1. Changed title, tags, diff names (removed ~, they were kinda unnescessary), and source.. to... crap I'll get the done after this.
2. Removed lettbox during breaks (as if there are any), didn't know about the whole video+letterbox thing.
3. Shifted (actually got rid of) timing sections at beginning of most maps since the same effect can be done by changing the "master" timing point.

1. Incorporated EvianBubble's hitsound map and made minor (oh so minor) adjustments.
2. Replaced spinner at 01:13:316 with a slider.

1. Renamed to [Light]
   
2. Changed tick rate to 1. Added custom hitfinish to account for this.
   

1. Messed around with timing sections: added S:C2 @ 00:49:879, S:C1 @ 01:05:582, S @ 01:13:551, S:C1 @ 01:14:957 ; changed 01:12:192 to S:C1 (Was S:C2)
2. Added hitsounds where I found suitable. Most notable from 00:52:223 - 01:18:004. Added claps and moved whistles.
3. 00:20:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Modified pattern and added 3 beats.
4. 00:26:442 (4, 5) - Added 2 beats to fill gap.
5. 00:44:488 (6) - Added reverse slider to fill gap.
6. 00:45:426 (1,2) - Made changes according to EvianBubble's suggestion.
7. 00:48:473 (1,2,3) - Made changes according to EvianBubble's suggestion.
8. 00:50:582 (5,6) - Moved (5) and (6) up and changed their directions from upward to downward.
9. 00:58:795 (2,3) - Reduced (2) from reverse slider to normal, added (3).
   
   [Struggle]
10. 00:37:457 (1) - Begun combo start and modified combo before it to line up with kiai time start.

EvianBubble wrote:

General
Title should be Wired Life (TV size)
Why do your diff names have ~s in them? O_O
Source should be Ao no Exorcist
Tags: Remove all your current tags (they are either in the title, artist, or source fields, so aren't needed - anime will be the category it's placed in after ranking), you should add "blue" since the English title is "Blue Exorcist"
Move your first timing section to 00:02:067 (no timing changes, just it's the downbeat of the bar so it makes more sense :3)
You should use hitsounds :3
I personally recommend using grid level 3 for mapping, it makes things look neater and such (at the top click view, then "grid level" and choose 3)
Uncheck "letterbox during breaks" since you have video
00:37:691 - Start kiai time here?
00:52:691 - End kiai here?

Connect
00:05:113 (1) - I suggest making this 60% volume and adding whistle
00:07:691 (1,2,3) - Add whistle to the middle and end of (1), (2), and the end of (3)
00:15:192 (1,2,3) - These are too close together. I read them fine but might be confusing for a new player. Move like this?


00:21:285 (1) - I think the next beat after this comes too soon after a spinner at this diff, so I suggest ending at 00:22:691 and adding a finish
00:23:629 (1) - Add whistle to beginning. Move two grids up (lv 3)
00:26:442 (2) - Add finish at 50% volume
00:27:379 (3) - Move two grids down and one right, whistle on beginning and end
00:30:191 (1,2,3,4) - Finish on beginning of (1), clap on (2, 4), whistle on beginning of (3)
00:33:941 (1) - Add whistle to the body, finish on end
01:13:316 (1) - I don't really like this spinner. Map through it?
01:23:160 (1) - Move this to the right, 'cus now it just looks ugly

(BTW, I stopped saying hitsound stuff halfway through 'cus I got annoyed lol XD I've attatched the osu file with all the hitsound changes I'd've made and everything else I said, so just CHANGE ANYTHING YOU DON'T AGREE WITH )

Beautiful
I do not like tick rate 2 at all for this song >_< Consider changing
00:18:004 (2) - Consider moving to the right side of (1) - fixes spacing without looking odd
00:20:817 (1,2,3) - Don't you want more of a build up here? Consider adding notes at 00:21:285, 00:22:223, and 00:22:457
00:23:629 - Those hitsounds sound kind of ... funny X_X
00:26:442 - Definitely suggest adding a note here
00:33:941 (1,2) - Sounds kind of odd but I can't think of a better way to map this :S
00:35:582 (1,1,1,2) - I quite like this. Although I don't think you need a new combo for all those notes
00:44:723 - Add note here and 00:44:957 here
00:45:426 (1) - Consider changing this combo like so. I think it flows a lot better (look at timeline)

00:48:473 (1,2,3) - Make (2) one half beat longer, shorten (3) by one and move it forward (look at timeline)

00:50:582 (4,5,6) - Spacing, these need to be moved closer together
00:57:848 (1,2) - Maybe change to this? (Timeline)


I didn't make any hitsound suggestions, but I would suggest doing something to what I did in my hitsounds one :O

Sorry I didn't get to finish. Please tell me when you've changed stuff so I can recheck (So no star yet )

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Delete osb and full submit. Or don't. Whatever. I thought I already did that. >:O Done.

