the set is full hence i dont accept anymore gd's, sorry !
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Haruna Luna - Stella Breeze (TV Size)
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Topic Starter
Hello from #modreqs:
[Insane]
Sorry for short mod, because i'm a very, very bad modder
[Insane]
00:12:051: Unrankable overlap
00:44:686: Remoce this circle, I don't hear any structure of the music
00:46:308: Don't stack, it looks confuse
01:05:564: This slider looks good but can you change it style?
00:44:686: Remoce this circle, I don't hear any structure of the music
00:46:308: Don't stack, it looks confuse
01:05:564: This slider looks good but can you change it style?
Sorry for short mod, because i'm a very, very bad modder
m4m
im not good at english
i use google transration
I have nothing to say. xD
Normal
00:02:321 - would you like follow the sound like 00:02:321 - ?
If you follow 00:03:132 - , i think you should also follow 00:02:321 - of the same line of sounds for bigginer.
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/526308081c8058c4bdc ... 4e7b03.png
00:17:727 - 25%?(from Insane)
00:31:916 - 40%?
00:33:943 (3) - I think the finish is unnecessary
Insane
aimod (unsnapx2)
00:28:064 (2,3,5) - avoid overlap here? looks good. https://i.gyazo.com/669af83375319dbe39b ... d5a0a8.png
01:10:226 (6,7,1) - Would you like to use more distance like 00:04:551 (6,7,1) - ?
I think that the flow will be better.
kibb's insane
00:09:720 - circle here?
There are cirlce in 00:08:098 - and 00:11:341 (7) - of the same sound.
good song and map...
gl~!
im not good at english
i use google transration
I have nothing to say. xD
Normal
00:02:321 - would you like follow the sound like 00:02:321 - ?
If you follow 00:03:132 - , i think you should also follow 00:02:321 - of the same line of sounds for bigginer.
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/526308081c8058c4bdc ... 4e7b03.png
00:17:727 - 25%?(from Insane)
00:31:916 - 40%?
00:33:943 (3) - I think the finish is unnecessary
Insane
aimod (unsnapx2)
00:28:064 (2,3,5) - avoid overlap here? looks good. https://i.gyazo.com/669af83375319dbe39b ... d5a0a8.png
01:10:226 (6,7,1) - Would you like to use more distance like 00:04:551 (6,7,1) - ?
I think that the flow will be better.
kibb's insane
00:09:720 - circle here?
There are cirlce in 00:08:098 - and 00:11:341 (7) - of the same sound.
good song and map...
gl~!
QUICKMOD?!
w
Normal
- 00:02:524 (3) - i think you should follow the main melody rather than focusing on percussions, it would play more intuitively like this
- 00:05:767 (3) - ^
- 01:12:658 (5,6) - maybe?
- 00:05:564 (2,3,4,5) - pls make a better triangle
- 00:17:929 (1,2) - off blanket
- 00:30:700 (7,1) - i think the spacing should be higher on this compared to 00:30:294 (5,6,7) - this
- 00:33:740 (7,8,1) - as much as i like your maps this kind of pattern is so awkward to play because of the sudden 1/4 gap that is literally half of the screen away
- 00:44:281 - imo putting a double here would make it less awkward to read, because you follow vocals first and start following the instruments while the vocals are still the same
w
[kuaib]
00:04:146 (4) - same sounding part as 00:07:389 (3,4,5) - . i plays better with triple as snare is better with clickable rather than reverse imo and since you kept using triple after
00:32:321 (4,5,1) - not in the song.
00:37:287 (6) - remove and prob move #5 somewhere else
00:45:091 (3) - slider to clickable circles, fits better imo since strong snare (plays fine with stack on 00:45:294 (5) - )
pls del unused greenline: 00:54:010
[insane]
00:14:585 (10) - not in the song (you also followed it here 00:40:024 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - )
00:54:010 (1,2) - add hitsound?
01:25:429 (2,3,4) - this got way too big and not even in kiai.. (sudden huge jump)
[normal]
00:40:632 (1) - i think bit of curve would look better
i dont think you need greenline at 00:54:010
wait actually check ur timing ._.
00:56:848 (5) - use circle instead? like 01:03:334 (6,7) -
01:09:821 (5) - ^
01:12:658 (5,6) - Try this rhythm? https://puu.sh/vxOG4/c5e5f85ce5.jpg
[easy]
remove greenline 00:54:010?
how about making this spinner 01:26:037 (1) - start at 01:25:935 so beginners have just bit more time to spin?
not much i can find since good mappers xD
00:04:146 (4) - same sounding part as 00:07:389 (3,4,5) - . i plays better with triple as snare is better with clickable rather than reverse imo and since you kept using triple after
00:32:321 (4,5,1) - not in the song.
00:37:287 (6) - remove and prob move #5 somewhere else
00:45:091 (3) - slider to clickable circles, fits better imo since strong snare (plays fine with stack on 00:45:294 (5) - )
pls del unused greenline: 00:54:010
[insane]
00:14:585 (10) - not in the song (you also followed it here 00:40:024 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - )
00:54:010 (1,2) - add hitsound?
01:25:429 (2,3,4) - this got way too big and not even in kiai.. (sudden huge jump)
[normal]
00:40:632 (1) - i think bit of curve would look better
i dont think you need greenline at 00:54:010
wait actually check ur timing ._.
