TRONIC - Chichavino [CatchTheBeat] · forum

Ponchiwi

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

Ponchiwi 2017-07-18T15:28:06+00:00

Benny- wrote:
You need to do something about the spread issue, you can't just pretend it isn't there. If neither razor or jusen wants to add notes then ponchiwi has to remove notes in his platter... And seeing his diffs were fine, you're making this set a whole lot more complicated than it has to be, it's sad to see

Reduced objects in the diff Platter

BoberOfDarkness

1,059 posts

Joined October 2013

BoberOfDarkness 2017-07-23T14:41:35+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
I would just remove the razor diff lol

wut? u drunk, go with memes to Twitter

General stuff

Combo/Objects
Cup: 315/209
Salad: 407/290
Platter: 434/304
Rain by Jusen: 567/307
Rain by Razor: 703/334

so u guys and girls made Ponchi reduced the objects on platter and now it's only 27 combo difference where's between Cup/Salad there's 92 combo and Platter and Rain no.1 there's 133 difference

so

Changing Platters STR to 2 makes would increase the combo difference between Salad and Platter to 109 and between Platter and Rain the gap would be lowered to 51. That works a lot better to me.

Razor's

00:18:280 (4,1) - edgy dash, its 3 grids from the hyper and I am suggesting to add the hyperdash here, one thing is the strong guitar sound and drum hit at 00:18:589 - and 2nd is the 1/1 sound from 00:18:280 - to 00:18:589 -, that calls for hyperdash to me.

00:20:445 (3,4,5) - since there's a vocal line and is weak its better to place 1/1 horizontal slider, works better, plays better.

00:23:228 (4,1) - strong sounds at new stanza suggest placing hyperdash

00:59:104 (2) - instead of stacking you could go with a dash or hyperdash

Jusen's

Change HP to 6 for spread sake

00:32:816 (2,3) - low distance kinda makes this flow stop, you might move (2) left a bit

00:35:909 (3) - NC for consistency with your NCing

Platter

Using slider tick 2 would feel the combo gap between Salad and Jusen's Rain also it feels nicer to play with 2 STR. Also I think it would be more fine (for spread sake) to start using STR2 at 'hard' level of difficulty so it's better introduction to 'insane' diffs but doesn't add big difficulty gap between Platter and Salad.

01:00:883 (3,4) - distance is too high for regular dash jump

01:07:455 (2,1) - flow stop and then 01:07:919 (1,2) - awkward jump you might want to move (1) somewhere between the previous and the next note

01:45:805 (5,6) - u got 2 notes at same time Shout out to modders, using Ai-mod or others apps helps.

Other that those map is totally fine to move it further.

Also mapset is nice to play :>

Ponchiwi

229 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

Ponchiwi 2017-07-23T17:32:46+00:00

BoberOfDarkness wrote:
General stuff

Combo/Objects
Cup: 315/209
Salad: 407/290
Platter: 434/304
Rain by Jusen: 567/307
Rain by Razor: 703/334

so u guys and girls made Ponchi reduced the objects on platter and now it's only 27 combo difference where's between Cup/Salad there's 92 combo and Platter and Rain no.1 there's 133 difference

so

Changing Platters STR to 2 makes would increase the combo difference between Salad and Platter to 109 and between Platter and Rain the gap would be lowered to 51. That works a lot better to me. Could you tell me how do it? :c

Platter

Using slider tick 2 would feel the combo gap between Salad and Jusen's Rain also it feels nicer to play with 2 STR. Also I think it would be more fine (for spread sake) to start using STR2 at 'hard' level of difficulty so it's better introduction to 'insane' diffs but doesn't add big difficulty gap between Platter and Salad. Help with this :c idk what it means "STR" and explain me this more in detail

01:00:883 (3,4) - distance is too high for regular dash jump Done

01:07:455 (2,1) - flow stop and then 01:07:919 (1,2) - awkward jump you might want to move (1) somewhere between the previous and the next note Done

01:45:805 (5,6) - u got 2 notes at same time Shout out to modders, using Ai-mod or others apps helps. Done

Other that those map is totally fine to move it further.

