OrdLyn wrote:

Hey, As requested in Ord's Mania mod queue. hai

So first, after checked the other mods I saw that they were pretty detailed so maybe the big part of the mistakes have been rectified. thereby my mod will (maybe) be short and maybe won't be useful for you. However I'll do my best to help you anyway.
So, Let's start

Click me

- Here 00:53:080 (53080|0) - to 00:53:937 (53937|0,53937|2) - Maybe make it with long note instead of single. Just u did here 00:59:937 (59937|1,59937|0) - Or make something like that It will change the paterns. I would actully like to keep it like this

- 01:11:080 (71080|1,71251|1) - Move one of those 2 notes. Moved

- Make it double here 01:38:509 (98509|3) - because you make double just before ( 01:37:994 (97994|3,97994|1,98166|0,98166|2) - ) with the same noise. Fixed

- 01:40:051 (100051|2,100223|2,100394|2) - 3 notes in a row is too much. Move one of them. Fixed

- 01:44:337 (104337|0,105194|2) - Why stop LN between these 2 notes? Because the vocal is the only thing that you can mostly hear at that part "ahhh"

- 01:49:480 (109480|3,109823|2,110337|1,110851|3,111194|2,111709|1,112223|3,112566|1) - Hmmmm. Those notes are not connected and this is pretty weird. Maybe I'm wrong but can you explain me ? I made it because singer made a little jump (break) when singing and I think its interesting to play

- 03:12:451 (192451|2,192623|2,192794|2,192966|2) - 4 Notes in a row. Change it. Fixed

- 03:19:651 (199651|2,199823|2,199994|2) - 3 nOtes here. Fixed

- 03:39:537 (219537|2,219709|2,219880|2,220051|2) - 4 Notes again. Changed the pattern

- 04:50:166 (290166|2,290337|2,290509|2,290680|2) - Same. Gonna keep this

I think this is over. I saw some 3 notes in a row too but that was not disturbing. That's a pretty cool map and I think you can get this ranked easily! Good luck for the next!

3stan wrote:

heyyyyaa m4m srry i dnt knw how to make my post fancy

01:05:766 (65766|1) - the note right there should be ln like around these 01:04:051 (64051|3,64737|1,65080|1) - LN follows vocals. Keeping this
01:06:109 (66109|3) - put ln in the 4th column and end it here 01:06:280 (66280|1) - There isn't anything at that place and in the 3rd column is alredy one LN

01:55:994 (115994|1) - ei the ln must be lonely for being alone please put something in there Added

03:22:566 (202566|3) -put ln in the 4th column that ends here 03:22:737 (202737|0) - then delete the note in the 3rd column I want to actully keep this because it fits well with vocals

03:34:223 (214223|2) - ei insert a note in 3rd column I want to keep this because you can't really hear the sound.

04:20:851 (260851|2) - insert ln in 3rd column ^

hope u find this usefull if not then :c Ill mod ur maps in the future i wont stop till u find my mod usefull lol

cpotfangirl wrote:

Hey!

From mine and Vortex- modding queue

Adventure difficulty

00:16:523 (16523|2) - I feel like you could move this note up to here 00:16:566 - and also add a note there to emphasize the drum sound, makes the pattern consistent with what you've made here 00:16:909 - Fixed

00:27:366 (27366|1) - You could make this into a slider, but I can see why you wouldn't gonna think about this owo

00:27:709 (27709|3,27709|1) - 00:33:194 (33194|2) - ^Same as above with these, you've done it here 00:38:337 - so you should really do it at other places too Changed to LN's

00:31:823 (31823|3,32166|3,32509|0) - You should think about removing these since you have these notes 00:31:994 (31994|2,32337|2,32680|2,33023|3) - emphasizing the drum sound in that part Fixed

00:42:280 - Since it's the end of the section and a "less hard" drum beat, you should think about removing one of the notes on that column and add in a slider, makes for a better ending of the section Fixed

00:45:709 - Either remove one note here to make this a double like the rest of the drum beats on this part or make every other double a triple > would be notes like these 00:44:337 - 00:45:023 - changed to double

01:05:937 (65937|2) - This slider should be divided into three separate sliders, since you've mapped it with her voice in mind > here 01:06:280 - and here 01:06:451 - Keeping this. I think this is kinda better

01:12:794 - sliders in this part should be rearranged to fit the sound you've mapped them to, 01:13:480 - This one to here 01:13:651 - and so on Fixed

01:45:709 - Don't know why you stopped placing notes here indicating the guitar strums, like you've done at previous parts > 01:43:823 (103823|3,103994|0,104166|1) - Keeping this. In my opinion sound is not that strong so that I can place notes here and this current pattern works pretty fine

02:33:709 - Add a slider here Added

02:33:880 (153880|1,154223|2) - Move these two sliders up to fit the synth Fixed

02:49:651 (169651|1,170166|3) - These sliders feel a bit random, you should map them to the pitch of the voice, what I mean by this is add more sliders I actully want to keep it like it is. I think it adds a bit of the flow to that part
02:49:651 (169651|1) - This one for example can be split into three separate sliders 02:49:651 - > 02:49:823 - > 02:49:994 -

02:51:709 (171709|0,172223|0,172909|3) - ^Same as above This LN's followed vocals. Keeping it.

03:06:451 - Add a slider Added

03:06:794 - Add a slider Added

03:06:966 (186966|2,187309|0) - All of these should be moved up to fit the synth I followed the drum sound with the LN's. I'll probably change it

03:07:994 - Add a slider Um no, follows vocals and drums

03:10:737 (190737|0,191080|3,191423|3,191766|1) - Same as stated before, move them up Fixed

03:14:680 - Add a slider Added

03:17:080 (197080|3) - Move this slider to here 03:17:251 - And split it into two separate sliders to fit the voice Fixed

03:17:594 (197594|1) - Same as stated before, try to split it up into separate sliders to fit the voice Keeping this

03:20:166 - Add a slider Added

03:22:566 - Add a slider Added

03:28:223 (208223|2,208337|1,208451|0) - Don't know what these represent They represent synthesizer sound

03:39:537 - Same with this section, try and make the sliders you have fit the tone of her voice by splitting them up into separate sliders, feels alot better to play this works better

03:48:794 - You could make this into a slider nah, gonna keep this

04:53:080 (293080|1) - You could remove this slider and add a note here 04:53:166 - better indicating the "glitchy" voice > same here 06:11:080 - 06:16:566 - 06:22:051 - I would rather keep this

05:49:223 - ^Same as above Added LN

05:54:623 - Add a note to emphasize the drum sound and add a note here like above^ 05:54:709 - added

05:56:337 - Add a note Added

06:00:109 - Add note Added

06:00:194 - Add note ^

06:05:594 - ^ ^

06:05:680 - ^ ^

06:12:794 - ^ ^

Map is good and the song choice is good but I think you could work some on the slider placement, some of them feel inconsistent with previous patterns

