1. 5K Odds - 5Key (3,35 stars, 2935 notes)
2. 6k Ends - 6Key (3,86 stars, 3300 notes)
3. hs - 6Key (3,15 stars, 1832 notes)
4. Powerless emotions (5,27 stars, 739 notes)

Another Lie wrote:

SV mod

Inside

00:09:182 - x0.30 // nah beda 0.5 ga terlalu kerasa :v
00:34:338 - x10.00? the hell -_- di majuin gih ke 00:34:416 -
00:34:416 - dimajuin jg ke 00:34:494 - // ^ oke
00:34:807 - add x0.60 // oke
04:54:807 - konsistensi please, tempatnya di red line // sightreadnya biar lebih lebar aja note terakhirrr
04:53:010 - ganti ke x0.25
04:53:635 - ^
04:54:260 - ^
04:54:885 - ^
04:53:166 - add x0.75
04:53:791 - ^
04:54:416 - ^
04:55:041 - ^ // nah ini terlalu extreme , maafkan saia tidak bisa apply , btw bukan jelek tp visualnya terlalu kuat kurang dapet di flownya *imo

Note Mod

05:20:354 (320354|0) - ganti normal note di 05:20:510 - ngikutin atasnya 6notes pertama ga ada kicknya btw :'
05:22:385 (322385|0,322697|0) - diganti ke col 3 & 4 macam kebalikannya ini 05:21:135 (321135|3,321447|2) - // no :v

Syadow- wrote:

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Mie Mie

2017-04-11 11:49 Syadow-: ui mastah
2017-04-11 11:49 Alsty-: ui pro :u
2017-04-11 11:50 Syadow-: odds nya mao porum / irc :u
2017-04-11 11:50 Alsty-: terserah
2017-04-11 11:50 Alsty-: kalo mau irc nunggu ini apply mod dulu tapi
2017-04-11 11:51 Syadow-: woki
2017-04-11 12:06 Alsty-: dah
2017-04-11 12:06 Syadow-: sek sek w msh liat berita :'v
2017-04-11 12:06 Alsty-: oke :u
2017-04-11 12:07 Syadow-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1262706 ryo (supercell) - ODDS&ENDS [Uta]]
2017-04-11 12:07 Syadow-: yok
2017-04-11 12:07 Alsty-: okii
2017-04-11 12:08 Syadow-: 00:00:979 - ini dobel suara apa ?
2017-04-11 12:08 Alsty-: clap
2017-04-11 12:09 Syadow-: suaranya kecil wkwkw :'v
2017-04-11 12:09 Alsty-: biarin , biar ada differential nya :u
2017-04-11 12:09 Syadow-: :u
2017-04-11 12:09 Alsty-: kalo dimainin cukup jelas bedanya :v
2017-04-11 12:09 Syadow-: wait wait mao liat
2017-04-11 12:11 Alsty-: oke
2017-04-11 12:11 Syadow-: 00:15:822 - 00:15:900 - suara kek gini ga di map ?
2017-04-11 12:12 Alsty-: engga , sengaja kalo LN pendek di skip yang itu
2017-04-11 12:12 Syadow-: 00:18:479 (18479|1) - jadiin note biasa tersu tambahin di 00:18:635 - '
2017-04-11 12:12 Alsty-: 00:15:979 (15979|2) - panjang kek gini baru di masukin
2017-04-11 12:12 Syadow-: yha :'v
2017-04-11 12:12 Alsty-: oke
2017-04-11 12:14 Syadow-: 00:24:729 (24729|2) - ga LN ? biar konsisten double LN pas ting uwu
2017-04-11 12:15 Alsty-: ok added
2017-04-11 12:16 Syadow-: 00:44:104 - sini triple sini kok ga 00:42:854 - 00:41:604 -
2017-04-11 12:16 Syadow-: ada jging nya mungkin triple ena
2017-04-11 12:17 Alsty-: fixed awalan nya kasih triple
2017-04-11 12:18 Syadow-: woki
2017-04-11 12:18 Syadow-: 00:46:916 (46916|2,47072|1,47072|4,47229|3,47385|0,47385|2) - ini kok rada aneh yak ;'v
2017-04-11 12:18 Syadow-: double di putih2 aja imo
2017-04-11 12:19 Alsty-: oiya duh kurang rapih =3=
2017-04-11 12:19 Syadow-: 00:50:666 - add note di col 5
2017-04-11 12:19 Syadow-: wkwkww
2017-04-11 12:19 Syadow-: 00:51:916 (51916|3,52072|5) - double jg yg itu
2017-04-11 12:20 Alsty-: oke all fixed disitu
2017-04-11 12:20 Syadow-: 00:53:010 (53010|1,54416|1) - ini jg
2017-04-11 12:21 Alsty-: udah :3
2017-04-11 12:21 Syadow-: 00:55:197 - ena tambah sv nih wkwkw
2017-04-11 12:22 Alsty-: mo nahan buat bikin SV di tempat yg note nya banyak :'v
2017-04-11 12:22 Alsty-: sengaja SV di map ini cuma di tempat" kosong doang :v
2017-04-11 12:22 Syadow-: wkwkw gpp wes :v biar gegeh
2017-04-11 12:22 Syadow-: 01:01:916 (61916|1,62229|4) - dobel jg
2017-04-11 12:22 Syadow-: 01:03:947 (63947|3,63947|1) - single
2017-04-11 12:23 Alsty-: yg single itu present piano
2017-04-11 12:23 Syadow-: 01:17:854 - triple buat emphasis
2017-04-11 12:23 Alsty-: kek nya agak powerful
2017-04-11 12:23 Syadow-: oalah woki