Also mapset is nice to play :>

BoberOfDarkness

1,059 posts

Joined October 2013

BoberOfDarkness 2017-07-23T18:41:42+00:00

Explained in PM

Kimitakari

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Kimitakari 2017-07-24T11:34:39+00:00

From my Modding Queue

Cup

01:21:682 (1) - x:352 because there's no movement.

Platter

01:40:470 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - x:232 I think.

I love this Platter <3

Jusen's Light Rain

00:21:682 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'd make more movement. Your pattern feels no movement, well, almost. Here hod I made.
00:41:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Feels like it should be at x:452
00:51:218 (3,1,2,3,4) - x:288
01:14:878 (2,3) - I don't really like this pattern D: you can make this pattern and move it to x:208 (If you don't like that idea then this). Then just use Ctrl+H starting at 01:15:342 until the end of the song.

That's all I can possible find.

Razor's Ke Patinen Los Dashes

00:18:589 (1) - Big spacing here. x:416
00:36:836 (3) - Same as on the first suggestion. x:432
00:39:620 (1,2) - Move these objects to x:208. Once again, big spacing
01:00:342 (3) - Big spacing. x:160

Basically I don't like these big spacing you got. I pointed them everywhere when I was checking your map. Other than that cool diff Razor once again.

That's all for me! Good luck with ranking!

Ponchiwi

229 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

Ponchiwi 2017-07-24T15:43:56+00:00

Nelly wrote:
From my Modding Queue

Cup
01:21:682 (1) - x:352 because there's no movement. I liked giving the player a rest at the end of the solo D:
Platter
01:40:470 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - x:232 I think. I would like to leave it to emphasize more the end of the song
I love this Platter <3 Muchas gracias ;-;
That's all for me! Good luck with ranking!

And thanks for trying to modding these diff, I guess... all is in order,

Cowboy

472 posts

Joined November 2011

Cowboy 2017-07-24T15:57:33+00:00

Everything fixed on Bober's mod, thanks dude.

Nelly wrote:
From my Modding Queue

Jusen's Light Rain
00:21:682 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'd make more movement. Your pattern feels no movement, well, almost. Here hod I made.(I really like the shape of the stream, I prefer to keep it, but thanks for your suggestion.)
00:41:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Feels like it should be at x:452 (Done.)
00:51:218 (3,1,2,3,4) - x:288 (Did some changes. and moved a bit.)
01:14:878 (2,3) - I don't really like this pattern D: you can make this pattern and move it to x:208 (If you don't like that idea then this). Then just use Ctrl+H starting at 01:15:342 until the end of the song. (I think that an easier solution would be to tilt the slider a bit towards the next note, giving a more comfortable and clean hdash, that's what I'll do, but thanks for both suggestions.)
That's all I can possible find.
That's all for me! Good luck with ranking!

Thanks both for your mods, was helpful.

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@Razor, remeber to add the green lines to reduce the sound of the end of the spinner, thanks.

Benita

604 posts

Joined February 2014

Benita 2017-08-14T12:03:59+00:00

Finally back to do a recheck

Platter
01:05:445 (1,2) - not sure what i feel about this antiflow, i think it might be too much

Jusen
00:09:620 (3,1) - if this is gonna be a hyper, then 00:04:671 (3,1) - 00:07:146 (3,1) - these should also be hypers because they all have finishers in the song and the melody is kind of resetting
00:31:888 (3,4) - you could emphasise the snares better here with some dashes or just generally more movement, just a curve feels kinda boring. Same applies to similar parts
00:56:939 (1) - 01:52:610 (1) - Please map the vocals, the slider ends are placed on pretty strong beats which I feel should be emphasised with a dash

Razor
I absolutely 100% disagree to the usage of extended sliders, firstly because it sounds and plays edgy as fuck and secondly because you're not consistent with it. Examples:
00:27:249 (1,2,3) - all extended sliders then a 1/1 break between 00:28:177 (4,1) - while the vocal is just the same.
00:34:671 (1,2,3,4) - what in the world are you following here? 00:34:671 (1) - guitar while these 00:35:290 (3,4) - vocals? Maybe you're solely following drums but considering you're constantly shifting between following vocals/drums it's hard to tell and just looks and plays weirdly
00:39:620 (1,2,3,4,1) - Then take a look at this compared to the way you mapped the above. Exact same sounds but it's totally differently mapped.

