1. bor's Hard (2.78 stars, 87 notes)
2. Dash's Normal (2.1 stars, 54 notes)
3. Easy (1.25 stars, 28 notes)
4. Loli's Insane (3.91 stars, 116 notes)
5. pishi's Extra (4.3 stars, 140 notes)

1. 00:00:284 (1) - don't start the map on offbeat, feels really awkward especially in easy diff. either start the map 00:01:341 - or 00:00:496 - (nvm drain time i guess lol..)
   
2. 00:03:031 (3) - perhaps drag this down to blanket 00:02:186 (2) -
   
3. 00:08:101 (1) - you don't really need 2 sliderpoints to make that shape, it makes it kinda spaghetti
   
4. 00:15:707 (2,3) - sloppy blankets
   
5. 00:23:101 - dunno but wouldn't you want these repeats to be clickable? they're about the strongest sounds in the entire song
   
6. 00:27:960 - this feels kinda empty, consider adding a note here

1. 00:06:411 (3) - is 1/4 vocal mapping but 00:08:946 (2) - isn't? consistency pls
   
2. 00:12:960 - might wanna make this strong vocal clickable, feels kinda weird if it isnt
   
3. 00:17:186 (6,1) - looks kinda sloppy aesthetically, maybe something like this https://voli.s-ul.eu/VEh4XAZu.png
   
4. 00:18:242 (1,3) - slight overlap, maybe not intended
   
5. 00:19:932 (4,6) - look kinda sloppy aswell coz theyre so close to each other, maybe https://voli.s-ul.eu/pVBlwWxK.png

1. 00:00:284 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - holy calm the fuck down tiger xddd how about using something less aggressive for the intro? 00:00:284 (1,2) - stacking these two feels bad as (2) is a way stronger vocal and wouldn't really suggest a momentum hold.. I'd suggest just using circle/slider patterns for 00:00:284 (1,2,3,4,5) - though to get a good feel for the rhythm, too much notespam right at the start feels way too aggressive
   
2. 00:03:665 (4) - why'd you choose for such a slider here? it feels kinda forced into a corner and the flow is quite counter intuitive aswell, i suggest doing something like this? of course you'd need to reposition the pattern after that aswell https://voli.s-ul.eu/pfGq0pLM.png
   
3. 00:10:848 (4,5) - why are these stacked? you didnt rly do that before here 00:08:946 (3,4) - and it's quite odd considering how the vocals only get stronger
   
4. 00:12:960 (1,3) - mayb blanket idk the curved slider kinda does suggest that and having the note almost-blanket looks a bit sloppy
   
5. 00:18:242 (1,2,3,4) - maybe move this pattern a bit more away from 00:18:031 (5) - to emphasize the finish on 1, just as you did here 00:21:411 (5,1) -
   
6. 00:22:890 (5,1) - same
   
7. 00:24:580 (5,1) - same

1. 00:00:284 (1,2,3) - since this is an insane, how about lowering the sv and spacing for this intro pattern? you'll really give more power to 00:01:341 (1,2,3) - like that, where the intsruments kick in. If you keep them the same, 00:01:341 (1,2,3) - feels rather underwhelming as a result
   
2. 00:09:580 (4,1) - thhis feels a bit out of place since you just used stacks for the other instances of this pattern, and the music here isnt more intense or anything. such a pattern would fit a place like 00:13:172 - better
   
3. 00:24:791 (1) - consider ctrl+g on this slider and move it further away, you have a lot of sliders flowing towards the left already, having this one (the next strong vocal) do the same thing is a little monotonous. maybe something like this? https://voli.s-ul.eu/RdtbYyVM.png
   
4. 00:26:059 (5,1) - is that overlap intended? it doesnt look too well

Voli wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:00:284 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - holy calm the fuck down tiger xddd how about using something less aggressive for the intro? 00:00:284 (1,2) - stacking these two feels bad as (2) is a way stronger vocal and wouldn't really suggest a momentum hold.. I'd suggest just using circle/slider patterns for 00:00:284 (1,2,3,4,5) - though to get a good feel for the rhythm, too much notespam right at the start feels way too aggressive its pattern to show progression, spacing slow gets higher, which is why stack is 1,2. This phrase is clearly pick-up to song with relatively even sounds accross its pretty difficult to chose how to represent this pickup especially when its this long.
   