00:56:848 (5) - use circle instead? like 01:03:334 (6,7) -
01:09:821 (5) - ^
01:12:658 (5,6) - Try this rhythm? https://puu.sh/vxOG4/c5e5f85ce5.jpg
[easy]
remove greenline 00:54:010?
how about making this spinner 01:26:037 (1) - start at 01:25:935 so beginners have just bit more time to spin?
not much i can find since good mappers xD
Topic Starter
Asuka_- wrote:
m4m
im not good at english
i use google transration
I have nothing to say. xD
Normal
00:02:321 - would you like follow the sound like 00:02:321 - ? that sound not too loud so it dont worth another note imo
If you follow 00:03:132 - , i think you should also follow 00:02:321 - of the same line of sounds for bigginer.
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/526308081c8058c4bdc ... 4e7b03.png
00:17:727 - 25%?(from Insane) yea my bad, forget to copy greenlines
00:31:916 - 40%?
00:33:943 (3) - I think the finish is unnecessary
Insane
aimod (unsnapx2) oops fixed
00:28:064 (2,3,5) - avoid overlap here? looks good. https://i.gyazo.com/669af83375319dbe39b ... d5a0a8.png
01:10:226 (6,7,1) - Would you like to use more distance like 00:04:551 (6,7,1) - ? its fine imo, just some variation
I think that the flow will be better.
good song and map...
gl~!
AtHeoN wrote:
QUICKMOD?!
[notice]NormalInsane
- 00:02:524 (3) - i think you should follow the main melody rather than focusing on percussions, it would play more intuitively like this too much of 1/2 imo
- 00:05:767 (3) - ^
- 01:12:658 (5,6) - maybe? keep
- 00:05:564 (2,3,4,5) - pls make a better triangle
- 00:17:929 (1,2) - off blanket
- 00:30:700 (7,1) - i think the spacing should be higher on this compared to 00:30:294 (5,6,7) - this
w
no reply = fixedBetaStar wrote:
[insane]
00:14:585 (10) - not in the song (you also followed it here 00:40:024 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - )
00:54:010 (1,2) - add hitsound? whistle feels too loud though
01:25:429 (2,3,4) - this got way too big and not even in kiai.. (sudden huge jump) it is last jump so i made it big
[normal]
00:40:632 (1) - i think bit of curve would look better
i dont think you need greenline at 00:54:010
wait actually check ur timing ._.
00:56:848 (5) - use circle instead? like 01:03:334 (6,7) -
01:09:821 (5) - ^
01:12:658 (5,6) - Try this rhythm? https://puu.sh/vxOG4/c5e5f85ce5.jpg both the reds are landing on vocals and there's nothing at white tick
[easy]
remove greenline 00:54:010?
how about making this spinner 01:26:037 (1) - start at 01:25:935 so beginners have just bit more time to spin? its already so long xD
not much i can find since good mappers xD
thanks !
m4m
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/598791
General
00:56:848 - missing clap?
nice song and nice bg
Easy
00:12:254 (2) - quite weird for following a ignorable bell sound at 00:12:862 - instead of the strong drum beat at 00:12:659 - , rhythm like 1/1 reverse slider + 1 note would works better
01:04:956 (2) - ^
01:02:523 (3) - little nazi but it looks not quite central symmetry
Hard
HP6 is way too high, if someone missing 1/4 note then the hp will reduce to about 1/2... HP5 is enough i guess
00:07:997 - at higher diff is ok but here the clap is a little strange, as if the rhythm is sparse, then it would be noticeable that actually the drum sound is at 00:08:098 - but not 00:07:997 (blame hs copier i guess)
Insane
00:14:078 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - simply looks weird, how about change to the pattern below?
00:45:902 (2) - tune of the vocal raised obviously here, so stack it with 00:45:497 (1) - may not be a good choice
00:43:875 (1,2) - changing rhythm like that would be better:
00:50:362 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - lol i think no one would expect to see a 1.1x spaced long stream in a 4* map, that's really hard even though it's 148 bpm reduce it's spacing can also improve a little your spread too
Kibb
00:33:740 (7,8) - that ds is really toooooo large for this part as there have nearly nothing to emphasize on 8 lol i think the ds like 00:11:037 (6,7,1) - is acceptable
00:43:875 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - using small ds on 3/4 spacing and large ds on 1/2 spacing may confuse players, so i think larger ds for 00:43:875 (1,2,3) - and smaller ds for 00:44:686 (1,2,3) - would be better, like what you done at 00:51:983 (1,2,3,1) -
Megumi kawaii
Edit: fixed a display error on the second pic
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/598791
General
00:56:848 - missing clap?
nice song and nice bg
Easy
00:12:254 (2) - quite weird for following a ignorable bell sound at 00:12:862 - instead of the strong drum beat at 00:12:659 - , rhythm like 1/1 reverse slider + 1 note would works better
01:04:956 (2) - ^
01:02:523 (3) - little nazi but it looks not quite central symmetry
Hard
HP6 is way too high, if someone missing 1/4 note then the hp will reduce to about 1/2... HP5 is enough i guess
00:07:997 - at higher diff is ok but here the clap is a little strange, as if the rhythm is sparse, then it would be noticeable that actually the drum sound is at 00:08:098 - but not 00:07:997 (blame hs copier i guess)
Insane
00:14:078 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - simply looks weird, how about change to the pattern below?
