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Renard - Sinisterrrrrrrr

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Duck with Hat
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Montag, 2. Oktober 2017 at 13:07:03

Artist: Renard
Title: Sinisterrrrrrrr
Tags: breakcore lapfox queenston Renard Lapfox Album Because Maybe Dave Remmler
BPM: 220
Filesize: 4860kb
Play Time: 03:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. Wonderwall (6,63 stars, 993 notes)
Download: Renard - Sinisterrrrrrrr
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I reworked some parts on this map.
It's still cancer, but it was the funniest cancer I've ever made
_Meep_
Map is unrankable with only one diff as it is 3 mins
Hectic
Hello there! From queue.

Wonderwall
  • Try to organize decent smooth logical flow in your map, in current state it feels that some objects were placed randomly. Distance snapping can help you with it

    If you are going to rank something in future you should know information about difficulty spread (click)
  1. 00:44:162 (7) - make 2 circles and 1/4 slider instead, it works better. And make space in this pattern bigger (02:11:434 (7) - same)
  2. 01:04:207 (4,5) - weird spacing
  3. 01:08:707 (8,9) - ^
  4. 01:18:389 (4,5) - make space here bigger, it would be easier to read
  5. 01:20:025 - I'm not sure about these streams
  6. 02:27:253 (8) - SV change => New Combo
Hitsound are simple but sound nice :o Good luck with mapping!
Topic Starter
Duck with Hat
Try to organize decent smooth logical flow in your map, in current state it feels that some objects were placed randomly. Distance snapping can help you with it
(I only used Distance Snap, but you are right sometimes I feel like I placed them randomly I really need to change something, could you maybe reply what parts of this map you mean?)
If you are going to rank something in future you should know information about difficulty spread (click) (will do that!)

00:44:162 (7) - make 2 circles and 1/4 slider instead, it works better. And make space in this pattern bigger (02:11:434 (7) - same) (I actually like it this way, but I feel like it's hard to read the first times so I will change it later)
01:04:207 (4,5) - weird spacing (Yeah thought so)
01:08:707 (8,9) - ^ (^)
01:18:389 (4,5) - make space here bigger, it would be easier to read (did that)
01:20:025 - I'm not sure about these streams (easy streams but hard jumps)
02:27:253 (8) - SV change => New Combo (Fixed)


Kudos are yours.
Thanks for the mod!
Topic Starter
Duck with Hat
_Meep_


Already at it!
-Promise
Hi! From modreqs channel

There are some spacings that I don't really understand/ I feel don't follow the song/beat.
E.g.
01:59:298 (1,2,3,4) - There is a pause between notes but the distance stayed the same.Something like what you did for 01:57:116 (1,2,3,4)
02:05:844 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:08:025 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:49:753 (3,4,5,6) - You stacked singles for the entire map 02:48:662 (5,6) no reason to change for here.
02:52:071 (9,10) - ^
02:52:889 (4,5) - ^
03:21:525 (9,10) - Sudden change in spacing again : ^)
02:27:116 (7,1) - ^

Also those death streams in the kiai timings, I understand you mapped them after the lyrics for that part of the song, but it doesn't match with the rest of the map seeing as you mapped the instrumental.

Btw, if you want a good reference for this map, look at the ones Blue Dragon mapped. (Don't steal anything without crediting)
Topic Starter
Duck with Hat

-Fluffy wrote:

Hi! From modreqs channel

There are some spacings that I don't really understand/ I feel don't follow the song/beat.
E.g.
01:59:298 (1,2,3,4) - There is a pause between notes but the distance stayed the same.Something like what you did for 01:57:116 (1,2,3,4) (fixed)
02:05:844 (1,2,3,4) - ^ (^)
02:08:025 (1,2,3,4) - ^ (^)
02:49:753 (3,4,5,6) - You stacked singles for the entire map 02:48:662 (5,6) no reason to change for here. (You're right)
02:52:071 (9,10) - ^ (righto)
02:52:889 (4,5) - ^ (rightorino)
03:21:525 (9,10) - Sudden change in spacing again : ^) (: ^) fixed)
02:27:116 (7,1) - ^ (^)

Also those death streams in the kiai timings, I understand you mapped them after the lyrics for that part of the song, but it doesn't match with the rest of the map seeing as you mapped the instrumental. (My mapping style)

Btw, if you want a good reference for this map, look at the ones Blue Dragon mapped. (Don't steal anything without crediting)
(I'm mapping in my own style no need for a reference)
Reywateil
Wonderwall


