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Deif's Overdose
  1. 01:17:259 (3) - How about change slider to vertical? Make differrent with before this note. (It doesn't look necessary. I'd like to keep it consistent with the previous slider and not have a much stronger hyperdash to the following stream)
  2. 01:37:696 (2) - Change slider move to right? (Sure, done)


Thank you for giving a check!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Marigold.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 74727
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 2.899998

[Metadata]
Title:Marigold ft. Guriri
TitleUnicode:Marigold ft. グリリ
Artist:M2U
ArtistUnicode:M2U
Creator:Hareimu
Version:Deif's Overdose
Source:Deemo
Tags:nicode rayark inc magnolia myosotis square musiq square-musiq narae hans alice alternate story symphonic boss piano violin dnb drum'n'bass drum and bass deif
BeatmapID:1270304
BeatmapSetID:596327

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4.8
OverallDifficulty:8.8
ApproachRate:8.8
SliderMultiplier:2.1
SliderTickRate:2

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208,192,113446,2,0,L|320:192,2,105,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,114009,6,0,P|400:256|272:320,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,114571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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224,192,115134,2,0,P|176:160|176:112,1,105,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,116071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,80,116259,2,0,P|64:176|112:256,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,116821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,64,117009,6,0,P|480:160|432:240,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,117571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,192,117759,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,192,118134,2,0,P|144:256|176:288,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,118509,6,0,P|368:256|336:288,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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304,144,119446,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,224,119634,1,2,0:3:0:0:
336,224,119821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,120384,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,176,120571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,120759,2,0,P|288:112|288:64,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,160,121134,2,0,P|80:112|80:64,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,224,121509,6,0,P|368:192|400:96,1,210,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
320,96,121977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,96,122071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,122165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,122259,2,0,P|448:240|448:336,1,157.5,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,122634,2,0,P|64:240|64:336,1,157.5,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,123009,5,4,0:3:0:0:
176,304,123384,1,4,0:3:0:0:
256,304,123477,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,304,123571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,304,123665,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,272,123759,1,4,0:3:0:0:
465,231,123852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,185,123946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
457,142,124040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
435,103,124134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
403,72,124227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
362,52,124321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,43,124415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,124509,6,0,P|64:208|48:256,1,105,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,288,124884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,125071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,96,125259,1,8,0:1:0:0:
98,111,125352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,151,125446,1,0,0:0:0:0:
21,208,125540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
21,271,125634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,329,125727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
98,368,125821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,192,126009,6,0,P|448:176|464:128,1,105,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,126384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,126571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,288,126759,1,8,0:1:0:0:
414,273,126852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,233,126946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
491,176,127040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
491,113,127134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,55,127227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
414,16,127321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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240,272,128071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,128259,2,0,L|336:96,1,105,8|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,128634,2,0,L|208:96,1,105,0|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,129009,6,0,P|464:256|336:304,1,210,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,256,129571,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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128,192,130134,2,0,L|224:144,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,131071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,131821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,132571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,133321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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384,64,133884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,134071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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128,192,134821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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160,192,137071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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128,128,140071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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384,192,140634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,128,141384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,141571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,128,141759,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,141946,12,0,144196,0:0:0:0:
posted

rew0825 wrote:

Secret Santa :3 Merry christmas! what a nice surprise! <3

Cup
  1. 00:06:946 (4) - How about move to 00:07:321 and move the note to between 00:07:134 (5,1) - ? I think it follow the melody better. It'd be ignoring the higher pitched sound at 00:06:946 - just to follow a lower pitched piano note instead if I did that, so no.
  2. 00:11:259 (2) - The movement of this slider is look strong. I suggest to change this to other slider pattern. Tilted it a bit more vertically instead, don't see how that movement was strong but eh.
  3. 01:07:509 (3,4) - I think it would be better if change the pattern of slider to similar like 01:06:009 (1,2) - done
Salad
  1. 00:24:384 (2,3) - The distance is look a little confused whether dash or not dash. Please make it sure. done
  2. 00:27:009 (1,2) - Same as top ^. done
  3. 00:53:821 (5) - Remove this note? I think it unnecessary. done
  4. 00:57:759 (4,1) - Add dash between it? kk
  5. 01:18:009 (1) - How about change this slider move right? sure
  6. 01:27:759 (3,1) - The distance is look a little confused whether dash or not dash. Please make it sure. done
Rain
  1. 00:10:134 (6,1) - It's so far. I suggest move 00:10:134 (6) - to x:154 and 00:09:759 (5) - change slider to vertical? done
  2. 01:19:509 (1) - I suggest change slider to vertical? For easier play. There's a lot of other antiflowing sliders on this kiai as well, and I want to make it as intense as possible while still adapting to rain rules, so keeping it.

That's all from me. Good luck :)thanks!
mank rarigold
posted
[General]
  1. The yellow color feels a bit too bright. I suggest you go for a orange color instead, which matches the flowers better. The light gray could also be a little bit darker so it stands out on the white half of the BG a bit more.
  2. Your drum-hitclap sounds like recorded at a ping pong match. Seriously though, it doesn't really fit the song, so I suggest searching for another hitsounds.


[Cup]
  1. 00:03:009 (3,4) - This distance is suddenly large compared to the rest of the section. An option is to slant (4) a bit more by moving its head to the right; another would be to move 00:03:759 (4,1,2,3) - as a whole to the right.
  2. 00:30:009 - Since the song calms down a bit starting here, I'd lower the SV multiplier until 01:00:009 - . Some of the horizontal sliders in this section have a little bit too much movement for this calm section.
  3. 01:02:259 (4,1,2) - Having consecutive direction changes like this feels a bit too much for a Cup in non-Kiai sections. One option would be to make (1) flow right, like this:
  4. ^Similar stuff applies for 01:10:509 (3) - , 01:16:509 (3) - and 01:57:009 (3) - .
  5. 01:19:509 (3,4,5) - These have a slightly larger distance than the rest of your patterns, coupled with antiflow movements. I think you could move (4) to the left a bit to reduce the distances.
  6. 01:43:509 - I'd also reduce the SV multiplier for this calm section.
  7. 02:22:509 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The piano sound are really weak compared to the vocal, so it feels a bit too much having them mapped in a Cup. I would have gone for a long slider following the vocal.


[Salad]
  1. 00:01:509 (1,2,3) - Since the song is just starting, these feel a bit large for walkable distances. I'd move (2) closer to the other objects.
  2. 00:03:009 (3,4,1) - For a diff that it's meant to introduce players to dashes, having 2 dashes between 3 consecutive objects not even 5 secs into the song feels a bit too much. In this case, the first one is less important than the second one, so I'd remove that one.
  3. 00:04:509 (1,2,3) - Considering the two antiflow movements, the second one including a dash, I'd make it a little bit easier by making the walkable pattern shorter, so I'd move 00:05:634 (2) - to the right a bit.
  4. 00:07:884 (3,4) - Kinda ambiguous distance, can be easily done by walking but it seems like you intended it to be a dash. If it's that way, consider making the dash clearer by increasing the distance.
  5. 00:09:009 (4,5) - The distance feels a bit tight to walk, so I'd reduce it a bit.
  6. 00:10:509 (1,2,3) - Having three 1/2 dashes in a row like this for the intro also feels a bit overdone. Maybe you can make 00:10:509 (1,2) - walkable.
  7. 00:12:009 (3,4) - Looks tight to walk, and I don't think the dash fits here. Make it more easily walkable instead.
  8. 00:19:509 (1,2) - I'd take the dash out of here, otherwise this part feels too dashy with a dash nearly every 2/1. Same thing for 00:22:884 (2,3) -.
  9. 00:26:821 (9) - I'd take this note out. This 1/2 stream feels a bit dense in comparison with the rest, although I get there is a sound that justifies the stream.
  10. 00:27:009 (1) - Having this as a 1/2 repeat instead of a 1/1 slider is not only inconsistent with the rest of the section, but it also creates a rather harsh movement having to do 3 direction changes between 00:27:009 (1,2) -. Also, the same previous thing of removing the dash applies here.
  11. 00:43:509 (1,2,3,4) - I would have preferred a slider like you did on 00:37:509 (1) - for consistency.
  12. 00:47:259 (2,3) - Kinda ambiguos distance because they are apart in the timeline. Try to make it clearer.
  13. 00:52:509 (3,4) - Inconsistent dash with just a second ago; I'd remove it. 00:54:384 (2,3) - is also inconsistent, so I'd take it out.
  14. 00:56:259 (2,3) - If you intend this to be clearly walkable, you need to reduce the distance a bit.
  15. 01:05:071 (4) - Sound here is really weak, and it would have been better to keep the dash to 01:05:259 (5) - for consistency instead.
  16. 01:18:759 (3) - I don't think the drum sound is that strong to require a dash; I'd remove it.
  17. 01:21:759 (5,1) - This could have a dash between them, the sound on (1) is quite strong.
  18. 01:24:009 (3,4,5) - The sounds here are not that strong, so I'd reduce the distance of this triplet to the previous object in order to make it more walkable.
  19. 01:25:509 (1,2) - I'd reduce a distance between these, because the dash is preceeded by a direction change.
  20. 01:26:259 (2,1) - Kinda ambiguous distance, I'd reduce it a bit because the sound on (1) doesn't seem that strong to me.
  21. 01:27:759 (3,1) - I'd increase this distance so the dash is clearer.
  22. 01:29:071 (4,5,6,1) - 1/2 dashes combined with antiflow like these are quite harsh, I'd try something different here like making the normal flow instead or idk.
  23. 01:30:384 (2,3) - Same comment as for the previous Kiai.
  24. 01:35:259 (3,4,1) - If this wasn't a Salad, having a dash between these three would have been fine. In this case, I'd prefer if you removed the dash between (3,4) and added one between (4,1) instead, in order to emphasize the downbeat.
  25. 01:41:634 (5,1) - At this BPM you need a 1/1 distance between objects and spinner. The spinner should start on 01:42:009 - instead.
  26. 01:51:009 (3,4,1) - I don't think these two distances should have the same emphasis, when (4,1) is clearly stronger. Try to make (3,4) a walkable distance instead.
  27. 01:55:509 (1,2) - On the previous pattern you placed a lot of emphasis in the vocals, and in this one you shifted to something else I can't identify. I suggest you replace 01:55:509 (1,2,3) - with two 3/2 sliders in order to follow the vocals as you did previously.
  28. 01:58:509 (1,2) - Similar stuff here, I suggest you follow the vocals instead.
  29. 02:07:509 (1,2) - This sounds really inconsistent. I suggest you keep the trend of using 3/2 sliders.
  30. 02:15:009 (1,2) - A 3/2 slider would sound better and also be more consistent with the rest instead of two 1/2 sliders.
  31. 02:19:321 (5,1) - 02:19:884 (2,3) - I'd reduce these dashes a bit, while keeping them clear dashes, as the section is quite calm.
  32. 02:23:071 (2,3) - I think the sounds here are really weak and the section feels a bit overdone with them. Taking them out clearly places the emphasis on the piano.