2017-04-11 12:24 Alsty-: added
2017-04-11 12:25 Syadow-: 01:25:510 (85510|0,85510|1,85666|5,85666|3) - ena buat jack
2017-04-11 12:25 Syadow-: 01:33:322 - double
2017-04-11 12:26 Alsty-: atas re-arranged
2017-04-11 12:26 Alsty-: ok added
2017-04-11 12:26 Syadow-: 02:00:354 - empat disini
2017-04-11 12:27 Alsty-: addedd ~
2017-04-11 12:27 Syadow-: eh wait wait
2017-04-11 12:28 Syadow-: 02:01:135 (121135|4,121760|3) - etc ga pake pola dobel dobel triple ?
2017-04-11 12:28 Alsty-: engga , sengaja yang itu
2017-04-11 12:28 Alsty-: agak susah
2017-04-11 12:29 Syadow-: ah woki
2017-04-11 12:29 Alsty-: 02:07:854 -
2017-04-11 12:29 Alsty-: bagian ini pengecualian , pitchnya naek trus suaranya juga lebih strong
2017-04-11 12:29 Syadow-: oalah woki
2017-04-11 12:30 Syadow-: 02:24:104 - dobel
2017-04-11 12:30 Alsty-: added
2017-04-11 12:30 Syadow-: 02:29:885 - sv ini :v
2017-04-11 12:31 Alsty-: ntar coba di add slowmo SV :u
2017-04-11 12:31 Syadow-: wkwkw yay
2017-04-11 12:32 Syadow-: 02:52:072 (172072|3,172229|4,172229|5) - agak susah nih
2017-04-11 12:32 Syadow-: 02:55:354 - dobel
2017-04-11 12:32 Syadow-: sek sek to be continue :v mau makan
2017-04-11 12:33 Alsty-: gampangg kok coba aja mainin :u
2017-04-11 12:33 Alsty-: skip yang itu 1/4 jd tom / bass jadi single aja
2017-04-11 12:33 Alsty-: oke tenang aja :3
2017-04-11 12:44 back o// *slap
2017-04-11 12:45 Syadow-: btw modnya alie dah di apply ?
2017-04-11 12:45 Alsty-: mod SVnya udah , mod notes nya reject semua :'v
2017-04-11 12:46 Syadow-: :v
2017-04-11 12:47 Syadow-: 03:47:775 - ini mending double apa ga mas ?
2017-04-11 12:48 Alsty-: skip , awkward ga ada tempat buat
2017-04-11 12:48 Alsty-: 03:47:697 (227697|4) -
2017-04-11 12:48 Syadow-: woki kwkww
2017-04-11 12:48 Syadow-: yg sejenis w skip yak
2017-04-11 12:49 Alsty-: zeeb
2017-04-11 12:49 Syadow-: 04:05:354 - slowjam :3)b
2017-04-11 12:50 Alsty-: added 0.8
2017-04-11 12:50 Syadow-: wogh kepelanen :'v
2017-04-11 12:51 Alsty-: engga cukup itu :v
2017-04-11 12:53 Syadow-: :v
2017-04-11 12:54 Syadow-: 04:30:197 (270197|1) - LN lebih zeeb
2017-04-11 12:54 Alsty-: oke
2017-04-11 12:56 Syadow-: yg akhir2 menggila :v
2017-04-11 12:56 Alsty-: awkawkakw
2017-04-11 12:56 Syadow-: 05:20:354 - gpp nih 6 ?
2017-04-11 12:56 Syadow-: wkakwak isi LN smua :v
2017-04-11 12:56 Alsty-: iyaa suara yg pertama , ga ada kicknya di akhir notesnya
2017-04-11 12:57 Syadow-: dah w skip bagian akhir2 :v wkwkw
2017-04-11 12:57 Alsty-: wkwkw , emang sih keliatan agak over =3=
2017-04-11 12:57 Alsty-: ntar kalo ada yg ngasih suggestion bagus + dense mungkin di ganti wkekek
2017-04-11 12:57 Alsty-: udahh?
2017-04-11 12:58 Syadow-: wkwkw
2017-04-11 12:58 Syadow-: mao lagi ?
2017-04-11 12:58 Alsty-: njir :u wakakwakw
2017-04-11 12:58 Alsty-: dah post di threadnya
2017-04-11 12:59 Syadow-: yodah wakkwaka