That's it for my mod!
GL and thanks for your mod on our map earlier

AsrielDr33murr wrote:

00:43:480 (43480|3,43651|2,43823|1,43994|0,43994|3,43994|2) - Sliders should be 1/8 imo This works better
00:48:966 (48966|1,49137|2,49137|0,49309|3) - Pattern is a bit repetitive here keeping this
00:52:394 (52394|3) - Shouldn't this be a long note Gonna think if I should add a LN
00:59:937 (59937|0,60280|0,60623|0) - What's with the long notes here? Follows vocals
01:11:080 (71080|3,71080|2,71251|1) - There should only be a single note on the top of the slider Added
01:18:109 (78109|3,78280|1) - Make this a slider Gonna keep this

Kiai time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds. 02:44:680
Kiai time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds. 05:18:280 Not a huge problem

I'll mod a bit more later

Protastic101 wrote:

fun stuff

2017-05-13 18:41 imtdb1: hello
2017-05-13 18:41 imtdb1: you busy?
2017-05-13 18:41 Protastic101: not really
2017-05-13 18:43 imtdb1: you told me to catch you in game to help me polish some patterns in my map owo
2017-05-13 18:44 Protastic101: ah yeah
2017-05-13 18:44 Protastic101: give me a minute or two
2017-05-13 18:44 Protastic101: gotta do a quick recheck
2017-05-13 18:44 imtdb1: okay
2017-05-13 18:50 Protastic101: ahhh sorry, ok, can we actually irc in like 2 hours or something?
2017-05-13 18:50 imtdb1: sure
2017-05-13 18:51 Protastic101: sorry orz
2017-05-13 20:52 imtdb1: hello again owo
2017-05-13 20:53 Protastic101: ok, I think I got time now
2017-05-13 20:53 Protastic101: whew
2017-05-13 20:53 Protastic101: sorry about last time lol
2017-05-13 20:53 imtdb1: its okay :3
2017-05-13 20:53 Protastic101: ok
2017-05-13 20:53 Protastic101: so
2017-05-13 20:53 Protastic101: first off, was it you who had default hitsounds?
2017-05-13 20:53 imtdb1: yeah xd
2017-05-13 20:53 Protastic101: I got like 5 check requests all at once this morning since people misinterpreted my userpage status lmao
2017-05-13 20:54 imtdb1: I started to look for someone to fix them
2017-05-13 20:54 Protastic101: o rip
2017-05-13 20:54 Protastic101: yeah, default hitsounds are pretty much an automatic reject from me lol
2017-05-13 20:54 imtdb1: I see
2017-05-13 20:55 Protastic101: Overall, this feels a bit undermapped imo
2017-05-13 20:55 imtdb1: o
2017-05-13 20:55 Protastic101: like, in the very beginning at 00:00:109 - , you could have easy made a 1/2 jumpstream like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8082511 since there's kicks every 1/1 and snares every 2/1
2017-05-13 20:56 Protastic101: plus hihats on every upbeat
2017-05-13 20:56 Protastic101: also, concerning the BG, kimi no na wa doesn't really have any relation to the song so I might not suggest using it as your bg, but idk what else you could possibly use
2017-05-13 20:57 imtdb1: oh I see
2017-05-13 20:59 imtdb1: oh btw sorry if I reply slow because this is my first time doing irc with someone lol
2017-05-13 20:59 Protastic101: o rip lol
2017-05-13 21:00 Protastic101: 00:09:366 (9366|2,9709|2) - don't really see a purpose for stacking this tbh
2017-05-13 21:01 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8082545 might do this instead
2017-05-13 21:01 imtdb1: okay, changed
2017-05-13 21:01 Protastic101: 00:19:180 (19180|2) - this is a ghost note btw, so remove it
2017-05-13 21:02 Protastic101: 00:20:637 (20637|2) - also pretty sure this should begin at 00:20:680 -
2017-05-13 21:02 Protastic101: tho imo, I would have just left 00:20:637 (20637|2) - as a single note on 00:20:680 - since the sound kind of dies away and comes back again
2017-05-13 21:03 Protastic101: 00:27:537 (27537|0) - might suggest making this a 1/2 LN too to accentuate the synth's beep or whatever
2017-05-13 21:04 imtdb1: I see
2017-05-13 21:05 Protastic101: is that a yes or no?
2017-05-13 21:06 imtdb1: oh
2017-05-13 21:06 imtdb1: yes
2017-05-13 21:06 imtdb1: changed everything you said owo
2017-05-13 21:06 Protastic101: k cool
2017-05-13 21:06 Protastic101: need a bit of confirmation sometimes lol
2017-05-13 21:06 Protastic101: 00:22:051 - anyways, regarding this section, I don't really see a reason behind making the upbeats like 00:22:223 - 00:22:566 - 00:22:909 - 00:23:251 - and so on, doubles
2017-05-13 21:06 imtdb1: Ik I'm just shy sometimes so yeah owo
2017-05-13 21:07 Protastic101: just feels like the layering is too heavy compared to the start of the chart
2017-05-13 21:07 imtdb1: oh
2017-05-13 21:07 imtdb1: should I remove them?
2017-05-13 21:08 Protastic101: I would suggest doing so, but if you have a good enough reason for keeping them, I'd be fine with it
2017-05-13 21:09 imtdb1: I think they gave some kind of-ish flow or whatever but now since you said that I will remove them
2017-05-13 21:09 Protastic101: ok
2017-05-13 21:10 Protastic101: 00:45:537 (45537|0,45709|3,45709|1,45880|0,46051|1,46051|3) - stuff like this feels a bit repetitive to play imo, and it's kind of unevenly weighted on both hands since the left hand has far more to do than the right hand does
2017-05-13 21:10 imtdb1: oh I see
2017-05-13 21:10 imtdb1: I'll change the pattern
2017-05-13 21:13 Protastic101: i mean just in general, I find that you do stuff like that a lot, such as at 00:50:337 (50337|0,50509|1,50680|0,50851|1) - or 00:49:480 (49480|2,49651|3,49823|2,49994|3,50166|2) -
2017-05-13 21:14 imtdb1: oh
2017-05-13 21:14 imtdb1: never noticed that
2017-05-13 21:14 Protastic101: 00:52:737 (52737|3) - kind of a random LN too tbh. I get that it's probably for the vocal, but you haven't mapped the vocals at all so far into the song so it feels out of place.
2017-05-13 21:15 imtdb1: I followed vocals when she sings "eeee" or something
2017-05-13 21:15 Protastic101: Instead, what I would do is just making it normal like the rest of the section like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8082620
2017-05-13 21:16 imtdb1: Okay, I'll make it like that
2017-05-13 21:16 Protastic101: the thing is you didn't map the same vocal at 01:03:709 - tho :/
2017-05-13 21:16 imtdb1: oh
2017-05-13 21:19 Protastic101: tbh, a lot of the LNs like 01:05:937 (65937|2) - are inconsistent since you map them in one place, but not others like 01:12:109 -
2017-05-13 21:20 imtdb1: mhm
2017-05-13 21:20 imtdb1: I'll remove it
2017-05-13 21:21 Protastic101: 01:29:137 (89137|0) - pretty sure this is a ghost note too. Don't really hear anything in the music to support it
2017-05-13 21:21 imtdb1: true
2017-05-13 21:22 Protastic101: 01:31:880 (91880|3) - same stuff as above
2017-05-13 21:22 Protastic101: 01:31:937 (91937|2,91937|1) - also pretty sure this should be at 01:31:994 - , dunno why the snappings are all off