[Platter]
  1. 00:06:946 (2,3) - I don't think the sounds here are strong enough to require a dash, and the distance itself is a bit ambiguous, so I'd reduce it.
  2. 00:13:509 (1,2,3) - Weird spacing between these; (2,3) should be larger than (1,2) due to the stronger sound (and for consistency with the previous patterns)
  3. 00:24:759 (3,4,5) - I'd move this a bit to the left, in order to reduce the dash a bit. With the direction changes, it can be a bit awkward to play.
  4. 00:25:884 (2,3,1) - The larger distance feels really odd here, and creates ambiguity (by comparison with the rest of the pattern) as to whether it should be played as a walk or as a dash. I'd move (3) closer to the other objects.
  5. 00:29:165 (3,4) - This is such a wasted chance to add a nice, fitting dash. But you couldn't make something large because you added a 1/4 note, which wasn't really strong at all. So I suggest you remove (3) and create a stronger dash to (4).
  6. 00:29:259 (4,5,1) - The (4,5) distance is quite ambiguous and somewhat hard to walk. It doesn't deserve a dash IMO, so I'd reduce the dsitance. Additionally, the same issue of not being able to add a stronger dash because you added an unnecessary beat happens between (5,1).
  7. 00:32:821 (8,1) - Same issue of not being able to add a stronger dash because of a beat that could be removed.
  8. 00:45:759 (3,4,1) - Distance between (4,1) should be larger than (3,4) because (1) is the strongest sound here.
  9. 00:46:509 (1,2,3,4) - If anything, the dash here should be between (3,4) rather than (1,2), because (4) is the strongest sound.
  10. 00:59:071 (3,4,5) - Another part that could have a HDash if you removed the 1/4 note.
  11. 01:03:009 (1,2,3,4,5) - The piano sounds are relatively weak here, so I wouldn't map them. I would just use a long slider. Also applies for 01:04:509 (1,2,3,4,5) -.
  12. 01:16:790 (2) - I can't hear anything supporting this note here. Remove it.
  13. 01:21:196 (2,3,4) - I'd move (3) a bit to the left to make it more easily walkable. The current movement can feel quite tight which is a bit uncomfortable considering the HDash triggered on (4).
  14. 01:23:540 (2) - This note isn't needed at all, and you could make a stronger dash between (1,3) if you removed it.
  15. 01:27:009 (1,2,3,4) - 01:27:759 (5,6,7,8) - Put these notes closer, by moving (2,4) and (6,8) closer to their previous objects. Currently it can be hard to walk depending on how well players time the HDash.
  16. 01:29:259 (4,5) - I'd reduce this dash a bit, as it feels a bit tight.
  17. 01:45:571 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - I'd put these groups a bit closer, as the current distance feels a bit large for the calm section.
  18. 02:03:571 (4,5,6) - Same comment as mentioned previously.
  19. 02:07:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same thing, I think the vocal is more important than the piano in this part so I'd map it as a single slider.
  20. 02:22:884 (2) - As in the Salad, I think that replacing this with a circle will follow the piano better.


[Rain]
  1. 00:04:977 (2,4) - I can't hear anything on these notes.
  2. 00:20:696 (8,9,10,11) - I think these should be 3 notes snapped to the 1/4 beats, since the flute (which was the sound in 1/6) stops on 00:20:634 (7) - .
  3. 00:25:509 (1,2) - This distance is a bit tight after the previous patterns, I'd move 00:25:884 (2,3,4,5) - a bit to the right.
  4. 00:26:446 (7) - I'd move this closer to the surrounding objects, it's currently a sharp movement on sounds that aren't that strong.
  5. 00:32:727 (8) - This note is overmapped.
  6. 01:12:571 (4,5,6) - (4,5) should have a larger distance than (5,6) because (5) is stronger.
  7. 01:22:509 (1,2) - I think this dash can be a bit tricky after the previous HDash. I'd either reduce it or increase it to trigger the HDash in order to make the movement back easier.
  8. 01:25:696 (2,3,4,5) - and 01:26:446 (8,9) - Reduce the distance between these doublets. They can catch players off guard quite easily.
  9. 01:28:696 (2,3,4) - Having this combination between 1/4 HDashes and antiflow feels a bit too much. You can make this easier by making the sliders slightly point outside.
  10. 01:33:759 (1,2) - It doesn't make sense for this to have antiflow with 1/4 jumps, while the previous 4 notes, which are really similar sounds, were just a simple stream. For simplicity's sake, I'd go with both of them being simple streams.
  11. 01:41:634 (1,2,3) - These three notes still have strong sounds, so the current movement between them is underwhelming. Try to increase the distances.
  12. 01:56:071 (4,5) - There should be a dash between these, for consistency and because the vocal is strong enough.
  13. 01:59:821 (6,1) - The distance between these two is also underwhelming. Try to increase it somehow.
  14. 02:06:759 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It doesn't make sense that the (4,1) HDash is followed by antiflow when, on a stronger sounding part (01:02:259 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ) you mapped this without antiflow. So it's time to change the direction of 02:07:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - .
  15. 02:17:821 (6,1,2) - Again, it's rather weird that the larger distance is between (2,1) when (1) is stronger than (2). (6,1) should have the dash instead. Similar stuff on 02:20:821 (6,1,2) - .
  16. 02:18:384 (2,3,4) - Somewhat similar, it's weird that both distances here are equal when (3) is stronger than (4).


[Overdose]
  1. 00:10:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I think it emphasizes notes better if you don't make the distances symmetric. For example, if you move 00:11:071 (2) - to x:304, much more emphasis is placed on (3), which is a slightly stronger sound.
  2. 00:13:321 (4) - Similarly, I think you should move this to x:224 to make the distances unequal and place more emphasis on (1).
  3. 00:25:790 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I'm not sure having this much 1/4 HDashes in a row is truly fitting. Maybe you can remove the HDashes between 00:26:446 (6,7,8) - because (7) and (8) are on slightly weaker sounds.
  4. 00:47:727 (6,8) - I think you could move this (2) to x:112 in order to make the wiggle a little bit easier considering it's a calm part.
  5. 00:54:384 (2) - I think it'd be better if you split this into a 1/2 slider and a circle, since 00:54:759 - is a rather important beat (as emphasized by the clap), so it deserves its own object IMO.
  6. 00:58:884 (2,4) - I'd move these to x:320 to add more leniency to the pattern overall: it will be a bit easier to get here from the previous pattern, which is a rather strong HDash, and also will make the wiggle a bit easier. Also applies for 02:03:384 (2,3,4,5) - .
  7. 01:03:759 (2,3,1) - Making these distances slightly unequal will emphasize the slightly stronger sound at (1) better. Also applies for 01:04:509 (1,2,3) -, 01:12:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -, 01:55:509 (1,2,3) -, 02:00:384 (2,3,4) -, 02:10:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -, 02:13:884 (2,3,4) -, 02:19:884 (2,3,4) -, 02:20:634 (5,6,1) -, and 02:21:384 (2,3,4) - .
  8. I'm not sure whether the patterns in the Kiai are overdone or not. To me, they are creating a huge gap with the Rain due to their strong gimmicky and troll-y nature, but I'll let other modders voice their opinion.
  9. 01:45:571 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - I'd make this pattern slightly easier by reducing the distances, in order to better represent the calmer section
posted

ZiRoX wrote:

[General]
  1. The yellow color feels a bit too bright. I suggest you go for a orange color instead, which matches the flowers better. The light gray could also be a little bit darker so it stands out on the white half of the BG a bit more. done
  2. Your drum-hitclap sounds like recorded at a ping pong match. Seriously though, it doesn't really fit the song, so I suggest searching for another hitsounds. replaced with a new snare one


[Cup]
  1. 00:03:009 (3,4) - This distance is suddenly large compared to the rest of the section. An option is to slant (4) a bit more by moving its head to the right; another would be to move 00:03:759 (4,1,2,3) - as a whole to the right. slanted (3) (which is now (1 because of the new combos) to the left, since the distance between 3 and 4 was the one that was bigger compared to the rest.
  2. 00:30:009 - Since the song calms down a bit starting here, I'd lower the SV multiplier until 01:00:009 - . Some of the horizontal sliders in this section have a little bit too much movement for this calm section. done
  3. 01:02:259 (4,1,2) - Having consecutive direction changes like this feels a bit too much for a Cup in non-Kiai sections. One option would be to make (1) flow right, like this: done
  4. ^Similar stuff applies for 01:10:509 (3) - , 01:16:509 (3) - and 01:57:009 (3) - . done for the first one, left the other ones as they were because the intensity behind them supports them.
  5. 01:19:509 (3,4,5) - These have a slightly larger distance than the rest of your patterns, coupled with antiflow movements. I think you could move (4) to the left a bit to reduce the distances. done.
  6. 01:43:509 - I'd also reduce the SV multiplier for this calm section. done
  7. 02:22:509 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The piano sound are really weak compared to the vocal, so it feels a bit too much having them mapped in a Cup. I would have gone for a long slider following the vocal. done the latter.


