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Nymph
:P Hi Nymph here and doing a M4M from your queue~

General:
nothing found~

Easy:
00:00:501 (1) - Maybe it is totally unecessary, but I think you can silence the slider part before 00:00:501, sounds really nice for me~
00:09:073 (1) - ...sorry for nazi mod, but I think maybe it is more beautiful not to use straight slider here imo. won't mention this again...
00:37:394 (2) - I'd say I prefer you don't stack this one.
and maybe add a spinner at the end? seems to be a choice.
And I really think this diff need some more hitsounds, maybe soft whitsle or normal clap, current seems really lack of hitsounds.

Normal:
00:38:037 (4) - Maybe add a note here? I think it can connect the rhythm better.
00:36:323 (1) - I personlly don't like the clap here...sounds little sudden for me, I prefer to delete this clap and add a soft whistle on the head of the slider on 00:36:537, just suggestion imo.

Hard:
00:12:930 (4) - the finish sounds weird...I suggest to delete it.
00:45:522 (1) - maybe repeat this slider once?
01:12:308 (6) - ...storyboard hit clap here? I don't really think it is good, little weird for me to hear*.*. won't mention this again.

Insane:
我个人真心听不惯这STORYBOARD CLAP。。
00:45:522 (6) - suggest this slider repeat once too
00:52:808 (1) - I think this don't need a finish maybe

Kotori:

00:55:379 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - only part I missed...maybe I am weak but think really confused a little..
kinka like the way you used claps :P

that is all for my m4m, thanks~
Makar
Hello. Mod4Mod from your queue

[General]
-Why no Kiai? :(
-I think you should have more people check the timing on this. It seems wrong how it is now (just listen 25% on the beginning on Hard/Insane :s)
-I really liked the hitsounds in Kotori diff, consider using them in the others?

[Easy]
00:03:930 (4) - Add soft (as in lowered volume maybe?) finish at the end of this slider?
00:09:930 (2) - I don't think you should stack sliders in easy like this since it can be confusing...
00:31:787 (4) - ^
00:37:394 (2,3,1) - Overall I think the timing of this part is hard for beginners to hit. Would be better if it wasn't stacked.
00:47:236 (2) - Consider only using one repeat? since the slider is short the player may not expect another repeat.

[Normal]
00:15:073 (2) - (Nazi) use grid level 4 and move this down a grid?
00:32:252 (1) - I think this note should be snapped to the other offset

[Hard]
00:09:930 (5) - NC and remove the one at 00:10:787 (1) - ?
00:35:680 (6) - NC?
00:45:522 (1) - Don't stack this? It hard to read imo. Maybe it's because of the NC there...

[Taiko]
Seems fine while test-playing, not a taiko modder though so :s

[Insane]
00:23:966 (2) - I confused this to be on the white tick while playing because of the spacing (it's 1.12 spacing if you move it)

[Kotori]
-Nice hitsounds : o
-Overall nice difficulty. I just think you have to many triples is all...

Nice map :3
tutuhaha
OTL这个坑总算要填了么,哦好开心OTL....

Kotori
00:02:859 (1) - 太近了,前面的距离是1.56Xand1.59X,这里也调一下怎样?后面的4和5要摆造型的话就拉开点没关系
00:07:359 (3) - 这边还是按照DS摆如何0.0? 00:07:787 (6)保持原样
00:22:787 (1,2) - 真心觉得这俩note听的真别扭...要保留的话干脆改成1 slider?
00:29:644 (1,2) - ^
00:37:394 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得这里反过来,越摆越近比越摆越远好
00:45:522 - 00:55:165 这段的clap真的觉得太小声了.......听着感觉缺了一拍..要不然去搞个noraml的的原版音效然后弄成
noraml-hisfinish一起加?
01:07:808 (1,2) - 依照前面的话是越摆越远的对吧?这里也摆远点?把1向下移一点23456向上移一点然后7不变
01:12:308 (1) - 还是太近了呦
01:15:093 (1) - 如果你是想摆五角星,那么它歪了,如果你不是想摆五角星,那么我会说其实摆五角星比较好看╮( ̄▽ ̄")╭ (Slap
01:22:899 (1) - 看起来太近了,还是摆远点吧
Insane
我还是觉得以前的那个音效比较好听,现在这个感觉缺了很多拍,听起来很不舒服

