Etsuko Yakushimaru Metropolitan Orchestra - Noruniru

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indyinyou
[Hard]
00:12:514 : this note move back to 00:12:325 ?
00:19:384 : add whistle
00:19:384 : ^
00:19:384 : ^
00:20:619 : ^
00:27:325 : add clap
00:32:796 : add whistle
00:33:149 : ^
00:33:502 : ^
00:42:502 : this spin end to 00:43:913 add green line use default fin hitsound
00:52:737 : ^

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Topic Starter
Kuma-san

indyinyou wrote:

[Hard]
00:12:514 : this note move back to 00:12:325 ?
00:19:384 : add whistle
00:19:384 : ^
00:19:384 : ^
00:20:619 : ^
00:27:325 : add clap
00:32:796 : add whistle
00:33:149 : ^
00:33:502 : ^
00:42:502 : this spin end to 00:43:913 add green line use default fin hitsound
00:52:737 : ^

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All Fixed.Thanks
Hellzero
General
Kiai time на всех дифах должен быть одинаковым.

toxikon's easy
00:24:149 (1) - закончить на 00:29:796? и не помешало бы заглушить конец спиннера
00:48:149 (3) - развернуть риверс что бы легче прочесть
01:04:031 (1,1) - два чертовски длинных спиннера, смотрится как халтура. Может быть замапить половину?

Genesis' normal
00:05:090 (5,1) - spacing
Очень много ошибок в спейсинги. Советую пройтись по всей дифе с ДС.
00:12:855 (1,2,3) - Мб все таки вытащить ноты из под слайдера?
00:30:855 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - эта часть не звучит. Как вариант можно сделать так
01:06:855 - добавить ноту. Ибо слишком не понятный переход с белых тиков на красные.

Hard
01:23:462 (1) - закончить спиннер как и на изи сложностях ( на 01:27:697 )
00:14:796 (7) - подвинь чтобы получился треугольник как 00:13:737 (2,3,4)
00:15:678 (2) - слайдер на 4 тика как то внезапно, особенно после 3 тиков. Убрать один риверс и добавить ноту?
00:40:561 (1,2) - неудачный спейсинг. Очень похоже на джамп D: так и хочется прыгнуть. Лучше переместить.

Insane
01:23:462 (1) - закончить спиннер как и на изи сложностях ( на 01:27:697 )
01:04:737 (1) - начать с 01:04:560 ?
01:08:796 (1) - закончить на 01:11:796 ?
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

Hellzero wrote:

General
Kiai time на всех дифах должен быть одинаковым.

Genesis' normal
00:05:090 (5,1) - spacing
Очень много ошибок в спейсинги. Советую пройтись по всей дифе с ДС.
00:12:855 (1,2,3) - Мб все таки вытащить ноты из под слайдера?
00:30:855 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - эта часть не звучит. Как вариант можно сделать так
01:06:855 - добавить ноту. Ибо слишком не понятный переход с белых тиков на красные.

Hard
01:23:462 (1) - закончить спиннер как и на изи сложностях ( на 01:27:697 )
00:14:796 (7) - подвинь чтобы получился треугольник как 00:13:737 (2,3,4)
00:15:678 (2) - слайдер на 4 тика как то внезапно, особенно после 3 тиков. Убрать один риверс и добавить ноту?
00:40:561 (1,2) - неудачный спейсинг. Очень похоже на джамп D: так и хочется прыгнуть. Лучше переместить.

Insane
01:23:462 (1) - закончить спиннер как и на изи сложностях ( на 01:27:697 )
01:04:737 (1) - начать с 01:04:560 ?
01:08:796 (1) - закончить на 01:11:796 ?
Fixed
cRyo[iceeicee]
00:53:266 omg, why so ugly slider ?
more imagination \o/
Daiguren
Hellooo

toxizy
It seems it's the easiest diff in your map ,so please reduce AR at least by 2 , and reduce OD at laest by 1
00:44:266 (1,2,3) - please dont make this kind of overlap ,especially (3) ,it will make beginners awkward
00:54:149 (1,2,3) - dont make multi spacing in easy diffs, it's terrible
00:59:796 (1,2,3) - ^
01:01:913 (1,2,3) - ^
I think they're the biggest problems in this diff ,you must fix it

GeNormal
00:02:619 (4) - spacing
00:05:090 (5) - down a grid may more suitablefor this part
00:29:090 (1,2) - please add a repeat instead of (2)

Hard
00:12:502 (x) - add a circle here?
00:42:502 (1) - use SC1 - whistle?
01:12:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about make it like this? ↓

and only add whistle at the first hit of (1)