00:45:902 (2) - tune of the vocal raised obviously here, so stack it with 00:45:497 (1) - may not be a good choice
00:43:875 (1,2) - changing rhythm like that would be better:
00:50:362 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - lol i think no one would expect to see a 1.1x spaced long stream in a 4* map, that's really hard even though it's 148 bpm reduce it's spacing can also improve a little your spread too
Kibb
00:33:740 (7,8) - that ds is really toooooo large for this part as there have nearly nothing to emphasize on 8 lol i think the ds like 00:11:037 (6,7,1) - is acceptable
00:43:875 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - using small ds on 3/4 spacing and large ds on 1/2 spacing may confuse players, so i think larger ds for 00:43:875 (1,2,3) - and smaller ds for 00:44:686 (1,2,3) - would be better, like what you done at 00:51:983 (1,2,3,1) -
Megumi kawaii
Edit: fixed a display error on the second pic
hi, m4m from your queue
Easy:
00:07:389 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - this rhythm gives you 2/1 gaps and also emphasizes 00:11:443 (1) - as opposed to the other ones
01:24:618 (2,3) - this rhythm is pretty much the same difficulty-wise but emphasizes the strong note:
Normal:
00:03:132 (4) - I would just start this on the downbeat; the sound here occurs on every offbeat so not important
00:34:146 (4,5,6) - imo would be more intuitive if you just did vocals here
00:43:673 - add a note here to correspond with 00:41:646 (2,3,4) - and make 00:43:267 (5) - more intuitive
Hard:
00:04:956 (1) - jump here like the other strong downbeats?
00:58:266 (2,3) - don’t hear anything different from 00:55:023 (2,3) - so why is it mapped to drums now
01:09:415 (2) - imo this doesn’t deserve a 1/1 slider, maybe make it like 00:56:442 (2,3,4) -
Insane:
00:18:740 (3,6) - these are too curved imo, why not just use slidershape of 00:17:524 (4) -
00:20:564 (5,1) - blanket off
00:27:254 (6,7,8) - if this is not straight on purpose then make it clearer, like with a slight curve or something
00:57:658 (3) - lol this is the only time a slider like this appears, but there’s nothing special here; maybe just use it more often idk
Kibb’s Insane:
00:17:727 (4) - and 00:20:970 (8) - I know it’s a calm section but I still feel like 1/4 slider + circle would be better here since it emphasizes last note
00:57:050 (5,6,7) - and 01:10:023 (5,6,7) - maybe make spacing to 6 bigger than 7? also looks better imo
01:00:699 (7,8,1) - antiflow here for strong sound, like on other strong downbeats
lul same slidershape from insane appears at 01:10:631 (1) - and 01:24:212 (3) - (why tho)
hope this helped, nice mapset w
Easy:
00:07:389 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - this rhythm gives you 2/1 gaps and also emphasizes 00:11:443 (1) - as opposed to the other ones
01:24:618 (2,3) - this rhythm is pretty much the same difficulty-wise but emphasizes the strong note:
Normal:
00:03:132 (4) - I would just start this on the downbeat; the sound here occurs on every offbeat so not important
00:34:146 (4,5,6) - imo would be more intuitive if you just did vocals here
00:43:673 - add a note here to correspond with 00:41:646 (2,3,4) - and make 00:43:267 (5) - more intuitive
Hard:
00:04:956 (1) - jump here like the other strong downbeats?
00:58:266 (2,3) - don’t hear anything different from 00:55:023 (2,3) - so why is it mapped to drums now
01:09:415 (2) - imo this doesn’t deserve a 1/1 slider, maybe make it like 00:56:442 (2,3,4) -
Insane:
00:18:740 (3,6) - these are too curved imo, why not just use slidershape of 00:17:524 (4) -
00:20:564 (5,1) - blanket off
00:27:254 (6,7,8) - if this is not straight on purpose then make it clearer, like with a slight curve or something
00:57:658 (3) - lol this is the only time a slider like this appears, but there’s nothing special here; maybe just use it more often idk
Kibb’s Insane:
00:17:727 (4) - and 00:20:970 (8) - I know it’s a calm section but I still feel like 1/4 slider + circle would be better here since it emphasizes last note
00:57:050 (5,6,7) - and 01:10:023 (5,6,7) - maybe make spacing to 6 bigger than 7? also looks better imo
01:00:699 (7,8,1) - antiflow here for strong sound, like on other strong downbeats
lul same slidershape from insane appears at 01:10:631 (1) - and 01:24:212 (3) - (why tho)
hope this helped, nice mapset w
SPOILER
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191,284,16105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,338,16308,6,0,P|328:349|399:289,1,136,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
401,212,16916,2,0,P|352:164|279:166,1,136,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,222,17524,1,8,0:1:0:0:
149,103,17727,2,0,L|146:69,2,34,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
149,103,18335,6,0,P|116:100|82:93,1,68,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,158,18740,2,0,P|28:191|35:224,1,68,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,257,19146,1,8,0:1:0:0:
75,340,19348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,365,19551,6,0,P|215:337|265:334,1,102,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,347,19956,1,8,0:1:0:0:
342,205,20159,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,222,20260,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,241,20362,1,8,0:1:0:0:
260,251,20564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,113,20767,1,10,0:1:0:0:
441,290,20970,2,0,L|435:323,2,34,0|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
441,290,21578,5,8,0:1:0:0:
485,140,21781,2,0,P|495:172|496:206,1,68,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
351,367,22186,2,0,P|340:334|339:300,1,68,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
380,208,22591,6,0,L|312:201,1,68,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
252,104,22997,2,0,L|319:97,1,68,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,199,23402,2,0,P|170:229|87:220,1,136,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,151,24010,2,0,P|34:110|46:72,1,68,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,17,24416,6,0,L|241:30,1,136,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
277,126,25024,2,0,L|209:120,1,68,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
338,12,25429,2,0,L|405:17,1,68,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
395,106,25835,1,2,0:0:0:0:
484,80,26037,6,0,P|496:113|499:149,1,72.2500013780594,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,331,26443,2,0,P|317:277|333:226,1,108.375002067089,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,193,26848,5,8,0:0:0:0:
424,210,26950,1,8,0:0:0:0:
426,227,27051,1,8,0:3:0:0:
255,121,27254,1,8,0:0:0:0:
253,138,27356,1,8,0:0:0:0:
251,155,27457,1,4,0:3:0:0:
