Kawano Marina - Weight of the World Kowaretasekainouta

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Topic Starter
Lilyanna

Bearsome wrote:

Hi, here from my NM QQQQQ

I think your timing is a bit off - some of the circles appear faster than the instrument. Namely: 00:38:024 (3,4,5,6), 00:24:240 (2,3,4,5,6) 00:35:389 (3,4) 04:20:389 (1,2,3,4,5) 05:21:402 (3,4,1) and so on. Although it appears that it's only in some places, I recommend you check the timing if possible. i got few to check it and they told its rly not that noticable and there nothing i can do about

01:01:740 (5) - I think that slider should be in front of the previous one. why

01:56:875 (6) - That should probably be a circle it does have that 1/8 effect also iwant be expressed differnty from this one 01:57:686 (1) -
since they sound differntly


02:05:794 (4,5,6,7) - uneven spacing between 02:05:794 (4) and 02:05:997 (5)

02:18:362 (5) - I suggest you move the circle a bit lower so that it doesn't overlap the slider and looks better

02:20:389 (1) - Same as above, but higher instead of lower

02:59:105 (5) - Minor thing, but maybe place this one on the same position as 02:58:700 (3)?

03:00:524 (4) - Also suggest moving it a bit to the left/right so that it doesn't overlap the slider

03:09:038 - Hit sounds in this kiai are lowered to 25%, but hit sounds in the two other kiais are at 50%. I think, especially since 03:09:038 isn't that quiet, that you should just make it 50% as well.

03:24:443 (3) - Suggesting you place this on the previous slider's slider end.

04:39:443 (1) - This may be just preference, but I don't think the slider 'stutter' is needed. I can hear the difference in the voice, but the 'stutter' in the slider itself doesn't exactly correspond to anything you can precisely pinpoint in the vocals/music. idk what stutter means but i issume that thing here 04:39:848 - well i mapped the vocals and there there is a strong piano i didnt just want ignore it so i did that shape of slider to express it


Not much, mostly minor stuff. I like the pacing and consistency, the placement is a bit off in some places. Also, this is probably the first japanese song that I actually enjoyed modding ;)
thx for mod no reply is collab part

Kyuukai wrote:

I saw that you need help for metadata
Song name is : The Weight of the World (English) or Kowareta Sekai no Uta [壊レタ世界ノ歌] (Japanese)
The vocalist is : Marina Kawano (河野 マリナ)
Keiichi Okabe (岡部 啓一) composed the song
Source should be : ニーア オートマタ (NieR:Automata in Japanese)

Hope it helped :)
thx u saved me fixed xp
LowAccuracySS

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[ Believing]
Compose
  1. 00:30:929 (3) - ctrl+g?
  2. 00:36:200 (6) - ^
  3. 00:49:173 (8) - ^
  4. 01:11:875 (6,7) - I would change that into a slider
  5. 01:46:943 (1,2) - ctrl+g?
  6. 02:05:794 (4,5,6,7) - I don't understand how you are spacing this- 4 has the exact same amount of emphasis as 5, 6, and 7 but has less spacing.
  7. 02:20:389 (1) - To be honest, I would've expected there to be a slider starting from here to the sliderend of 2. maybe something like this? https://puu.sh/vsUlI/544aa680b9.png
  8. 02:42:687 (3) - Maybe continue what you did at 02:40:457 (2,1,2,3) ?
  9. 03:08:632 (1) - Weaken the decrease in SV to 0.75? here's a visualization- https://puu.sh/vsUC5/32654e7dbe.png
  10. 03:15:119 (4) - x:315 y:200? i'm triggered because that isn't even
  11. 03:25:659 (3) - x:230 y:265?
  12. 03:28:092 (4) - x:365 y:330?
  13. 03:33:565 (2) - x:435 y:260?
  14. 03:43:902 (5) - The beat ends on the blue tick, not a 1/8th tick. I would change the slider into 1/4 or just do a hitcircle there.
  15. 04:01:538 (4) - Why not put this where 04:00:119 (1) was?
  16. 04:05:389 (5) - ctrl+g?
  17. 04:28:497 (1) - There is no beat here (in fact, there's only silence), so why is there a hitcircle? I would just extend (2) to a 7/8th slider
  18. 04:53:633 (2) - x:165 y:160?