This song should easily be available at 192kbps MP3 and 848x480 video. (I'm pretty sure it's broadcast in 720p) Higher quality stuff is better, right? Since this is a TV-Size map, you could also use 800kbps or so video. Just to make things look better. Done and done at the expense of english subtitles (couldn't find the original source).

Ending sliders: 01:23:160 (1) are too silent to be ranked. It would be better probably to silence just the tail, and leave some volume (30-50%?) on the head. Done.

0.2 stack leniency makes some patterns hard to read, but higher would make some patterns uglier...

The blue approach circle colour is a bit hard to see at times. Changed to a light blue. Hopefully this helps.

For the harder difficulties:
00:05:113 (1,2) - Much better as a slider than 2 notes; the player has no sense of the tempo yet. Changed on [Entwined] and [Struggle].

[Connect]

00:18:942 (3) - Just my opinion, but this slider's really ugly. XD Yeah, I think I was trying to have it follow the lyrics or something while looking like a "W". I guess I was just asking too much of it. Now a 5-point "W" slider.
00:33:941 (1) - Almost symmetrical; vertically line up the start and end points, and the middle tick should move right to the middle of the slider. If you'd like, center that. I have... absolutely no clue what you're talking about, however I fixed it in the best way I could so I'll get you to check it later.
00:38:629 (1,3) - Put these on the same spot. Kinda, sorta did this. Moved due to slide resnap and distance snap, then rotated 2.
01:05:816 (1) - If this is a W, it needs to be neater. What the-? No clue how to make it neater so I did my best.
01:13:316 (5) - So close to symmetrical. Adjust it a bit so that the start and end points vertically line up? That did the trick. ;D Done.
01:21:754 (2) - Move it up and left a bit, so that the start lines up with the endpoint of 1, and that the 2's not partially covered.Okai~ I also changed the slider in the previous combo (4) where the final bend is parallel to 2.

I'm a big fan of perfect-looking sliders, so you notice a lot of these are about those. XD Here's a guide that you can follow if you get frustrated making them: http://www.tinyurl.com/delicioussliderguide. Or you can ignore me. Thanks. I'll make good use of this.

[Light]

00:20:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Pretty confusing for an Easy/Normal.
00:33:941 (1) - I think this combo would be more intuitive like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/129071 (ignore the note placements, they're not spaced properly. Just look at the timeline) Wdfbbqsawfad!? I already did that? Did my past upload not work or something?
00:46:598 (2) - You have so many hitsounds in this combo that the lack of a hitsound at the center of this slider feels a bit unnatural. Shorten the slider and add a repeat or a note where the endpoint currently is? Just to maintain the 1/2 pattern. Or better, I could work my custom .wav wand and make it all better. ^^
00:54:566 (5) and 00:56:441 (4) and 00:58:785 (2) - I think having new combos on these 3 notes rather than where you currently have them feels better. Okai~
01:02:066 (5,4) - ^ Yep.
01:09:566 (6,5) - ^ This one is less so because you have them in stacks, so what you have here is perfectly fine too. Ok.
01:16:598 (1) - No new combo here, just to match what you have before (or what I recommended, they both shouldn't have one here). "They both..." Anyways, got rid of combo, I think some else modded it, but I didn't originally have it that way.

Looking back, this map might need a bit more approach rate. As well, you have a few jumps here; I think they're intuitive enough for Easy/Normal, but some might disagree. I won't complain about them though. Intuition! Increased AR by 1 tick.

[Entwined]

00:09:567 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - Should probably be 2 squares, so move 8 and 1 a grid left. Done-
00:11:442 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - A bit messy.-and done (hopefully less messy).
00:21:520 (6) - Better symmetry would be good. Done
00:33:941 (1) - This note and everything after it; flip it horizontally with Ctrl-H. That way the hitburst doesn't slightly cover the 2 after, and the player's mouse can continue its path right. If you do this, note that where I say "left" after here I mean right, and vice versa (i.e. my directions in mods after this one assume you chose not to flip) Done.
00:37:457 (1) - Pull the tail a bit more to the {right} to line it up with the center, or pull 2 and 3 a grid {left}. Done after a fair amount of stupidity from yours truely.
00:48:473 (1,2,3) - Move the 2 and 3 a bit so that it looks like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/129073. Tried to word out why, but couldn't find the words, so I hope you understand why it looks neater. No clue why it looks neater, but then again I just flipped my map! Done.
01:01:129 (2,3,1,2) - Move the 3 and 1 up a bit, and the 2 {right} a bit so that the entire sequence forms a smooth arc. Well I purposely did that sloppy crap but mainly because I was too lazy to make it a nice, perfect-looking thing so done (I think).
01:17:535 (1,2,3,4,1) - Feels a bit messy with the sheer number of notes, approach circles, and hitbursts. Moved 2nd combo's 3, maybe this helps?
01:23:160 (1) - Apart from what was mentioned at the beginning about the end sliders, just wanted to comment on how smooth and nice this slider is. PFFT WTFALEGFALUFLAR!? A COMPLIMENT!? This will not do- not one bit!