295,232,27659,6,0,P|241:199|175:199,1,127.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,248,28064,2,0,P|84:207|87:164,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,111,28470,5,8,0:1:0:0:
216,295,28673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,175,28875,1,8,0:0:0:0:
98,248,29078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,24,29281,6,0,P|153:81|237:73,1,170,8|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,6,29889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,219,30091,1,8,0:1:0:0:
276,197,30193,1,8,0:0:0:0:
278,175,30294,1,0,0:0:0:0:
377,94,30497,2,0,P|393:132|397:184,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,249,30902,6,0,B|284:230|277:291|359:273,1,170,8|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,157,31510,2,0,P|380:157|339:169,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
142,364,31916,2,0,P|184:363|225:351,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,135,32321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,154,32423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
229,175,32524,5,8,0:1:0:0:
300,256,32727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
131,155,32929,1,8,0:0:0:0:
314,22,33132,2,0,P|326:62|327:112,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
327,104,33436,1,8,0:0:0:0:
327,104,33537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
131,155,33740,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,339,33943,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,339,34044,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,339,34146,6,0,P|287:286|205:296,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,339,34754,2,0,P|100:297|110:256,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
262,67,35159,1,0,0:0:0:0:
169,18,35362,2,0,L|163:123,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,150,35767,6,0,B|159:120|156:182|75:154,1,170,8|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,241,36375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
337,107,36578,2,0,P|347:148|341:189,1,85,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,363,36983,1,8,0:0:0:0:
135,326,37186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
135,326,37287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
135,325,37389,6,0,P|195:270|277:280,1,170,8|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,114,37997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
173,134,38098,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,155,38200,5,8,0:1:0:0:
399,100,38402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,15,38605,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,110,38808,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,110,38909,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,110,39010,6,0,L|310:67,2,42.5,8|8|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,188,39416,2,0,L|68:145,3,42.5,8|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
34,269,39821,5,8,0:1:0:0:
61,236,39923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
99,220,40024,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,223,40125,1,8,0:0:0:0:
177,246,40227,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,268,40328,1,4,0:3:0:0:
254,271,40429,1,4,0:3:0:0:
293,255,40531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,223,40632,5,4,0:0:0:0:
126,56,41240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
335,67,41646,1,8,0:1:0:0:
235,30,41848,2,0,L|230:80,1,50.9999984436036,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,67,42051,2,0,L|339:117,1,50.9999984436036,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,191,42254,5,0,1:0:0:0:
372,375,42862,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,345,43064,2,0,P|247:339|283:335,1,72.2500013780594,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
462,239,43470,2,0,L|354:250,1,108.375002067089,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,191,43875,5,0,1:0:0:0:
366,154,44179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,250,44483,1,8,0:0:0:0:
283,92,44686,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,284,44889,1,4,0:0:0:0:
454,267,45091,2,0,P|453:241|449:216,1,50.9999984436036,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,41,45294,2,0,P|278:66|282:91,1,50.9999984436036,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,210,45497,6,0,P|273:191|230:193,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,51,46308,2,0,P|403:82|399:121,1,63.75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
427,218,46713,5,8,0:3:0:0:
427,218,46814,1,4,0:3:0:0:
427,218,46916,1,4,0:3:0:0:
427,218,47017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
427,218,47119,6,0,L|441:317,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,134,47524,5,8,0:0:0:0:
254,215,47727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
438,302,47929,5,8,0:0:0:0:
231,214,48132,1,8,0:1:0:0:
486,134,48335,5,8,0:0:0:0:
209,213,48537,1,8,0:1:0:0:
397,205,48740,5,8,0:0:0:0:
144,104,48943,1,0,0:0:0:0:
445,37,49146,5,8,0:0:0:0:
167,103,49348,1,8,0:1:0:0:
397,205,49551,5,8,0:0:0:0:
189,102,49753,1,8,0:1:0:0:
445,37,49956,5,8,0:0:0:0:
211,101,50159,1,8,0:1:0:0:
392,247,50362,6,0,L|399:183,3,42.5,4|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
230,44,50767,2,0,L|225:86,3,42.5,8|0|0|0,0:0|1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
162,171,51173,5,8,0:0:0:0:
198,192,51274,1,0,1:0:0:0:
240,196,51375,1,0,1:0:0:0:
279,181,51477,1,0,1:0:0:0:
309,151,51578,1,8,0:0:0:0:
338,120,51679,1,8,0:0:0:0:
377,105,51781,1,8,0:0:0:0:
419,109,51882,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,131,51983,5,0,1:0:0:0:
247,337,52287,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,52,52591,1,0,1:0:0:0:
289,176,52794,5,0,1:0:0:0:
280,242,54415,6,0,P|217:187|135:196,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,78,55023,1,2,0:0:0:0:
362,98,55125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
362,119,55226,1,8,0:1:0:0:
185,282,55429,1,2,0:0:0:0:
267,106,55631,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,267,55834,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,193,56037,6,0,L|187:184,1,127.5,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,356,56442,2,0,P|273:316|276:274,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,102,56848,1,8,0:1:0:0:
392,121,56949,1,8,0:0:0:0:
394,141,57050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,25,57253,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,139,57456,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,239,57658,6,0,B|434:209|428:268|346:238,1,170,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,211,58266,1,2,0:0:0:0:
214,232,58368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,252,58469,1,8,0:1:0:0:
296,139,58672,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,253,58875,1,8,0:0:0:0:
297,337,59077,1,2,0:0:0:0:
