Marika - Mizuiro Stage · forum

_orange

Joined September 2015

_orange 2017-06-06T16:16:23+00:00

hello

[Easy]

00:39:799 (3) - Touching the HP bar
00:44:599 (1) - (minor issue) Also touching the HP bar on 4:3 resolutions
01:18:885 (5) - Slightly touching the HP bar
00:26:085 (2,3) - The flow here isn't really similar to other parts like 00:15:114 (2,3) - this or 00:31:571 (2,3) - this

[Ezreal's Normal]

nice diff didn't find anything

[Mochi's Hard]

00:06:114 (1,2) - Swap NC?
00:07:056 (4) - Why do youu emphasize and stack this but not for 00:04:314 (3,4) - 00:05:685 (3,4) - these?
00:19:228 (3) - Move this a little further from 1 to make the spacing even

a

01:04:314 (2) - I think this shouldn't be emphasized as much, not an important sound imo
01:20:771 (4,1) - The jump here is also quite big, compared to 01:20:256 (3,4) - this spacing

[Swimming Club]

00:22:656 (1) - Slightly touching HP bar
00:43:056 (7,1) - Big jump for a normal vocal sound imo
00:48:714 (1,2,4,6) - You could emphasize these more for the big sound on them
01:20:256 (1,2,3) - It would be nice if you made this into a perfect triangle
01:20:771 (3,4,5) - Here too
01:21:285 (5,1,2,3,4) - 01:22:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - It'd also look better if you made a pentagon with the create polygon circles tool
01:21:971 (3,4,5) - You don't have a lot of flat angles in your map, but this might be hard to fix
Really nice diff! Good aesthetics and didn't find much problems on spacing or flow

GL!

Log Off Now

955 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-06-06T18:21:53+00:00

_orange wrote:
hello

[Easy]

00:39:799 (3) - Touching the HP bar o
00:44:599 (1) - (minor issue) Also touching the HP bar on 4:3 resolutions o
01:18:885 (5) - Slightly touching the HP bar o
00:26:085 (2,3) - The flow here isn't really similar to other parts like 00:15:114 (2,3) - this or 00:31:571 (2,3) - this i think its ok since its still visually similar to those parts you mentioned and its just a slight variation on rotation, i fixed a blanket here tho

[Swimming Club]

00:22:656 (1) - Slightly touching HP bar o
00:43:056 (7,1) - Big jump for a normal vocal sound imo made it a bit smaller
00:48:714 (1,2,4,6) - You could emphasize these more for the big sound on them ok lol i made these even bigger
01:20:256 (1,2,3) - It would be nice if you made this into a perfect triangle yea
01:20:771 (3,4,5) - Here too yea
01:21:285 (5,1,2,3,4) - 01:22:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - It'd also look better if you made a pentagon with the create polygon circles tool maybe, but i really like how this jump pattern plays and i don't really wanna sacrifice playability for a nicer shape here
01:21:971 (3,4,5) - You don't have a lot of flat angles in your map, but this might be hard to fix eh i think it plays ok anyway
Really nice diff! Good aesthetics and didn't find much problems on spacing or flow

GL!

thanks for the mod!

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2017-06-09T16:47:42+00:00

swim
ar could be lower imo, maybe give 8.7 as try?
my main issue with this diff is how the chorus simplifies the 3/4 rhythms too much
00:52:142 (3,4,5) - could at least be something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/YtDJDtEn.jpg
00:54:885 (3,4,5) - triples like that are tilt when song emphasizes blue tick with snare. something more like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/jOlbHOzy.jpg could make sense
00:56:256 (3,4,5) - etc => same as first point
00:57:456 (2,3,4) - similar issue, if you want to keep polarity something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/L1xsajM3.jpg would be nice

00:22:656 (1,2) - 00:23:342 (1,2) - sounds like the same thing but mapped so differently? would be better to make first one spaced cause all other times you do it, like 00:33:628 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
00:14:428 - part overall seems to lack whistles, could be used for guitar/vocal emphasis for example
like 00:19:914 - 00:30:885 (1) - whistles etc

00:34:914 - would make this clickable for drum transition/snare
00:34:914 - similar to chorus, the rhythm here makes no sense, most important thing is middle of a triple
actually I think this could even be used to somehow introduce 3/4 rhythms with something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/rKQJCcYX.jpg, then 00:39:627 - could be mapped the same way or even http://lasse.s-ul.eu/zTZW5Du6.jpg
same happens a lot on spots like 00:42:456 (4) -

mochi
00:36:885 (2) - kinda similar issue as top diff, clicking the least important thing here and passively mapping the main layers is also quite questionable
for this and other similar ones in this part
01:03:114 (3,4,5,6) - think what you did at 00:52:142 (3,4,5,1) - represented 3/4 rhythm much better
01:19:742 (3) - weird rhythm, slider starts on weak drums and then ends on melody you followed before. think a rhythm like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/i5Ri6v51.jpg works better here

ezreal
00:15:456 (3) - would move this to next red tick cause you followed vocals before and after, so http://lasse.s-ul.eu/uNROs3gi.jpg makes more sense
00:20:942 (3) - ^
01:08:599 - rhythm like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/2kqPCmbI.jpg would make more sense tapping wise with emphasis of the song
01:22:142 - ignores most of the song, why not something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/jIvdPRVI.jpg or similar?
01:26:085 (1) - make this start at least 1/2 earlier so it feels actually connected to the sound it maps

easy
00:06:199 - would nc to keep it similar to nc usage over the whole map // 01:17:514 (4) - same
01:09:285 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4) - seems like your 2 measure nc pattern got broken somewhere around here