Probably would be better with a bit faster approach rate. Increased by 1.

[Struggle]

Whoa. Big jump in difficulty from the previous one, especially with those jumps. I'd put this at Hard/Insane just because of those jumps and spacing things.

00:16:598 (1,2) - If you move these notes left a bit, 2,3,4,5 can form a diamond! WHOA DIAMOND! HAHAHAHAH I have no clue wdf you're talking about...
00:22:692 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This section hurts just because it's after a short spinner and you immediately go into jumps with some overlapping circles. SUFFER! >:O *coughs* Anyways, removed spinner and filled in with notes.
00:27:379 (1,2,3) - Not straight! D: (A)Ahuh, and? (B)DEAL WITH IT! (C)You're not str-*coughs hard* That was a friend's work, I think it was meant to take away from the genericness of it all but w/e. Fixed.
00:29:254 (5) - That sound in the middle threw me off because that spot is covered by the hitburst. Probably better not to do that, even though it looks good. Not to be mean, but how did that throw you off? It follows the same triple clap as the other beats in the combo. I would just like another reason as to why that would throw a player off, that's all.
00:32:887 (6) - I don't like this note because it's hard to predict how many repeats you have in that slider and where exactly this note lands, since you use a lot of even-number-of-repeat sliders already. Fair enough, removed 6 and added a repeat to 5.
00:36:754 (1) - Starting here, this map goes crazy with the jumps and larger spacing, and I'd firmly put it in Insane because of that. So even though you have 5 osu! difficulties, you don't really have a difficulty that fits well under Hard. It's like, "Easy, Easy/Normal, Normal, Insane, Insane". I think a good Hard is important, but this is really just an observation.Tried making it easy by reducing jumps/jump-difficulty/jump spacing and increase circle size.
01:20:816 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Is there a pattern I'm missing in these jumps? If not, it should follow a pattern to avoid looking so messy. Omgwtf I just added a pattern. Wooooooooooo.

Ok so there was a lot of use of ctrl+shift+s, I hope it's better now. Had to screw with combo colors at the end because it went from red with the red box in the bg to green with green boxes in the bg. I mean, honestly. >_<

[Wired]

00:04:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This combo shouldn't be here; the player has no sense of time yet, like I said before, and even if they felt the beat from the previous 4 seconds or so, this starts on a blue tick just to mess that up. I liked this part though.
00:07:692 (1) - I don't understand your reasoning for the combos in this whole part. There's a reaso-? I mean. Tried to add a reason, new combo after every upbeat until 00:15:191. That work?
00:15:192 (4,5,6) - 4 isn't lined up with 1,2,3. 5 isn't lined up with 4. And 6 is just not symmetrical. XD Personally I'd use flip and reverse to make 5 a mirror copy of 4. Done with a little shifting. Symmetry. Symmety.
00:20:817 (5,6,7) - The slider's gone by the time 7 appears, just make this symmetrical. Done.
00:24:449 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this symmetrical too. It's not symmetrical?
00:26:793 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not straight. Says yoooou~- It's not... Fixed.
00:33:473 (5) - If you turn off Grid Snap and turn on Distance Snap and hold Ctrl and move this to the left of the endpoint of 4, osu! will snap it perfectly horizontally for you. FU- I wish I new about that sooner! >_< Done.
00:39:566 (3) - Stack this under the previous 5? Done. Adjusted other notes in combo to compensate.
00:40:973 (1,2,3) - Kinda mean antijump here. Umad?
00:50:816 (1) - The partial overlap of the endpoint by the previous hitbursts makes this look sloppy. Moved it down and it's perfectly spaced already... Wonder why I put it up there. :3
01:07:691 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is the gradually increasing spacing intentional? 1,2,3 is closer than 3,4,5,6. Totally intentional... Then why is this green? You may never find out (fixed).
01:17:066 (2) - I'd put the new combo here instead, but I still don't understand your combo scheme, lol. Combo scheme, schmombo... yeah... How about dem crazy stuffs. I moved lots of things around here. Spacing was all over ther !@#$ing place.
01:23:160 (1) - Ooh, another cool slider. I approve of you approving my slider.

The jumps in here are kinda mad too, but meh. I could go through them reasonably well, and it's the hardest diff, so...

[Taiko]

Seemed a bit easy for Oni, but otherwise fine. I don't really mod Taiko that much.

I warned you. And I hate you. /ragemoar