58,141,59280,6,0,P|120:148|176:115,1,127.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,56,59685,2,0,P|295:96|295:138,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,344,60091,1,8,0:1:0:0:
197,323,60192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,302,60293,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,337,60496,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,243,60699,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,243,60800,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,243,60902,6,0,P|107:190|189:202,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,83,61510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,16,61712,2,0,P|57:54|54:96,1,85,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
54,96,62016,1,2,0:0:0:0:
54,96,62118,1,8,0:0:0:0:
185,202,62321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
350,137,62523,6,0,L|265:130,1,85,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,183,62929,1,8,0:0:0:0:
198,296,63131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
169,112,63334,1,8,0:1:0:0:
170,133,63435,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,154,63537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,314,63739,2,0,P|155:299|197:295,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,182,64145,6,0,P|353:263|303:330,1,170,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,133,64753,2,0,L|227:90,2,42.5,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
292,13,65158,1,2,0:0:0:0:
75,113,65361,6,0,L|125:118,1,50.9999984436036,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,237,65564,2,0,L|203:231,1,50.9999984436036,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,298,65766,5,0,0:0:0:0:
233,133,65969,1,8,0:0:0:0:
337,342,66172,2,0,L|341:299,3,42.5,8|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,178,66577,5,4,0:3:0:0:
294,212,66678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,231,66779,1,8,0:0:0:0:
214,231,66881,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,211,66983,2,0,L|126:205,1,50.9999984436036,8|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
137,110,67185,2,0,L|86:103,1,50.9999984436036,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,333,67388,6,0,P|76:292|155:318,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,251,67996,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,231,68098,1,0,0:0:0:0:
258,209,68199,1,8,0:1:0:0:
303,337,68402,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,205,68604,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,140,68807,1,2,0:0:0:0:
206,3,69010,6,0,P|198:66|229:120,1,127.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,242,69415,2,0,P|293:240|248:249,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,43,69821,1,8,0:1:0:0:
333,44,69922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
354,45,70023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
229,231,70226,1,8,0:0:0:0:
415,134,70429,1,0,0:0:0:0:
330,348,70631,6,0,B|318:280|318:280|330:244|330:244|320:180,1,170,10|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,289,71239,1,2,0:0:0:0:
187,230,71442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,230,71543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
229,231,71645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,71,71848,2,0,P|295:84|253:91,1,85,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,322,72253,6,0,P|73:255|86:173,1,170,8|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,44,72861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
129,44,72962,1,8,0:0:0:0:
129,44,73064,2,0,P|133:64|138:85,2,42.5,8|8|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,88,73469,1,12,0:0:0:0:
196,176,73672,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,176,73773,1,8,0:0:0:0:
197,175,73875,6,0,B|283:149|280:211|362:187,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,94,74483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,269,74685,2,0,P|227:294|225:320,2,42.5,8|0|2,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,94,75091,1,8,0:0:0:0:
197,175,75293,1,2,0:0:0:0:
439,253,75496,6,0,P|379:193|296:196,1,170,8|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,209,76104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
101,188,76206,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,166,76307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
203,259,76510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,87,76712,2,0,L|172:81,1,85,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
57,294,77118,6,0,P|138:309|202:258,1,170,8|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,81,77726,1,8,0:1:0:0:
170,102,77827,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,123,77929,1,8,0:1:0:0:
249,10,78131,1,8,0:1:0:0:
71,101,78334,1,8,0:0:0:0:
231,209,78537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,209,78638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
231,209,78739,6,0,L|284:205,2,42.5,8|8|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,123,79145,5,8,0:0:0:0:
394,209,79348,1,8,0:1:0:0:
174,291,79550,1,8,0:0:0:0:
343,50,79753,5,8,0:1:0:0:
330,67,79854,1,8,0:0:0:0:
323,87,79956,2,0,L|317:137,1,50.9999984436036,8|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
466,335,80158,2,0,L|460:284,1,50.9999984436036,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
393,209,80361,6,0,P|358:231|315:236,1,85,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,99,80766,1,8,0:0:0:0:
153,131,80969,2,0,B|233:104|239:168|318:137,1,170,4|10,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
169,328,81577,1,8,0:0:0:0:
287,350,81780,6,0,P|230:321|165:329,1,127.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
89,196,82185,2,0,P|75:236|76:278,1,85,10|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,221,82591,2,0,P|279:138|229:71,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
44,152,83199,1,8,0:0:0:0:
65,172,83300,1,8,0:0:0:0:
91,185,83401,1,8,0:0:0:0:
121,190,83503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
150,185,83604,6,0,L|138:287,1,85,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,79,84010,1,8,0:0:0:0:
258,323,84212,2,0,B|254:253|254:253|271:221|271:221|268:157,1,170,4|10,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
333,36,84821,1,8,0:0:0:0:
215,56,85023,6,0,P|277:64|333:36,1,127.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,78,85429,2,0,P|446:100|452:136,1,50.9999984436036,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,292,85631,2,0,P|373:267|376:242,1,50.9999984436036,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,157,85834,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85935,12,0,89077,0:0:0:0:
Kibb's Insane
00:11:037 (6,7,1) - Well, you map the 1/4 here but what about places like 00:08:909 - and 00:10:531 - ?