[Salad]
  1. 00:01:509 (1,2,3) - Since the song is just starting, these feel a bit large for walkable distances. I'd move (2) closer to the other objects. done
  2. 00:03:009 (3,4,1) - For a diff that it's meant to introduce players to dashes, having 2 dashes between 3 consecutive objects not even 5 secs into the song feels a bit too much. In this case, the first one is less important than the second one, so I'd remove that one. removed
  3. 00:04:509 (1,2,3) - Considering the two antiflow movements, the second one including a dash, I'd make it a little bit easier by making the walkable pattern shorter, so I'd move 00:05:634 (2) - to the right a bit. done
  4. 00:07:884 (3,4) - Kinda ambiguous distance, can be easily done by walking but it seems like you intended it to be a dash. If it's that way, consider making the dash clearer by increasing the distance. made it into a walk instead.
  5. 00:09:009 (4,5) - The distance feels a bit tight to walk, so I'd reduce it a bit. done
  6. 00:10:509 (1,2,3) - Having three 1/2 dashes in a row like this for the intro also feels a bit overdone. Maybe you can make 00:10:509 (1,2) - walkable. Made 00:11:259 (2,3) - walkable instead.
  7. 00:12:009 (3,4) - Looks tight to walk, and I don't think the dash fits here. Make it more easily walkable instead. as above.
  8. 00:19:509 (1,2) - I'd take the dash out of here, otherwise this part feels too dashy with a dash nearly every 2/1. Same thing for 00:22:884 (2,3) -. done
  9. 00:26:821 (9) - I'd take this note out. This 1/2 stream feels a bit dense in comparison with the rest, although I get there is a sound that justifies the stream. done
  10. 00:27:009 (1) - Having this as a 1/2 repeat instead of a 1/1 slider is not only inconsistent with the rest of the section, but it also creates a rather harsh movement having to do 3 direction changes between 00:27:009 (1,2) -. Also, the same previous thing of removing the dash applies here. Turned into a 1/1 slider, and removed the dash.
  11. 00:43:509 (1,2,3,4) - I would have preferred a slider like you did on 00:37:509 (1) - for consistency. done
  12. 00:47:259 (2,3) - Kinda ambiguos distance because they are apart in the timeline. Try to make it clearer. done
  13. 00:52:509 (3,4) - Inconsistent dash with just a second ago; I'd remove it. 00:54:384 (2,3) - is also inconsistent, so I'd take it out. For the former, I've tried to emphasize Guriri's voice with those two dashes those sliders have in between. As for the latter, turned both 1 and 2 into a single 1/1 slider that removes the "dash" (2x distance isn't a dash lmao)
  14. 00:56:259 (2,3) - If you intend this to be clearly walkable, you need to reduce the distance a bit. done
  15. 01:05:071 (4) - Sound here is really weak, and it would have been better to keep the dash to 01:05:259 (5) - for consistency instead. Removed notes at 01:05:071 - and 01:05:446 - to just follow vocals with individual notes.
  16. 01:18:759 (3) - I don't think the drum sound is that strong to require a dash; I'd remove it. done
  17. 01:21:759 (5,1) - This could have a dash between them, the sound on (1) is quite strong. added
  18. 01:24:009 (3,4,5) - The sounds here are not that strong, so I'd reduce the distance of this triplet to the previous object in order to make it more walkable. done
  19. 01:25:509 (1,2) - I'd reduce a distance between these, because the dash is preceeded by a direction change. done
  20. 01:26:259 (2,1) - Kinda ambiguous distance, I'd reduce it a bit because the sound on (1) doesn't seem that strong to me. done
  21. 01:27:759 (3,1) - I'd increase this distance so the dash is clearer. done
  22. 01:29:071 (4,5,6,1) - 1/2 dashes combined with antiflow like these are quite harsh, I'd try something different here like making the normal flow instead or idk. fixed
  23. 01:30:384 (2,3) - Same comment as for the previous Kiai. same answer
  24. 01:35:259 (3,4,1) - If this wasn't a Salad, having a dash between these three would have been fine. In this case, I'd prefer if you removed the dash between (3,4) and added one between (4,1) instead, in order to emphasize the downbeat. done
  25. 01:41:634 (5,1) - At this BPM you need a 1/1 distance between objects and spinner. The spinner should start on 01:42:009 - instead. done
  26. 01:51:009 (3,4,1) - I don't think these two distances should have the same emphasis, when (4,1) is clearly stronger. Try to make (3,4) a walkable distance instead. done
  27. 01:55:509 (1,2) - On the previous pattern you placed a lot of emphasis in the vocals, and in this one you shifted to something else I can't identify. I suggest you replace 01:55:509 (1,2,3) - with two 3/2 sliders in order to follow the vocals as you did previously. done
  28. 01:58:509 (1,2) - Similar stuff here, I suggest you follow the vocals instead. done
  29. 02:07:509 (1,2) - This sounds really inconsistent. I suggest you keep the trend of using 3/2 sliders. done
  30. 02:15:009 (1,2) - A 3/2 slider would sound better and also be more consistent with the rest instead of two 1/2 sliders. done
  31. 02:19:321 (5,1) - 02:19:884 (2,3) - I'd reduce these dashes a bit, while keeping them clear dashes, as the section is quite calm. done
  32. 02:23:071 (2,3) - I think the sounds here are really weak and the section feels a bit overdone with them. Taking them out clearly places the emphasis on the piano. took them out


[Platter]
  1. 00:06:946 (2,3) - I don't think the sounds here are strong enough to require a dash, and the distance itself is a bit ambiguous, so I'd reduce it. done
  2. 00:13:509 (1,2,3) - Weird spacing between these; (2,3) should be larger than (1,2) due to the stronger sound (and for consistency with the previous patterns) fixed
  3. 00:24:759 (3,4,5) - I'd move this a bit to the left, in order to reduce the dash a bit. With the direction changes, it can be a bit awkward to play. uh... moving them to the left makes the dash stronger, I think. Moved them to another place instead.
  4. 00:25:884 (2,3,1) - The larger distance feels really odd here, and creates ambiguity (by comparison with the rest of the pattern) as to whether it should be played as a walk or as a dash. I'd move (3) closer to the other objects. Arranged the whole thing differently so that the only sound emphasized with 2x distance is (1)
  5. 00:29:165 (3,4) - This is such a wasted chance to add a nice, fitting dash. But you couldn't make something large because you added a 1/4 note, which wasn't really strong at all. So I suggest you remove (3) and create a stronger dash to (4). done
  6. 00:29:259 (4,5,1) - The (4,5) distance is quite ambiguous and somewhat hard to walk. It doesn't deserve a dash IMO, so I'd reduce the dsitance. Additionally, the same issue of not being able to add a stronger dash because you added an unnecessary beat happens between (5,1). done all
  7. 00:32:821 (8,1) - Same issue of not being able to add a stronger dash because of a beat that could be removed. removed
  8. 00:45:759 (3,4,1) - Distance between (4,1) should be larger than (3,4) because (1) is the strongest sound here. fixed
  9. 00:46:509 (1,2,3,4) - If anything, the dash here should be between (3,4) rather than (1,2), because (4) is the strongest sound. fixed
  10. 00:59:071 (3,4,5) - Another part that could have a HDash if you removed the 1/4 note. removed note and added hdash
  11. 01:03:009 (1,2,3,4,5) - The piano sounds are relatively weak here, so I wouldn't map them. I would just use a long slider. Also applies for 01:04:509 (1,2,3,4,5) -. changed
  12. 01:16:790 (2) - I can't hear anything supporting this note here. Remove it. removed
  13. 01:21:196 (2,3,4) - I'd move (3) a bit to the left to make it more easily walkable. The current movement can feel quite tight which is a bit uncomfortable considering the HDash triggered on (4). moved
  14. 01:23:540 (2) - This note isn't needed at all, and you could make a stronger dash between (1,3) if you removed it. removed
  15. 01:27:009 (1,2,3,4) - 01:27:759 (5,6,7,8) - Put these notes closer, by moving (2,4) and (6,8) closer to their previous objects. Currently it can be hard to walk depending on how well players time the HDash. done
  16. 01:29:259 (4,5) - I'd reduce this dash a bit, as it feels a bit tight. dunno why it was that big, but fixed
  17. 01:45:571 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - I'd put these groups a bit closer, as the current distance feels a bit large for the calm section. done
  18. 02:03:571 (4,5,6) - Same comment as mentioned previously. removed note and added hdash
  19. 02:07:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same thing, I think the vocal is more important than the piano in this part so I'd map it as a single slider. done
  20. 02:22:884 (2) - As in the Salad, I think that replacing this with a circle will follow the piano better. done


