Q

[General]
BG is too big, you used 1927x1080, the limit of rankable BG size is 1366x768

[adf]
00:19:020 (2) - Ctrl G for flow?
00:40:021 (1) - you can make better flow like this
00:47:687 (1,2) - suddenly made low intense? it can be little bit weird, jump more
01:17:020 (5,1) - make jump?
01:58:021 (3) - offscreen
02:13:354 (1,2) - try to avoid overlap for consistency
03:46:853 - only this part doesn't have clickable beat?

GL

Neoskylove wrote:

Q
[General]
BG is too big, you used 1927x1080, the limit of rankable BG size is 1366x768 information is outdated, 1920 x 1200 is the new maximum

GL

sup

i think sometimes you space things a little close, making visual spacing a bit inconsistent, imma list some stuff that could use a little distance to make it cleaner here
00:27:021 (2,3) -
00:40:520 (3,2,3) -
01:19:353 (3,4,5) - make this more even
01:58:521 (2,1,2) - same
02:04:521 (3,4) -
02:21:354 (1,3) -
02:24:687 (4,2) -


01:58:021 (3) - offscreen
00:29:021 (5,6,7,8,1) - imo wud look nicer with the last slider if u curved it this way
00:49:020 (1,2) - these should be a bit bigger i think
01:02:354 (4) - would look nicer around here imo?
01:29:687 (2,3) - why not copy paste here
03:40:354 (2,3) - ^
03:49:687 (2,3) - ^ honestly i think it wud look rly gud if u did that here
01:45:354 (1) - extended slider doesn't feel that fitting here, ur skipping over a thingy :S
01:56:021 (1) - ^
03:56:021 (1) - ya
04:06:687 (1) - 04:17:354 (1) - 04:28:021 (1) -
03:21:270 - the kick hitsound doesn't really fit well here, just a whistle wud be good imo
03:26:853 - u gunna skip this? i think having 2 1/2 sliders here would fit pretty well


ok this is the perfect example of a map thats good but just needs polishing. visual spacing wise, see if you can go through the map yourself and even them up a little. also maybe make some of your wave sliders more symmetrical, though i personally don't mind this part that much.

do go fix the spacing tho
i guess i can bubble since lasse is waiting


if u have metadata source, it wud b awesome

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[General]
BG is too big, you used 1927x1080, the limit of rankable BG size is 1366x768 as kibb said, does it mean that i have to redim the size to 1920x1200 or 1920x1080 is good?

[adf]
00:19:020 (2) - Ctrl G for flow? Mmh i think my patern flow better
00:40:021 (1) - you can make better flow like this Fixed
00:47:687 (1,2) - suddenly made low intense? it can be little bit weird, jump more Ok
01:17:020 (5,1) - make jump? no drums on 01:17:186 -
01:58:021 (3) - offscreen fixed
02:13:354 (1,2) - try to avoid overlap for consistency fixed
03:46:853 - only this part doesn't have clickable beat? ye but i wanted to emphasize the big sound on 03:46:686 -

GL Thx for mod!!

Kibbleru wrote:

sup

i think sometimes you space things a little close, making visual spacing a bit inconsistent, imma list some stuff that could use a little distance to make it cleaner here
00:27:021 (2,3) -
00:40:520 (3,2,3) -
01:19:353 (3,4,5) - make this more even
01:58:521 (2,1,2) - same
02:04:521 (3,4) -
02:21:354 (1,3) -
02:24:687 (4,2) -
fixed i think


01:58:021 (3) - offscreen Fixed
00:29:021 (5,6,7,8,1) - imo wud look nicer with the last slider if u curved it this way Fixed

SPOILER

00:49:020 (1,2) - these should be a bit bigger i think I think it's ok since the trumpet is very low on 00:49:020 (1) -
01:02:354 (4) - would look nicer around here imo? Ok