00:34:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - unconsistent spacing compared to other note placements
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00:38:571 (1) - place it here, like that https://puu.sh/vaEV6/0875569dee.png , it would make it more readable.
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00:39:662 (3,3,3) - remove them, there's no sound for it.
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01:12:253 (8) - move it a bit down, just for good spacing.
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01:20:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) -
01:24:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1) -
01:24:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1) -
01:24:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1) -

^same^
03:04:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1) -
03:09:253 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1) -
03:13:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1) -
03:17:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) -
I wonder, why did you add them, they are not suitable for that map, really.
(you can keep them if you want, but if map were mine, i'd like to remove them and add some jump parts with sliders)
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02:03:116 (7,8) - anti-jump, rework it.
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I think that's all i noticed weird, but, map was made very well, hard as fck! :D
Hope you will get it ranked! <3
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...i know, we both want to rank our maps, so, if you can, mod my map please :3
Topic Starter
Duck with Hat

stickAcc wrote:

Wonderwall


00:34:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - unconsistent spacing compared to other note placements (Oh I forgot too add a new combo to the jump section, thanks!)
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00:38:571 (1) - place it here, like that https://puu.sh/vaEV6/0875569dee.png , it would make it more readable. (did that!)
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00:39:662 (3,3,3) - remove them, there's no sound for it. (Only removed the second 3rd)
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01:12:253 (8) - move it a bit down, just for good spacing. (Actually I made the space big because the 9th note does have a strong beat)
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01:20:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) -
01:24:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1) -
01:24:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1) -
01:24:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1) -

^same^
03:04:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1) -
03:09:253 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1) -
03:13:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1) -
03:17:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) -
I wonder, why did you add them, they are not suitable for that map, really.
(you can keep them if you want, but if map were mine, i'd like to remove them and add some jump parts with sliders) (For the vocals because maybeeeeeeeeeeee I think it fits and between these EASY streams Kappa are hard circle jumps with sliders)
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02:03:116 (7,8) - anti-jump, rework it. (I moved them a bit together)
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I think that's all i noticed weird, but, map was made very well, hard as fck! :D
Hope you will get it ranked! <3 (Thank you :3)
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...i know, we both want to rank our maps, so, if you can, mod my map please :3
(I'm bad at mapping but I see what I can do :D)
[-PinK-]
eyy , M4M here

Wonderwall
lFirst of all:Map is un-rankable with only 1 diff as the song only contains 3 minutes , and a spread is clearlly needed
now for the actual mod

00:26:844 (1,2,3,4) - i think it would be cool if it was a jump instead of stacking , but it's only personal prefference
00:27:662 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - there is no constant circular flow here , i think it is better if you make the circular flow more constant
00:29:844 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:35:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ circular flow is very important at jumps , concider doing it more constant here
00:37:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i would say the same here but for this part it is okay , i guess
00:43:753 (4,5,6) - you can't actually see where is the circle 6 here , concider position change here
01:17:571 (1,2,3) - there is sound on the red ticks , concider changing the circles for sliders that are held until the red tick
01:32:844 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - are you mapping the stream with the vocals? cause the vocals are held , a slider would be better for this part if you want to map the vocals ... i guess
01:24:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1) - ^

the map is pretty okay , but there is some things that i think it should be changed

well bye~~
Topic Starter
Duck with Hat

[-PinK-] wrote:

eyy , M4M here

Wonderwall
lFirst of all:Map is un-rankable with only 1 diff as the song only contains 3 minutes , and a spread is clearlly needed
now for the actual mod

00:26:844 (1,2,3,4) - i think it would be cool if it was a jump instead of stacking , but it's only personal prefference (Yup personal preference)
00:27:662 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - there is no constant circular flow here , i think it is better if you make the circular flow more constant (Cant write anything to that but no)
00:29:844 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ (nah)
00:35:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ circular flow is very important at jumps , concider doing it more constant here (I think that too)
00:37:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i would say the same here but for this part it is okay , i guess (Yea)
00:43:753 (4,5,6) - you can't actually see where is the circle 6 here , concider position change here (Actually I had testplayers and they saw it without any problems)
01:17:571 (1,2,3) - there is sound on the red ticks , concider changing the circles for sliders that are held until the red tick (I don't think that would work out well)
01:32:844 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - are you mapping the stream with the vocals? cause the vocals are held , a slider would be better for this part if you want to map the vocals ... i guess (A big fat slider would be so unfitting especially my idea of a easy streams and hard jumps would be scratched)
01:24:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1) - ^

the map is pretty okay , but there is some things that i think it should be changed

well bye~~
But yeah thank you for your help!
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