2. 00:03:665 (4) - why'd you choose for such a slider here? it feels kinda forced into a corner and the flow is quite counter intuitive aswell, i suggest doing something like this? of course you'd need to reposition the pattern after that aswell https://voli.s-ul.eu/pfGq0pLM.png rhythm choices are based on the vocals. there is a vocal hold here so I did long slider. its fine where it is because I use spacing. I also try to use as much of the map I can so I like going into the corners.
   
3. 00:10:848 (4,5) - why are these stacked? you didnt rly do that before here 00:08:946 (3,4) - and it's quite odd considering how the vocals only get stronger I did this because I wanted to be some more of a distinction between 5 and 1 that would be more different from just linear or spacing increase. plus the stopping at 4,5 kind of prepares the player for the long vocal hold and the pitch change from low high low into this vocal hold makes more sense for me to make stop and move.
   
4. 00:12:960 (1,3) - mayb blanket idk the curved slider kinda does suggest that and having the note almost-blanket looks a bit sloppy blanket will ruin gameplay element, also how is a curve slider meaning blanket, why not mention this every time there is a curve slider?
   because its kind of silly :^)
   
5. 00:18:242 (1,2,3,4) - maybe move this pattern a bit more away from 00:18:031 (5) - to emphasize the finish on 1, just as you did here 00:21:411 (5,1) - the emphasis already exists because its going from no motion to motion while clicking constantly
   
6. 00:22:890 (5,1) - same this is not same kind of music so i do something different. You should notice that the music repeats around the middle, so I did very similar things to match something I did before. just saying same makes me think you didn't realize this.
   
7. 00:24:580 (5,1) - same this is not same kind of music so i do something different.

Voli wrote:

As per your request.

[Easy]

1. 00:00:284 (1) - don't start the map on offbeat, feels really awkward especially in easy diff. either start the map 00:01:341 - or 00:00:496 - (nvm drain time i guess lol..) lolz
   
2. 00:03:031 (3) - perhaps drag this down to blanket 00:02:186 (2) - what i was trying to do lol, fixed blanket
   
3. 00:08:101 (1) - you don't really need 2 sliderpoints to make that shape, it makes it kinda spaghetti fixed
   
4. 00:15:707 (2,3) - sloppy blankets fixed
   
5. 00:23:101 - dunno but wouldn't you want these repeats to be clickable? they're about the strongest sounds in the entire song for the rhythm I'm using here, making those clickable would create a gap between objects greater than 1 beat where the vocals are constantly changing which aren't anywhere else on the map so nah
   
6. 00:27:960 - this feels kinda empty, consider adding a note here i did it

Voli wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:06:411 (3) - is 1/4 vocal mapping but 00:08:946 (2) - isn't? consistency pls ?????? there's vocals on this note
   
2. 00:12:960 - might wanna make this strong vocal clickable, feels kinda weird if it isnt g
   
3. 00:17:186 (6,1) - looks kinda sloppy aesthetically, maybe something like this https://voli.s-ul.eu/VEh4XAZu.png nah it's fine
   
4. 00:18:242 (1,3) - slight overlap, maybe not intended thx
   
5. 00:19:932 (4,6) - look kinda sloppy aswell coz theyre so close to each other, maybe https://voli.s-ul.eu/pVBlwWxK.pngok

1. 00:13:172 (2,3,4,5) - they are all not snapped
2. 00:09:369 (3,4,5) - I would consider changing the rhythm here, since it feels really heavy under mapped maybe something like this here
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:00:284 (1,2) - the stack doesn't make too much sense to me, maybe you could make a longer build up together with 00:00:707 (3,4,5) - . So maybe like this here ?
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:07:045 (4) - I would do a different shape, since this one doesn't fit to the other sliders. (something like this 00:20:566 (4) -)
3. 00:10:848 (4,5) - i would not stack this, since it could slow nicely if you would continue the movement.

SPOILER

1. I would just use CS 4 instead. Everything seems to be a bit smoother with that imo.
   
   00:25:742 (3,4) - this stack doesn't look blank to me, i would consider making it perfectly blank, since the rest of the map is looking really nicely polished

1. This map is hard to read so maybe making the AR higher to like 8,4 or so, could make it abit better with that.( At testplaying AR was close to unreadable imo.)
   