[Rain]
  1. 00:04:977 (2,4) - I can't hear anything on these notes. Either my headphones don't work properly or I can hear piano notes on those two ticks then. Either way, deleted them.
  2. 00:20:696 (8,9,10,11) - I think these should be 3 notes snapped to the 1/4 beats, since the flute (which was the sound in 1/6) stops on 00:20:634 (7) - . ok
  3. 00:25:509 (1,2) - This distance is a bit tight after the previous patterns, I'd move 00:25:884 (2,3,4,5) - a bit to the right. done
  4. 00:26:446 (7) - I'd move this closer to the surrounding objects, it's currently a sharp movement on sounds that aren't that strong. done
  5. 00:32:727 (8) - This note is overmapped. removed
  6. 01:12:571 (4,5,6) - (4,5) should have a larger distance than (5,6) because (5) is stronger. fixed
  7. 01:22:509 (1,2) - I think this dash can be a bit tricky after the previous HDash. I'd either reduce it or increase it to trigger the HDash in order to make the movement back easier. increased
  8. 01:25:696 (2,3,4,5) - and 01:26:446 (8,9) - Reduce the distance between these doublets. They can catch players off guard quite easily.
  9. 01:28:696 (2,3,4) - Having this combination between 1/4 HDashes and antiflow feels a bit too much. You can make this easier by making the sliders slightly point outside. done
  10. 01:33:759 (1,2) - It doesn't make sense for this to have antiflow with 1/4 jumps, while the previous 4 notes, which are really similar sounds, were just a simple stream. For simplicity's sake, I'd go with both of them being simple streams. You can hear a glitch-ish effect ala sdvx on 01:33:759 (1,2) - these two in the background, while in the previous 01:33:384 (3,4,5,6) - they're not there.
  11. 01:41:634 (1,2,3) - These three notes still have strong sounds, so the current movement between them is underwhelming. Try to increase the distances. Added a dash
  12. 01:56:071 (4,5) - There should be a dash between these, for consistency and because the vocal is strong enough. added
  13. 01:59:821 (6,1) - The distance between these two is also underwhelming. Try to increase it somehow. done
  14. 02:06:759 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It doesn't make sense that the (4,1) HDash is followed by antiflow when, on a stronger sounding part (01:02:259 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ) you mapped this without antiflow. So it's time to change the direction of 02:07:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - . done
  15. 02:17:821 (6,1,2) - Again, it's rather weird that the larger distance is between (2,1) when (1) is stronger than (2). (6,1) should have the dash instead. Similar stuff on 02:20:821 (6,1,2) - . fixed
  16. 02:18:384 (2,3,4) - Somewhat similar, it's weird that both distances here are equal when (3) is stronger than (4). as above
posted
[Overdose]
  1. 00:10:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I think it emphasizes notes better if you don't make the distances symmetric. For example, if you move 00:11:071 (2) - to x:304, much more emphasis is placed on (3), which is a slightly stronger sound. (Done)
  2. 00:13:321 (4) - Similarly, I think you should move this to x:224 to make the distances unequal and place more emphasis on (1). (Done)
  3. 00:25:790 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I'm not sure having this much 1/4 HDashes in a row is truly fitting. Maybe you can remove the HDashes between 00:26:446 (6,7,8) - because (7) and (8) are on slightly weaker sounds. (Done)
  4. 00:47:727 (6,8) - I think you could move this (2) to x:112 in order to make the wiggle a little bit easier considering it's a calm part. (The wiggle isn't that prominent and could still work in this calm section as an introduction to the next one)
  5. 00:54:384 (2) - I think it'd be better if you split this into a 1/2 slider and a circle, since 00:54:759 - is a rather important beat (as emphasized by the clap), so it deserves its own object IMO. (Done)
  6. 00:58:884 (2,4) - I'd move these to x:320 to add more leniency to the pattern overall: it will be a bit easier to get here from the previous pattern, which is a rather strong HDash, and also will make the wiggle a bit easier. Also applies for 02:03:384 (2,3,4,5) - . (Those wiggles will stay to remark... is that a flute? It's a rather characteristic sound that only appears 3 times, so I wanted to make something special for it)
  7. 01:03:759 (2,3,1) - Making these distances slightly unequal will emphasize the slightly stronger sound at (1) better. Also applies for 01:04:509 (1,2,3) -, 01:12:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -, 01:55:509 (1,2,3) -, 02:00:384 (2,3,4) -, 02:10:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -, 02:13:884 (2,3,4) -, 02:19:884 (2,3,4) -, 02:20:634 (5,6,1) -, and 02:21:384 (2,3,4) - . (The original distances were, although equidistant, already spreaded enough. Just reduced a bit the distance on the middle note to make a difference as you suggested, so hopefully it's enough to represent the song better)
  8. I'm not sure whether the patterns in the Kiai are overdone or not. To me, they are creating a huge gap with the Rain due to their strong gimmicky and troll-y nature, but I'll let other modders voice their opinion. (It's something similar as the original Deemo map, where the kiai is the only real challenging section of the map. It's kinda hard to balance it with the rest of the song, but it should be doable with not so many tries imo)
  9. 01:45:571 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - I'd make this pattern slightly easier by reducing the distances, in order to better represent the calmer section (Also changed the shape of the pattern to make it fit better)


Hopefully the PC stops dying already. Thanks for your help!

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[General]
  1. should be fine if there's nothing wrong with metadata


[Cup]
  1. It doesn't feel right when every violin sound is labeled with hitwhistle at the beginning, as well as vocals on the latter half part. These whistles feel sharp while violin sounds are quite smooth. You can use several whistles to enhance the track but I don't think it's a good idea to give every long violin sound a whistle. On the contrary, piano sounds fit to whistle much better, as 00:14:259 (2,1,1,2,3,4,5) - . Highly recommend you to reconsider the usage of whistles before the break, especially for places like 00:06:946 (2,3) - that I have no idea what's going on with the whistle
  2. 00:13:134 (3,1) - 1.4x distance is large when music intensity is going down. need to be nerfed
  3. 00:14:259 (2,1) - it doesn't look smooth in gameplay tbh. (but shouldn't matter too much)
  4. 00:31:509 (2,1) - slope change is sharp on the transition from 2 to 1. Distance could be nerfed to reduce such feeling (with music intensity's going down).
  5. 00:40:509 (1) - slidertail whistle is unneeded. if you try to whistle every vocal sound and piano sound, there's no actual emphasis for the whistle sound then.
  6. 00:53:634 (3,1) - 1.75x distance is better not used with direction change, which is harsher too much than patterns on similar sounds (e.g 00:50:634 (3,1) - . Nerf distance or change direction of slider 1
  7. 00:56:259 (2) - ^ similar. don't think it needs stronger emphasis
  8. 01:16:509 (1) - prefer more movement on this intro to the burst part instead of copying 01:09:759 (2,1,2) - , a pattern in calm part
  9. 02:05:259 (2) - sliderhead should have addition of normal instead of sampleset of normal?


[Salad]
  1. same hitsound problem
  2. 00:26:634 (5,1) - not sure why no jump here
  3. 00:39:759 (2,1) - 00:41:259 (2,1) - jumps here are ignoring the music imo. It keeps this part running in an intense atmosphere, where jumps occur often. But in fact instrument here isn't that strong. So jumps can be fewer. For example, 4 sections a jump, which means you should remove these 2 I quoted.
  4. 01:25:509 (1,2) - Not sure if this is a jump or a walk. Now it's small for a jump
  5. 01:48:009 (1) - tilt a bit more to the right or now it's much walkable
  6. 02:05:259 (2) - sliderhead hitsound, same as Cup
  7. 01:56:259 (2,1) - doesn't need a jump imo, because the music difference is actually small (with soft piano sound added, tho).


[Platter]
  1. hitsound here is not that bad because rhythm is more filled, and we can get softer 1/2 sounds from that. So we get difference among sounds, which is significant. But you can still consider to remove some whistles. For example, remove whistle at 00:30:946 (4) - 'cause constant whistles are too sharp, while this sound, being the start of a triplet in the music, is fine to give less enhancement.
  2. 00:19:509 - to 00:30:009 - this part has completely no HDash, which seems unbalanced to me.
  3. 00:37:509 (1,2) - don't need a jump here. It's hard to map a real jump here anyway
  4. 00:50:259 (3,4) - yeah this part is a bit lack of actual sound. So I'd prefer smaller distance to walk. Now it's hard
  5. 01:11:634 (6,1) - remove HDash?
  6. 02:03:009 (1,2) - reduce this jump. Now the jump here occur back and forth frequently, which shouldn't happen imo.


[Rain]
  1. 00:20:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - It's interesting that only 00:20:509 (5) - lands on an actual 1/6 sound. 00:20:321 (2,3) - should be changed to 1/4 snap instead
  2. 00:41:071 (2,3) - under such flow, distance should be buffed by 0.1x (or a bit more) otherwise it's pretty easy to walk thru.
  3. 01:47:259 (2) - a little bit easy to overshoot. need it be more horizontal
  4. 02:13:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nerf distance between 02:13:509 (1,2) - or change the entire flow. Now 02:13:509 (1,2) - is walkable but hard due to previous HDash. Same as 02:14:259 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - 01:09:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
  5. 00:28:509 (1,2) - distance can be smaller? reference at 00:21:759 (2,3) - 00:22:509 (1,2) -
  6. 00:30:009 (1,2) - not sure about this HDash. Now it's an option to move 00:30:571 (2) - to make 00:30:009 (1,2) - walkable, then 00:30:759 (3,4,5,6) - ctrl+H then move them left together.
  7. 01:19:509 (1,2) - don't like this jump. 01:19:884 (2) - and 01:20:071 (3) - are not equally emphasized. You should walk to 2 then jump to 3.


@ZiRoX
Imo, Deif's diff isn't significantly harder than a general Overdose, but some patterns break the flow and cause insta-fail easily. So this diff can bring up the impression of having Deluge patterns. Let's see how Deif's gonna reply on those patterns first.

