hi! i have some questions about this map!
the main one is just explained by this: 03:15:567 - why is this section mapped completely differently from 04:55:342 - ? the sv is totally different, like it's 2 different maps stuck into one.
yes, it's a collab, but that doesn't mean you should completely abandon any concept of consistency through the map.
this repeats on every part; it's like you both mapped the song, but with completely different techniques, rhythms and patterning.
other random stuff
01:16:578 (4,5) - why is this a double >.> there's nothing suggesting a double here as far as i can tell
01:22:814 (4,6) - you used overlap for all other sliders in the section, why perfect stack here?
01:49:780 (2,3) - this offbeat thing doesn't really fit with your rhythm in the section cuz you're generally focusing on vocals (like 01:53:320 (1,2,3,4,5) - for example) and this one skips over one
03:15:567 - this entire section - completely ignoring the melody in the part where the melody is perhaps the strongest is not really a good choice imo. you *can* follow the random background wubs entirely and completely ignore what makes the song a song and not just a bunch of sounds, but a better way to go about things would be to incorporate the background track into the melody
the 1/1 gaps feel especially lame and underwhelming; you finish following these super fast long sliders and then sort of waddle on down slowly to the next one, there isn't really any feeling of pressure or constant motion so the effect of the high sv is completely lost i think.
03:46:578 (1,2,3,4) - what's up with the massive spacing contrast? the melody is going up and down, but this is way more different in spacing than what the song provides imo
03:47:926 (1,2,3) - this pattern is cool and all but you never ever do something like this anywhere else in the map so it's super unexpected and hard to read
04:01:409 - this section - the rhythm choice starts of very very vocal focused, with stuff like 04:01:409 (1,2,3) - obviously setting the tone, same for 04:03:769 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - and so on which follow the vocals. but then 04:05:792 (6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - it just randomly goes off into 1/2 spam everywhere, completely ignoring the vocals. like 04:06:297 (1,2) - is on drums, 04:06:634 (3) - is a vocal,04:07:140 (2) - the slider end of this is a vocal that should have been held out, 04:08:488 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - there's a long held out vocal here but it's all 1/2 circles etc etc. so there isnt any feeling of following one specific track in the song any more.
04:28:039 (1,2,1) - minor thing but why are these kicksliders, this section is quite calm so using kicksliders suddenly seemed out of place
anyway yeah, i think the ridiculous lack of cohesion is a really big detriment to this map; i told himei the same thing when he asked me to check this, and i told you as well when you asked me; seems like nothing i said was taken into account =/
not gonna pop cuz i'm gonna be dead for a month, but please, to any next bn, take this into consideration: the map is half of the song mapped by one person in one style and the other half mapped by another person in a completely different style with no internal consistency between the 2 parts.