00:31:573 (3) - 会不会离2太近了?
01:13:165 (1) - 歪掉了的五角星~3和5还要往下一点

Hard
我还是觉得以前的那个音效比较好听,现在这个感觉缺了很多拍,听起来很不舒服X2
00:31:359 (1) - 这个调一下摆在4和5中间怎么样,就是斜一点
00:38:037 (X) - 总觉得这里少了一拍
00:39:752 (X) - ^
00:59:665 (2) - NC从这里开始比较好

Noraml
00:28:787 (1) - ...节奏没错就是摆的太挤了
00:49:808 (2) - 这个直接拉到中间然后拉成直线怎样?
01:23:444 (2) - 这个距离太远了,拉近点但是不要按照DS因为DS太近了OTL........

Easy
00:37:394 (2) - 这里这样,在这里加一个circle然后在00:38:252加一个circle
然后把00:39:109和00:39:966直接拉成一条slider怎样?
00:59:664 (X) - 加finish
01:10:808 (X) - ^
01:14:236 (X) - ^
01:17:665 (4) - ^
01:21:093 (1) - ^

mod到easy我才发现可能01:10:808 - 01:23:792多一点normal的finish会比较好听?
哦也加油吧!
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

hoLysoup wrote:

SPOILER
hihi~!
all suggestions~

[Overall]
add 'OP' and/or 'Opening' to tags no

[Kotori]
This is the only difficulty that ends differently from the previous. Maybe end on 01:23:792? and add finish at that point as well?

[Insane]
mm i think OD 7 fits better imo since kotori's is harder. But it's your choice of course~ no
00:11:966 (4,5,6) - Because earlier there were jumps bigger than this spacing so I missed it first play through. Mm.. maybe New Combo on 4 so it's more distinct? and then NC here: 00:12:501 (6) no, there is no spacing change
00:24:501 (4) - and New combo here to separate from the previous rhythm no
00:31:359 (2) - imo NC here instead no
00:38:037 (2,3) - mm with AR 8, can't tell if it's a slider first or circle first. Maybe dont' stack? no, that's quite easy to tell
00:57:951 (1) - remove NC no
01:11:022 (2,3) - maybe dont' stack the slider (3) cause it's hard to read no
01:23:444 (1) - remove NC? no

[Hard]
I suggest making combos a bit shorter in this perhaps? no, they are generally based on lyrics and some are for patterns
00:10:787 (1,2) - but I don't think this short combo is necessary so remove NC? for pattern
00:45:522 (1) - mm maybe dont' stack the tiny slider at the same spot. just because it's so small it's hard to see when the hit 300 is there: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/144814 it's already there for a while before the first 300 burst

[Normal]
00:09:073 (2) - maybe repeat this once and add a circle at 00:09:716? no

really really good mapset
and the song's cute :3
thx for your time, nothing changed though


Hinacle wrote:

Hi~></ M4M?

SPOILER
All of them just a suggestion



<Easy>
  1. 00:03:930 (4) - add finish at end? no, too often/loud for me
  2. 00:52:808 (4) - new combo? no
  3. 01:21:093 (1) - Remove new combo?no

<Normal>
  1. HP+1? [/color]
  2. 00:04:787 (1) - add finish at beginning? no
  3. 00:22:359 (1) - Remove new combo? no
  4. 00:31:359 (1) - Remove new combo? ok

<Hard>
  1. HP+1? [/color]
  2. 00:06:501 (6) - new combo? no
  3. 00:35:252 (5) - ^ ok
  4. 00:42:951 (1) - add finish at beginning? no
  5. 00:43:808 (1) - ^ no
  6. 00:44:665 (1) - ^ no

<Insane>
  1. 01:14:236 (5) - new combo? no
  2. 01:14:665 (1) - Remove new combo? no
  3. 01:23:444 (1) - ^ no

<Kotori>
  1. 00:33:752 (4) - ctrl+J? I think that it look better
I like Kotori diff>w</

sorry noob mod T-T
fixed some, thx


Nymph_ wrote:

SPOILER
:P Hi Nymph here and doing a M4M from your queue~

General:
nothing found~

Easy:
00:00:501 (1) - Maybe it is totally unecessary, but I think you can silence the slider part before 00:00:501, sounds really nice for me~ 的确没必要
00:09:073 (1) - ...sorry for nazi mod, but I think maybe it is more beautiful not to use straight slider here imo. won't mention this again... pattern需要
00:37:394 (2) - I'd say I prefer you don't stack this one. 不
and maybe add a spinner at the end? seems to be a choice. 长度要多长很蛋疼 无限违和
And I really think this diff need some more hitsounds, maybe soft whitsle or normal clap, current seems really lack of hitsounds. note数量不多 太花哨没必要

Normal:
00:38:037 (4) - Maybe add a note here? I think it can connect the rhythm better. 要加也是在后面加 不过考虑normal难度就没动
00:36:323 (1) - I personlly don't like the clap here...sounds little sudden for me, I prefer to delete this clap and add a soft whistle on the head of the slider on 00:36:537, just suggestion imo. 不了

Hard:
00:12:930 (4) - the finish sounds weird...I suggest to delete it. ?
00:45:522 (1) - maybe repeat this slider once? 不是跟的vocal
01:12:308 (6) - ...storyboard hit clap here? I don't really think it is good, little weird for me to hear*.*. won't mention this again. 嘛

Insane:
我个人真心听不惯这STORYBOARD CLAP。。 不是说不提了么
00:45:522 (6) - suggest this slider repeat once too 不是跟的vocal
00:52:808 (1) - I think this don't need a finish maybe 这是需要的 请参见前面/后面

Kotori:

00:55:379 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - only part I missed...maybe I am weak but think really confused a little..
kinka like the way you used claps :P

that is all for my m4m, thanks~
没改 还是谢了


Makar8000 wrote:

SPOILER
Hello. Mod4Mod from your queue

[General]
-Why no Kiai? :( I don't like KIAI
-I think you should have more people check the timing on this. It seems wrong how it is now (just listen 25% on the beginning on Hard/Insane :s) yeah, I know that and I'm trying to.
-I really liked the hitsounds in Kotori diff, consider using them in the others? I think mine is not so bad ;_;

[Easy]
00:03:930 (4) - Add soft (as in lowered volume maybe?) finish at the end of this slider? there should be a norma-hitnormal, so lower the volume is not a correct way. and finish is too often for me.
00:09:930 (2) - I don't think you should stack sliders in easy like this since it can be confusing... it's fine
00:31:787 (4) - ^ ^
00:37:394 (2,3,1) - Overall I think the timing of this part is hard for beginners to hit. Would be better if it wasn't stacked. ^
00:47:236 (2) - Consider only using one repeat? since the slider is short the player may not expect another repeat. no

[Normal]
00:15:073 (2) - (Nazi) use grid level 4 and move this down a grid? k
00:32:252 (1) - I think this note should be snapped to the other offset well I'm looking for a better timing.

[Hard]
00:09:930 (5) - NC and remove the one at 00:10:787 (1) - ? no
00:35:680 (6) - NC? fixed in earlier mod
00:45:522 (1) - Don't stack this? It hard to read imo. Maybe it's because of the NC there... no

[Taiko]
Seems fine while test-playing, not a taiko modder though so :s

[Insane]
00:23:966 (2) - I confused this to be on the white tick while playing because of the spacing (it's 1.12 spacing if you move it) that's the 2nd time you see this pattern.

[Kotori]
-Nice hitsounds : o
-Overall nice difficulty. I just think you have to many triples is all...