[Deif]
  1. 01:28:509 (1,2) - need to give it a flow or insta fail will happen frequently
  2. 01:33:384 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - tap dashes and strong reversing HDashes can happen seperately in a general Overdose. But when they are gathered together, they buff the difficulty more than a simple plus. Players need to switch from accurate dashing to cross-screen HDashing, and get insta-fail once any single red fruit is missed. Recommend change the tap dashing pattern into small walking combined with normal jumping patterns. In this case, players don't have to take care of every single fruit, so that red fruits catch more attention.
  3. 01:27:384 (3,4,5) - strong antiflow that is quite hard to catch
  4. 01:21:009 (1,2) - need nerf distance by 4~8 px as there's a sharp 1/4 HDash right before here. Quite easy to miss
  5. 01:21:571 (4,5) - HDash need to be added. Players need to keep pressing at 01:21:009 (1,2,3,4) - then do 1/4 hyper tap dashing at 01:21:759 (5,6,7) - . Both jump timing and strength are different. A HDash can help to seperate parts. Then you can make 01:21:759 (5) - the same angle as 01:21:946 (6) - to help the flow: https://puu.sh/yJwP7/ab2ca7c370.jpg
  6. 01:39:571 (3,4) - jump is edgy. Should nerf it
  7. skip nazi things


For me the spread isn't much confusing but the hitsound...
Good luck~
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posted

F D Flourite wrote:

late late late

[General]
  1. should be fine if there's nothing wrong with metadata


[Cup]
  1. It doesn't feel right when every violin sound is labeled with hitwhistle at the beginning, as well as vocals on the latter half part. These whistles feel sharp while violin sounds are quite smooth. You can use several whistles to enhance the track but I don't think it's a good idea to give every long violin sound a whistle. On the contrary, piano sounds fit to whistle much better, as 00:14:259 (2,1,1,2,3,4,5) - . Highly recommend you to reconsider the usage of whistles before the break, especially for places like 00:06:946 (2,3) - that I have no idea what's going on with the whistle
  2. 00:13:134 (3,1) - 1.4x distance is large when music intensity is going down. need to be nerfed done
  3. 00:14:259 (2,1) - it doesn't look smooth in gameplay tbh. (but shouldn't matter too much) should be fixed with previous change
  4. 00:31:509 (2,1) - slope change is sharp on the transition from 2 to 1. Distance could be nerfed to reduce such feeling (with music intensity's going down). done
  5. 00:40:509 (1) - slidertail whistle is unneeded. if you try to whistle every vocal sound and piano sound, there's no actual emphasis for the whistle sound then.
  6. 00:53:634 (3,1) - 1.75x distance is better not used with direction change, which is harsher too much than patterns on similar sounds (e.g 00:50:634 (3,1) - . Nerf distance or change direction of slider 1 done the former
  7. 00:56:259 (2) - ^ similar. don't think it needs stronger emphasis as above
  8. 01:16:509 (1) - prefer more movement on this intro to the burst part instead of copying 01:09:759 (2,1,2) - , a pattern in calm part done
  9. 02:05:259 (2) - sliderhead should have addition of normal instead of sampleset of normal?


[Salad]
  1. same hitsound problem
  2. 00:26:634 (5,1) - not sure why no jump here added
  3. 00:39:759 (2,1) - 00:41:259 (2,1) - jumps here are ignoring the music imo. It keeps this part running in an intense atmosphere, where jumps occur often. But in fact instrument here isn't that strong. So jumps can be fewer. For example, 4 sections a jump, which means you should remove these 2 I quoted. done
  4. 01:25:509 (1,2) - Not sure if this is a jump or a walk. Now it's small for a jump increased distancing
  5. 01:48:009 (1) - tilt a bit more to the right or now it's much walkable done
  6. 02:05:259 (2) - sliderhead hitsound, same as Cup
  7. 01:56:259 (2,1) - doesn't need a jump imo, because the music difference is actually small (with soft piano sound added, tho) following the strong vocal line here, not instruments.


[Platter]
  1. hitsound here is not that bad because rhythm is more filled, and we can get softer 1/2 sounds from that. So we get difference among sounds, which is significant. But you can still consider to remove some whistles. For example, remove whistle at 00:30:946 (4) - 'cause constant whistles are too sharp, while this sound, being the start of a triplet in the music, is fine to give less enhancement.
  2. 00:19:509 - to 00:30:009 - this part has completely no HDash, which seems unbalanced to me. added some at the ending of the section
  3. 00:37:509 (1,2) - don't need a jump here. It's hard to map a real jump here anyway removed
  4. 00:50:259 (3,4) - yeah this part is a bit lack of actual sound. So I'd prefer smaller distance to walk. Now it's hard reduced
  5. 01:11:634 (6,1) - remove HDash? done
  6. 02:03:009 (1,2) - reduce this jump. Now the jump here occur back and forth frequently, which shouldn't happen imo. done


[Rain]
  1. 00:20:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - It's interesting that only 00:20:509 (5) - lands on an actual 1/6 sound. 00:20:321 (2,3) - should be changed to 1/4 snap instead done
  2. 00:41:071 (2,3) - under such flow, distance should be buffed by 0.1x (or a bit more) otherwise it's pretty easy to walk thru. done
  3. 01:47:259 (2) - a little bit easy to overshoot. need it be more horizontal done
  4. 02:13:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nerf distance between 02:13:509 (1,2) - or change the entire flow. Now 02:13:509 (1,2) - is walkable but hard due to previous HDash. Same as 02:14:259 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - 01:09:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - done
  5. 00:28:509 (1,2) - distance can be smaller? reference at 00:21:759 (2,3) - 00:22:509 (1,2) -
  6. 00:30:009 (1,2) - not sure about this HDash. Now it's an option to move 00:30:571 (2) - to make 00:30:009 (1,2) - walkable, then 00:30:759 (3,4,5,6) - ctrl+H then move them left together. done
  7. 01:19:509 (1,2) - don't like this jump. 01:19:884 (2) - and 01:20:071 (3) - are not equally emphasized. You should walk to 2 then jump to 3. changed


@ZiRoX
Imo, Deif's diff isn't significantly harder than a general Overdose, but some patterns break the flow and cause insta-fail easily. So this diff can bring up the impression of having Deluge patterns. Let's see how Deif's gonna reply on those patterns first.

For me the spread isn't much confusing but the hitsound... Don't worry, I'm redoing the whole hitsounding for my diffs. Until now I just hitsounded the rain diff and copied its hitsounds to all other diffs, that's why the whistles were so dense. It shouldn't be that grating now.
Good luck~
thanks!
posted
[Deif]
  1. 01:28:509 (1,2) - need to give it a flow or insta fail will happen frequently (Tilted the slider to the right so the jump isn't that static)
  2. 01:33:384 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - tap dashes and strong reversing HDashes can happen seperately in a general Overdose. But when they are gathered together, they buff the difficulty more than a simple plus. Players need to switch from accurate dashing to cross-screen HDashing, and get insta-fail once any single red fruit is missed. Recommend change the tap dashing pattern into small walking combined with normal jumping patterns. In this case, players don't have to take care of every single fruit, so that red fruits catch more attention. (I'll have nightmares with this pattern... Tried to make it somehow softer, but I'm not sure if the final result is what you were expecting. I'll ask Hareimu about it too)
  3. 01:27:384 (3,4,5) - strong antiflow that is quite hard to catch (Inverted it)
  4. 01:21:009 (1,2) - need nerf distance by 4~8 px as there's a sharp 1/4 HDash right before here. Quite easy to miss (Done)
  5. 01:21:571 (4,5) - HDash need to be added. Players need to keep pressing at 01:21:009 (1,2,3,4) - then do 1/4 hyper tap dashing at 01:21:759 (5,6,7) - . Both jump timing and strength are different. A HDash can help to seperate parts. Then you can make 01:21:759 (5) - the same angle as 01:21:946 (6) - to help the flow: https://puu.sh/yJwP7/ab2ca7c370.jpg (I started changing this pattern without checking your suggestion, but seems like we ended up with the same idea LOL)
  6. 01:39:571 (3,4) - jump is edgy. Should nerf it (Alright)
  7. skip nazi things


For me the spread isn't much confusing but the hitsound...
Good luck~


Additionally, reduced the HP to 6 to fit better with the spread and avoid possible instafails that could happen in the kiai. Thanks for your help!

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posted
just some suggestions about the overdose
Deif's Overdose
  1. 00:15:759 (1,2,3,4) - I would like to see way more spacing here because of the bpm change (160 -> 120). I find that it is not enough satisfying.
  2. 00:26:446 (6,7,8) - I would use HDash (or at least more spacing) here, because the music is much more intense.
  3. 00:24:759 (4,5) - same thing
  4. 00:29:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - I advise you to Ctrl+G it: the part from 00:29:634 - is stronger yet you made the stream more vertical and easier to catch.
  5. 01:18:759 (5,6,7,8) - can you nerf the spacing scaling to 1.50x for HD players please ? :(
  6. 01:19:509 (1,2) - pretty huge gap in my opinion, it makes the reading difficult. I would move 01:19:977 (2,3,4,5,6) - a bit to the right to make it more intuitive.
  7. 01:21:571 (4,5) - This jump definitly deserve a HDash, here is my suggestion to fix it easily:
  8. 01:31:134 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I would personally prefer a curve because it's easier to read, and I don't think this part deserve a sharp design since it's not that intense.
  9. 01:31:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - This one deserves more movement at the beginning, here is my suggestion:
  10. 01:50:259 (2,1) - I advise you to put more spacing because of the strong beat, at least as strong as the next one.
  11. 02:19:321 (4,1) - Same thing, i would put more spacing to emphasize more the voice.
i like it
posted