I won't mod it as it is nor will I push this set forward considering the quality of the top diff.

The other diffs are fine

Ponchiwi

229 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

Ponchiwi 2017-08-14T15:22:42+00:00

Benny- wrote:
Finally back to do a recheck

Platter
01:05:445 (1,2) - not sure what i feel about this antiflow, i think it might be too much I reduced the distance so that antiflow isn't very hard, even if can be caught without dash, but like is platter, players who are learning will feel the need to press dash, but I think it is the pattern now is simpler

The other diffs are fine <3

Ponchiwi

229 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

Ponchiwi 2017-08-14T19:56:14+00:00

Talking with Razor we came to the agreement that it would be better to remove his diff,

In case anyone want to play it, i'll leave the link in the description as extra diff to be able to download it.

Cowboy

472 posts

Joined November 2011

Cowboy 2017-08-14T20:06:01+00:00

Benny- wrote:
Finally back to do a recheck

Jusen
00:09:620 (3,1) - if this is gonna be a hyper, then 00:04:671 (3,1) - 00:07:146 (3,1) - these should also be hypers because they all have finishers in the song and the melody is kind of resetting (I think it could be, but I do not like it so much, since I see something "forced" to obtain the hdashes, in addition it is a "light rain" abstains from those hdashes, being the beginning of the song.)
00:31:888 (3,4) - you could emphasise the snares better here with some dashes or just generally more movement, just a curve feels kinda boring. Same applies to similar parts (Done.)
00:56:939 (1) - 01:52:610 (1) - Please map the vocals, the slider ends are placed on pretty strong beats which I feel should be emphasised with a dash (I would like to keep these sliders, I really like them, I know there are sounds between them, but I want to see more opinions about it, thanks.)

The other diffs are fine

Thanks for the mod, was helpful.

update

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Benita

604 posts

Joined February 2014

Benita 2017-08-15T17:23:42+00:00

ok, let's go

MBomb

MBomb 2017-08-24T20:00:46+00:00

Hello, sorry for long wait.

[General]

Just wondering why the bubble was popped? I assume it's some minor change, but it's probably best to note why to make sure.
HP6 on the rain would be nice for spread.

[Cup]

00:07:764 (2) - This section in general is feeling quite repetitive pattern wise, I think moving this to like x:48 would provide some variety, I feel.
00:11:166 (1) - Some higher distancing to this would be nice considering the introduction of the drums here, x:192 maybe?
00:24:775 (1) - Higher distancing to this, especially considering you used a finish hitsound, would be nice. x:352 works well.
00:27:249 (1) - Same with this one, x:96 feels good here.
00:29:723 (1) - Would be nice to have higher distancing on this too for the stronger vocal.
00:35:290 (2) - This one feels a bit big of a distance right now, a slight reduction such as x:416 would feel good.
00:42:094 (1) - Would be nice to have a bit more distancing for emphasis on the start of the kiai, try x:224.
00:44:568 (1) - Higher distance for the finish hitsound would be good.
00:46:424 (3) - Would be nice to have a bit of a slowdown into the direction change here, try x:272.
00:48:280 (3) - NC here for consistency.
00:49:517 (1) - Higher distancing for more emphasis on this vocal and finish sound would be good, x:224 maybe?
00:56:939 (1) - This is very small distancing to this right now, higher distance to emphasise the end of the kiai would be good, try x:272.
01:21:682 (1) - Considering the strength increase at the end of the section, a higher distance like x:352 would be good.
01:30:960 (1,2) - More emphasis on the start of the kiai would be nice with a higher distance would be nice, move this section a tiny bit to the right, like x:352.
01:37:764 (3) - NC here for consistency.
01:39:001 (1) - Again, higher distance for emphasis on this vocal would be good, try x:384.
01:41:475 (1) - More emphasis on the start of kiai would be good, try x:320.
01:47:661 (3) - NC here for consistency.
01:48:898 (1) - Try more emphasis on this vocal with x:48.
01:52:610 (4) - NC on that one would be good too.