_Meep_

1,707 posts

Joined April 2014

_Meep_ 2017-06-09T17:55:18+00:00

clothes is changed like your favour
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Rieri

905 posts

Joined December 2014

Rieri 2017-06-13T01:35:26+00:00

Lasse wrote:
ezreal
00:15:456 (3) - would move this to next red tick cause you followed vocals before and after, so http://lasse.s-ul.eu/uNROs3gi.jpg makes more sense
00:20:942 (3) - ^
01:08:599 - rhythm like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/2kqPCmbI.jpg would make more sense tapping wise with emphasis of the song
01:22:142 - ignores most of the song, why not something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/jIvdPRVI.jpg or similar? i think having a little rest here from tapping is okay to have
01:26:085 (1) - make this start at least 1/2 earlier so it feels actually connected to the sound it maps

Thanks for modding!

u p d a t e

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Log Off Now 2017-06-21T13:06:45+00:00

Lasse wrote:
swim
ar could be lower imo, maybe give 8.7 as try? did 8.8 instead
my main issue with this diff is how the chorus simplifies the 3/4 rhythms too much
00:52:142 (3,4,5) - could at least be something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/YtDJDtEn.jpg yea
00:54:885 (3,4,5) - triples like that are tilt when song emphasizes blue tick with snare. something more like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/jOlbHOzy.jpg could make sense tbh i kinda like how it plays, and introducing a double here when it's not been done previously in the map feels a bit weird imo
00:56:256 (3,4,5) - etc => same as first point yea
00:57:456 (2,3,4) - similar issue, if you want to keep polarity something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/L1xsajM3.jpg would be nice yea

00:22:656 (1,2) - 00:23:342 (1,2) - sounds like the same thing but mapped so differently? would be better to make first one spaced cause all other times you do it, like 00:33:628 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - yea
00:14:428 - part overall seems to lack whistles, could be used for guitar/vocal emphasis for example
like 00:19:914 - 00:30:885 (1) - whistles etc yea

00:34:914 - would make this clickable for drum transition/snare yea
00:34:914 - similar to chorus, the rhythm here makes no sense, most important thing is middle of a triple
actually I think this could even be used to somehow introduce 3/4 rhythms with something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/rKQJCcYX.jpg, then 00:39:627 - could be mapped the same way or even http://lasse.s-ul.eu/zTZW5Du6.jpg idk what you mean xd, you used the same timestamp altho i think ik which part you mean
same happens a lot on spots like 00:42:456 (4) -

easy
00:06:199 - would nc to keep it similar to nc usage over the whole map // 01:17:514 (4) - same yea
01:09:285 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4) - seems like your 2 measure nc pattern got broken somewhere around here yea

srry for the super slow reply, ty for the mod. gonna do a lot of work in the top diff later on but i can't atm because no pc

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Log Off Now 2017-10-04T01:01:18+00:00

revive fixing lasse's mod and fixing a few visual spacing/weird overlap issues

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Lasse 2017-10-18T21:12:31+00:00

00:36:371 - why is this part not hitsounded

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Lasse wrote:
00:36:371 - why is this part not hitsounded

im an idiot (also fixed some hitsound errors in proez/mochi's diffs)

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Lasse 2017-10-19T10:30:51+00:00

bubbled

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Mir 2017-10-19T15:37:23+00:00

Swimming Club
- 00:15:114 (4,1) - Would be cute to stack this on the slider tail but.. really minor lol.
- 00:38:428 (3) - Ooo there's a blue tick thing here if you wanna make a reverse 1/4 to capture it? Kinda similar rhythm to 00:41:171 (4,5,6) -
- 00:48:714 (1,2) - SPACE MORE WHERE IS THE EMPHASIS HERE
- 00:49:228 (4,5) - SPACE 5 LESS WHERE IS THE SETUP HERE
- 01:21:285 (5,1,2,3,4) - You can try to make a nicer star here?

Mochi's Hard
- 00:48:714 (1,2) - Owww I wish you'd emphasize the red ticks more here. This rhythm might work? https://i.imgur.com/AKXG1nG.png

Easy
- 00:18:542 (2,2) - This overlap is kinda visible ingame, try to stack the reverse arrow of the later 2 with the previous 2? https://i.imgur.com/LwZHwkL.jpg

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Mir wrote:
Swimming Club
- 00:15:114 (4,1) - Would be cute to stack this on the slider tail but.. really minor lol. ok lol, also fixed some minor visual spacing things in the pattern afterwards
- 00:38:428 (3) - Ooo there's a blue tick thing here if you wanna make a reverse 1/4 to capture it? Kinda similar rhythm to 00:41:171 (4,5,6) - cool idea
- 00:48:714 (1,2) - SPACE MORE WHERE IS THE EMPHASIS HERE i got it
- 00:49:228 (4,5) - SPACE 5 LESS WHERE IS THE SETUP HERE MATE I GOT IT
- 01:21:285 (5,1,2,3,4) - You can try to make a nicer star here? i tried

Easy
- 00:18:542 (2,2) - This overlap is kinda visible ingame, try to stack the reverse arrow of the later 2 with the previous 2? https://i.imgur.com/LwZHwkL.jpg fixed

Solid. Call me for qualification in 18 hours.

thanks!

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Momochikun 2017-10-20T00:20:28+00:00

Alright fixed

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