- Seems fine to me
- 00:10:509 (1,2,3) - Jumps feel a bit far for salad diff
- 00:23:259 (3) - The jump here coming right after the 1/4 pattern can be harsh for beginner playes, consider reducing the distance for a bit
- 00:26:071 (5,6) - Reduce the jump here
- 01:00:759 (2) - The rhythm here is strange imo. Consider extending the slider-tail to 01:01:134 -
- 01:01:509 (1) - Remove the reverse (https://puu.sh/wLKVu/b53514ea4c.jpg)
- 01:03:009 (1) - The slider-end should be on 01:03:571 - and (2) should be moved to 01:03:759 - imo
- 01:07:040 - Remove the reverse
- 01:44:071 (2) - Remove the note for the sake of better rhythm, also consider moving it to the left, around x:190 would be good
- 02:06:009 (3) - Please remove the reverse
- 02:19:321 (5,1,2) - The distance here can be surprising because the part is really calm and it's almost the end of the map. Please reduce the distance
- 00:09:009 (3,4) - How about adding a bit of distance between them.
- 00:12:009 (3,4) - ^
- 00:47:727 (5) - Remove the note here
- 01:08:259 (5) - There should be a Normal-clap on the slider-head instead of Drum-clap
- 01:49:227 (2,3,4) - Remove them? I felt they're unnecessary in such relaxing part
- 01:50:634 (1,2,3,4) - Also please replace these notes with a single 1/2 slider
- Overall many of 1/4s can easily be replaced by 1/2s. Please take a look at the parts and consider adjusting them.
- 00:07:884 (3) - Would be good If there's a little jump for 1~3 following the piano sound
- 00:34:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - Overmapped? 1/2 sounds better to me
- 01:02:259 (3) - Slider-tail should be on 01:02:634 - , it's currently unsnapped
- 02:06:759 (3) - The same issue as above
- 00:42:759 (3,4,5,6) - Jumps are a bit far considering it's in relaxing part
- 01:33:759 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - Personally this feels pretty harsh. I know the intensity but please consider the other way emphasizing it
- 00:15:759 (1) - 씨앗이 바깥쪽으로 휘는게 더 괜찮을 거 같네요
- 00:57:477 - 비트가 빠진 것 같네요
- 00:59:259 (1,2,3) - 이 부분은 리매핑이 좋아보이네요. 앞 슬라이더를 1/6로 대체하는 건 어떨까요
- 01:08:259 (3) - 힛사운드 띠용
- 01:18:196 (2,3) - 하이라이트 고려해도 이건 너무 어렵네요
- 01:31:134 - 1/6 연타가 저도 치기 힘들 정도네요 정방향으로 전환하는게 좋아보입니다
- 01:34:509 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - 1/2로 현악기 사운드를 강조하는 게 더 좋아보입니다.
- 01:37:696 (2,3) - 절정에서 내려오는 파트인 만큼 디스턴스를 조금 줄이는게 좋아보입니다.
- 01:36:009 (1,2,3) - ^