Rie Murakawa - Asuiro (TV size) · forum

-Atri-

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

-Atri- 2017-04-08T06:21:16+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018年1月10日 at 16:57:51

Artist: Rie Murakawa
Title: Asuiro (TV size)
Source: エスカ&ロジーのアトリエ
Tags: 黄昏の空の錬金術士 Escha & Logy no Atelier: Tasogare no Sora no Renkinjutsushi A15 Alchemists of the Dusk Sky opening KuranteMelodii krt Suzuki_1112 LowComboFC LCFC Moecho Moeri Pata-mon Asuka_-
BPM: 185
Filesize: 18633kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

1112's Another (4.98 stars, 352 notes)
Asuka_-'s Normal (2.27 stars, 203 notes)
Collab Easy (1.58 stars, 114 notes)
Existence (5.4 stars, 375 notes)
Moecho's Insane (4.58 stars, 299 notes)
Pata-Mon's Hard (3.44 stars, 246 notes)

Download: Rie Murakawa - Asuiro (TV size)
Download: Rie Murakawa - Asuiro (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Banner by me
Beatmap Pack #607

3rd ranked mapset

2014 Spring anime opening

Shitty full ver: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/627636

Easy:Me and LowComboFC
Normal: Asuka_-
Hard: Pata-mon
Insane: Moecho
Another: Suzuki_1112
Existence: Me

Metadata

Sorry, this map is impossible to FC with DT.

Ending: Shimotsuki Haruka - Fuyumidori (TV size) by Lanturn

Last edited by -Atri- 2018-01-24T13:27:55+00:00, edited 93 times in total.

timemon

Beatmap Nominator

1,307 posts

Joined November 2012

timemon 2017-06-04T04:13:24+00:00

Hello, M4M from your queue

[Existence]
00:01:982 (2) - the red tick is louder. This one should be clickable object, just make it 2 circles.
00:07:982 (4,5) - stack
00:11:874 (5) - move it a little so you could blanket it with the slider
00:13:496 - why not map the vocal as well? it will make it exactly 1/1 gap
00:19:009 (4,5) - this one should be a triplet
00:46:577 (5,3,4,5) - blanket is off
00:52:901 (5,6) - I think you could make these sliders look symmetrical

where are the other diffs lol

Good luck with your mapset

-Atri-

3,049 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

-Atri- 2017-06-04T05:22:39+00:00

timemon wrote:
Hello, M4M from your queue

[Existence]
00:01:982 (2) - the red tick is louder. This one should be clickable object, just make it 2 circles.
00:07:982 (4,5) - stack
00:11:874 (5) - move it a little so you could blanket it with the slider No, i like the triangle pattern
00:13:496 - why not map the vocal as well? it will make it exactly 1/1 gap Sudden stop on the instrument
00:19:009 (4,5) - this one should be a triplet I wanted to follow the piano here
00:46:577 (5,3,4,5) - blanket is off
00:52:901 (5,6) - I think you could make these sliders look symmetrical

where are the other diffs lol

Good luck with your mapset

Other fixed
Thanks for the mod~

Milan-

1,473 posts

Joined August 2011

Milan- 2017-06-04T08:44:45+00:00

saw this on your queue for m4m, so my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/617721

the only diff:
-00:13:172 (4) - drum whistle sounds cooler imo
-00:17:226 (1,2) - these dont feel complementary to each other.. like you go wub into a linear slider with linear flow, maybe something more circular?
-00:19:496 (7,8) - as slider sounds better, the piano ends on (7) so keeping using circles doesnt fit too nicely
-00:26:955 (1) - clap on this calm section sounds out of place, using normal sampleset would be better i think
-00:38:469 (2,3,4) - considering you have these 1/2 circles spaced everywhere in the section, it may be better doing the same here as well
-00:43:172 (1,2) - could do this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8259284 xd
-00:44:631 (2) - i'd use 1/4 slider here. you use a high sv but all the momentum stops with this circle, in addition that there's a drum track in the background
-00:55:009 (2,3) - swapping these would be neat, so there's more movement in the cursor and it doesnt stop at the slider's end
-00:55:658 (1) - also consider extending this slider till 00:56:063 - . like you ignore drums and vocals by not mapping 00:55:820 - , it makes sense to extend it in this case. or even triple like 01:16:415 (1,2) - i guess it works
-01:00:685 (4,5,1) - shouldnt (1) be more spaced than (5)? because downbeat and higher pitch voice
-01:20:307 (4,1) - for the ~aesthetics~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8259341
-01:22:091 - dont start the volumen change here, it's so disorienting when the crash in the music is louder than the crash on the hitsounds ><
-01:26:955 (7,1) - stack on the last note is kinda underwhelming imo, maybe place (1) in the middle of your triangle? would be nice

you s hould take pkhg's diff from his mapset xd

-Atri-

3,049 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

-Atri- 2017-06-04T10:46:29+00:00

Milan- wrote:
saw this on your queue for m4m, so my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/617721

the only diff:
-00:13:172 (4) - drum whistle sounds cooler imo Let's give it a shot
-00:17:226 (1,2) - these dont feel complementary to each other.. like you go wub into a linear slider with linear flow, maybe something more circular? Interestingly, those kind of flow transition plays well imo
-00:19:496 (7,8) - as slider sounds better, the piano ends on (7) so keeping using circles doesnt fit too nicely Tru
-00:26:955 (1) - clap on this calm section sounds out of place, using normal sampleset would be better i think sure
-00:38:469 (2,3,4) - considering you have these 1/2 circles spaced everywhere in the section, it may be better doing the same here as well Changed, since i don't think there's a reason to keep this one, too
-00:43:172 (1,2) - could do this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8259284 xd Sure
-00:44:631 (2) - i'd use 1/4 slider here. you use a high sv but all the momentum stops with this circle, in addition that there's a drum track in the background Sure, as but can emphasize those heavy notes
-00:55:009 (2,3) - swapping these would be neat, so there's more movement in the cursor and it doesnt stop at the slider's end After lots of testing, changed as your suggestion makes easier to get 300's
-00:55:658 (1) - also consider extending this slider till 00:56:063 - . like you ignore drums and vocals by not mapping 00:55:820 - , it makes sense to extend it in this case. or even triple like 01:16:415 (1,2) - i guess it works Changed, although the consistency with 01:16:091 (3,1) - is questionable
-01:00:685 (4,5,1) - shouldnt (1) be more spaced than (5)? because downbeat and higher pitch voice I prefer the consistent spacing of Large-small spacing with 00:58:091 (4,5,1) - ,thus, i can't think out any solution of this one without making those slider ugly and awkward
-01:20:307 (4,1) - for the ~aesthetics~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8259341 ok
-01:22:091 - dont start the volumen change here, it's so disorienting when the crash in the music is louder than the crash on the hitsounds >< Yeah i forgot it
-01:26:955 (7,1) - stack on the last note is kinda underwhelming imo, maybe place (1) in the middle of your triangle? would be nice I prefer stacking it as there's a pause before that

you s hould take pkhg's diff from his mapset xd

Thanks for the nice mod~

Seolv

847 posts

Joined March 2016

Seolv 2017-06-04T13:27:40+00:00

shit mod, M4M from your queue :3

00:02:226 - Spinner maybe? or make previous circle some kind of cool slider art, idk xd
00:13:172 (4) - Make it a little bit more emphasized with spacing, since there's a emphasized sound there
00:24:361 (2) - This might confuse a lot of players, maybe use different rhythm, something along the lines of this
00:25:009 (6,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - This part is overall very calm and calmer than the previous parts, maybe try to use less spacing for your jumps or less density to reflect the music bette
00:55:658 (1) - Would be cool if this was the same slider shape as the sliders before it, just a suggestion
00:56:063 (2) - There's no sound on this tick.