[Salad]

00:09:311 (2) - Try x:112, a higher distancing for the change in guitar here could be nice.
00:13:641 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm, dash density in this section feels a little high, I'd recommend getting rid of a couple of dashes by reducing this section to like x:288, to make it easier for a salad player.
00:15:496 (2) - Slightly higher distancing to make the dash more obvious for a salad player would be good, try x:368.
00:18:589 (1,2,3,4) - Again, maybe better to have a lower dash density on this section, it's a moderately calm section of the song, so maybe a good relaxing period for the player. Ctrl+H on 1 and moving it to x:320, and then move 2 to x:320, 3 to x:392, and 4 to x:320. I feel this pattern fits really well here and helps to give nice strong distances that aren't dashes to these strong notes.
00:20:445 (3,4) - Increasing distancing slightly to make sure the player knows to dash here is nice, try x:336 on this section.
00:33:434 (1,2,3,4) - Same as earlier with lowering dash density a bit, try ctrl+H on 1 and moving it to x:240, and then 2 on x:192, 3 on x:128 and 4 on x:192.
00:39:620 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Dash pattern here is inconsistent with earlier patterns. I'd say move 00:39:620 (1,2) - to x:88, and then 00:40:238 (3,4) - to x:472, and then 5 to x:80.
00:42:094 (1) - Kinda difficult to distinguish this as a dash, considering the distance is so much lower than other 1/2 dashes throughout the map, try x:336 for more consistency.
00:44:568 (1) - Try a bit of a higher distance to make sure the player knows to dash to this, try x:352.
00:51:991 (1) - Dash to this would be nice for consistency with previous dash patterns, x:496 is a nice way to achieve that.
00:58:795 (3) - Not really happy with how big the distance is to the next note here, maybe reduce it slightly by moving it to the right, like x:192.
01:01:888 (1) - Again, pretty small distancing to this for a 1/2 dash, would try something bigger like x:168.
01:06:836 (1) - Current jump to this one is a little small, try x:128.
01:11:785 (1) - This one could also do with a slight increase, x:352 works nicely.
01:14:259 (1,2,3) - Hmm, distancing here feels a little odd because you speed up to hit 2, and then slow down to hit 3, and then speed up to hit the next slider. A better movement would be if you curve 1 a little more vertically, and then move it to x:80, and then 2 on x:144 and 3 on x:208, and 01:15:342 (1) - on x:272.
01:16:269 (3,4) - I think a ctrl+H on this and then moving it to x:224 would make the pattern more interesting here.
01:19:208 (5) - Moving this to x:432 to make the dash more obvious, and also, add an NC for consistency.
01:20:135 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
01:20:445 (3) - Add NC for consistency.
01:20:754 (1) - Remove NC for consitency.
01:21:682 (1) - Try x:80, to emphasise this end of the section a bit more.
01:38:382 (4,1) - Movement to 4 is a bit difficult right now, maybe move this section to x:240?
01:43:950 (1) - Slight distance increase would work nicely, x:416 is good.

Really nice salad, I love it.

[Platter]

00:02:507 (1) - Kinda awkward shape to start the map with, maybe just try ctrl+H and then x:416, to avoid the starting movement of the map feeling so strange to play.
01:08:383 (2,3,4) - Really difficult distance to this right now for a normal dash in a platter, maybe try reducing it to like x:224?
01:13:331 (2) - Hmm, maybe try a timeline like this? There's a pretty strong guitar note on the 1/2 which feels skipped over right now.
01:15:342 (1) - A little too strong of a 1/2 distance here, try x:400.

