1. Advanced (2.82 stars, 297 notes)
2. Normal (1.73 stars, 164 notes)
3. Tempest (6.28 stars, 833 notes)

Strategas wrote:

grave or rank?

Aeril wrote:

This is such a nice map to play, I loved it Smoothie!

1. 01:12:413 (3) - Maybe change this one to a hit circle because the sound it produces isn't similar at all to the wubs of the rest of the 1/4 sliders.
2. 01:24:655 (2) - Also maybe change this into a 1/4 slider with a similar shape to 01:24:309 (2) - because it's the same wub.
3. 01:26:206 (3) - Maybe change this into some kind of 1/2 slider maybe because of it's distinctive sound.
4. 01:51:206 (7) - Possibly decrease the spacing between this note and 01:51:293 (8,9) - these two because the latter have a different kick and snare. Maybe something like this? This applies to the rest of the instances of this rhythm. i dont wanna do anything this complex in a slow part
5. 02:12:413 - This buildup is nice but it just gets way too large for how quiet it actually is. Nothing in the rest of this map get much larger than 02:15:172 (1,2) - this however the spacing in this section just keeps getting bigger.
6. 02:19:310 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't know why you just suddenly started putting in stream jumps even though it doesn't sound different at all to the previous 02:17:931 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - one.
7. 02:22:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The variable spacing was the cool part here but you remove it in these two 4 note scales for some reason.
8. 02:30:344 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same thing with the last instance of this. Doesn't make sense why you added in a stream jump here with no change in the music.
9. 02:33:793 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - And the same thing here as well. Also, this stream shape is kinda sloppy. Can you possibly change this into a star shape because it seems like you tried to do that but didn't.

I liked how you mapped the last section of this map! Really enjoy this way of mapping from you.

• *I feel the AR is too high. The bpm and object density is pretty low for AR9.7. I think something like AR9.3-4 feels better.
  * 00:29:310 (2,3) - These sliders you used for that buzz sound feel boring compared to sliders like these 00:27:931 (2,3) - Perhaps make them a bit more interesting?
  *To add to that, the blanket for this slider is slightly wider in the middle 00:29:310 (2) - maybe look into this if you don't fix the above point.
  *01:52:586 (8,9,10) - Why didn't you space the last 3 notes the same as these 3? 01:51:206 (7,8,9) - Feels strange currently.
  01:55:344 (8,9,10) - 01:58:103 (8,9,10) - 02:00:861 (8,9,10) - 02:03:620 (8,9,10) - 02:06:379 (8,9,10) - 02:09:138 (8,9,10) - 02:11:897 (8,9,10) - Same for these yadda yadda.
  *02:24:137 (1,2) - Maybe decrease the spacing here? It's a lot larger than the other ones.
  *03:02:068 - The song should just end here, I think the slider art just unnecessarily draws out the map.

1. Audio file bitrate is too high.
2. Difficulties end time is not consistent:
   03:18:620 - Normal
   03:24:137 - Tempest
   
   Tempest
3. this od is a tad too high, would go like od8.5 it's a bit unfair from players perspective with red tick technical streams and stuff, players that good can just hr it, more fair.
   
   
4. 00:20:689 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this rhythm i don't really like it, the song emphasizes the blue tick 00:21:810 - but you kinda follow the white/red tick polarity which sucks a bit imo, (also hihats and snares sharing same emphasize rip)
   SPOILER

   
   this is those places where starting on blue tick rhythm is godlike, it jumps back to white tick anyway at 00:22:068 (1) -
5. Also that normal-finish1.wav has really bad stereo seperation just saying, no pan on the right side.
6. 00:22:758 (5,6,7,1) - not really thaaat bad, but 00:22:758 (5,6,7,1) - looks visually like 1/2 and 1/4 bit awkwardish reading, don't really like that so early in the map.
   would stack this 00:22:931 (6) - on 00:23:793 (6) -
7. 00:24:655 (7) - line up follow point
8. 00:25:431 (4,5) - That's bad it looks off, do the same as this --> 00:25:431 (4,5,6) -
9. 00:26:724 (1,2,3,4,5) - small suggestion, scale up flower a little bit? cus song is building up
10. 00:28:620 (1,2) - looking at this from an edgy perspective, would be cooler if this was 00:28:965 (2) - an 1/4 slider or 1/8.
    00:31:724 (2) - ^
    