2. All the triples like this one 00:02:820 (1,2,1) - should be changed in a more readable way, there are barely noticeable through visuals. Especially this one 00:27:960 (1,2,3,4,1) -

Lucyyyyyyy wrote:

bor's Hard:[/size][/b]

1. 00:00:284 (1,2) - the stack doesn't make too much sense to me, maybe you could make a longer build up together with 00:00:707 (3,4,5) - . So maybe like this here ?
   SPOILER

   
   I don't want to make the ds go super high
2. 00:07:045 (4) - I would do a different shape, since this one doesn't fit to the other sliders. (something like this 00:20:566 (4) -) it does kind of fit with other sharp angle sliders.
3. 00:10:848 (4,5) - i would not stack this, since it could slow nicely if you would continue the movement.I explained this last mod, I'm looking for stopping motion before the vocal section

Edit: Maybe like this

SPOILER

I don't want to make anything that could look like 1/4 like this can. hard players will read as 1/4 and not 1/2.

1. modding assitant stuff
   
   SPOILER

   Difficulties end time is not consistent:
   00:30:284 - Easy
   00:30:284 - Dash's Normal
   00:30:073 - bor's Hard
   00:30:284 - Loli's Insane
   00:30:284 - pishi's Extra
   
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   Dash's Normal: doki.jpg (2133x1200)
   bor's Hard: VLxzv9H.jpg (2134x1199)
   Loli's Insane: doki.jpg (2133x1200)
   pishi's Extra: VLxzv9H.jpg (2134x1199)
   
   max is 1920x1080
   
   pishi
2. 00:02:820 (1,2) - drum-hitfinish for those cool here, cus r mapping the bass line
3. 00:06:834 (4) - x86 y240
   
   
   dash
4. 00:13:172 (3) - fix dis pls
   
   loli
5. no idea whats hapening but anime neds no structure so is good map.
6. 00:20:777 (1) - remov nc
   bor
7. 00:13:805 (3,4,5) - nerf not rly nice in hard, stacks
8. nc cus is not followng vocals indicate snare? 00:14:228 (1) -
   
   

zev wrote:

• 
  bor

1. 00:13:805 (3,4,5) - nerf not rly nice in hard, stacks I don't understand what you are asking me to change, nor any problem you may see.
2. nc cus is not followng vocals indicate snare? 00:14:228 (1) - nc is to downbeats.

Rizen wrote:

bor's Hard

1. 00:00:284 (1,2) - not unrankable but this is touching the hp bar :^)
2. 00:18:875 (4,5) - this is like the only tiem you don't space these out when this pattern comes up vs. 00:05:354 (4,5) - , 00:15:495 (4,5) - , etc. slightly increased spacing
3. 00:09:580 (1,1,1) - I know you are following vocals with these sliders, but I feel as though the drum crash at these parts should be clickable. they're a lot different to 00:23:101 (1,1,1) - where the drum crashes are actually in sync with the vocals I disagree, if too many different sounds are clickable then what's my rhythm
4. 00:10:848 (4,5) - you usually keep those three circles unstacked so stacking there here is kinda inconsistent (e.g. 00:24:369 (4,5) - , 00:22:679 (4,5) - , etc.) You are mistaken to compare 00:22:467 (3,4,5) - with anything other than 00:08:946 (3,4,5) - with that mentioned, 00:24:369 (4,5) - this is now stacked.
5. 00:28:489 (1) - extend to the red tick? just like every other diff To me the sound seems like the string instruments release at the time my spinner finishes, while the sound coming from them resonates in the recording room until the next red tick.

gl!

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Rizen wrote:

Easy

1. 00:02:186 (2,3) - looks like u were tryin to blanket. move slider 3 down a little bit to make the blanket cleaner like so. same applies to 00:15:707 (2,3) - fixed both
2. 00:19:932 (3,4,5) - any reason why the change in rhythm here vs. 00:06:411 (3) - ? the music at both of these parts are pretty much the same x_x changed rhythm
3. is lack of kiai time intentional? no

Dash's Normal

1. tags in this diff are broken, please fix and when u give the .osu to the map owner, paste the entire code within a [/box] on forum as uploading the .osu file would cause this problem swear I fixed tags before but its good now

Rizen wrote:

Loli's Insane

1. 00:13:594 (1) - feels a bit excessive imo, the pattern is perfectly readable without the additional NC
2. 00:20:777 (1) - remove nc, inconsistency with 00:07:256 (6) -
3. nothing else rly

gl!