Short mod, there really wasn't much to say overall but it's good for now.
My ability of modding higher diffs isn't very good and I know that, I'm sorry if this mod was bad but I was really trying my best, here's the map for M4M: t/584974/start=0
Thanks~

-Atri-

3,049 posts

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Topic Starter

-Atri- 2017-06-06T12:19:09+00:00

[ L u k a s ] wrote:
shit mod, M4M from your queue :3

00:02:226 - Spinner maybe? or make previous circle some kind of cool slider art, idk xd imo i don't hear a supportable sound to do that
00:13:172 (4) - Make it a little bit more emphasized with spacing, since there's a emphasized sound there It's emphasized enough though, by adding a stronger whistle and ignoring the vocal at 00:13:496 -
00:24:361 (2) - This might confuse a lot of players, maybe use different rhythm, something along the lines of this Nope, switching instruments :p
00:25:009 (6,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - This part is overall very calm and calmer than the previous parts, maybe try to use less spacing for your jumps or less density to reflect the music better No, i really like this part, besides, the distance has been smaller compared to the previous parts
00:55:658 (1) - Would be cool if this was the same slider shape as the sliders before it, just a suggestion I prefer the current asthetics
00:56:063 (2) - There's no sound on this tick. Extended the previous slider
Short mod, there really wasn't much to say overall but it's good for now.
My ability of modding higher diffs isn't very good and I know that, I'm sorry if this mod was bad but I was really trying my best, here's the map for M4M: t/584974/start=0
Thanks~

Thanks for the mod~

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Mei 2017-06-09T15:36:16+00:00

我很抱歉，我剛才

-Atri-

3,049 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

-Atri- 2017-06-09T15:46:51+00:00

Mei wrote:
我很抱歉，我剛才

和愛絲卡醬上床了

Otosaka-Yu

1,119 posts

Joined August 2013

Otosaka-Yu 2017-06-09T16:41:25+00:00

gee

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:アスイロ
Artist:Rie Murakawa
ArtistUnicode:村川梨衣
Creator:Firis Mistlud
Version:1112's Another
Source:エスカ&ロジーのアトリエ～黄昏の空の錬金術士～
Tags:Escha & Logy no Atelier: Tasogare no Sora no Renkinjutsushi A15 Alchemists of the Dusk Sky opening KuranteMelodii krt Suzuki_1112 LowComboFC LCFC Moecho Moeri Pata-mon Asuka_-
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-Atri-

3,049 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

-Atri- 2017-06-09T17:52:32+00:00

Chatlog with Sophie sensei

2017-06-10 01:37 Firis Mistlud: Hi Sophie sensei
2017-06-10 01:40 SophieNM: oh Firis
2017-06-10 01:40 SophieNM: sry for late
2017-06-10 01:40 SophieNM: busy doing alchemy stuff
2017-06-10 01:41 Firis Mistlud: Can i ask you for a testplay?
2017-06-10 01:41 SophieNM: np
2017-06-10 01:41 Firis Mistlud: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1261245 Rie Murakawa - Asuiro]
2017-06-10 01:47 SophieNM: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1261245 Rie Murakawa - Asuiro]
2017-06-10 01:47 SophieNM: fking internet in Kirchen Bell
2017-06-10 01:47 SophieNM: 仆街網速
2017-06-10 01:47 Firis Mistlud: lol
2017-06-10 01:47 Firis Mistlud: Ertona is no better ah
2017-06-10 01:49 Firis Mistlud: Nice sophie
2017-06-10 01:49 Firis Mistlud: Almost FC
2017-06-10 01:50 SophieNM: diu
2017-06-10 01:50 SophieNM: on9 shitmiss
2017-06-10 01:50 Firis Mistlud: Better then me
2017-06-10 01:50 Firis Mistlud: I can't pass ah
2017-06-10 01:51 SophieNM: hmmmmmmmmm
2017-06-10 01:52 SophieNM: 00:14:145 (3,4,5) -
2017-06-10 01:52 SophieNM: .
2017-06-10 01:52 Firis Mistlud: ?
2017-06-10 01:52 SophieNM: 3/4 slider then triple
2017-06-10 01:52 SophieNM: almost miss D:
2017-06-10 01:52 Firis Mistlud: This part is so fine
2017-06-10 01:53 Firis Mistlud: Easy to read
2017-06-10 01:53 Firis Mistlud: I asked someone about this
2017-06-10 01:53 SophieNM: 00:25:009 - pro la firis
2017-06-10 01:53 SophieNM: when teach
2017-06-10 01:53 Firis Mistlud: No you teach me
2017-06-10 01:53 Firis Mistlud: Your alchemy better than me
2017-06-10 01:53 Firis Mistlud: orz
2017-06-10 01:54 SophieNM: XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
2017-06-10 01:55 SophieNM: 01:22:091 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - -.-
2017-06-10 01:55 Firis Mistlud: lol
2017-06-10 01:55 Firis Mistlud: Monstrata jumps
2017-06-10 01:55 SophieNM: other than that, nice map
2017-06-10 01:56 Firis Mistlud: Your map is better than me ah sophie
2017-06-10 01:56 Firis Mistlud: So does your alchemy skills
2017-06-10 01:56 SophieNM: no i am noob
2017-06-10 01:56 SophieNM: when take alchemy exam ah
2017-06-10 01:56 Firis Mistlud: lol
2017-06-10 01:57 Firis Mistlud: Next week :p
2017-06-10 01:58 SophieNM: .
2017-06-10 01:58 SophieNM: go study la dllm
2017-06-10 01:58 SophieNM: or i will slap you in your butt
2017-06-10 01:58 SophieNM: D:<
2017-06-10 01:58 Firis Mistlud: XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

_Yiiiii

474 posts

Joined February 2015

_Yiiiii 2017-06-17T11:35:44+00:00

Existence

00:04:253 (1) - 这个感觉好快啊，一下子让人反应不过来，可以在滑条头那里折一下，这样从开头比较慢的部分过度过来会自然一点。
哇你日常开DS，这段开DS感觉好别扭啊，小心被搞。

