Star, ofc.
All FixedVass_Bass wrote:
Привет
GeNormal
00:14:972 (6) - состакуй
00:36:502 (2,3) - это тоже лучше состаковать
00:59:619 (3) - здесь спейсинг, но я бы лучше этот слайдер удлинила и убрала реверсы
01:03:678 (5) - отрази по вертикали и поставь по центру, ну и желательно симметрично сделать
Hard
00:18:502 (4,5) - не очень нравится как это место звучит, я предлагаю удалить 5ку, продлить 4ку до 00:19:384 - и после него поставить 2 серкла сюда 00:19:560 - и сюда 00:19:913 -
00:25:560 (1) - убери новое комбо
00:52:737 (1) - продли спиннер до белого тика
01:04:737 (1) - ^
01:21:344 (6) - комбо новое
Insane
00:14:443 (4,5,6) - поправь так, чтобы 6ка была на том же месте, что и 3ка
Думаю на этом все, приятная карта
Удачи, стар
All Fixed in Normal.ThanksKatsuri wrote:
General
Add more one easy difficulty would be fine, because 3 stars, 4,72 stars and 4,96 stars inn't a nice spread. Okay
Normal
00:15:678 (7) - *NAZI* Snap it correctly?
00:22:737 (1) - This kick Slider(Slider with more than 1 repeat) on the easiest difficulty Is really hard to read for a newbie player. Probably other modders will say that.
00:29:090 (1) - ^
00:39:502 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern follows Nothing
00:45:678 (5) - Kick Slider again..
Hard
Nothing~
Insane
Nothing~
Since, this map is not UNRANKABLE at all, but the [Hard] and the [Insane] are messy.
Star because It's GOING.
All Fixed.Thanksindyinyou wrote:
[Hard]
00:12:514 : this note move back to 00:12:325 ?
00:19:384 : add whistle
00:19:384 : ^
00:19:384 : ^
00:20:619 : ^
00:27:325 : add clap
00:32:796 : add whistle
00:33:149 : ^
00:33:502 : ^
00:42:502 : this spin end to 00:43:913 add green line use default fin hitsound
00:52:737 : ^
star
FixedHellzero wrote:
General
Kiai time на всех дифах должен быть одинаковым.
Genesis' normal
00:05:090 (5,1) - spacing
Очень много ошибок в спейсинги. Советую пройтись по всей дифе с ДС.
00:12:855 (1,2,3) - Мб все таки вытащить ноты из под слайдера?
00:30:855 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - эта часть не звучит. Как вариант можно сделать так01:06:855 - добавить ноту. Ибо слишком не понятный переход с белых тиков на красные.
Hard
01:23:462 (1) - закончить спиннер как и на изи сложностях ( на 01:27:697 )
00:14:796 (7) - подвинь чтобы получился треугольник как 00:13:737 (2,3,4)
00:15:678 (2) - слайдер на 4 тика как то внезапно, особенно после 3 тиков. Убрать один риверс и добавить ноту?
00:40:561 (1,2) - неудачный спейсинг. Очень похоже на джамп D: так и хочется прыгнуть. Лучше переместить.
Insane
01:23:462 (1) - закончить спиннер как и на изи сложностях ( на 01:27:697 )
01:04:737 (1) - начать с 01:04:560 ?
01:08:796 (1) - закончить на 01:11:796 ?
Daigurenhyourinmaru wrote:
Hellooo
toxizy
It seems it's the easiest diff in your map ,so please reduce AR at least by 2 , and reduce OD at laest by 1
00:44:266 (1,2,3) - please dont make this kind of overlap ,especially (3) ,it will make beginners awkward
00:54:149 (1,2,3) - dont make multi spacing in easy diffs, it's terrible
00:59:796 (1,2,3) - ^
01:01:913 (1,2,3) - ^
I think they're the biggest problems in this diff ,you must fix it
Fixed
GeNormal
00:02:619 (4) - spacing Fixed
00:05:090 (5) - down a grid may more suitablefor this part Fixed
00:29:090 (1,2) - please add a repeat instead of (2) Katsuri said what its bad for a newbie players
Hard
00:12:502 (x) - add a circle here? Fixed
00:42:502 (1) - use SC1 - whistle? Nope.indyinyou sayd use default sound to this spiner
01:12:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about make it like this? ↓SPOILERits hackwork
and only add whistle at the first hit of (1)
Insane
00:24:149 (1,2) - not complete overlap Fixed
00:57:678 (10,11) - how about make it like this? ↓
I think its sounds very bad
That's all : D
ThanksRyafuka wrote:
hi
[General]
"Ruetsuko Yakushima" is wrong Artist name.