Wow. Amazing map. Good luck on ranking!
Fursum
Hello from my queue.

Blind playtest went really well actually, I haven't even listened to the song before, difficulty spikes were okay, my misses were mostly my fault.

[Believing]

Combo colors blend with the storyboard on some occasions.

01:18:767 (1,2) - Blanket could be adjusted a little bit.

02:50:794 (4,5) - Looks weird.

04:42:078 (3,4,5,6) - Could be made more linear.

04:50:186 (2,3) - 3 could be moved a bit down for blanket.

05:33:362 (1) - Spinner could be longer.
Topic Starter
Lilyanna

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Hello from the Queue! Pro mappers are posting on the queue owo
hello there

[ Believing]
Compose
  1. 00:30:929 (3) - ctrl+g?
  2. 00:36:200 (6) - ^ i dont want that oppos
  3. 00:49:173 (8) - ^ i like the current flow cuz it expresses more the vocals
  4. 01:11:875 (6,7) - I would change that into a slider yes it could be but here the piano feels dominant xd
  5. 01:46:943 (1,2) - ctrl+g? but they stacked intentionaly xd to give that pause
  6. 02:05:794 (4,5,6,7) - I don't understand how you are spacing this- 4 has the exact same amount of emphasis as 5, 6, and 7 but has less spacing.
  7. 02:20:389 (1) - To be honest, I would've expected there to be a slider starting from here to the sliderend of 2. maybe something like this? https://puu.sh/vsUlI/544aa680b9.png
  8. 02:42:687 (3) - Maybe continue what you did at 02:40:457 (2,1,2,3) ?
  9. 03:08:632 (1) - Weaken the decrease in SV to 0.75? here's a visualization- https://puu.sh/vsUC5/32654e7dbe.png
  10. 03:15:119 (4) - x:315 y:200? i'm triggered because that isn't even
  11. 03:25:659 (3) - x:230 y:265?
  12. 03:28:092 (4) - x:365 y:330?
  13. 03:33:565 (2) - x:435 y:260?
  14. 03:43:902 (5) - The beat ends on the blue tick, not a 1/8th tick. I would change the slider into 1/4 or just do a hitcircle there.
  15. 04:01:538 (4) - Why not put this where 04:00:119 (1) was? yes true good one now spacing is better x)
  16. 04:05:389 (5) - ctrl+g? no reason to break the flow like that ;w;
  17. 04:28:497 (1) - There is no beat here (in fact, there's only silence), so why is there a hitcircle? I would just extend (2) to a 7/8th slider vocals xd
  18. 04:53:633 (2) - x:165 y:160?fixed

Wow. Amazing map. Good luck on ranking!
thank u alot

Fursum012 wrote:

Hello from my queue. HI

Blind playtest went really well actually, I haven't even listened to the song before, difficulty spikes were okay, my misses were mostly my fault.

[Believing]

Combo colors blend with the storyboard on some occasions. im using default skin idont notice that tbh

01:18:767 (1,2) - Blanket could be adjusted a little bit. true fixed

02:50:794 (4,5) - Looks weird.

04:42:078 (3,4,5,6) - Could be made more linear. fixed

04:50:186 (2,3) - 3 could be moved a bit down for blanket.yes but then it will ruin the 1/2 ds and be confusing so i reshaped the slider