00:24:361 (2) - 换个更突然点的方式出这个圈吧，现在这样不适合那下镲的音，可以试试这样

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01:00:685 (4,5) - 真心觉得这间距大了。
01:01:334 (1) - flow再暴力一点吧，换一个别手点的弧形吧。
01:21:442 (4,5,6,7) - 这个角度的四方很别扭，再斜一点。
01:26:955 (7,1) - 别叠了，用大间距吧，空的那一拍一直是有音的，这样有点别扭。

1112's Another

00:35:063 (2,3) - DS???????等死吧
00:40:739 (2,1) - 擦边
00:40:577 (1,2,3,1) - 这个变距打着很不爽。
00:52:901 (1,2) - 这俩之间几乎直线flow再加这么打间距打起来一点感觉都没有，弄那么大间距除了骗人掉个cb以外没任何作用。
01:01:172 (4,1,2) - flow不好，滑条别扭了，找个合适位置放个弧就得了。

Moecho's Insane

00:33:928 (4,5) - 为什么要这么大间距？还是直着过去的... 00:34:334 (5,1) - 把圈叠在这个尾上大概会好点，不过可能对于spread来说不太合适。
00:34:415 (1,3) - 包好

萌球这个风格好西方化啊orz 无话可说
再往下懒得摸了

Otosaka-Yu

1,119 posts

Joined August 2013

Otosaka-Yu 2017-06-17T11:53:59+00:00

_Yiiiii wrote:
1112's Another
00:35:063 (2,3) - DS???????等死吧你是不是只有那么几句台词
00:40:739 (2,1) - 擦边没关系
00:40:577 (1,2,3,1) - 这个变距打着很不爽。你这么说我就没办法了，我觉得还好。不爽不要玩
00:52:901 (1,2) - 这俩之间几乎直线flow再加这么打间距打起来一点感觉都没有，弄那么大间距除了骗人掉个cb以外没任何作用。改近点了，直线有什么问题？掉cb的人让他们不爽不要玩
01:01:172 (4,1,2) - flow不好，滑条别扭了，找个合适位置放个弧就得了。行

谢摸

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-Atri-

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Topic Starter

-Atri- 2017-06-17T12:24:18+00:00

_Yiiiii wrote:
Existence
00:04:253 (1) - 这个感觉好快啊，一下子让人反应不过来，可以在滑条头那里折一下，这样从开头比较慢的部分过度过来会自然一点。感覺都是刪除了好些
哇你日常开DS，这段开DS感觉好别扭啊，小心被搞。其實我沒有用DS只不過是複製貼上
00:24:361 (2) - 换个更突然点的方式出这个圈吧，现在这样不适合那下镲的音，可以试试这样用了別的方法去改
code
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305,245,24361,1,4,1:2:0:0:
01:00:685 (4,5) - 真心觉得这间距大了。這種順flow的滑條的話不易斷
01:01:334 (1) - flow再暴力一点吧，换一个别手点的弧形吧。換了另個滑條
01:21:442 (4,5,6,7) - 这个角度的四方很别扭，再斜一点。不，覺得現在的美觀好些
01:26:955 (7,1) - 别叠了，用大间距吧，空的那一拍一直是有音的，这样有点别扭。 ok

謝摸～

-Atri-

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-Atri- 2017-06-22T17:26:19+00:00

Added hard and ready for mod

scanter

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Joined July 2012

scanter 2017-06-23T15:22:32+00:00

hello everyone o/ sorry in advance if my english is shit

General

volume seems too low. it should be turned up 10~20% degrees
insane AR 9, Another AR 9.3, but extra is 9?

Collab Easy

AR 3~3.5? normal is 5, but easy is 2?
00:29:550 - useless green line
00:30:361 - looks like an incorrect timing line
00:43:172 (1) - finish + clap or finish seems better imo
01:22:253 - 01:22:415 - 01:22:577 - 01:24:199 - 01:24:361 - 01:24:523 - 01:25:496 - 01:25:820 - 01:26:793 - 01:26:955 - same as 00:29:550

Asuka_-'s Normal

00:02:955 - useless green line
00:44:874 - 00:45:685 - same as 00:02:955
01:05:388 - rhythm seems too empty compared with before.
01:22:577 - 01:23:874 - 01:25:496 - 01:25:820 - 01:26:469 - same as 00:02:955
01:27:280 - NC?

Pata-Mon's Hard

01:12:036 - normal sampleset
01:19:496 (1) - the distance seems too large compared with before.
01:22:091 - finish

Moecho's Insane

AR 9.3 seems better to play, because you used 1/4 jumps many
00:13:820 (1,2) - actually clap isn't 00:14:145 here, but 00:14:307 here.
00:18:847 (1) - it seems too 1/4 rhythm. what about increase the distance more?
SPOILER
00:20:631 (5) - what about changing 2 circles or other patterns? the slider at the end of clap isn't good for play imo.
00:30:199 (1,1) - rhythm was pulled forward.
01:19:172 - 01:27:280 - that hitsounds lol

1112's Another

00:06:685 (6) - it seems a little uncomfortable to play. the route is almost linear. what about at least move 00:06:685 (6) to x:294, y:27?
00:28:577 - what about adding a circle here? you followed almost vocals here and I can hear nani kaga ma at te iru yo lol
00:40:577 (1) - seems a little close. what about spread the distance more?
SPOILER
01:11:063 (4,5) - reverse rhythm? the slider at the end of clap isn't good for play imo.
01:22:415 - 01:27:118 - hitsounds feel so empty.

Existence

00:13:496 - add a circle? feels so empty
00:24:523 (4) - what about changing 2 circles? feels too uncomfortable, because there is clap in slider's end.
00:34:901 (2,3,4) - distance seems too short. you approximately kept distance x2.0 before calmed down part, but here is x0.8? it seemed 1/4 when I played.
00:45:118 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - suggestion. what about add new combo each circle?
01:05:875 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - same
01:21:036 (2) - reverse mark is so invisible. it should be moved different place.

good luck \o/

-Atri-

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-Atri- 2017-06-23T17:56:53+00:00

scanter wrote:
hello everyone o/ sorry in advance if my english is shit

General
volume seems too low. it should be turned up 10~20% degrees Not sure which part you meant
insane AR 9, Another AR 9.3, but extra is 9? fixed
Collab Easy
AR 3~3.5? normal is 5, but easy is 2? AR 3
00:29:550 - useless green line
00:30:361 - looks like an incorrect timing line
00:43:172 (1) - finish + clap or finish seems better imo
01:22:253 - 01:22:415 - 01:22:577 - 01:24:199 - 01:24:361 - 01:24:523 - 01:25:496 - 01:25:820 - 01:26:793 - 01:26:955 - same as 00:29:550

all fixed
Existence
00:13:496 - add a circle? feels so empty I prefer having it empty here as i wanted to have a better instrumental transition here, keep.
00:24:523 (4) - what about changing 2 circles? feels too uncomfortable, because there is clap in slider's end. Tried to emphasize the clap differently, using 2 circles is too overwhelming imo
00:34:901 (2,3,4) - distance seems too short. you approximately kept distance x2.0 before calmed down part, but here is x0.8? it seemed 1/4 when I played. This is kinda tricky here, I asked some players from previous testplayers i don't see that's really misleading there, thus, That would be too big for a 1/4 as before that part the largest DS on a triplet is 00:14:469 (1,2,3) - so i don't see there's anything that will hint this as an 1/4 instead of an 1/2
00:45:118 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - suggestion. what about add new combo each circle? nah that will be weird
01:05:875 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - same ^
01:21:036 (2) - reverse mark is so invisible. it should be moved different place. It should be fine, but fixed as i am quite worried too
good luck \o/