SPOILER

01:29:687 (2,3) - why not copy paste here ok
03:40:354 (2,3) - ^^
03:49:687 (2,3) - ^ honestly i think it wud look rly gud if u did that here ^
01:45:354 (1) - extended slider doesn't feel that fitting here, ur skipping over a thingy :S ok fixed
01:56:021 (1) - ^
03:56:021 (1) - ya
04:06:687 (1) - 04:17:354 (1) - 04:28:021 (1) - fixed everywhere
03:21:270 - the kick hitsound doesn't really fit well here, just a whistle wud be good imo i see
03:26:853 - u gunna skip this? i think having 2 1/2 sliders here would fit pretty well fixed everywhere


ok this is the perfect example of a map thats good but just needs polishing. visual spacing wise, see if you can go through the map yourself and even them up a little. also maybe make some of your wave sliders more symmetrical, though i personally don't mind this part that much.

do go fix the spacing tho
i guess i can bubble since lasse is waiting


if u have metadata source, it wud b awesome

Thx for you mod! I guess I'll call you back when all the spacing problems are fixed
https://yamajet.bandcamp.com/track/sunglow-feat http://crossbeatsrev.wiki.fc2.com/wiki/Sunglow

Kibbleru wrote:

Neoskylove wrote:

Q
[General]
BG is too big, you used 1927x1080, the limit of rankable BG size is 1366x768 information is outdated, 1920 x 1200 is the new maximum

Oh, I didn't know that, Thanks for saying

HI! you requested mods on #modreqs like... 3 days ago, and im here to see if i can help you with that!
lets see if my mod Works for you, since a lot of professional mappers/modders already modded it x.x

Melody

1. 00:03:854 (1,2) - this is a suggestion, but try moving the secons slider to X:185-Y:131, so it can flow better with the curve of the first slider

2. 00:04:687 (1,2,3,4) - make this have a better shaped triangle

3. 00:13:854 (2,3,4) - move circle "2" a bit to the left, so the whole part can look like a cute triangle uwu

4. 00:14:521 (1,2,3) - the circles being separated from the slider doesnt really look good tho, why making them closer?

5. 00:17:187 (1,2,3) - same reason as #4

6. 00:26:187 (1,2,3) - make this circles have the same spacing between them

7. 00:27:521 (2) - move this circle more to the right, so it can flow a bit better (in my opinión :S)

8. 00:34:686 (1,2) - the second slider could look cooler if you make a curve on it https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8223563 like that

9. 00:43:353 (1,2,3) - give this circles a similar spacing too

10. 01:41:021 (3,4) - make the second slider have a curve too, it will make it cooler http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8223580 like that

11. 02:02:687 (1,2) - in this case, make a Little curve in the second slider too uwu

12. 02:10:687 (1,2) - move the second slider a bit more to the right, so it flows better with the first slider

13. 02:19:021 (2,3,1) - make this objects just a bit closer

14. 02:31:186 (3,4,5) - same reason as #13

15. 02:55:353 (3,4,5) - make something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8223601

16. 03:05:687 (2,3,1) - make this objects a bit closer too

17. 03:14:187 (4,5,6) - rotate this triplet on a -11 angle and move it to X:254-Y:144, it could make it cooler, and it will have a pretty decent space from the slider at 03:14:687 (1)

18. 03:27:354 (3) - move this circle a bit more down, so the jump can have more pretty good spice

19. 03:30:020 (3) - kind of a problemo here, if the slider will be a line, should the second gray dot be in the middle? doesnt look good :S

20. 04:20:687 (1,2,1) - this objects should have the same spacing, or at least make some spacing between the first and second slider


Thats all, you have a very good map and the song is beautiful

also, nice and cute background uwu, good luck!

relevant news, marathons now only need 2 BNs, so once ur done with ur fixing, call me up for a bubble

Joe Castle wrote:

HI! you requested mods on #modreqs like... 3 days ago, and im here to see if i can help you with that!
lets see if my mod Works for you, since a lot of professional mappers/modders already modded it x.x

Melody

1. 00:03:854 (1,2) - this is a suggestion, but try moving the secons slider to X:185-Y:131, so it can flow better with the curve of the first slider I don't like the overlap