00:22:997 (2,3,4) - The structure looks a bit bad here since 2>3 is more spaced than 3>4 but they're just 1 object apart.
00:33:740 (7,8,1) - Overkill imo xP
00:43:875 (1,2,3) - Idk how readable this is. You kinda bait people into thinking this is 1/2 cuz of the spacing. You could try using really big spacing instead
01:06:983 (5,6) - I'd move 6 more to the left. The follow point makes the visual a bit weird imo
Insane
00:06:781 (2,3) - Stacking felt kinda weird since 3 deserves some movement for emphasis imo.
00:16:916 (2,3,4) - make them more even in visual spacing?
00:33:335 (3,4,5,6) - I would switch their positions. Flows better imo
00:50:362 (1,2) - Can you begin the stream on a red tick? It makes it a lot easier to catch the stream, rather than on a blue tick ;c. Basically, make slider 1 two circles instead?
Hard
00:01:713 (2) - NC? It's the start of the measure. Applies to Normal and Easy too.
00:24:010 (7,8,1) - Use the same structure? You dont need a jump here yet ;c It looks kinda bad imo.
00:25:632 (3,4,5) - Structure is a bit poor here too/ move 4 a bit more to the left?
01:04:145 (1,2,3,1) - Spacing is a bit weird, especially between 2>3>1. I think 1 should be a bigger jump really, but the jump from 2>3 is bigger.
01:09:010 (1,2) - Blanket really could be better
01:11:442 (3,4,1) - Make the spacing more consistent, or make the jump bigger? right now its just awkwardly spaced imo.
Normal
00:05:767 (3) - Imo, this should be 1/2 a beat earlier to follow instrument
00:30:091 (5) - Same idea here. Move it 1/2 a beat earlier for vocals.
01:12:658 (5,6) - Really odd rhythm choice here too. 01:12:861 - should be clickable for the vocal imo
Easy
Fine.
00:11:037 (6,7,1) - Well, you map the 1/4 here but what about places like 00:08:909 - and 00:10:531 - ?
00:22:997 (2,3,4) - The structure looks a bit bad here since 2>3 is more spaced than 3>4 but they're just 1 object apart.
00:33:740 (7,8,1) - Overkill imo xP
00:43:875 (1,2,3) - Idk how readable this is. You kinda bait people into thinking this is 1/2 cuz of the spacing. You could try using really big spacing instead
01:06:983 (5,6) - I'd move 6 more to the left. The follow point makes the visual a bit weird imo
Insane
00:06:781 (2,3) - Stacking felt kinda weird since 3 deserves some movement for emphasis imo.
00:16:916 (2,3,4) - make them more even in visual spacing?
00:33:335 (3,4,5,6) - I would switch their positions. Flows better imo
00:50:362 (1,2) - Can you begin the stream on a red tick? It makes it a lot easier to catch the stream, rather than on a blue tick ;c. Basically, make slider 1 two circles instead?
Hard
00:01:713 (2) - NC? It's the start of the measure. Applies to Normal and Easy too.
00:24:010 (7,8,1) - Use the same structure? You dont need a jump here yet ;c It looks kinda bad imo.
00:25:632 (3,4,5) - Structure is a bit poor here too/ move 4 a bit more to the left?
01:04:145 (1,2,3,1) - Spacing is a bit weird, especially between 2>3>1. I think 1 should be a bigger jump really, but the jump from 2>3 is bigger.
01:09:010 (1,2) - Blanket really could be better
01:11:442 (3,4,1) - Make the spacing more consistent, or make the jump bigger? right now its just awkwardly spaced imo.
Normal
00:05:767 (3) - Imo, this should be 1/2 a beat earlier to follow instrument
00:30:091 (5) - Same idea here. Move it 1/2 a beat earlier for vocals.