Last edited by -Atri- 2017-06-24T03:29:20+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

-Atri-

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-Atri- 2017-06-23T17:57:08+00:00

Fucking osu web

Asuka_-

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Joined February 2016

Asuka_- 2017-06-24T11:20:19+00:00

scanter wrote:
Asuka_-'s Normal
00:02:955 - useless green line
00:44:874 - 00:45:685 - same as 00:02:955
01:05:388 - rhythm seems too empty compared with before.
01:22:577 - 01:23:874 - 01:25:496 - 01:25:820 - 01:26:469 - same as 00:02:955
01:27:280 - NC?

all fixed! thanks!

upd

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-Atri-

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Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

-Atri- 2017-06-25T13:46:46+00:00

Moecho's reply

Moecho wrote:
_Yiiiii wrote:
Moecho's Insane
00:33:928 (4,5) - 为什么要这么大间距？还是直着过去的... 00:34:334 (5,1) - 把圈叠在这个尾上大概会好点，不过可能对于spread来说不太合适。
原本為了對比度，但是發現好像去掉比較好，改了。
00:34:415 (1,3) - 包好
太nazi了吧，這個是為了00:34:415 (1) - 的形狀，感覺沒必要改。
萌球这个风格好西方化啊orz 无话可说
不知道啊，我根本沒有很喜歡西方麻婆的圖qaq
scanter wrote:
hello everyone o/ sorry in advance if my english is shit

General
volume seems too low. it should be turned up 10~20% degrees
insane AR 9, Another AR 9.3, but extra is 9?
Moecho's Insane
AR 9.3 seems better to play, because you used 1/4 jumps many
I reduced the pre-kiai and inter-kiai sections' kick slider jump distances, should be fine now. AR9 is for spread.
00:13:820 (1,2) - actually clap isn't 00:14:145 here, but 00:14:307 here.
Fixed~
00:18:847 (1) - it seems too 1/4 rhythm. what about increase the distance more?
I think it's fine as it is, I indicated to watch out with the NC as well.
SPOILER
00:20:631 (5) - what about changing 2 circles or other patterns? the slider at the end of clap isn't good for play imo.
For me it's an interesting rhythm to play, and I'm following the piano there. It's a mixture of instrument choice there which is fun to click to and makes sense.
00:30:199 (1,1) - rhythm was pulled forward.
I can't ignore the vocal, if you try to move it 1/4 back, it would sound really strange. I had to cover the vocal. Sicne the vocal is so loud, it blends the background sound that I wanted to follow well, so you don't really notice if it starts there or not, but the next one doesn't have loud vocal to cover so I had to follow it as it was.
01:19:172 - 01:27:280 - that hitsounds lol
Added some claps on the very last part
good luck \o/

updated both

Otosaka-Yu

1,119 posts

Joined August 2013

Otosaka-Yu 2017-06-25T15:38:11+00:00

scanter wrote:
hello everyone o/ sorry in advance if my english is shit

1112's Another
00:06:685 (6) - it seems a little uncomfortable to play. the route is almost linear. what about at least move 00:06:685 (6) to x:294, y:27? fixed
00:28:577 - what about adding a circle here? you followed almost vocals here and I can hear nani kaga ma at te iru yo lol lol okay
00:40:577 (1) - seems a little close. what about spread the distance more? okay
SPOILER
01:11:063 (4,5) - reverse rhythm? the slider at the end of clap isn't good for play imo. Feeling is not very comfortable...
01:22:415 - 01:27:118 - hitsounds feel so empty. add more whistle
good luck \o/

oh thank you~

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_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2017-06-25T18:13:26+00:00

Easy

00:21:118 (3,4) - This rhythm doesn't really follow anything and feels a bit forced because of that. Turning 00:21:118 (3) into a 3/2 reverse slider would nicely follow the vocals
01:22:091 (1) - Increase volume of timing points, no need for it to be this low, can barely hear any feedback.
Tbh I don't get the hitsound pattern at all, you have whistles and normal sampleset that appear in some places but not others and feels rather inconsistent that way. For example why doesn't 00:47:063 (2) have normal sampleset on the head when 00:47:712 (3,1) both do

Pata mon

00:24:685 (3,4,1) - this is quite messy, it would be better to avoid this
00:25:009 (1) to 00:34:415 (1) - I really can't tell what you're trying to follow tbh, the rhythm feels very forced. It's like you made up your own rhythm instead of following the song
00:39:280 (3,4) - This would follow the vocals better imo http://puu.sh/wu0qJ/d38f4d601c.jpg

Moecho

00:14:550 (3,1) - imo this pattern would be fine if it were stacked. The NC on 00:14:631 (1) would indicate it's a downbeat and I'm sure a lot of players would therefore read
00:23:631 (6,1) - A bit nazi but the stack is off
00:18:847 (1,1,1) - I'm not entirely sure what you're going for the SV decreases but imho it would be fine without them at all. I don't feel it appropriate to have the section 00:19:820 (1,2,3,4,5) a lower SV than 00:15:928 (1,2,3,4) when they pretty much sound and play the same. tl;dr I think it would be ideal to have one main SV for the whole verse instead of using several different ones
00:20:145 (2,3,4,5) - The spacing can throw people off a bit here. This is because the spacing between 4 and 5 is similar to 2 and 3. One way you could make it more readable is to try a pattern like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8436729 .
01:19:982 (1,1) - a bit subjective but I feel this would play a lot smoother rhythmically if these were 1/2 sliders
01:22:091 (1) - This felt a bit lackluster with the lack of spacing emphasis on such a predominant beat

All diffs

01:22:091 - I don't like how the volume for this timing point is so low. It makes a lot of the objects barely audible. Try 50% at least

[]GL!

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-06-25T19:00:44+00:00

hey!~

m4m

General

remove widecreen in all diffs except Easy diff
can you change a combo color it would be good to highlight the hair of the girl with pink

Collab easy

00:08:793 (3) - Can you less round off it a little for better fluidity (flow) when you playing? http://i.imgur.com/0QWrq3R.jpg?1
00:25:658 (2) - add a finish it's sound good imo
00:33:928 (3,1) - should be nice if there are similar https://puu.sh/wtXKC/8604e08631.jpg
00:49:982 (3) - curve it like you did at 00:48:361 (1) - because after you have 3 similar sliders straight 00:50:955 (1,2,3) - be consistent with aesthetic lul
00:54:685 (3) - tbh i think the finish on the head and the tail of the slider sound too loud here too (on the head) 00:55:334 (4) - so it would be preferable to replace them by whistle, it sound very well
01:15:442 (3,4) - ^
01:16:091 (4) - finish on the red tick but not here 00:55:334 (4)
01:22:739 (2,1,2,3) - any drums? It's bad because hears them well

Asuka's Normal

00:02:469 (5) - don't you think that the volume should be decreased?
00:17:712 (2,4) - blanket
00:24:685 (7) - add clap for emphasis drums
00:25:658 (3) - finish sound good tbh
01:22:740 (2,3,4,5,6) - no drums?