2017-05-13 21:23 Protastic101: 01:47:423 - 01:47:937 - 01:48:109 - 01:48:280 - missing notes? Seems odd to suddenly break the 1/2 rhythm you've set up in this section, and there's obviously sounds to support it
2017-05-13 21:24 imtdb1: I probably didn't hear the sound
2017-05-13 21:24 Protastic101: 01:49:480 - starting here, I don't really think it necessary to end all the LNs 1/4 before the next since the sound is all pretty smooth and kind of blends into one another
2017-05-13 21:24 Protastic101: tbh, truth be told, i can't actually tell what sounds the LNs are for cause you tend to switch which instrument they follow a ton
2017-05-13 21:24 imtdb1: about that I followed vocals and the singer does a little "break" when singing
2017-05-13 21:25 imtdb1: at least one modder told me that
2017-05-13 21:25 Protastic101: 01:51:194 (111194|2) - but stuff like this spans multiple syllables?
2017-05-13 21:26 Protastic101: 00:52:737 (52737|3,109480|3,109823|2,110851|3,111194|2,112223|3,112566|1,113251|2,115651|2,116337|1,116680|0) - all span multiple syllables
2017-05-13 21:27 imtdb1: oh
2017-05-13 21:27 imtdb1: gonna fix those
2017-05-13 21:27 Protastic101: yeah lol
2017-05-13 21:27 Protastic101: anyways, besides that
2017-05-13 21:27 Protastic101: 02:21:366 (141366|0) - would be nice to extend this as an LN up until 02:21:880 - for the reverse cymbal
2017-05-13 21:27 imtdb1: agreed
2017-05-13 21:28 Protastic101: 02:22:051 - also, you could probably add some SVs here since the sound kind of has that pause feeling between each note
2017-05-13 21:29 imtdb1: I was thinking about that but I'm not really an expert about SV's so I dont know how to make them look nice
2017-05-13 21:29 Protastic101: something like 02:22:051 - 02:22:137 - 02:22:223 - 02:22:309 - 02:22:394 - 02:22:480 - 02:22:566 - 02:22:651 - 1.5x, 02:22:094 - 02:22:180 - 02:22:266 - 02:22:351 - 02:22:437 - 02:22:523 - 02:22:609 - 02:22:694 - 0.5x
2017-05-13 21:29 Protastic101: it makes the sequence average to 1x so it's pretty easily sightreadable, and the values aren't all that strong
2017-05-13 21:29 imtdb1: mhm
2017-05-13 21:30 Protastic101: 02:22:737 - also, see the stuff I mentioned in the first kiai about the doubles on the upbeats
2017-05-13 21:30 Protastic101: 02:24:280 (144280|3,144280|2,144280|1) - cause you have stuff like this where it overemphasizes the upbeat and barely gives thought to the kicks and snares lol
2017-05-13 21:31 Protastic101: 02:24:623 (144623|2,144623|1,144623|3) - this too
2017-05-13 21:31 imtdb1: oh
2017-05-13 21:31 Protastic101: and idk, the whole chord consistency of this section is really difficult to follow
2017-05-13 21:32 imtdb1: I didn't know how to map it diffrend tbh
2017-05-13 21:32 Protastic101: rip
2017-05-13 21:34 Protastic101: like, the LNs are cool, it's just you need to try and be consistent with how you chord different sounds lol
2017-05-13 21:34 Protastic101: 02:57:023 (177023|1,177194|1) - also have no idea why this is stacked
2017-05-13 21:34 imtdb1: o
2017-05-13 21:35 Protastic101: 02:59:766 - this entire measure is super right hand heavy lol
2017-05-13 21:35 imtdb1: true
2017-05-13 21:35 imtdb1: fixing it rn
2017-05-13 21:39 Protastic101: ok
2017-05-13 21:40 Protastic101: 03:09:794 (189794|2) - thats a ghost note, but you can move it down to 03:09:623 - instead where it actually belongs, and make 03:09:709 - a double for the kick
2017-05-13 21:41 Protastic101: 03:10:480 (190480|0,190651|3) - also ghosts notes i think
2017-05-13 21:41 Protastic101: dunno
2017-05-13 21:41 Protastic101: 03:15:280 (195280|1,195451|2) - ^
2017-05-13 21:42 imtdb1: yeah I think those are gn
2017-05-13 21:42 Protastic101: yeah, lots of stuff just seems like simple oversights
2017-05-13 21:42 imtdb1: yup owo
2017-05-13 21:42 Protastic101: 03:28:223 (208223|2,208337|0) - should end and start on 03:28:394 - respectively
2017-05-13 21:44 imtdb1: okay
2017-05-13 21:45 Protastic101: 03:28:566 - in this section, would be pretty cool to use 1/2 LNs on the upbeats like at 03:29:423 - 03:30:109 - 03:30:451 - 03:30:794 - 03:31:137 - since it's more sporadic
2017-05-13 21:47 imtdb1: I see
2017-05-13 21:47 Protastic101: 03:35:423 (215423|2,215766|2,216109|2,216451|2,216794|2) - also, kind of a long stack. Would consider rearranging a bit like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8082781
2017-05-13 21:48 imtdb1: okay, changed it
2017-05-13 21:49 Protastic101: 03:56:851 - to 03:58:909 - rip column 3 balance lol
2017-05-13 21:49 imtdb1: owo
2017-05-13 21:50 imtdb1: fixing it rn
2017-05-13 21:50 Protastic101: I see a whole ton of stacking but I'm not really understanding why tbh
2017-05-13 21:50 Protastic101: 04:11:423 (251423|1) - would probably just make this a short note since it's not part of the synth
2017-05-13 21:52 Protastic101: 04:17:937 - aw, why'd you stop with the 1/1 LNs here? They were nice D:
2017-05-13 21:52 imtdb1: I have no idea why I did that but I was planing to add them but I always forgot
2017-05-13 21:52 Protastic101: lmao
2017-05-13 21:54 imtdb1: 04:23:423 - same here?
2017-05-13 21:54 Protastic101: 04:20:680 - kind of a cool LN play you could do here since the sounds overlap a lothttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8082828
2017-05-13 21:54 Protastic101: yeah
2017-05-13 21:54 imtdb1: okay
2017-05-13 21:57 Protastic101: 04:55:651 - could also add SVs here similar to what I mentioned at 02:22:051 -
2017-05-13 21:57 imtdb1: okay
2017-05-13 21:58 Protastic101: 05:17:766 - this is 1/8 instead of 1/6, so like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8082853
2017-05-13 21:59 imtdb1: okay I changed that
2017-05-13 21:59 Protastic101: 05:53:937 - missing a double here for the kick
2017-05-13 22:00 imtdb1: added
2017-05-13 22:00 Protastic101: 05:54:680 (354680|1) - should be at 05:54:794 -
2017-05-13 22:00 imtdb1: okay fixed
2017-05-13 22:01 Protastic101: 06:23:594 - similarly, should be 1/8 like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8082874
2017-05-13 22:02 Protastic101: pretty much a repeat of everything else I guess with the last kiais and stuff
2017-05-13 22:02 imtdb1: okay
2017-05-13 22:02 imtdb1: thank you .3.
2017-05-13 22:02 Protastic101: btw, just gonna comment that OD 9 is brutal af for no reason lol
2017-05-13 22:02 Protastic101: I would probably use 8.5 instead
2017-05-13 22:03 Protastic101: and HP 8.5 too cause the chart really isn't that hard
2017-05-13 22:03 imtdb1: true lol
2017-05-13 22:03 Protastic101: alright, lemme post on thread o/
2017-05-13 22:03 Protastic101: \o/*
2017-05-13 22:03 imtdb1: thank youu
2017-05-13 22:03 imtdb1: o/

