1. de Taikun desu! (4.4 stars, 554 notes)
2. Futsuu (2.75 stars, 279 notes)
3. Kantan (1.79 stars, 124 notes)
4. Muzukashii (3.31 stars, 414 notes)

1. AIBat detected "Audio Lead-In".
   Open *.osu as Notepad, find "AudioLeadIn" in [General], and edit it at least 1366.
   "AudioLeadIn: 1366"
2. I think spinner in 01:26:807: is fine to come slowly, how about reduce multiplier of section 01:24:052: maximum 0.5?

1. I Feel it just not "Kantan", Rename "Futsuu". If you want "Kantan", make easier map.

1. How about replacing four 1/6 notes, "DDDK" in 00:58:644:~00:58:797:(DDK)? This diff is enough to use that.
   But if you want use 1/8, try making higher diff.

koseh wrote:

Not requested, but may i comment some?


General

1. AIBat detected "Audio Lead-In".
   Open *.osu as Notepad, find "AudioLeadIn" in [General], and edit it at least 1366.
   "AudioLeadIn: 1366"
2. I think spinner in 01:26:807: is fine to come slowly, how about reduce multiplier of section 01:24:052: maximum 0.5?

Kantan

1. I Feel it just not "Kantan", Rename "Futsuu". If you want "Kantan", make easier map.

de Taikun desu!

1. How about replacing four 1/6 notes, "DDDK" in 00:58:644:~00:58:797:(DDK)? This diff is enough to use that.
   But if you want use 1/8, try making higher diff.

404 AccNotFound wrote:

no kudosu
love this song <3
Good luck~



[ General ]

OD is little high in Oni and low in Kantan. how about 3 4 5 6(5.5)

01:01:858 -How about this part to preview time?

Kayano- wrote:

Yo Senpai!!! :333

M4M rikuesuto from my queue

[general]

is this map for approval? if this map for ranked this better to use usual diff name

[de Ai]

00:10:429 (6) - better use finisher here *the sounds is loud so I'm prefer to make this on finish

00:20:225 (61) - use the kat here and make the gap in 00:20:072 - seems good like I see what you're going for, but I don't like the k d k d k _ k d d that comes from doing that, plus it matches the D in the repeated section of that phrase.

00:44:715 (197) - add finish for more hard maps *I mean for more better hehe (don't take it serious ) same as the reason in 00:10:429 (6) -

00:49:154 (223,224,225,226) - in this part I believe in 00:49:154 (223,224) - have diff sound with 00:49:460 (225,226) - so I think the best way that is change 00:49:154 (223,224) - in kat

00:54:817 (252) - its better to make this note in finish since all the part from 00:54:511 (251,253,254,255,256) - are using finish and the sounds is still in pretty loud it's not on the beat, which is what I'm emphasizing. Plays better when large notes are on white ticks as well.

01:10:276 - maybe u can try this [img]https://puu.sh/vgmwf/78ef9592a2.jpg than using finisher kat in 01:10:429 (68) - it feels better


[de Taikun desu!]

00:00:940 (2) - i think It better to add finish here and when I check it, its similiar with 00:00:940 (2) - so I recommended to add finish again I'm trying to emphasize the red ticks and the beat 1 here and nothing else. Pickup note ain't too big.

00:03:389 (12,13) - ^

00:05:838 (22,23) - ^ umbrellerinos

00:07:980 (1) - better using spinner than slider, this one is too weird when u using slider but only vocal sounds here

00:25:123 (113) - add finish + kat more better! its like cymbal sound and more prefer to change it in kat D I'm sticking to the d _ k d pattern I established earlier. I did change it to a D though!

00:37:215 (202) - make a gap here? its feels too long but I still havent idea what diff is this (Oni?) I'm calling this an inner due to the amount of 5lets and a few longer streams

00:44:715 (256) - add finisher :33333

01:04:766 (53) - better to delete it *there is no any sounds here so i recommended to delete it there's a lot of beats that don't have sound in here It's just to lead into the next phrase, and to keep the kiai feeling empty and disconnected. Basically just a flow thing.

Good Luck!!! ///

Backfire wrote:

[General]

[Kantan]

00:56:195 - Should this not be a finisher?
01:04:307 - And same here?
01:14:103 - sorry for using meme arrows but ^

[Futsuu]

[Muzukashii]

I'll finish this later, I'm feeling lazy rn, but ye, kantan is done for now

Backfire wrote:

[General]

I am almost certain the BG should be more related to the song, and also, some of the diffs need some tuning down and chipping away from, notably Futsuu and Oni.

[Kantan]

00:56:195 - Should this not be a finisher?
01:04:307 - And same here?
01:14:103 - sorry for using meme arrows but ^

[Futsuu]

Just off the bat, this might be too dense, so I'm gonna leave it up to you to delete some of the 1/2's. At the end of some vocals (01:13:491 - 01:15:940 - ) you can remove notes similar to that.
00:10:429 - You could make this a finisher, as its the start of the part and like, theres a cymbal crash sound over it.
I can't really mod it, it's just too dense for a futsuu, I think it'll just be confusing for most players. Call me back later maybe and I'll take a look at it again.

[Muzukashii]

Some of your notes seem to be unsnapped, you might want to click the "snap all" button in Timing at the top.
00:15:174 - Delete? Kind of unnecessary.
00:17:623 - ^
00:20:072 - ^
00:21:603 - Change this pattern of notes to something like d k d d k k (forgo the 1/4), so it flows and sounds better.
00:29:715 - clap
00:29:868 - Delete
00:20:225 - 00:29:715 - Finishers
00:32:164 (123,124) - Change to kat and delete the second note?
00:37:062 - kat?
00:39:664 - deletos
00:39:817 - Finisher
00:49:154 - k k d K? I think it flows and sounds better.
00:50:531 (224,227,229,236,239,241) - just trust me and delete all of this.
00:51:603 - kat?
00:54:052 (238,239,240) - kat as well?
00:56:960 (1) - adding finisher or kat to this does nothing js
01:23:287 - dktlt thzzz

[Hakuna Taikata desu!]

Look I don't want to mod this, just do basically the same thing I told you to do in muzu but apply it to the 1/4's, and put the claps whenever there is a clap sound instead of randomly. It will be a good map if you do this. Thanks bruv.
Also should be HP6