Pata-Mon's Hard

00:35:712 - 00:35:874 - better to map it's sound off when you finish with a 1/2 slider and more you can emphasis some vocals and be better able to follow long sliders imo
00:37:496 - 00:37:658 - here too
00:37:658 - 00:39:766 - ^
00:37:982 (1,2,3) - add some whistle for emphasis the piano
00:55:820 (5) - replace them by 2 note like you did at 01:16:577 (5,6)
01:05:063 (1) - remove nc, no reason to add it because there is the same density here 01:03:928 (1,2,3)
01:11:712 (1) - on the tail you forgot to put sampleset normal if you want to be consistent with 00:50:955 (1,2)
01:23:063 (4,6) - stack them

1112' Another

00:24:685 - should be clickable for drums
00:46:415 (1,2) - need to be similar to 01:07:172 (1,2,3) - and spacing too because here 01:07:496 (3,1) - spacing is more high that 00:46:739 (2,1)
00:51:928 (3,1) - spacing should be the same with 01:12:685 (3,1)
00:55:658 (1,1) - ^ 01:16:415 (1,1) -
00:58:739 (1,3) - stack them

gl!~

lcfc

813 posts

Joined October 2015

lcfc 2017-06-26T05:33:48+00:00

ShogunMoon wrote:
Collab easy
00:08:793 (3) - Can you less round off it a little for better fluidity (flow) when you playing? http://i.imgur.com/0QWrq3R.jpg?1 you got it
00:25:658 (2) - add a finish it's sound good imo
00:33:928 (3,1) - should be nice if there are similar https://puu.sh/wtXKC/8604e08631.jpg (not my part but I'm pretty sure firis wanted to make the symmetrical pattern here 00:35:388 (1,2,3,4) - lol)
00:49:982 (3) - curve it like you did at 00:48:361 (1) - because after you have 3 similar sliders straight 00:50:955 (1,2,3) - be consistent with aesthetic lul okies
00:54:685 (3) - tbh i think the finish on the head and the tail of the slider sound too loud here too (on the head) 00:55:334 (4) - so it would be preferable to replace them by whistle, it sound very well
01:15:442 (3,4) - ^
01:16:091 (4) - finish on the red tick but not here 00:55:334 (4)
01:22:739 (2,1,2,3) - any drums? It's bad because hears them well

Thanks for the mod! Anything not replied is Firis' part or hitsounds lol

diff

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kanor

925 posts

Joined August 2013

kanor 2017-06-26T08:36:34+00:00

M4M
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/480945
[Genal]
SB\AsuiroDB - 僔儑乕僩僇僢僩.lnk 这是啥

[Easy]
00:55:334 (4) - 这里不打算跟00:55:658 - 这个提琴的音吗，感觉有点突兀，后面01:16:091 (4) - 这里就这么跟了，最好统一一下吧
01:03:280 (4) - 这个挨到血线了

[Normal]
HP=AR=OD大丈夫？
这个normal有点太难了吧.....advanced的单点数都没它多，spread会不太好吧

[Moecho]
00:18:523 (1,1,2,1,1) - 感觉这么摆用上渐变SV效果不太好，不是很直观，看起来就像突然加了一堆NC
00:31:415 (1) - 这个应该是不小心按偏了吧
00:50:955 (1,2) - 这里不能直接用滑梯带过去吗？感觉这里突然塞个二连比起前面的有点突兀欸
01:11:712 (1,2) - ^
kai都是1.0-1.5，01:22:091 - 结尾却变成0.75，我大概知道你的想法，不过感觉有点太慢了，那种逐渐加强的鼓点感觉还没表现出来就结束了，稍微提高一点sv试试看？

[1112]
没啥特别想说的，感觉摆放还是有点随机
~~实际上根本没有上一个diff难~~

[猪腩肚]
难点在滑条，撑星的却是PP跳，真是心机（

GL

-Atri-

3,049 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

-Atri- 2017-06-26T08:47:06+00:00

Kisses wrote:
Easy
00:21:118 (3,4) - This rhythm doesn't really follow anything and feels a bit forced because of that. Turning 00:21:118 (3) into a 3/2 reverse slider would nicely follow the vocals Talked with LCFC, who i follow his vocal rhythm on the previous part, and we do agree that we can adjust this slider and move 00:23:550 (1) - before the downbeat to follow the vocal better
01:22:091 (1) - Increase volume of timing points, no need for it to be this low, can barely hear any feedback. fixed, not sure why this happened
Tbh I don't get the hitsound pattern at all, you have whistles and normal sampleset that appear in some places but not others and feels rather inconsistent that way. For example why doesn't 00:47:063 (2) have normal sampleset on the head when 00:47:712 (3,1) both do
felt a bit lackluster with the lack of spacing emphasis on such a predominant beat Fixed all missing normal samplesets, hitsound copier problems[/list][/notice]

All diffs
01:22:091 - I don't like how the volume for this timing point is so low. It makes a lot of the objects barely audible. Try 50% at least imo I really wanted the progression of the volume here, 50% is too loud for this kind of trick imo which doesn't make the progression effect go well imo
[]GL!

ShogunMoon wrote:
hey!~

m4m

General
remove widecreen in all diffs except Easy diff Fixed in Existence diff, i'll let GDers to change themselves
can you change a combo color it would be good to highlight the hair of the girl with pink I wanted to use the main color of the BG instead of Escha's hair color, keep.
Collab easy
00:25:658 (2) - add a finish it's sound good imo imo whistles sounds better.
00:33:928 (3,1) - should be nice if there are similar https://puu.sh/wtXKC/8604e08631.jpg nope, symmetry
00:54:685 (3) - tbh i think the finish on the head and the tail of the slider sound too loud here too (on the head) 00:55:334 (4) - so it would be preferable to replace them by whistle, it sound very well I don't think it's too loud as they're quite strong so finish fits better
01:15:442 (3,4) - ^ ^
01:16:091 (4) - finish on the red tick but not here 00:55:334 (4) Unfortunately i can't fix this one though, as LCFC desired to land it's slider end on white tick since he wanted to emphasize the vocals there, which is different from my part, which all lands on white tick, so it might make this kind of inconsistencies, well, i might add finish here if LCFC wish to fix this one time
01:22:739 (2,1,2,3) - any drums? It's bad because hears them well True but i prefer to follow vocals here