Really nice song, but chart needs some polishing. Also, default hitsounds :/

MilkingFarmer31 wrote:

Croatian IRC

01:43 MilkingFarmer31: ja nekužim
01:43 MilkingFarmer31: kak je to mapirano
01:43 MilkingFarmer31: ?!
01:43 imtdb1: wdym
01:43 imtdb1: sta
01:43 MilkingFarmer31: na primary sound
01:43 imtdb1: ??
01:43 MilkingFarmer31: na main ili na submain sound
01:43 MilkingFarmer31: ili mixed
01:43 imtdb1: ovisi koji dio
01:44 imtdb1: prvi dio to kiai je main i submain
01:44 imtdb1: jer ako slusas na 25% cujes da ima hihat
01:44 MilkingFarmer31: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8222422
01:44 MilkingFarmer31: gle zaš ovdje nema 2 note
01:44 MilkingFarmer31: a kick je
01:45 imtdb1: gle stvarno
01:47 MilkingFarmer31: 00:43:480 - 00:59:937 tu fale LN-ovi
01:47 imtdb1: tu nisu ni trebali ic LNovi jer sam pratila najaci zvuk koji se cuje
01:47 MilkingFarmer31: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8222441 <---- ovo nemre tako bit složeno
01:48 imtdb1: neg kak
01:48 MilkingFarmer31: sam prebaci iz collumna 0 na column 2 ili 3
01:48 MilkingFarmer31: ili 1
01:48 MilkingFarmer31: i fillaj to sa LN
01:49 MilkingFarmer31: daj dio
01:49 MilkingFarmer31: odnosno do
01:49 MilkingFarmer31: 01:16:909
01:49 imtdb1: nest ovak https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8222447
01:49 MilkingFarmer31: ne
01:49 MilkingFarmer31: znači LN
01:49 MilkingFarmer31: u columnu 0
01:49 MilkingFarmer31: makni
01:49 MilkingFarmer31: odnosno premjesti ih
01:49 imtdb1: ajd napravi ti pa uslikaj lol
01:49 MilkingFarmer31: u drugi collumn
01:49 MilkingFarmer31: isuse
01:50 MilkingFarmer31: mapperica si
01:50 imtdb1: pa lakse je tak
01:50 MilkingFarmer31: kaj neznaš koji je 1 red a koji je 2. red
01:50 imtdb1: nego da mi objasnjavas xd
01:50 imtdb1: pa znam
01:50 imtdb1: al neznam na koje note mislis da prebacim
01:50 MilkingFarmer31: 00:43:480 - 01:16:909
01:50 imtdb1: pa sam uslikaj kak bi trebalo to izgledat xd
01:51 MilkingFarmer31: tu se čuje u primarnom zvuku LN jako
01:51 MilkingFarmer31: to se treba replaceat
01:51 imtdb1: al je bolje bez LN
01:51 MilkingFarmer31: ti si samo djelomično stavljala LN
01:51 MilkingFarmer31: gle čemu ja onda moddam
01:51 MilkingFarmer31: ...
01:51 MilkingFarmer31: ak ti znaš bolje od mene
01:51 imtdb1: jer se taj zvuk cuje sam u pozadini
01:52 imtdb1: pa nemoras ti uvjek bit u pravu
01:52 MilkingFarmer31: da imaš hrpu mape koju prate sekundarni zvuk
01:52 imtdb1: e pa moja mapa ne
01:52 MilkingFarmer31: kak očeš
01:52 MilkingFarmer31: tvoja mapa
01:52 imtdb1: sam modaj dalje lol
01:54 MilkingFarmer31: 02:11:423 - 02:41:937
01:54 MilkingFarmer31: taj dio je pretežak
01:54 MilkingFarmer31: to zamjeni sa jackovima
01:54 MilkingFarmer31: delitaj te LNove
01:54 MilkingFarmer31: ne pašu
01:55 MilkingFarmer31: čak ni sa malim 7 OD
01:55 MilkingFarmer31: to ne ide
01:55 imtdb1: mislim da je bolje sa LN jer se snare sound cuje
01:55 MilkingFarmer31: ok
01:55 imtdb1: i bilo bi pre tesko za jackovima
01:55 MilkingFarmer31: ajmo dalje
01:55 imtdb1: ajd :3
01:56 MilkingFarmer31: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8222484
01:56 MilkingFarmer31: zašto toliko nota
01:56 MilkingFarmer31: di ti vidiš toliko SN
01:56 MilkingFarmer31: ova
01:56 MilkingFarmer31: ja čujem samo LN i kick
01:56 imtdb1: cek
01:56 MilkingFarmer31: i što je najbolje nije 1/2 nego 1/1
01:57 imtdb1: odi u 25% speed
01:57 MilkingFarmer31: isuse
01:57 MilkingFarmer31: dobro ok nečeš promjenit
01:57 MilkingFarmer31: ajmo dalje
01:58 imtdb1: kak si nadrkannn
01:58 imtdb1: lol
01:58 MilkingFarmer31: a kaj da ti radim
01:58 MilkingFarmer31: mislim sve kaj sam ti rekao su major mistakes
01:58 MilkingFarmer31: i 3 sam ih našo
01:58 imtdb1: pa modaj
01:58 imtdb1: nisu
01:58 MilkingFarmer31: pa no
01:58 MilkingFarmer31: idem dalje onda
01:58 imtdb1: nisu major mistakes
01:58 imtdb1: xd
01:58 MilkingFarmer31: kaj ja mogu ako maper neče promjenit
01:58 MilkingFarmer31: nebum se natezo oko toga
01:59 imtdb1: pa svejedno
01:59 imtdb1: ja ti sam kazem
01:59 imtdb1: moje misljenje
01:59 imtdb1: zast je to tak
01:59 imtdb1: i to svoje
01:59 imtdb1: pa ak se meni svidi ja promjenim
02:00 MilkingFarmer31: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8222509
02:00 MilkingFarmer31: minor 1 greška
02:00 MilkingFarmer31: to promjenit
02:00 imtdb1: zast?
02:00 MilkingFarmer31: zato kaj nemože tako bit u istom columnu
02:01 MilkingFarmer31: nije ugodno za igrat
02:01 MilkingFarmer31: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8222514
02:01 MilkingFarmer31: gle
02:01 MilkingFarmer31: aha ovo je jack
02:01 imtdb1: pa jer se vokal nemjenja
02:01 MilkingFarmer31: kao
02:01 MilkingFarmer31: ajd onda ok
02:01 imtdb1: da
02:01 MilkingFarmer31: ak je jack
02:01 MilkingFarmer31: ali mjenjaj columne
02:01 imtdb1: stavila ln jer je vokal
02:02 imtdb1: mislim da je bolje ovak u istom jer se vokal nemjenja
02:02 imtdb1: jer da je na nekom djelu tisi onda bi promjenila
02:02 imtdb1: etc
02:02 MilkingFarmer31: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8222524
02:02 MilkingFarmer31: gle 3 pa 4 i sad 5 nađem
02:02 imtdb1: kao npr 04:42:109
02:03 imtdb1: da se vokal na tom mjestu mjenja kao na 04:42:109 onda bi promjenila kolum
02:03 imtdb1: a plus nije to greska
02:04 MilkingFarmer31: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8222536
02:04 MilkingFarmer31: ovaj dio je tako neugodan
02:04 MilkingFarmer31: ma nije mapa tako ni loša
02:04 MilkingFarmer31: neka 3ka
02:04 MilkingFarmer31: po meni
02:04 MilkingFarmer31: ali ima i greška
02:04 MilkingFarmer31: kao što kažem
02:05 imtdb1: i treba tak bit
02:05 imtdb1: isti razlog ko prije
02:05 MilkingFarmer31: a dobro
02:05 MilkingFarmer31: ja sam ti dao i reko kaj je krivo
02:05 imtdb1: al BN mi modo i nije reko da je to greska
02:05 MilkingFarmer31: a ti ispravi ili ne na tebi je]