"Etsuko Yakushimaru" is so correct
nice map :3
star~~
ThanksShaggoN wrote:
Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.
GeneralFixed
- Why timing on toxizy stage is different? I can see 2 red sections, on rest of stages.
Custom skin doesn't disturb my gameplay. Sooo it's fine. :3
[toxizy]Fixed
- Some notes that are stacked are not supposed to be stacked imo. Set Stack Leniency to 5.
[GeNormal]
No complains here. ^.^
[Hard]Fixed
- 00:45:678 (1) - Remove new combo here.
[Insane]Fixed
- 00:11:090 (1) - Remove new combo. Fixed
- 00:29:266 (1) - Same here. This new combo looks really weird for me o.O Fixed
- I'd rotate it by 60 degrees clockwise to make it look like this (more tidy in my opinion):
Cool mapset :3 I like. Star from me.
All Fixed.ThanksSuzully wrote:
Thank you for request~
[General]Oh,its osutest fault
What is "ArtistUnicode:" in [Hard].osu?
[toxizy]
There are too many spinner and break-time. Put more notes.
Difficulty setting is same as [GeNormal]?
I recommend you to set them, AR3or4, OD2or3.
SV is higher than [GeNormal]. This is a big issue which makes this beatmap unrankable.[GeNormal]
- 00:45:678 (3) - Hmm...change it like this?
- 00:48:149 (3) - ^
[Hard]
- 00:14:266 (5,6) - Stack perfectly or move them further away. It's hard to read for normal players imo.
- 01:03:678 (5,1) - Narrow spacing. Move them further away.
Fine.[Insane]
- 01:12:168 (1) - The hit sound is noisy a bit. Turn down the volume or use soft-sound?
That's all.
- 00:12:502 (6) - There is no back-sound here. Remove it?
- 00:30:678 (1,2,3,4) - Looks like weird a bit. Move (3,4) down 1 grid?
- 00:37:384 (3) - This slider doesn't follow both of the vocal and the back-sound. Change it?
- 01:28:756 (T) - Remove green-line.
Please think about easiest diff carefully to make this beatmap rankable.
However overall mapset is fine.
You did a good job.
Good luck~
All Fixed.ThanksKiddo-Kun wrote:
[Easy]
00:23:443 - It feels like a note belongs here.
00:42:502 (1) - Remove clap and add a finish to the start of this slider.
00:43:561 (2) - Add a finish to the end of this slider.
01:04:031 (1) - Start this spinner on 01:03:678 but end it on the same place.
01:08:266 (1) - Add a finish to the end of this spinner.
01:12:520 - Delete this useless inheriting section.
01:19:226 (5) - Add new combo on this note and remove it on the next (1) to follow the lyrics.
[Normal]
This map seems very linear at some point. Try to spice things up.
01:01:913 (2) - (Ack, I tried not to do this kind of nazi ;~;) Move this up one tick to make it even with (1) and (2) (Grid Lvl 3)
[Insane]
00:17:266 (1) - Remove new combo on this note to match the combo similar to this before.
00:39:502 - Try cranking up the volume for this part.
That's all, I guess. I'm a tired. Call for a re-mod if you want.
STARED
All Fixed.Thanks ^^happy30 wrote:
[General]
-Timing is off at some parts, I tried to fix it but I think it needs more opinions first: http://puu.sh/42cT
-Try to come up with some more tags?
- Are you sure about the title and artist? I'm getting multiple results here:
"Noruniru by Etsuko Yakushimaru and the Metro Orchestra"
[GeNormal]
00:39:502 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rhythm sounds weird, use some whites?
[Hard]
00:49:560 (8) - Maybe you can improve this slider, it's not identical to (7) and the way it overlaps (2) doesn't look good.
[Insane]
00:40:208 (4) - Move this a bit to the right
00:41:619 (6) - move this a bit up
Actually, that's just the Japanese way of writing "Nornir":happy30 wrote:
[General]
- Are you sure about the title and artist? I'm getting multiple results here:
"Noruniru"
All Fixed.Thanksgina91189 wrote:
[General]
-You got 2 .osb files, delete one
-Please resnap all the green lines that are related to kiai change
[toxizy]
00:11:443 – add a note? Sounds better, if you do, adjust the spacing by yourself please
00:22:737 – ^
00:54:125 (1) – too close to the previous
00:55:537 (1) – ^, try to keep spacings the same in Easy
[GeNormal]
00:06:855 (4) – nazi – up 1 grid (Lv.3)
00:11:443 (4) – why don’t you copy the previous one? Seems ugly right now. I would suggest like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/125794
00:30:876 (1) – too far from the previous
00:30:876 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/125796 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/125797, I adjusted the spacings already.