05:33:362 (1) - Spinner could be longer. not rly
thx for mod!
Rizen
23:09 Rizen: did you and kalibe do hitsounds seperately?
23:10 Lilyanna: no
23:10 Lilyanna: i did all hitsounds
23:11 *Lilyanna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1262823 Kawano Marina - Weight of the World Kowaretasekainouta [Believing]]
23:11 Lilyanna: o k tell me
23:11 Rizen: 00:57:686 (3) - whistle for piano
23:11 Rizen: 01:03:362 (3,4,5) - ^
23:11 Rizen: 02:43:092 (1) - ^
23:11 Rizen: 03:20:389 (1,3) - missing custom for claps
23:12 Lilyanna: what u mean?
23:12 Rizen: ^ compared to claps at 01:33:362 (5,7) - they're pretty different so use the same clap sample
23:12 Lilyanna: i did normal claps
23:12 Lilyanna: they dont fit?
23:12 Lilyanna: ok
23:12 Rizen: like
23:12 Rizen: the claps are just different
23:13 Rizen: well
23:13 Lilyanna: i didnt use clap
23:13 Rizen: the first time it's normal sampleset
23:13 Lilyanna: in first one
23:13 Lilyanna: just normal samplesets
23:13 Rizen: but then used clap in second
23:13 Lilyanna: ye
23:13 Rizen: best to stick with one, personally I like the normal samps
23:13 Lilyanna: i removed it xd
23:13 Lilyanna: ye same xd
23:13 Lilyanna: fixed
23:13 Rizen: also
23:13 Lilyanna: 01:20:389 -
23:13 Lilyanna: fixed here same
23:14 Lilyanna: 01:20:997 -
23:14 Lilyanna: xd
23:14 Rizen: for like kalibe's part, u stopped using the finish
23:14 Rizen: e.g. 02:33:362 (1) - vs 00:46:335 (1) -
23:14 Rizen: is this intentional orrrr
23:15 Lilyanna: or im retard
23:15 Lilyanna: then yes im retard xD
23:16 Lilyanna: it shold be whistle+finish right?
23:16 Rizen: yer if u wanted to use that finish hitsound instead of normal samp
23:17 Lilyanna: idk they didnt sound same to me
23:17 Lilyanna: but ill just use finish+whistle
23:18 Rizen: 03:47:957 (1,2,3,4,5) - use norm sampleset as you have done at 03:51:200 (1,2,3,4,5) - ?
23:20 Rizen: 04:00:524 (3) -
23:20 Rizen: change addition to soft?
23:21 Rizen: 04:12:281 (2) - whistle on slider head for piano? also because u did a similar thing at 04:15:524 (2) -
23:22 Rizen: 04:20:389 (1,2,3,4) - these sound kinda out of time with the vocals. would be wise to use a timing point here to snap them to the vocals properly
23:23 Rizen: ^ usually happens when singers sing without instruments in background so they use rhythm
23:23 Lilyanna: !!
23:24 Lilyanna: it does whsitle on head!
23:24 Rizen: o my bad
23:24 Lilyanna: seems
23:24 Lilyanna: to me the vocals snapped fine there
23:25 Rizen: mmm to me sounds like the vocals are a little late
23:26 Rizen: may need a second ear just to be sure
23:26 Lilyanna: u like sb
23:26 Lilyanna: ?
23:26 Lilyanna: i got many ears to check it
23:26 Rizen: I personally don't like the font
23:26 Lilyanna: even pros
23:26 Rizen: doesn't fit the font theme as your GD names font (curvy/fancy)
23:26 Lilyanna: and they said there slightly off but not so noticble and there nothing u can do about
23:27 Lilyanna: ;w;
23:27 Rizen: ah ok, so they were slightly off. I guess that's alrighttt
23:27 Lilyanna: i think ill remove the names
23:27 Lilyanna: of us
23:27 Lilyanna: xd
23:28 Lilyanna: ill see if he can change the font
Mun
this will be short because im bad xd