1. I really like hard song, i just dont like its too underrated (map is too hard for that star rating) so most of the time i will nerfing that map (too much unnecessary minijack, bad ln, etc)
2. since I only play harder song, i will only check harder diff (above 4*, special req exception)
3. I am new from mapping so i guess i dont always do a good mod
4. I always assuming the map I'll mod is going to rank so I'll do my best
5. As always, no kudosu if this mod is pointless

OscarRickyH02 wrote:

oh wow, another marathon map for rank O.o
just coming from your mod queue

DISCLAIMER

1. I really like hard song, i just dont like its too underrated (map is too hard for that star rating) so most of the time i will nerfing that map (too much unnecessary minijack, bad ln, etc)
2. since I only play harder song, i will only check harder diff (above 4*, special req exception)
3. I am new from mapping so i guess i dont always do a good mod
4. I always assuming the map I'll mod is going to rank so I'll do my best
5. As always, no kudosu if this mod is pointless

the only diff, this is a big box

00:11:423 (11423|3) - i think these ln is not important, you'd better give those ln to keyboard sound (idk is it from keyboard or smth) on this kind of music rather than clap or smth, instead you can give it a, note, usual note This is fine for me
00:43:994 - i recommend you to put ln for the keyboard sound wdym
01:05:594 (65594|0) - fade sound is bit unimportant I would like to keep it like this
01:08:337 - i recommend you to not focusing on vocal, better to stil focus to these keyboard sound since bgm is good I think this is fine.
01:09:366 (69366|3,69537|3,69709|3) - also i think this is bad why?
01:17:937 (77937|0,77994|1,78051|2,78109|3) - i heard only 3 sounds here this is fine
01:28:051 - and 01:28:223 - guitar sound, well actually the sound is every 1/2 1/6 fits better
01:38:851 (98851|2,99537|1,100223|3,101594|0,102280|2,102966|0,103651|2,104337|0,105194|2,105709|3,107080|0,107766|2) - not sure what do you follow with this, i think all of them should be same length first 3 LN's vocals and the rest guitar fade (or whatever its called)
01:49:480 (109480|3,109823|2,110337|1) - again, dont follow vocal this is okay for me because you mostly hear vocals and the guitar
02:00:280 (120280|3,120451|2,120623|1) - ^ let this empty It would be weird to play as there is only vocals at that part so its better to follow them
02:00:794 - i had a better pattern, this one follows pitch https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8248989 repeat twice I'll think about this one
02:11:423 (131423|2,131423|3) - not sure what is this for Vocals
from 02:12:794 - to 02:14:680 - give short ln every 1/2 beat for keyboard sound short one?
from 02:15:537 - to 02:17:423 - as well, repeat twice will think about that
02:21:109 (141109|2) - sounds like ghost note on full speed Removed
02:25:651 (145651|2,145994|1,146337|2) - these ln is 1/2 beat late, then 02:26:680 - add one more short ln, repeat twice, uhh, second one is right actuallyFixed
02:44:680 - keep the short ln on this part too added
02:49:651 (169651|1,170251|3,171709|0,172223|0,172909|3,173423|0) - not sure what do you follow with this Vocals
03:06:280 - not vocal again please, 03:09:537 (189537|1,189623|2,189709|1,189709|3) - but this thing is ok yes, vocal again <:
03:30:794 (210794|2) - ln what?
03:31:823 (211823|1) - switch with 03:31:480 (211480|0) - fixed the pattern
03:32:509 (212509|2) - to 03:32:166 (212166|1) -
03:32:851 - add short ln every red line
03:34:394 - i think put 3 notes every 2 beats since there are kicks with snare, for example 03:34:394 (214394|0,214394|2,214394|3) - is good Added
03:39:194 - remove vocal ln nope
03:50:509 (230509|2,231194|1) - remove why?
03:55:651 (235651|2,235823|1) - ^ I'll think about this one
03:58:737 (238737|3) - ^ followed vocals
04:09:709 (249709|2,250223|3) - ^ ^
04:17:251 (257251|1,257423|3) - not important, keep guitar ln there this is fine
04:20:680 (260680|0,260851|1,261023|3,261194|2,261366|1,261537|3,261709|2,261880|0,262051|3,262223|1,262394|0,262737|2,262909|1) - ? change them to guitar ln as well changed
04:31:651 (271651|1) - delete, 04:32:166 (272166|2) - this ln should start from 04:31:651 - this is okay
04:34:394 - i think its ok to keep the vocal here but if you follow the instrument its ok
04:45:366 - start to leave the vocal ln and give short ln to follow the bass this is fine
05:10:223 (310223|2) - late 1/2 beat Fixed
05:11:423 (311423|2) - ^ Fixed
05:28:051 (328051|2,328223|0,328566|1) - ? fixed the pattern , was following the synthisizer
06:05:766 (365766|1,365937|3,366280|3,366623|3,366966|3) - all of them late 1/2 beat Fixed
06:07:137 - add short ln nah
06:12:623 (372623|3) - delete Deleted