gudlak o/

Aras25 wrote:

click me

- 00:12:541 - I think you might want to end 1 LN here and add 1 note here // okee
- 00:15:041 (15041|2) - delete, end 1 LN here and add 1 normal note here (not LN) // keep dulu , di paling akhir dr part ini soalnya , mungkin bakal di ubah kalo yang lain mention ini juga :3
- 00:17:854 (17854|5) - this LN, untuk suara gitar yang panjang kan? dari start lagu ini suara juga udah ada, jadi gua saranin di layer aja juga dari awal, mereka ada di 00:10:354 (10354|5) - , 00:15:354 (15354|5) - , 00:20:354 (20354|0) - , 00:22:854 (22854|1) - , 00:25:354 (25354|1) - // tadinya pengen gitu , tapi terlalu keliatan monoton di awal , jadi kurang seru (?) sekali lg consider ini buat nanti kedepan :3
- 00:35:197 - how about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7803626 ? // nope , dah pengen kek gini keknya awal ini , ga di ubah , feelnya dapet banget sama SV nya
- 00:45:354 (45354|0,45510|2,45666|3) - gua saranin ini LNnya jangan searah gini, lebih cocok sama pitchnya kalau LNnya bukan 1 > 2 > 3 gini, but 1 > 3 > 2 *note : itu bukan kolomnya, more like nadanya // oki flipped
- 00:50:354 (50354|2,50510|1,50666|0,50666|4,50822|5) - LN ini seharusnya sejenis sama 00:47:854 (47854|4,48010|5,48166|2,48322|0) - imo, sama kayak yang selanjutnya, antara lo ikutin saran gua yang ini atau lo ubah 00:47:854 (47854|4,48010|5,48166|2,48322|0) - tadi // im out of idea for this actually , pengen yg ga monoton gitu , keknya bakal rubah yang di awal deh
- 01:22:229 (82229|2,82229|0) - jadiin normal note, trus LN yang 01:22:072 (82072|5,82385|4) - kolomnya disamain aja, lo tau maksud gua buat apa kan? // kurang suka ama shield , keeep =3=
- 01:25:041 (85041|0) - start di 01:24:885 (84885|4) - imo // fixed
- 01:27:541 (87541|4,87697|3) - buat echo snare ya? overcomplexed imo // consider it to delete
- 01:33:166 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7803641 begini lebih enak imo, sekalian kolom drum di 01:33:166 // re-arrange dikit biar ga ada trill nya juga :3(93166|5,93166|3,93322|2,93322|1,93635|3,93635|1,93791|5,93791|2) - lebih dapat, trus sekalian pitching bass di 01:33:635 (93635|3,93635|1,93791|5,93791|2,93947|4,94104|3,94104|2) -
- 01:34:260 (94260|5,94260|3,94260|4) - 1 atau 2 LN aja cukup imo, biar less crowded, trus lo bisa add LN+1/4 di 01:34:572 - buatr layer drum sama gitar // found a great way to improve it
- 01:36:604 (96604|4) - add HS buat cymbal crashnya, itu suara cymbal crashnya ada di situ sama 01:36:447 (96447|2) - // bukan cuma echoing sound ?
- 01:41:604 (101604|0,101604|1) - ^ // ^
- start dari 02:00:666 -, setiap 2/1 ada suara crashnya disitu, bisa ditambah HS nya *gua ngemod ini sambil ngeliat diff hs juga // sebenernya itu di kiai hampir ada semua , tp kalo di masukin ke HS agak aneh , jadinya cuma di part" tertentu yang bener" dominan baru dimasukin crash cymbal
- 02:05:354 (125354|2) - sampe 02:07:854 (127854|2) - , lo pasti bisa denger suara gitar di tiap 1/2 yang berulang disitu kan? nah gua saranin part yang begininya lo unikin flow 1/2 nya // progress map nya mungkin kek plot cerita , jadi flow nya makin berkembang , maks nya di kiai akhir , sengaja kiai pertama di bikin simple
- 02:09:650 - missing, sengaja kah? // yup , suara itu cuma ada di kiai terakhir
- 02:19:104 (139104|5) - sampe 02:20:354 (140354|3) - , disitu ada 1/4 sebenarnya // same reason ^
- 02:25:354 (145354|1,145354|4) - 2 LN aja, samain kaya selanjutnya, apply ke bagian yang sama dengan ini juga ya // dibikin 4 karena disitu ada crash.
- 03:39:416 (219416|0,219416|2,219416|3,219572|4,219572|1,219572|5) - jack aja imo disitu ada suara 1/4 sebnarnya, but kalau lo ga mau add, itu snare bisa di jack biar kesan 1/4nya tetap dapat, sama kayak tekhnik nbgejack 1/2 di diff ez kalau mau ngecover 1/4 // *ngelakuin sesuatu
- 03:39:416 (219416|3,219416|2,219416|0,219572|5,219572|1,219572|4,225979|2,226135|4) - not needed LN // ini part masih nunjukin sama ama yg ^ , timing nya maksut nya :v
- 03:49:104 (229104|2,229260|5,229572|4,229885|0) - not needed too, jadi aneh imo kalau lo tiba tiba cover vocal which is usually a no no for mania) // considerrrrr , ga mau bikin map yang monoton ngikutin main base drum doang :' serius deh wkwkw :'v
- 04:45:510 - add di 3 buat sekalian empashize drum di 04:45:354 (285354|1) - (feel jacknya dapat karena ngeshield)
- 04:50:510 - same like above // section kalem , mungkin skip ^