[Believing]
00:18:970 (5,6,7) - It's entirely personal aesthetic preference depending on what you are going for in the map, but these triangular patterns may look nicer if made equilateral.
00:36:605 (1) - What is this reverse slider following? There is no single track that it starts, finishes, and ends on - vocals start 1/8 beat before it, so it starts on piano, reverses on vocals, and ends on guitar. This is extremely inconsistent rhythm.
00:59:308 (1,2) - it's the most nitpicky thing in the universe, but the latter half of 1 and the first half of 2 are not parallel, but could be made so by rotating 00:59:916 (2) - by 2 degrees.
01:17:957 (2,3) - Considering that the nature of the vocals these 2 sliders are following are so different (2 starts and ends on stressed syllables, but 3 starts on a stressed syllable and ends on nothing), shouldn't they be represented differently? Either visually or rhythmically - considering this is half-BPM, you could extend 01:18:362 (3) - and adapt 01:18:767 (1) - to accommodate this.
01:20:186 - Despite having used circles to represent vocals in different rhythmic patterns earlier in the song, you do not do so here, even when you are already following vocal rhythm. Why is this?
01:33:767 (6,7) - This is the same intensity as 01:33:159 (4,5) - but the spacing is much lower. Why lower it so much instead of remaining consistent?
01:56:875 (6) - Considering that the piano chord has completely played within less than 1/16 of a beat, the end of this slider has no meaning in the music. Either extend it to fit the fact that said piano chord is held, or just use a hit circle.

Honestly, I don't see issues in Kalibe's part, and I can't stand the vocals in the 3rd section, so I'll just curtail it here.

Overall thoughts: has some interesting rhythm choice. Though it does feel a bit contrived at parts, it works. I like the storyboard! Good luck.
Kalibe
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Osuology
[DONT STOP BELIEVING HOLD ON TO THAT FEELING]
00:18:970 (5,6,7) - plz rofl make this a equilateral triangle, it's not atm. 00:19:375 (7) - x:164, y:233 looks much better

00:22:213 (5,6,7) - ^ just fix the triangles lol

04:37:213 (2,3,4,5,1) - WTF HAPPENED TO HER VOICE LMAO

Anyways literally nothing else to point out lol good luck with this
Shmiklak
[Diff]
  1. 00:22:416 (6,7,8) - i hope it is possible to make those ones more straight
  2. 00:20:389 (1,2) - that blanket could be polished
    same goes for 00:40:659 (3,5) - and others
  3. 01:19:848 (2) - I suggest to move this one on 01:19:781 - so it will be much easier to read because placing objects on 1/12 is just stupid and too suddenly because there aren't any similar things. also imo vocal starts on 01:19:781 - not 01:19:848 -
  4. 01:03:362 (3,4,5) - these ones could be emphasised by using more DS to emphasis the piano sounds. with the current ds they feel the same as 01:03:159 (2) -
  5. 01:10:051 (2) - i suggest to change this one into a 1/2 repeat slider to emphasis this 01:10:254 - sound, also it will emphasis the vocals better
    same goes for 01:29:916 (3) - and others
  6. 02:13:902 (1) - I think this rythm would be much better https://puu.sh/vzXHY/264c9bd637.jpg because it emphasises vocals better
    same goes for 02:26:875 (1) - and others
  7. 05:33:362 (1) - imo this spinner could be till 05:39:848 - because music stops there
Topic Starter
Lilyanna

Osuology wrote:

[DONT STOP BELIEVING HOLD ON TO THAT FEELING]
00:18:970 (5,6,7) - plz rofl make this a equilateral triangle, it's not atm. 00:19:375 (7) - x:164, y:233 looks much better

00:22:213 (5,6,7) - ^ just fix the triangles lol

04:37:213 (2,3,4,5,1) - WTF HAPPENED TO HER VOICE LMAO

Anyways literally nothing else to point out lol good luck with this
fixed the triangles i cant fix her voice lol thx

Shmiklak wrote:

[Diff]
  1. 00:22:416 (6,7,8) - i hope it is possible to make those ones more straight fixed previous mod
  2. 00:20:389 (1,2) - that blanket could be polished
    same goes for 00:40:659 (3,5) - and others fixed
  3. 01:19:848 (2) - I suggest to move this one on 01:19:781 - so it will be much easier to read because placing objects on 1/12 is just stupid and too suddenly because there aren't any similar things. also imo vocal starts on 01:19:781 - not 01:19:848 - i want make the drumps clickable and since the tail ends on 1/12 it should be fine also the vocals are close enough to the blue tick doing weird clickable snaps is just uncomfortable for me
  4. 01:03:362 (3,4,5) - these ones could be emphasised by using more DS to emphasis the piano sounds. with the current ds they feel the same as 01:03:159 (2) - ok yes fixed
  5. 01:10:051 (2) - i suggest to change this one into a 1/2 repeat slider to emphasis this 01:10:254 - sound, also it will emphasis the vocals better
    same goes for 01:29:916 (3) - and others that seem little overmapped for me i think the way is mapped is fine already
  6. 02:13:902 (1) - I think this rythm would be much better https://puu.sh/vzXHY/264c9bd637.jpg because it emphasises vocals better
    same goes for 02:26:875 (1) - and others
  7. 05:33:362 (1) - imo this spinner could be till 05:39:848 - because music stops there okay fixed
thank u for mods
Mitkoff
Hello,
From q,
looks really neat overall, so some thought generally minor.

[General]
Hs in kiai too loud, i don't hear beats at all , only hss. Imo 50% is fine, at least 60%.
Timing sometimes feels off, but i'm not good at this stuff so mb it's just my ears...

[Believing]

Lily
[]
  1. i wrote already i'm not timing expert but 00:34:375 (2,3,4) - it's like 25 offset off
  2. 00:35:186 - also i think this sound should be clicable , cause its inconsistant with other same sounded parts wich You map like triangles
  3. 00:53:632 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - You could simply copy that triangle , because i don't see any reason to make them with slight differences
  4. 01:06:605 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - ^
  5. 01:02:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - might be better blanket if You care
  6. 01:27:889 (8,9,10) - same visual spacing? http://puu.sh/vHyUb.jpg -> https://puu.sh/vHyWP.jpg
  7. 01:33:767 (6,7,8) - ^
  8. 01:46:538 (5,1,2,3) - ^
  9. 01:47:754 (6) - make on 1 line with 01:46:943 (1,2,3) - as You can see on screenshot https://puu.sh/vHzls.jpg now it's a bit off (copy 01:46:943 (1,3) - move 1on 3, delete new 1 and snap new 3 on time line for making perfect line... but i guess You know how to do that hhhh... sry)
  10. 03:52:619 (6,7) - why did You use jump here? it sounds calm, for example 03:55:862 (6,7) - have strong instruments but haven't jump
  11. 03:58:294 (12,1) - might be better blanket
  12. 04:00:930 (1,2,4) - on 1 line? like 04:00:321 (2,3,4) -
  13. 04:10:659 (1,2) - tone of music goes higher but sliders becomes slower it's make less sense with 04:13:902 (1) - where it goes lower and sliders goes slower too


Kalibe
[]
  1. 02:17:146 (1,2,3,6,7,8) - same angle triangles, since it's sound pretty equal by vocals
  2. 02:48:565 (5,6) - blanket?
  3. 03:02:551 (1,2) - ^
  4. 03:08:227 (1) - imo it's unnecessary NC
  5. 03:06:808 (1) - ^
  6. 03:43:092 - make it clicable , its really strong

[]

That's it.
GL~
Topic Starter
Lilyanna

Mitkoff wrote:

Hello,
From q,
looks really neat overall, so some thought generally minor.

[General]
Hs in kiai too loud, i don't hear beats at all , only hss. Imo 50% is fine, at least 60%.
Timing sometimes feels off, but i'm not good at this stuff so mb it's just my ears... fixed the volume also i checked the timing its fine >w<

[Believing]