done

qqqant wrote:

from your mod queue, thanks for the mod, and sorry for the delay

overall there is a lot of strange layering in the map, i think you should just avoid mapping the vocals at all points

in the beginning section, it would be better if every off beat (e.g. 00:00:451, 00:01:137, 00:01:823, etc.) had 3 notes instead of 2 (because the sound is louder than 00:00:794 for example) added

01:31:994 (91994|1) - what is this doing here what sound is this Added it because the guitar sound fades out

01:34:737 (94737|0,94909|1) - don't map vocals removed

01:38:851 (98851|2,99537|1,100223|3) - these LN and the ones following (up until around 2:00) I have absolutely no idea what sounds these are supposed to map, consider remapping this section without these LNs Followed guitar sound because the sound fades at that point

the guitar section doesn't really seem very fitting for a mania map

02:00:280 (120280|3,120451|2,120623|1) - remove these I would like to keep those because that the only thing that you can hear at that place and imo it would be pretty weird to remove it

02:00:794 REALLY AWKWARD PATTERNING, please consider the pitches of the notes and position the notes properly based on the pitches I think this is fine

02:19:994 (139994|3) - just remove this thanks imo I would like to keep this. I will ask BN if I should remove it

02:22:051 try something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8307037 (same with 04:55:651) I will think about adding those because imo current pattern is totaly fine

06:23:637 (383637|3,383637|2) - change to one note in column 3 at 06:23:594 and one note in column 4 at 06:23:637 This pattern is fine imo

this map needs a lot of work, but i hope you can do it! good luck

TheNewBungping wrote:

Hi I'm from TheNewBungping's 4Keys O!Mania GD/Modding Queue [OPEN]

LOL I played this map before, it's a nice map thank youuu
here's your mod

1|2|3|4

Adventure

00:19:994 change trill pattern (or maybe just flip the trill notes to the other column) fliped the notes

01:04:223 remove note on column 2 I actully want to keep this

01:31:994 LN starts here, not on 01:31:909 I followed vocals and vocals start at 01:31:994

02:25:480 - 02:25:651 put LN here and delete the one on 02:25:651 - 02:25:823 Fixed

03:09:709 move note on column 2 to column 1 Moved

03:14:851 - 03:15:709 should also put LN according to the music Keeping this because I didn't add LN's on other places with the same sound

03:29:937 remove a note
03:31:309 ^
03:31:994 ^ ^^^ nah. Its good like this

04:23:080 end LN here and start a new LN at column 1 Fixed

04:57:709 remove LN here Removed
04:58:051 ^ ^
04:58:394 ^ ^
04:58:737 ^ ^

04:57:880 put an LN
04:58:223 ^
04:58:566 ^ added everything

06:24:109 a normal note here should be enough This fits better because the sound fades out on that place

Best of luck on getting this ranked

mcwc2307 wrote:

Hi im from your mod queue!
As i promised, here is your mod.
Note: I am a total newbie at this. I have never modded an osu!mania map before...
Please tell me if i say something thats wrong...

Mod

1. First of all. Your map's really good! I really would suggest you find a BN soon to rank this or something! But of course if you're still open to mods now. Then i might as well give you one. Thank you! I alredy found a BN but hes away rn so I can't do anything now. I'm just accepting mods so that map does not go to graveyard

2. Im only focusing on around this note 03:28:566 (208566|2) - onwards, because your first part is too good to mod. XD

3. OKay now for the actual mods

a. 03:28:566 (208566|1) - This hold note to me stops at a point which is a bit too silent. Maybe try moving it to the white timing tick ( is that what you call it?) at the back around here 03:29:251 (209251|0) - This is fine because I've followed the fade sound and the"aaah" on vocals. I might add a LN at that please
b. Im not sure if you can hear the dubstep in the background, but i can hear it corresponds differently to the hold notes you have placed
I'd like to suggest adding a hold note on these notes 03:30:280 (210280|1) - 03:30:966 (210966|1) - 03:33:023 (213023|1) - 03:33:709 (213709|3) - added those on every 1/1 because you can hear a fade sound on every one of the LN's
c. 03:34:051 (214051|1) - I sugesst removing it and replacing it with just notes You can only hear vocals there "ahh" so this is fine
d. 03:37:309 (217309|3) - okay. i can offer to solutions to this. 1. You can totally remove that note at replace it with notes. Or 2. You change these notes to a hold note. 03:36:794 (216794|0,216966|2,217137|0) - This one is fine because I followed vocals there so idk whats the problem lol
e. 03:50:509 (230509|2,231194|1) - These hold notes seem unnecessary, because there isnt much holds afterwards. And it looks like it stops abruptly. I would really recommend that you remove them. Removed
f. 03:55:480 (235480|1,235651|2,235823|1) - Same things for these hold notes. They also seem unnecessary. followed synthesizer sound
g. 04:17:251 (257251|1,257423|3) - these holds look and sound unequally distributed to the beat of the sound and the arrangement. It would be nice if you could make them of equal length. The first LN followes the guitar sound and the 2nd LN follows vocals at that part

And thats about it. The rest seem fine. Even if there was anything bad about the other parts, i wouldn't notice it.
f.

imtdb1 wrote:

mcwc2307 wrote:

Hi im from your mod queue!
As i promised, here is your mod.
Note: I am a total newbie at this. I have never modded an osu!mania map before...
Please tell me if i say something thats wrong...