I really love your platter style like always! <3

[Rain]

00:06:836 (2,3,1) - HDash to 1 here would be nice for the strong change in section there, maybe put 2 on x:376, and 3 on x:112.
00:14:568 (3,1) - Try moving this a tiny bit to the right, like x:416, to avoid the HDash feeling forced against the wall.
00:20:445 (2) - Some higher dash distancing to and from this would feel nice with the music to me, maybe try x:144?
00:34:362 (3,1) - Try moving this section to x:400 to avoid the HDash being forced against the wall.
00:35:290 (2) - Stronger dash distances again would fit well, maybe x:280.
01:13:331 (1) - This slider kinda goes over a strong guitar sound on the 1/2 which I think would sound nice if it was mapped to.
01:21:372 (4,1) - A HDash to 4 could be nice for this buildup into the last note here, maybe try x:144 on this section?
01:32:197 (2) - Movement out of this slider feels a little odd due to the speedup afterwards followed by a direction change. Try moving it to x:112?
01:45:187 (1) - Pretty strong HDash here, try x:464 to reduce the intensity slightly.

Set seems good, call me back.

Cowboy

472 posts

Joined November 2011

Cowboy 2017-08-24T22:09:57+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
Hello, sorry for long wait.

[General]

Just wondering why the bubble was popped? I assume it's some minor change, but it's probably best to note why to make sure.
HP6 on the rain would be nice for spread. (Done.)

[Rain]

00:06:836 (2,3,1) - HDash to 1 here would be nice for the strong change in section there, maybe put 2 on x:376, and 3 on x:112.
00:14:568 (3,1) - Try moving this a tiny bit to the right, like x:416, to avoid the HDash feeling forced against the wall.
00:20:445 (2) - Some higher dash distancing to and from this would feel nice with the music to me, maybe try x:144?
00:34:362 (3,1) - Try moving this section to x:400 to avoid the HDash being forced against the wall.
00:35:290 (2) - Stronger dash distances again would fit well, maybe x:280.
01:13:331 (1) - This slider kinda goes over a strong guitar sound on the 1/2 which I think would sound nice if it was mapped to.
01:21:372 (4,1) - A HDash to 4 could be nice for this buildup into the last note here, maybe try x:144 on this section?
01:32:197 (2) - Movement out of this slider feels a little odd due to the speedup afterwards followed by a direction change. Try moving it to x:112?
01:45:187 (1) - Pretty strong HDash here, try x:464 to reduce the intensity slightly.

(Everything is fixed, thanks for the mod.)
Set seems good, call me back.

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Ponchiwi

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Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

Ponchiwi 2017-08-24T22:39:50+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
Hello, sorry for long wait.

[General]

Just wondering why the bubble was popped? I assume it's some minor change, but it's probably best to note why to make sure.
HP6 on the rain would be nice for spread. About this, the spread had other diff with more stars, like a rain, and this diff from Jusen was going to be a "Light Rain"

[Cup]

00:07:764 (2) - This section in general is feeling quite repetitive pattern wise, I think moving this to like x:48 would provide some variety, I feel.
00:11:166 (1) - Some higher distancing to this would be nice considering the introduction of the drums here, x:192 maybe?
00:24:775 (1) - Higher distancing to this, especially considering you used a finish hitsound, would be nice. x:352 works well.
00:27:249 (1) - Same with this one, x:96 feels good here.
00:29:723 (1) - Would be nice to have higher distancing on this too for the stronger vocal.
00:35:290 (2) - This one feels a bit big of a distance right now, a slight reduction such as x:416 would feel good.
00:42:094 (1) - Would be nice to have a bit more distancing for emphasis on the start of the kiai, try x:224.
00:44:568 (1) - Higher distance for the finish hitsound would be good.
00:46:424 (3) - Would be nice to have a bit of a slowdown into the direction change here, try x:272.
00:48:280 (3) - NC here for consistency.
00:49:517 (1) - Higher distancing for more emphasis on this vocal and finish sound would be good, x:224 maybe?
00:56:939 (1) - This is very small distancing to this right now, higher distance to emphasise the end of the kiai would be good, try x:272.
01:21:682 (1) - Considering the strength increase at the end of the section, a higher distance like x:352 would be good.
01:30:960 (1,2) - More emphasis on the start of the kiai would be nice with a higher distance would be nice, move this section a tiny bit to the right, like x:352.
01:37:764 (3) - NC here for consistency.
01:39:001 (1) - Again, higher distance for emphasis on this vocal would be good, try x:384.
01:41:475 (1) - More emphasis on the start of kiai would be good, try x:320.
01:47:661 (3) - NC here for consistency.
01:48:898 (1) - Try more emphasis on this vocal with x:48.
01:52:610 (4) - NC on that one would be good too.