Lily
[]
  1. i wrote already i'm not timing expert but 00:34:375 (2,3,4) - it's like 25 offset off
  2. 00:35:186 - also i think this sound should be clicable , cause its inconsistant with other same sounded parts wich You map like triangles ah fixed
  3. 00:53:632 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - You could simply copy that triangle , because i don't see any reason to make them with slight differences they are copied lol
  4. 01:06:605 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - ^ same
  5. 01:02:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - might be better blanket if You care fixed
  6. 01:27:889 (8,9,10) - same visual spacing? http://puu.sh/vHyUb.jpg -> https://puu.sh/vHyWP.jpg
  7. 01:33:767 (6,7,8) - ^
  8. 01:46:538 (5,1,2,3) - ^ fixed all
  9. 01:47:754 (6) - make on 1 line with 01:46:943 (1,2,3) - as You can see on screenshot https://puu.sh/vHzls.jpg now it's a bit off (copy 01:46:943 (1,3) - move 1on 3, delete new 1 and snap new 3 on time line for making perfect line... but i guess You know how to do that hhhh... sry) fixed :p
  10. 03:52:619 (6,7) - why did You use jump here? it sounds calm, for example 03:55:862 (6,7) - have strong instruments but haven't jump fixed i ctrl g 5 and 6
  11. 03:58:294 (12,1) - might be better blanket fixed
  12. 04:00:930 (1,2,4) - on 1 line? like 04:00:321 (2,3,4) - fixed
  13. 04:10:659 (1,2) - tone of music goes higher but sliders becomes slower it's make less sense with 04:13:902 (1) - where it goes lower and sliders goes slower toowhat it make more sense it goes with the how tens the music is going slow and holds on to those slider by going slower :v


Kalibe
[]
  1. 02:17:146 (1,2,3,6,7,8) - same angle triangles, since it's sound pretty equal by vocals
  2. 02:48:565 (5,6) - blanket?
  3. 03:02:551 (1,2) - ^
  4. 03:08:227 (1) - imo it's unnecessary NC
  5. 03:06:808 (1) - ^
  6. 03:43:092 - make it clicable , its really strong

[]

That's it.
GL~
thx for mod

edit: kalibe gave me update so updated!
ezek
Nice, boobie #1~
2017-05-07 10:40 ezek: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1262823 Kawano Marina - Weight of the World Kowaretasekainouta [Believing]]
2017-05-07 10:40 ezek: 00:41:875 (6,7) - this blanket is off, fix it pls
2017-05-07 10:41 ezek: 01:02:551 (1,2) - this one can still be improved a tiny bit
2017-05-07 10:41 Lilyanna: http://puu.sh/vIEq7/57783dcb69.jpg
2017-05-07 10:41 ezek: nice
2017-05-07 10:42 Lilyanna: http://puu.sh/vIEtA/44ac1d66e0.jpg
2017-05-07 10:42 ezek: good
2017-05-07 10:43 ezek: 01:33:767 (6) - I suggest adding nc on this note for emphasis on the unusual change
2017-05-07 10:44 Lilyanna: ok rip sb
2017-05-07 10:44 ezek: the sb is fine :/
2017-05-07 10:45 Lilyanna: 01:47:957 - the colors here changed
2017-05-07 10:45 ezek: I think :v
2017-05-07 10:45 Lilyanna: when i add nc
2017-05-07 10:45 ezek: oh I see
2017-05-07 10:45 ezek: wait
2017-05-07 10:47 ezek: use colorhax this way so your sb doesn't get affected :p https://ezekk.s-ul.eu/YtETbNIE
2017-05-07 10:48 ezek: ezpz
2017-05-07 10:50 Lilyanna: yes genius
2017-05-07 10:50 Lilyanna: btw i used it directly on 01:47:957 (1) -
2017-05-07 10:50 Lilyanna: xd
2017-05-07 10:50 ezek: well, that's a good choice too
2017-05-07 10:51 ezek: 03:49:578 (5,6) - blanket
2017-05-07 10:51 Lilyanna: oh no urs better
2017-05-07 10:51 ezek: ok..
2017-05-07 10:51 ezek: do as you please :v
2017-05-07 10:51 Lilyanna: cuz when i click there i dont have the choice ofthe darker blue
2017-05-07 10:52 ezek: don't send me screenshot for blankets btw, i know you fix them nice
2017-05-07 10:53 ezek: 04:09:848 (1,2) - blanket
2017-05-07 10:53 Lilyanna: :V
2017-05-07 10:53 Lilyanna: omg
2017-05-07 10:53 Lilyanna: ezek
2017-05-07 10:54 ezek: hm?
2017-05-07 10:54 Lilyanna: nothing xd
2017-05-07 10:54 ezek: xp
2017-05-07 10:54 Lilyanna: fixed ;Y
2017-05-07 10:55 ezek: update the map
2017-05-07 10:57 Lilyanna: ok
2017-05-07 10:57 Lilyanna: nothing elsee?
2017-05-07 10:57 ezek: just wait :v
2017-05-07 11:02 Lilyanna: there
2017-05-07 11:02 Lilyanna: extra whistle i need update again
2017-05-07 11:02 Lilyanna: xD
2017-05-07 11:02 ezek: k
2017-05-07 11:02 Lilyanna: this normal whistle out of no where and like peeeeeep
2017-05-07 11:03 ezek: I thought you had a couple of unsnapped sliders but it's just 1/12 lul
2017-05-07 11:03 ezek: update
2017-05-07 11:04 Lilyanna: a min
2017-05-07 11:07 Lilyanna: done
2017-05-07 11:09 ezek: k
2017-05-07 11:09 ezek: ready?
2017-05-07 11:10 Lilyanna: yessss
Topic Starter
Lilyanna
Thank you :V
-sandAI
Helo i have question