2. 00:04:687 (1,2,3,4) - make this have a better shaped triangle i prefer keep the overlap

3. 00:13:854 (2,3,4) - move circle "2" a bit to the left, so the whole part can look like a cute triangle uwu mmh no it would ruin the emphasize on 00:14:020 (3) -

4. 00:14:521 (1,2,3) - the circles being separated from the slider doesnt really look good tho, why making them closer? Ok

5. 00:17:187 (1,2,3) - same reason as #4 Ok

6. 00:26:187 (1,2,3) - make this circles have the same spacing between them no it would ruin the trumpet decreas

7. 00:27:521 (2) - move this circle more to the right, so it can flow a bit better (in my opinión :S) Ok

8. 00:34:686 (1,2) - the second slider could look cooler if you make a curve on it https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8223563 like that Mmh i don't like it very much

9. 00:43:353 (1,2,3) - give this circles a similar spacing too i want to emphasize this clap 00:43:687 (3) -

10. 01:41:021 (3,4) - make the second slider have a curve too, it will make it cooler http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8223580 like that i curved it a bit more

11. 02:02:687 (1,2) - in this case, make a Little curve in the second slider too uwu mmh i don't want to curve it too much because of the flow of the jump after

12. 02:10:687 (1,2) - move the second slider a bit more to the right, so it flows better with the first slider yes

13. 02:19:021 (2,3,1) - make this objects just a bit closer ok

14. 02:31:186 (3,4,5) - same reason as #13 ok

15. 02:55:353 (3,4,5) - make something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8223601 i did something else

16. 03:05:687 (2,3,1) - make this objects a bit closer too ok

17. 03:14:187 (4,5,6) - rotate this triplet on a -11 angle and move it to X:254-Y:144, it could make it cooler, and it will have a pretty decent space from the slider at 03:14:687 (1) i rotate by -11 but i made a blanket with 03:13:854 (3) -

18. 03:27:354 (3) - move this circle a bit more down, so the jump can have more pretty good spice ok

19. 03:30:020 (3) - kind of a problemo here, if the slider will be a line, should the second gray dot be in the middle? doesnt look good :S oki

20. 04:20:687 (1,2,1) - this objects should have the same spacing, or at least make some spacing between the first and second slider no because i need to emphasize 04:21:354 (1) -


Thats all, you have a very good map and the song is beautiful thanks!

also, nice and cute background uwu, good luck!

Thxx for mod!!!

alright, bubbled then! :d

Thanks!

03:22:354 (3) - is the spacing on this intentional?

rechecked and map looks fine, fix that thing if it's unintentional and let me know when I can qualify

Lasse wrote:

03:22:354 (3) - is the spacing on this intentional?

rechecked and map looks fine, fix that thing if it's unintentional and let me know when I can qualify

Yep that spacing was intentional to blanket with 03:21:271 (1) - curve but let me know if you think that it's not gud

Let's wait the 24h i guess

spacing is fine, I was just wondering because you don't really use other 1/2 overlaps
but that makes sense and it fits there so just keep it

qualified

Thankssss !

as requested

Ty!
Fixed unsnapped object, it should be ok now

k then

Gratz to qualify ^^

Why did you use "たのしいことだけ feat. ひうらまさこ" on artist field? I guess that is another song by Yamajet

たのしいことだけ : https://soundcloud.com/yamajet/preview_tanoshii-kotodake

Sunglow : https://soundcloud.com/yamajet/preview-sunglow


http://www.capcom.co.jp/arcade/rev/PC/music.html?page=5#l

So the artist should be
Artist : Yamajet feat. ひうらまさこ
Romanised : Yamajet feat. Hiura Masako

If you want to change it, Please send forum PM

[ Sharuresu ] wrote:

Hey, no idea why i put たのしいことだけ instead of Yamajet so yes i would like to change it, thank you for pointing it out

Disqualify for change the artist.

Sorry for the inconveniences, hope it's the last time i make stupid mistake with this map uwu

ok, Back~

congratz