01:12:658 (5,6) - Really odd rhythm choice here too. 01:12:861 - should be clickable for the vocal imo
Easy
Fine.
00:43:875 (1,2,3) - the intensity is rather weak here tho so.. maybe ill try NC spam
others fixed
others fixed
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Topic Starter
Ryuusei Aika wrote:
m4m
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/598791
General
00:56:848 - missing clap? nope
nice song and nice bg
Easy
00:12:254 (2) - quite weird for following a ignorable bell sound at 00:12:862 - instead of the strong drum beat at 00:12:659 - , rhythm like 1/1 reverse slider + 1 note would works better nah
01:04:956 (2) - ^
01:02:523 (3) - little nazi but it looks not quite central symmetry changed
Hard
HP6 is way too high, if someone missing 1/4 note then the hp will reduce to about 1/2... HP5 is enough i guess
00:07:997 - at higher diff is ok but here the clap is a little strange, as if the rhythm is sparse, then it would be noticeable that actually the drum sound is at 00:08:098 - but not 00:07:997 (blame hs copier i guess) fixed
Insane
00:14:078 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - simply looks weird, how about change to the pattern below? i like thsi tbh
00:45:902 (2) - tune of the vocal raised obviously here, so stack it with 00:45:497 (1) - may not be a good choice i use stack per 2 note
00:43:875 (1,2) - changing rhythm like that would be better:
00:50:362 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - lol i think no one would expect to see a 1.1x spaced long stream in a 4* map, that's really hard even though it's 148 bpm reducing a bitreduce it's spacing can also improve a little your spread too
Megumi kawaii
Edit: fixed a display error on the second pic
vekt0r wrote:
hi, m4m from your queue
Easy:
00:07:389 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - this rhythm gives you 2/1 gaps and also emphasizes 00:11:443 (1) - as opposed to the other ones i'd like to avoid 1/2 on easy
01:24:618 (2,3) - this rhythm is pretty much the same difficulty-wise but emphasizes the strong note: prefer my rhythm
Normal:
00:03:132 (4) - I would just start this on the downbeat; the sound here occurs on every offbeat so not important
00:34:146 (4,5,6) - imo would be more intuitive if you just did vocals here its same though imo
00:43:673 - add a note here to correspond with 00:41:646 (2,3,4) - and make 00:43:267 (5) - more intuitive
Hard:
00:04:956 (1) - jump here like the other strong downbeats?
00:58:266 (2,3) - don’t hear anything different from 00:55:023 (2,3) - so why is it mapped to drums now well i dont have to made it same zz
01:09:415 (2) - imo this doesn’t deserve a 1/1 slider, maybe make it like 00:56:442 (2,3,4) - nope
Insane:
00:18:740 (3,6) - these are too curved imo, why not just use slidershape of 00:17:524 (4) - nah its fine
00:20:564 (5,1) - blanket off fixed
00:27:254 (6,7,8) - if this is not straight on purpose then make it clearer, like with a slight curve or something
00:57:658 (3) - lol this is the only time a slider like this appears, but there’s nothing special here; maybe just use it more often idk o.o
hope this helped, nice mapset w
thanks, updated :dMonstrata wrote:
Insane
00:06:781 (2,3) - Stacking felt kinda weird since 3 deserves some movement for emphasis imo. unstacked
00:16:916 (2,3,4) - make them more even in visual spacing? this one was did on purpose, but i did smth idk
00:33:335 (3,4,5,6) - I would switch their positions. Flows better imo nah its not the pattern i wanted tbh
00:50:362 (1,2) - Can you begin the stream on a red tick? It makes it a lot easier to catch the stream, rather than on a blue tick ;c. Basically, make slider 1 two circles instead? sure
Hard
00:01:713 (2) - NC? It's the start of the measure. Applies to Normal and Easy too. idk i dont really like single nc >< would like to keep tbh
00:24:010 (7,8,1) - Use the same structure? You dont need a jump here yet ;c It looks kinda bad imo. fixed both
00:25:632 (3,4,5) - Structure is a bit poor here too/ move 4 a bit more to the left?
01:04:145 (1,2,3,1) - Spacing is a bit weird, especially between 2>3>1. I think 1 should be a bigger jump really, but the jump from 2>3 is bigger. well people wont recognize by the circular pattern though as its more natural that way, moving 1 of them would ruining the pattern imo
01:09:010 (1,2) - Blanket really could be better let's see if its better
01:11:442 (3,4,1) - Make the spacing more consistent, or make the jump bigger? right now its just awkwardly spaced imo. made bigger
Normal
00:05:767 (3) - Imo, this should be 1/2 a beat earlier to follow instrument the instrument here 00:05:564 - isnt as noticeable as the drum imo
00:30:091 (5) - Same idea here. Move it 1/2 a beat earlier for vocals. fixed this one
01:12:658 (5,6) - Really odd rhythm choice here too. 01:12:861 - should be clickable for the vocal imo ok
Easy
Fine.
Okay, everything looks good. Nominated!
why isn't kibb in tags!!
[Easy]
00:57:253 - clap
01:17:929 (2) - prob nicer to follow the downbeat here for the instrument
01:24:618 (2,3) - try a rhythm like 01:21:375 (2,3) - ? feels a little strange to suddenly have all the finishes on slider ends when in the previous pattern they r clickable 01:21:780 (3,4)
[Normal]
od 4?