Insane
00:24:149 (1,2) - not complete overlap
00:57:678 (10,11) - how about make it like this? ↓

That's all : D
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

Daigurenhyourinmaru wrote:

Hellooo


toxizy
It seems it's the easiest diff in your map ,so please reduce AR at least by 2 , and reduce OD at laest by 1
00:44:266 (1,2,3) - please dont make this kind of overlap ,especially (3) ,it will make beginners awkward
00:54:149 (1,2,3) - dont make multi spacing in easy diffs, it's terrible
00:59:796 (1,2,3) - ^
01:01:913 (1,2,3) - ^
I think they're the biggest problems in this diff ,you must fix it
Fixed

GeNormal
00:02:619 (4) - spacing Fixed
00:05:090 (5) - down a grid may more suitablefor this part Fixed
00:29:090 (1,2) - please add a repeat instead of (2) Katsuri said what its bad for a newbie players

Hard
00:12:502 (x) - add a circle here? Fixed
00:42:502 (1) - use SC1 - whistle? Nope.indyinyou sayd use default sound to this spiner
01:12:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about make it like this? ↓

and only add whistle at the first hit of (1)
its hackwork

Insane
00:24:149 (1,2) - not complete overlap Fixed
00:57:678 (10,11) - how about make it like this? ↓
I think its sounds very bad

That's all : D
Ryafuka
hi :)


[General]

"Ruetsuko Yakushima" is wrong Artist name.

"Etsuko Yakushimaru" is so correct



nice map :3
star~~
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

Ryafuka wrote:

hi :)


[General]

"Ruetsuko Yakushima" is wrong Artist name.

"Etsuko Yakushimaru" is so correct



nice map :3
star~~
Thanks
ryuu
милый скин :3
милая песня :3
милая карта :3
звезда ★
ShaggoN
Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

General
  1. Why timing on toxizy stage is different? I can see 2 red sections, on rest of stages.

Custom skin doesn't disturb my gameplay. Sooo it's fine. :3

[toxizy]
  1. Some notes that are stacked are not supposed to be stacked imo. Set Stack Leniency to 5.


[GeNormal]
No complains here. ^.^

[Hard]
  1. 00:45:678 (1) - Remove new combo here.


[Insane]
  1. 00:11:090 (1) - Remove new combo.
  2. 00:29:266 (1) - Same here. This new combo looks really weird for me o.O
  3. I'd rotate it by 60 degrees clockwise to make it look like this (more tidy in my opinion):


Cool mapset :3 I like. Star from me. :D
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

ShaggoN wrote:

Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

General
  1. Why timing on toxizy stage is different? I can see 2 red sections, on rest of stages.
Fixed
Custom skin doesn't disturb my gameplay. Sooo it's fine. :3

[toxizy]
  1. Some notes that are stacked are not supposed to be stacked imo. Set Stack Leniency to 5.
Fixed

[GeNormal]
No complains here. ^.^

[Hard]
  1. 00:45:678 (1) - Remove new combo here.
Fixed

[Insane]
  1. 00:11:090 (1) - Remove new combo. Fixed
  2. 00:29:266 (1) - Same here. This new combo looks really weird for me o.O Fixed
  3. I'd rotate it by 60 degrees clockwise to make it look like this (more tidy in my opinion):
Fixed

Cool mapset :3 I like. Star from me. :D
Thanks
Suzully
Thank you for request~

[General]

  • What is "ArtistUnicode:" in [Hard].osu?


[toxizy]

  • There are too many spinner and break-time. Put more notes.
    Difficulty setting is same as [GeNormal]?
    I recommend you to set them, AR3or4, OD2or3.
    SV is higher than [GeNormal]. This is a big issue which makes this beatmap unrankable.
  1. 00:45:678 (3) - Hmm...change it like this?
  2. 00:48:149 (3) - ^


[GeNormal]
  1. 00:14:266 (5,6) - Stack perfectly or move them further away. It's hard to read for normal players imo.
  2. 01:03:678 (5,1) - Narrow spacing. Move them further away.


[Hard]

  • Fine.
  1. 01:12:168 (1) - The hit sound is noisy a bit. Turn down the volume or use soft-sound?


[Insane]
  1. 00:12:502 (6) - There is no back-sound here. Remove it?
  2. 00:30:678 (1,2,3,4) - Looks like weird a bit. Move (3,4) down 1 grid?
  3. 00:37:384 (3) - This slider doesn't follow both of the vocal and the back-sound. Change it?
  4. 01:28:756 (T) - Remove green-line.


