (3), 00:29:880 (3), and so on...
    These blue tick repeat sounds really bad, it should repeat at the previous red tick lol
  2. 00:48:480 (1,2) - Why here use soft hitsound? Didn't fit music IMO
  3. 01:28:251 (1), 01:29:622 (1), 01:30:994 (1), 01:32:365 (1) - Add finish
  4. 01:49:165 (2,3) - Remove clap, leave whistle is fine enough
  5. 02:00:137 (2,4) - Remove clap
  6. 03:06:994 spinner - Add finish
  7. 04:01:851 (1), 04:03:222 (1), 04:04:594 (1), 04:05:965 (1) - Add finish
[Lunatic]
  1. 01:00:822 (1) - Add finish
  2. 01:49:165 (2) - Remove clap
  3. 01:52:422 (5) - Oh, wow, this jump is too far IMO
  4. 04:22:765 (2) - Remove clap
nice map
star
Breeze
Hi There

[Hard]
  1. 00:23:022 (3), 00:24:394 (3), 00:25:765 (3), 00:27:137 (3), 00:28:508 (3), 00:29:880 (3), and so on...
    These blue tick repeat sounds really bad, it should repeat at the previous red tick lol
  2. 00:48:480 (1,2) - Why here use soft hitsound? Didn't fit music IMO
  3. 01:28:251 (1), 01:29:622 (1), 01:30:994 (1), 01:32:365 (1) - Add finish
  4. 01:49:165 (2,3) - Remove clap, leave whistle is fine enough
  5. 02:00:137 (2,4) - Remove clap
  6. 03:06:994 spinner - Add finish
  7. 04:01:851 (1), 04:03:222 (1), 04:04:594 (1), 04:05:965 (1) - Add finish
[Lunatic]
  1. 01:00:822 (1) - Add finish
  2. 01:49:165 (2) - Remove clap
  3. 01:52:422 (5) - Oh, wow, this jump is too far IMO
  4. 04:22:765 (2) - Remove clap
nice map
star
Topic Starter
pieguyn

Breeze wrote:

Hi There

[Hard]
  1. 00:23:022 (3), 00:24:394 (3), 00:25:765 (3), 00:27:137 (3), 00:28:508 (3), 00:29:880 (3), and so on...
    These blue tick repeat sounds really bad, it should repeat at the previous red tick lol I think it's fine as is, but I'll change it if more people want me to~
  2. 00:48:480 (1,2) - Why here use soft hitsound? Didn't fit music IMO I think it's fine as is :?
  3. 01:28:251 (1), 01:29:622 (1), 01:30:994 (1), 01:32:365 (1) - Add finish Done~
  4. 01:49:165 (2,3) - Remove clap, leave whistle is fine enough Done
  5. 02:00:137 (2,4) - Remove clap Done
  6. 03:06:994 spinner - Add finish Added
  7. 04:01:851 (1), 04:03:222 (1), 04:04:594 (1), 04:05:965 (1) - Add finish Added~
[Lunatic]
  1. 01:00:822 (1) - Add finish Done
  2. 01:49:165 (2) - Remove clap Done
  3. 01:52:422 (5) - Oh, wow, this jump is too far IMO that was the best place I found to put that note :? I'll keep it as is for now, but I'll change it if more people want
  4. 04:22:765 (2) - Remove clap Done
nice map
star thanks for mod+star :)
- Suima -
As you quest in my queue
General Speaking:
There are nothing big problem in your map.
But four minutes is too long, how about end in 3:06:994?
Topic Starter
pieguyn

kevin840310 wrote:

As you quest in my queue
General Speaking:
There are nothing big problem in your map.
But four minutes is too long, how about end in 3:06:994? :? I prefer to end it where it ends now

thanks for checking it~ :)
DeadAlready
>< also don't have advices here too(?)
so have a star for nice map~ :3
Zelos
Lazy nearly kicked in when I saw those super long diffs but I must follow through with my promise.

Folder:
Your mp3 is 320 kbps which is not allowed. Re-encode it down to 192. You can ask me in irc if you want me to do it. (heads up offset may change but its possible it wont due to 320->192)

Timing:
your offset is 8 ms early. fix this please.

I must say you put a lot of effort into making 3 4 and a half minute maps. Nice.

Normal:
00:33:394 (1,2) - make these aligned like this?


01:35:108 (3,4) - make 4 horizontally parallel from note 3 since it really isn't a jump anyway given the timing distance?
This Normal diff is pretty flawless if you ask me.

Hard:
00:30:308 (4) - move this to the left 1 grid point so you can make that triangle I see you were going for. (its also what you did on previous ones)
Another flawless one.

Taiko diff:
more than 3 unique slider speeds used. I suppose its not so bad since its taiko anyway.
Very intricate use of dons and kats here. Like+

Lunatic:
Saw nothing wrong here.