Thanks for the mod~

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Asuka_- 2017-06-26T09:39:09+00:00

im not good at english

ShogunMoon wrote:
Asuka's Normal
00:02:469 (5) - don't you think that the volume should be decreased?
00:17:712 (2,4) - blanket
00:24:685 (7) - add clap for emphasis drums
00:25:658 (3) - finish sound good tbh
01:22:740 (2,3,4,5,6) - no drums? keep (following top diff)

kanor wrote:
[Normal]　
HP=AR=OD大丈夫？　it is prolly fine xD
这个normal有点太难了吧.....advanced的单点数都没它多，spread会不太好吧
I cant read chinese... sorry... but i think spread is fine. because N(2.3) - H(3.4) - I(4.5) imo.
~~(in addition, i can't control sd... xd)~~

no reply = fixed!!
thanks!!

upd

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Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2017-06-26T09:44:41+00:00

jbdxbl
大丈夫这词是日语所以他看懂了

kanor

925 posts

Joined August 2013

kanor 2017-06-26T09:52:01+00:00

sorry for chinese mod asuka....

btw, 君中国语本当上手

Otosaka-Yu

1,119 posts

Joined August 2013

Otosaka-Yu 2017-06-26T15:52:45+00:00

ShogunMoon wrote:
hey!~

1112' Another
00:24:685 - should be clickable for drums ?
00:46:415 (1,2) - need to be similar to 01:07:172 (1,2,3) - and spacing too because here 01:07:496 (3,1) - spacing is more high that 00:46:739 (2,1) fixed
00:51:928 (3,1) - spacing should be the same with 01:12:685 (3,1) can not see what is different
00:55:658 (1,1) - ^ 01:16:415 (1,1) - too nazi...
00:58:739 (1,3) - stack them fixed
gl!~

Thank you~

kanor wrote:
HP=AR=OD大丈夫？ hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhwtmxb

[1112]
没啥特别想说的，感觉摆放还是有点随机就这样吧，感觉还是ok的 ~~比起黄漫ex~~
~~实际上根本没有上一个diff难~~

GL

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Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Mei 2017-06-28T21:30:03+00:00

[Asuka_-'s Normal]

00:16:415 (6,7) - use the pattern like this would be better
00:24:685 (7) - using a note to replace the slider
00:43:172 (1) - add a normal-hitnormal on the slider head?

[Pata-Mon's Hard ]

00:37:820 (4) - 感觉不如删掉
00:44:793 (1) - 去掉NC
减速段的节奏下的不太好，还可以在改进的感觉

[Moecho's Insane]

00:12:847 (3,4,1) - 个人感觉4离1近一点3远一点比较好
00:30:199 (1,1) - 这两个怪怪的
00:43:820 (1) - 这个可以叠在后面滑条的头上
00:48:685 (2,1) - 别的地方还好，这个地方空了比别的地方多空了1/4的间隔，个人认为不太好，后面也有类似的

[1112's Another]

00:04:901 这个音空的很难受，建议填上
00:09:928 (3) - ^
00:19:172 (1) - 感觉可以不用NC
00:20:469 (1) - ^
00:24:361 (1) - ^
00:35:063 (2,3,1) - 很坑
00:37:172 (3) - 移到上边比较好，比如x260y84
00:44:793 (1,2,1) - 这个也很坑

[Existence]

00:04:091 这里可以加个note，最好是3连
00:08:145 (1) - 改成向上的比较好
00:11:874 (5,1) - 这里感觉比较怪，不过从美观上来说这样移一下
00:23:712 (1) - 这个滑条开头可以用normal的sample set
00:25:009 (6,1) - 这个nc我感觉可以换下，不过换和不换我觉得都有点难读
00:26:469 (1) - 类似这边开始的NC我觉得用的不好，完全没什么特别的意义，如果是00:28:415 (1) - 表示空拍还可以，其他的NC没必要
00:53:550 (1) - crtl+G 感觉好些
01:18:036 (1) - 这个有点丑

这个游戏的男主和女主的人设感觉都很涩情wtmsb

-Atri-

3,049 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

-Atri- 2017-06-29T03:35:44+00:00

人在上海，暫時改不到

I am in Shanghai rn, can't do anything atm

Last edited by -Atri- 2017-06-29T11:24:53+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Asuka_- 2017-06-29T09:28:37+00:00

Mei wrote:
[Asuka_-'s Normal]
00:16:415 (6,7) - use the pattern like this would be better
keep for now because i followed vocal in this part, so prolly i have to follow 00:16:415 - imo.
00:24:685 (7) - using a note to replace the slider nice~
00:43:172 (1) - add a normal-hitnormal on the slider head? okay=

really Thanks Mei !!

upd

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-Atri-

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-Atri- 2017-07-01T16:36:16+00:00

update tmr

-Atri-

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-Atri- 2017-07-02T05:08:53+00:00

kanor wrote:
[Genal]
SB\AsuiroDB - 僔儑乕僩僇僢僩.lnk 这是啥手殘orz，改了

[Easy]
LowComboFC不懂中文，所以我翻譯了給他了
00:55:334 (4) - 这里不打算跟00:55:658 - 这个提琴的音吗，感觉有点突兀，后面01:16:091 (4) - 这里就这么跟了，最好统一一下吧之前改了
01:03:280 (4) - 这个挨到血线了改掉了

[猪腩肚]
為啥是豬腩肚2333333333
难点在滑条，撑星的却是PP跳，真是心机（

GL

Mei wrote:
[notice][Existence]
00:04:091 这里可以加个note，最好是3连這裡我試過了，是1/6，我試過用滑條和連打兩者都感覺很怪，畢竟我想善良一些
00:08:145 (1) - 改成向上的比较好好的
00:11:874 (5,1) - 这里感觉比较怪，不过从美观上来说这样移一下改掉了
00:23:712 (1) - 这个滑条开头可以用normal的sample set 好的
00:25:009 (6,1) - 这个nc我感觉可以换下，不过换和不换我觉得都有点难读這裡是故意的，我想分開 00:25:172 (1) - 的人聲部分
00:25:009 (6) - 很像是前一部分的，所以我移後一個紅線NC
00:26:469 (1) - 类似这边开始的NC我觉得用的不好，完全没什么特别的意义，如果是00:28:415 (1) - 表示空拍还可以，其他的NC没必要這個我都是故意的，只不過我是從人聲來看，可以分開成3-4-4或者3-2-2-2-2這樣的
00:53:550 (1) - crtl+G 感觉好些不，間距太大了，會很易斷
01:18:036 (1) - 这个有点丑改了一些

这个游戏的男主和女主的人设感觉都很涩情wtmsb

謝摸～
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-Atri-

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-Atri- 2017-07-02T10:14:17+00:00