Nice map :3
fixed some. thx
KanbeKotori
Kurai
Hey :3

General :
  1. The width of your video is too large. The max allowed size of a video is 800x600. Your video is 848x480. You have to resize it.
Easy :
  1. You have 37 unsnapped notes >:3
  2. 00:15:073 (5) - Add a new combo mark, it's justified by the vocals.
Normal :
  1. 00:30:501 (1) - I don't really like this slider which is under the previous slider's track. Make it more visible please.
Hard :
  1. 00:45:533 (1) - Even if it's justified by the music, this 1/6 is not a good idea in this difficulty because it may be hard to understand for some players. A circle should be enough.
Taiko :
  1. Rename it Taiko Oni please
  2. You have forgotten to end the kiai time
Insane :
  1. 00:12:073 - Instead of SBing the clap, you should add a circle (or make a slider) with a clap here. Otherwise, it looks kinda weird
  2. 00:24:073 - Same as above
Kotori :
  1. Tags are not the sames as the other difficulties (Ami & Yumi are missing).
That's all, nice map <3
Topic Starter
Colin Hou
@Kurai I'm trying to find a better source for the video. hope it'd not take long, and sorry for no-replying so long time.
Topic Starter
Colin Hou
oops graved, revive!
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

Colin Hou wrote:

oops graved, revive!
[stress] looking for better video
hoLysoup
沒有再做了嗎?
:<
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

KuraiPettan wrote:

Hey :3

General :
  1. The width of your video is too large. The max allowed size of a video is 800x600. Your video is 848x480. You have to resize it.
Done!

Easy :
  1. You have 37 unsnapped notes >:3
  2. 00:15:073 (5) - Add a new combo mark, it's justified by the vocals.
Done!

Normal :
  1. 00:30:501 (1) - I don't really like this slider which is under the previous slider's track. Make it more visible please.
Done!

Hard :
  1. 00:45:533 (1) - Even if it's justified by the music, this 1/6 is not a good idea in this difficulty because it may be hard to understand for some players. A circle should be enough.
I'd like to keep this.

Taiko :
  1. Rename it Taiko Oni please
  2. You have forgotten to end the kiai time
Done!

Insane :
  1. 00:12:073 - Instead of SBing the clap, you should add a circle (or make a slider) with a clap here. Otherwise, it looks kinda weird
  2. 00:24:073 - Same as above
Done!

Kotori :
  1. Tags are not the sames as the other difficulties (Ami & Yumi are missing).
Done!

That's all, nice map <3
Kurai
I thought I was going to bubble it but here are some suggestions you should take into consideration before >w<

Insane
  1. 01:11:246 (3) - This slider is hidden by the previous slider which doesn't make the patern easily readable. Consider making its track and end more visible please ~
Kotori
  1. Those inherited sections with 30% volume don't make the objects clearly audible, which actually frustrates me >w<
    Consider using 40~50% instead, they will be more audible and it will be more agreable to hear :3
  2. Maybe use slider tick 2 like in the other difficulties ? It would keep consistency throughout the mapset and it doesn't sound bad at all :3
Fix whatever you want and I'll bubble ~ (finally >~<)
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

KuraiPettan wrote:

I thought I was going to bubble it but here are some suggestions you should take into consideration before >w<

Insane
  1. 01:11:246 (3) - This slider is hidden by the previous slider which doesn't make the patern easily readable. Consider making its track and end more visible please ~
made the tail out a bit and changed color for the 2 sliders.

Kotori
  1. Those inherited sections with 30% volume don't make the objects clearly audible, which actually frustrates me >w<
    Consider using 40~50% instead, they will be more audible and it will be more agreable to hear :3
  2. Maybe use slider tick 2 like in the other difficulties ? It would keep consistency throughout the mapset and it doesn't sound bad at all :3
hitsounds up! but kept the slider tick settings.

Fix whatever you want and I'll bubble ~ (finally >~<)
thanks for keeping an eye on this map :D
Kurai
Bubbled ~ :3
Andrea
Looks pretty good and plays nice to me.

Ranked~
Faust
:oops:

Usagi Drop !
Kawayi Rika
Omedeto Colin ~ :)
Topic Starter
Colin Hou
just before graved for 3rd time ;w;
hoLysoup
usagi Drop! :D
恭喜~!
Sandpig
;_; congratz
Selee
congratz =w=

萌耶
phonic
omedeto ~
spboxer3
Congratz :D
Kazuo
gratz <3
Kurai
\:D/
K a Y e
Great Map! Hope you will keep up >.^ Congrats on this! *_*
Shinkuu
跪了
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