Given the current challenge situation, I dunno if its a good thing or a bad thing if i didn't find to much wrong.
anyways very nice map!
Most interesting touhou remix ive heard in a long while.
Cirno
2 Challenge Mods in a row lol
Anyway hi

[General]
As Zelos already said, your MP3 needs compression.
The score gap between [Normal] and [Hard] is quite big, as [Normal] itself is pretty easy, you might want to rename [Normal] to [Easy] and get a guest normal (or make your own, though I think you must have been worn out mapping this 4.5 mins song) that lie in the 4mil-6mil range.

[Normal]
01:58:422 (1) - this slowdown can be a bit hard for players of [Normal] level. Yes it has a tick but not much of the players count ticks. You might consider making it 1.0x and stacking a circle under it.
02:58:765 (1,2,3) - imo it would be better if you followed the rhythm of 02:56:022 (1,2,3), but it's just me.
04:13:508 (2) - [nazi] this one is touching the HP bar, move down a bit

[Hard]
AR7 is a bit low for this imo, try AR8?
03:17:965 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - you might want to add whistles to those slider heads as you did in [Lunatic].
04:06:480 (3) - [nazi] a grid right can make the blanket look much better o.o
04:33:051 (2) - a 5-note 1/4 stream could actually be easier to get all 300s than this imo

[Lunatic]
Nothing much wrong in this diff, just some suggestions and graphical nazi:
00:34:422 (7) - [nazi] this slider's end touched the HP bar a bit, which I suppose is no longer allowed.
00:35:280 (4,5,6) - [nazi] (2,3,6) could be made a little bit better looking by moving those three objects up and right a bit
00:46:080 (2,3) - imo these should be made visually the same spacing as 00:45:051 (2,3,4,5) (inb4 Shinxyn). That would look a bit better
00:48:822 (2,3) - ^
01:22:251 (4) - maybe add a whistle at 01:22:422 as well? (whistle+clap)
01:27:908 (5) - ^
01:58:422 (1,1,1) - I think something like this fits the music better..?
04:13:165 (2) - [nazi] move left a bit so the slider end is perfectly hidden
04:32:022 (1,1,1) - same suggestions as the last time
04:33:051 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is going down while the pitch is going up, sort of strange. To prevent being identical to the last use of this, maybe you could try flipping horizontally instead of vertically?

Pretty decent map out there!

Dotsu
Here’s my mod XD

[General]


  • Your mp3 file is 320kbps.Please compress it
    And your BG image is too big. I converted it to jpg for you
    (Also I think the BG doesn’t fit the song
    Kiai time: 01:39:222 - 02:01:165
    04:12:822 - -04:34:765
    The blue combo color is a bit hard to see when the note appears on top right corner
[Normal]


  • 01:34:422 (2): Remove finish
    01:49:165 (4): Remove clap
    02:00:137 (2,4): ^
    02:01:165 (1): Remove finish
    02:28:594 (2): New combo
    04:08:022 (2): Remove finish
    04:22:765 (3): Remove clap
    04:33:737 (2,4): ^
    04:34:765 (1): ^
[Hard]


  • 00:38:880 (1,2): A bit close
    01:16:080 : Add a circle
    02:01:165 (1): Remove finish
    04:34:765 (1): ^
[Lunatic]
I tried add 1 to HP and guess what happened ? XD The score increased 4.3million XDXDXD

  • 01:03:222 (1,2,1): This jump is too sudden in my opinion
    02:01:165 (1): Remove finish
    04:34:765 (1): ^
Cool map

STAR
:D
Cirno
lol, the magic of organized M4M with MAT modding as an award

Now we gonna wait for Zelos to score mods :/
Topic Starter
pieguyn
thanks quintitem and OnosakiHito for the stars~ :)

Zelos wrote:

Lazy nearly kicked in when I saw those super long diffs but I must follow through with my promise

Folder:
Your mp3 is 320 kbps which is not allowed. Re-encode it down to 192. You can ask me in irc if you want me to do it. (heads up offset may change but its possible it wont due to 320->192) oops, I knew about this, was too lazy to fix it, and then forgot. Oh well, it should be fixed now

Timing:
your offset is 8 ms early. fix this please. fixed, but then I had to retime it anyway so it might still be off :cry:

I must say you put a lot of effort into making 3 4 and a half minute maps. Nice.

Normal:
00:33:394 (1,2) - make these aligned like this? that is aligned as much as it was previously...oh well, aligned with grid size 4


01:35:108 (3,4) - make 4 horizontally parallel from note 3 since it really isn't a jump anyway given the timing distance? I like it as is
This Normal diff is pretty flawless if you ask me.

Hard:
00:30:308 (4) - move this to the left 1 grid point so you can make that triangle I see you were going for. (its also what you did on previous ones) Changed
Another flawless one.

Taiko diff:
more than 3 unique slider speeds used. I suppose its not so bad since its taiko anyway. this is just a guideline, so I think it's fine~
Very intricate use of dons and kats here. Like+

Lunatic:
Saw nothing wrong here.