Mod

1. First of all. Your map's really good! I really would suggest you find a BN soon to rank this or something! But of course if you're still open to mods now. Then i might as well give you one. Thank you! I alredy found a BN but hes away rn so I can't do anything now. I'm just accepting mods so that map does not go to graveyard

2. Im only focusing on around this note 03:28:566 (208566|2) - onwards, because your first part is too good to mod. XD

3. OKay now for the actual mods

a. 03:28:566 (208566|1) - This hold note to me stops at a point which is a bit too silent. Maybe try moving it to the white timing tick ( is that what you call it?) at the back around here 03:29:251 (209251|0) - This is fine because I've followed the fade sound and the"aaah" on vocals. I might add a LN at that please
b. Im not sure if you can hear the dubstep in the background, but i can hear it corresponds differently to the hold notes you have placed
I'd like to suggest adding a hold note on these notes 03:30:280 (210280|1) - 03:30:966 (210966|1) - 03:33:023 (213023|1) - 03:33:709 (213709|3) - added those on every 1/1 because you can hear a fade sound on every one of the LN's
c. 03:34:051 (214051|1) - I sugesst removing it and replacing it with just notes You can only hear vocals there "ahh" so this is fine
d. 03:37:309 (217309|3) - okay. i can offer to solutions to this. 1. You can totally remove that note at replace it with notes. Or 2. You change these notes to a hold note. 03:36:794 (216794|0,216966|2,217137|0) - This one is fine because I followed vocals there so idk whats the problem lol
e. 03:50:509 (230509|2,231194|1) - These hold notes seem unnecessary, because there isnt much holds afterwards. And it looks like it stops abruptly. I would really recommend that you remove them. Removed
f. 03:55:480 (235480|1,235651|2,235823|1) - Same things for these hold notes. They also seem unnecessary. followed synthesizer sound
g. 04:17:251 (257251|1,257423|3) - these holds look and sound unequally distributed to the beat of the sound and the arrangement. It would be nice if you could make them of equal length. The first LN followes the guitar sound and the 2nd LN follows vocals at that part

And thats about it. The rest seem fine. Even if there was anything bad about the other parts, i wouldn't notice it.
f.

Thank you for modding and a star!

eyes wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/6091316

hey, mod here
1|2|3|4

First of all I think you have to change the metadata:

Source: Ano Hi Mita Hana no Namae o Bokutachi wa Mada Shiranai
New tags: anohana Kayano Ai Tomatsu Haruka Hayami Saori anime opening remix

Now get closer to patterns:

[Adventure]
00:00:109 - honestly this part looks VERY overmapped, do you really think the handstream matches to this pretty calm part of the song? I don't think so.
Also as you can see this part of the song 00:22:051 is more louder, but you mapped it much easier than the intro. If you agree with me now, please change triples to doubles, and doubles to singles 00:22:051 is much diffrend from the beginning of the song and no, I dont think thats overmapped because every strong sound is triple and the beginning has 2 strong sounds so I mixed them with double and triples

00:33:023 - is there a logic where you place shields and where not? I see it like just random patterning.
Random isn't that bad, but by this point 00:38:851 - you use shields in left hand too much, maybe you'd want to shift some of them to 3|4 columns. this is fine imo because there is a strong sound with a finisher so imo it fits

00:43:994 - I guess you have to fix the hitsounding in this part, use W on bass sounds and W+C on snare sounds, I don't see a logic now. lmao idk what I was doing there tbh. Will fix when I finish reading this mod cx

01:05:594 (65594|0) - suggestion: delete this and make these LNs 01:05:423 (65423|3,65594|2,65766|1) I dont really wanna do that because vocals are very strong there and you can mostly hear them

01:20:680 (80680|0,80737|1,80794|2,80851|3) - hm maybe CTRL+H this because you already used this pattern in previous moment 01:17:937 fixed
(77937|0,77994|1,78051|2,78109|3) fixed

02:02:051 - note here? um no? I dont see why I should add a note there

02:44:166 (164166|0,164223|1,164280|2,164337|3) - this is too easy pattern for the sound imo, maybe you'd like patterns like 1321 or 4234. I'll think about that because I want to keep it like this rn

02:44:680 - too boring part imo, you might want to add some lns for vocal. I want to keep it like this because in first kiai I didn't mostly follow vocals with LN. But I will add some LN's

03:47:594 (227594|3) - move to 1st column for balance. it will be really weird to play it with the next LN so I will keep it like this

04:50:166 (290166|2,290337|2,290509|2,290680|2) - no reason for this. didn't notice that, fixed

05:40:223 - uh, I wonder why you map by this way, the outro is much harder than main chorus 05:18:280 , but music doesn't give you a reason for this. some of the music part is same as in the 2nd kiai so I just transfered it at the end


You have to ask some questions to yourself, like, "why do I map this sound like this? why do I map this sound, but don't map that sound?". You need to keep some priorities in your mind. Intro and outro can't be harder than the main chorus, at least in this song. Try to rethink all the map and take some new ideas.okay .3.

eyes wrote:

You have to ask some questions to yourself, like, "why do I map this sound like this? why do I map this sound, but don't map that sound?". You need to keep some priorities in your mind. Intro and outro can't be harder than the main chorus, at least in this song. Try to rethink all the map and take some new ideas.

Mage wrote:

Hello

1/2/3/4

Adventure

00:05:766 - why you put here jack? 00:00:280 - same part, but here are no jack fixed

00:22:051 - why you abuse 1st column all this part lol fixed

00:42:623 (42623|0) - finish this LN 00:42:794 - here fixed

01:05:937 - add note, at least, for vocal added

01:53:937 - should be double added

02:36:451 (156451|1,156623|1,156794|1) - 02:37:480 (157480|1,157651|1,157823|1,157994|1) - why? fixed

02:44:566 (164566|3) - what this note for lol, remove removed

02:49:651 - what you want to highlight with these LNs? There are no vocals or instruments, i can understand only 2 last LNs xd I actully added them to follow vocals but I have no idea why I didn't remove them at first place lol

02:55:309 (175309|3,175309|2,175651|3,175651|2,175994|2,175994|3) - can you replace some of these chords? this is fine imo but I will keep it in mind

03:07:651 (187651|3) - remove LN and 03:07:994 - add LN removed the LN but I dont want to add a LN there because I followed vocals with that LN pattern

03:09:366 - why did you stop put LNs :thinking: there are no LNs there :thinking:

03:27:537 (207537|0) - what this LN for just noticed that that part is not timed correctly so fixed

03:27:709 (207709|3) - finish this LN 03:27:880 - here, if you wanted to highlight long sound, then 03:27:194 - it starts here and ends 03:28:566 - here fixed

eyes wrote:

You have to ask some questions to yourself, like, "why do I map this sound like this? why do I map this sound, but don't map that sound?". You need to keep some priorities in your mind. Intro and outro can't be harder than the main chorus, at least in this song. Try to rethink all the map and take some new ideas.

Good luck!

Toumoko wrote:

Dear Player ,

[My Mod]

Adventure

1. 02:48:794 (168794|1) - Suddenly only 1 note , but this 02:48:451 (168451|1,168451|3) - have 2 note with the same sound . fixed
2. 02:49:480 (169480|0) - ^ ^
3. 04:10:737 (250737|2) - why add 2 note at here ? Should be fine with only slider since it's have low sound , than this 04:11:080 (251080|2) - i understand u put a 2 note at there since it's have big loud sound removed
4. 04:10:566 (250566|0) - ^ removed

That's all from me
Good luck !

OwenF04 wrote:

Hello!

Note, these are all suggestions. If i made a mistake or you disagree do not apply it.

