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17:02 Wanko: Hello, could I ask you to mod a map for me in your spare time?
17:03 P A N: hm let me see your map
17:03 *Wanko is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1262042 ClariS - Hitorigoto (TV Size)]
17:07 P A N: it's already good
17:07 Wanko: oh :v well thanks
17:08 Wanko: it's kinda my first time aiming for ranked and i need mods for that anyway, right?
17:08 Wanko: not sure how it works
17:09 P A N: well
17:09 P A N: I can mod a bit because I'm kinda lazy
17:09 P A N: but irc please?
17:10 Wanko: xD
17:10 Wanko: sure
17:10 P A N: firsttttttt thing is
17:10 P A N: the aesthetic
17:10 Wanko: of course :D
17:11 P A N: let's begin with 00:01:091 (1,2,1,2,3) -
17:11 P A N: http://puu.sh/vftoa/976fc24a4a.jpg
17:12 P A N: make them perfect
17:12 P A N: I mean perfect triangle of slider tail
17:12 Wanko: equal space?
17:12 P A N: and two circles in the center of them
17:12 Wanko: i see
17:14 P A N: apply to other one too
17:14 Wanko: yeah, will do
17:14 P A N: next is umm
17:14 P A N: 00:21:454 (1,2) -
17:15 P A N: I don't think it's soooo beautiful?
17:16 P A N: I meann
17:16 P A N: make them a pattern
17:16 Wanko: what do you say, just a regular flat slider instead?
17:16 P A N: sec, waiting puush
17:16 P A N: http://puu.sh/vftyL/11ef8fdcfd.jpg
17:16 P A N: like this
17:16 Wanko: oh
17:17 Wanko: yeah that's better
17:17 P A N: and there's no reason to overlapped here 00:22:181 (3,1) -
17:17 P A N: so better avoid that :3
17:17 P A N: oops 00:22:727 (1,3) - too
17:18 Wanko: i still dont know when it's ok to overlap stuff, ok, will move them a bit xd
17:20 P A N: umm it's fine to overlapped with it's... beautiful and looks natural
17:20 P A N: XD
17:20 P A N: but yours feel force
17:20 P A N: and 00:56:545 (1,2) - is too simple imo
17:21 Wanko: haha ok
17:21 Wanko: hm
17:22 Wanko: i'll make it the same distance as 00:59:454 (1,2) -
17:22 Wanko: didnt notice it was different >_>
17:22 P A N: ah that's better
17:22 P A N: but personally
17:22 P A N: 00:57:272 (3,4,5) - is errr
17:23 P A N: different from 00:54:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
17:23 P A N: I mean I would make it back forth jump
17:23 P A N: instead
17:23 P A N: it's good to introduce the next phrase too 00:58:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
17:24 Wanko: so i'd have to change these as well then? 01:00:181 (3,4,5) -
17:24 P A N: http://puu.sh/vftPK/8026a964a1.jpg
17:25 P A N: yea you made that different
17:25 P A N: with the first one
17:25 P A N: so maybe change it?
17:26 Wanko: http://screenshot.sh/mKLSCgEHzEIxR you think i can leave it like this?
17:29 P A N: yyyyup
17:29 Wanko: ok, good
17:30 P A N: well that's all
17:30 P A N: for major thing
17:30 P A N: your jump is pretty cool
17:31 Wanko: thank you~
17:33 Wanko: now, do i upload the log to the forums myself or you have to do it?
17:33 P A N: me
That's enough for me, shooting you a star rnWanko wrote:
Joe, I can't promise it will definitely get ranked, but I'm trying to make it happen
13:30 Wanko: Hello, are you free for a quick glance on a map i'm trying to rank?
13:30 Bakari: yeah, sure
13:30 *Wanko is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1262042 ClariS - Hitorigoto -TV MIX-]
13:30 Wanko: it's not k-pop but...
13:33 *Bakari is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1262042 ClariS - Hitorigoto -TV MIX- [Insane]]
13:34 Bakari: 00:09:818 (1,2,3,4) - it felt pretty weird since strong drums 1-2 had no any kind of movement
13:34 Bakari: and then 3-4 were mapped with jumps
13:35 Wanko: hmm, so just a jump instead?
13:35 Bakari: 00:13:272 (4,5) - could've been a jump, I suppose. this kind of beats is generally mapped with jumps in this difficulty
13:35 Bakari: try adding jumps on 1-2 and stacking 3-4
13:35 Bakari: 00:21:454 (1,2) - not sure why you would curve sliders in such a way
13:35 Wanko: i see
13:36 Bakari: 00:22:727 (1,2) - especially when the shapes are inconsistent
13:36 Wanko: wanted to change things up a bit, guess it didnt work
13:37 Bakari: 00:42:909 (6,7,1,2) - that was pretty confusing, try to differntiate 3/4 and 1/2 visually?
13:37 Bakari: 00:47:454 (7,1) - stacks right after jumps are kind of flow-breaking
13:37 Bakari: if that was intended, that's cool
13:37 Wanko: good point
13:37 Bakari: though I feel like keeping some kind of movement is better
13:38 Bakari: 00:48:727 (5,6,1) - spacing here implies that (6) is stronger than (1). is that really so?
13:38 Wanko: placed (5) close only because there's an extended slider before it
13:39 Bakari: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7840520
13:39 Bakari: try increasing the spacing since (1) is stronger
13:39 Bakari: so, it'd give it more emphasis
13:39 Wanko: oh
13:40 Bakari: 00:49:454 (2,3,4,5) - there's some kind of trumpet kicking in, try to Ctrl+G the whole thing. this way the sliders will stress it better
13:40 Bakari: in terms of rhythm, of course. you'll have to move things around afterwards :p
13:41 Bakari: 00:53:454 (1) - two equally strong beats here, so instead of a slider you could fit two circles
13:41 Wanko: ye, that's obvious enough ^^
13:41 Bakari: 00:56:363 (9,1) - this has already been mentioned, if you feel like changing it, keep the changes consistent :p
13:42 Wanko: i want to keep these for kiai :P
13:42 Bakari: 01:03:636 (1,2,3,4) - (4) gets no jump, though it sounds pretty much the same as the previous beats
13:44 Bakari: i guess that'll do for a quick check
13:45 Wanko: ok thank you <3
13:45 Bakari: anytime
13:45 Wanko: nice to get a mod from someone who knows what he's doing for once ;D
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