00:36:574 (2,3) – I don’t like the way they overlapping.
01:06:478 (1,2) – this way fits better imo: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/125798
[Hard]
I’m fine with this diff
[Insane]
I’m fine with this diff too, but I think OD is too high, maybe OD-1 ?
Nice song <3
All Fixed.ThanksJauiPlaY wrote:
hihi~
some suggestions:
[General]
there are 2 osb files in the folder, delete them please.
you should add a scorebar-bg.png file in the folder.
and your scorebar-ki.png and scorebar-kidanger.png seems absolutely same. idk it's rankable or not, so you'd better find a MAT and ask about it.
[toxizy]
00:04:031(4) - move to 00:03:855 and repeat 1 more time may be better.
00:06:855(x) - add a note.
00:08:619(1,1) - remove new combo.
00:11:443(x) - add a slider, which ends on 00:12:502.
00:15:325(4) - same suggestion as 00:04:031(4).
00:18:149(x) - add a note.
00:19:913(1,1) - remove new combo.
00:23:443(2) - move to 00:23:090 and add a note at 00:23:796.
00:34:103(5) - new combo.
00:36:574(8) - ^
00:41:457(1) - remove new combo.
01:23:819(1) - ends on 01:27:701 like other diffs?
[GeNormal]
00:10:031(3) - remove the clap on the beginning of this slider.
00:30:876(1,2,3,4,5,6) - idk how to say about these -__- but it's unrankable for sure imo, maybe you should do something on it.
00:39:516(1,2,3,4,5) - sounds weird imo.
00:45:692(5) - add clap on the reverse arrow.
00:46:398(6,7) - clap.
00:59:596(3) - clap on the end of this slider.
01:00:302(4) - clap.
01:00:655 (5) - clap on the beginning of this slider.
01:06:831(x) - add a note.
[Hard]
00:48:144(4,5) - bad overlapping.
01:12:172(1) - quite noisy imo.
[Insane]
00:24:171(1) - try to overlap the reverse arrow is unrankable.
01:12:125(1) - move to 01:12:172.
still need working for me, especially the easy and normal diffs~
so
star~
ThanksSakura Hana wrote:
[General]
Title is "Noruniru" also need to add (TV Size) at the end (god this is gonna be a long thread title X_X) Fixed
[Timing]
Go back to Selee's timing (2 red lines) there's no real need for so many red lines all beats are landing squarely on the metronome, i'd still suggest you get a timing expert like Doomsday, Lybydose, Alace, Derekku (and could mention many others), but imo the main reason it sounds off it's because during 00:29:796 ~ 00:39:502 rythm is hard to predict due to the softness and lack of consistency. I'll talk with anyone about timing
[Skin]
Since u only got 1 scorebar colour, rename your scorebar-colour-0-png to scorebar-colour.png. Fixed
[Insane]
01:02:796 (1) - Hidden under another slider track and a hit burst, i recommend you move it Fixed
[Hard]
Why does kiai start later here? Fixed
[GeNormal]
Why is this diff slower than the easiest diff?
Hp drain +1 / +2 It's weird to have the same hp drain as the easiest diff when this one's supposed to have higher note density. Fixed
00:32:288 (3,4) - Hard to read correctly. Fixed
00:33:943 (6,7) - Hard to read which one's the slider. Fixed
[Toxizy]
Don't use slider speed changes on the easiest diff please.
00:24:149 (1) - This spinner is a bit too long and doesnt fit at all. Fixed
Good Luck!~
All Fixed.ThanksMegurine Luka wrote:
Hi. Mod as requested
[General]
Seeing none
[toxizy]
Better to use 1/4. I guess you use 1/3 and some notes seems off.
00:29:090 (3,4) - move 1 grid right
00:32:972 (4) - start from 00:32:796 and end at 00:33:502?
00:35:443 (3) - ends at 00:36:149
00:38:266 (2) - spacing
00:41:443 (2) - ^
00:42:502 (1) - ^
00:42:502 (1) - ends at 00:43:208
00:49:560 (1) - 1 grid down
01:20:462 (2) - start at 01:20:638 and change the spacing of next circle
[GeNormal]
I suspicious that you change the SV of something
look at this, you need to add a SV change back to 1.0x↓
00:34:119 (7) - sliders covered
00:39:502 (1) - ^(change SV back to 1.0x)
Also the sound effect is noisy in this pink combo part.
01:20:638 (1) - del nc
[Hard]
00:33:943 (1,2) - move them to (00:33:855&00:34:031)
01:23:462 (1) - add a green line to silence the end of the spinner
Nice map set and sound effect
[Insane]
00:33:943 (4,5) - as Hard
Good
I like the last two diffs. Deserve a star.