Kyuare wrote:

just some suggestions about the overdose
Deif's Overdose
  1. 00:15:759 (1,2,3,4) - I would like to see way more spacing here because of the bpm change (160 -> 120). I find that it is not enough satisfying. (Added)
  2. 00:26:446 (6,7,8) - I would use HDash (or at least more spacing) here, because the music is much more intense. (It got reduced by a previous mod, as it'd just be a spam of slider jumps. Clustered ones will stay, since the music isn't that intense imo)
  3. 00:24:759 (4,5) - same thing (The important beat is at (3,4) instead, where I already added a hyper)
  4. 00:29:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - I advise you to Ctrl+G it: the part from 00:29:634 - is stronger yet you made the stream more vertical and easier to catch. (Just added a bit more of scale on the second part)
  5. 01:18:759 (5,6,7,8) - can you nerf the spacing scaling to 1.50x for HD players please ? :((Not a big difference you asked, plus those got already nerfed twice)
  6. 01:19:509 (1,2) - pretty huge gap in my opinion, it makes the reading difficult. I would move 01:19:977 (2,3,4,5,6) - a bit to the right to make it more intuitive. (Moved the ending of (1) closer to those notes, which would cause the same effect)
  7. 01:21:571 (4,5) - This jump definitly deserve a HDash, here is my suggestion to fix it easily: (It got fixed with the previous mod. There's a hyper now)
  8. 01:31:134 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I would personally prefer a curve because it's easier to read, and I don't think this part deserve a sharp design since it's not that intense. (Alright)
  9. 01:31:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - This one deserves more movement at the beginning, here is my suggestion: (Scaled + rotated to achieve it)
  10. 01:50:259 (2,1) - I advise you to put more spacing because of the strong beat, at least as strong as the next one. (Done)
  11. 02:19:321 (4,1) - Same thing, i would put more spacing to emphasize more the voice. (It was reduced on a previous mod due to the music not being so intense)
i like it
/o/

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368,192,97134,1,8,0:1:0:0:
224,192,97321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
368,192,97509,5,0,1:0:0:0:
96,64,97696,2,0,P|112:128|160:176,1,131.25,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,98071,2,0,L|304:160,1,131.25,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,128,98446,1,0,1:0:0:0:
112,112,98634,1,8,0:1:0:0:
69,182,98727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
77,264,98821,1,0,1:0:0:0:
132,325,98915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,99009,5,0,1:0:0:0:
176,192,99196,2,0,P|160:112|176:64,1,131.25,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,99571,1,8,0:1:0:0:
304,192,99759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,99946,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,192,100134,1,8,0:1:0:0:
170,271,100227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
207,342,100321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
274,383,100415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,100509,6,0,L|320:192,2,131.25,0|2|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
96,96,101071,1,10,0:1:0:0:
416,96,101259,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,192,101446,1,4,3:0:0:0:
256,192,101540,1,2,3:0:0:0:
416,192,101634,2,0,P|400:256|368:272,1,105,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,102009,6,0,L|96:304,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,102384,2,0,L|144:192,1,105,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,102759,2,0,L|320:32,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,144,103134,2,0,L|272:144,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,144,103415,2,0,L|400:144,1,26.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,103509,5,8,3:2:0:0:
176,192,103884,2,0,P|112:208|32:320,2,210,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,331,105009,6,0,P|428:232|336:192,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,105571,2,0,L|176:160,1,52.5
256,160,105759,2,0,L|304:128,1,52.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,80,105946,2,0,L|267:109,1,52.5
336,160,106134,2,0,L|288:128,1,52.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,80,106321,2,0,L|267:109,1,52.5
368,192,106509,5,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,106884,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,192,107259,2,0,P|384:192|432:96,1,210,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,108009,6,0,L|352:160,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,64,108759,2,0,P|32:160|112:224,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,160,109509,6,0,L|168:160,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,64,110259,2,0,P|480:160|400:224,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,224,111009,6,0,P|64:192|32:64,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,111759,2,0,P|448:192|480:64,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,256,112509,6,0,P|112:160|256:48,1,315,2|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
368,48,113259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,113446,2,0,L|320:192,2,105,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,114009,6,0,P|400:256|272:320,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,114571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,192,114759,2,0,P|336:160|336:112,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,115134,2,0,P|176:160|176:112,1,105,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,80,115509,6,0,P|448:176|400:256,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,116071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,80,116259,2,0,P|64:176|112:256,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,116821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,64,117009,6,0,P|480:160|432:240,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,117571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,192,117759,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,192,118134,2,0,P|144:256|176:288,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,118509,6,0,P|368:256|336:288,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,144,118884,2,0,L|112:96,2,105,2|0|2,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
304,144,119446,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,224,119634,1,2,0:3:0:0:
336,224,119821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,304,120009,6,0,P|112:256|112:208,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,120384,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,176,120571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,66,120759,2,0,P|286:117|256:160,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
79,66,121134,2,0,P|81:117|112:160,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,224,121509,6,0,P|368:192|400:96,1,210,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
320,96,121977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,96,122071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,122165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,122259,2,0,P|448:240|448:336,1,157.5,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,122634,2,0,P|64:240|64:336,1,157.5,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,123009,5,4,0:3:0:0:
176,304,123384,1,4,0:3:0:0:
256,304,123477,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,304,123571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,304,123665,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,272,123759,1,4,0:3:0:0:
465,231,123852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,185,123946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
457,142,124040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
435,103,124134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
403,72,124227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
362,52,124321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,43,124415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,124509,6,0,P|64:208|48:256,1,105,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,288,124884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,125071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,96,125259,1,8,0:1:0:0:
98,111,125352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,151,125446,1,0,0:0:0:0:
21,208,125540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
21,271,125634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,329,125727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
98,368,125821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,192,126009,6,0,P|448:176|464:128,1,105,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,126384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,126571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,288,126759,1,8,0:1:0:0:
414,273,126852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,233,126946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
491,176,127040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
491,113,127134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,55,127227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
414,16,127321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,192,127509,6,0,P|64:208|128:304,1,210,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,272,128071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,128259,2,0,L|336:96,1,105,8|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,128634,2,0,L|208:96,1,105,0|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,129009,6,0,P|464:256|336:304,1,210,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,256,129571,1,0,1:0:0:0:
384,192,129759,2,0,L|288:144,1,105,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,130134,2,0,L|224:144,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,112,130509,6,0,L|384:64,2,105,2|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,131071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,272,131259,2,0,L|256:320,2,105,10|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,131821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,272,132009,6,0,L|128:320,2,105,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,132571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,112,132759,2,0,L|256:64,2,105,10|0|2,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,133321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,192,133509,6,0,L|496:80,1,105,2|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,64,133884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,134071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,192,134259,2,0,L|400:304,1,105,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,320,134634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,134821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,192,135009,5,0,1:0:0:0:
302,142,135102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,93,135196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,63,135290,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,63,135384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,135571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,320,135759,1,8,0:1:0:0:
244,320,135853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,290,135947,1,2,0:0:0:0:
302,241,136041,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,136134,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,192,136321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,128,136509,6,0,L|368:128,2,78.7500030040742,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,137071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,256,137259,2,0,L|400:256,2,78.7500030040742,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,137821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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224,192,138571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,139321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,256,139509,6,0,L|112:336,1,78.7500030040742,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,139884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,128,140071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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384,192,140634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,140821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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272,128,141384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,256,141571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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posted
Hareimu asked me to mod the top diff so here I am!

The mod will be structured a bit differently than usual since I think it works better this time. Please read the mod as a whole before answering!

Emiru's Aria

Inconsistent Intensity:
Even though the intensity of each individual section of the map is appropriate, the intensity of the map as a whole is inconsistent. There are calm parts where you used hypers on a regular basis or even used hypers with high snapping (1/8, 1/12) while you didn't use any hypers for more intense parts of the music. Let's take a look at some sections:
  1. 00:01:415 (1,2) - A 1/8 hyperdash right at the beginning may be a style choice but is still highly questionable since the beginning is a calm part of the music. It is also inconsistent with the upcoming downbeats (00:03:009 (1) - , 00:04:509 (1) - and so on), since these didn't got a hyper at all.
  2. Comparing the sections starting from 00:37:509 - , 00:48:009 - respectively 01:00:009 - , the music is getting more intense with every section (mainly due to the drums but not only). There is not a real difference in the intensity of your map though, you decide to neglect hypers even for the last section and the flow doesn't really get harder either. The intensity raise should be at least somehow noticeable while playing.
  3. In addition to the last point: Looking at the section starting at 01:12:009 - , you finally decide to use hypers - in a calm section. You did lower the density of your pattern for the calm section which is good, but starting to use hypers periodically here while neglecting them for so long feels pretty clumsy to me since that normally would be done for a stronger section instead of a calmer one.
  4. 01:15:009 (1,2,3,4) - Why is this the exact same pattern as the previous ones although the music is far more intense here?
  5. Compare the sections starting at 01:52:509 - respectively 02:04:509 - : You used more hypers in the first section even though the second one is more intense (and the second section is only barely harder regarding its flow so that isn't enough build-up).
  6. The build-up you mapped starting at 02:13:509 (1) - is nicely executed, but isn't demanded by the music and therefore kinda overdone.
  7. The section starting at 02:19:509 - is calmer than the previous one starting at 02:16:509 - , but you didn't consider it in your pattern. You even used more direction changes than beforehand which is contraindicating.
  8. 02:26:821 (1,2) - Waiting for so long and using a 1/12 for a barely hearable sound is overdone.

The intensity management of this map is too much focusing on individual sounds and not paying much attention to the overall intensity of the different sections. Some adjustments to better that out would be appreciated.


Missing variety in spacing:
The spacing in some sections is missing variety. Some sections do only provide dashes, no walks or hypers, and even the dashes are not varying much in their spacing. That leads to poor emphasis at some points. Take a look at the following example:
  1. Section from 00:01:509 - to 00:15:571 - : The section has pretty much only dashes. You don't use higher spacing for major sounds like downbeats or strong violin sounds. You also don't use lower spacing for rather unimportant sounds like 00:09:571 (2) - .

Pretty much all sections where you didn't use hypers need more noticeable spacing variation. I know that there are spacing variations but they are too minimal atm to be effective. Emphasizing the song just by the used flow just doesn't work out well enough.