itu aja gua rasa, lagunya snapnya gitu gitu aja jadi ga banyak buat di improve uwu


DONE DESU !!

Kivicat wrote:

Hi! From cute queue ^^
|1|2|3|4|5|6|

Uta

00:15:041 (15041|2) - Why shorter LN here and not at 00:14:729 -? Same piano and bell sounds. What you probably notice there is lower piano sound's fade-out. // nope , its just make the flow better , and i want to keep this part
00:22:229 (22229|0,22229|3) - End them at 00:22:541 - for consistency with 00:21:604 (21604|4,21604|2) - and 00:20:979 (20979|3,20979|5) - // do something for consistency sake
00:18:479 - Add LN till 00:19:104 - for guitar or make notes for guitar (00:18:166 (18166|0) - change to note). // noo , it will hard to keep the pattern structure , i didnt have enough space to place the percussion
00:16:135 - Missed note for hat. // added
00:22:854 (22854|1,23479|4,24104|5) - Maybe make them longer for consistency with 00:24:729 (24729|0,25354|1) - ? // consider this really
00:23:791 (23791|2) - Change to simple note, no reason for LN. // oki
00:23:635 - 00:23:947 - Add notes like you've done at 00:24:572 (24572|3,24885|4) - // i didnt add any notes if there was a LN transition there
00:39:260 - Add note, don't break the pattern. // its intended
00:44:260 - ^
00:40:354 - Maybe one more note? // nope , it just double bass , i dont take any other instrument
00:47:854 (47854|4,48010|5,48166|2) - Try 3-5-6. Now it may be a bit awkward there because of previous LN. // its a pitch tbh
00:54:416 (54416|3,54572|4,54729|3) - Try 5-4-5 or 5-4-1 and 00:54:885 (54885|0,54963|1,55041|2) - 4-3-2 then. // its intended same with ^
01:03:635 - Listen to bass here, you can add LNs each 1/2. Actually, there's stream from 01:03:791 -, but sounds merge at 100% speed, so it's ok to map 1/2, i think. // its too complicated , when you play it , its a bit hard
01:04:963 - Missed note. // oki
01:10:197 - ^ // i skip that one for making a space before the burst coming
01:14:885 - ^ // added and a bit re-arrange
01:15:041 - You could add one more note for cymbal. // skip
01:24:104 (84104|2,84104|0) - Better make LNs for consistency with 01:22:229 (82229|0,82229|2) - // its completely different
01:22:541 (82541|1) - Add note.
01:24:885 - Keep piano at right hand, there's same chord. And i'd make it stronger. Like this: https://puu.sh/vjkMp/17bb22cfa0.png. // i use the light one
01:27:854 - Add piano LN for consistency with following. // skip , too crowd
01:30:041 (90041|0) - 1/2 earlier, add note at 01:30:197 - // added
01:33:635 - 1/2 piano again. It's even awkward to hold the same LN from 01:33:791 - // once again , i do the same thing about this
01:34:885 (94885|3) - Same piano as before, why not 5 and 6? // moved to 6
Also, there's a strong longing sound from 01:34:729 - till 01:35:354 -. I recommend to add LN in 1. That demands some changes in further patterns, but note density is low, so no problems.
01:37:697 - Piano. If not LNs, add at least note or two. // added
01:42:229 (102229|5,102229|0,102229|3,102385|1,102385|2,102385|4,102541|3,102541|0) - Clear piano sounds, leave 1 LN for each and keep following kicks. // no , but i will consider this
01:47:385 - Add LN in 5, piano supported by strong vocal. It feels like something's missing there. // i dont get it ==3=
01:50:197 (110197|0,110197|1) - Change to notes, no piano sound there. // keep , it help the emphasize to keep strong
02:09:650 - Missed note.
02:19:338 - Missed note and 02:19:572 (139572|3,140354|3) - 1/4 stream between them. It would not be a difficulty spike if you use simple pattern like stair. // actually every section of kiai have their own theme , and i was intended to make the last one so hard , accepeted below
Add note at 02:20:197 -, if you don't accept previous.
02:27:697 (147697|5,147697|4) - Delete.
02:39:885 - Add LN in 2, if you accepted my suggestion to use 2 LNs in similar pattern before.
02:46:604 - Don't ignore the piano so suddenly. You follow it before and after, that's the only missed sound in section. // somehow it doesnt break the flow , the vocal suddenly on top on everything there,
02:49:260 (169260|0,169572|2,169885|3) - Better follow piano sounds on those lines.
02:50:197 - I'd start following vocal here or at least 02:50:510 - here. Sequence seems broken when you start it like this. // do something about this
02:54:572 - 02:54:650 - Missed note.//added
03:03:479 (183479|0,183479|5,183479|3) - Why 3? // deleted 1
03:06:838 - Missed note.// i skip it
03:14:416 (194416|2,194416|0,194494|5,194572|4) - Maybe 26-3-4? Now seems messy. // its look fine for me @_@
03:24:650 - Missed note.
03:34:338 - ^, stream 1/4 between 03:34:572 (214572|1,214885|4) - // once again i skip this part for second kiai
03:35:197 - 03:35:275 - Missed notes.
03:42:854 - LNs don't follow the rhythm from here. Should be something like this: http://puu.sh/vjoVH/37c31498b6.png // do something
03:50:744 - Missed note.
03:53:322 (233322|2) - End at 03:53:479 - if it's for vocal.
03:55:822 - Guitar sounds here come in triplets like 03:58:947 (238947|0,238947|1,239104|5,239104|4,239260|1,239260|0) -. Don't brake this rhythm while you follow the guitar. // changing with something =3=
04:09:572 (249572|3,249885|2,250197|3) - Why? That's completely uncomfortable. Player won't feel vocal there. // i will consider to delete this
04:30:197 (270197|1) - It fits to music, but uncomfortable as testplay shows. Maybe change column? Or make it simple note. // keep this one
05:14:182 (314182|3) - Delete. // oki
05:14:963 (314963|4) - ^
05:14:650 - Missed note. Not absolutely sure here though. // i skip it

Common:
There's a huge difficulty spike in the end of your map. It's not very good manner. Some novice players may play almost the whole map just to fail last 20 seconds. If you want to keep this spike, i suggest you to set HP 7. But better try to nerf it. Here are some advices:

1. Reduce simple notes amount. You can use only one note no matter what sound you hear since that part is LN-oriented. ill try my best =3=
2. Ignore streams, same reason. i rarely use stream thought @_@
3. Cut LN chords in the very end. They don't deserve 5 notes, it's obviously overmap. Leave 4 or even 3. Same goes for last chords. There's nothing deserving 6-noted chord, especially in 6K map. You really shouldn't use all 6 columns unless there's something very loud and replete (or maybe disharmonious set of sounds like when you smash piano keyboard with your palms or/and face, lol). i will nerf them later

// about the HP thing , i think its normal to have 8/8 OD and HP :3

There's still much to do, but i love this map! Good luck and take my star

OrdLyn wrote:

Hey , As requested in Ord's Mania Queue.