That's all.
Please think about easiest diff carefully to make this beatmap rankable.
However overall mapset is fine.
You did a good job.
Good luck~ ;)
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

Suzully wrote:

Thank you for request~

[General]

  • What is "ArtistUnicode:" in [Hard].osu?
Oh,its osutest fault

[toxizy]

  • There are too many spinner and break-time. Put more notes.
    Difficulty setting is same as [GeNormal]?
    I recommend you to set them, AR3or4, OD2or3.
    SV is higher than [GeNormal]. This is a big issue which makes this beatmap unrankable.
  1. 00:45:678 (3) - Hmm...change it like this?
  2. 00:48:149 (3) - ^


[GeNormal]
  1. 00:14:266 (5,6) - Stack perfectly or move them further away. It's hard to read for normal players imo.
  2. 01:03:678 (5,1) - Narrow spacing. Move them further away.


[Hard]

  • Fine.
  1. 01:12:168 (1) - The hit sound is noisy a bit. Turn down the volume or use soft-sound?


[Insane]
  1. 00:12:502 (6) - There is no back-sound here. Remove it?
  2. 00:30:678 (1,2,3,4) - Looks like weird a bit. Move (3,4) down 1 grid?
  3. 00:37:384 (3) - This slider doesn't follow both of the vocal and the back-sound. Change it?
  4. 01:28:756 (T) - Remove green-line.


That's all.
Please think about easiest diff carefully to make this beatmap rankable.
However overall mapset is fine.
You did a good job.
Good luck~ ;)
All Fixed.Thanks
Kiddo-Kun
[Easy]
00:23:443 - It feels like a note belongs here.
00:42:502 (1) - Remove clap and add a finish to the start of this slider.
00:43:561 (2) - Add a finish to the end of this slider.
01:04:031 (1) - Start this spinner on 01:03:678 but end it on the same place.
01:08:266 (1) - Add a finish to the end of this spinner.
01:12:520 - Delete this useless inheriting section.
01:19:226 (5) - Add new combo on this note and remove it on the next (1) to follow the lyrics.

[Normal]
This map seems very linear at some point. Try to spice things up.
01:01:913 (2) - (Ack, I tried not to do this kind of nazi ;~;) Move this up one tick to make it even with (1) and (2) (Grid Lvl 3)

[Insane]
00:17:266 (1) - Remove new combo on this note to match the combo similar to this before.
00:39:502 - Try cranking up the volume for this part.

That's all, I guess. I'm a tired. Call for a re-mod if you want.
STARED
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[Easy]
00:23:443 - It feels like a note belongs here.
00:42:502 (1) - Remove clap and add a finish to the start of this slider.
00:43:561 (2) - Add a finish to the end of this slider.
01:04:031 (1) - Start this spinner on 01:03:678 but end it on the same place.
01:08:266 (1) - Add a finish to the end of this spinner.
01:12:520 - Delete this useless inheriting section.
01:19:226 (5) - Add new combo on this note and remove it on the next (1) to follow the lyrics.

[Normal]
This map seems very linear at some point. Try to spice things up.
01:01:913 (2) - (Ack, I tried not to do this kind of nazi ;~;) Move this up one tick to make it even with (1) and (2) (Grid Lvl 3)

[Insane]
00:17:266 (1) - Remove new combo on this note to match the combo similar to this before.
00:39:502 - Try cranking up the volume for this part.

That's all, I guess. I'm a tired. Call for a re-mod if you want.
STARED
All Fixed.Thanks
happy30
[General]
-Timing is off at some parts, I tried to fix it but I think it needs more opinions first: http://puu.sh/42cT
-Try to come up with some more tags?
- Are you sure about the title and artist? I'm getting multiple results here:
"Noruniru by Etsuko Yakushimaru and the Metro Orchestra"

[GeNormal]
00:39:502 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rhythm sounds weird, use some whites?

[Hard]
00:49:560 (8) - Maybe you can improve this slider, it's not identical to (7) and the way it overlaps (2) doesn't look good.

[Insane]
00:40:208 (4) - Move this a bit to the right
00:41:619 (6) - move this a bit up
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

happy30 wrote:

[General]
-Timing is off at some parts, I tried to fix it but I think it needs more opinions first: http://puu.sh/42cT
-Try to come up with some more tags?
- Are you sure about the title and artist? I'm getting multiple results here:
"Noruniru by Etsuko Yakushimaru and the Metro Orchestra"

[GeNormal]
00:39:502 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rhythm sounds weird, use some whites?

[Hard]
00:49:560 (8) - Maybe you can improve this slider, it's not identical to (7) and the way it overlaps (2) doesn't look good.

[Insane]
00:40:208 (4) - Move this a bit to the right
00:41:619 (6) - move this a bit up
All Fixed.Thanks ^^
banbar
starrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!
good map :3





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