Given the current challenge situation, I dunno if its a good thing or a bad thing if i didn't find to much wrong.
anyways very nice map! thanks for mod~ :)
Most interesting touhou remix ive heard in a long while.

Cirno wrote:

2 Challenge Mods in a row lol
Anyway hi

[General]
As Zelos already said, your MP3 needs compression. fixed
The score gap between [Normal] and [Hard] is quite big, as [Normal] itself is pretty easy, you might want to rename [Normal] to [Easy] and get a guest normal (or make your own, though I think you must have been worn out mapping this 4.5 mins song) that lie in the 4mil-6mil range. it's 1.6mil, 9mil, and 17mil, which has a nice range, so I think it should be fine? I'm not sure :?

[Normal]
01:58:422 (1) - this slowdown can be a bit hard for players of [Normal] level. Yes it has a tick but not much of the players count ticks. You might consider making it 1.0x and stacking a circle under it. I think it should be fine as is
02:58:765 (1,2,3) - imo it would be better if you followed the rhythm of 02:56:022 (1,2,3), but it's just me. changed
04:13:508 (2) - [nazi] this one is touching the HP bar, move down a bit fixed

[Hard]
AR7 is a bit low for this imo, try AR8? I agree but I have to use AR7 for [Hard] diff...
03:17:965 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - you might want to add whistles to those slider heads as you did in [Lunatic]. added
04:06:480 (3) - [nazi] a grid right can make the blanket look much better o.o fixed
04:33:051 (2) - a 5-note 1/4 stream could actually be easier to get all 300s than this imo okay, changed~

[Lunatic]
Nothing much wrong in this diff, just some suggestions and graphical nazi:
00:34:422 (7) - [nazi] this slider's end touched the HP bar a bit, which I suppose is no longer allowed. fixed
00:35:280 (4,5,6) - [nazi] (2,3,6) could be made a little bit better looking by moving those three objects up and right a bit fixed
Image
[attachment=0:fc5ce]scs1.JPG[/attachment:fc5ce]
00:46:080 (2,3) - imo these should be made visually the same spacing as 00:45:051 (2,3,4,5) (inb4 Shinxyn). That would look a bit better I did that so people can tell they're anti-jumps, so I'm keeping it for now. If more people want me to, I'll change it~ :)
00:48:822 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:22:251 (4) - maybe add a whistle at 01:22:422 as well? (whistle+clap) can't decide whether to do this or not :o I've kept it, but I'll change it if more people want
01:27:908 (5) - ^ ^
01:58:422 (1,1,1) - I think something like this fits the music better..? I would rather map the 1/1 beats here, so I've kept it as is
Image
[attachment=1:fc5ce]s2.JPG[/attachment:fc5ce]
04:13:165 (2) - [nazi] move left a bit so the slider end is perfectly hidden fixed
04:32:022 (1,1,1) - same suggestions as the last time same
04:33:051 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is going down while the pitch is going up, sort of strange. To prevent being identical to the last use of this, maybe you could try flipping horizontally instead of vertically? changed

Pretty decent map out there! thanks for mod~ :)

impossiblexu wrote:

Here’s my mod XD

[General]


  • Your mp3 file is 320kbps.Please compress it fixed
    And your BG image is too big. I converted it to jpg for you awesome, thanks :)
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    [attachment=0:fc5ce]twilight_twinkle.jpg[/attachment:fc5ce]
    (Also I think the BG doesn’t fit the song it's a remix of aya's theme, I think :?
    Kiai time: 01:39:222 - 02:01:165 I think it should be fine as is :?
    04:12:822 - -04:34:765 ^
    The blue combo color is a bit hard to see when the note appears on top right corner I think it should be fine as is
[Normal]


  • 01:34:422 (2): Remove finish actually I had remembered to do that before reading this XD
    01:49:165 (4): Remove clap done
    02:00:137 (2,4): ^ done
    02:01:165 (1): Remove finish removed
    02:28:594 (2): New combo done
    04:08:022 (2): Remove finish same as before, rofl
    04:22:765 (3): Remove clap done
    04:33:737 (2,4): ^ done
    04:34:765 (1): ^ removed
[Hard]


  • 00:38:880 (1,2): A bit close I think it should be fine, it's easy to read and looks nice IMO
    01:16:080 : Add a circle I think this is fine as is
    02:01:165 (1): Remove finish removed
    04:34:765 (1): ^ removed
[Lunatic]
I tried add 1 to HP and guess what happened ? XD The score increased 4.3million XDXDXD hehehe 8-)

  • 01:03:222 (1,2,1): This jump is too sudden in my opinion I like this part :?
    02:01:165 (1): Remove finish removed
    04:34:765 (1): ^ removed~
Cool map

STAR thanks for mod+star~ :)
:D
*holds breath and full submits*
OnosakiHito
MP3 update file~

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Download: IOSYS - twilighttwinkle (pieguy1372) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu
Topic Starter
pieguyn
updated~ :)

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OnosakiHito
Let's revived it pieguy1372 \o/
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