First impression : This map is REALLY fun and pleasant to play. You have done a nice job ! // Glad you like it :3
I checked also the other mods on your map (which were very detail btw) so I don't have many things to say about your map and what I'll say are for me better to play and more pleasant to play but this is not necessarily a mistake.

You ask me to mod UTA

Uta

- 00:30:354 (30354|1,30510|1) - Maybe move one of those two notes. I actually heard the noise you want to highlight (because it's almost the same) but I reckon this better. // i'd keep this one because its emphasize issue and feels perfect while playing

- 01:35:666 (95666|4,95666|5) - Maybe add another note here the noise is pretty loud. // its just a tom isnt it?

- 02:10:354 (130354|3,130510|3) - Those two notes too. Maybe move the second one. // moved!

- 02:17:854 (137854|2,137854|3,138010|4,138010|1,138166|0,138166|5,138166|3) - and 02:18:479 (138479|3,138479|2,138635|1,138635|4,138791|2,138791|0,138791|5) - Is this voluntary ( this is 2 time in a row the same pattern). Actually this is not disturbing when you play it but maybe change it? // i will consider this

- 02:27:697 (147697|4,147854|3,147854|2,147854|1,147854|0,147854|5) - Maybe a little bit overmapped. The drump is not as loud as you mapped. // *do something

- 02:29:885 (149885|2,149885|1) - add another note here. // no its already good for me :3

- 02:35:197 (155197|2,155354|2) - Those 2 notes were disturbing this time when I played. // emphasize uwu

- 05:10:354 (310354|2,310510|2) - Same here // moved the second one :3

That was a pretty quick mod but the large part of the map has been change with the last mods. ^^
I hope my mod was still useful. Good luck for the next !

dudehacker wrote:

IRC mod

12:20 dudehacker: yo u finish mapping 5k?
12:21 Alsty-: yes im finish it last night
12:21 dudehacker: where is the keysound
12:21 Alsty-: not yet , maybe i will work on it tonight
12:21 dudehacker: 00:00:354 (354|0,666|1,979|4,979|3,1135|2,1291|0,1447|1) -
12:22 dudehacker: for this part
12:22 dudehacker: i think its better if you only map the piano part
12:22 Alsty-: wait i need to re-dl
12:22 Alsty-: im on laptop @@
12:22 dudehacker: oh
12:22 *dudehacker is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1277917 ryo(supercell) feat.Hatsune Miku - ODDS&ENDS [5K Odds]]
12:23 dudehacker: u ready now?
12:23 dudehacker: for mod
12:23 Alsty-: yes
12:23 *Alsty- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1277917 ryo(supercell) feat.Hatsune Miku - ODDS&ENDS [5K Odds]]
12:23 dudehacker: from start to 00:09:104 (9104|4) -
12:23 dudehacker: only map piano
12:23 dudehacker: because that is the main focus
12:23 dudehacker: and also start easy
12:24 Alsty-: maybe delete something like this?
12:24 dudehacker: and add LN here 00:05:666 (5666|0) -
12:24 dudehacker: piano is only every white line
12:24 dudehacker: you are missing some note on white line
12:25 dudehacker: in the intro part
12:25 dudehacker: and make these 2 note short LN 00:08:791 (8791|0,8947|1) -
12:25 Alsty-: wait i need to re-arrange the whole part at intro
12:26 dudehacker: ok
12:26 Alsty-: done
12:26 dudehacker: ok next part
12:26 dudehacker: starting here
12:26 dudehacker: 00:10:354 (10354|1) -
12:27 dudehacker: add a note here 00:10:510 (10510|1) -
12:27 dudehacker: for the kick
12:27 Alsty-: done
12:27 dudehacker: 00:10:354 (10354|4,10666|2) -
12:27 dudehacker: this should be 1 LN for piano
12:28 dudehacker: also delete 00:10:354 (10354|0) -
12:28 dudehacker: 1 LN is enough
12:28 dudehacker: 00:10:979 (10979|1) -
12:28 dudehacker: delete too
12:28 Alsty-: i think i will just delete 00:10:666 (10666|2) - instead of 00:10:354 (10354|0) -
12:28 dudehacker: you can rearrange pattern , im just adding or removing notes
12:29 Alsty-: because im present the piano as 2LN on this section
12:29 dudehacker: why
12:29 dudehacker: piano is 1 sound why 2 LN ?
12:30 Alsty-: oh yes , maybe i will delete the double LN for other but not in the first one
12:30 Alsty-: i recognize i map it as a guitar
12:30 dudehacker: delete all these
12:30 dudehacker: 00:11:291 (11291|0,11916|1,12541|4,12854|3,13791|1,14416|4,15041|3) -
12:30 dudehacker: only map piano and the double kick i think
12:31 dudehacker: so add another kick here 00:15:510 (15510|2) -
12:31 dudehacker: same logic for this whole section
12:31 dudehacker: add LN here 00:27:854 (27854|3) -
12:32 dudehacker: only starting here you map full guitar 00:35:197 (35197|1) -
12:32 dudehacker: beginning part is low intensity so only piano and kick
12:34 dudehacker: i think its better to finish hitsound first then map
12:34 Alsty-: done the first part
12:35 dudehacker: i need play through the other part to feel it
12:37 Alsty-: toilet a while @@
12:40 dudehacker: 04:52:854 (292854|1) -
12:40 dudehacker: i dont like the SV here
12:41 dudehacker: i think it is better without SV
12:43 Alsty-: a
12:43 Alsty-: nooo i will nerf it but the feel is perfect
12:43 Alsty-:
12:44 dudehacker: the SV here could be more smooth i think
12:44 dudehacker: 00:35:197 (35197|1,35275|3,35354|2,35354|0) -
12:46 Alsty-: done
12:46 dudehacker: from here 00:36:135 (36135|2) - to 00:44:885 (44885|1) -
12:46 Alsty-: also nerf on 04:52:854 -
12:46 dudehacker: you either remove all single notes at red line
12:46 dudehacker: or you add it to all red lines
12:47 dudehacker: i suggest you remove
12:47 Alsty-: i will add it
12:47 dudehacker: making a bigger contrast with the intensity of next part which is a lot stronger
12:47 Alsty-: but the part like 00:36:135 (36135|2,36447|3) -
12:47 Alsty-: the emphasize will gone and feels empty
12:48 Alsty-: it actually intended to make it not so hard and comfy and not adding more notes beside the LN
12:48 dudehacker: you should add 1 or 2 more note at 01:40:041 (100041|2) -
12:49 Alsty-: added
12:49 dudehacker: that is okay, since the intensity curve starts low then medium then high
12:49 dudehacker: if you map all red lines
12:50 dudehacker: then you can't really notice the intensity increase of next section
12:50 dudehacker: its correct to map it but wouldnt be as fun imo
12:50 dudehacker: always consider the intensity of the song when you decide what to map
12:51 Alsty-: 00:39:260 (39260|3,39572|2,39885|1) -
12:51 Alsty-: i think i will only delete redlines on this sectioc
12:51 Alsty-: section
12:54 dudehacker: thats all i have so far
12:54 dudehacker: the parts after is really fun
12:54 dudehacker: can u update and let me see how it is after?
12:55 Alsty-: wait i want to re-check and maybe re-patterning the intro a bit
12:55 dudehacker: ok
12:55 dudehacker: i check tmrw then
12:55 dudehacker: need sleep soon

Raveille wrote:

Time to check on 5K eh

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5K thingy

lower the hitsounds overall to between 10-20.
01:28:635 - u forgot a double
01:29:260 - anotha one
01:29:885 - anotha one
01:31:760 - anotha one
01:32:385 - anotha one
01:33:322 - anotha one
01:33:635 - anotha one
keep consistency dude. i wont be bringing this up again, make sure to double check this section.
01:39:260 - same sound as 01:36:447 - but you didn't put it as a triple .-.
02:00:666 - , 02:01:291 - etc. make these triples for emphasis on the drums, don't get boring and double double double on every heavy drum beat
02:09:650 - very obvious sound that you missed
02:14:104 (134104|3,134104|4,134260|1,134260|0,134416|2,134416|3,134416|4,134572|1,134729|3,134729|4,134885|1,134885|0,135041|3,135041|4,135041|2,135197|1,135354|2,135354|0,135354|3,135354|4) - I know that there are triples used, but the LN usage is wrong. It should be a single LN for every line instead of 1 then 2 then 1 then 2 since the guitar stays the same way, only the drum changes emphasis.
02:15:354 - also, this does not warrant a full 4/5 note hit, remove a note, maybe 3 or 4
02:19:104 (139104|2,139104|3,139260|1,139416|4,139416|0,139572|2,139729|1,139729|0,139885|3,140041|1,140041|2,140197|4) - idk why you didn't go for the crazy 1/4 streams here, thought 1/4 streams can fit perfectly, unless you are aiming for this difficulty to be an H.
02:21:604 - you forgot to add a note?
02:27:854 - make this a triple, there is no cymbal crash sound so a quad wont fit
02:28:010 (148010|0,148322|4,148635|2,148947|1,149260|0) - what are these for actually, if they are for the guitar, then you are mapping the guitar really weirdly at this section.
02:35:197 - why is this a single but 02:35:041 - a double? 02:35:197 - this should be a double too
02:39:260 (159260|1,159260|0,159572|0,159572|1,159885|0) - the piano notes are the same, why a sudden cut from double to single...
02:44:572 (164572|2,164885|3,165197|4) - more "why are these here" LNs
02:54:260 - painfully obvious loud sound but you mapped a double just like the others... it's a triple
03:02:697 (182697|3,182697|1,182697|2) - and now not a loud sound but you map a triple unlike the others... it's a double
03:08:166 (188166|3,188166|1,188322|3,188322|1) - why jacks here out of nowhere? 03:09:260 (189260|0,189260|2,189416|0,189416|2) - these are ok because they are the same sound
03:14:729 (194729|3,194729|4,194885|2,194885|0,194885|1) - you know, this should be a triple then a double, not the other way round
03:24:650 - once again, painfully obvious sound you overlooked
03:39:104 (219104|0,219104|1,219260|0,219260|1) - again, jacks out of nowhere when 03:39:729 (219729|0,219729|1,219885|3,219885|4) - you did this
03:42:854 - triple only

03:55:354 -
this portion is an LN mess. i have 0 clue what the LNs map anymore. guitars? vocals? 03:56:760 (236760|1,236760|3) - what is this for anyways? the guitar? why a double LN for the guitar when you have been doing single LNs? there isn't anything significant to make this a double LN.

03:58:947 -
and then this portion onwards, you decide to map the guitar parts. but then

04:02:072 -
you gave up mapping them and went with drums. ???

Consistency. It is really important if you want to make your map not messy to others.

04:05:666 (245666|2,245979|0,246291|4,246604|3,246916|2,247229|0,247541|4,247854|0,248166|4,248479|2,248791|3,249104|1) - PR is amazingly all wrong somehow. this may seem boring but piano is the only sound here, you can make it like this
04:19:729 - remove 2 and 4, don't think this is a quad at all

04:55:354 -
wew, another bad section. let me review why it is.
you start out with a double on every drum beat.

05:02:854 -
you shift into double double triple. for some reason...?

05:05:041 -
and then you think that this is a quad. ??? why
this sound is exactly 100% the same as 05:04:416 - and you mapped 05:04:416 - as a triple.

05:05:354 -
wow wee, switch back to guitar and vocal LNs.

05:15:666 (315666|0,315666|3,315666|1,315666|2) - what???? exactly what thoughts were going through your head when you decide to make this a quad .-.
05:20:197 - another painfully obvious sound missed again

tl;dr you have no consistency, check your map again thoroughly.

good luck

DustMoon wrote:

Hi~Alsty-
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5K Odds

03:40:666 (220666|1,220666|0,220822|4) - Ctrl+h
03:54:963 (234963|4,234963|3,235041|0,235041|1,235119|4,235119|3,235197|1,235197|0) - advice:https://puu.sh/vFl3J/38bb815bb3.jpg
04:07:854 (247854|0) - move to 2
04:01:916 - advice:https://puu.sh/vFl9Y/646b85fe4b.jpg
04:52:229 (292229|4) - change to single note and move to 3
04:52:775 - aadvice:https://puu.sh/vFkFb/6ba5114513.jpg
05:15:666 (315666|2) - delete ,maybe 4 notes (1,2,4,5col0 its enough
05:23:479 (323479|0,323479|4) - same mapping to 05:22:854 (322854|1,322854|3,322854|4,322854|0) -
05:24:104 (324104|1,324104|3) - same mapping to 05:24:729 (324729|2,324729|1,324729|3) -
05:27:385 (327385|4,327385|2,327385|3,327385|0,327385|1,327541|4,327541|0,327541|3,327541|1,327541|2,327697|1,327697|2,327697|3,327697|0,327697|4) - ohhhhhh

Good luck!

dkingo wrote:

Want to shoot 5 stars