Moecho wrote:
Kisses wrote:
[notice]
Moecho
00:14:550 (3,1) - imo this pattern would be fine if it were stacked. The NC on 00:14:631 (1) would indicate it's a downbeat and I'm sure a lot of players would therefore read
For me I read it exactly as it is with all object combinations what are in the current way, the downbeat means that the note before it must be a 1/4.
00:23:631 (6,1) - A bit nazi but the stack is off
Fixed, this is editor's fault...
00:18:847 (1,1,1) - I'm not entirely sure what you're going for the SV decreases but imho it would be fine without them at all. I don't feel it appropriate to have the section 00:19:820 (1,2,3,4,5) a lower SV than 00:15:928 (1,2,3,4) when they pretty much sound and play the same. tl;dr I think it would be ideal to have one main SV for the whole verse instead of using several different ones
It's rather preferences of what you want to emphasize in sections. The bass wasn't as clear in the first section to me, but I adjusted it.
00:20:145 (2,3,4,5) - The spacing can throw people off a bit here. This is because the spacing between 4 and 5 is similar to 2 and 3. One way you could make it more readable is to try a pattern like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8436729 .
Uh.. I'd rather not overlap. Gap of 00:19:820 (1,2) - and 00:20:469 (4,5) - is actually consistent.. There's no problem about this.
01:19:982 (1,1) - a bit subjective but I feel this would play a lot smoother rhythmically if these were 1/2 sliders
Yeah well, using 1/2 sliders for them will not give the same feeling of this special rhythm that they're expressing in the song. Refer to similar pattern in Skystar's Airman:
Image
01:22:091 (1) - This felt a bit lackluster with the lack of spacing emphasis on such a predominant beat
01:21:280 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - The thing is, if I did emphasize on this beat, then the whole DS decreasing pattern will get a lot less effect, since the section for it isn't very long. So this is my final choice to emphasize this emphasis change from regular into smaller.

All diffs
01:22:091 - I don't like how the volume for this timing point is so low. It makes a lot of the objects barely audible. Try 50% at least
Mine is at 70% tho..
[]GL!
kanor wrote:
[Moecho]
00:18:523 (1,1,2,1,1) - 感觉这么摆用上渐变SV效果不太好，不是很直观，看起来就像突然加了一堆NC
我覺得OK
00:31:415 (1) - 这个应该是不小心按偏了吧
你仔細聽聽，這裡更像是在藍線的節奏啊
00:50:955 (1,2) - 这里不能直接用滑梯带过去吗？感觉这里突然塞个二连比起前面的有点突兀欸
這是歌曲裡面的節奏啊...
01:11:712 (1,2) - ^
kai都是1.0-1.5，01:22:091 - 结尾却变成0.75，我大概知道你的想法，不过感觉有点太慢了，那种逐渐加强的鼓点感觉还没表现出来就结束了，稍微提高一点sv试试看？
01:22:091 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - 和 01:23:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 後面這裡的對比性的激烈度怎麼做？我感覺現在這樣可以的

GL
Mei wrote:
[Moecho's Insane]
00:12:847 (3,4,1) - 个人感觉4离1近一点3远一点比较好
00:13:172 (1) - 這個音強許多啊？
00:30:199 (1,1) - 这两个怪怪的
我也覺得啊，但是歌曲的這些節奏絕對是不在白線
00:43:820 (1) - 这个可以叠在后面滑条的头上
現在的這個角度比較好
00:48:685 (2,1) - 别的地方还好，这个地方空了比别的地方多空了1/4的间隔，个人认为不太好，后面也有类似的
這鼓點就是這樣的.. 而且這裡間距也夠明顯不是1/2了吧

这个游戏的男主和女主的人设感觉都很涩情wtmsb

Pata-Mon

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Pata-Mon 2017-07-02T12:56:48+00:00

scanter wrote:
Pata-Mon's Hard
01:12:036 - normal sampleset k
01:19:496 (1) - the distance seems too large compared with before. it's jump after slider and flow is good, I think it's ok
01:22:091 - finish not need

Kisses wrote:
Pata mon
00:24:685 (3,4,1) - this is quite messy, it would be better to avoid this It's ok imo
00:25:009 (1) to 00:34:415 (1) - I really can't tell what you're trying to follow tbh, the rhythm feels very forced. It's like you made up your own rhythm instead of following the song I follow drum in general. But make some small changes
00:39:280 (3,4) - This would follow the vocals better imo http://puu.sh/wu0qJ/d38f4d601c.jpg
I want to follow the drum

ShogunMoon wrote:
Pata-Mon's Hard
00:35:712 - 00:35:874 - better to map it's sound off when you finish with a 1/2 slider and more you can emphasis some vocals and be better able to follow long sliders imo I want to follow drum
00:37:496 - 00:37:658 - here too ^
00:37:658 - 00:39:766 - ^ ^
00:37:982 (1,2,3) - add some whistle for emphasis the piano change in other way
00:55:820 (5) - replace them by 2 note like you did at 01:16:577 (5,6) 01:16:739 (6) - is drum sound while 01:16:739 (6) - not. so keep
01:05:063 (1) - remove nc, no reason to add it because there is the same density here 01:03:928 (1,2,3) this nc is same as every nc at the bar line
01:11:712 (1) - on the tail you forgot to put sampleset normal if you want to be consistent with 00:50:955 (1,2) k
01:23:063 (4,6) - stack themnot need

Mei wrote:
[Pata-Mon's Hard ]
00:37:820 (4) - 感觉不如删掉跟鼓就要跟到
00:44:793 (1) - 去掉NC 不用，后面三个是一组，而且也是kiai前强调
减速段的节奏下的不太好，还可以在改进的感觉

thanks for mod

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Title:Asuiro
TitleUnicode:アスイロ
Artist:Rie Murakawa
ArtistUnicode:村川梨衣
Creator:Firis Mistlud
Version:Pata-Mon's Hard
Source:エスカ&ロジーのアトリエ～黄昏の空の錬金術士～
Tags:Escha & Logy no Atelier: Tasogare no Sora no Renkinjutsushi A15 Alchemists of the Dusk Sky opening KuranteMelodii krt Suzuki_1112 LowComboFC LCFC Moecho Moeri Pata-mon Asuka_-
BeatmapID:1330809
BeatmapSetID:596487

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.6
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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-Atri-

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-Atri- 2017-07-02T16:51:36+00:00

Updated

- Pika

160 posts

Joined March 2017

- Pika 2017-07-05T23:16:50+00:00

I really can't find anything wrong :v
Good Luck!

-Atri-

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-Atri- 2017-07-06T00:14:29+00:00

LOL

No problem

Otosaka-Yu

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Joined August 2013

Otosaka-Yu 2017-07-06T04:11:48+00:00

~~感觉欠下太多债~~

Mei wrote:
[1112's Another]
00:04:901 这个音空的很难受，建议填上目前这个位置我是跟的钢琴，感觉还好
00:09:928 (3) - ^ ^
00:19:172 (1) - 感觉可以不用NC fixed
00:20:469 (1) - ^ ^
00:24:361 (1) - ^ ^
00:35:063 (2,3,1) - 很坑移近点了
00:37:172 (3) - 移到上边比较好，比如x260y84 fixed
00:44:793 (1,2,1) - 这个也很坑就目前来看这个还是能打得动的

这个游戏的男主和女主的人设感觉都很涩情wtmsb

蟹蟹~

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-Atri-

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Topic Starter

-Atri- 2017-07-06T07:09:04+00:00

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-Atri-

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Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

-Atri- 2017-07-08T04:55:45+00:00

updated metadata

Thanks IamKwaN

Nao Tomori

osu! Alumni

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Nao Tomori 2017-07-11T18:18:27+00:00

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Nao Tomori

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3,106 posts

Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2017-07-13T15:53:17+00:00

hi

[existenc]
the biggest issue here is the comical lack of differentiation between parts. i mean, 00:04:253 (1,2,3) - starting from here, the patterning and spacing is almost identical for the entire map. compare 00:10:091 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - which is the base spacing to 00:49:172 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - adn you'll see that the spacing is nearly identical.