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[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"doki.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Kaifin wrote:

hi from queue

General

1. check and fix ai mod in all diffs fixed

Easy

1. 00:00:284 (1,1) - this might be kind of a dumb nitpick but why isn't this object just straight from the slider, it's a little bit off and that looks off now straight
2. 00:03:031 (3,1) - from the end of the 3 slider, it is not exactly clear where the player is supposed to go, at this level of difficulty the player still has a hard time differentiating between slider ends and slider heads so this lack of direction could lead to some confusion. A solution to this is flipping 00:03:031 (3) - as shown in the screenshot so there is a clear direction to the next slider for the player, this will kill your blanket but you can make a new one with end of 00:04:721 (1) - and the flipped 00:03:031 (3) - i did it
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:06:411 (3) - another slider that would flow better into the next one having been flipped, however this flow isn't as egregiously misleading as the last, flipping this one never the less would make for better flow + consistency barring you change the above point same
4. 00:14:017 (4,1) - blanket fixed
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:15:707 (2,3) - you could clean this one up too fixed
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:16:552 (3,1) - for the record i think this flow is fine, it's mirrored so it's pretty clear pattern wise where the player is supposed to go so it works
7. 00:21:622 (1,2) - same complaint as 00:00:284 (1,1) also straight now

Eroge_master225 wrote:

NM

bor's hard

00:14:862 (1) - why such a short kiai time its called kiai flash.

00:01:341 (1,2,3,4) - wtf is this overlap. this belongs in a insane diff tell my why you think so, its psuedo stack, its so easy to read for 300k rank I had testplay, why you think it not fitting?

00:04:721 (1,2,3,4) - same as above tell my why you think so, its psuedo stack, its so easy to read for 300k rank I had testplay, why you think it not fitting?

00:14:862 (1,2,3,4) - same as above tell my why you think so, its psuedo stack, its so easy to read for 300k rank I had testplay, why you think it not fitting?

00:18:242 (1,2,3,4) - same as above tell my why you think so, its psuedo stack, its so easy to read for 300k rank I had testplay, why you think it not fitting?

00:07:045 (4) - i don't think this slider is a good idea I think this slider is a good idea

00:20:566 (4) - same as above I think this slider is a good idea

00:28:489 (1) - start this spinner on the next red tick its readable.

ar7 please AR is for fitting spread and its low density. enough to read without clickable 1/4

Kisses wrote:

Bor

1. 00:01:341 (1,2,3,4,5) - see below xd
2. 00:07:045 (4) - I can always count on you to be edgy in the simplest of songs :^) bor bor bor
3. 00:28:489 (1) - end this on the red ticks like normal and easy I already explained my reasoning behind this twice, can you read those and respond to those replies to this difference, otherwise still no change.

[]gl

Kisses wrote:

Easy

1. 00:08:101 (1,3) - imo you should keep the rhythm in these 2 parts the same since the rhythm of the song being mapped are very, very similar in the 2 places. So either make 00:08:101 (1) a 1/1 slider or make 00:09:791 (3) a 2/1 slider. Want 00:09:369 (2) to stand out and making 00:08:101 (1) 1 beat long would kinda destroy that and I want 00:10:636 (4) to be clickable and making 3 2 beats would destory that too
2. 00:24:158 (1) - delete NC Fixed

[]gl thank

Eroge_master225 wrote:

NM

Easy

maybe ar2 nah

slider tick should be 2 Don't like the full beat sliders having ticks

00:08:101 (1) - move this down Why, it doesn't go off screen or anything lol

00:10:636 (4,1) - i don't think 4 should overlap 1 here overlap as well is to try to make it stand out since it's such a strong sound

00:28:383 (1) - extend this to next white tick Want 00:27:960 (2) to be clickable

• Cool to see a different concept for insane. Good luck with that.

• 00:11:481 (1) - Touches HP bar. Not sure if you care.
  00:24:158 (3) - The lyrics and pitch are very different, so i don't think using the exact same slider is a good way to represent this part.

• 00:00:284 (1,2) - Starting off way on the HP bar is not only a reduction of quality, but is also confusing. Start more in the playfield.
  00:18:242 (1,2,3,4) - Watching this difficulty, I thought these were pretty edgy, but they're also really cool. Nice job.
  00:24:158 (3,4,5) - These are more intense than 00:22:467 (3,4,5) - and I think they deserve to be unstacked.

• This set's hard and insane have some cool concepts that will really set this map apart from the billions of others. Plus no anime bg so points there.
  GOOD LUCK