Not noticeable transitions:
Some musical transitions are not really remarkable in your map. That is no major issue but I think it is worth mentioning it. Let's look at some spots that occur me:
  1. 01:17:634 (7,8,1,2) - The transition into the kiai is not that noticeable here because it is the second out of three jumps in a row which doesn't really put the spotlight on 01:18:009 (1) - , and the last jump is even bigger which makes 01:18:009 (1) - even less remarkable.
  2. 01:40:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Similar issue here: 01:41:634 (1) - Is nothing special after all these jumps. You put way more emphasis on 01:42:009 (3) - by making it the first slider after a lot single notes (which also ends the chain of jumps), emphasis on 01:41:634 (1) - is not really given sadly.
  3. 02:19:321 (4,1) - The transition here is also not really remarkable since you maintain the same intensity with your pattern.

Transitions should be more clear, I just pointed the most obvious cases out, some minor transitions that I haven't pointed out could be more remarkable too but they are not that urgent.


Other suggestions:
  1. 01:19:134 (1) - Why is the NC here instead of 01:19:509 (4) - ?
  2. 01:33:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Pretty harsh pattern here, gets way harder than ever before. I think 01:34:509 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Can be nerfed you are using 6 sliders to cover 4 violin sounds which isn't good imo, reducing it to 4 sliders for better emphasis and a bit easier pattern would be nice.
Please don't misjudge my mod Emiru! The diff isn't bad at all (flow and gameplay are nice to name some good things), it just felt clumsy in some aspects so I decided to structure my mod a bit differently than usual. I don't expect a rework of the diff (it is too good for that), more like some noticeable adjustments that take my suggestions into account. I hope I phrased my concerns in an understandable way, feel free to poke me when you have questions.

I might take a more detailed look at the diff and at the other diffs at a later point if needed, but that should be enough input for the top diff for now.

Good Luck!
posted

Sanyi wrote:

Hareimu asked me to mod the top diff so here I am!

The mod will be structured a bit differently than usual since I think it works better this time. Please read the mod as a whole before answering!

Emiru's Aria

Inconsistent Intensity:
Even though the intensity of each individual section of the map is appropriate, the intensity of the map as a whole is inconsistent. There are calm parts where you used hypers on a regular basis or even used hypers with high snapping (1/8, 1/12) while you didn't use any hypers for more intense parts of the music. Let's take a look at some sections:
  1. 00:01:415 (1,2) - A 1/8 hyperdash right at the beginning may be a style choice but is still highly questionable since the beginning is a calm part of the music. It is also inconsistent with the upcoming downbeats (00:03:009 (1) - , 00:04:509 (1) - and so on), since these didn't got a hyper at all.
  2. Comparing the sections starting from 00:37:509 - , 00:48:009 - respectively 01:00:009 - , the music is getting more intense with every section (mainly due to the drums but not only). There is not a real difference in the intensity of your map though, you decide to neglect hypers even for the last section and the flow doesn't really get harder either. The intensity raise should be at least somehow noticeable while playing.
  3. In addition to the last point: Looking at the section starting at 01:12:009 - , you finally decide to use hypers - in a calm section. You did lower the density of your pattern for the calm section which is good, but starting to use hypers periodically here while neglecting them for so long feels pretty clumsy to me since that normally would be done for a stronger section instead of a calmer one.
  4. 01:15:009 (1,2,3,4) - Why is this the exact same pattern as the previous ones although the music is far more intense here?
  5. Compare the sections starting at 01:52:509 - respectively 02:04:509 - : You used more hypers in the first section even though the second one is more intense (and the second section is only barely harder regarding its flow so that isn't enough build-up).
  6. The build-up you mapped starting at 02:13:509 (1) - is nicely executed, but isn't demanded by the music and therefore kinda overdone.
  7. The section starting at 02:19:509 - is calmer than the previous one starting at 02:16:509 - , but you didn't consider it in your pattern. You even used more direction changes than beforehand which is contraindicating.
  8. 02:26:821 (1,2) - Waiting for so long and using a 1/12 for a barely hearable sound is overdone.

The intensity management of this map is too much focusing on individual sounds and not paying much attention to the overall intensity of the different sections. Some adjustments to better that out would be appreciated.


Missing variety in spacing:
The spacing in some sections is missing variety. Some sections do only provide dashes, no walks or hypers, and even the dashes are not varying much in their spacing. That leads to poor emphasis at some points. Take a look at the following example:
  1. Section from 00:01:509 - to 00:15:571 - : The section has pretty much only dashes. You don't use higher spacing for major sounds like downbeats or strong violin sounds. You also don't use lower spacing for rather unimportant sounds like 00:09:571 (2) - .

Pretty much all sections where you didn't use hypers need more noticeable spacing variation. I know that there are spacing variations but they are too minimal atm to be effective. Emphasizing the song just by the used flow just doesn't work out well enough.


Not noticeable transitions:
Some musical transitions are not really remarkable in your map. That is no major issue but I think it is worth mentioning it. Let's look at some spots that occur me:
  1. 01:17:634 (7,8,1,2) - The transition into the kiai is not that noticeable here because it is the second out of three jumps in a row which doesn't really put the spotlight on 01:18:009 (1) - , and the last jump is even bigger which makes 01:18:009 (1) - even less remarkable.
  2. 01:40:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Similar issue here: 01:41:634 (1) - Is nothing special after all these jumps. You put way more emphasis on 01:42:009 (3) - by making it the first slider after a lot single notes (which also ends the chain of jumps), emphasis on 01:41:634 (1) - is not really given sadly.
  3. 02:19:321 (4,1) - The transition here is also not really remarkable since you maintain the same intensity with your pattern.

Transitions should be more clear, I just pointed the most obvious cases out, some minor transitions that I haven't pointed out could be more remarkable too but they are not that urgent.


Other suggestions:
  1. 01:19:134 (1) - Why is the NC here instead of 01:19:509 (4) - ?
  2. 01:33:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Pretty harsh pattern here, gets way harder than ever before. I think 01:34:509 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Can be nerfed you are using 6 sliders to cover 4 violin sounds which isn't good imo, reducing it to 4 sliders for better emphasis and a bit easier pattern would be nice.
Please don't misjudge my mod Emiru! The diff isn't bad at all (flow and gameplay are nice to name some good things), it just felt clumsy in some aspects so I decided to structure my mod a bit differently than usual. I don't expect a rework of the diff (it is too good for that), more like some noticeable adjustments that take my suggestions into account. I hope I phrased my concerns in an understandable way, feel free to poke me when you have questions.

I might take a more detailed look at the diff and at the other diffs at a later point if needed, but that should be enough input for the top diff for now.

Good Luck!
Strongly changed , nerfed 1/12 , make a new whole kick slider intensity ending , im keeping aesthetic stuff tho ( like the first kick slider ) of course it's overdone but it change nothing and look better :o thanks 4 the mod 8-)

https://puu.sh/zwa5h/7e5b72396b.osu
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Mod for Emriu o/
[Emiru's Aria]
  1. 00:31:696 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Tu as deux sons bien différents mais le pattern est exactement le même, 00:32:259 (1,2) - peux surement être mapper avec un stream de quatre notes comme 00:33:384 (3,4,5,6) - , c'est pas un problème majeur.
  2. 02:26:821 (1,2) - Je sais pas si c'est vraiment nécessaire ça mdr, juste un slider fait l'affaire je pense.
  3. 02:15:759 (1,2,3,4) - La musique est douce et il y a pas de kick, je trouve que l'utilisation d'hyper ici est pas vraiment justifiée.
  4. 01:31:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - C'est franchement beau dans l'éditeur ça, j'aime beaucoup.
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Vincs wrote:

Mod for Emriu o/
[Emiru's Aria]
  1. 00:31:696 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Tu as deux sons bien différents mais le pattern est exactement le même, 00:32:259 (1,2) - peux surement être mapper avec un stream de quatre notes comme 00:33:384 (3,4,5,6) - , c'est pas un problème majeur.
  2. 02:26:821 (1,2) - Je sais pas si c'est vraiment nécessaire ça mdr, juste un slider fait l'affaire je pense.
  3. 02:15:759 (1,2,3,4) - La musique est douce et il y a pas de kick, je trouve que l'utilisation d'hyper ici est pas vraiment justifiée.
  4. 01:31:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - C'est franchement beau dans l'éditeur ça, j'aime beaucoup.
[*]00:31:696 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Tu as deux sons bien différents mais le pattern est exactement le même, 00:32:259 (1,2) - peux surement être mapper avec un stream de quatre notes comme 00:33:384 (3,4,5,6) - , c'est pas un problème majeur. Ok !