11. 00:29:137 (1) - that's a bit too forced flow/sliderdesign imo, would go with something more natural.
12. 00:32:758 (3) - try having this atleast with x1.00 DS,
13. 00:36:465 (4,5) - gsavksdvasdlfmld, delet this
    copy dis 00:33:706 (4,5,6) - paste heer 00:36:465 - :3
14. 0:40:344 (2,3) - these two wub sounds are not identical, would chang (3) my opinion iwud 00:40:603 (3) - ctrl +g dis
15. 00:42:413 (5) - end this sliderend on 1/3 00:42:758 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - more ez to play then.
16. 00:55:172 - for this section till 01:00:689 - some volume control would be nice here, like 50%ish on hihats and 90%ish on those sounds 00:56:206 (1) -
    also would swap to normal-hitnormal tbh 00:56:207 (6,6,6,6,6) - etc
17. 01:06:724 (3) - sliderend not same strength as sliderhead pls swap to soft-sampless
18. 01:40:517 (1) - stack dis
    02:26:206 (1) - sstack dis
    

Jacob wrote:

yo

Tempest:

• *I feel the AR is too high. The bpm and object density is pretty low for AR9.7. I think something like AR9.3-4 feels better. nah no way the streams are aids without high ar and the density is pretty high in parts
  * 00:29:310 (2,3) - These sliders you used for that buzz sound feel boring compared to sliders like these 00:27:931 (2,3) - Perhaps make them a bit more interesting?
  *To add to that, the blanket for this slider is slightly wider in the middle 00:29:310 (2) - maybe look into this if you don't fix the above point.
  *01:52:586 (8,9,10) - Why didn't you space the last 3 notes the same as these 3? 01:51:206 (7,8,9) - Feels strange currently. just tried that and it feels even stranger
  01:55:344 (8,9,10) - 01:58:103 (8,9,10) - 02:00:861 (8,9,10) - 02:03:620 (8,9,10) - 02:06:379 (8,9,10) - 02:09:138 (8,9,10) - 02:11:897 (8,9,10) - Same for these yadda yadda.
  *02:24:137 (1,2) - Maybe decrease the spacing here? It's a lot larger than the other ones.
  *03:02:068 - The song should just end here, I think the slider art just unnecessarily draws out the map. nah i think the sounds are significant enough at the end to map them

thats it, really nice map tho gl on this
btw i really like the combo/slider colors

zev wrote:

1. Audio file bitrate is too high.
2. Difficulties end time is not consistent:
   03:18:620 - Normal
   03:24:137 - Tempest doesnt matter
   
   Tempest
3. this od is a tad too high, would go like od8.5 it's a bit unfair from players perspective with red tick technical streams and stuff, players that good can just hr it, more fair. its supposed to be hard
   
   
4. 00:20:689 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this rhythm i don't really like it, the song emphasizes the blue tick 00:21:810 - but you kinda follow the white/red tick polarity which sucks a bit imo, (also hihats and snares sharing same emphasize rip)
   SPOILER

   
   this is those places where starting on blue tick rhythm is godlike, it jumps back to white tick anyway at 00:22:068 (1) -
5. Also that normal-finish1.wav has really bad stereo seperation just saying, no pan on the right side. idk how to fix lol i got it from some ranked map so it shouldnt be an issue
6. 00:22:758 (5,6,7,1) - not really thaaat bad, but 00:22:758 (5,6,7,1) - looks visually like 1/2 and 1/4 bit awkwardish reading, don't really like that so early in the map. nobody has misread this its not hard to read
   would stack this 00:22:931 (6) - on 00:23:793 (6) -
7. 00:24:655 (7) - line up follow point ?
8. 00:25:431 (4,5) - That's bad it looks off, do the same as this --> 00:25:431 (4,5,6) - looks fine and you linked the same thing twice...
9. 00:26:724 (1,2,3,4,5) - small suggestion, scale up flower a little bit? cus song is building up
10. 00:28:620 (1,2) - looking at this from an edgy perspective, would be cooler if this was 00:28:965 (2) - an 1/4 slider or 1/8. edgy =/=
    overmapping rhythm
    00:31:724 (2) - ^ ^
    
11. 00:29:137 (1) - that's a bit too forced flow/sliderdesign imo, would go with something more natural. already changed
12. 00:32:758 (3) - try having this atleast with x1.00 DS,
13. 00:36:465 (4,5) - gsavksdvasdlfmld, delet this
    copy dis 00:33:706 (4,5,6) - paste heer 00:36:465 - :3 why this is fine
14. 0:40:344 (2,3) - these two wub sounds are not identical, would chang (3) my opinion iwud 00:40:603 (3) - ctrl +g dis they are tho
15. 00:42:413 (5) - end this sliderend on 1/3 00:42:758 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - more ez to play then. no theres a sound where it ends
16. 00:55:172 - for this section till 01:00:689 - some volume control would be nice here, like 50%ish on hihats and 90%ish on those sounds 00:56:206 (1) -
    also would swap to normal-hitnormal tbh 00:56:207 (6,6,6,6,6) - etc
17. 01:06:724 (3) - sliderend not same strength as sliderhead pls swap to soft-sampless they are same intensity in the song
18. 01:40:517 (1) - stack dis
    02:26:206 (1) - sstack dis
    

Looks ok, could see it ranked with some polish, didn't really like your hitsounds in the stream sections.
good luck<3