From my Mod queue

Adventure

00:20:680 - these three 1/4 sliders are actually snapped to 1/6 when you listen closely https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8557518 fixed

00:34:394 - missed a note, should be double like the others added

02:00:666 (120666|1) - should be snapped like this..? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8557539 I would like to leave them like this because you can hear a tiny bit of vocals at the current timing

02:44:166 (164166|0,164223|1,164280|2,164337|3) - since this whole pattern is similar to the guitars 1/6, i recommend CTRL+J ing these 02:44:280 (164280|2,164337|3). oh and it should be 1/8 because of these 05:17:766 (317766|3,317809|2,317851|1,317894|0) fixed

05:17:851 (317851|1,317894|0) - CTRL+J these like above hmm, okay. I guess that would work too

06:23:594 (383594|2,383594|3,383680|0,383723|1,383766|3,383766|2) - this is wrong. should be the same pattern as above, with any doubles needed this is fine imo.

06:24:109 (384109|2) - extend this to 06:44:680 ..? this current pattern is fine. If I extend it as you told me to it would be too boring to play because you have to hold the LN for a very long time.

All i could find. Good luck!

Dr_Marc wrote:

Good Luck dude

Kawawa wrote:

Hello! As a request.
Sadly It does not mean as a check, should be improved more.

[General]
※ Offset
I actually feel beat sync is faster than mp3.
Let you listen once again the clap beat(like 00:00:451 - 00:22:737 - ) than first instruments of start part.
so I think offset should be increased. I guess +6 to +8 nearly. will check that later

[Adventure]
00:11:080 (11080|0,11080|2) - It would be better If you make it same column with 00:11:423 (11423|0,11423|1) -
It's up to you. here the feedback :: https://puu.sh/wV5lF/f9fb11e24b.jpg fixed

01:05:594 - to 01:05:937 - I think it can be improved(I mean make it buff the anchor) hm, okay. Fixed
01:05:594 - There is no LN that you used. so you can make it two. And 01:05:937 - here too, used a cymbol instrument.
https://puu.sh/wV5AU/70d8cd671c.jpg fixed

01:13:994 - to 01:15:537 - feels weird by missing a point. hmm, I dont really know what you mean by that, but I've added some LN's to follow vocals + snare sounds
01:13:994 - seems missed a LN here? Actually you focusing on the background synth or vocaling. Mostly synth, added the LN
but here is a feels missing than your intention 01:14:337 - 01:14:680 - here too. same reason with above. fixed
And It made me weird for rhythm. 01:14:509 (74509|0,74851|3) - yup, removed those
The rhythm changes here and again returns the main rhythm 01:15:023 - to 01:16:223 -
LNs should be done on those section. https://puu.sh/wV5Wq/fb516810e6.jpg It's just an example. okay, fixed

01:17:937 - to 01:18:109 - It's 1/8th rhythm. The 1/6th of same part should be checked. I will not comment same thing.
01:31:909 (91909|3) - LN should be started at here 01:31:823 (91823|0) - since harp sounds ended at there. fixed

01:53:251 (113251|2) - I can't feel any long rhythm here. Fixed, made the LN shorter and added some LNS to follow the guitar
I can compare with 01:58:051 (118051|1) - 01:47:766 (107766|2) - As an example. They're followed vocal sample.
but this one is so far away, and I really don't calculate this one as a long instrument. well you can't really hear anything there expcet the vocal and guitar. But I've removed the LN and it should be good now

02:51:709 (171709|0,172223|0) - Same reason with above. kinda inappropriate expression to me. forgot to remove those LNs, fixed
05:25:309 (325309|2,325823|2) - Same with above. fixed
For example :: 02:52:909 (172909|3,173423|0) - It's expressed a part of vocal, one by one. It's good way.

03:14:851 - 03:16:223 - Let me compare with 03:09:366 - to 03:10:737 -
They are the same structure of music, but why one is poor and other one is solid. :thinking: fixed it

03:20:766 (200766|1,200937|2) - Can't feel any vocal vibration rhythm here. yup, fixed
It's so far away to what you wanted to expresss them. 03:09:537 - to 03:10:394 - You can consider this. It's good way.

03:25:823 - to 03:27:194 - Same reason with above. weird, should be improved. fixed

04:54:280 - You can made it highlight, It's actually a highlight to this theme. 04:54:709 - and It's unnecessary rhythm
Here the feedback :: https://puu.sh/wV6zr/43cd4b78df.jpg

fixed
It had a lot of problems in detail, could not mention everything.
so It would be better If you fix same thing from what I said.
Good Luck!

Rivals_7 wrote:

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ok first off uh
00:01:142 (1142|0,1314|0) - 00:01:828 (1828|2,1999|2) - i see you jacking here but not in most places that particularly have the same instrument playing over and over again. ex : - 00:00:456 (456|1,628|2) - 00:02:514 (2514|1,2685|2) - 00:03:199 (3199|2,3371|1) - etc
which is quite off if you actually had idea behind this structure such as "Those jacking are following the same pitch" or something.
Try to review this particular section again. whole of them, i mean About that jacking, protastic101 told me to add those because the beginning was too boring to play, but if its a big problem I will remove them.

00:19:828 (19828|0) - move to 4 and then....
00:19:999 (19999|3,19999|2,20085|0,20085|1,20171|2,20171|3,20256|1,20256|0,20342|2,20342|3,20428|0,20428|1,20514|2,20514|3,20599|1,20599|0,20685|2,20914|2,21156|2) - ctrl+h this one. you see its.... quite more sensible with the instrument, i think?
oh also to avoid hand balance issues with - 00:21:542 (21542|3) - I dont really see any diffrence but I think you suggestion kinda fits better.

uh i expect something more interesting from - 00:22:056 (22056|2,22056|0,22056|3) - onwards tho but it seems the song itself doesnt provide much to map yup, tragic

00:49:828 (49828|1,49999|1) - 00:50:342 (50342|3,50514|3) - remember jacking issues at first one? here as well same as before, I'll remove those

00:53:771 (53771|1) - dont think there's a big emphasis here, maybe delete hm okay

00:54:114 (54114|2) - same? fixed

01:05:771 (65771|1,65771|3,65942|3,65942|1) - one is enough i think. considering no emphasis there kawawa suggested that in his mod,
but sure. I'll remove one

01:23:085 (83085|2) - uh whats this? i dont think its the same kind of guitar strings you've been doing elsewhere forgot to fix that one

01:30:628 (90628|1) - pretty sure its should be longer. see - 01:19:656 (79656|1) - fixed

02:11:256 - idk what is this timing point for idk too, I think i was doing some volume changes but it looks like that I forgot to remove it.

03:05:599 (185599|2) - ghost? yup, removed

04:23:256 - think you missing something? hm. I added LN to follow synth sound-

ok i dont think there's much i can tell since, the majority is like oriented in the same structure already. Although there is many places that i believe you could make it more interesting. idk where D:

for now GL o/