Japanese name should be 壊レタ世界ノ歌 (Kowareta Sekai no Uta)

With 'english' name being The Weight of the World instead of just 'Weight of the World'

somebody double check with me but the title should definitely not be how it is now.

Or rather (idk if this is rankable, but) To have consistency with the name, Have the roman character title be "The Weight of the World / Kowareta Sekai no Uta" so it matches it's counter part, "The Weight of the World / 壊レタ世界ノ歌"
_sponez
Hello!

  1. 01:20:288 - A word is pronounced here, but it does not stand out. Need circle. For example, here I want to click. Similary here 03:07:315.
  2. 02:13:902 (1) - This slider must end here 02:14:308 and here 02:14:511 need circle.
  3. 03:42:686 (4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8050486.


Very good map. Good luck!
Wikozo
M4M from my queue ;)

[Believing]
  1. 00:27:281 (2) - you can do the same slider like this 00:27:686 (3) but in the same place. like this :
  2. 02:36:808 (2) - you can't get this slider a little bit up
  3. 03:33:362 (1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2) - on this circles there is a big confusion
  4. 04:00:119 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
  5. 04:00:119 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^


Very good map! Good Luck! :D
Topic Starter
Lilyanna
@Wikozo u so late i even forgot.. anyway thx for help ill apply mod with second bn check since they short simple.. if i find XD
ezek

Lilyanna wrote:

@Wikozo u so late i even forgot.. anyway thx for help ill apply mod with second bn check since they short simple.. if i find XD
If you wanna change something just do it and I'll rebub :v
Topic Starter
Lilyanna

_sponez wrote:

Hello!

  1. 01:20:288 - A word is pronounced here, but it does not stand out. Need circle. For example, here I want to click. Similary here 03:07:315. it used to be mapped tbh but then its the only 1/6 in map and its so close to upbeat the white tick which is the claps therefore we decided not map it so no confusing and the claps also stronger and more emphasised so it should be fine
  2. 02:13:902 (1) - This slider must end here 02:14:308 and here 02:14:511 need circle. ill ask kalibe for this since its his part if he change ill give kds if not then sorry no change xd
  3. 03:42:686 (4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8050486. idk what u want say with this picture


Very good map. Good luck!
thx for mod

Wikozo wrote:

M4M from my queue ;)

[Believing]
  1. 00:27:281 (2) - you can do the same slider like this 00:27:686 (3) but in the same place. like this : but i did it that way multiple of time its fine i just like that flow better
  2. 02:36:808 (2) - you can't get this slider a little bit up since its on screen it should be fine http://puu.sh/vWdcV/1ae52d456c.jpg
  3. 03:33:362 (1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2) - on this circles there is a big confusion its to emphasise the music tens
  4. 04:00:119 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
  5. 04:00:119 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ i see nothing wrong u didnt give me reason xd its readable and neat


Very good map! Good Luck! :D
sorry no change im not allowed to give kds since i didnt change >w< !
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