[*]02:26:821 (1,2) - Je sais pas si c'est vraiment nécessaire ça mdr, juste un slider fait l'affaire je pense. Tu me connais ;)

[list][*]00:31:696 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Tu as deux sons bien différents mais le pattern est exactement le même, 00:32:259 (1,2) - peux surement être mapper avec un stream de quatre notes comme 00:33:384 (3,4,5,6) - , c'est pas un problème majeur. J'ai fix

[*]02:15:759 (1,2,3,4) - La musique est douce et il y a pas de kick, je trouve que l'utilisation d'hyper ici est pas vraiment justifiée. Et pourtant y'a une montée d'intensité dans la musique deux petit coup de violon
Merci mec :D

http://puu.sh/zx4s3/57e3d07bed.osu
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hey hey hey

Emiru's Aria

00:01:415 (1) - feels just slightly awkward to play at first, could maybe rotate up 45 degrees

00:47:259 This should be the start of the slider to emphasize the sound that comes after the loud instrumentals

01:32:446 (2) - Maybe this could be moved left slightly by to either x152/x160? Test this out, im not sure if it would flow better but I think it emphasizes the sound better w/ more spacing than the streams previously

01:43:508 (1,2) - the distance between these two notes feels very far and sudden, I would either reduce the spacing or ctrl-g the slider and make adjustments to the following sections

02:13:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this section feels way too hard and unexpected for the end of this song, considering the kiai in the midsection is much easier in terms of difficulty than this section. Change the patterns completely or make them friendlier to play

02:26:821 (1,2) - these notes dont need to be mapped, just end the map at the end of the previous spinner, the moaning sound at the end is insignificant, or just place a singular note to represent that sound similar to spectator's Alice diff
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chickenbible wrote:

hey hey hey

Emiru's Aria

00:01:415 (1) - feels just slightly awkward to play at first, could maybe rotate up 45 degrees
Nah aesthetic
00:47:259 This should be the start of the slider to emphasize the sound that comes after the loud instrumentals
That's true fixed
01:32:446 (2) - Maybe this could be moved left slightly by to either x152/x160? Test this out, im not sure if it would flow better but I think it emphasizes the sound better w/ more spacing than the streams previously
sure why not
01:43:508 (1,2) - the distance between these two notes feels very far and sudden, I would either reduce the spacing or ctrl-g the slider and make adjustments to the following sections
i don't think so , it's completely fine for me
02:13:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this section feels way too hard and unexpected for the end of this song, considering the kiai in the midsection is much easier in terms of difficulty than this section. Change the patterns completely or make them friendlier to play
Yeah it was kinda hard , nerfed
02:26:821 (1,2) - these notes dont need to be mapped, just end the map at the end of the previous spinner, the moaning sound at the end is insignificant, or just place a singular note to represent that sound similar to spectator's Alice diff
Why everyone hate it :( i find it so cool oh well removed with just a single note :roll:

http://puu.sh/zzBmY/b6f4c89062.osu
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modding top diff myself since I think some of the issues I can point out from the top of my head were not addressed in any of the mods it received thus far

  • 00:30:196 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This whole section was overmapped af in crystal's old extra diff and it's overmapped here as well, and for all the wrong reasons too. Not even spector-dg's mania topdiff's section is as overmapped as this one, and that's saying a lot. But enough comparisons, I'll get straight to the point: This section is also really, really overemphasized compared to more intense sections such as 00:19:509 - . When comparing the two together, the song says one thing but the map says the complete opposite, giving more emphasis to the second section than the more intense first section. So yeah, taking those two things into account, I'll give a few examples of where you went complete bonkers with the emphasis/overmapping so that you can either do a relatively big overhaul of this section's patterns or directly remap it as a whole.

  1. Starting from 00:30:009 - here 00:31:134 - up until here the only 1/4 sound that can be heard with a bit of difficulty is 00:30:477 - , but that's it. All 00:30:196 (2,3,1,2) - these 1/4 sliders are clearly overmapped without a clear reason since, as stated earlier, the section is noticeably calmer than the previous one and does not fit at all.
  2. The only clear 1/4 sounds from 00:31:134 - until 00:32:259 - are 00:31:227 - and 00:31:415 - so 00:31:696 (2,3,4) - these should be deleted and turned into 1/2 note formations instead.
  3. 00:33:009 - from here until 00:33:759 - here there are no clearly audible 1/4 sounds either, so 00:33:290 (2,4,6) - these should be deleted.
  4. 00:34:134 (3,4) - These should either be two circles or one 1/2 slider.
  5. 00:35:821 (4) - Ironically, this slider's distance from the previous note is really underemphasizing the high-pitched piano note it's covering. Perhaps it was something you forgot, since you can easily fix it by ctrl+h'ing both the slider and, if you don't wanna repattern the next 1/6 notes so that it connects properly, the rest of the map as well.
00:37:509 - From this section until 00:47:071 - the slider velocity is a bit too low and it makes the player need to stutter with the keys to catch the sliders's bodies properly without overshooting them, which is pretty offputting and uncomfortable IMO (Remarkably so with hyperdashes such as 00:44:196 (4,5) - these). I think you're better off just using 1x slider velocity up until 00:48:009 - here, place in which you can use 1,05x SV to make a fluid transition for the next section of the song (01:00:009 - )00:53:071 (2,3) - The distance between these two is a bit too much? I know you're trying to emphasize the strong vocal but either go for a straight-out hyper or try to make it a more lenient dash.01:16:696 (2,3,4) - Really overshootable, I suggest to make these a completely straight horizontal line formation pointing to the left instead.01:40:509 (1,2,3) - These shouldn't have hyperdashes in between each other, while 01:41:071 (4,5,6) - these should, since when comparing both three object formations, the latter is stronger than the former regarding sound intensity and pitch (and noticeably so). Right now the emphasis is given to objects in a wrong way for the sake of a pattern that even though it plays normally it expresses the strength of the sounds in the background wrongly.01:48:571 (2) - no sound here, remove note.

If you need help with any of the points I've made above, feel free to pm me via twitter so I can get ingame and help you out.
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Hareimu wrote:

modding top diff myself since I think some of the issues I can point out from the top of my head were not addressed in any of the mods it received thus far

  • 00:30:196 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This whole section was overmapped af in crystal's old extra diff and it's overmapped here as well, and for all the wrong reasons too. Not even spector-dg's mania topdiff's section is as overmapped as this one, and that's saying a lot. But enough comparisons, I'll get straight to the point: This section is also really, really overemphasized compared to more intense sections such as 00:19:509 - . When comparing the two together, the song says one thing but the map says the complete opposite, giving more emphasis to the second section than the more intense first section. So yeah, taking those two things into account, I'll give a few examples of where you went complete bonkers with the emphasis/overmapping so that you can either do a relatively big overhaul of this section's patterns or directly remap it as a whole.

  1. Starting from 00:30:009 - here 00:31:134 - up until here the only 1/4 sound that can be heard with a bit of difficulty is 00:30:477 - , but that's it. All 00:30:196 (2,3,1,2) - these 1/4 sliders are clearly overmapped without a clear reason since, as stated earlier, the section is noticeably calmer than the previous one and does not fit at all.
  2. The only clear 1/4 sounds from 00:31:134 - until 00:32:259 - are 00:31:227 - and 00:31:415 - so 00:31:696 (2,3,4) - these should be deleted and turned into 1/2 note formations instead.
  3. 00:33:009 - from here until 00:33:759 - here there are no clearly audible 1/4 sounds either, so 00:33:290 (2,4,6) - these should be deleted.
  4. 00:34:134 (3,4) - These should either be two circles or one 1/2 slider.
  5. 00:35:821 (4) - Ironically, this slider's distance from the previous note is really underemphasizing the high-pitched piano note it's covering. Perhaps it was something you forgot, since you can easily fix it by ctrl+h'ing both the slider and, if you don't wanna repattern the next 1/6 notes so that it connects properly, the rest of the map as well.
00:37:509 - From this section until 00:47:071 - the slider velocity is a bit too low and it makes the player need to stutter with the keys to catch the sliders's bodies properly without overshooting them, which is pretty offputting and uncomfortable IMO (Remarkably so with hyperdashes such as 00:44:196 (4,5) - these). I think you're better off just using 1x slider velocity up until 00:48:009 - here, place in which you can use 1,05x SV to make a fluid transition for the next section of the song (01:00:009 - )00:53:071 (2,3) - The distance between these two is a bit too much? I know you're trying to emphasize the strong vocal but either go for a straight-out hyper or try to make it a more lenient dash.01:16:696 (2,3,4) - Really overshootable, I suggest to make these a completely straight horizontal line formation pointing to the left instead.01:40:509 (1,2,3) - These shouldn't have hyperdashes in between each other, while 01:41:071 (4,5,6) - these should, since when comparing both three object formations, the latter is stronger than the former regarding sound intensity and pitch (and noticeably so). Right now the emphasis is given to objects in a wrong way for the sake of a pattern that even though it plays normally it expresses the strength of the sounds in the background wrongly.01:48:571 (2) - no sound here, remove note.

If you need help with any of the points I've made above, feel free to pm me via twitter so I can get ingame and help you out.
Thanks 4 this mod applied 90% ish :)

http://puu.sh/zDykH/bd31430d6c.osu
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Almost forgot this

[Emiru's Aria]
  1. 00:36:196 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - actually rhythm from the note I quote are not 1/6 anymore. They could be wrongly snapped.
  2. 00:36:696 (6,1) - No need to be a cross-screen jump? I understand your intention but it seems to be too much for me
  3. 00:49:509 - to 00:57:009 - not only 1/4 jumps are worth being HDashes. Now you'd like to add HDash on such small emphasis (00:44:071 (2,3,4,5) - ) but refuse to do any emphasis on any of 1/2 jumps in the section I quote. It's unreasonable. You need to make sure that your distance arrangement corresponds to the music instead of only rhythm gaps.
  4. 01:00:009 - to 01:11:071 - , especially something like 01:05:634 (4,1) - , really need something other than general-distance jumps. You easily set HDashes on some overmapped 1/4 rhythms 01:11:259 (3,4,5,6) - after all.
  5. 02:13:134 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - this antiflow is highly unexpected. I don't see the intention to make 02:13:509 (1,2,3,4) - a strong dash chain right after a strong HDash on 02:13:321 (5,1) - , which increases the operation difficulty here to a level that doesn't fit the music. Music here is clearly going outro. Just decrease the distance of the whole dash chain. Same as 02:15:009 (1,2,3,4) -
  6. 01:31:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - make HDash distance increasing to fit the music more properly. Ofc, you should 01:31:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - make HDash on these jumps a bit shorter to achieve it.
  7. 01:36:571 (4,5,6) - Drums here are obviously heavier than 01:36:009 (1,2,3) - . So you should use something else stronger to make a difference.


Still the whole diff's speaking too strongly on rhythm gaps no longer than 1/4 beats in intro/outro imo. Probably need review beforehand.
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