00:13:064 (1) - nc seems a bit redundant
00:57:253 - clap
[Hard]
00:26:848 (6,7) - hm the song only provides triplets here, so i dont think the extra reverse is necessary. it implies its the same as patterns like 00:51:173 (3,4) - but they're clearly different :<
00:47:119 (1,2,3) - 00:50:362 (1,2,3) - minor visual spacing things if u agree
[Insane]
hp seems really high o_o
00:17:524 (4,1) - overlap doesn't really fit with your general aesthetic. could try https://puu.sh/wbkoO/040ebd9b94.jpg
[Kibb's Insane]
00:39:923 (2,8) - really sucks that you treat these beats with the same strength as 00:40:024 (3,4,5,6,7) - :c
00:45:091 (3,4) - aa please don't ignore the music. one has the double snare the other doesnt, mapping them in the same way doesn't really reflect that
00:56:037 (1,2) - 01:21:780 (1,2) - the 1/4 spacings are super uncomfortable here, especially in the context of the diff cos everything is generally slow moving and not snappy. i'd say to fix 01:09:010 (1,2) - too, but it isn't as bad cos you have the visual flow there, and the pattern is probably hard to change anyways
01:05:361 (1,2,1) - this puts emphasis on 01:05:766 (1) - though 01:05:564 - is the strong beat here, a 1/2 from 01:05:564 - would work well
get ur bubble back and i'll q
[Easy]
00:57:253 - clap
01:17:929 (2) - prob nicer to follow the downbeat here for the instrument
01:24:618 (2,3) - try a rhythm like 01:21:375 (2,3) - ? feels a little strange to suddenly have all the finishes on slider ends when in the previous pattern they r clickable 01:21:780 (3,4)
[Normal]
od 4?
00:13:064 (1) - nc seems a bit redundant
00:57:253 - clap
[Hard]
00:26:848 (6,7) - hm the song only provides triplets here, so i dont think the extra reverse is necessary. it implies its the same as patterns like 00:51:173 (3,4) - but they're clearly different :<
00:47:119 (1,2,3) - 00:50:362 (1,2,3) - minor visual spacing things if u agree
[Insane]
hp seems really high o_o
00:17:524 (4,1) - overlap doesn't really fit with your general aesthetic. could try https://puu.sh/wbkoO/040ebd9b94.jpg
[Kibb's Insane]
00:39:923 (2,8) - really sucks that you treat these beats with the same strength as 00:40:024 (3,4,5,6,7) - :c
00:45:091 (3,4) - aa please don't ignore the music. one has the double snare the other doesnt, mapping them in the same way doesn't really reflect that
00:56:037 (1,2) - 01:21:780 (1,2) - the 1/4 spacings are super uncomfortable here, especially in the context of the diff cos everything is generally slow moving and not snappy. i'd say to fix 01:09:010 (1,2) - too, but it isn't as bad cos you have the visual flow there, and the pattern is probably hard to change anyways
01:05:361 (1,2,1) - this puts emphasis on 01:05:766 (1) - though 01:05:564 - is the strong beat here, a 1/2 from 01:05:564 - would work well
get ur bubble back and i'll q
Topic Starter
no answer = fixedPentori wrote:
why isn't kibb in tags!! roflmao how can i forget this
[Easy]
00:57:253 - clap
01:17:929 (2) - prob nicer to follow the downbeat here for the instrument
01:24:618 (2,3) - try a rhythm like 01:21:375 (2,3) - ? feels a little strange to suddenly have all the finishes on slider ends when in the previous pattern they r clickable 01:21:780 (3,4)
[Normal]
od 4?
00:13:064 (1) - nc seems a bit redundant removed
00:57:253 - clap
[Hard]
00:26:848 (6,7) - hm the song only provides triplets here, so i dont think the extra reverse is necessary. it implies its the same as patterns like 00:51:173 (3,4) - but they're clearly different :< idk just made it lke that for easier gameplay
00:47:119 (1,2,3) - 00:50:362 (1,2,3) - minor visual spacing things if u agree nah i purposely do that as jump
[Insane]
hp seems really high o_o 7 is normal isn't
00:17:524 (4,1) - overlap doesn't really fit with your general aesthetic. could try https://puu.sh/wbkoO/040ebd9b94.jpg
get ur bubble back and i'll q
thanks !
01:05:361 (1,2) - for this i prefer to see the 2 vocals and 2 snare sounds as a pair, hence i prefer to keep them as 2 kicksliders. also imo a kickslider emphasizes the finish better.
everything else is fixed
everything else is fixed
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122,322,72253,6,0,P|73:255|86:173,1,170,8|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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439,253,75496,6,0,P|379:193|296:196,1,170,8|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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203,259,76510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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231,209,78638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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343,50,79753,5,8,0:1:0:0:
330,67,79854,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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423,99,80766,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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169,328,81577,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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150,185,83604,6,0,L|138:287,1,85,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,79,84010,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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333,36,84821,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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366,292,85631,2,0,P|373:267|376:242,1,50.9999984436036,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,157,85834,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85935,12,0,89077,0:0:0:0:
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