00:25:172 - this part is good. it's very different from the other parts. same for the first few seconds. but outside of that, the map is way too similar imo. so basically i suggest massively massively nerfing the 00:04:253 - section to be significantly smaller spacing than the kiai

anyway

00:09:118 (5,6) - makes sense to make this a slider cuz piano

00:13:496 - vocal?

00:15:928 - this section doesnt seem to focus on anything rhythmically, it's just 1/2 spam; i suggest fllowing the vocals instead

generally fine, other than the ridiculously high base spacing

01:10:253 (1,2,3,4) - would be cute to highlight the violin melody a bit more

would be more interesting to see direction changes on the ending pp jump part imo

[1112]
00:04:739 (3) - what is this following? piano? if you're following piano, 00:05:550 (1,2) - should be replaced with a slider too

00:07:334 (2,3) - ctrl g here makes more sense to follow the piano melody that you've been following, ctrl g on 00:07:334 (2,3,4) - makes more sense for the vocals.. switching to drums here just feels weirdly disconnected sincce you have been mapping off beat stuff earlier

00:08:631 (3,4) - ctrl g

00:24:928 - triple owo

00:37:009 (2,3,4) - random wide angle is kinda weird here imo

00:38:469 (2,3,4) - seems better to make 2 sliders cuz vocals

00:40:739 (2) - meh, think just putting a slider at 00:40:577 (1) - is better

i dont like the 1/2 jumps on vocals, feels kinda overdone lol

01:11:226 (5,6) - think u should just extend this if u want extra pressure on 01:11:712 (1) -
also the visual looks ugly cuz it doesnt line up at all

01:18:847 (4,5) - has vocal, 01:18:523 (2,3) - doesn't but it's same jumps? pretty weird

01:19:982 (1,2) - this is really misleading

[moecho]
00:18:523 (1) - wats with the nc spam

00:43:658 (2,1) - ew random wide angle

00:55:658 (1,2,3) - eeeeee
the claps honestly sound really disconnected from the song, i can't tell what theyre following cuz the vocals are doing really simple stuff..

[patamon]
feels like just a massive lack of circles... like everything is sliders, kinda boring imo, and as a result the very ending is a HUGE diff spike
like
00:56:955 (3) - you could put these as circles

00:18:523 (1) - or some of these

or 01:10:739 (2) -

[asuka]
i think same problem; the amount of sliders is ridiculously high. sliders are harder than circles for new players, despite what SR says. stuff like 00:50:955 (1) - is much much harder than if you put in some 1/2 circles or 1/1 gaps. i feel like the difficulty of these parts is a bit too high, and you should put some circle based patterning to avoid this issue.
[easy]
00:43:172 (1) - too short to be rankable =D

nothing much

anyway yea there were a lot of general issues rather than specific ones

good luck!

-Atri-

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Topic Starter

-Atri- 2017-07-13T16:37:28+00:00

Naotoshi wrote:
hi

[existenc]
the biggest issue here is the comical lack of differentiation between parts. i mean, 00:04:253 (1,2,3) - starting from here, the patterning and spacing is almost identical for the entire map. compare 00:10:091 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - which is the base spacing to 00:49:172 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - adn you'll see that the spacing is nearly identical.

00:25:172 - this part is good. it's very different from the other parts. same for the first few seconds. but outside of that, the map is way too similar imo. so basically i suggest massively massively nerfing the 00:04:253 - section to be significantly smaller spacing than the kiai Discussed with Moecho, and we do agree that i should nerf some spacing before kiai

anyway

00:09:118 (5,6) - makes sense to make this a slider cuz piano Listen clearly, it actually 2 notes, not a single piano note

00:13:496 - vocal? sure, since someone also pointed this out

00:15:928 - this section doesnt seem to focus on anything rhythmically, it's just 1/2 spam; i suggest fllowing the vocals instead I disagree, It doesn't needed to have to focus on 1 instrument, that will be too boring , i wanted to have combination of drums, which 00:16:577 (3,4) - clearly have

generally fine, other than the ridiculously high base spacing

01:10:253 (1,2,3,4) - would be cute to highlight the violin melody a bit more nope, want to highlight the drums and vocal more

would be more interesting to see direction changes on the ending pp jump part imo

[easy]
00:43:172 (1) - too short to be rankable =D tru

nothing much

anyway yea there were a lot of general issues rather than specific ones

good luck!

Moecho: All no change

Thanks for the mod

看來我會被愛絲卡宰了

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-07-14T01:34:31+00:00

i'll reply~

Asuka_-

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Joined February 2016

Asuka_- 2017-07-14T16:14:03+00:00

Naotoshi wrote:
[asuka]
i think same problem; the amount of sliders is ridiculously high. sliders are harder than circles for new players, despite what SR says. stuff like 00:50:955 (1) - is much much harder than if you put in some 1/2 circles or 1/1 gaps. i feel like the difficulty of these parts is a bit too high, and you should put some circle based patterning to avoid this issue.

ok changed~

Otosaka-Yu

1,119 posts

Joined August 2013

Otosaka-Yu 2017-07-14T18:41:06+00:00

Naotoshi wrote:
[1112]
00:04:739 (3) - what is this following? piano? if you're following piano, 00:05:550 (1,2) - should be replaced with a slider too fixed

00:07:334 (2,3) - ctrl g here makes more sense to follow the piano melody that you've been following, ctrl g on 00:07:334 (2,3,4) - makes more sense for the vocals.. switching to drums here just feels weirdly disconnected sincce you have been mapping off beat stuff earlier this is a bit strange

00:08:631 (3,4) - ctrl g ^

00:24:928 - triple owo fixed

00:37:009 (2,3,4) - random wide angle is kinda weird here imo first to keep a moment, the future may think of a better way to change

00:38:469 (2,3,4) - seems better to make 2 sliders cuz vocals fixed

00:40:739 (2) - meh, think just putting a slider at 00:40:577 (1) - is better

i dont like the 1/2 jumps on vocals, feels kinda overdone lol ok xd

01:11:226 (5,6) - think u should just extend this if u want extra pressure on 01:11:712 (1) -
also the visual looks ugly cuz it doesnt line up at all i think there should be no problem here, because here just stressed the changes in vocal

01:18:847 (4,5) - has vocal, 01:18:523 (2,3) - doesn't but it's same jumps? pretty weird it fine

01:19:982 (1,2) - this is really misleading ok change

good luck!

thank you~

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