Fixed up

[Salad]

00:09:311 (2) - Try x:112, a higher distancing for the change in guitar here could be nice.
00:13:641 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm, dash density in this section feels a little high, I'd recommend getting rid of a couple of dashes by reducing this section to like x:288, to make it easier for a salad player. umm i did it, but i saved this dash00:14:878 (1) -
00:15:496 (2) - Slightly higher distancing to make the dash more obvious for a salad player would be good, try x:368.
00:18:589 (1,2,3,4) - Again, maybe better to have a lower dash density on this section, it's a moderately calm section of the song, so maybe a good relaxing period for the player. Ctrl+H on 1 and moving it to x:320, and then move 2 to x:320, 3 to x:392, and 4 to x:320. I feel this pattern fits really well here and helps to give nice strong distances that aren't dashes to these strong notes.
00:20:445 (3,4) - Increasing distancing slightly to make sure the player knows to dash here is nice, try x:336 on this section.
00:33:434 (1,2,3,4) - Same as earlier with lowering dash density a bit, try ctrl+H on 1 and moving it to x:240, and then 2 on x:192, 3 on x:128 and 4 on x:192. same here
00:39:620 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Dash pattern here is inconsistent with earlier patterns. I'd say move 00:39:620 (1,2) - to x:88, and then 00:40:238 (3,4) - to x:472, and then 5 to x:80.
00:42:094 (1) - Kinda difficult to distinguish this as a dash, considering the distance is so much lower than other 1/2 dashes throughout the map, try x:336 for more consistency.
00:44:568 (1) - Try a bit of a higher distance to make sure the player knows to dash to this, try x:352.
00:51:991 (1) - Dash to this would be nice for consistency with previous dash patterns, x:496 is a nice way to achieve that.
00:58:795 (3) - Not really happy with how big the distance is to the next note here, maybe reduce it slightly by moving it to the right, like x:192.
01:01:888 (1) - Again, pretty small distancing to this for a 1/2 dash, would try something bigger like x:168.
01:06:836 (1) - Current jump to this one is a little small, try x:128.
01:11:785 (1) - This one could also do with a slight increase, x:352 works nicely.
01:14:259 (1,2,3) - Hmm, distancing here feels a little odd because you speed up to hit 2, and then slow down to hit 3, and then speed up to hit the next slider. A better movement would be if you curve 1 a little more vertically, and then move it to x:80, and then 2 on x:144 and 3 on x:208, and 01:15:342 (1) - on x:272.
01:16:269 (3,4) - I think a ctrl+H on this and then moving it to x:224 would make the pattern more interesting here.
01:19:208 (5) - Moving this to x:432 to make the dash more obvious, and also, add an NC for consistency.
01:20:135 (1) - Remove NC for consistency.
01:20:445 (3) - Add NC for consistency.
01:20:754 (1) - Remove NC for consitency.
01:21:682 (1) - Try x:80, to emphasise this end of the section a bit more.
01:38:382 (4,1) - Movement to 4 is a bit difficult right now, maybe move this section to x:240?
01:43:950 (1) - Slight distance increase would work nicely, x:416 is good.

Really nice salad, I love it.

Fixed up

[Platter]

00:02:507 (1) - Kinda awkward shape to start the map with, maybe just try ctrl+H and then x:416, to avoid the starting movement of the map feeling so strange to play.
01:08:383 (2,3,4) - Really difficult distance to this right now for a normal dash in a platter, maybe try reducing it to like x:224?
01:13:331 (2) - Hmm, maybe try a timeline like this? There's a pretty strong guitar note on the 1/2 which feels skipped over right now.
01:15:342 (1) - A little too strong of a 1/2 distance here, try x:400.

I really love your platter style like always! <3

Fixed up

Set seems good, call me back.